Reviews by Louise Clark
Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by Marie Carro

 

TFFA Banner

 

 

Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 146714
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Breaking the News

Loved it! 

xo



Author's Response: Thanks! We aim to please ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Livin Arrangements - Again

*happy dance*

So relieved that she said yes! LOL! Now if she'll just put the pieces of the Edward puzzle together and FIGURE IT OUT!!!! AAAAAAUUUUGGGHHH! LOLOLOL! Wish Rose had went ahead and explained things, it's killing me! LOL! But hopefully that just means Edward's reveal/confession will be that much sweeter! *sigh*

xo



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm not sure, but I think if Rose had explained it to Bella, it would have made her turn down Edward's offer to permanently move in with him. Next up, they'll celebrate Thanksgiving. See you then.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Chandrakanta

Isabella Swan, an up and coming graphic artist, lived in the heart of the Gold Coast in Chicago. She was comfortable in her brownstone, left to her by her grandmother.

Edward Cullen, a lieutenant in the Chicago Fire Department and the head of the rescue squad in Department Eighteen. He risks his life on a daily basis, putting out fires and saving strangers from burning buildings and mangled vehicles.

She was an innocent…someone caught in the cross hairs of their obsession with fire.

He was a hero…a man desperate to save the woman who was in danger from a serial arsonist. 

Little did they know, this monster was going to be the catalyst to start their fire, their fire of passion. 

They were Caught in the Flames

 

CITF

 

Banner by Fallingsnow Winter! Thank you! 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244154 Read Count: 1081949
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2014 Updated: 24 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

*squee* *happy dance* !!!LOL!!!

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Date: 02 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Doesn't Bella know about Tanya? *confused* If not, I think Bella would be okay about it. *shrugs*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Woo hoo! Emmett's single! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Amazingly written! Edward is killing me with his kindess! Gah!

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh gawd, what if Tanya calls?! :O

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

*sigh* So sweet!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

Awww! Love the chemistry/camaraderie between Charlie and Edward. Awesome!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Awww, Charlie's here! Yay! LOL

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Really enjoying this flaming hot new story, Tufano! ;)

Can't wait to read more about McCarty, too!! *wink, wink* LOL!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Whoa! Poor Edward!

 

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Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loving how she and Alice are becoming such good friends so quickly! :D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awww, yay! Loving this story so much!

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Woo hoo! Whisked away by a fireman in a shiny Mustang! ;) 

LOL!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

What a gentleman! *fans self*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

tee hee hee, love them together!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh my goodness!! Poor Bella! :'(

So gutwrenching! Very glad Edward was there!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

What a gentleman! Wow! Love his support of Bella!

I know it's going to be tough, but I think it'll do Bella good to tell her story. 

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Ha ha ha ha! Very cute! Love their intimacy (the hand holding, arm on her shoulders, etc) and easy flirtation! So swoony!

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh my cuteness! Loved it! 

Too bad it got cut short, but hooray for Seth! LOL

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Hahahahaha! Sorry, Leah! *snickers* Go, Edward! ;)

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Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh my! Good thing Edward was there for her!

Why can't that be all the drama? ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

They make me giddy, LOL!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Woo hoo! Hot action and totally cute ending!

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Ha ha! That a fun little adventure at the dealership! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Carl and Essie, how cute! :D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Yay! Loved Edward and Carlisle's little chat! ;) tee hee

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Wow... just...

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Oh lord, what has Renee told Charlie?!

Sounds like Charlie wasn't upset she called at least. :) Maybe things aren't so bad between he and Bella after all?

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Ugh! Really adds to the list of vile, deceptive, and manipulative things that Renee has done. Bitch is going down, right? LOL

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Awww! They are so good together! *swoon*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Awwwwwww! Be still my heart!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Wow, that's a toughie! Poor Emmy Bear! :(

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

*squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

*gasp*

*squuuuuueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee*

Summary:

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Summary: After her parents are murdered, Bella and her brothers flee to the protection of their Godfather. When Bella discovers information that puts her life at risk, her only choice is to marry a man that she hates. Edward is a hard man, one that wants nothing to do with his reluctant bride. Can this pair ever learn to love each other...before their enemies destroy them? AH E/B


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25286 Read Count: 66591
[Report This] Published: 28 Jun 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2017
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awesome! Got some answers, which leads to a few more questions, LOL! Can't wait til next week! :D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Quick, Edward, run after her! LOL *wiggles eyebrows*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chaste kiss but with a burning desire for more...??? tee hee hee

Hope Edward didn't have one last fling! :(  

And glad there wasn't any bloodshed on their wedding day! :D

Great update!

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh my. Naughty boy! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

No way! I think Charlie was forced to be with the blonde. :(

And why would Bella have an arranged marriage, but her brothers have not married yet? 

 

:D

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awww! They fell asleep across from each other! 

If they fear for Bella's safety, and thus announcing the engagement so quickly, will the wedding be quick, too?



Author's Response:

A wedding will probably be quick....especially with what is going to happen at the announcement

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

LOL, "If she could stop pushing my buttons." tee hee hee

I bet much later in the story he can't wait for her to push his buttons! ;) Hot sex forecast! LOL

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ooh hoo! LOL! Date night!

Why didn't Bella smack Edward for laughing? Jealous hostess hussy! LOL! ;)

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh no! Poor Carlisle! Nice shot, Bella! 

I like how Edward catches himself calling Bella baby, LOL! ;)

Summary:

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To see the world; the damage, the truth, the pain, the beauty, you have to open your eyes. To be able to help others and be a better person, you have to open your eyes.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 31055 Read Count: 40478
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well thank God Edward knew what to do! Geez!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Isabella Biers??!! Oh! Woot woot! hee hee hee 

So happy you're back, bb!

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This slow unraveling is killing me, LOL! ;)

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

*gasp* Oh my! 

 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Aww! :(  *hugs*

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh my! LOL

Loved the story of Charlie cooling Edward off with the hose, LOL!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yay! :D

Star Crossed by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 418]
Summary: Past Featured Story

She was the leader of her people. 

He was a gruff, by-the-book star ship captain. 

An interstellar war, negotiations for a peace treaty gone wrong and a taboo relationship between two species. 

Captain Edward Cullen was in charge of the starship, Volvo. He, along with his crew, were given a mission to deliver Empress Nirabelle of the Cygnarian people to the nearby planet of Lapus, to negotiate a treaty between their two worlds. For over a millennia, they have been fighting a vicious battle. For what? They don’t even know. It’s ingrained in their minds and their history. 

The Empress is to meet with the Crown Prince of Lapus, Jakob. The Volvo is transporting her and her envoy, Maralice to the planet. There are strict rules in place for the Empress’s transport. She is to not have any contact with any males on the ship, per the cultural norms of Cygnarian society. The trip should take as little time as possible and if no headway has been made within one day of being in orbit, Captain Cullen is to transport the Empress from the planet’s surface. 

However, something goes terribly wrong on Lapus. One communication to the Volvo and a brief face-to-face conversation forever changes the future of the Empress and Captain Cullen. 

Will they survive this threat or are the Star Crossed lovers doomed before they even have a chance?

SC

Banner by Chandrakanta!!

 

Star Crossed

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Banner created by Mina Rivera! Thank you!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206436 Read Count: 82045
[Report This] Published: 04 Jul 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very exciting! Love the first chapter, hon! Great job!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMG, this was so awesome!! Of course Jakob is Klingon, LMAO!! So perfect!

Thank the stars that the Empress and Maralice were safely transported back to the Volvo! Whew!

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Yes! Loving this fic so much! <3 <3 <3 <3

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

*squee* Can't wait for the mating ceremony! 

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ahhhhh, Picard!!! *squee* Love him! ;)

Beautiful ceremony, hun! Great job!

 

Warp Speed ahead to the next chapter! *tee hee hee*

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Awesome chapter!

I bet the culprit is Norex!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Sometimes what you are looking for happens to be right in front of you. A little face-to-face confrontation with reality is said to be good for bringing everything in perspective. Can a near-death experience bring similar results for CSIs Bella and Edward? Rated M, AH, OOC, Canon pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6364 Read Count: 1937
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2014 Updated: 23 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Trust Me, Love Me

Awww! :D



Author's Response: Thank you for reading and leaving a review. :* Take care. Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

E.X.P.R.E.S.S.


Express is the hottest bar and lounge in Carlsbad, California. Kate only hires the hottest staff members to entice customers. While drama sometimes happens with customers, there is no drama that can compare with her employees. Rumors are constantly spread and there are no secrets with this group. You’re either accepted or not. While they seem like a dysfunctional group, they work great together. However, when relationships start to develop, things get a little rocky.


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4706 Read Count: 1321
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2014 Updated: 29 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome start! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Water! Water! I need some water over here! ;)

Wow, Jasper's not kidding. The sexual tension was HAWT in this chapter! Woo hoo!

Great job!

xo



Author's Response:

Haha, Thanks for reading and reviewing

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Awww! :D

Summary:

I wanted the truth...I needed to know the truth and he was going to help me. Mostly human, canon couples. Rated for language and adult themes.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70277 Read Count: 10397
[Report This] Published: 22 Aug 2014 Updated: 09 Jan 2015
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter-1: Prologue

Ha ha! Wow, aliens? Definitely different type of story in comparison to Over the Counter! Cool! 

How can body snatchers NOT be creepy? LOL

 



Author's Response:

Yeah...I decided to try a different track for a change. :P

Thanks for taking this ride with me. :D

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter-2: The Truth Junkie

Aww, poor Bella. So much for keeping your mind open to anything that could happen! Jerks! :(  Don't mind them, Bella. You keep your nose on the trail, gumshoe! 

:D



Author's Response:

I'm guessing you like it so far? ;)

Thanks for reviewing.

The next chapter should be up on next Friday.

Take care.

Ann

Summary:

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When an amazing opportunity finally comes up to have everything they want, will they take it? Can they remain professional for the sake of success? Celebrating never felt so good.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56096 Read Count: 22641
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2014 Updated: 28 Aug 2018
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~ Structured Framing

Wow!! *happy dance* They did it! LOL! And damn it was hot hot HOT!!

xo

Summary:

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Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192167
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

oooooooh yeah, getting to the good stuff *wiggles eyebrows* 

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh boy the big reveal! LOL! 

Can't remember her exact reaction the first time I read this, but she obviously doesn't leave! ;) LOL!

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Totally agree with your A/N at the end! :D

xo

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Really enjoying the expanded chapters! :D

Summary:

I had a simple task. I had to go meet her father and ask for his permission. But his daughter was not helping my situation ... at all. All human. Canon couples. Rated for language and adult situations

 


Categories: All Human, Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3431 Read Count: 1268
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :*

Thanks for reviewing.

Take care.

Ann

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Mister Fancy Pants and Busy Bee are like oil and water, they do not mix. They're competing for top academic spot at Forks HS when fate intervenes. Busy Bee has a secret and when it comes to light it changes everything. Bee's been doing it tough but this girl is no push over. Omniscient 3rd person (wtf that means). There's some humour in here too. AH, HEA, mostly canon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102709 Read Count: 39946
[Report This] Published: 09 Dec 2014 Updated: 23 Feb 2020
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - the talk

So candid, LOL! Great chapter. Very cute!

Sharp Left Turn by fyrebyrd89 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 295]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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In an instant your life can take a sharp left turn. Can you find the strength to lose it all and gain the unknown? Lives will be shattered, including your own.  

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 155558 Read Count: 62544
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2015 Updated: 26 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Slippery When Wet

Oh my god, they really did do it! *fans self* That was so hawt!

The morning after, with the boys, was so sweet! Bella kinda irked me with her rules crap, but I'm glad Edward took them in stride. He seems to have changed already - he's been a calmer person since he met Bella. I think even James noticed. Maybe Edward needs to take Bella out on a date, just the two of them? Surely Jasper and Alice would watch the boys, or even Charlie and Renee? LOL! Then they can go on family outings together! ;)

Loved it! This is definitely my "drop everything to read" story!

xo



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! And *sigh* Bella is a mom first and she has reasons in her mind where she thinks a relationship might not work. We have a few chapters full of family, but then we'll get to that and i hope you all can understand. of course, this Edward is determined and won't let it slide much. He'a persistent and goes after what he wants. Right now, I don't think he knows that he wants her for more than sex, but he will. Lots of family coming next. Thank you sooo much! See you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 11: No Passing

Oh my! *fans self* Bella and Edward are so hot! I love their interactions! 

Come on, Bella, Alec is interested in you! Geez, LOL!

Love how Edward is with Jake, too. So sweet!

xo



Author's Response:

LOL, good. And they're definitely gonna heat it up. He won't be backing down on this and really, how long can she last? We're moving into having these boys as regular chapter stars and i personally think they're adorable. See you Monday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Green Light

*hyperventilating*



Author's Response:

Lol we haven't even got tent to the main event. The pressure lol. Thanks! See you next time :)

Fyre



Author's Response:

Lol we haven't even got tent to the main event. The pressure lol. Thanks! See you next time :)

Fyre



Author's Response:

Lol we haven't even got tent to the main event. The pressure lol. Thanks! See you next time :)

Fyre



Author's Response:

Lol we haven't even got tent to the main event. The pressure lol. Thanks! See you next time :)

Fyre



Author's Response:

Lol we haven't even got tent to the main event. The pressure lol. Thanks! See you next time :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Under Construction

Gah! This is my favorite chapter so far! Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I guess you're a sucker for some real talk Bella and Edward? More to come! See you next chapter :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 12: One Way

Awww! Sooooo adorably cute! Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Seth is a doll and we'll get both boys next chapter! See you Friday :)

Fyre

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 7: No U Turn

*squee* Now that's an intro! LOL! ;)

At my name, the woman jumps up and faces me. Her hands cover her mouth as a gasp escapes her lips. "Jacob," she says in a breathy mumble.

I focus on her eyes and see tears gather. Eyes so like my Seth's that I'm caught in a sea of confusion. Those very same eyes roll back into her head before her body goes limp.

I lunge forward, catching her just before she crashes to the floor.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! I hope you continue to like what I have in store for you. Thank you for pimping my updates on here and stopping in to leave me a review also:)

Fyre

Renovations by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary:

Renovations

Banner by Mina! 

 

Isabella Swan, thirty-six, is reeling from her recent divorce from the man she thought she would be spending her forever. Her mind and heart shattered, Bella purchases a home, but in need of repair near Seattle. Bella hires two men, Edward and Garrett to complete the repairs of her new home. Will these men renovate Bella's new home or is more in store? AU/AH Full Summary inside.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Garrett
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Renovation Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28282 Read Count: 72876
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2015 Updated: 30 Aug 2015
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

tee hee hee

Summary:

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Shy, reserved Edward has a little too much Jack Daniels after finding his fiancée cheating on him. Waking up the next morning in a strange woman’s bed, he fights the pull he feels for her. Will he realize they're fated for each other, or will he only focus on their differences?

 

***So that you know up front, this story has been pulled after the first chapter. It still makes a lemony-filled one shot if you want to read it as-is. If you're interested in the published version, you can find me in the Amazon store under my real name, Lara Norman.***


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2369 Read Count: 49596
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2016 Updated: 23 Sep 2018
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

Hey, you know you can include the pictures inside the chapters here on TWCS? :) 



Author's Response: I have never been able to make the picture uploader work. I always get an error message. 😕

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

Hugs, honey. Great chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

Gah! Dayum! 



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2016 Title: Jack & Crush

Doorknob!! OMG! That was awesome! LMFAO!



Author's Response: Lol, that was my beta's idea, BeLynda. She's funny.

Summary:

Tough Little Boys

This is a birthday o/s for my bestie and partner in crime, ericastwilight, based on the Gary Allan song, Tough Little Boys.

Edward was a tough kid growing up, but that all changed when one little girl came into his life.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Family, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2737 Read Count: 1038
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2018 Updated: 11 Oct 2018
Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww! So sweet!