Good story, I wish you would continue, you left me wanting more

Well it had to happen sooner or later. Hope she can deal with that side of fame

I'm loving every single chapter, I'm truly enjoying how their relationship is evolving

Uff, this was a tuff chapter.  I truly felt fit Edward, he is trying to do the right thing but Bella is not making it easy for him

Hope Bella learn to truly trust him in the near future or they'll have a bumpy ride ahead of them.  I know Bella keeps telling herself that she does trust him but I don't think she is 100% there yet 

Oh Bella, swallow your pride and get out of that apartment pronto!

Not a chance that Ridley is going to behave

... Uffff this is getting even more interesting

Does it mean that Jacob and Jim are out of the picture

Is she really not going back to the apartment?

This chapter was quite upsetting, ok so it's not one of Bella's finest moments but Edward did not behave good either. I was completely pissed about him letting the girls get all slutty on him.  bad, bad boy

He should be the one receiving his punishment and not her, he can go all possessive and jelows but she she is jealous (and with reasons to be) instead of assuring her, he disregards hem completely 

Pour boy has much to learn

Gotta love Kate for her "Team Edward" comment, so cute I was upset with Edward about not explaining Bella what she would really encounter on the play party, now I see he is truly clueless  The conversation with Garret was fantastic "You need to wise up... You are not single anymore"  One of the thing I'm truly loving about your story aside from all the kinky love between Edward and Bella is the real friendship between the characters.  Awesome read, thank you for sharing it with us  PS: so glad that Edward apologised sincerely PS2: interesting that Bella is referring to herself and his submissive when she is collared.  Wonder if she is aware of it PS3: I'm dreading the uneasy feeling from Edward. Hope I'm wrong

So glad that Rosalie had her revenge, too bad that Jake is still alive. The chapter was painful to read and very angsty but you did a great job. I'm very thankful that nothing truly grave happened and everyone will be able to move forward. I'm trying to be positive and think that the girls won't be traumatised for long

That was quite an interesting weekend, the suspension scene was really cool. Loving how closer these two are getting Looking forward to Xmas at the Cullens, hope he will propose there, I mean after all he keeps seeing Bella pregnant or a small child.  My feelings toward Charlie are quite mixed. On the one hand I want him out of the picture, he is a shitty father and being sober does not change the past, but on the other hand I want Bella truly and completely happy and it seams that Charlie is part of her happiness.  I do hope that Edward makes him sweat for a while

 "Bella is more like you than you both probably know..." sorry but I don't agree, unless Edward ended the phrase with... But she is a good person unlike you. If Charlie is pushing Bella for the f**king 12 steps, well that the most selfish thing in the word.  I'm sorry for saying this but I was really looking forward to Xmas with the Cullens and Charlie totally ruined this chapter for me, hope he gets out of the way so I can enjoy each chapter again. Even the Cullens have changed around him, everyone wanted to kill him at some point and now they are all happy about him. WTF, not even Rosalie is saying anything :( Don't take me wrong I love your story, otherwise I wouldn't bother with the reviews, and you wouldn't get such a reaction if I wasn't involved. But the Cullens except for Edward has been a bunch of hypocrites in their dealing with Charlie.  Carlisle should look after Bella, and not an estranger, stopping edward was out of line, edward is too polite sometimes the Alice adoration towards Charlie literally made me sick, and Esme telling Charlie what a great man he is, was even worst  I had to stop this chapter several times because I was getting upset while reading it.  Sorry for the strong reaction, must be the hormones If I were Edward, I would be very upset with Bella for sharing such personal information about their lifestyle with her father without talking to edward first, no idea what she was thinking about

Very interesting story! please tell me you haven't given up on continuing

such an intriguing premise deserves an ending

Not a BDSM club after all.  That was a very original first encounter, already they have affected each other! 

So Bella is not up for kids, wonder how Edward will react to this news?

Lovely chapter.  Hearing about Bella's background was a bit hard but necessary.  No wonder she is so afraid to get pregnant.  Edward was such a sweetheart thought the conversation.  Glad to see thing are moving along

I cant even beging to imagine how hard it must be to hear your own mother tell you such hurtful thing, regardless that she is mentally ill.

my heart went out to Bella's this chapter

kudos for Edward, for being supportive 

So it seems that Bella is giving into her kinky self, goog for her.

i think these two will be just fine balancing both relationships

What a lovely chapter! Bella's hitting Emmet was awesome but her running away was a bit infuriating.  Love that Edward came to her. I'm so ready for "the talk"

I'm not certain what the problem with her mother, but I'm guessing it a hereditary problem and that's what is frightening Bella

When she said she could not have Children, was she telling the truth? Or rather that she won't have them?

Hope you bring some light into her mothers issue soon

Poor Bella, so it's not that she doesn't want to have children, but that she is convinced they will turn out like his brother? 

this is getting more complicated by the moment, and now Rose could be pregnant!

Edward will need all the luck to change Bella's mind

Hope they hit it off quicky.  Your Bella really needs a break

she has forgotten to have fun, working nonstop and loosing herself in the process

good to know she has kinky fantasies, that might come handy in the future 

Emmet don't complain you got quite lucky at the end.  I was expecting Rose to be very pissed but she took it quite well

i know I'm being repetitive but each chapter gets better and better.  Thank you so much for sharing with us

Oh Emmet, just wait and see

loving this Edward more and more each chapter

did I tell you how awesome you are? No? Well you are AWESOME 

Love to see Edward in such a fantastic mood.  Bella is in for a treat :) lucky girl

And so it begins :) I have high hopes for your story.  Already loving Edward

So, Alice has visions, and Edward has his canon gift. Interesting that he has not mention wheather he can or can't read Bella's thoughts

Again you've mention the non penetration issue, so far you have only pointed to vaginal penetration but if the issue at hand is because he would hurt her or kill her, would it not be the same for anal or oral? 

You've also mention that Edward has no intention of turning a human.  I'm curious if oral and domination would be enough for Edward in the long run, after all, he just gave up a pretty decent sub, just saying

Master? Edward has a Master? Wow that was unexpected, I though he could not get it up with a man, well maybe it was just Laurant

Glad to see that Bella is affecting him this much.  Can't wait for them to meet in person. Even if Bella will be blindfolded 

I just hope the favour he is about to ask is NOT what I'm thinking ;)

Oh Edward is making promises that he can't fulfil. Naughty, naughty Dom.  And naughty you for giving us hope ;)  

Poor Tanya, it must sucks to have your ex lover's new toy in front of you. Does she knows/guesses that Bella is the reason he left her?

Finally they met! So is Edward affraid that she might have recognise him?

Interesting how sometimes we feel more expose when partly dressed than completely naked

"Edward was shy and that even if the woman he was destined to spend the rest of eternity with was sitting right in the room, he probably wouldn’t make a move" LOL gotta love Emmet

This is getting incredibly exiting. Loving every chapter more and more

My kink is doing it in a public place, the risk of getting caught is very arousing for me.

I can see why a Drabble story puts people off.  I myself prefer long chapters over short ones which is why I started reading when you already had +200 chapters.  That being said, to review just to say something negative is plain mean.  This is an incredibly erotic story, well written and original, so it's his lost.  Thank you for not giving up and for sharing your talent and naughtiness with us :)

I love your chapter end notes almost as much as the story itself

Oh they are meeting again tomorrow, wonder if Bella will be able to keep up to him  

Are you planning on telling us Butterfly's limits? Or Sir's?

Need to create a Facebook account Pronto! It seems I'm missing all the fun ;)

... That awkward moment when you realise you are a real slut, and you love it! Another awesome chapter

Better safe wording that cumming without permission. Kudos for Butterfly 

Is she not taking the pill? Don't tell me she is ready to give herself to an stranger and not be protected :/

Awesome visual, lovely chapter! What more could I ask for?

I think Emmet is gonna get a well deserved punishment sooner or later.  And holly shit he has glimpses of her thoughts, how awesome is that

Miss Swan, appearances can be deceiving ;)

So glad that Edward has shared a first with Bella, after 100+ years and several subs I thought that he had experience everything, so glad I was wrong 

He he he, Emmet just you wait! Edward is comming to get you and I know it's going to be extra fantastic 

Maybe I got it all wrong.  So she was a willing participant. In any case I'm sorry that Bella feels dirty. I hope she would open up to someone, maybe Angela when she comes back?

glad to know she at least has Jacob, he seems like a good kid, even if he might want to be more than friends, I get the feeling he could help her out 

Sweet :)

If only they would talk to each other...