Reviews by lmw
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310071
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I can't wait for you to update!  I want to know what is going to happen next.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has to raise his three kids alone after his wife dies. Little does he know that she plans on helping him out every step of the way. All Human.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19973 Read Count: 3265
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last

That letter brokw my heart.  This was a great ending.  i feel you left it full of hope for Edward.  This was a good story!

Sons of Silence by Jezzeria Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Edward, Bella, Jasper and Alice believe in white supremacy after years of misjudged actions. How many lives will they destroy before they finally destroy their own? Very Mature Content. Please read disclaimer before reading. AU AH OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19501 Read Count: 1828
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Acceptance

I was aprehensive about reading your story as I just don't like the subject matter.  I've tried to watch American History X and I just can't, even if it is on tv and it is edited, I can't do it.  You're writing about a very upsetting problem.

With all of that being said, I'm intersted in where you are going with this story. It seems like Bella has hit a turning point.  Edward doesn't seem as far gone as Jasper and Alice, but I'm curious how he will act once he learns Bella is going over to Angela's for dinner.

You're writing is strong (so stronge in fact that I skimmed through the beating of the 16 year old boy at the bar and skimmed through the beating/rape of the woman.  i'm not stupid, i know what happened.  This isn't a reflection of your writing, just the subject matter, which you gave proper warning about). 

the subject matter is indeed hard to stomach, but the story is intereting. I want to see how it turns out. 

Waiting for the next one!

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36529
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue 2: A Little Piece of Happily Ever After

It was rainy and cruddy outside today so i read your entire story today and I have to say I really loved it. i loved your descriptions of events tha toccured (they weren't to graphic) and I loved how you developed and wrote the characters.  Excellent job!

Summary: Past Featured Story

A year ago, Isabella Swan was new at school and instantly gained acceptance. Unfortunately, a certain bronze haired new kid isn't so lucky. Hidden friendships slowly build and blossom into more. Will it be social suicide? Rated M for language, will eventually go up.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90319 Read Count: 20893
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I thnk this story is really sweet.  Can't wait to read more.

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73145
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain

I liekd this chapter.  I'm gla dyou had Bella by his side.  Also, loved the part about his mother's nexklace and his grandparent's rings.  That was sweet.  h and I like how we (and Edward too) have closure on Lucy.

Great chapter.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Dancing

Great chapter...it was sweet that Bella wrote the letter to Edwrad's mom.  Can't wait for an update!

 

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl

I really liked this chapter.  I liked seeing Edward interact with Seth and Charlie.  Yah for Charlie for really getting Jake help.  Great chapter, can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break

I didn't see this coming!  I was shocked! What a great chapter.  I'm waiting patiently for the next one!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Dosed

I loved this story and am very attatched to it.  I'm so sad to see it go, but Im happy that Bella got her happy ending (and Edward too!).  I think it was a perfect ending.

Have fun on yoru vacation!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue

Loved the story and loved the ending! I'm going to miss this story, it really was great!  Im glad after everything they had been through they got their happy ending.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1247312
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Hi,

I'm a new reader.  Over the past few days I have read your story and I really like it.  This chapter was a little hard to swollow, howver you did give fair warning).  I can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I did give warning, and I cried while I wrote it, then agonized over posting it. But it was the worst that Bella went through during the marriage...thanks for reading and posting a comment ...lml

The Path We Choose by les16 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: This is an AH story with an older Edward who is a single father of 7 year old twins. Bella is a 24 year old model with a heartbreaking past. She’s given up everything to help those she loves and when she and Edward cross paths in Central Park; will they each have found exactly what they both have been longing for?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Single parents , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 627008 Read Count: 146873
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2010 Updated: 24 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue

I like how you started the story.  Can't wait to find out what the secret is.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. I am glad you like what you have read so far. There are 38 chapters of this story posted on FFN already and I hope to update quickly over here to get caught up. Hope to hear from you again soon!

les16~~

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I likedthis chapter.  Poor Bella and company-they have lived through a lot of sadness.


Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hello again! So glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a review. Yeah, they've been through a lot of sadness but they are stronger people for it. Hope to hear from you again! Don't forget I have the story posted over on FFN and there are now 39 chapters completed over there. More to come here soon!

les16~~

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I am really enjoying this story so far.  i can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad you liked hearing from Edward! He's up again next and it won't be long until I post again! Hope you like that chapter as well! Please be sure to let me know, I really love hearing from you!

les16~

Parasite by fallanydeeper Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a young woman who has struggled living through her world of drug abuse. This one shot shows the struggles and heartache she has faced over the past two years.

This is an intense and quite upsetting story, so please be warned before you read.

Rated for language, lemons and suggestion of rape.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8322 Read Count: 263
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was such an emotion piece of work.  It was very powerful.  I had tears in my eyes at the end.  You did an excellent job writing this. 



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It was emotional for me to write as aspects of this story have appeared in my personal life. Thank you for reading and I hope you'll recommend this to your friends.

Please Remember Me by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

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The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into.  NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.

This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.

 Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;

http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme  copyrightbabylou23@2010.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Excellent chapter, I liked flashback and Edward's talk with Charlie on New Years.  Can't wait for the  next chapter!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I like Tanya.  i like how Edward feels like he has to take care of her and Rose.  Great chapter.  Can't wait for an update.



Author's Response:

Me 2, we get to see a bit of the old Edward when he is with them. Thank you bb

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I can't wait to read more of this story.  I wonder how Bella might reappera in their lives again.  Great chapter, can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

thank you, i'm glad you are enjoying it

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Smart man

Interesting chapter. You're right, the chapter was a little icky due to subject contanet but hey, you warned us, right?

I'm guessing who ever the narrator is is the guy or knows who took Bella years ago.  I'm also guessing it's for sex trafficing?  Intersting twist if i am right

Great chapter and I can't wait to read your next chapter!

Congrats on finishing school for the summer!



Author's Response:

thank you, i know it's not easy to read, i like your theory ;-) bb

Speak by babylou23 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 207]
Summary:

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Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken  word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.

This story is about how the strength that family  love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.

 check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com

Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.

I do not own twilight but I do own Speak  copyrightbabylou23@2010.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27078
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2016
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

So sweet...I love Edward.  He seems very calm and very fatherly, which is why I think Leah took to him.  Plus she seems to have made a connection with Anthony so maybe she trusts him because he's Anthony's dad?  I don't know but I really enjoy this story!  It's so different from your other one (that I am also reading now).



Author's Response:

I agree, I think they are a few factors that make Leah relax around him. I'm glad you are enjoying it and I hope that enjoy Please Remember me also :-)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I'm all caught up now.  I really like this story and can't wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you, i hope your enjoy the next one

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: prologue

What a way to start a story!  Wow....onto the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you, hope you enjoy it

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I reread the chapter twice and did not spot any connections (except Bella's mother died in child birth and among everything else that was going on with Bella she might have been nervous).  I love this version of Edward.  It's somethign about him having a kid and being a cop (and he isn't a jerky cop, he's a nice cop).  I'm intersted in learning about Edward's past.

Poor Bella.  She was delt with rotten cards. At least she had a good support system around her to help her. Also love how the Edward's parents were helping her out when Edward didn't even know who she was.

 

I can't wait to read more!

 



Author's Response:

thank you, we will learn about Edward past later, He has issues of his own. I also love that he a normal everyday cop.

 

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

it can't be James....can it? Good chapter, can't wait to read the next.



Author's Response:

my lips are sealed, lol thank you

Summary:

A small group of people struggle with the drama that comes before two of the friends' wedding. Secrets and lies become known at the worst of times and everyone's lives are affected. There is cheating, lies, blackmail, and all different POVs



Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16328 Read Count: 625
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2010 Updated: 23 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Do, I Don't

Um, wow is all I can really say, what a messed up group of friends!  i really enjoyed readign this.  I think you need to do a sequel.

PS-I love your banner!

Summary:

A Bella/Edward Story

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Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH

The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.

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Warning:

This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.   

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 30892
[Report This] Published: 29 Oct 2010 Updated: 15 Nov 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: 4 a.m.

That was so sad.  Are you reallygoing to kill him?  I can kind of see where esme is coming from.  She just wants him to be in peace and she thinks sheis doing best for Edward.  I can also see where Bella is coming from and am glad that Carlilse is on her side.

Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

I can honestly say, with this chapter, I stuck to true life events. However you take that statement is up to you. 

It's a hard situation tha tBella is in right now. She's upset that Edward is so bad, and yet, his mother has all but put him in the ground. I know that people act differently when faced with a situation like this. However, knowing that really doesn't make it any better to experience. 

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Hell & Consequences

Poor Edward...all he wants to do is go home.  I understand where Esme and Carlisle are coming from but still.  Poor Bella because she is just kind of keeping to herself knowing Edward wouldn't be happy with this choice.

Also, yah for Bella for conronting Esme with the life support stuff.

Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

It's a hard situation for everyone involved. The situation that Bella has been placed in isn't any easier. Things will work out the way they should. :)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Nobody's Daughter

First of all, who cares about the story when real life happens....I hope that your husband is okay and healthy. You will be in my thoughts.

BTW-great chapter and i look foward when your life isn't so hectic and you return.


Take care.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your concern. He's actually awake now, but not completely back yet. We're all just waiting to see cause it takes time for him to recover. 

I have 2 chapters on back up that only need to go to the beta, so those should still get out within the 2 week period. It's the ones I still have to write that may take longer. Since he's doing better and is still improving, I'm hopeful it won't be long until I'm writing again. I really appreciate your understanding. 

 

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Why I'm Here

What a hopeful chapter!  I can't wait to see what comes next in the story.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you found it hopeful. I'm working on the next one and hope to have it finished soon. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Sunday

I liked this chapter and I liked that we got to see Edward's therapy.  I also liked how we got to see a little of his therapy.  Bella really ahs her work cut out for her, adn I'm not just talking about with Edward.  I have a feeling that there might be a showdown soon with her and the Cullens.



Author's Response:

Everything is building, and it will eventually come to a head. Bella is going to continue to do things the way she has been, regardless of how his parents feel about it. This will lead to some interesting times in future chapters. :)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Don't Take Me for Granted

I was worried when Bella and Edward went back to their place that Edward was going to find drugs.  I'm glad it ended up sweeter than that.

I hope Esme doens't get jealous that Bella was able to talk Edward into taking his meds (it sounds liek something she'd be upset with).

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Not Sorry

Yah for Bella for standing up to Esme.  I wonder if it'll come back and bite her in the butt though?  Also, yah for Emmett being on Bella's side.  I kind of thought he would be, but still.  Can't wait for an update!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

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Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 202399
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This chapter was very cute! I liked it alot.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I got teary eyed reading this, espically the ending with Broody and Edward.  what a sweet chapter!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I smiled the entire time I read this chapter!  It was so cute and I can't wait to read what's going on with Lauren!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Who is Vic?  Is Edward really not perfect?  No!!  Poor Bella (maybe, it could be a cousin or something, right?  A good friend?  An older forgotten about sister?  I'm just trying not to jump to conclusions!).

Can't wait for you to update!



Author's Response:

lol, I promise to explain:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like the story so far.  i like reading the different point of views. I can't wait to read the next chapter and to get to know the backstory and what happened to Alex and Anthony's dad and mom.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I liked this chapter a lot.  Cant wait to read the next one!



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Cute chapter!  Can't wait to read the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Can't wait to read about the girls night out!! good chapter adn can't wait to read the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This story is so cute and enjoyable!  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved this chapter, it was very sweet! Great job.  Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Once again, I loved it! can't wait to read the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I couldn't help but smile  when I read this chapter.  You did a great job writing it and I can't wait to read about dinner with the fam!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) It was one of my favorites:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

As usaual, so sweet! Can;t wait to se what is next for these two!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

As usaual, I loved this chapter!  They are so sweet together!  Cna't wait for the next chapter and to see what Bella does about Lauren.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I feel better now that you have explained Edward's actions. He is not a jerk...yah!  Poor Vic though, that is sad.

i can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens next for these two.



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loved the chapter!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I love this story.  it is really sweet adn I can't wait to read what's next!

PS-I hope your daughter is okay.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) She's good now:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Very cute chapter.  I can't wait to hear about the adult's date night without kids!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I love this story and can't wait to read more.  I hope Lauren doesn't start trouble.  Honestly, it wasn't Bella's responsiblity to alert her about Alex being in the hospital. Lauren is only becoming part of their lives again.



Author's Response:

THank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

So cute....i loved it!  Can't wait for another update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Great chapter.  I am not a fan of Lauren.  I think she was the one who over reacted more so than Bella.  Literally, Lauren has been back in their lives for two minutes and should realize that before she freaked out.

i can't wait to read about the search for their perfect house!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Can't wait to read about Thanksgiving day...love the story by the way!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Loved this chapter...adn the ending.  So sweet.  Can't wait for another update!

Innocence by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When you find yourself needing who you know you shouldn't want, do you turn away from him or embrace him? Now being continued. AH & NC-17

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117172 Read Count: 88507
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2010 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hmmm.....I didn't expect that from Esme.  Poor Alice, I feel bad for her.  She and Bella used to have a good relationship and now it's so strained.  And Bella...poor Bella!  She is at so many cross roads adn so confused!

Great chapter...can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Interesting twist at the end! I can't wait to read more about their trip.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself?  AH/AU

 

A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47536
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I'm getting nervous.  This chapter was a lot more angsty than I was inticipating.  Poor Bella, she doesn't even know what is in store for her from James.  I can't wait to read more (and I would love to read an out take from the slimball's POV).

 



Author's Response:

Don't worry, while there may be more obstacles, things are definitely progressing for E&B :)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

First of all, I snuck over here from Twilighted to read all of the posted chapters of this story and I have to say a few things.  

I LOVE the way you have written Bella in this story.  I just really like how strong and real and just the type of person she is.

I am so sad about Edward's lying and his life going downhill.  It's so sad and heart breaking to read.  I hope he is able to turn around and somehow redeem himself.  He makes me so sad.

Poor Bella.  Her world is crumbling around her.  Also, i do not like nor trust James.

With all of this being said....I LOVE this story and please update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I always hated how Bella was portrayed in Twilight....I love strong, independent Bella characters.  That's someone I want to root for :)  And, Edward...well I still want to root for him because he has a good heart and a stupid brain - and also because I know what will happen to him haha ;)  The next update should be soon.  I'm already halfway done Chapter 20.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

this chapter was so sad!!!  Poor Bella and I even feel a little bad for Edward.  he has a problem and does need help.  I can't wait to see how you will fix this and get them back together.  BTW-great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  It's gonna take some time for both of them...Edward's gonna spiral for a bit.  As much as Bella leaving should be enough for him to stop, at this point he's an addict - and he needs to realize that.  Don't worry, I don't plan on dragging it out long.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I love this story!  Poor Bella.  I hope nothing more happens with James other than he is just a creep.  I don't have a good feeling about him.  i also like how Jacob came to her aid.  I hope they remain friends too.

And Edward...oh Edward.  Good luck winning the girl back.

Can't wait for another update!



Author's Response:

Thanks :)  We'll get to see what Edward's been up to in the next chapter and things will slowly turn around for him in the next chapter.  And James is a creep ;)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

AHHHHH!! I kind of  thought something was going to happen when Edward left the house.  You're killing us with a James pOV first!  Oh well, we'll just have to wait and see what happens.  Great chapter and I can't wait to read teh next!

Oh yea, congrats on the house!



Author's Response:

The James POV will be a PART of the next Chapter - don't worry, you won't have to wait for anything regarding what happens to B&E - that'll be in there too :)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Awesome, awesome awesome chapter!  can't wait fort he next one!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 58822
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present

Wow, I wasn't expecting that.  Wonder what Jacob was dong (or even Charlie?).  Can't wait to find out who the "killer" is!



Author's Response:

i may include a small snippit of charlie in next chapter... he is our connection to the case. thank you for the review

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company

I'm nervous for Bella and Edward and their child now that Renee is being selfish and joining the dark side.

Can't wait to read what's next!



Author's Response:

thankyou so much for your review, it wont last long:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The ties that bind

Edward is so sweet! I really love this story! Good luck with the move and I can't wait for your next update.



Author's Response:

Thankyou:)

The Third Wife by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 229]
Summary:

 

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New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!

In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?

AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55386
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like the idea of this story because it is totally different fron anything out there, but I have a question.  Is Bella still 16 when this part of the chapter is taken place? 

-Lisa



Author's Response:

she is but its been bother me. i have been thinking of changing it to seventeen or eighteen. I know legally someone can be married at sixteen with parental consent but i have kids and its been bothering. so i would love your thoughts on changing it. the thought came to me for a contest and even though i know sec's do it earlier i think i would be happier if i changed.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

What a cliff hanger!!!  What happened?  can't wait to read the enxt chapter.

Summary:

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Santa was a Prick, or should i say Edward. What kind of creep breaks into your house looking for a Christmas list? Rather than ask questions first, i did what Charlie always taught me to do if the house had a intruder. I SHOT HIM.

Warning: Mention of child abuse, domestic violence, rude humor, small ooc, and  Blitzen being a ass. You've been warned.

Not your average Christmas story, Give it a chance. Daily Updates.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crackfic
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8395 Read Count: 926
[Report This] Published: 19 Dec 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Mashed Taters

I really love this story...can't wait to read more...happy new year!

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 73160
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions

OMG-I just foudn yoru story and have been reading it for a few days.  i literally burst into tears with the begining of this chapter.  I normally don't cry when reading, but it was written so well. I could envision everything happeneing.  Excellent chapter



Author's Response:

Sorry for the tears but thank you so much for the review.  I love that it moved you.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

You just about killd me with the Edward scene! I thougth she was dead, well, she is, but dead like Edward adn not coming back dead...you get what I mean right?  Excellent chapter....i'm gong to read on!



Author's Response:

Yes, I know what you mean and yes that was my intention all along.  I wanted Bella to choose to be with Carlisle; not as a concelation, but as her actual choice.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me

I have to say I am enjoying your little story a lot!  It's emotional and entertaining....it's a great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the reviews!  I am trying to write the next chapter, but as I get near the end of this, they seem to be getting harder to write.  Never fear...I will NEVER abandon my story.  They are my literary children and I hold them all close to my hert. ;)

Till next time

Nickey

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

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Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 222737
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I loved this story and am sad to see it finished, but am looking forward to your next story!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am really enjoying this story.  I can't wait to read about Bella and Charlie's talk.  I am also happy that she didn't get spanked for leaving Edward (even if she only ended up downstairs).

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh no, what's going to happen to Bella?  I'm kind of afraid of Carlisle.  Good cahpter and I  can't wait to see what's next.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I liked this chapter and can't wait to find out more about Carlisle and Edward's relationship and why Edward was kicked out of the house.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh no! Poor Bella and Edward.  Edward just poured his heart to her and can't man up to his father.  I agree with Bella though.

I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

My favorite part of this chapter was the sweet conversation that Edward had with Irinia.  I really liked this chapter.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I can't see Carlisle agreeing to this.  I smell trouble!

On the flip side, I'm glad B and E have settled things!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow....intense.  I kind of feel bad for Edward, he has to be in shock over the baby but Bella deserves better.

I haveto also add wow Carlisile, didn't see that one coming!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I had no doubts...knew he was the baby daddy all along.  I hope if Bella does take him back it isn't over night and he has to earn her trust again.  He was a jerk to her and shouldn't be forgiven that easily.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Poor Bella.  Edward is such a guy.  Although he has paid her bills and he took her out for dinner, he hasn't done anything to prove that he is sorry.  yes he wants to be there for the baby, but what about Bella?  I think he needs to try a little harder. He has to do something that has nothing at all with money and something more personal.  Just my thought, for what it's worth.

I love the story!  I think  you need to do what is best for you and post whenever you can (although it wouldn't be so bad if you posted next week!).

 

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Such a great chapter!  Can't wait for the next!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I'm kind of bummed that there are only a few chapters left. 

Good fro Bella.  She is trying to prove that she can take care of herself.  i don't blaime her for feeling almost defeated, but at the same time I also don't balme Charlie either.  He was absent for so many years (not his fault) and he is trying to make up for it the only way he knows how to.

I'm also glad that Edward backed down a little bit towards the end.  Can't wait to read what's up next!

 

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I think Bella should be the bigger person and go to dinner.  It isn't like Carlisle is going to be the only preson there.  Also, I think she should tell Edward but not force him to go and should obey Carlisle's wishes.  I'm glad Bella and Edward seem to be getting closer!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I liked this chapter a lot.  There was some talking and a bit of arguement and a little bit of loving going on.  It was a good chapter.  can't wait for the next one!

PS-I'm sorry to hear about your grandfarther's passing :(  My thougths are with you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 157886
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Poor current and flashback Bella.  Good for Edward for sticking up fro Bella with his parents (and Alice adn Emmett too).  I'm nervous about the crazy guy who has captured Bella and her classroom but am hoping it will all work out okay.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great chapter...I'm wondering what will happen to Bella.  I also can't wait to read more of the flashback.  Maybe Bella convienced Carlisle and Esme to change?  Can't wit for an update!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm nervous for Bella because Phill seems crazy and abusive (well, duh.  I'm so articulate some times).  he doesn't seem like a nice guy and all Edward wants to do is protect his wife.  Can't wait to read some more!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Good chapter.  I wonder how Bella's relationship with the elder Cullens is now.  Carlisle seemed nice enough but Esme, she was so mean!  Edward was very sweet to her though (which is why she and everyone else loves him :))



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I think i pretty much hate the Cullens and Dwyer equally.  The Cullens because they are willing to throw away their relationship with all of their children because they don't approve of their signifgant other even though they don't know them.  Dwyer is just a wild animal who needs t to be put down.

can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

As a teacher of younger children myself, no there is no way in the world i could have chosen just two children to stay with me.  It would be just too impossible.

I wonder what will happen.  Can't wait to see Edward's POV.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Please hurry and update!  this was a huge cliffie!  i also hope that you show us more of Alice and Jasper at the justice of the peace (when Esme, Carlisle and Bella enter).  Great chapter...patiently waiting the next one!

Summary:

Bella is a senior in college looking for a realtionship. Edward is a firefighter who wants someone to care for. They are set up together by none other than Alice. See where the road of life takes them and why you have to 'Just Have Faith'. AH

Epilogue was been reposted after many questions


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112119 Read Count: 47867
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2011
Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Forks

This was another cute chapter.   Kind of interesting that Charlie has met Edward before (glad he likes h im!).  Also thought it was cute how Edward texted her to let Bella know he was okay after the fire.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I thought it would be funny if Charlie knew him. I also thought it was and 'Edward' thing to do to let her know that he was ok.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Seeing Him/ Seeing Her

Cute chapter! Cna't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Next chapter up tomorrow.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: A Sad Edward

I'm kind of nervous for Edward (fire is my biggest fear).  Wildfires sound kind of scary. 

I love how Bella and Edward just clicked right off the bat.  It seems like they were meant to be together (of course!).

can't wait for an update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I won't say what happenes with the wildefire.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Meadow

I liked this chapter.  It was sweet.  I'm still a little nervous for Edward and the fire.



Author's Response:

You will have to wait and see with the fire. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: LA and Dress Shopping

i don't llike the feeling I have about the wild fires.  I love Bella and Edward though...they are adorable.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: lmw Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Happy 22nd Birthday To Me

Cute chapter...btw-I don't like your author's note when you say wait and see.  Told you hI had a bad feeling.  Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Sorry, I had to put somthing in there.