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Bio:
Hermione Granger is all set to return back to Hogwarts for it's re-opening and to finish her final year. However, one small new law changes her entire outlook on life.
Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione/Lucius Malfoy, Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22167 Read Count: 4351
Date: 11 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really enjoy this story! It's always interesting to see odd pairings in the Harry Potter universe :)
I just have one question, it says in this chapter that Snape's picture is hanging in the headmaster's office and that he has his old job back? Snape died in the last book.
Author's Response:
Hi thanks for you review!
Yes, that is in the books but I resurrected him for the story :) he is not the headmaster but he does have his old job back. Just for this stir though ;)
Bella always worked hard and thought things through before acting on them. She always thought she was a good person with morals. Unlike her mother who had none and only thought of herself. But she began to question her believes In what was right and wrong, when she met a married Edward Cullen.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68789 Read Count: 84699
Date: 24 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
The story started out kind of strong, but now it's just a mess.
multiple POV's usually only work when you use structured paragraphs, not just what the characters are saying. It reads like a movie script, but the dialogue makes them sound like teenagers, not mature adults like they're being portrayed.
I'd recommend reading some of the better fanfictions on this site to study how they use literary devices besides POV's to write their stories and give them some dynamic