Reviews by Louise Clark
Summary:

Bella, Alice, and Rosalie Swan are looking for the person who shot their father, Charlie, and left him for dead. The Cullen boys, Edward, Emmett, and Jasper, help them but will the person they're after get to them first? AH&MA E/B,J/A,EM/R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102591 Read Count: 42361
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

*Standing up, clapping*

Bravo! Bravo!

 

What a beautiful ending!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all the reviews!! You have no idea how much I appreciate them.

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183697
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Only a Little Creepy (Pt. 1)

Damn that Carmen!! *burning mad!* I am SO glad Edward told her off!! I wish they had left after the first few minutes when it was so quiet at their table you could hear a pin drop. URGH!

Poor Bella...and I'm a little sad for Dimitri too. I hope he doesn't go back to Spain with Carmen. Surely he can stay and find a job?

Carmen needs help...bleh. Demented old bag.

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Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

Wow!! Great introductory chapter!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Revelation Number One

Really enjoyed this chapter!

I live in Missouri, but not the St. Louis area. Anyway, it's nice to have the story highlight attractions and an area that I'm vaguely familiar with. Like the Arch. Who doesn't go to St. Louis and NOT ride the tram up the Arch??

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hammering Out a Plan

Too cute!

I love how Em was ready to take her to the BBQ like a caveman!! LOL!

This is wonderfully written and am enjoying the pace. :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

Wow, Marta certainly owes Bella an apology! That was totally not cool that Carlie was within earshot of Marta's rant. And on school grounds?

Glad that Edward went directly to her and explained his feeling to her. :) Good on Em to give his bro a call!

So hopeful about next chapter. I'm excited about their next dinner date! :)

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Nannygate (Pt. 2)

Just awesome progress. i like the pace.

I loved this chapter, every bit of it! Yeah, I feel bad for Marta, but I think Edward is doing the right thing.

Hope the shopping trip goes well and they have a great girls' day out. Sounds fun!

 

Please hurry with the next chapter!! I really like this story!! =D

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Single Dad Dating

Wow!! The lemons were hot and totally worth waiting for!!

I'm glad their girlie day went so well and the dinner also.

Rose was hilarious!

Can't wait for the shower scene to be continued...

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Revelation Number Two -- It's a Biggie...(Part 1)

Timing is everything ;)  Geez, I wonder who interrupted them?!? URGH!!

And I, for one, was not misled. So no worries. :)

Sounds fun! ;) hee hee

Loved the Emmett time in this chapter, too! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Revelation Number Two - It's a Biggie (Pt. 2)

LMAO, I think Carmen needs to take Jacob back to Spain with her!!

;)

And I DO like the pacing of this story! :)

Alice better change her security code! Ewww, what a creep!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!

*jumps up and down excitedly* LOVED IT!! LOVED IT!!

Very fun chapter!

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - As the Condom Breaks...

Ha ha, yeah, my hand's up! LOL!

Rose doesn't seem the motherly type (in this story), and I don't blame Em at all for taking off after she slapped him. Poor Em.  :(  Hope they figure it out. I'd have a baby with Emmett!! hee hee

 

And as for Bella learning to be a sub and supporting Edward's need to have a bit of the lifestyle, I say go for it!  ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Give Thanks for This?

Oh wow, I feel so bad for Em and Rose...

and for Bella for thinking her Mom would accept Edward and Carlie with open arms...

and then the whole ethical thing at school gets me.  St. Louis is a big city, so I don't see how the school can have such a rule. That's very old fashioned, small town thinking that needs to be updated, LOL.  ;)  Good drama for the story though, LOL! 

Geez, the nerve of Jessicunt! Bleh! Urgh!

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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

OOOHHHHH MMYYYYYYYYYYYY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSSSHHHHHHHHH!!!!

Excellent!! *claps and jumps up and down*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

Figured that bitch would ruin their first Christmas together. Damn that bitch, Jessica, urgh!

Good thing they found her. I didn't want her going to St. Louis alone. And I LOVED Em's surprise gift to Rosie, it totally saved his ass, LOL! And of course now Edward has the study all to himself.

*Pow!* That was me hitting Edward in the back of the head with a cast iron skillet before handing it back to Bella and Esme.

Great chapter, I'm totally not mad at you. If Jess gets ANY custody or visitation rights to Carlie, then I'll be mad. ;)  If Edward's agreement with her is so iron-clad, then I shouldn't have to worry. But then again, why would he say what he did to Bella before she left?? Hmmm... maybe not so 100% sure of himself? Hmmm...

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...

So much in this chapter, where do I start??

Loved the chit chat from Carlisle to Edward, and then Esme told the same to Bella but it was not as descriptive.

The Bella heist was very carefully crafted and went off without a hitch, LOL! I think Tan-Tar-A needs to have a 'Gateway to the Heart' discount promotion, hee hee!

And Alice sending all those letters home...priceless! I'm as nervous as Bella is though, since things could go either way...

...And I'm still hoping that Jessica has no chance in hell in winning anything she wants from the Cullens or Bella...

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Unexpected Surprises

Oh, Carlie girl is so precious! I can't wait for the proposal! Yay!

Glad Bella got her job back so quick. What happened to Mrs. Cope though?

Great chapter, and Happy Holidays to you as well!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

I feel like the butt of a bad joke! This chapter was totally shocking!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to!)

Thank you for addressing the pink elephant at the beginning of the honeymoon! Whew! ;)

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - A Promise Broken isn't Easily Fixed

Bravo!! Woot Woot! Perfect!!

=D

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Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Great Car Caper

Bravo!

(I'm speechless)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Crack the Whip

The big reveal was awesome! LOL! As predicted, Emmett's reaction was priceless!

Thanks also for forwarding the story a bit, for the reason you gave. ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

Absolutely awesome!!! Way to finish it! Loved it!

Bravo!!

Summary:

Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 58179
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay! So glad there's a sequel, and to have a triple wedding!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

WOW, what a way to end the evening! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awwww, lol! :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh, wow!!! That was so awesome!! To be able to deliver a baby on her own birthday, beautiful!!! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

AWWWWW, YAY!!!!!

*clapping clapping clapping, jumping up and down*

LOL! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Damn, I thought the whole Jake thing was over with too! Hopefully this will be resolved before the wedding.

I hope he doesn't turn out to be a psycho and stalk her. Had enough of that, LOL!

Nice lovin at the end, too. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, amazing work. Truly. It was emotional to read, too!

*deep cleansing breath*

There, now...

how far away from the triple wedding are we??

hee hee



Author's Response:

Wedding is in Chapter ten ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ha ha ha ha!! Sooo awesome!!!

Brilliant! Loved it!!

 

8 more days.....



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awww, Jasper! LOL! Too cute!

Great chapter! I figured the 'rents would separate them, LOL!!

 

I hear Wedding wedding wedding bells!!  ;)



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Awww! *Weeping tears of joy!!*

So wonderful to read it as Renee's pov. Great chapter! Had all three couples spot on! :D

LOL!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

FIJI!!! TURTLE ISLAND!!! *swoon*

That was pretty funny on the plane, LOL! Can't believe she slept the whole time! Well, wait...yeah...yeah, I think I can considering how tired she was from all that hot sex! LOLOLOL!

You know, they're getting plenty of babymaking done, lol. Surely it won't be long before she is preggers! ;)

 

And outtakes of A&J and Em&R's honeymoons would be awesome! I understand why they wouldn't be part of the main story, cuz this is about Bella. I'm glad you're offering to do them as outtakes, I'd love to read Em's honeymoon and pretend I was Rose! ;) hee hee



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I had a feeling you might like some Emmett lovin ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Such a beautiful chapter! *sigh*

So romantic...what a perfect honeymoon! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

That was some totally HAWT sailboat sex!!! Wow!

Increased sexual appetite...lightheadedness...a food craving...hmmm... ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

AH-HA!! Hee hee hee!! Yay! *happy dance* Bella's pregnant!! :D

So glad they joined the 'Mile-High Club' on the way home, LOL! They weren't very quiet about it either, guessing from the other passengers, LOL!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Just so awesome!! =D

I wonder if they'll really be able to wait a few days before they're forced to make the big reveal, LOL!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This was such a beautiful chapter! :D  I loved the 'big reveal' during the family dinner, lol! Grandparents' reactions are always so great!! :D

Just update when you can, hun. I totally understand. :)

I'm having trouble READING my favorites let alone writing my story this last week. University back in session so I'm back to my full time job at the university, plus my home life. So I totally understand!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OOOOHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Oh my!!!! NOOOOOO!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Believe me, I have faith in you. I wouldn't be such a fan of your stories if I didn't have any, lol.

This was a very hard chapter for me to read personally, it just brought back the pain and sorrow of the day I buried my own father seven years ago. My own husband was there for me, very much like Edward was for Bella here. That made me smile.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you. My father passed away two months after my husband and I got married. I don't think I could have gotten through it without him.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

First of all, my condolences to you, butterflybetty.  :'(  *hugs*

I had to look up blighted ovum. Unbelievably, there are some women who were misdiagnosed and went on to full term pregnancies and the babies are doing well.

I don't know what could be worse than a miscarriage. Poor Bella and Edward...and Renee...and everyone. I hope this is the only miscarriage they have.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:(

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

*hugs* :)

Miscarriage support ribbon



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I needed that!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

You're welcome, hun. :)

Ah...so the sun's shining. Let the sun's warmth fill us with love and laughter while its rays chase away the clouds and the darkness.

I think it's a sign that Bella is ready to move on.  :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Who knew a cinnamon roll could be such a turn on? LOL! That was such hot lovin'!! And I'm glad Edward wouldn't let up and explained what he was trying to say. Glad they're ready to try again. :D

Nice to hear Renee is doing better, too.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Aww! That ending was beautiful! We all know Alice is right.

So Bella FINALLY got her period. Maybe it's one of those that you get even tho you're already pregnant? If not, that's okay. They can't give up, it'll happen. In the meantime, they need to just enjoy each other and fuck like bunnies! LOL!

:)



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Very nice chapter, BB! *Big Hugs*  *sniff*

Nice diversion with the whole Jasper/Alien Abduction thing, LOL! I was rolling! WTF?



Author's Response:

IT was like a tension releiver:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OME!!! The prank on Jasper was HYSTERICAL!! Great job! :D

And the lovely lemon to end the chappie, so beautiful. Christmas decorating sounded fun, too.

 



Author's Response:

I nearly busted my gut laughing so hard while writing that part:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OH my my... :(  How sad.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

:O

Wow...poor E! :(



Author's Response:

I know!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I waited until tonight to read this just in case I needed a whole box of tissues! ;) And damn my jaw hurts! ;)

It was so good, and definitely worth EVERY tear. Best part of such a huge fight/misunderstanding is the makeup sex! Bring on the lemons, BB! LOL!



Author's Response:

lol, I told you I was crying!!! I almost wrote the lemon but didn't feel it *snickers*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh dear...

On one hand it's about time that they had a place to themselves. On the other, still living together and all, you'd think that they'd be more supportive of each other. They have been through so much together...



Author's Response:

True, it was a difficult decision and chapter.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

What a great sounding apartment!! They gotta feel like they've just won the lottery! Good for them!

I think they should still move even if their relationships with the others are reconciled. I was really surprised the couples didn't move out after their honeymoons, honestly. They're not always gonna want to live together.

They need to think about what if it had been Alice or Rosalie that had lost a baby and what they would've been through. Everyone would've reacted differently, I assure you. The four of them need to wake up and beg for forgiveness before it's too late. If anything, with all the tragic events that has happened in their lives, they should know by now to not take life for granted. What if Jasper was stabbed and robbed on the subway or some high dude bust in the ER and shot Emmett??

Sounds like James and Laurent maybe set the Foursome straight. And when they gave E & B the evil death glare in the breakroom they realized that the gay guys were right. LOL!  ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Hmmm    :)

Good luck ladies, let's get rid of some of this luggage!

Snowball!



Author's Response:

lol, Did you throw a snowball at me????

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

You're right, that was tough. But it was so touching.

And I think I saw the silver lining. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Finally, finally, finally...and of course, you didn't disappoint, BB!

So glad everyone's finally said their peace. Now that the air's clear, they should all feel lighter.

Thanks, BB!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129543
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh, how awful. Poor Bella. :'(

At least the last moment they had was happy and he told her he was proud of her...

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well, that wasn't so bad...first meal went rather smoothly...

Must be a very prestigious school :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ha ha, yeah, they are short chapters. So unusual for you, LOL!

Loving it though! ;)



Author's Response:

This is a story that I've had finished for a long time. I am in the process of moving it over here. It can be found in it's entirety on fanfic.net and twilighted.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

"don...don...don..." LOL!

I wonder if Tanya is going to give Bella a hard time because she didn't get paired with Edward...

I also wonder who Bella is going to trust first in telling about Charlie. Carlisle might be a good running partner. :)



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Lovely, simply lovely...

Except that bitch Lauren! grrrr

;)

 



Author's Response:

lol, THanks:)

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Amazing chapter!

When it rains, it pours, and Bella finally poured her guts out!

:)

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Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ha ha, sweeeet!! LOL!

So Bella can sing, too??!! Coolness!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

uh oh.... LOL!!!

*sigh*

Love it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Ha ha ha ha, I love it!! Possesive Bella ROCKS! LOL! That was so AWESOME the way she told Tanya off, LOL!! I was surprised that Tanya and her gang hadn't heard about E&B leaving the cafeteria the way they did the previous night.

And Bella's car might be a good way to break the ice about Charlie. :)  It's nice how quickly Edward's friends became her friends too.

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh my!



Author's Response:

Thank you ;)

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Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ohhhh....so sweet...

I liked how his defiance won :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Awww! So nice everyone's there to welcome her home!!

Nice chapter, hun!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I had to catch up on this story, so I had several chapters to read. I missed alot, so I decided to wait and write just this one review. Hope you don't mind, ButterflyBetty. :)

I couldn't believe how tacky Tanya was getting and then FINALLY Carlisle had enough and threw her out, that was great! LOL! Surely there are bylaws and a Code of Conduct and such since the Academy is a school, so Tanya probably doesn't have a leg to stand on with her threats does she? Even if she got a high-profile lawyer? She comes off as a bitch that would try to come in and take the Academy away if she could. If she's such a bad dancer, how did she get in in the first place?? LOL!

I think it's beautiful that Bella was there when Edward Sr and Elizabeth passed. These past few chapters I have cried alot, they're so beautifully written. My tears are also from my personal life, too, so I really am crying along with the story not just because of the story. So on that note, I grieve and cope the best I can just like these characters are.

I look forward to seeing how this turns out. Do Bella and Edward nail the audition and get to work with Marcus? Of course I see them married years from now with lots of babies, just like Edward said, lol. But I'm curious...Carlisle is ten years older and he and Esme have been married since they were 18, but have no kids?

Thanks for writing another beautiful story, ButterflyBetty! :D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

very nice ;)

*sigh*

That's about all I can say. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

LOL, now that's what I call shopping! *sigh* ;)

That was too funny with Bella and Rose, too! ROFL

Loved it, fun chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow, the things we do in the name of love! LOL!!

Totally cute and fun!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Um, didn't we just go through this with Tanya? LOL! Bitches never learn!

Bella's right, a little, our dancing boy does have a problem with pushy egotistical women...or girls in Lauren's case, lol!

hee hee hee ;)

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, but Lauren is a little smarter than Tanya:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

LOL, indeed they are! *hee hee*

But what did she mean by 'at least we were only having sex with each other'? You have some orgie outtakes you've written or something? LOL! ;)

I would've worried about someone seeing them since they were in a classroom! Naughty naughty voyeur! LOL! ;)

 

 

 



Author's Response:

No orgies in this one:) I save all of that for My Awakenings stories. SHe just means that they aren't sleeping around with other people.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

So sweet they are so loving...

Why would someone shoot Madame? How terrible!

And so cute Charlie did that for Bella, he was such a good father. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

:O

WHOA! Tanya!! Oh my...

 

So sad Madame is gone...

:'(



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Just wondering what song Bella played at Madame's funeral?

 

Maybe after Bella and Edward marry they'll open their own ballet studio in Madame's old place?

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

What a beautiful gift for Bella! *wipes tears, blows nose*

Irena was creepy, lol! And I enjoyed their run around Forks and chat about having kids. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Wow, she's letting go of everything in Forks... okay then. :)  Good for her. She knows what she wants.

And that was such a nice moment she and Em shared. :)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Awww, that was such a sweet lemon. Loved the girls chatting and teasing before that, LOL!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Woot, woot! Can't wait to enjoy the show, I'm sure it'll be great! Their costumes sound so beautiful, too.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I had the best time searching for them!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Wow, way cool way to write this chapter. I liked the different POV's, that was a great way to visualize their emotions as their futures were determined.

I had the music playing as I read their dance, LOL! Never did say what Ben & Angie's music was?



Author's Response:

It was just something that Bella wrote:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

That was amazing, especially the visit with Charlie. Perfect.

xoxo



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

That was so incredibly beautiful...yeah, I'm teary-eyed. Perfect proposal! The right place, the right time, the right words... ;)

Awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you:(

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Totally loved the wedding! I loved how they released balloons, that was so touching. As were their goodbyes. Jasper and Emmett's words were my faves.

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

Aww! Bravo, bravo!! Oh my gosh, such a great ending! I can't believe it's over! :'(  :'(   So perfect! Love the names picked out for the twins!

My poor baby, Emmett. Torn ligament in his shoulder! No kids? Such a shame.

Totally happy for the other couples, too. Jasper a choreographer, Ben and Angela with the Cullen Academy, etc. ... such awesomeness!

Great story, butterflybetty!! Loved it! :D  Thank you for sharing your wonderful stories with the world!

xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

The Reunion by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 254]
Summary:

Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79068
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm all in! LOL! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You have a way of drawing me in to your stories! ;)

I'm so intrigued by the two of them. Leaving Forks on the same night ten years ago? What happened between them or what DIDN'T happen between them? They let ten years pass without any kind of message between them, not even their parents seem to engage in communication between each other. Forks is a small town, so WTF??

Can't wait for more!!

 

 



Author's Response:

lol, I promise to explain it all!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

AAAAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKK!!! Too short!!!! No fair!!!!!!!!!!

LOL!!  ;D

Loved the completely different interactions each one had with Jessica! ROFL! And that they both felt the same way about the decor and nametags! Priceless!

Lovin' it!!



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Another story I had to play catch up on, but I loved EVERY minute of it!! Chapter 4 was the last time I had read and reviewed, and wow alot of things happened!

So glad that James and Laurent came to Forks! I love how Bella is more at ease and is getting along with everyone now. I loved the chapter where she and Charlie had the long overdue heart to heart.

And the *ahem* action ;) in this chapter leaves me wanting more! The last two sentences say it all!! ;)

So...um...the upcoming photoshoot for Playgirl with Jacob Black...surely it won't cause too much trouble for new couple E&B, right? Maybe Jacob will fall in love with Alice or Rosalie, lol!

Love this story, ButterflyBetty! :D



Author's Response:

Without giving away too much, trust me when I say that it will be...eventful. As for the action between Bella and Edward, it's only beginning:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yay, Rosalie!!! ;)

And of course Bella has always loved Edward! Leah hit that right on the money!!

Can't wait for them to play the game, it's going to be hilarious when they kick Mike's ass! ROFL!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

ROFL!! 'What the hell did Jacob Black want with my Bella?' Well, Cavemanward...ROFL! Or shall we say Possessiveward? Hmmm...lol!

Fun chappie, sounds like the Mike/Jessica thing is going to keep happenin'. If he's abusing her verbally, he may be abusing her physically, too. If so, she and kids need to get away from him ASAP!!

Congrats again, Rosie!! :D



Author's Response:

Yes, he is both cavemanward and possessiveward:) I promise the Mike and Jessica situation will be handled.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OME  OME  OME  OME

They made love!! Wow, that so hot, too!! Whew! I can't wait for next chapter! Does she ILY back or is she shocked??? Gah!!! And does she slip out and leave him or do Carlisle and Esme accidentally walk in on them asleep in bed the next morning?! Gah!!!

Nah, def not a Jacob fan here, LOL! Can Bella PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE punch him during the photoshoot??!! That would be soooo funny! 

 

Glad you love this story, too, butterflybetty!! It is lighter, and that's awesome! :D It's all about balance, right? ;) You can chalk me up as being one of your biggest fans! I'll read anything you write!! :D LOL!



Author's Response:

Oh, I promise the next chapter is a big one!! As for JAcob, just wait. Trust me. It's worth it:) With all the angst I write, I need a lighthearted one like this.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! I'm so happy!!!!!! :D

They really do bring out the best in each other.  ;)

And of course, James always has the right things to say, too. :)

And you know, the whole sneaking in the window thing is so adorably Dawson's Creek! LOL!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Awww....

Good thing I have a box of kleenex handy!!! :) That was a beautiful chapter, hun! :) The love is just radiating off my screen!



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:) I appreciate your kind words.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Cliffie!!!! NO!!!!!!! LOL!!

OMG what??????!!!!!!!!! Urgh!!

LOL!!

 

(Swing batter batter! S w i n g!) ;)



Author's Response:

A little dramatic, don't you think???

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Yay, Mikey's a jailbird! :)

 



Author's Response:

He's going to be getting some jail love now:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I bet the mist turns into pouring rain, LOL!

Why couldn't the Jacob in the saga be more like your Jacob? LOL! Such a diva, love to hate him!! :D Come on out of the closet while you're at it, Jacob! LOL!



Author's Response:

lol, thank you;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

ROFL, yeah, that was awesome of Bella! :D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Awww, that's so sweet!!! Of course Alice is going to say Yes! :D

 

 

Right?