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this girl loves to read twilight fanfic especially of the Dom/sub variety, she has not written anything yet but has something in mind.
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514602
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78
:D awesome story you had me from chapter one and kept me on the edge of my computer desk chair the whole way thru.
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624772
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: The Perfect Wife
gonna save so i can try again when i catch up
Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes?
Rated: M (18 and over)
AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83458
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
awesome chappy but haveing a slight bit of a twilight zone moment I went thru my faves and almost everyone that i saw and went hmmm i wonder when we will get an update on this ...updated this weekend lol. btw possesiveward can come out whenever he wants to we like him.
Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.
New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116427
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
loved the chappy did the happy dance when i saw it in my inbox :) a little over a week till eclipse....gotta wait till sunday after opening to see it though I work nights ugggghhhhhh and fiance' wants to see it with me. (i think he's a secret Rob fan girl all the "i love his music" and "he's a great actor" with out the girly "he's sooooo cutee" that i do lol)
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
excelent cliffie and chappy
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
awesome chappy and perfect drama level... can't wait. Oh yes back in highschool one of our teachers was a foster mom luckily she taught home ech and parenting so both classes it was fight over baby holiding rights time.
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
it takes more than two months for me to think you abandoned us the chappy makes up for it...
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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 171429
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Wow that was emotional to read what happened to rose. Can't wait for next chappy ;)
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
yay a gazillion chapters.... umm sorry. yeah therapy can help my theripist was the one who called my parents and the school to convince them a change in schools is what i needed and it helped. let's hear it for therapists the unsung heroes of many. btw awesome chappy.
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Awesome chappy and awwwe Bells called Charlie Dad (hugs). Love the story and eagerly read is as soon as it shows up in my inbox :)
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Gahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cliffie from hell loved the chappy but now you got me going "what happens telll me tell me wait not not til next chappy nooo i wanna know sigh"
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
hehehe awwe great chappy and the boys are great
Jasper returns to Forks to apologize but was never prepared for what he found. Now he knows he needs to make it right. But how? Will Bella find love again?Lemons in the future! Non-canon AU New Moon.
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281055 Read Count: 89650
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53
holy crap i finally caught up :) awesome story i am team Edward but i will put up with him being a dumbass for a good story and so far this is not just good but awesome.... can't wait for next chappy ...gonna go fave now
Author's Response:
GREAT! Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment! I love that an Eddie lover can still enjoy my story. Thank you! Next chapter was just posted. So I hope you enjoy.
xoxoxoxoxo
Mynxi & Jasper
Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 153057
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day
awwwe the chappy rocked and duh you need no forgiveness cause we should all understand life gets busy hell i had to pull the "i did how much overtime last month so you owe me a saturday off " to get tonight off so the boyfriend could stand me up....he is sooooo getting dumped. so your chappy really did cheer me up.
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Hospital Admissions
awwwww good chappy
One Bet. One Week. No Rules.
Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.
A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315694
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone
I do want an edward doll but i will just hug my legolas doll untill i can get my edward doll.
Author's Response:
LOL!
“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Undisclosed Desires
interesting response from edward great chappy can't wait for the next one :)
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I've Got You Under My Skin
lol ghpes tp prove even the smart perfect guys can be so dense. loved the chappy
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Complications and Awkward Conversations
loved the chappy :)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Friends and Foes
that was a nice chappy but it was not nice of you to remind me that it is snowing today....i was happily drinking tea at caribou ignoring the weather as a whole.
Author's Response:
My sincerest apologies for the reminder of the snow. I'd give anything to be able to ignore the weather, I haven't been able to get into work and the roads here are a complete nightmare.
Drink an extra tea for me, thank you for the review.
Aurora
[Reviews - 340] am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41874
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Wicked Angel
i keep thinking it has to do with charlie and his connection to edward....
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Faith
was there chappy cause i didnt see it
Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed?
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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
Date: 05 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
Weird this showed up wehen i went to read it at 1 am then was gone when i went back to finish it.
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Irrevocable
awesome we missed you look forward to new chappy know how it is i lived off off carriabou cofee's free net and finally got clear
Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH OOC Rated M b/c they are adults & will do adult things! Canon Couples
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91018 Read Count: 27771
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever
Oh my goodness I loved your story and yes this was a tissue chappy loved it loved it loved it found it last night at work and just finished it 24 hours later :)
Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way. He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995704
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
awesome chappy... Domward was a very good Dom in this chappy :)
Author's Response:
thanks ;)
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I gotta say after seeing "Majior Whitlock" come out in eclipse Jasper would make one freakishly hot Dom. loved the chappy can't wait to see James and Jacob's reaction to a moving crew comeing instead of Bella <eg> .
Author's Response: J & J - the two we love to hate - let me say, they won't disappoint!! Next week!
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
awesome chappy and yes i feel for bella been there...wanted to scratch the bitches eyes out so yeah...cant wait for next chappy
Author's Response:
thanks for the review xoxo
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
awesome chappy and yes your beta does rock. LOL my friends huskie can take me down when she feels like pounceing and licking our faces so i can imagine 4
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
good chappy but evil cliffy....i will just pace here in my corner until next chappy is up.....
Author's Response:
you only have to pace half way - sending you a little extra loving...
PEOPLE LIKE US – OUTTAKE # 6
OUTTAKE – CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE
“Guys, I’ve got to go – Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!”
Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.
“So… you talk about the size of my schlong?” Jasper said.
Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, “Well, it’s quite impressive…” she said huskily.
Jasper smiled at her. “Can we talk? I mean really talk; I’ve missed you Tink…”
Alice smiled through her tears. “I’ve missed you too Jazzy….”
Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice. She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control. Seeing him looking ill at ease was new. There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.
She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.
Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper’s travelling for work and Alice’s part time job as Edward’s PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice’s training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.
Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view. Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them. They had also taught them to stick to their guns.
This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place. Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with. She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.
Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them. They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest. Eventually Jasper’s father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!
He had told Jasper’s mother that they were his dead sister’s kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his. Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves. Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.
Jasper couldn’t believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper’s generosity the way that he had! Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother’s name. Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.
Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with. He didn’t ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else. Someone better.
So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated. He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college. The first one was on finances. Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.
He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character. Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.
It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on. He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was! Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice! His Alice! Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.
How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him… FUCK!
Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet. His face was a cold, furious mask.
“Jasper please! If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down! I can’t reach you when you are like this! If you are angry with me then just say so and let’s get it out there! If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother…” Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.
“Never – NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother! I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!” Jasper spat out as he held her.
Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes. “Jazzy, you are scaring me…”
This wild man wasn’t her Jasper…
Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper’s fingers.
Suddenly she was free.
Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could. Her whole body was trembling.
“Alice… sweet Jesus, I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to scare you… Ali…” Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.
Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper’s face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.
This was all her fault!
“Come to me…” Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.
Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.
Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice’s gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.
“Ali…” he said in a half pleading, half warning.
“No. You’ve spoken and now it is my turn…” Alice said when she was inches away from his face.
Her eyes searched his intensely. The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.
Jasper’s head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.
He cursed and rubbed his head.
Alice grinned at him, “Maybe that’ll knock some sense into your thick skull!” She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.
Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself. Alice giggled and winked at him.
“We can get to that later, but first let’s please resolve this ‘thing’ once and for all!” She said with determination.
“Gladly, Darlin’.”
“Okay, I’m going first. I need to tell you why I didn’t tell you about… what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me! Do you promise?”
Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.
“I promise.”
Alice took a deep breath, “I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off. I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way. The next time it happened, your… well your father was in the room. He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him. I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing… Jasper… you promised…” Alice broke off as she watched Jasper’s eyes become dark and wild again.
Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode! That no good, low fucking, good for nothing… BASTARD! I. will. Kill. Him.
Jasper felt Alice’s tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.
He kissed her quickly, “I’m okay, Ali, I promise. I won’t freak out on you again.”
Alice nodded slowly, “He apologized to me later – your father, I mean. The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again. He begged me not to tell you and then he said that… some girls just have an ‘air’ about them…”
SON OF A BITCH!
Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.
She continued. “I know better than that, Jazz! I know better! I was raised to know better than that! With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect. You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty. And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn’t deserve anything better. Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups’. Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us… He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us…” Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn’t take it any longer.
His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. “Never, never, never…” He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.
“Jazz…”
“No – it’s my turn now… never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen. Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again. Especially not me! God, Ali, I love you so much! Just the thought of another man touching you… Fuck! It’s too much to even contemplate! Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was… forcing himself on you? When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her – she didn’t have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then! As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you! And about how I was going to take care of you this time! I couldn’t help you last time, Darlin’. I wasn’t able to stop that animal putting his hands on you… but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again.”
Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.
“I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock. You own me mind, body and soul. If I lost you, my life would be so empty… please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out. Please, please don’t ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can’t stand it.” Jasper whispered as they held each other’s faces and gazed with longing into each other’s eyes.
“I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything… my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love. I am sorry too. No more secrets.”
Their kiss was a relief. For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving. Lips touched, brushed, nibbled. Tongues dueled and teased. Eventually they couldn’t take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.
Alice panted into his mouth. “Can I get my clothes back?”
Jasper smiled against her lips, “yeah, especially the underwear…”
Alice giggled, “can I get my car back?”
Jasper shook his head, “sorry, you will be driven around for a while…”
Alice groaned, “but I can see my Bestie?”
Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice’s eyes. “Mary Alice…” He said with narrowed eyes.
Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that… now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!
“Hmmm… take me upstairs Jazz… I’ve missed you…” Alice uttered the magic words.
J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A
An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper’s bare chest. Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.
“Alice?”
“Yeah?”
“Supervised visits only…” Jasper kissed her forehead.
“I know – but that’s only for now…” Alice smiled to herself.
She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session? She had heard that Gap was having a sale….
Everything was right with the world after all.
J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A
I hope that you liked it!
Love
Michele
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54
ahhh poor Bella what is she to do she has a Dom that is just too sexy for his own good. outtake would be awesome...I have gotta say about Reily both in the story and eclipse. I have to giggle when I see and hear the name cause I picture a little foxy pomeranian with sparkling eyes who used to sleep curled around my own little Yuki.
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56
awww poor Bella needs to learn to take better care of herself...though she is not the only one to get into trouble for not taking care of themselves (gives good not me look) awesome chappy and you describe Edward as a Dome so well.
Author's Response:
thank you so much!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57
awwe man i am getting teased now by my truckers for crying over a fanfic chappy awwwwww she said yes :) :) :) awesome chappy darn you now i look like a racoon...make up remover time
Author's Response:
Sorry about the makeup fail, babe! But thank you so much for your review and comments. xoxo
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60
awwww you are an angel to go thru all of that and still update you do rock and you rocked us with an awesome chappy huggles
Author's Response:
and you rock solid for reviewing - I'm taking those hugs now xoxo
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66
evil cliffie but we love you for em aewsome chappy
;)
Author's Response:
why thank you! *bows* I aim to please.
xoxo
Date: 04 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81
awwe it was awesome and you are soooooooo going on my fave author list :) loved the journey of PLU:)
Bella swan is the most popular of singers in Chicago. Edward is the drinking/ smoker/ handsome mob boss who walks into Bella’s fathers club to collect a debt. While Aro gets the money Edward and his associates wait and listen to the music, that’s when Edward first lay eyes on Bella Swan and was determined to make her his.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54794 Read Count: 64200
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
awwwe what a great b day gift a new chappy yeah i am a valentines baby :)
Suddenly I realized the family had it wrong. I had it wrong. Jasper was not attacking me and Edward was not protecting me. AU OOC Rated NC-17 to be safe
My first story - This story was originally posted on FanFiction.net and is being reposted here due to the amount of fic's being deleted there. 5167 reviews and counting. Winner of two 'Everything's Bigger in Texas Award
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200830 Read Count: 184834
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
giggles i know i read the after it's complete but I just had to say "it's only a flesh wound" ok now i wanna watch MP the holy grail when i get home...of course i am one of the sick sick puppies who watched a doc on the plauge and could not resist "bring out your dead, I'm not dead yet"
Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback. Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two? Rated NC-17 for language, lemons. An entry in The Sport of Love contest.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
Date: 01 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 Roughing the Passer
i personally thought it was freaking halarious :) go Edward and Boys :) and well hell throw in a hell yeah for Bella too nice handling.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a good time with that chapter. Everybody kicked some ass in their own way :) Thanks so much!
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
ooooh nice chappy :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
Oh My i think I hurt myself laughing at the end... awesome chappy :)
Author's Response:
Hehe Well I don't want you hurting yourself but I do love making you laugh! Glad you liked it!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
Pitt all the way GB cn go to hell fucking Cutler pansy ass if you were hurting you should not have played grrrrrrr. Yeah I'm a Chicago girl and Cutler pissed off the fans. Awesome Chappy!!!! awww Edward is awesome... though lauren craked me up with the whole ass thing I had to explain that one to my friend's parents when i was laughing my ass off and they were like "ummm what's so funny about the state farm comercial?"
Author's Response:
Hehe I love the Cutler rage. If he was so badly injured, why was he walking just fine? And riding a bike? Don't blame you for being mad!
I'm glad you liked the chapter! Edward is a definite dream. I adore him.
I loved the ass grab myself! Too much fun! Love that you laughed and they thought it was the commercial. Too fun :)
Thanks for the review hon!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
roflmao ohhhhh that was perfect i think i love emmett he rocks
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you love him. I have the best time writing him :)
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
i loved it ohhh man this is great and Tanya stuck in a bathroom may Esme not let her out until the end of the night :) and i have a feeling Vickie is getting fired.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you loved it! Esme's definitely not going to let her out til the crowd dwindles down, just in case. hehe I don't think Victoria will be around for much longer myself :)
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag
awwwwe awesome chappy
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had so much fun with it :)
Three friends. Three guys. In the same body. Blood-thirsty murderers, prowling the streets of Chicago, one at a time. "Evil prowls the shadows in this city at night Miss Swan. You will be wise to avoid it...not ask to see it again.” Edward's quest to find the perfect victim. One-shot. Darkward/Mentalward/Sexual content and extreme violence.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crackfic
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8840 Read Count: 543
Date: 08 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really liked this please let me know if you dectide to continue it
Edward is the lead singer of Eclipse, the most popular band in the world for the last decade. He has always considered himself fulfilled and successful despite his solitary existence. He has never felt the desire for an emotional connection outside of the band and family until meets a much younger Bella during Eclipse’s European summer tour and begins to realize just how much has been missing from his life. Can their newfound relationship bliss survive the expectations and responsibilities of loving a rockstar? Can Bella survive the repercussions of her newfound and unsolicited fame? How do you protect the one you love when you are thousands of miles away? AH/OOC
Banner by: Evilangel813
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185489 Read Count: 100551
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Barracuda
oooh ooh have gianna do something fucked up like show up at every show or something scraming about how it is edwards baby any sane judge will order a paternity test after something like that
awesome chappy
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Never Met A Girl Like You
oooh awesome story so far will add it to my faves when i get caught up :)
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: You Shook Me All Night Long
lol oh my i reacted the same way when bb my coach purse died i almost wanted to burry her i had had her since i was a freshman in highschool and i am 33 now and she died last month so that was a long time to develop a purse/woman relationship. love the story :)
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Rebel Yell
love the chappy and it has one of my fave billy idol songs as the title. can't wait to read more.
Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction. Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love?
This story was made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.
**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story. Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances
fan fic foreplay is awesome
Banner made by xrxdanixrx
Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...
Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.
Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?
Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71564
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
ooooh can't wait for next chappy :)
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
awwww i want an alice. I have a picture with ashley greene so does that kinda sorta count?
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
hmmm interesting chapter...now it is gonna kill me trying to read into Aro's intentions and all while sleep deprived...may have to force myself not to over think it.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
well agent reed was just....creepy. Eclipse I must wait untill 4th of july cause i work nights suckity.....just finished rereading the book and can't wait....love your story loved the chappy will miss you have fun .....
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Ethics Be Damned
love the chappy gotta love charlie in the books ion the movies for a police cheif he is a darn cool dad
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
fianlly someone decked tanya....great chappy
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
awesome chappy as allways can't wait to see bellas reaction... and edward is too cute :)
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
awwww loved it loved it loved it :)
Author's Response: Thank so much for sticking with me. I'm so happy you liked it :)
Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106330
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
lights a toorch to go after Kate....as long as Emma comes home safely no authresses will get hurt :)
Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material
Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76134
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
hehe I liked this chappy i'll have to follow you on twitter cause so far i am just follow most of the twi cast.
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
lol why do i see bella comeing in saying "duh class today chill eddie" lol awww I love domwards especially when out of their element.
“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?
They said I was going home but where was home now?
OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse Bella x Edward
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32991
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
intersting chappy and who is brees mysery vamp ;)
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
awesome chappy please continue
Bella and family move to NH to escape a tragedy that left her a teen mother. She's not looking for a life beyond being a good mom, but the gang works to show her that there is more to life, friends, and family than blood.AH/C&NC pairs/18&over NOW COMPLETE
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 79296 Read Count: 30349
Date: 04 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Confessions and Cold Shoulders
hey sorry i don't allways get to review cause i save the pages offline to read while i am at work ( reviewer comment: do not try this at your work unless you work sayes it is ok...i just have a really really really boring job and we are allowed computers in the guard shack to keep us from dieing of bordom) . I love thnis story and it rocks I am totally cool with your pairing choices. though I would feel bad for bella if whe went "i choose Edward" and he was like "well umm actually I ummmm kinda fell for Jacob and well ummm Bella you see....." in the actual series but hey that is what we have fanfiction for. :) keep up the awesome story.
Author's Response: Ah, I understand why you can't review hun, it's just that I get worried when no one is leaving me their thoughts on what I've done. It may sound shallow, but ask any author how they feel when one of their readers praise them. I'm thrilled that you're liking my choices on the pairings, I love being different than what people expect.
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Blood Doesn't Always Make the Bond
hugs take your time i will have you in my thoughts
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Finale
you ended on a stupid clifhanger...i liked your story but you messed that up by ending on a stupid cliff hanger. if you are just going to do the same messed up ending on the sequel don't bother. if this is how you end your stories i am not sure i'd want to read any more of your work.
Author's Response: Well, actually this is the first time I've ever ended a story like that, but why shouldn't I? It's good to be different hun. I understand that your rudeness is born from frustration, but threatening not to read any of my other stories doesn't faze me in the least. I'm sorry that you got your panties in a twist and felt the need to be nasty though. Happpy Reading!
Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.
***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 38990
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
ummmmerrr ok cheerleader girl....awesome chappy oved jaz edward was a dumba....er arse.
Author's Response:
yeah, Edward's an idiot. Jasper's POV is up next! Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
ahhh the Edward drama decends. while personally I like Edward he did leave her so tis his own fault....besides Jasper is quite hot .....hmmm a jasper edward bella sandwich.....i am gonna go mull that over in my mind for a bit........awesome chappy
Author's Response:
I still love Edward in AH fics, but I just can't get past him abandoning her in canon stories. A bella/jasper/edward sandwich is definitely something I could get behind though, lol! Maybe in my next fic ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
please...never apologize for taking care of your family over getting a chappy out...we understand and those that don't can go crawl in a hole. awesome chappy can't wait for the next and yeah bella knocking of edwards head was funny as all hell and as i have said before i am team edward but love the story
Author's Response:
Lol, no one has been bad about the delay, I just feel bad when I can't post once a week. Glad you enjoyed Bella's wake up call to Edward. I've made him so out of character in this story, so I hope you can enjoy about him being decapitated even though you are team edward :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!
After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!
AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297697
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by
I like the story so fat can't wait to see where it goes.I fianally got Dirty Dancing on dvd. true story ...I broke our vcr (yes I am that old) when I was thirteen because I watched Dirty Danceing too many time and the tape broke in the vcr. my dad claimed it was the vcr protesting the movie LOL. I was barred from renting it too. to this day if i go to the small family owned stre in the neighborhood and use our old home number(yes my family still has the same number) and try to rent it there is a note on the account that says "this family member is not allowed to rent this movie per her dad".
Author's Response:
Haha, I laughed about your story. Thank you for sharing it! :)
I can't believe they still have that note. Crazy! ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past
Wow I know how scary that can be we lost one of our favorite techs to Creutzfeldt jakob disease. he was fine walking talking laughing Monday and he died that saturday.
Author's Response:
Yeah, it's scary when things happen so fast, it's like your mind doesn't really have time to register it. I can still feel like my friend will come back from a holiday or something..
xx
Gelix
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals
lol great chappy waiting for her to call Edward back with a love you too :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter
raises hand alright girls raise your hand if you have done that to a guy before too. awesome chappy.
Author's Response:
Haha, thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans
def a baby cullen...edward can use my friends fiance line of "yup i'm that good that i got my baby pregnant when she was on the pill." ok in his defense we were commenting on the fact that she was told it is unlikely she would have kids but funny all the same.
Author's Response:
Haha, wow, is it okay if I use that line? I LOVED IT! When Bella is pregnant of course, I'm no telling that she is, but when she is. You'll have to tell me if you don't want me to!
xx
Gelix
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up
awesome chappy :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon
hmm sick...alot over food and stuff tender breasts...pregnant
Author's Response:
We'll see! ;)
Thank you for your review!
xx
Gelix
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you
did not see chappy
Author's Response:
It's back! I don't know what the problem was but every chapter on TWCS was gone. Not just my story ^^
xx
Gelix
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Starting of a new life
Sunday Wednesday 7th? Wow someone's been putting too much time in writing for us fans...hugs awesome chappy and now i go slip back into my chocolate coma filled with dreams of Edward ....
Summary - All Human. Edward turns sixteen. Emmett forces him to go to a strip club for his birthday. Bella is dared to be a strip dancer for the night. What will happen to two virgins when they meet? De-virginizing Edward, never entered contest but now is longer than one shot.
This banner is made by my very close friend in this fandom - Chynnadoll36
http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2117759/chynnadoll36
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15046 Read Count: 5835
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
awesome chappy i got so lost in it that the spotter scared the crap outta me honking next to my window....forgott where i was for a moment.
Edroar the Angry Lion frightens all the girls and boys at Cullen Publishing with his loud roar. Will his new massage therapist Bella Swan run away like all the rest, or can she tame this savage beast? AH/AU OOC
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134649 Read Count: 25372
Date: 24 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Fool in the Rain
heheheh:) awesome chappy me thinks a certain angry lion over heard her call and is a wee bit jealous? Happy Holidays and look forward to the next chappy :P
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Amazing?
why egg on mike besides watching bella and edroar is much much more fun
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 It's Electric!
hehe awesome chappy
After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211498
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
excelent story so far can't wait to see how it goes from here.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.
I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!
Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!
Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!
I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!
XoXo
Shel
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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.
"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?" Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.
"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."
Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.
"Mom! We're here!"
Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.
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Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21
thank you for the awesome chappy it was what i needed in my recovery from a looooonnnngggg weekend at work :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com
You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!
<3
Shel
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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit."
"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.
"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
awe so sweet i loved that chappy and yes Bells is probably right about Edward going to James. he will be mad at her holding it back at first but when he finds out about James he will understand and kick Jame's ass. by the way fun note my boss is named James... we girls asked him of his first day if he was a good vampire or a bad vampire then introduced him to the world of twilight he is hooked and he assures he is a good vampire LOL.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition!
Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1!
♥ Shel ♥
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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!"
Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully. She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.
"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen.
She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store?
Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29
yay lemons rock awesome chappy. and FAO Shwartz is my fave store.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!
Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!
♥ Shel ♥
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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.
"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.
"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.
"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."
He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."
Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.
"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."
"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"
"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30
great chappy. Jack is too cute. something tells me they won't be living "in sin" (man i hate that wording) for long before Edward proposes. ugggh James is such a slimy worm.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.
Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!
Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.
♥ Shel ♥
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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."
"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."
Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.
The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "
What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.
"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.
Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.
"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31
James is a evil biting gnat who needs to get squashed
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)
I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*
Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.
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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.
"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."
Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.
"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."
"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.
Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32
awwwweeeeeeee very awesome thank you for the chappy i was elated when i saw it in my inbox.....a perfect end to my shift at work.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!
♥ Shel ♥
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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."
She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."
The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"
Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.
"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.
Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35
oooooohhhhhh i want a teaser i want a teaser .........waiting by my puter for the next chappy.....you rock
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)
Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.
I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^
That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)
♥ Shel ♥
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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:
Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.
"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"
She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"
They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.
"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."
When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.
"Come on, let's get dry."
Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."
His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.
"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.
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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:
I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.
My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.
Rebel Bella has been shipped around the U.S. for years to different foster homes after being placed in Child Protective Services. What will happen when she is placed with uptight Edward and his family? Adult language/Violence/Lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 134043 Read Count: 42786
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Information
awesome chappy and yeah the cullens rock...and well Aro he would not be himself if he wasn't being a bastard hidden under a polite exterior.
Author's Response:
yes, the cullens do rock!! and aro will always be a dirty, dirty man in my mind. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Incidents
awesome chappy could our dear Edward have epilepsy?
Author's Response:
you're theory is on the right track. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Confession
Ahhhh ok yeah fortunately my dad never had seizures but his csncer started elsewhere before moving to his brain. I hope Bella takes it better and can be there for him. the chappy was good can't wait to see what happens with bella and edward.
Author's Response:
edward's tumor is a recurrence, not a metastisis from another site, and we'll find out more about that in the next chapter. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Broken
hmmm can't be james since he refered to another so i am going to guess laurant
awesome chappy
Author's Response:
you're on the right track with it being someone connected to james, but i won't say who just yet. gald you liked the chapter. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ;)
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254688
Date: 25 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 85
goddness finally cought up with your updates :). awesome story so far and wow alot of ideas came from this story, especially the journal this girl's Master thanks you for that idea. now she gets to read the special bonusus you posted along the way :). also pimping out your styory as Master is now interested in reading it too :).
Author's Response:
The journal??? A new one is given every year at Christmas...and there are times when i will be told to go back and look something up...it's a tool that is used to show me how far i've come and sometimes how much more work i need to do ...lol.... anyway glad you are enjoying the story and go read the extra's ..my blog has a bit more information in it and i think it's more user friendly ...anyway untill next time, be well...louise
Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!
After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105119
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas
LOL yeah my friend looked at me oddly when i looked at the cross in the first movie and giggled. That is what I get for having all vanilla friends. Awesome story Domward is hot as all hell as most Domwards are. does anyone else think Robert would make a hot Dominant...sorry can't help it it's the subbie in me.
Author's Response:
I would so sub for him anyday of the week! Edward just makes to perfect domward! Let your subbie side run wild! if you ever want to send me an idea for a chapter feel free! Thank for reading! Nails233
Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79104
Date: 15 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
awesome chappy i am a team Edward so i will say go bells (SPOILER ALERT) but i am also a team nessie so i will go awww jake is such a dumbass. btw if you can laugh at a parody knowing that the twicast has probably already seen and laughed at it vampires suck is worth the see.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) My hubby and boys went to see Vampires Suck. THey said it was pretty funny. I can't wait to see it. I think it looks awesome. I think some people take the books, and movies, way too seriously.
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
knowing alice from the book and movies she will prob tell him it took him long enough ;) ahhh loved the chappy thank you for makeing my 16 hour shift much more pleasant :)
Author's Response:
You're welcome ;) glad I could help and thank you for the review:)