Reviews by aabc
Summary:

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Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I am so glad you had her parents arrive in time.  I'm also glad you no one was seriously injured.  I hope they can get a plan together to trap that SOB.  Great chapter, thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was so wonderful and romantic... but then to leave us with that kind of a cliff hanger!  AHHHH... Please say you won't wait too long to update... please?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I guess James wasn't really thinking or paying much attention if he confused little 5 foot 4 Bella with 6 foot 2 Edward!  It was terrific!  I'm so glad he is out of their lives... will they be involved with the trial?  Will B&E's start cause a problem?  I can't wait to see the rest of the story play out.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Welcome back!  I had to reread the entire story. The powerful Aro is not to smart.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995704
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 73

Another awesome chapter... you alway's pack so much into each one.  So Edward is done traveling for a while, Bella having massive mood swings (normal in pregnancy), Esma and Carlisle reaffirmed their devotion and outed themselves to the family.  The new complex is almost done and the babies will arrive in the next chapter!  WOW!

I can't wait.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

What and intense chapter... wow. I love how B let ... everyone have it!  Perfectly.  Just the right amount of anger.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76

I'm sorry you had such a difficult time with this chapter...  I did enjoy it.  I'm glad that Bella and Alice made up, although I am still angry at Alice for being so vinditive toward Bella.  She said some pretty nasty things about Bella and to Bella that were uncalled for.  Its one thing to be upset with a friend its another to be disloyal.  I hope Jasper has something to say behind the scene (we could just hear about it).  She was certainly acting like a spoiled teenager.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review honey and we will see jazz and Ali in an outtake - promise

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Great Job with this chapter!  Do exciting... I'm glad no one died.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Wow... lots to process with this chapter.  Loved it.  I can see E & B's relationship maturing.  Thanks for the update.  I would love to see the photos.



Author's Response:

thank you  - pics up soon

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Great chapter... and no I'm not going to flame you.  I am confused as to why Edward was so mad... it's not like Bella held onto the "secret" for weeks, it was just a day, Alice held onto it for weeks or even months.  I just think the punishment for B's crime was overly cruel, especially seeing as I'm sure we haven't seen the end of it yet.



Author's Response:

Darling we all know that Edward is a bit of a drama queen - but he is also so on edge about Bella's safety that he expects full disclosure from her. He doesn't want her to keep things from him.

thanks for the great review

Reviewer: aabc Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

What prosecutor in their right mind would bring charges against Bella for "culpable homicide" after a home invasion!  I hope it doesn't come to that and the they see it for what it is, a distraught father grieving over the loss of his son (he really needs to get into counceling for denial). 

I love your long chapters!  You pack so much into them. I can't wait to see how Ali and Jazz do.



Author's Response:

and just for asking about J & A - this is for you - thanks so much for reviewing!!

 

 

PEOPLE LIKE US - OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE - CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

"Guys, I've got to go - Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!"

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

"So... you talk about the size of my schlong?"  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, "Well, it's quite impressive..." she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  "Can we talk? I mean really talk; I've missed you Tink..."

Alice smiled through her tears. "I've missed you too Jazzy...."

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper's travelling for work and Alice's part time job as Edward's PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice's training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper's father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper's mother that they were his dead sister's kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn't believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper's generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother's name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn't ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him... FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

"Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can't reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let's get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother..." Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

"Never - NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!"  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  "Jazzy, you are scaring me..." 

This wild man wasn't her Jasper...

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper's fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

"Alice... sweet Jesus, I'm sorry... I didn't mean to scare you... Ali..."  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper's face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

"Come to me..."  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice's gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

"Ali..." he said in a half pleading, half warning.

"No.  You've spoken and now it is my turn..." Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper's head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, "Maybe that'll knock some sense into your thick skull!"  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

"We can get to that later, but first let's please resolve this ‘thing' once and for all!"  She said with determination.

"Gladly, Darlin'."

"Okay, I'm going first.  I need to tell you why I didn't tell you about... what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?"

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

"I promise."

Alice took a deep breath, "I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your... well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing... Jasper... you promised..." Alice broke off as she watched Jasper's eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing... BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice's tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, "I'm okay, Ali, I promise.  I won't freak out on you again."

Alice nodded slowly, "He apologized to me later - your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that... some girls just have an ‘air' about them..."

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. "I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn't deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups'.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us... He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us..." Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn't take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. "Never, never, never..." He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

"Jazz..."

"No - it's my turn now... never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you... Fuck!  It's too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was... forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her - she didn't have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn't help you last time, Darlin'.  I wasn't able to stop that animal putting his hands on you... but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again."

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

"I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty... please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don't ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can't stand it."  Jasper whispered as they held each other's faces and gazed with longing into each other's eyes.

"I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything... my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets."

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn't take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  "Can I get my clothes back?"

Jasper smiled against her lips, "yeah, especially the underwear..."

Alice giggled, "can I get my car back?"

Jasper shook his head, "sorry, you will be driven around for a while..."

Alice groaned, "but I can see my Bestie?"

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice's eyes. "Mary Alice..." He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that... now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

"Hmmm... take me upstairs Jazz... I've missed you..." Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper's bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

"Alice?"

"Yeah?"

"Supervised visits only..."  Jasper kissed her forehead.

"I know - but that's only for now..." Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale....

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

So much!  What a roller coaster.  I'm glad the murder charge didn't linger long.  I love Bella's temper, it almost funny.  Edward put up with it to... hes adjusting better to them being a couple as well as D/s.  Thanks for the long chapter, the consistent updates and the recs.



Author's Response:

yeah the girl's got spirit! thanks for the review

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Wow a roller coaster of emotion.  I thing Bella is getting her head straight.  Loved the chapter, thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

thank you so much 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Another great chapter... there is always so much to appreciate.  I hate when Bella is being punished, but she is doing so much better at accepting it.  I'm glad to see her growing in the relationship. 

Thanks for the long chapters... I love having a lazy morning reading... it makes my day.



Author's Response:

that's what weekends are for - reading!  thanks for the review and comments



Author's Response:

that's what weekends are for - reading!  thanks for the review and comments

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Wow... I just love the long chapter.  Your's is alway my favorite Saturday morning read.  (Then I have to do housework... drag).

Thanks for the rollercoaster that is Bella again... the seen with Esme was a hoot.  I'm so glad she was quick to tell Edward.

As always I look forward to more of ther escapades.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Thanks for warning us that you going to take a break... some authors don't.  Thank you for the update.  I don't like it when these two are separated... something bad always happens!

Have a safe and happy Holiday Season.  Merry Christmas!



Author's Response:

hey there. thanks for the review, but I think that this trip will be good for both of them.  Don't worry, I'll look after our girl.  the outtake will be up in the week xoxo

Merry Christmas and a wonderful new year to you and yours.

xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

Another great but frustrating chapter!  I really would like B&E to have some good times together... but B just isn't cooperating!

I loved her time with Charlie et al... but I was REALLY hoping for a romantic and happy reunion.  I think you need to "talk" to that girl.

Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

I TOLD Miss Bella that she had better step up - that girl never listens (I personally think that she thinks that Edward will just let her get away with stuff) but she has found out (the hard way) that playtime is over and there won't be any more freebies.  I think that you will be happy with the next chapter...

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

I love the long chapters!  So much to digest... a wonderful time at the awards ceremony, and she said yes!!!! Wonderful... love the story even when I think Edward is being a little to strick on Bella.  Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

glad you liked it. Will update soon xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

I wouldn't mind a short outtake of what Edward went through to m ake it to Bella's show, including the entrance... but otherwise everything was wonderful... as usual.

Thanks for the update... love it all.



Author's Response:

that's a great idea! thanks for the review

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60

You sure know how to pack a lot into your chapters.  I don't know where to begin... I laughed, I giggled, I cried, I squealed, I awwwed and I was exasperated.  As always I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

OH MY GOD, SO DID I BUT THAT WAS ON MONDAY MORNING, WHEN I REALISED THAT MY BOSS HAD TO CLIMB OVER A WALL, BREAK INTO OUR BUILDING AND CUT THE WIRES TO OUR MAGLOC DOOR TO LET US IN - AND THEN CAME THE OTHER PART - WHEN I REALISED THAT MY STICKY THINGY WAS DEAD - AND YEAH THEN I GOT MY SECOND WIND AND STARTED WRITING...

 

So, aabc, I know how you feel. Thanks so much for your review and your wonderful comments and encouragement.

xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

These two have come a log way.  I was thinking, as I read this weeks chapter, about how these two met 50 odd chapters ago.  How reserve and shy Bella is/was and how uptight Edward was.  What growth... I love this story and pounce on it when the alert arrives.  Thank you for all your hard work (and your beta's).



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review and your encouraging comments xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Spectacular as usual.  You always put so much into each chapter, although I wish you would have included there "reconnection" in this chapter.

I love that Bella has grown but not completely, she still needs to adjust to being a parent, not always an easy adjustment.

Thanks so much for a wonderful story, I almost hate to ask, but do you know how many more chapters you have left?  Don't hesitate to tell me "you know know yet" or your "not telling".

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

Now how did she manage that?  I can't wait to find out... Great chapter, they enjoyed each other so much... a much better honeymoon.

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

hey sweets - think DIABOLICAL!!!

xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

That was a lot to read!  Wow!  You have some tenacity!  So much to think about... Renee, I'm so glad Bella punched her clock!

I'm very curious to know what was in the letter from Phil.   I'm so proud of your Edward for taking such good care of Bella... she is still so fragile but is getting stronger and stronger. 

Again thanks for this story... I truly can hardly wait to read it when I get the alert.  I'm glad you posted a bit early this week as I wouldn't have had time to read it tomorrow (Saturday).

I look forward to the continuing story!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

I just loved every word!  Bean the wedding... the practicing, wonderful!  I especially loved how Bella took charge of things and got everything back on tract.  Alice usually has those mad skills and I think B's growing strengths shined bright in this chapter.  Thanks as always for your consistant and lovely long chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and encouraging words!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

I tried to review last night but it failed.  I'll try again.

Loved the chapter... can't wait for the wedding!!!!

I do have one question/concern (and it is again my usual concern).  I am wondering why, if Bella did so well at the play party why Edward did not think it was a special enough occasion to invite her to their bed afterwards?  I realize that Bella didn't think much about it ... but she had been hopeful he would... so my question is why didn't he?  He had said he was "very proud" of her why wouldn't she be rewarded?  I cried a little when he didn't.

I case you can't tell, I'm very invested in this story.



Author's Response:

Hi there aabc,

thanks for reading and reviewing and for your great comments. Edward didn't because quite frankly, he didn't go to bed straight away and when he did she was sleeping and he didn't want to desturb her!  It was just that silly and thoughtless!  And Bella does bring it up at some stage and he will tell he that he didn't think that she would even notice his absence, proving once again that somtimes, guys just don't think!!

 

Love,

Michele

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

OMG you should have given a tissue warning!  I'm crying my eyes out... The beautiful wedding and beautiful wedding night then Edward was just being a idiot (I still don't understand what he was thinking... he flogs her for goodness sake and thinks nothing of it... and he's worried about a couple bruises and a bite mark... I'm confused.

As for the rest, I can't even talk about it. I thank you so much for not leaving us handing too much... when is the next update?  Next week or 2 weeks?



Author's Response:

aaaw honey, I brought you to tears?  sorry. and EXACTLY MY POINT about Edward - I mean seriously he is so freaking emo sometimes!!  he is such a flipping drama queen, and he is not a good patient (just warning you)!  And yes my greedy sweet reader update next week - this was a bonus!

 

thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Well... that was a roller coaster of emotions!  Excellent chapter and again they are learning and growing so much!  I love that Edward read her journal and smartened up... Bella is such a strong person, I hope Edward finds a way to reward her (not with gifts) for her patience and love.  Perhaps a 2nd honeymoon as soon as he's able, to make up for the disasterous first one.

I look forward to your next update (2 weeks).  Thanks!



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your comments and review - I think that he owes her, don't you?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

OMG another cliff hanger!  You are evil!  ;-)

You put so much in each chapter it is hard to comment on one thing.  I am happy that Edward got a clean bill of health but am concerned with Bella's attitude of late. So... 2 weeks can't come fast enough.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review darling oxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

The waiting room for Alice was a hoot!  OMG I can't believe Carlisle belted Jasper!  The retreat was informative, I'm glad Edward stood up for Bella... Loved the chapter!  A LOT!  Only 5 more chapters... I've been following this story for so long, I don't know what I'm going to do without it?  Thanks so much for all your hard work. 



Author's Response:

don't let the remaining number of chapters worry you - it'll finish when it finishes, right?  Thanks so much for your review :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2011 Title: PEOPLE LIKE US

You are amazing... if it's not one thing... it's another!  This poor family is getting it from all sides...

Not sure what to think. I'm afraid I can quite comprehend Bella's dramatic moods swings, it didn't happen to me; although I cried easier than normal and was very randy.  LOL 

Thanks so much for the update, I'm afraid I have no ideas for Carlisle and Esme.  I've been married for a very long time (more than 20 years), and I have never spoken to my husband or had him speak to me like these two are going at it... just amazing. 

I can't wait to see how this works out. 



Author's Response:

You are right, nothing is normal about this lot!  I had some extreme emotional mood swings and some funny moments during my pregancies. thanks for the review and the comments.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

That was an EPIC chapter!  You always give us so much!  I'm glad most things are resolved and maybe, just maybe they can have a little smutty peace for a change. LOL

I so look forward to your chapters, they keep me entertained for hours!  As always I look forward to the next installment.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Pregnancy hormones!  They are fabulous!

I'm excited about the new property!  I can see more temper tantums in their future... especially when it come to dealing with contractors. LOL

Thanks for much for the update, I can wait to see what you have in store for them next.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review and comments

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

I am enjoying "Her Master's Jewel" as well.  Its just getting started but very well done so far.

As always I love how B&E love each other and support each other.  I love how Bella told off those bitches, I would have loved it to go on longer just for the satisfaction of hearing her tell them off (it would have been over kill... I know).  I hope Angela can somehow redeem herself and become strong without those idiots.

I teared up a bit when Edward left for LA.  This separation will be difficult for both of them.  I just hope nothing does happen during this time, but I am worried. 

Thanks so much for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

Ah... to dream of homes like these! 

Thanks for this chapter, you never disappoint.  I hope this new arrangement brings them closer (and I'm sure it will as you say the end is near). I would love to see at least one more (successful) trip into the playroom before you hit the complete button if you so see fit.

I will certainly miss this story as I've followed it from the first chapter.  You are a wonderful writer and weave such a addicting story.



Author's Response:

You are right, I had such fun looking for homes on the Net. It was a lot of hard work but I enjoyed it.  Thank you for being there from the start and I will make sure that B & E take a trip into their new playroom for sure!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Oh dear trouble on the horizon!  I don't like it at all, I hope it isn't too angsty they certainly don't need that with 2 kids and 1 on the way.  I don't think Bella can take that kind of stress... she has be doing so well.  I hope Edward didn't do something really stupid.  Let that skank get between them.

I hope when he's home he can relax and reconnect with Bella very well... it will help.  What happened to the family traveling with him?  This does not bode well. 

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

They are going to get through this and you know that Bella is much stronger than she seems to be.

thanks so much for the review xoxo

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Another awesome chapter!  I must admit I was worried they would separate (not legally) and he would run off and Irena would console him... etc.  I wasn't worried that he would cheat... that is not his style as a man or a dom.

As always I look forward to more.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 80

Another excellent chapter, so many ups and downs.

I sense the story winding down... I don't know what I'll do without this to read every other Sunday!  You did say you were doing a sequel... perhaps I will live.  Thanks so much for all your hard work.

BTW, I also had a quick 2nd child.... I was in the hospital at 7:15 pm and my daughter was born at 10:06 pm.

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 84783
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Outtake 3: Getting On with Our Lives

I thank you so much for all your hard work on this story... I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Outtake 2: Gettin' Our Honeymoon On

Wonderful way to spend a honeymoon! I will surely miss these two love birds.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you!  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I love this story!  All the characters are so wonderfully real.  Thanks for updating.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I am sorry you've been having trouble with your creative juices... but please know that I really enjoy this story and want to see what you have planned for your E&B.

HOT chapter... more please. Oh and I hope have hot sex in his store, doesn't bite them in the butt later.



Author's Response:

Hehe  Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Excellent  Chapter!  I love the family interaction!  I'm worried about why the police called.  I hope you don't make us to long. 

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I  always like teasers! 

Welcome back!  I've missed this story!  Great chapter getting back into it was very easy.  Please update again asap.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  :) I don't have anything more written yet, unfortunately.  *sigh*  lol

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

That was just a perfect wedding for them... I can't wait for the honeymoon.

Of course I'm interested!  I've been following this story for a year and a half! 



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thank you very much!  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Very fitting honeymoon for these two love birds... I'll be sorry for the story to end but I enjoyed it very much!  I look forward to the epilogue.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Epilogue

A lovely end to a wonderful story, thank you so much for all your hard work and creativity.  I will miss your updates (after the outtakes).



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  :)  I'll have a new story soon!  :D

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Outtake 1: Getting Back to Normal

Well... that was just HOT!  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

LOL  Thank you.  :D

Summary:

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Bella Swan gets a job as a personal assistant to the "The Sexiest Man Alive" Edward Masen while attending USC.  Sparks fly between her much older boss and her, but they soon find that temptation is too hard to fight.

 

It's a coming of age story with Bella, who learns to embrace herself as well as the life she's found herself thrown into, and a little Britward on the side.

 

*WARNING:  Rated NC-17 for language, lemons, and adult sit.*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 298638 Read Count: 143766
[Report This] Published: 15 Mar 2010 Updated: 15 Dec 2010
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

OMG!!! I'm stunned!  I wasn't expect this.... I hope you don't leave us hanging for too long.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I'm so glad that B has no brain damage (so far), and that she hasn't lost her sense of humor.  I hope that the rest of her injuries heal well.  Thanks for not leaving us hanging too long.  Loved the chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

I've been wanting to read this story for ages. I love it.  I don't understand... yet... why Edward "broke it off".  I guess it has something to do with him not wanting her to fell obligated to not take the money...  Hopefully you'll update soon, so that I understand a little better.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Emment you just have to love him... and Alice... she is so sneeky.  Love the fic!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76139
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I discovered your ff today... I'm hooked, can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you! (:

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: TPOV

Hmm... I think I understand where she's coming from... but in their kind of relationship it is not up to her to set things up.  I'm not surprised Edward was so angry.  I look forward to more.  Thanks for the update.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254843
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 01 May 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 89

The verbal sparring is fun. 

Should we remember that she is gounded?  Or did we miss something... like that sigh... is that why?

I loved all the light hearted interaction and some of the adults behaving inappropriately... making the younguns uncomforatable. 

I'm glad Bella has learned some new things about herself trying to help Rose.  As always... I want more as soon as I've read the current chapter.



Author's Response:

Famles --lol--- they are the best people to get together with, they laugh, joke and poke fun at eachother but they are also the voice of reason and your safty net too...and what would a get together with a bunch of women be without the subject turning to sex--lol--especially when there is alochol involved --- OMG -- Give two women a bottle of wine and LORD only knows what's going to come out of their mouth...lol....

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I had to think about what he would be shocked about... I wonder if he will be angry that she didn't ask him first?  ... Hmmm I can't wait to find out.

I'm glad Dougie didn't get in too much trouble, and just ewww that he would have to take part in a sceen where he doesn't like the "partner".



Author's Response:

Hmmm...have you ever had a cousin who you didn't like but your mom made you play with anyway?? LOL ... think of it like that...LOL ... besides dougie likes to play with eleazar so in order to do that, he has to put up with Tanya too...lol...

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84

Well... I think it finally sunk into my brain the lesson he was trying to convey to Bella.  Sorry I was so dense.  I did say I trusted you to make it clear to me eventually.

I appreciate him having to prepare himself to do what he needed to do, and didn't enjoy it at all.  I also appreciate the insight Emmett gave to him about new relationships as well.  They are still getting to know each other as it is still a fairly new but intense relationship. 

As always I'm ready for the next chapter as soon as I'm done with the current one.  Sorry I needy too.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

It surprising how well Edward managed to fit into the "old group", I'm glad.  I hope the trip won't be so stressful... I want to know what the task is going to be,  I always want more info so her June limits would be nice.  Can't wait for the OT and next week.  Thanks for being so consistant.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Very hot chapter, I like that they are a couple as well as D/s.  I hope that James gets his due in your story.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm having a lot of fun writing this story, I'm glad that others seem to like it.

Thanks for leaving a comment

Here's a teaser for you ...lml

“Um Edward, do you know the answer to my question?” He chuckled

 

“What question was that Bella?” Damn he was going to make me ask. I glanced at the women in my car, their attention was completely on me

 

“Um, you know about what time” Nothing on the other end

 

“Edward you still there?”

 

“Yes, I’m here it’s almost one o’clock” Shit he was really going to make me say it.

 

 “I could just guess.”

 

“You could, but don’t guess wrong” I took a deep breath and just asked.

 

“Edward, what time did we go to sleep last night?” I looked to Carol, she had a shocked look on her face as she asked in a hushed whisper.

 

“Your sleeping with him?” Peggy on the other hand was not as quiet.

 

“I knew you were getting laid, that’s why you been so happy lately”

 

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I LOVED E's POV!  I really could understand his pain.  Thanks for being so consistent with your updates.



Author's Response:

Your welcome and whenever my husband gets upset  because of my writing I say .."But honey, these women are depending on me" ...lol ...Thanks for reading a nad leaving a comment, I have a  teaser for you...lml

Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”

 

“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.

 

“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”

 

“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Great chapter, funny, and a enlightening.  Bella is not in a great place in her head yet (I'm sure for good reason).  I look forward to the mark being gone.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Bella is looking forward to the ink being gone also....for the most part she is rational, but the panic over took her when she went looking for Edward...and he wasn't there...lml

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69

Man can she ever think just a moment longer before she speaks... but I suppose just like most independant women it's difficult to adjust to relinqishing your plans to another person. 

I hope that Edward isn't too hard on her... he's going to be having fun, so why shouldn't she?  I'm sure you'll enlighten me.... please.

Reviewer: aabc Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

The rock think is cool! I'd never heard of it before.  I truly think both the sisters are at fault, but Leah has certainly been avoiding Bella... on purpose... so she could get really mad I think.

Edward is being really supportive, I got to hand it to him.  It's all new to him, this girlfriend thing.

Thanks for the update, can't wait for more Forks to see what they all get upto.

 



Author's Response:

Oh .. Forks will have alot of things happening ...lol...

Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave me a comment ....I have this weeks teaser for you...lml

Leah went into the bathroom while Bella came around the corner into the kitchen. Our eyes met immediately as a warm smile engulfed her face. It was clear she had been crying and it took everything I had in me to remain in the chair and not run to comfort her. Sue looked up as she started putting food on the table then went over to hug Bella just as I wanted to. Bella nodded at whatever Sue was saying then left her go so she could say hello to her father.

 

“Hi daddy” Bella said wrapping her arms around him from the back before leaning down to kiss his cheek.

 

Charlie’s hand gripped her forearm then patted it in a fatherly manner. “Hi’a Bells. How are you?”

 

“I’m good…” Bella gazed at me while adding “…I guess you got to met Edward?”

 

“Yes…no thanks to you. Paul introduced us” Bella glared at Jacob mouthing ‘Paul’, Jacob held his hands up in surrender “You don’t want to know”

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

I think "Jimmy" has another honey he's supporting, close to where Bella lives and it could be that person that has been doing the small things that have their alarm bells up.

I'd like to think that Bella would trust Charlie, but I can see that she doesn't want him to know the details of her old life and new.  She need to figure out a way to keep him up to date with out embarrassing both of them

Great chapter!  I must admit I missed you last week... a lot!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

I don't quite understand what the Claire thing was about, but I'm sure it will be explained later.

That scene was ... intense!  The rest of the family interaction was fun. The desciption of poor Rose's pregnancy issues was a hoot.  I'm sure we'll hear about what's happening at the club eventually.... I hope.

Thanks for the update you made my weekend.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 68

Great chapter... truly loved the love showing between these two.  I thought it was bloodly brilliant how Bella handled Edward with the spider and the fly thing. 

Yes I watched the MTV awards and agree completely with you... RobP cleans up so wonderfully (fans self).  I didn't care for the botched joke and I would have liked a better look at the "kiss".  The trailer was awesome but as much as I can wait for the movie, I don't want to "wish" away the summer.



Author's Response:

I thought Bella did good too, she got her point across without any confrontation...and Edward listened..Ahhhh....I want an Edward too....lol

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77

Amazing!  Love the connection between all of them.  I'm glad Bella was able to take Emmett. It was kinda funny.

I am in no hurry for you to finish this fic, so do as many chapters as you want... I love this story!

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Of course I'm interesting in a Charlie OT!  I also what to know whats in all the emails and texts, a summary would do.

Karen/Heather was not old enough to make that choice, so I don't care if she consented or not.  Victoria... perhaps she will kill him for it. 

I hope the heck Bella does decide to tell Hawk and get that DNA sample, but what about Jake?  Will he get into trouble for his role?  I'm sure Bella will need some time to wrap her head around her inaction.

Great chapter!  I must admit I am anxious for their regular... it's fells like it's been a long time.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

Things are going to a head... I can't wait to see how they nail all of them!  I hope they can keep Bella safe (especially from herself).  I don't like to speculate on your questions, you are way more creative then my puny imagination!

Excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you for reading and leavinga a comment..louise

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85

Well... that explains a lot!  So is it really the money/power that Caius is interested in or does he want to take down Aro etc? Or is there more to learn.

The conversation with B&E was enlightening.  I also think that it has brought them even closer in their relationship.  I look forward to seeing what Edward has in mind for his nâhtötse, I'm sure it will prove instructive.

Thanks for the update, I was craving one.



Author's Response:

It always comes down to money (well usually)...thanks for reading, the next chapter will answer your questions about what Edward has in mind and it will also show a little more of what happens at the club ...it should be interesting ..lol... thanks for reading ....louise

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 86

Another amazing chapter... absolutely brilliant!  The way you got Bella to deal with her fear of the cane was amazing.  It is so hard to believe that they have only been together for a couple of months... I have  been reading this story for much longer than that (more than a year!).   Edward is so in tune with her and her with him.

I didn't think Aro had much of a sense of humor.... but that was sweet and funny at the same time. 

I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 88

That was an incredible chapter... they show each other such love ... and compassion.  They are really starting to understand the connection they have for each other.  Well done!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 90

I was really worried for a minute... it can't be a coincidence that the car broke down. I am so happy she was able to wait for Edward with someone that she knew and trusted. 

I hope that Bella takes this seriously... especially with everyone telling it the right thing to do.  She should not be so selfish to put herself in danger. 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 May 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91

Amazing... He was so cute about the fruity peebles.  Then putting his foot down about the "G" word... I hope Bella doesn't fight him (them) too much.

As for the ring... how exciting! 

Where are Jessica and Mike?  Do James and /or Karen have something to do with there dissapearance?  So many questions; I can't wait for answers!

Happy Mother's Day!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 May 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 92

I didn't think they really gave her a chance to say if she would comply or not.    I can understand why all the men are freaking out but did they give her a minute? Nope! 

As for being grounded, I can only hope they can keep her safe until the nuts make a mistake and they can find them.

I'm glad that she was finally able to admit to Edward and herself what happened to her.  It's a breakthrough.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

I'm so glad we got to the bottom of how they were both feeling.  They are on the same page whether they like it or not.  I just hope they can keep her safe. 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 94

You never disappoint!  Loved this chapter.  Each of them trying to come to terms with a threatening unknown.  Each trying to reassure the other, and trying to take the blame.  I'm still waiting for the other shoe to drop... not that I'm in any hurry for this story to be over... in fact I don't know what I'm going to do when it is; I've been following it since the beginning.

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

I really think Bella shouyld win... just because Edward can be a cocky SOB sometimes.  I would be good for her self esteem as well. 

Another great chapter, Emmett was insightful, perhaps that little bit of advise from someone outside can help them come up with a plan.  I hope so.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

I found Alice annoying... and spoiled.  She has a very high opinion of herself to think that she has a right to speak to Edward like that... she should really know better.

I think Leah is finally warming up to Edward.  I hope good times are ahead with the 2 couples.

I look forward to more as soon as you can.



Author's Response:

Edward is her brother ...you know how you say things to family you would never say to anyone else .... what's the saying "You only hurt the ones you love" yeah something like that ... and yes Leah has proof positive Bella has no bruises,,,she's much happier now ....

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

Another great chapter.  I understand about being the product of your upbringing, but it is possible to see the error of your ways and become a normal adult and not give in to being a spoiled princess.

I can't wait to see what going on with that new women and what Edward has planned for his pet in the playroom next.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

So much to think about! 

I guess I don't blame Emmett for wanting to be with Rose while she goes through all that, but I also see the shelters point.

I am facinated by the vans... there has to be something there.

As for their play, it appears that they both enjoyed themselves thoroughly but boy it seems awfully harsh. 

As for the double penetration confusion... perhaps James drugged her with ruffies ... doesn't it make you forget what happens?

Sequel... yes please!  But, will we ever get to the final showdown with James and Edward during this story or the next?

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

I think its Rose, or some Domme from the club that Bella knows well. 

Another great chapter!  I just love when these to talk to each other ... about anything.  I just hope her OCB doesn't blow up in her face (pun intended).

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Damn!  I wanted Bella to win that little contest.  He really does have a lot of control.

I look forward to the spanking that she gets... if for nothing else to see how she likes it.

Glad you are back and settled again.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 102: Chapter 102

What a lovely surprise... An update, I am always so happy when they come.

That James character worries me... He is evil and deranged!  What the heck is he trying to prove?!

I look forward to party night and can't wait to hear the "conditions".

Happy new year to you too.  As always I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

I love this story, I'm not ready for it to be over.

I am very aprehensive about what the climax will be - but bring it on.



Author's Response:

I'm apprehensive myself about the ending, but I'll do my best...

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 107

I've missed you!  I loved this chapter ... So much info.  Update when you can.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 108: Chapter 108

I think he will practice his alphabet on her until she talks...  I've no idea what she said to Pappy.

Please update again soon(er).

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 109: Chapter 109

She is in a very strange state of mind this chapter, not sure I understand where she is coming from, but perhaps she is having a premonition on what's coming.

Almost like she is preparing to be separated from Edward or that she will need to leave him or something.... I can't put my finger in it.  As always I look forward to more as soon as you can. 

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 110: Chapter 110

Hmmm, that is a conundrum.... I'm sure that will end up being the secret of coverup behind a lot of what's been happening.  I can't wait for the mystery(s) to come out, althought I'm not looking forward to the story to end.

i am looking forward to finding out what's going on, but I hope that they do have at least one more "normal" before you push the complete button.

Lonesome Hearts by damsell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2091]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lonesome 

 

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New banner by Julie C.

 

Eighteen year old Bella Swan has moved to the small Western town of Spoons Valley to meet up with her older brother, Emmet, after their parents' deaths.  She always figured that the Wild West that she read about would be like the descriptions in Harper's Weekly, but she didn't realize just how wild and dangerous things would get once she arrived.

 

AH.  Canon Couples.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Historical, Humor, Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 90 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131753 Read Count: 282980
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Nov 2010
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Lovely story, very enjoyable.  The pace is perfect and the characters come alive.  I look forward to your next update. Thanks!

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Excellent chapter... l think I know why it was OK or A to marry Em but not OK to marry J.  I'll keep it to myself to see if I'm correct later.  Love the fic.  I hope you get your RL stuff complete to your satifaction.  I look forward to your updates.  I look at your forum but I'm not sure what to do with it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183776
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Viscosity

Excellent chapter... I wanted to kill Caius myself... I would have strangled him.  The conversation with Jack was a riot!  Thanks for the update, but I'm not sure I ready for the epilogue.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Christmas Cullen Style

Wonderful chapter... Em is being very selfish!  Love the family get together.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Now, That's A Party!

I think Eddie has some explaining to do... and I'm very curious about what is in the goody bag.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - A Shot of Harsh Reality Kills a Fairytale Buzz Every Time

Wow... reality check for Edward!  Bella & Esme rock putting him in his place.  I've gotta hand it to Edward he took it like a man.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Christmas Scheming

Ohhh.... sorry about your arm!  I hope it feels better soon... keep it elevated and iced.

This chapterwas ...HOT!  Love it.  Can't wait for more, love the way these two love each other.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Have Yourlelf a Merry Little Break Down

Holy.... s%##!  PLEASE, don't leave us hanging too long.  And a christmas too.

 

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20-Here He Goes Agroveling...

I'm glad Bella was reasonable... why cut off your nose to spite your face.  She loves him and would be miserable without him and Carlie...  I must admit I'm glad Edward had to grovel... ;-)

I can't wait to see how the Review Board goes... I'm so glad it drew a crowd.

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues

Excellent chapter!  I loved the joint proposal and that Emmett's in the hot seat... again!

The scene was very hot! I glad they are taking things slow...

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: aabc Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

OME!!!! How could you do that to them...??????  I hope you won't keep us waiting too long... I do expect a HEA for these two eventually.

Thanks for the update... I think.

I almost don't want to wish you a Happy New Year but have one anyone anyway.