Reviews by Maria11
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

oh yeah!! the rescue... thank god bella didn't raped by aro!!  i hope they can get the rest of the cullens out too... i hope that felix and charlie bring it all down!!  yeah!! thanks for the update!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

not good and i hate mothers who put their female parts ahead of their children... i can see that i am going to hate renee....

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blessings

not cool he doesn't want renee he wants bella yuk  i am not really sure i am up for this so don't get upset if i flake out

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Promises

oh no i am so not ready for this.l.. my stomach is in my throat!!!  poor bells you better rescue her soon i don't know if i can take  this... if carlisle is with them where is ed is he one of them too?!?!?!?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother

oh boy renee you are in for it too!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

damn they don' t play do they?  poor bella

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

why is felix being so "nice" relatively speaking....

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

yuk they why didn't he save her i really really hate weak people

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

yuk you are kidding me yuk not him poor bella he is one sick mother f-er!!!

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

crazy is beyond crazy especially if edward is one of them  who is going to save her?

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

yeah she gets to see him get beat wonderful she is going to be scared shitless now and be over the top because he will be hurt

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

yuk!  as i said who is going to save her or is she ever going to be saved?  do you guys ever write anything normal??  haha

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

ok they think he is funny.... well i wouldn't really call him that at all... sick crazy, bastard, is more like the terms i would like to use...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

funny you are soo funny.... i loved your a/n!! haha situation is not funny though.. please please save bella.......

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

okay he better help her this time go charlie go charlie i don't know how you will do it but please hurry you are running out of time!!

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

ed, father, felix?  not sure but grab her quick!!! not you father..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

oh oh bella your going to be in toruble... well it could be worse he could be really f-ing them in front of everyone!!!

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

i hope he will see the flyer charlie has put out...

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

okay that just sucks ass... you just had to go do it..... sick perverted bastard. please say ed finds her don't rape her in any orifice please!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

damn don't get ed dead wow i made a rhyme!!  hahah  this is soo not good and ed has gotten himself in a world of hurt!

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

yeah go charlie go charlie loved your a/n about the review it is quite funny.. sick bastard... dont' kill ed don't kill bells....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

okay i told you not to hurt edward and look what you two did!!!  you need to be punished by the father!!! and ASAP!!  flogger or whip?!?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

who is it?!?! you are teasing us it can't be anyone good!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

okay but hurry up!  i knew the light was a big huge tease!!!!  AGH!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

thanks for the update... wow a lot went down i was worried about ed but i am glad he might be okay.  i hope charlie takes care of him.  poor bells!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119049 Read Count: 57009
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

ed you are HOT!! bella you need to get some of that at any cost!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.

wow can't believe that you let bella hear all that!! this is going to be really intersting.  I love i repeat I LOVE your edward!!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!

not cool ed... can't wait to see what good old charlie has to say..and ed don't worry i am sure you can get your girlfriend to scream!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.

bella has every right.. they want her to be an adult then turn around and judge her.. i would fight for ed too.. and damn he is f-ing HOT!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6 - Lalalalalala

ed you gotta know daddy's are bad when it comes to their girls they always think they know best.  even after 17 years of marriage my dad has "issues" and would say my husband has only seen me naked twice and that was for my two kids!! hahaha ... but he is being a real ass!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.

okay charilie is a total asshat!  i would like to call him more but i won't!! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?

okay you are a complete asshat charlie swan!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story

you go girl!!!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Ch10 - Its the best invention yet.

yeah!!  you are funny saying the end!!!  i really like your story!  as i said before i LOVE your edward!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.

yeah they can pop the cherry!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Ch12 - I... blow your mind?

you are too cool!  ed come on down here and come take a shower with me!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 - For the love of God!

charile you still are an asshat!! ed you are the best but is ed's parents going to go for that? 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - That's why I need you.

man don't give her amnesia..... she will forget everything and charlie will tell her bad things about ed and she won't know and then be back with charlie!  yuk! pleas say no

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.

Cool no amnesia!  thanks!  no ed is not bad he is the best!  again i LOVE your edward!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.

thanks i loved the story very much!! it was great!!! i can't wait to read the sequel

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514656
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 63: Edward DAY 21 & 22

poor bella but jasper is a good guy he thought you wanted to be there and wouldn't have done any of that if he had known.  they are right carlislie need to get in some kind of trouble for this.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 60: Rose's Retribution DAY 21

i still love your rose!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 59: Carlisle DAY 20 & 21

i love you rose!!!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

you are sooo stupid... i don't think i can live through a stupid bella 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A

again stupid bella.... get the hint that james is an as#hole?  hello i hat studpid woman.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B

what's edward doing there... she really needs to ditch james.... come on bella he is a big huge as$hole!!!! figure it out!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A

gee bella you need to suck it better you big loser!!!! jasper is sooo disappointed in you ... stupid heffer!  i am sure emmett and rose are going to get a go with her too,...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A

bella the stupid on how could you like anyone like james i hope you get your head out of ass when it comes to him,....you are sooo dumb

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: James - DAY 3 PART B

ok bella repeat after me james is a butthole, a cheater, a sicko, and you are STUPID!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4

bella repeat after me no james no james butthead butthead stop thinking of him you dumb butt

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5

that's right james you want victoria not bella say it for me again... you want victoria not bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6

no you didn't repeat it correctly ONLY victoria NOTbella.  you don't learn correctly james.  i hope carlislie gets pissed at you!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Bella - DAY 7

james is behind that i know it sick asshole he is training her to be a slave.  you are a stupid stupid girl!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A

ok just skip james and just give me edward... just edward!!!

ok i just have to laugh like i did when i was reading another d/s story  the button submit just makes me laught out loud hard!!  i push it and i submit..... hahahaaa ok i must "submit" my review

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Carlisle - DAY 7

carlislie you big stud!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7

yuk what a f$ck head he is.... doesn't carlislie know she didn't agree to this!  he seems like a smart man i guess he isn't.  i hope they find out what a butt hole jame is and soon.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B

edward you big stud!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A

ok i am getting a little preturb with this when are the going to realize she didn't agree to this and didn't talk to james about it.... so dumb if they are professionals why are they so dumb.  ok i now have  to read about dumb ass bella and dumb ass school i am so unhappy!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: James - DAY 8 PART A

come on carlislie figure it out you can do it use that dom brain for something other than dominating!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Edward - DAY 8 PART A

oh edward..... you and esme not what i want you and bella is want i want.  i guess i should submit so i can read some more.....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B

ok bella let me explain it to you again.  you do not want james you want edward... how did he make you feel tonght?  oh you say the best you have ever felt....hint hint..... i know what i am talking about believe me....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Edward - DAY8 PART B

hope he doesn't get in trouble for it. i love me some edward.  wake up bella you should love you some edward too

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Bella - DAY 11

hint hint bella not thinking of james don't need james keep saying it.  i hope they are smart enough to figure out james and help bella...  i need to submit so i can see what will happen...haha

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: James - DAY 11

you only want victoria you only want victoria..... repeat repeat

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11

oh jasper you are making my girl parts shiver...... i am so jealous of alice to have you and edward!!  agian edward repeat after me you must have bella and no one else  repeat.....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A

esme a little jealous... sorry he is not yours..... he will be bellas hahahaha!!  mike i hope edward catches you and does some damage!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A

ok reneee don't believe him try to find bella please expose this prick for what he is

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Bella - DAY 12 PART B

that's right bella you want edward not james!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Bella - Day 14

no bella you want edward repeat and repeat until you believe!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Bella DAY 16 PART A

jealousy  esme and him want edward and he knows edward likes her he did that on purpose... .poor bella... she can't be with james!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: James DAY 16 PART A

please let carlislie put aside his jealousy and see what james reallyis i really can't take his stupidity for very much longer.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Edward DAY 16 PART A

what a prick carlislie is he is sooo jealous he want edward to himself..  butt head i don't trust him at all... he won't figure out james...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Bella DAY 16 PART B

stupid bitch it was her turn to stand up and say and now she will be tortured and multilated i really don't think i am going to be able to finish WHY would you make her soooo stupid!!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45: Edward DAY 17 PART A

carlislie is the biggest prick and as in the interview he doesn't give a dam about bella he just wants edward for himself.  PRICK!!   and now edward has joind the stupid club along with bella and carlislie he is not president yet but gaining.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46: Bella DAY 17 PART B

i am soooo sick of your weak ass bella it makes me vomit in my throat.  how can someone have no courage or backbone to stick up for themselves at all it make me SICK!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 53: Edward DAY 20 PART B

ok thank for for someone who actually used there real head and not ther other head!!! dam thank god for emmett and rose.... they best people int he story. Not sure  trust carlislie that much that was a sudden turn around.  He is still jealous and wants edward!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 54: Carlisle DAY 20 PART A

ok yeah!! i take back the prick comment......maybe.  it was nice to get is POV to see he isn't as evil as we think he is.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 55: Bella DAY 20 PART B

ok i have been snarkie i admit but they deserved it....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C

karma james karma..........i love you rose i love you emmett!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 65: James DAY 22

knew it lauren you b$tch!!  james is out... watch out

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

thanks for the story it was a wild ride!

Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - The Wedding

well trouble in paradise... well at least you made him human he was alittle too perfect!!

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624954
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

not good this is going to be a long long ride!



Author's Response:

Be prepared things are going to get really bad before they get better. If the subject of abuse bothers you let me know. I have a summary for ch 3-10 if you decide you want to skip over them.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

really really sick!! gross that is his own daughter and sicko that is her brother GROSSS.... not sure i can hang on or not

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

sick sick sick sick i can't say anymore prison would be a good place for  both of them i though renee set something up so she wouldn't have to go back there... what happened to that? 



Author's Response:

You'll find out later in the story how Bella ended up back in Forks despite Renee's precautions

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

yuk!!!  tell me this part is over soon!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

sick and carlisle is in on it tooo...... not cool i can't hope edward is good there is no nope for that.  renee was wrong when she hoped that esme raised her boys right.... DEAD WRONG



Author's Response:

Remember there will be a happy ending for Bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

SICK SICK people!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes they are

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

excuse me while i go throw up!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

yeah right edward you think you are the white night you are a bastard just like the rest of them

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

i know you want us to like him but he is a sick F*ck@r like th rest of them.... sick sick sick!!!



Author's Response:

No you don't have to like him.  There really isn't anything likeable about him at this point. Right now he's just the lesser of evils.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

you still suck edward  you maybe hot but i would tell you where to stick it no matter how scared i would be

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

i still don't like him.... i hope you get him to get his head out of his ass!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

yuk i think i am going to throw up again..... this is really really sick and i am sick because i want to see what is going to happen.  i hate to see bella crushed so much i hope something good will happen to her... doesn't look good.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

you are still a huge ass wipe edward!! duh.  you can't make someone love you!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

carlislie is a sick sick SOB.... edward better find out some how.  thought she would be semi safe but wrong.... SICK SICK SICK!!!!! and edward you are still a really really dumbass!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

oh crap what else can happen to her.... it makes me sooo sad and upset.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

ok i think em sees the light but why don't they just break away from carlislie is edward gong to find out what carlislie has planned for bella... please please how much more can she take?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

ok i see some light but not much... i hope edward again gets his head out of his ass!!!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

hello edward you dumb butt..... stupid stupid even a blind man can see!