Reviews by Louise Clark
The Reunion by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 254]
Summary:

Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79103
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

:D hee hee

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Well played indeed! LOL! That was priceless! *evil laugh*

That was totally HOT at the beginning of the chapter, btw! Whew! *fans herself*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Awww, is that all? Just seven more chapters?? :'(  I'm enjoying this story so much! :D



Author's Response:

Yep:(

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow, turning his resignation DID seem really easy. :P  And the phone sex was so fast! Whew! :O!

Just six more...



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Awww...

So happy things are moving right along for Rosie. :)

LOL, I love how James takes care of Bella!



Author's Response:

He's a sweetie:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Wow!! Now THAT was so HOTT my laptop nearly melted!! Damn!

;)  Loved it!  Fuck on, Fuck Fest '10, baby!!



Author's Response:

lol, glad it didn't!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

*sniff* That was some beautiful, sensual lovin, my dear! *sniff*



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Wow, what a great night! Having all her friends there.

And what a nice proposal! :)



Author's Response:

Pefect for her:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

LOL, Lauren is such a loser! Bleh!

Kidnapping Alice was funny, and I liked the wedding. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Bravo, bravo!!!

I love how you have Edward teasing us that there may be a sequel, LOL!

;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:) You never know:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 91271
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

All I can say is... Whoa!

;)



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, that was so cute! LOL! What a way to start the third installment. So glad Bella's recovered so well.

And for the whole chapter to be in Jasper's pov, way cool. Liked it.

Was expecting more kids though, LOL! Just 2 each? LOL!



Author's Response:

Just two??? They have four between them!?!?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awww, so cute! Edward is such a wonderful father.

Sorry for the confusion with my last comment. I simply meant that I was surprised there weren't more children between Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper. That Bella and Alice had had only two children EACH. LOL! With the four of them like rabbits in the bedroom and all, LOL! I kinda expected Alice and Bella pregnant every year. Because sometimes once you have one...you're on a roll, LOL! :D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow!!! That was very, very juicy!! Loved it!

:D

 

Had a feeling the teacher was going to be a problem! :(



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yeah, that meeting sure didn't go well. :(  I hope Phil keeps his word, too.

Wouldn't hurt to think of a Plan B, just in case. Like a private school or home teaching, or even full-time tutors. It is L.A. after all. How do you think celebrities and the like handle their kids' education?

Or maybe Rose could just replace Mrs. White? Yeah! :)



Author's Response:

I got me a plan:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh MY MY MY MY... DA YUM, BB!! Wow! I am in desperate need of a shamwow right now, LOL! Seriously, that was so HOT! Yes, definitely a shamwow to dry up all the drool, and I need a cold shower!

Whew! ;)



Author's Response:

lol, I need one too!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, that's a tough question. I think it'd be great as a sidestory all its own, if you've thought of a plot and everything to make it longer than a oneshot. If not, then it's okay to just do an outtake. Either way, I'm reading it!! LOL! ;)

Back to this chapter...

I figured Mrs. White was still up to her shenanigans. *rolls eyes*

James is a turd.

The lemon was hot! I like that side of Jasper. ;)

When it was over, it was the end of the day? Cuz when Jazz entered, Bella said it was the middle of the afternoon. Whew! I bet they just left early, having to go see if they could join Alice and Edward, LOL! ;)

 



Author's Response:

No, they left early:) Either way I do it, it's going to be a few chapters.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great update!

I'm happy for Seth and Tanya.  :)

And newly concerned about Whitley and Mackenzie facing the wrath of ignorant, bigoted people. Urgh! I can only imagine the moms of those girls on the way home. I hope they don't pass on their bigotry to them and the girls end up asking about it or tormenting Whitley & Mackenzie at the next class.  :(

Oh, and...

All work and no play would make Bella a dull girl, no?

LOL! ;)



Author's Response:

Yes, it would:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

*high pitch scream* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! My car!!!! My beautiful car!! *sobs loudly*



Author's Response:

lol, thankS:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, very intense!!

I'm so sad about her car, cuz I would totally love that car too, but I'm glad she's okay. Physically. I hope she gets the mental therapy help she needs.

More so, I hope they catch who it was. No excuse for both guards to be gone at the same time. I bet it was James!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow, and holy shit!

So evil, the perfect opportunity for the evil doer to abduct Bella. Poor Carlisle!

 

Sorry to hear you've got writer's block, hun. Hope it clears soon. This was a fantastic cliffie!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311973
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

Loved it! And what a comforting and beautiful poem Father Pat passed on to her. So great that Edward was able to meet her at the cemetary after all, too. *sigh*

 



Author's Response:

i know...edward...i sigh a lot. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Hallelujah & Zombie Dances

Loved the Prom! So awesome for Chris to do that! Great chapter!



Author's Response:

thanks very much.  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

*sobs*

That was beautiful...

And I'm a very firm believer in paying it forward as well.



Author's Response:

the best part of 'paying it forward' is that it's never too late to do so...   Thanks very much!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

*Stands up and applauds loudly*

Hoo-Rah!!

Well said, indeed. Loved it. Very inspiring. You rock!!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks very very much! next chapter is up.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

*Jumps up and down on couch* *whistle*

Hell yeah! LOL! Go on Oprah, Bella, please!!!!!!!

;)

 

Great chapter, nice surprises. Getting so excited for the weddings!



Author's Response:

wedding will be here before we know it.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Scenic Views & Meeting Duke

OME!!

Great chapter! You balance the drama and humor so perfectly, I am in awe. I love this story, and it just keeps getting better.

Thank you for capturing Emmett so well, he's my fave guy.

Keep up the great work!

Can't wait to see how Bella handles being on Oprah!! :D



Author's Response:

i am so far behind with my responses to reviews.  i thank you very much!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Shock Therapy & The Mother Road

Yay! That was great!!

Although, I hope we get more of Meramec Caverns in LRM, just because I live in Missouri and have been there, LOL!

And kudos to Bella realizing that Oprah was trying to help her. :) Very encouraging!



Author's Response:

i think there was a little bit more of the caverns in LRM.  Glad you're enjoying the story!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

OME!!

You've really outdone yourself this chapter, LOL! Amazing! I loved the whole entire chapter!

Gah! I cannot wait for the double LRM!

Oh, and thanks for letting Emmett control the V&V fb page for a while. ;) That was heavenly. =D



Author's Response:

you are very welcome.  Here's the link to the entire phone conversation btwn charlie and Rose...although I have a feeling you've already seen it ;)  Thanks!  http://www.facebook.com/pages/Virgins-Villains-fanfic/153713394654002#!/note.php?note_id=177344502329689

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Fireworks & Dream Homes

Wow, yes, there certainly was a lot of ground covered in this chapter, but it was quite necessary. I think it flowed quite well, so great job! :)

Can't wait to see the pics on fb of the dream house. Very happy they found their perfect home.

Not a lot of Emmett and Rosalie in this chapter. I'm sure they're anxious for their wedding. How long 'til theirs? Sorry, I forgot the date of theirs.

And the movie at the cemetary gave me the creeps. Do they really do that? Oh my. I don't mean to sound rude. :)

On that note, I'll just go before I die of embarrassment...

 



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Fabulous!!

So great!

And, uh, at least Em and Rose went to the limo. LMAO! ;) Priceless!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Outtake - Magnum Farce

Oh my goodness! LMAO!!!

Rock on, Emmett. ;) *sigh* Love him!

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/7216/images/Fighting_For_Love_banner.jpg

 

When Edward moves to Forks with his sister, Esme, he is immediately drawn to the mysterous Bella Cullen. Will he be able to break through her tough girl act? Will she let him? Usual pairings, AH, NC-17 for language and possible lemons in later chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Fighterward, to read
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131302 Read Count: 134479
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow!  :)

Can't believe Aro and his whole gang are dead!

 

Or that the 'rents want to annoy Bella to no end! :(



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow, what a huge clusterfuck! Poor Bella!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ha ha, BUSTED!! LOL!

I'm hooked on another of your stories, BB! xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

??WHOA??!!



Author's Response:

I know!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

So the cat's out of the bag, LOL!  :)



Author's Response:

lol, yep:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

So cute they explained to each other when they were hit by Cupid! And the hot lovin after, hee hee.  ;)  Surprised nobody heard them, but maybe all the rest of them were busy too.  ;)

So what's the plan, BB? How long they gonna be on Temptation Island? And if Charlie and Sam want to catch Aro so bad, why don't Edward and Bella just agree to be a part of an undercover sting? Prob be too dangerous. Nevermind. LOL!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow, one minute I'm laughing with Bella...then at the end of the chapter I'm speechless!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Uh...HOW would Aro know they were all there unless there's a mole on that island? Hmm....

 

btw...LOVED Emmett in this chapter, BB!



Author's Response:

I knew you would love this Emmett:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Wow! I can't wait to find out who's turning the doorknob...

 

And uh, Bella's got a great aim at noses! LOL!



Author's Response:

I know, right? She's helping them get nose jobs;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh NO! They can't get custody of her! Weren't they declared dead two years ago? I imagine it takes time to be declared alive and all. WTF??!!



Author's Response:

They work for the government. If you know the right people, you can cut through all the red tape:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

*Jumps up and down clapping*

Woot Woot!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

LMAO!! Phase One completed... sounds like an awesome episode of Punk'd is coming!! Ashton Kutcher at this tourney? hee hee



Author's Response:

lol, no but that's a good idea!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

LOL! Can't wait for phase three!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

LMFAO!!! Wow!!

I bet they didn't really get married, that it was a joke because they figured out on the ride over that they were being punked by B & E!! But if they did, then good for them! LOL!

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Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

First time is always a little akward, right? lol

Good for them!

 

Can't believe there's going to be a sequel! *squeals* ;)



Author's Response:

lol, you are so cute:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

I've really enjoyed yet another wonderful story by you, BB! Even though all I really know about boxing is from the Rocky movies, I couldn't help but like this story.

I'm sad there's only one chapter left!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Really really good, BB! I like the way you ended it. Perfect set-up for the sequel! Great story, hun.

Bravo!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Woot woot! Go Edward! Go Bella!

;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

The White Swan Lodge by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16893
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Wow, another AMAZING chapter! I love the visual at the end of Edward walking in the kitchen bearing witness to Bella licking icing off her finger. Sexy!  ;)  And the song by Jem is SO HOT!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the kind words!! I'm glad you like it!

thanks for taking the time to read and review - I truly appreciate it!

chapter 5 coming soon!

xo
Jaime

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

What a great date and such a hot lemon! Whew! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

What a thoughtful gift from Charlie.

May I please smack Edward for taking what Bella said the wrong way?! Urgh!

 



Author's Response:

hahah YES YOU MAY!!

THanks for reading and reviewing! Hope to update soon!

xo
Jaime

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

Awww!! I'm surprised she didn't notice herself, lol. I wonder what Charlie will do when he finds out?!

So glad they're back together! =D

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Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - Epilogue

Very fitting ending indeed. Lovely. Bravo!

 

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 35494
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oooh, possessive much, Edward?! ;) hee hee

So she's like Rogue from the X-Men??

Go Bella!

 

Possessiveward, LOL! ;)



Author's Response:

Yes, kind of like Rogue from X-men. Never thought about it like that!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yeah, so Eleazar isn't so bad after all...

Uh oh, the puppies! Wonder what's rubbed their fur the wrong way, LOL!



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

GO BELLA!!

Hee hee, I liked the part where Bella and Edward were getting hot and heavy against a tree!  ;)  I wonder if I gave you that idea? LOL! ;)



Author's Response:

lol, No, but they do say that great minds think alike, you know:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Aww, poor Emmy! LOL! So cute!

And damn, that was one HOT shower!! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Very nice chappie.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Ah-mazing!! Ah-some chapter! Best one yet! The fight, the lemon... the end of the chapter...

LOVED IT!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

*whistle* Bravo! Bravo! *whistle*

Loved it, and I can't wait for the next one!! Woot Woot!



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Summary:

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 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 50: On The Road Part 1

LOL, this was a great chapter. Nice to get Edward's pov on the last little bit of the adventure.

Yes, the rugburn conspiracy was priceless! ;) Poor Bella! LOL!

Curious though, Edward mentioned Emmett replenishing the supply of Slim Jim's. Wouldn't everyone in the car need a gas mask if Emmett was wolfing down all those? Just a thought. ;) LMAO!

 

Thanks for mentioning Father Monaghan and the tragic natural disaster that happened in Joplin. There is a group that is donating $$ from an auction to the Salvation Army in Joplin. There's a few fanfic authors donating o/s or outtakes to the cause. Here's their link on FB: https://www.facebook.com/home.php?sk=group_213588222009155



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I saved the link.  Emmett is storing up the gas for the next chapter....which i just happened to post. lol.  hope you enjoy it!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Tying Up Loose Ends

Wow...

I'm glad she turned her life around and has someone who truly loves her. Major kudos to Edward for letting her say her peace and listening to her. That was very mature of him, and just another example of how he's changed.

Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much for the great review!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Oh, my gosh, I loved this chapter, LOL!

So many details of the bachelor party and the day before - hilarious!

And yes, I'm applauding the wedding is quickly approaching, but as an Emmett lover, I'm hoping for good coverage of his nuptials as well. ;)

Til next time... :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! we're going to miss Emmett while he's on his honeymoon...i think.  lol 

Summary:

Here is the companion story to Endless Awakenings, the story of Seth, Tanya, Ben, and Angela. NC-17 for the usual.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15719 Read Count: 6336
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2010 Updated: 09 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

So hot! Awesome they finally said they wanted each other, LOL!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

All We Knew by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Summary:

Bella Swan returns home after ten years and a bad marriage. Will she be able to find herself? What if her past catches up to her? AH & NC-17 for language and possible lemons. B/E, A/J,R/EM

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143567 Read Count: 114397
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I stumbled upon this story today, and just finished all 35 chapters in one sitting. This story has just been wonderful to read and have gone through plenty of emotions this afternoon while devouring it. Just beautiful, BB.

I especially love this last chapter, it was so touching.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Yay! She found the perfect dress!

And I'm so glad she had a chance to reconcile with Angela before she left. :)

Very happy she's considering publishing her book, too. If it can help someone in a similar situation, then she's done a great thing.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

ruh-roh, Shaggy! LOL!

dun --- dun --- dun ---

 

Jessica interfering before the reverend could ask if there was anyone who felt that they shouldn't be together? This ought to be good!



Author's Response: lol, you know it!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Amazing chapter, and hope you feel better soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you, doll:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Beautiful!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I hope you're not hinting around that Jessica is going to stick around! ;)



Author's Response:

Would I do that??? * smiles innocently*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Oh wow!!! Amazing!! Twins!! How wonderful!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

*sobs*

That was beautiful! Love the names. And you're right, good place to end it.

Bravo!

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

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Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204486
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

dun dun dun........

Yep, totally loving the story so far!  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Very beautiful...

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Amazing story so far, BB!

I really enjoy stories that take time to develop and that I can get emotionally attached to. I can tell this is going to be a beautiful story.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) This one certainly has a slow burn and it's the only way for the story to have developed:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow, I had to catch up on the last four chapters because I thought I had added it to my faves, but alas... LOL, evidently not! I'm such a dork!

ANYWAY...

glad E & B had a heart to heart about their exes. Poor Em, LOL! And then for Anthony and Esme to see what is in front of Edward's face but he's so oblivious to it... *sigh* ... things are moving right along! Going good! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yay! Girls night out!

Glad they're not giving her grief about drinking water, although the night's not over with yet... hmm...



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Aww, way way cute! I'm smiling so big right now! :D

CUTE CHAPTER ALERT!



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Aww!! I was smiling the whole time I was reading this chapter! Luv'd it!

 

You can do it, Edward...ask her out! :)



Author's Response:

This was one of my favorite chapters of the whole story so far!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

*LOUD ROAR OF APPLAUSE*

You smooth talker, Edward! That sounded more like an invite to hang out again, but it worked! Bella realizes it's a date! Way to go!

Another totally cute chapter! Can't wait for the date! :)



Author's Response:

They are so awkward, aren't they?

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Aww! Buying Anna a flower, LOL! Way too cute!

Thanks for another great chapter!

I wonder if she'll make Edward sleep on the couch if he sleeps over for Alex's birthday??!! Hmm... ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Pure awesomeness! Way to go, Alex and Edward! hee hee  ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

ROFL!!! High-five, Anthony!! ROFL!! I also enjoy the thought of seeing Edward skip to his car as he's leaving Mary's lil flower shop!! Too bad Em didn't see him, LMAO!!

;)



Author's Response:

Em would have never had let him live it down!!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Aww...so cute Ivy was so taken with Bella again. Bella seems to be great with kids. And glad dinner was not as akward this time around, LOL! Poor Em, getting smacked on the back of the head - again! ROFL!!

;)

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Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Well, the drama with Lauren could've gone worse. I just wish Bella wouldn't act the way she does sometimes, like when Angela tried to lend her a sympathetic ear and she just gave her and the rest of the ladies a cold shoulder. Edward was great in this chapter. What happened to Emmett though? LOL Thought the boys were with him at first, and then when Bella went to play Skeeball with Edward and the boys, there was no mention of him.  :'(  LOL!

Oh yeah, and I'm thinking Alex got his b-day wish a little early? LOL!



Author's Response:

Emmett went to steal some tickets from the other kids ;) And you have to understand that Bella isn't used to being around people. She doens't do very well with them.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yay! Huge congrats to Bella!!

But uh, excuse me, who's this 'Vic' and why is 'her hand on his chest'???? WTF??!!??



Author's Response:

Hmm, perhaps I should post the next chapter.....

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

OME!!! I am just completely blown away!!

Vic, what a spitfire! LOL!

Then... holy hotness! When these two make love for the first time they're gonna set off a fire alarm!! ;)

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Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Awww.....

I have a feeling when the time comes for Edward to propose that lil Anthony will there too!

Very cute chapter, and I'm glad she met with Lauren and is forgiving her.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great chapter. I like that Christina girl that opens the gate everyday, LOL! And, Ninja Emmett!!! Priceless!!

And whatever you got going on in your personal life, you gotta take care of that first. We'll be here.  :)  *hugs*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I loved the dream at the beginning, it was beautiful.

And the rest of the chapter was cool.  ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

O......M......G!!!!!!

I'm speechless...



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

How sweet is little man Anthony??!! Poor Alex!

And Congrats on the great semester! You should post your work under the Original Fiction section here!! ;)



Author's Response:

Hmm, maybe I will ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Loved the update, hun. So cute the boys are excited to be brothers. :)   

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Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I am so glad she's doing so well. And the rest of you, too, lol! *hugs*

Thanks for the update and inspiration, BB!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetie:)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Totally missed the opportunity for lovin in the shower! :(

I'm ready for some house hunting, lol! Since she's a famous author and all, they should totally be on House Hunters, that show on HGTV where a couple (or whoever) goes househunting and they narrow it down to three by the end of the show. Then at the end, they reveal which one they chose and sometimes include video of how they've renovated it or updated it to make it their own home.

And I totally agree about The Young and the Rec Less, LOL! Nice pimpage!  ;)



Author's Response:

Hehe, gotta pimp it our where I can ;) I thoguht about adding some shower lovin but I just wasn't feeling it :) LOL, about House Hunters, I'll have to consider it.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Amazing chapter, BB! So glad they have possibly found a home. I'm sure the boys will love it, too.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Such a tear jerker, but in a good way.

Wouldn't surprise me if she was already pregnant, what with her mood swings. ;) And if Edward's going to be adopting Alex, why wouldn't Bella adopt Anthony? And the way Bella was asking for Charlie to be extra careful when he was leaving...I hope it wasn't a hint for a tragedy to strike.

<3 Thanks for sharing such a great story, it's def one of my faves that you've written, BB. <3

Innocence by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When you find yourself needing who you know you shouldn't want, do you turn away from him or embrace him? Now being continued. AH & NC-17

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117172 Read Count: 89065
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2010 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy hell! Damn that was hot!! Totally surprised the shit out of me, LOL, but damn... ;)

Too bad it's a one-shot! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I will more than likely be expanding this one at some point so be on the look out:)