Reviews by Louise Clark
CTA Dreams by Daphodill Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 112]
Summary: Past Featured Story

He's watched her for months; she doesn't know he exists. A train delay offers him the opportunity to make his dream a reality.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 99 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52934 Read Count: 59907
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2013 Updated: 10 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

OH MY GAWD! 

I absolutely love this story so far! You had me from the first chapter. Hook. Line. Sinker.

;)

I love your writing, too! :D

This is just pure awesomeness. I'm an Emmett girl. ALL my stories are his. He owns me. And I love this Emmett. ^^This chapter alone, just... oh my gawd... so swoonworthy! 

Congrats on being Featured this week! Hope you get many more readers and reviewers! :D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Glad you're continuing this. I love this story, lol. It's such a guilty pleasure. :)

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Date: 01 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Aww! Really?! Only 15 more chapters? :(

Well, it's been fun, and I hope one or two (or more) of the remaining chapters are in Em's POV. ;) LOL

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has had a crush on Dr. Cullen for two years. Will her greatest fantasy come true after a night of babysitting?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109464 Read Count: 86136
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Daddy Cullen better approve, LOL! And I hope they get the house! :D

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Date: 01 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Bravo, Bella!

Hope Peter comes around. If Bella didn't make him understand she truly loves Carlisle, then he's an idiot!

Outdoor balcony sex was hot!

I Don't, I Do by momma2fan Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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When Bella ran away from her wedding, she never thought she would see the green eyes of the man she really wanted again. How will she react when he shows up five years later in the small town that she settled in? Written for F4OK..AH/M, E/B.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7199 Read Count: 1833
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2013 Updated: 01 Sep 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww! I love happy endings! :D

Puzzle of my Heart by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Vampgirl79

 

Bella leads a promiscuous life: no relationships, no last names, no numbers. After meeting a certain green-eyed man, she begins to break her carefully set up rules. In a steamy friendship both their pasts and insecurities will be revealed. Will Bella give in to love? And what will happen when the past catches up to her? A story about lust, love and trust. AH, rated NC-17 for a reason

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Banner made by Vampgirl79

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122361 Read Count: 106076
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Epilogue - Part II

Stunning and perfect!



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm feeling flattered ;).

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142507
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Five

Whoa! LOL! Love your Joey Lawrence story. He was definitely one of the guys I would always cut out of those teen magazines, like Bop! and Teen Beat. LOL!



Author's Response:

lol! The was suck a sweetie...I don't know what I expected, but he was awesome. A true gem. 

Thanks,

Dee xx

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Absolutely perfect! Bravo!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Emmett is in love with Bella, his best friend Edward’s adopted sister.  He is pretty sure that she likes him but after everything she’s been through in her past he’s not sure. 

Bella loves Emmett but after finding out that her adopted brother Edward, may have feelings for her she is unsure whether she should tell him. 

Can they finally admit to each other their feelings or will Edward get in their way?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6938 Read Count: 699
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2013 Updated: 20 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot: More Than Friends

Darn right this was my favorite! LOL! 

I love reading Bella and Emmett paired together, and also love writing them in my own stories. I'm very anti Em/Rose, LOL! ;)

Anyway, I think the very promising, open ending allows you to continue this. I, for one, would love to see it continued! ;)  *hint hint*

xoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

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I was having a really bad day. Boys are persistent, and Edward Cullen is laughing at me. A little daydreaming never hurt anybody. AU BPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 192783 Read Count: 72371
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2018
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 ~ First Lessons in Relationships

*squee* *jumps up and down excitedly* OMG, OMG!!!

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Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 ~ Two Way Street

So sweet! Yay, going to Prom! ;)

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Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 ~ My One and Only

Aww, yay! Okay, phew, big sigh of relief that he's not going anywhere! :D

xo

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Date: 26 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 ~ The Choices We Make

Yes! Whew! 

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Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 ~ Out The Window

"Hold on tight, Spider Monkey!" tee hee hee

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 982975
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
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Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 116

Awww!! That was so sweet! Loved their little chat!

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Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 122: Chapter 122

Awwww!

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Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 117

Bwahahaha!!! That's my Emmy Bear! ROFLMAO!! ;D

 

I said it before, but I'll say it again, since you asked, Paul needs to be taken down. It'd be interesting if he and Rosalie once knew each other...

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Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

*smh*

*chews nails nervously*

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Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Oh poor Emmett! Getting stalked by crazy-ass Rosalie, and then he's unaware that Edward and Bella were speaking of themselves! LOL! Can't wait to see if he'll figure it out or not! LOL!

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Date: 18 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Damn, that was hot! And they're only getting started! *fans self*

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Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 133

Yes! Bravo! 

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Date: 01 May 2014 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

*wimpers* Gah!

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Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105

Gah!!!!!!!

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Date: 18 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Ooooh! Poor Edward! Poor Emmett!

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Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Awww!

*squee* He asked her! LOL!

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Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

BWAHAHAHAHAHA!! Love it!

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Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

LOL, poor Edward ;)

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Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Thank heavens this is no dumb Emmett! LOL!

As for Bella, I think she maybe needs to step away to be able to clear her head?

Maybe it'll be good for Edward to have another female friend - just not a friend with benefits.

I don't think either one of them needs to jump into anything serious. I think they both need some time to theirselves.

xoxo 

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Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Gah!!! So happy!!!

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Awesome! Very sweet! Time to play! ;)

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Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

Yay for shopping! I love purple! tee hee

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Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

Yes! Woo hoo! Let Edward do it, Bella! Get Paul! 

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Date: 06 May 2014 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Bwahahahahahaha! Poor Emmy Bear! That was funny tho! ;D

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Date: 12 May 2014 Title: Chapter 112: Chapter 112

Cute!

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Aww! tee hee hee

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Date: 16 May 2014 Title: Chapter 114: Chapter 114

Why not a 69? *wiggles eyebrows like Emmett* ;)

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Date: 18 May 2014 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

So adorable! Loved this! :)

 

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Date: 21 May 2014 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 118

Ewwww! Visine in a drink?! Eeek!

Poor Emmy! LOL!

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Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 119: Chapter 119

Awwww, Emmy Bear!!!! Love him!

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Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 127

Yes!!! *happy dance*

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Date: 12 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 134

Go, Bella! Woot woot! Go, Josie! Yay! ;D

xoxo

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Date: 18 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141

Grr! He (PAUL) better turn up! >:(

Vegas would be a nice distraction! ;)

 

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Date: 22 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 145: Chapter 145

Way to go, Bella!!!!!! <3 <3 <3

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Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 146

Wow, go for it, Edward!

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Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 147

Yay for our favorite couple!

Can't belive there's only two more updates! :'(

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Date: 25 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 148

Best engagement EVER!!! So wonderful and beautiful! *squeeeeeeeeee*

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Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 150: Chapter 150

Awwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!

*bawls*

Beautiful! Thank you for a wonderful story!

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 151: Epilogue

Awww!!!!! Absolutely perfect!!! *happy tears*

Summary: Past Featured Story

PUTP

Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted

away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101833
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2014 Updated: 29 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Huge, huge chapter! So much positivity going on! Yes! Love it!

xo

Summary:

 

A veteran pro football player and an 18 year old pre med student, romance, the media, nasty rumors and a meddling family. A one shot that may or may not continue.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4460 Read Count: 774
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2014 Updated: 13 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - His wide receiver

Hope you continue it! I love Bella/Emmett pairings! :D

xo

Summary: Past Featured Story

alitd

 

On one of history's darkest days, Edward finds his other half. Bella wakes to find that her guardian angel may just be a figment of her imagination. A journey of two lost souls as they find the light when darkness surrounds them.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 120996 Read Count: 29935
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2014 Updated: 13 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Wonderful! I'm speechless. Truly heartwarming story and written with such respect. Bravo!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much. :)

Silence is Golden by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 809]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wanted her from the moment he saw her. Bella doesn't have time for a man. What happens when Edward takes a risk? The answer is he will possess her body, but she'll possess his heart. Will Bella learn who Edward really is? Silence is not always Golden, but the Sex sure is Divine! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137389 Read Count: 94710
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

*happy tears*

*happy tears*

*happy tears*

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Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ohhhhhhhh shiiiiiiiiiiiiiit! Why that (***^^%$#$^&&*)!!! He planted the paps there! Urgh! Do not like this one bit! >:(

*scrolls back to the beginning of the chapter in pursuit of happiness* ;)

xo

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Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Classic cliffie, Dishie! EEEEEK! 

LOL, Love it! 

xo

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Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh my, what a wonderfully written chapter! The highs and lows, the sweetness, the tears... just beautiful!

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So much going on in this chapter! So much potential foreshadowing, if I may guess? And then the finger fucking on the crowded subway? Holy hotness! Though I wonder if Bella truly has Stephen off her mind completely? ;) And of course while they're away from each other, they gotta have phone sex! hee hee



Author's Response:

Stephen is a passing fancy. This only gets better. Thanks for the cups ... I like cups. xoxox

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Date: 11 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bella... Bella... Bella... LOL! Girl is a natural flirt! Can't believe she had such a long dry spell. *smh* 

Loved seeing her in her element (the gallery opening and her time with Rose). :)

Why doesn't Bella use Edward as the artist for her New York gallery opening?? :D  I know he's a photographer, but art is art. *shrugs*



Author's Response:

She is a flirt when it needed, I see. When she lets her hair down. I love your suggestion for who she will show at her NY gallery .... :)  Thanks so much for reading and thanks for your cups. I appreciate it. xoxo

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Date: 18 May 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Gah! *fans self* 

Surely his parents will sell him their place! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Louise Clark!!! I think they just might! And thank you for the cup, I love the cups. xoxxo

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Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

*squees like Alice* OMG, OMG, OMG!!! I probably don't have to explain how hot that was right?! *fans self* 

LOL, Edward-1, Stephen-0

Please tell me Bella heard that! Dayum!

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Date: 31 May 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Why didn't Emmett get there quicker? Love him! <3 <3

Hope Stephen is charged with stalking or something. He's no longer hot in my book. :(

Thank God Edward swooped in and saved the day! I don't think it will be long before they share their feelings, either. Yay! ;)

xoxo



Author's Response:

Edward is her Superman!! I really can't wait to post the chapters I've already written. This story is so good, I love it. Thanks for cups, Louise Clark!!!! xoxxo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Have I told you how much I love this Edward?! I'm goo right now! Gah!



Author's Response:

LOL ... I like this Edward too. And we aren't done. Yummy. (thanks for the cups!) xoxo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

OOOOH yeah!!! *high five* *fist pump* *hugs* *mashed potato dance* 



Author's Response:

LOL ... you crack me up Louise!!! Thanks for the cup, girl!!!!! xoxo

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Date: 27 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

hee hee hee Loved this! So playful and fun! xo

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Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Gah! *squeeeeeeee!*

Loved this chapter so much! His confession... OMG!!!

Totally fangirling here!! 

xo ;)



Author's Response:

Oh, Louise, you are so stinking adorable! Thanks for always reading, reviewing and for the cups!!!! See you next week. xoxox

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loved their trip! Her cuddle time every morning... priceless! LOL! 

I don't like how Phil's moving to NYC. Not good. 

As for Victoria, I'm sensing a very interesting "conversation" is coming!

 

I'm missing Emmett, too... ;)

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Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

*melted*



Author's Response:

Thanks Louise Clark!! And thanks for the teacups!!!! xox

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Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

LOL, yeah, Aro seems a little creepy! Yay for Edward for telling Aro not to disrespect Bella. Tho, I fear Aro may blurt out Edward's little secret...

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Gah! Need them back together pronto! 

Man, if Phil is at the gallery opening, even as just a guest... I hope Edward punches his lights out! :(

 

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Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Whew! Wasn't as bad as I feared.

Thank goodness Alice was there for Bella.

And go, Rosalie! LOL!

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Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, what a portrait!

And holy hotness! *wipes forehead and pats face dry* The hawt sexy goodness - many times!!! Gah! And the ILY's!! Whoa! Woot woot!

And oh to be in love in Rome... promising to do such naughty things with a gelato... when WHAM! A cockblock as cold as ice! Bella is so awesome! She just brushes that shit off her shoulder Jay-Z style and was like, "The cold never bothered me anyway." 

LMAO! Gawd, loved loved loved this chapter, woman!

Mwah!

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Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

*gasp*

 



Author's Response:

LOL ... Thanks for the coffee cups sweets. xoxoxox

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Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Poor Bella. I totally understand that feeling of needing to "return to your roots" as she put it. 

xo

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Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh hoh!! Woo hoo! Go, Bella! So she never hung up, huh? Sneaky! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is over when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206585 Read Count: 201851
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter-40: Fucking Dogs and Fake Talons

Woo hoo! Bella told Tanya! LOL! That was great! :D



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Thanks for the review.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter- 41: Move Into My Heart

Oh boy, New Year's with Alice! LOL! ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

You might enjoy it, though... ;)

The next chapter should be up in a few minutes.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter-39: The Titanium Wall

Very swoony chapter! Congrats! Sorry to hear you were ill. Glad you're on the mend!



Author's Response:

Aww... thank you for the review and for your concern. :)

The next chapter should be up in a few minutes.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter- 44: Bottomless Love

What a lovely Valentine's Day! *swoon* Great chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you and thanks for leaving a review. :) The next chapter should be up on Friday. Take care. Ann

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter- 51: Epilogue: Don't Need A Prescription

Awwwww! Great ending! Explaining the title was perfect!

 



Author's Response:

Aww....thank you so much. :)

Thanks for reviewing.

That part was actually how this crazy idea started in the first place. :D

My new story, The Perfect Light, is now up for your reading pleasure. Be sure to check that out.

Take care.

Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner courtsey of Fallingsnow Winter

Bella has been blessed with the finer things in life. She has always been focused on what she has and never understanding that money doesn't buy you everything. It will take one stupid bet and a homeless man to teach her what really is important in life. Can Edward get through to snobby Bella Swan and show her what she has been missing? AH HEA Mature.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113417 Read Count: 56681
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Couldn't help but think of Adam Sandler's song about Sloppy Joes as I read that part of the chapter, LOL! ;)

What's it going to take for her to realize about Edward? LOL! Silly Bella!

Loved Emmett!

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Excellent chapter!

Really like her grandfather, and I especially liked the ending. She's smart!

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Date: 17 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awww! Poor Bella! That was a rough day for her. I commend her for trying, though! 

Can't wait to find out Edward's story. Clearly he's Alice's brother, LOL! Nice save! ;)

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh, gosh, poor Bella! Glad she's okay! Of course Black ran by her! *smh* Thank goodness Edward was there! Hope she goes back to Horizons. :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great, solid advice from Edward! Good for Bella to keep going back to Horizons!

I'm sure he'll get his food truck someday! :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

tee hee hee hee 

Oh to be a fly on the wall! LMAO! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh my.  :(  Poor Bella. Poor Edward!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

*happy dance* My favorite chapter yet! :D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh my! LOL! I love her spunk! Surely Edward will be near her during her experiment, so nothing to worry about... right?? *laughs nervously*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh! Was Edward really going to spill the beans?! 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I really enjoy Bella's grandfather! Very insightful man. :)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh boy. I think he really was trying to tell her his secret...

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow! So that's why her father treated her differently! :( 

Gosh, so heartbreaking to lose someone you're so close to. It's nice that he was ready, mentally. And what a surprise to all! Good for grandpa! LMAO!

I'm sure Bella will eventually forgive Edward. Her grandpa had excellent advice!

Great chapter!

xo

Buried by ericastwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 75]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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His reality was made of nightmares. Hers were plagued by them. Can she conquer her fears in time? Can he protect her?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 72544 Read Count: 26904
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2014 Updated: 02 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh! My! Gawd!

Wow!!!!!

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

*claps* Bravo! Fantastic!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

*gasp* Oh no! He's got Alice!! :'(

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Now we're getting some answers! Can't wait for more, hun! xoxo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAckkkkkkkk!!!!!! Holeeeeeeeeee!!!!!

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

*squee* Wow! What an ending! Woot woot! 

Of course she's going to say yes! LOL! ;)

Bravo!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Two troubled pasts that took different paths. She takes life by the horns and tries to live it to the fullest. He hides away on the mountaintop, rough all around. What happens when they meet? What happens when their worlds’ collide?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: mamih's favorites
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55154 Read Count: 24661
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2014 Updated: 06 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: On the Counter

Wow, holy hotness! 

Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146664
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate

Oh!! So excited! Can't wait to read Edward's reaction! :D LOL!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I promise, next chapter will tell you all you need to know about Edward's reaction. We'll be in his head when Bella tells him. See you then.