Reviews by dreamngo4it9
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

Wow... this story is amazing... its so heartbreaking at times, but there is so much love too! I have loved reading it and cannot wait for an update! I need to know how Carlisle is, and how the rest of his family is. How do Charlie and Felix help more people? How is Aro eventually ended? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 3: The First Meeting

man i  LOVE this story so far! im so sad there were only 3 chapters. cannot wait for more! i love how captivated edward was that he just couldnt stop himself. please update soon!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I update every Sunday, so you'll have an update in around 40 hours. xo Mina

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 11: The Crossed Paths

Man I LOVE this story!! It is my favorite and most anticipated at the moments. Wheneer I see the update in my inbox I get so excited and sometimes drop everything just to read it. I liked that you sent Bella there as soon as possible, because it for the chapter and how terrible she had it in the US... And so she could try to find herself. I love that Edward is so captivated he went back to Seattle just to hopefully find her. Cannot wait for more!!!!

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79426
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2023 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I just found this story and read it so fast. I cried though so much of it! It was soooo good!

Not Yet by TrueEnglishRose Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

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What if it was your time to go, but you wouldn't leave? What would you do with the extra time you took? Edward and Bella with ChPOV. Tissue warning.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Charlie/None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1509 Read Count: 826
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Not Yet

this was really beautiful!

Starlet by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan: movie star, beloved icon, and little girl lost. Edward Masen: rising star, former bodyguard and afraid of losing everything all over again. She loves him and he loves her but will their love survive drugs, fame and jealousy? AU/AH ExB

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 231110 Read Count: 71655
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Dec 2014
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Making Plans

i liked this. im glad they are able to start moving on and getting on with their life. cant wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Home is Where the Heart Is

i really liked this. i loved the part at the cemetery, the sweet part and drama part at the end.

Hot Bubblegum by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 668]
Summary:

Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312760
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63

yay update!!! i didnt realize i wasn't caught up. i left off before meeting alice and jasper. i LOVED it! the way you wrote it was awesome. i also really loved the heart tattoos and i hope you expand on it a little more. cant wait for more!

Summary:

Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.

Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923038
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Sep 2015
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

so i finally got the chance to read this, and holy shit... the horrors they've dealt with and the love they still have is incredible. i cant even imagine what bella's reaction to the tattoo will be. and damn.... poor tanya. i am glad that she told them that emmett and rosalie are alive. is alice edward's sister? i really hope she is. i would love to get an alice point of view to see how much she really knows about her age and how different the real she is from the innocent she, she pretends to be. i cant wait for more! 

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56

im really surprised by how little of a reaction bella had to the tattoo.... and im glad that edward didnt automatically ask to have it gotten rid of. fucking james checking for her hymen to be torn and his seme. cant wait for more



Author's Response:

Honestly, I was surprised too! I thought she'd flip out, but she didn't. Though i think it hasn't sunk in yet

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 69

i loved this chapter, but i was a little sad that edward didnt show up and realize he still had babies coming and to be reuinted with bella and let them actually experience some love finally. cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

that's the next chapter! It will be out in like 6 days!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 64

i cant remember if i reviewed or not, but i really liked this chapter. i love how charlie seems to be so attached to tanya and i cant wait for more on that. i loved bella's talks with emmett and rosalie, especially because it was enough to get rosalie to open up some and try out her feelings. cant wait for more! especially for edward and bella to finally get back in the same room together.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

i really liked this chapter, but im definitely looking forward to when bella wakes up, especially when she realizes what that bastard tattooed her with.



Author's Response:

yeah i already wrote that, ... in the middle of writing the chapter... she's not too happy...lol...

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

i really hope my sporadic reviews and that i dont review every chapter doesn't upset you. i was finally able to read the last 5 chapters and i loved them. i definitely thought it was time for them to escape, though i really didn't think you'd write it yet, but im so glad you did!!! i also love that they got to save bree's baby and that bree got some closure when she died. im so glad that she got to be with her parents again and that she knew her baby would be cared for. i am curious who is going to end up with it after all is said and done at the hospital and checking everyone over. even though i dont like victoria, i pity her for loving someone who clearly would/could never love her. its one of the worst feelings ever. im so glad that they were saved, and i really liked the way you did it. even though i hate that the girls got tortured again, i loved that you didn't let them get away with it totally because it just wouldn't have be realistic for the story. i love that charlie, carlisle, emmett, edward, and jasper just went in there all guns ablazing... ha, literally. and im so glad that aro is dead (he died falling out the window right?) and i hope that all of the people still there died in the house fire, though i don't really expect you to let them off that easily. i kind of hope that james got away, goes to the us to find them, and is then caught and gets to be someone's prison bitch the rest of his life. i absolutely cannot wait for more!!! especially to make sure that everyone is okay and to find out how many babies bella is having. im sure there is going to be a lot of weird conversations happening at the hosptial once everyone is settled. im especially looking forward to how rosalie reacts to emmett's call, and then how all the boyfriend/girlfriend/wife/husband talks go with everyone being with each other's significant others. i hope its easy though, that bella and edward can easily convince people that they love each other, and its not just because of everything that happened at the island, that they loved each other before that. PLEASE UDPATE SOON!!!!!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 67

awe, wow, i loved this chapter... so happy for happy times and all the love! but poor bella :( i cant wait for that conversation between edward and jasper, and i really really really really hope that edward comes back before the babies are born (regardless of his discussion with jasper), because that's obviously one of the reasons he's still away, thinking they were gone. cant wait for more!!!!! 

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 68

awe yay for tanya for making a man friend and not being terrified of him! also... good for jasper for convincing edward to come home, though i am so happy that there is confirmation that aro is alive and that they have a lead, well not really but sort of, so there isn't that scary, "WFT, is he alive or not?" feeling... also, i really hope we can figure out if james is alive and where aro is so that all this hunting can be done and edward can be with his family. i am so excited he is coming home for esme's party and i cant wait for when he finds out that bella is still pregnant. please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 80: Chapter 70

Ugh! I'm so glad that he's finally home and now knows, but damn I was hoping for them to actually talk and interact!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 72

i LOVED this! i loved bella's clue... and the whole fight scene... everything. i really really hope james does not survive the night, but then theres a tiny little part of me that hopes he survives enough to tell them what else is all going on. where aro is... cant wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 73

i really liked this chapter. im glad that bella told him how much he hurt her, but that they are going to be together from now on. i cant wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 74

oh i loved this chapter!!!! lol.... i loved that edward told the random guys to watch, lol, and i loved that jasper texted him, lol.... all the beginning part was great too!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 81

TThis was a precious chapter. Excited to finally have a new one :) excited for more.

The Next Chapter by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 312]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward Masen had their fresh start and are beginning a new chapter in their lives: raising triplets, one of which doesn't speak. Follow along with their families as they learn to deal with a child with special needs. However, a blast from the past lurks in the corner. Who and why are they choosing to come back into the Masen's lives? ExB, AH

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195079 Read Count: 141990
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 17 Jul 2014
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 25: The Camel

dang, im so sad this chapter is already over! the birthday card from david was my undoing... definitely tearing up at that part. cannot wait for more! please update soon!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

awe man. i wish there was more! i loved this but i want to know more about wahts coming!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Reunion and Distresses

i really liked this. i was very surprised when charlie gave in and apologized to edward for being in the heat of the moment. i loved that lizzie was mostly okay and how she clung to edward. so glad that they got the scoop on the bad agent. cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 30: A New Story and a Happy Ending

wow... i cant believe this story, their story is done! i liked the ending a lot, i just wish we would have seen more with marie and all her therapy and milestones she reached... that's my only thing.... so if you plan on doing outtakes, lol, *wink wink*... also i really hope that marie eventually can find someone to love besides her animals, so that would be a great futuretake too!

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324331
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Our Family Expanded?

i really like this story and cant wait for more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"The difference between men and boys is the price of their toys" unless you're Toyward...and you decide to share your toy box. When Jasper wanders into Edward's adult toy store...his life will never be the same. TrueEnglishRose/texasbella E/J

 

 

Also up for Best Humor in the Non-Canon Awards

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46510 Read Count: 32440
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jun 2012
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Outtake #3 Never Squat With Your Spurs On

I really really liked this story! I loved all the toys and sexy times, but also that it still stayed classy and had a plot!

Walk by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a betrayal leaves Edward reeling, he decides to change the course of his life. Starting over can be a daunting task. Will he let a certain brown eyed beauty help him find what he's looking for?

Rated NC-17 for adult situations and language           *Banner by Falling Stars*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110402 Read Count: 49586
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Mar 2013
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This was a really beautiful story! I'm so glad I found it on Facebook!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This was a really beautiful story! I'm so glad I found it on Facebook!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028744
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh, im not saying i didnt like it, im just saying im definitely waiting for them to have sex to see how sweet and intimate or hard and passionate it will be and for them to have the vampire talk



Author's Response:

no vampire talk, sorry. Im ending it right where i ended the one shot, well, this is that little bit extra. I will be writing a sequel though :)

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 298: Chapter 298

well you certainly know how to drag things out with these chapters, lol. i cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

awwww.... i thought u would like this. It was a super long chapter. I almost cut it in two.

The Fire Inside by alexajaye Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Vampire mates Jasper and Edward are out hunting when they find a young girl named Bella. She's not just any girl. She has a gift. And soon, her very existence will change the immortal world as they know it. When her life is threatened, they soon fight for her in a struggle that could destroy her for all eternity.

"A bond forged by fire is never broken." — author unknown

 

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Action, Drama, Fantasy, Mystery, Slash, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: HamHamNation's List of Reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 74779 Read Count: 15744
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2012 Updated: 18 Apr 2013
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Initiation

hmm this story is so interesting. all the different bonds and rules and powers are so different and intriguing. i definitely cant wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It's good to have you on board.

And thanks for reviewing!

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

AIDA

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299861
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 26: A New Year, A New Life

i really liked this... i loved the proposal. cant wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Halloween Hijinks

I really liked this. I'm glad that Edward didn't give into the fight and back down for fear of being not good in the relationship. I really hope he can find something on her boss. I loved that Ali was here and got time with Edward. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Daily Grind

i really really liked this. im so glad that edward did research to make sure bella couldnt get fired. i really really cannot wait to see that asshole go down!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Some Day my Prince will Come...in a White Lab Coat?

oh i LOVED this chapter!!! i love that becca was able to finally reach out to bella and get safe... and i like that her abuser is alice's because its just a nice twist to the story... im glad my suspicions were correct too, lol. cant wait for more! especially for bellas horrible boss to get his!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: The End of an Era

I liked this... I'm so glad that they are done with that skeeze ball.. Also, i loved the part with Esme. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 34: X-Rated Fairy Tales

Hmm... Interesting ending. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Questions and Answers

I liked this chapter. I liked what Carlisle found and loved the talk between Alice and Edward... Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 38: The Island of Love: Epilogue

I thought this epiloguepilogue summed up the whole story very well... I didn't think Lauren would ever showant up but I loved how bella and Edward haND led her. I was sad about all the stuff that went down with alice, especially her not being able to be with her family on the island and her never getting a fancy wedding like she planned for bella. I loved their kids though think it would be grate if they habe a little boy. Wish there was more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella, a fledgling lawyer, has better luck in a courtroom than with men. Enter the hottie in the pricey suit who offers to pay double her going rate, and he’s not talking legal fees. The pair find themselves deep in a compensation-based misunderstanding until a few months later when she realizes she may be in love with her one and only regular. *Entry for the 2012 Taste of the Forbidden Contest**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10814 Read Count: 3787
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i LOVED this! it was steamy, but i loved that it dealt with so many real life issues... dedicating your life to work, illicit affairs, and falling in love when you shouldnt... even though i'd love more from this pair, you wrapped the story up and finished it so well



Author's Response:

Aww shucks, thanks babe!  Glad you enjoyed reading it :)

xoxo

TB and Jelly

Summary: Past Featured Story

They survived falling in love and having four children. Now, Geekward and Nerdella are parents of teenagers. Say a prayer for them for they are in for a bumpy ride. But, a ghost from the past is rearing his ugly head. Follow along as Geekward and Nerdella deal with having teens, battle with the blast from the past and why is Demetri hugging a cow? ANSOL/TGGTP Sequel. ExB AH/AU

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 269577 Read Count: 89456
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2012 Updated: 26 Jul 2015
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Mortal Coil

wow... this was an intese chapter. the end definitely left me in tears and im glad they got that and happy with the way you wrote that. freaking alice is crazy. i hope that her mom can help her. cant wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Teenage Girl Drama

wow this was a shocker of a chapter!!!!! i love that we are finally learning why kirah is getting such terrible treatment.... and i loved that we actually got to see the extent of it in the beginning of the chapter.... but damn! how could you just end it there?! cant wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Rites of Passage

wow these last few chapters have been ridiculous!!! i cannot wait for more! i hated that one of their children got hurt but i love how true to the story it was. i think it was definitely needed, at least someone to get hurt, so the threat was still real and an actual threat. i feel so sorry for princepessa for that asshole boyfriend... and i hope that edward starts taking care of himself. cant wait for more. for all of those chapters i didnt review, im sorry and just know that i read them all and loved them all. i got in a bad habit of not reviewing if i read a chapter on my phone (which i've mostly been doing) and am trying to change that. thankfully i left all the inbox notifications and can go back and give more love to the authors i forgot.

Summary:

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Edward Cullen found the love of his life six years ago at summer camp, but after losing contact with her, he doesn't know where to begin the search for his lost love. That is until Emmett shows up with a couple of surprises of his own.

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: The Forbidden Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14610 Read Count: 2009
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2013 Updated: 17 Apr 2013
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Thanks to My Brother, the Bear

i really really liked this. it was sweet with a tiny bit of angst and i just loved the characters and the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

She's lost her muse. He's missing inspiration. When Bella and Edward meet, will they be able to heal the tattered pieces of their hearts? Or will they forever be alone?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131985 Read Count: 92177
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 30 Jan 2018
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 03 May 2015 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Woah... that came out of left field. Reading it, I literally said, "holy shit". Lol. definitely can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Hmm that's good to know. I liked Renee's reaction. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I loved the boy talk on this chapter! And I love that Bella told him so much. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Hmm this was interesting. I didn't really like the end but I'm curious to see how it all plays out. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

dang... lots of stuff. love renee. hate that asshole guy. he needs to die.. or you know, go to jail and stuff. cant wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I am obsessed with this story! I rarely read stories I see on Facebook anymore but I am so glad I read this one!!!! Cannot wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow this was an intense chapter! I really liked it. Though she's freaking out about all the information, I'm glad she's getting more information. Cant wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Ugh so many more questions! Can't wait for the next chapter! I liked the talk between Carlisle and Bella. I really hope he starts getting therapy eventually now that she can afford it!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

i liked this chapter. i really like how you're writing the relationship with bella and all of her family members because of how real it seems. cant wait for more. loved the part at then end with emmett, lol, just love him.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I liked this. I liked seeing more of rose. I'm worried about alice though! I loved bella's vulnerablity at the end asking him to stay, and also him offering to go with her when she talks to her family. Excited for more.

Mafia Princess by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2545]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella del Cigno (21) is the daughter of the infamous mob boss, Charlie del Cigno (Cigno means swan in Italian). He's ruthless, cunning and deadly. The FBI wants to put an end to him but can't ever find enough evidence linking to him back to various crimes. Isabella is just as cunning and deadly but she lives the life of the mafia elite - fast cars, endless money and anything her heart desires, except freedom from the tyranny of her father. Charlie doesn't want his only child to be killed by his arch enemies, the Volturi, so Isabella is closely guarded.

Edward Cullen (26) is a special agent in the FBI. He's chosen to infiltrate the del Cigno Syndicate of the mob. He works his way through the ranks and is eventually hired as Bella's bodyguard. Initially, he can't stand Bella - he thinks she's a whiny, self-centered, enabled b*tch. Then, she gets shot at and Edward knows he was chosen for this mission for a specific reason. Yes, he wants to bring down the del Cigno Syndicate but he must save Isabella, who has a secret of her own...

How can Edward fulfill his obligation for the FBI but still keep the girl?

MP

 

Banner created by Evilnat

Banner by Mandy and Fic Featured on Ms. Swan's Bookstore!  http://swansbookstore.blogspot.com/2013/12/mafia-princess-by-tufano79.html

Mafia Princess

 

Favorite Scream


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 201 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 240258 Read Count: 1130015
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2013 Updated: 12 Nov 2013
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 178: Chapter 178

I liked this. I'm glad to know that he wasn't actually one of aro's men. I'm glad that Edward went to her and they could talk, and I'm glad they are just going to date and start slow. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 186: Chapter 186

I liked this, especially that aro blew up when she sai he had no testicles, lol. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 172: Chapter 172

I'm so glad that Bella and Charlie had such a good night!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 171

I liked this. I'm glad Bella didn't back down when he said he was disappointed. 

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 170

Awe poor Edward... I can just feel his disappointment. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 169: Chapter 169

ive read the last couple chapters and loved them. im so glad that charlie is her biological father. i really didn't think that would be a lie for some reason. i love the bonding time and cant wait for more.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 180: Chapter 180

I liked this. I'm glad he knows to let his heart heal if she walks away again. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 179: Chapter 179

This was good. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 173

I liked that Edward tried to comfort hurt but knew that it wasn't working and to call someone else. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 174

Wow this was rough for Edward. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 175

I liked this... Even though she's being irrational it's great to get in her heard... Though what a bitch for taking carina! Lol can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 185: Chapter 185

Sorry I'm not reviewing every chapter. I've been reading on my phone and don't like to review on it as much as on a computer. I've liked the last couple chapters but I'm so ready for Bella's turn.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 189: Chapter 189

i really liked the last couple chapters. im so glad that bella got through her testimony, that aro is going to die, and that bella is making progress, letting edward touch her scars, feeling better, knowing she wants to get everything back. cant wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 200: Chapter 200

so this review goes for the last couple of chapters too... i've loved them! i love the growth and love that continued to occurr... and the wedding was awesome! i LOVED the ending with their own little bambina!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 201: Chapter 201

so this review goes for the last couple of chapters too... i've loved them! i love the growth and love that continued to occurr... and the wedding was awesome! i LOVED the ending with their own little bambina!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23443
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

man i really freaking love this story so much! i love that bella/isadora is finally feeling love that she enver had before.... and the same for edward. cant wait for more!

Summary:

 

Bella slips from her husband in the middle of the night escaping the grasp of her abusive husband and father. Fearing she will never escape the long arms of the law, Isabella does everything in her power to get as far away as possible. With a little help along her way, Isabella finally finds the heaven and the life she always wanted.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5369 Read Count: 1375
[Report This] Published: 17 Sep 2013 Updated: 17 Sep 2013
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Escaping Hell

ahhh!!! no... im so sad there isn't any more yet. please please please update soon!!!! i want to know how alice knew that? is edward her brother? ahh i want more!

Puppy Love by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Puppy Love

Puppy Love takes place between The Geek's Guide to Parenthood and Surviving the Teenage Dream. Kyra is in eighth grade, Owen in seventh. Mia and Masen are both in third grade. Masen, on his way home from school, finds a dog hiding in the bushes. He takes him home, hiding him his bedroom. Edward and Owen are sneezing something awful and they cannot figure out why.

 


There will be kid cuteness, SGD/Nerdella loving and dog adoption (along with some major allergy medication dispensation). Poor SGD … 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Family, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, A Nerd Story of Love Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11416 Read Count: 2533
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2013 Updated: 19 Oct 2013
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Puppy Love: an ANSOL Outtake

Ugh this made me cry :( so well written but so sad. Can't wait for more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Isabella Cullen is at home in Washington State. She's a middle school teacher, missing her husband, who is deployed in Afghanistan. It's been over a year since she's last seen her husband and this will be the second Christmas in a row that he will miss, with no luck in sight of his request of leave being approved. Her only wish is for her husband to be safe, in her arms, on Christmas.

Across the globe, Edward Cullen is working his hardest to grant his wife's wish of being home for Christmas. He also wants to tell her, face-to-face, that after his tour of duty is over, that Edward would be returning home. Permanently. Will he be able to make it home to his beautiful wife?

 

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Banner by Chandrakanta!! Thank you! 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Bella's Christmas Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15455 Read Count: 6336
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2013 Updated: 24 Dec 2013
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this was really beautiful!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 478519
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am definitely intrigued by this. Can't wait for more!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113790
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 3 (part 2)

So I forgot to email you about not getting the updates. Thought I'd check and there were so many!! :)  I love this story. I love how much edward loves Charlie and how devastated he is when Charlie cries. Loved the blow our and bath timw, lol. I love the part with bella, though I bet if she would have told him how much esme paid, he would have easily given her so much more. Cannot wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Well, I email them to subscribers and then post here the next day. I'll do my best to get the story on my website as well. http://njcoleauthor.wix.com/njcole#!home/mainPage

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG I can already tell I will love this story and I cannot wait for more!!!! Please please please more :D



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you do. I will update soon, but if you want it sooner you can subscribe and I will email you the next chapter as soon as I can. http://njcoleauthor.wix.com/njcole#!home/mainPage

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 (part 2)

Ugh love this story so much. I haven't been getting emails with the updatez though :( can't wait for more! 



Author's Response:

really? that worries me. Email me at nocturnalem@gmail.com and I'll see if you're on the list.

Summary:

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Sequel to Silent Wishes. Bella and Edward overcame the odds and found their happy ending, but will it last? All they have now are whispered hopes of a future worth fighting for.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75889 Read Count: 21380
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2015 Updated: 30 Oct 2022
Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Love this story! So glad for an update!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Love this story! So glad for an update!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ugh again !! You stop it there?!? So happy that Alice is awake! Cannot wait for more.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow holy crap. I cannot wait for more. Please please please update soon. I need to know she is okay. And I love that they went to phill.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

i really liked this chapter. i LOVE that edward is seeking out help. excited for more

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 11 May 2022 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow so happy to see a chapter of this story! I loved that Edward had that convo with Carlisle and the moment between him and Charlie. I hope you have both of them going to therapy separately and together! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 11 May 2022 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow so happy to see a chapter of this story! I loved that Edward had that convo with Carlisle and the moment between him and Charlie. I hope you have both of them going to therapy separately and together! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 11 May 2022 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow so happy to see a chapter of this story! I loved that Edward had that convo with Carlisle and the moment between him and Charlie. I hope you have both of them going to therapy separately and together! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 22 May 2022 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

These poor characters. I sure hope something good happens for them soon!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 22 May 2022 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

These poor characters. I sure hope something good happens for them soon!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 22 May 2022 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

These poor characters. I sure hope something good happens for them soon!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 22 May 2022 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

These poor characters. I sure hope something good happens for them soon!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow this chapter had me sobbing. So much happened. I'm excited to see what's next!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow this chapter had me sobbing. So much happened. I'm excited to see what's next!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow this chapter had me sobbing. So much happened. I'm excited to see what's next!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow this chapter had me sobbing. So much happened. I'm excited to see what's next!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

i liked this chapter. i like that they seem to really be talking finally. excited for more.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow what a tear jerker of a chapter! It was so good. I'm excited for more. Especially Alice getting better.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow what a tear jerker of a chapter! It was so good. I'm excited for more. Especially Alice getting better.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2022 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow what a tear jerker of a chapter! It was so good. I'm excited for more. Especially Alice getting better.

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh wow a lot happened in this chapter!!!! I loved the beginning with Charlie and really hope that Edward and Charlie's relationship progresses to parental/paternal. And holy crap the ending!!! Especially after Edwards reflection about Christmas. I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!! And their reunion!

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2022 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh wow a lot happened in this chapter!!!! I loved the beginning with Charlie and really hope that Edward and Charlie's relationship progresses to parental/paternal. And holy crap the ending!!! Especially after Edwards reflection about Christmas. I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!! And their reunion!