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Okay, this area has been blank for so long, now that I have written almost two full story and one more in the works, I feel it's time to fill this thing out!
I love to write. I have been writing stories of some sorts since I began holding a pencil. This is the way I destress. I hope you enjoy what I write. I know some of my stories aren't for everyone, but all i ask is just please be respectful.
I tend to set the stories I write in areas in which I am most familar with. I'm an east cost girl, which is why Boston has been mentioned in my first two stories as well as the setting for the story that will be coming up next. I also love New York City adn feel that it is my second home. I'm branching out by writing about places I don't know.
When I am not writing and out in the real world, I am a preschool teacher. It is fun for now, but I would really love to do something else some day.
Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy what I write :)
15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC
Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 310958
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
I can't wait for you to update! I want to know what is going to happen next.
Edward has to raise his three kids alone after his wife dies. Little does he know that she plans on helping him out every step of the way. All Human.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19973 Read Count: 3266
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Peace, At Last
That letter brokw my heart. This was a great ending. i feel you left it full of hope for Edward. This was a good story!
Edward, Bella, Jasper and Alice believe in white supremacy after years of misjudged actions. How many lives will they destroy before they finally destroy their own? Very Mature Content. Please read disclaimer before reading. AU AH OOC
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19501 Read Count: 1842
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Acceptance
I was aprehensive about reading your story as I just don't like the subject matter. I've tried to watch American History X and I just can't, even if it is on tv and it is edited, I can't do it. You're writing about a very upsetting problem.
With all of that being said, I'm intersted in where you are going with this story. It seems like Bella has hit a turning point. Edward doesn't seem as far gone as Jasper and Alice, but I'm curious how he will act once he learns Bella is going over to Angela's for dinner.
You're writing is strong (so stronge in fact that I skimmed through the beating of the 16 year old boy at the bar and skimmed through the beating/rape of the woman. i'm not stupid, i know what happened. This isn't a reflection of your writing, just the subject matter, which you gave proper warning about).
the subject matter is indeed hard to stomach, but the story is intereting. I want to see how it turns out.
Waiting for the next one!
Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.
Banner by IllicitWriter
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36669
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Epilogue 2: A Little Piece of Happily Ever After
It was rainy and cruddy outside today so i read your entire story today and I have to say I really loved it. i loved your descriptions of events tha toccured (they weren't to graphic) and I loved how you developed and wrote the characters. Excellent job!
A year ago, Isabella Swan was new at school and instantly gained acceptance. Unfortunately, a certain bronze haired new kid isn't so lucky. Hidden friendships slowly build and blossom into more. Will it be social suicide? Rated M for language, will eventually go up.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90319 Read Count: 21076
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I thnk this story is really sweet. Can't wait to read more.
Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73190
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
I liekd this chapter. I'm gla dyou had Bella by his side. Also, loved the part about his mother's nexklace and his grandparent's rings. That was sweet. h and I like how we (and Edward too) have closure on Lucy.
Great chapter.
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Dancing
Great chapter...it was sweet that Bella wrote the letter to Edwrad's mom. Can't wait for an update!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Breaking the Girl
I really liked this chapter. I liked seeing Edward interact with Seth and Charlie. Yah for Charlie for really getting Jake help. Great chapter, can't wait to read more!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 We Build Then We Break
I didn't see this coming! I was shocked! What a great chapter. I'm waiting patiently for the next one!
Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Dosed
I loved this story and am very attatched to it. I'm so sad to see it go, but Im happy that Bella got her happy ending (and Edward too!). I think it was a perfect ending.
Have fun on yoru vacation!
Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
Loved the story and loved the ending! I'm going to miss this story, it really was great! Im glad after everything they had been through they got their happy ending.
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254416
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Hi,
I'm a new reader. Over the past few days I have read your story and I really like it. This chapter was a little hard to swollow, howver you did give fair warning). I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
I did give warning, and I cried while I wrote it, then agonized over posting it. But it was the worst that Bella went through during the marriage...thanks for reading and posting a comment ...lml
Summary: This is an AH story with an older Edward who is a single father of 7 year old twins. Bella is a 24 year old model with a heartbreaking past. She’s given up everything to help those she loves and when she and Edward cross paths in Central Park; will they each have found exactly what they both have been longing for?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Single parents , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , TBR
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 627008 Read Count: 148572
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Prologue
I like how you started the story. Can't wait to find out what the secret is.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and leaving a review. I am glad you like what you have read so far. There are 38 chapters of this story posted on FFN already and I hope to update quickly over here to get caught up. Hope to hear from you again soon!
les16~~
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I likedthis chapter. Poor Bella and company-they have lived through a lot of sadness.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Hello again! So glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a review. Yeah, they've been through a lot of sadness but they are stronger people for it. Hope to hear from you again! Don't forget I have the story posted over on FFN and there are now 39 chapters completed over there. More to come here soon!
les16~~
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I am really enjoying this story so far. i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
So glad you liked hearing from Edward! He's up again next and it won't be long until I post again! Hope you like that chapter as well! Please be sure to let me know, I really love hearing from you!
les16~
Bella Swan is a young woman who has struggled living through her world of drug abuse. This one shot shows the struggles and heartache she has faced over the past two years.
This is an intense and quite upsetting story, so please be warned before you read.
Rated for language, lemons and suggestion of rape.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8322 Read Count: 265
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
This was such an emotion piece of work. It was very powerful. I had tears in my eyes at the end. You did an excellent job writing this.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It was emotional for me to write as aspects of this story have appeared in my personal life. Thank you for reading and I hope you'll recommend this to your friends.
The day after Bella's 16th birthday, she disappears. Four years later and Edward still spends everyday looking for Bella. When he finally finds her, she does not remember who he is. Can Edward make her remember him and who she is or will she choose they life she was forced into. NC-17 for dark themes, lemons and language.
This is my first ff, I have another one which I will post soon. I am addicted to twilight fanfiction more than the books, all my stories are human and Edward and Bella.
Check out my blog for pictures and stuff;
http://babylou23-prm.blogspot.com
Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.
I do not own twilight but I do own Pleaserememberme copyrightbabylou23@2010.
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23908 Read Count: 4336
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Excellent chapter, I liked flashback and Edward's talk with Charlie on New Years. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I like Tanya. i like how Edward feels like he has to take care of her and Rose. Great chapter. Can't wait for an update.
Author's Response:
Me 2, we get to see a bit of the old Edward when he is with them. Thank you bb
Date: 20 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I can't wait to read more of this story. I wonder how Bella might reappera in their lives again. Great chapter, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
thank you, i'm glad you are enjoying it
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Smart man
Interesting chapter. You're right, the chapter was a little icky due to subject contanet but hey, you warned us, right?
I'm guessing who ever the narrator is is the guy or knows who took Bella years ago. I'm also guessing it's for sex trafficing? Intersting twist if i am right
Great chapter and I can't wait to read your next chapter!
Congrats on finishing school for the summer!
Author's Response:
thank you, i know it's not easy to read, i like your theory ;-) bb
Bella moves back to Forks after an unexpected event with her daughter Leah, Leah has not spoken word since the event. When Leah befriends a green eyed little boy next door, Bella so realises that his father may be the key to Leah's illness.
This story is about how the strength that family love can create and how two families joining can overcome anything life throughs at them.
check out my blog for pictures and stuff;http://babylou23-speak.blogspot.com
Disclaimer; All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creaters, or producers media franchise. No copyright infringement intended.
I do not own twilight but I do own Speak copyrightbabylou23@2010.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79551 Read Count: 27173
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
So sweet...I love Edward. He seems very calm and very fatherly, which is why I think Leah took to him. Plus she seems to have made a connection with Anthony so maybe she trusts him because he's Anthony's dad? I don't know but I really enjoy this story! It's so different from your other one (that I am also reading now).
Author's Response:
I agree, I think they are a few factors that make Leah relax around him. I'm glad you are enjoying it and I hope that enjoy Please Remember me also :-)
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3
I'm all caught up now. I really like this story and can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you, i hope your enjoy the next one
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: prologue
What a way to start a story! Wow....onto the next chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you, hope you enjoy it
Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
I reread the chapter twice and did not spot any connections (except Bella's mother died in child birth and among everything else that was going on with Bella she might have been nervous). I love this version of Edward. It's somethign about him having a kid and being a cop (and he isn't a jerky cop, he's a nice cop). I'm intersted in learning about Edward's past.
Poor Bella. She was delt with rotten cards. At least she had a good support system around her to help her. Also love how the Edward's parents were helping her out when Edward didn't even know who she was.
I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
thank you, we will learn about Edward past later, He has issues of his own. I also love that he a normal everyday cop.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
it can't be James....can it? Good chapter, can't wait to read the next.
Author's Response:
my lips are sealed, lol thank you
A small group of people struggle with the drama that comes before two of the friends' wedding. Secrets and lies become known at the worst of times and everyone's lives are affected. There is cheating, lies, blackmail, and all different POVs
Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16328 Read Count: 626
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I Do, I Don't
Um, wow is all I can really say, what a messed up group of friends! i really enjoyed readign this. I think you need to do a sequel.
PS-I love your banner!
A Bella/Edward Story
(Banner by AngelGoddess1981)
Bella loves Edward, much more than she should. Edward is an addict. Bella deals with it. Years of this cycle begin to take its toll, and Bella is fed up. A near fatal accident forces Edward into a coma, and Bella reexamines her previous decision. Will Bella stay, or is it all too much? OOC/AH
The story is based on events that happened to me in real life. I've just changed the situation some and adapted it to fit Stephanie Meyer's Characters.
(New Banner by DivineInspiration)
Warning:
This story is not intended for anyone under the age of 18. Some themes include underage drug abuse, adult drug abuse, violence while under the influence, poor judgment while intoxicated, graphic medical scenarios, graphic sexual situations that are consensual, explicit language, and extreme angst. Be advised, this work of fiction is not suitable for everyone. If you are under 18 or find these situations upsetting or uncomfortable, please move on. Otherwise, I urge you to read with caution.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148282 Read Count: 31012
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: 4 a.m.
That was so sad. Are you reallygoing to kill him? I can kind of see where esme is coming from. She just wants him to be in peace and she thinks sheis doing best for Edward. I can also see where Bella is coming from and am glad that Carlilse is on her side.
Can't wait for the update!
Author's Response:
I can honestly say, with this chapter, I stuck to true life events. However you take that statement is up to you.
It's a hard situation tha tBella is in right now. She's upset that Edward is so bad, and yet, his mother has all but put him in the ground. I know that people act differently when faced with a situation like this. However, knowing that really doesn't make it any better to experience.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Hell & Consequences
Poor Edward...all he wants to do is go home. I understand where Esme and Carlisle are coming from but still. Poor Bella because she is just kind of keeping to herself knowing Edward wouldn't be happy with this choice.
Also, yah for Bella for conronting Esme with the life support stuff.
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
It's a hard situation for everyone involved. The situation that Bella has been placed in isn't any easier. Things will work out the way they should. :)
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Nobody's Daughter
First of all, who cares about the story when real life happens....I hope that your husband is okay and healthy. You will be in my thoughts.
BTW-great chapter and i look foward when your life isn't so hectic and you return.
Take care.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your concern. He's actually awake now, but not completely back yet. We're all just waiting to see cause it takes time for him to recover.
I have 2 chapters on back up that only need to go to the beta, so those should still get out within the 2 week period. It's the ones I still have to write that may take longer. Since he's doing better and is still improving, I'm hopeful it won't be long until I'm writing again. I really appreciate your understanding.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Why I'm Here
What a hopeful chapter! I can't wait to see what comes next in the story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you found it hopeful. I'm working on the next one and hope to have it finished soon. Thanks for reading.
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Sunday
I liked this chapter and I liked that we got to see Edward's therapy. I also liked how we got to see a little of his therapy. Bella really ahs her work cut out for her, adn I'm not just talking about with Edward. I have a feeling that there might be a showdown soon with her and the Cullens.
Author's Response:
Everything is building, and it will eventually come to a head. Bella is going to continue to do things the way she has been, regardless of how his parents feel about it. This will lead to some interesting times in future chapters. :)
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Don't Take Me for Granted
I was worried when Bella and Edward went back to their place that Edward was going to find drugs. I'm glad it ended up sweeter than that.
I hope Esme doens't get jealous that Bella was able to talk Edward into taking his meds (it sounds liek something she'd be upset with).
Date: 03 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Not Sorry
Yah for Bella for standing up to Esme. I wonder if it'll come back and bite her in the butt though? Also, yah for Emmett being on Bella's side. I kind of thought he would be, but still. Can't wait for an update!
Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.
Banner by busymommy
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204484
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
This chapter was very cute! I liked it alot.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
I got teary eyed reading this, espically the ending with Broody and Edward. what a sweet chapter!
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I smiled the entire time I read this chapter! It was so cute and I can't wait to read what's going on with Lauren!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Who is Vic? Is Edward really not perfect? No!! Poor Bella (maybe, it could be a cousin or something, right? A good friend? An older forgotten about sister? I'm just trying not to jump to conclusions!).
Can't wait for you to update!
Author's Response:
lol, I promise to explain:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I like the story so far. i like reading the different point of views. I can't wait to read the next chapter and to get to know the backstory and what happened to Alex and Anthony's dad and mom.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I liked this chapter a lot. Cant wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Cute chapter! Can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Can't wait to read about the girls night out!! good chapter adn can't wait to read the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
This story is so cute and enjoyable! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I loved this chapter, it was very sweet! Great job. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Once again, I loved it! can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I couldn't help but smile when I read this chapter. You did a great job writing it and I can't wait to read about dinner with the fam!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) It was one of my favorites:)
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
As usaual, so sweet! Can;t wait to se what is next for these two!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
As usaual, I loved this chapter! They are so sweet together! Cna't wait for the next chapter and to see what Bella does about Lauren.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I feel better now that you have explained Edward's actions. He is not a jerk...yah! Poor Vic though, that is sad.
i can't wait to read the next chapter and see what happens next for these two.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I love this story. it is really sweet adn I can't wait to read what's next!
PS-I hope your daughter is okay.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) She's good now:)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Very cute chapter. I can't wait to hear about the adult's date night without kids!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I love this story and can't wait to read more. I hope Lauren doesn't start trouble. Honestly, it wasn't Bella's responsiblity to alert her about Alex being in the hospital. Lauren is only becoming part of their lives again.
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
So cute....i loved it! Can't wait for another update!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Great chapter. I am not a fan of Lauren. I think she was the one who over reacted more so than Bella. Literally, Lauren has been back in their lives for two minutes and should realize that before she freaked out.
i can't wait to read about the search for their perfect house!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Can't wait to read about Thanksgiving day...love the story by the way!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Loved this chapter...adn the ending. So sweet. Can't wait for another update!
When you find yourself needing who you know you shouldn't want, do you turn away from him or embrace him? Now being continued. AH & NC-17
Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117172 Read Count: 89061
Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Hmmm.....I didn't expect that from Esme. Poor Alice, I feel bad for her. She and Bella used to have a good relationship and now it's so strained. And Bella...poor Bella! She is at so many cross roads adn so confused!
Great chapter...can't wait to read more!
Date: 12 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Interesting twist at the end! I can't wait to read more about their trip.
He was the lead singer of The Volturi. One of People's Sexiest Men. I was a new recording artist with an entire album riding on my shoulders. We were Hollywood's newest "it couple." Until he ruined everything - our relationship...my career...his life. Can our love be saved if he can't even save himself? AH/AU
A story about love, lemons, lies...and learning to forgive.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 257507 Read Count: 47585
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I'm getting nervous. This chapter was a lot more angsty than I was inticipating. Poor Bella, she doesn't even know what is in store for her from James. I can't wait to read more (and I would love to read an out take from the slimball's POV).
Author's Response:
Don't worry, while there may be more obstacles, things are definitely progressing for E&B :)
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
First of all, I snuck over here from Twilighted to read all of the posted chapters of this story and I have to say a few things.
I LOVE the way you have written Bella in this story. I just really like how strong and real and just the type of person she is.
I am so sad about Edward's lying and his life going downhill. It's so sad and heart breaking to read. I hope he is able to turn around and somehow redeem himself. He makes me so sad.
Poor Bella. Her world is crumbling around her. Also, i do not like nor trust James.
With all of this being said....I LOVE this story and please update soon!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I always hated how Bella was portrayed in Twilight....I love strong, independent Bella characters. That's someone I want to root for :) And, Edward...well I still want to root for him because he has a good heart and a stupid brain - and also because I know what will happen to him haha ;) The next update should be soon. I'm already halfway done Chapter 20.
Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
this chapter was so sad!!! Poor Bella and I even feel a little bad for Edward. he has a problem and does need help. I can't wait to see how you will fix this and get them back together. BTW-great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) It's gonna take some time for both of them...Edward's gonna spiral for a bit. As much as Bella leaving should be enough for him to stop, at this point he's an addict - and he needs to realize that. Don't worry, I don't plan on dragging it out long.
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I love this story! Poor Bella. I hope nothing more happens with James other than he is just a creep. I don't have a good feeling about him. i also like how Jacob came to her aid. I hope they remain friends too.
And Edward...oh Edward. Good luck winning the girl back.
Can't wait for another update!
Author's Response:
Thanks :) We'll get to see what Edward's been up to in the next chapter and things will slowly turn around for him in the next chapter. And James is a creep ;)
Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
AHHHHH!! I kind of thought something was going to happen when Edward left the house. You're killing us with a James pOV first! Oh well, we'll just have to wait and see what happens. Great chapter and I can't wait to read teh next!
Oh yea, congrats on the house!
Author's Response:
The James POV will be a PART of the next Chapter - don't worry, you won't have to wait for anything regarding what happens to B&E - that'll be in there too :)
Date: 23 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Awesome, awesome awesome chapter! can't wait fort he next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 58983
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present
Wow, I wasn't expecting that. Wonder what Jacob was dong (or even Charlie?). Can't wait to find out who the "killer" is!
Author's Response:
i may include a small snippit of charlie in next chapter... he is our connection to the case. thank you for the review
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bad Company
I'm nervous for Bella and Edward and their child now that Renee is being selfish and joining the dark side.
Can't wait to read what's next!
Author's Response:
thankyou so much for your review, it wont last long:)
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
Edward is so sweet! I really love this story! Good luck with the move and I can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
Thankyou:)
New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!
In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?
AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55713
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I like the idea of this story because it is totally different fron anything out there, but I have a question. Is Bella still 16 when this part of the chapter is taken place?
-Lisa
Author's Response:
she is but its been bother me. i have been thinking of changing it to seventeen or eighteen. I know legally someone can be married at sixteen with parental consent but i have kids and its been bothering. so i would love your thoughts on changing it. the thought came to me for a contest and even though i know sec's do it earlier i think i would be happier if i changed.
Date: 24 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
What a cliff hanger!!! What happened? can't wait to read the enxt chapter.
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Santa was a Prick, or should i say Edward. What kind of creep breaks into your house looking for a Christmas list? Rather than ask questions first, i did what Charlie always taught me to do if the house had a intruder. I SHOT HIM.
Warning: Mention of child abuse, domestic violence, rude humor, small ooc, and Blitzen being a ass. You've been warned.
Not your average Christmas story, Give it a chance. Daily Updates.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crackfic
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8395 Read Count: 927
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Mashed Taters
I really love this story...can't wait to read more...happy new year!
What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra? What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time? What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?
This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon. The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.
Can a new love save her? Can his voice pull her from the darkness?
This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding? If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).
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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 73961
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions
OMG-I just foudn yoru story and have been reading it for a few days. i literally burst into tears with the begining of this chapter. I normally don't cry when reading, but it was written so well. I could envision everything happeneing. Excellent chapter
Author's Response:
Sorry for the tears but thank you so much for the review. I love that it moved you.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans
You just about killd me with the Edward scene! I thougth she was dead, well, she is, but dead like Edward adn not coming back dead...you get what I mean right? Excellent chapter....i'm gong to read on!
Author's Response:
Yes, I know what you mean and yes that was my intention all along. I wanted Bella to choose to be with Carlisle; not as a concelation, but as her actual choice.
Thanks for the review.
Till next time
Nickey
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Never Trust a Vampire, Trust Me
I have to say I am enjoying your little story a lot! It's emotional and entertaining....it's a great story!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the reviews! I am trying to write the next chapter, but as I get near the end of this, they seem to be getting harder to write. Never fear...I will NEVER abandon my story. They are my literary children and I hold them all close to my hert. ;)
Till next time
Nickey
thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com
Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223884
Date: 11 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43
I loved this story and am sad to see it finished, but am looking forward to your next story!
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to read about Bella and Charlie's talk. I am also happy that she didn't get spanked for leaving Edward (even if she only ended up downstairs).
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Oh no, what's going to happen to Bella? I'm kind of afraid of Carlisle. Good cahpter and I can't wait to see what's next.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
I liked this chapter and can't wait to find out more about Carlisle and Edward's relationship and why Edward was kicked out of the house.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Oh no! Poor Bella and Edward. Edward just poured his heart to her and can't man up to his father. I agree with Bella though.
I'm waiting patiently for the next chapter!
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
My favorite part of this chapter was the sweet conversation that Edward had with Irinia. I really liked this chapter.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
I can't see Carlisle agreeing to this. I smell trouble!
On the flip side, I'm glad B and E have settled things!
Date: 15 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Wow....intense. I kind of feel bad for Edward, he has to be in shock over the baby but Bella deserves better.
I haveto also add wow Carlisile, didn't see that one coming!
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
I had no doubts...knew he was the baby daddy all along. I hope if Bella does take him back it isn't over night and he has to earn her trust again. He was a jerk to her and shouldn't be forgiven that easily.
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Poor Bella. Edward is such a guy. Although he has paid her bills and he took her out for dinner, he hasn't done anything to prove that he is sorry. yes he wants to be there for the baby, but what about Bella? I think he needs to try a little harder. He has to do something that has nothing at all with money and something more personal. Just my thought, for what it's worth.
I love the story! I think you need to do what is best for you and post whenever you can (although it wouldn't be so bad if you posted next week!).
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
Such a great chapter! Can't wait for the next!
Date: 15 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
I'm kind of bummed that there are only a few chapters left.
Good fro Bella. She is trying to prove that she can take care of herself. i don't blaime her for feeling almost defeated, but at the same time I also don't balme Charlie either. He was absent for so many years (not his fault) and he is trying to make up for it the only way he knows how to.
I'm also glad that Edward backed down a little bit towards the end. Can't wait to read what's up next!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
I think Bella should be the bigger person and go to dinner. It isn't like Carlisle is going to be the only preson there. Also, I think she should tell Edward but not force him to go and should obey Carlisle's wishes. I'm glad Bella and Edward seem to be getting closer!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
I liked this chapter a lot. There was some talking and a bit of arguement and a little bit of loving going on. It was a good chapter. can't wait for the next one!
PS-I'm sorry to hear about your grandfarther's passing :( My thougths are with you.
She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159782
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Poor current and flashback Bella. Good for Edward for sticking up fro Bella with his parents (and Alice adn Emmett too). I'm nervous about the crazy guy who has captured Bella and her classroom but am hoping it will all work out okay.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Great chapter...I'm wondering what will happen to Bella. I also can't wait to read more of the flashback. Maybe Bella convienced Carlisle and Esme to change? Can't wit for an update!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I'm nervous for Bella because Phill seems crazy and abusive (well, duh. I'm so articulate some times). he doesn't seem like a nice guy and all Edward wants to do is protect his wife. Can't wait to read some more!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Good chapter. I wonder how Bella's relationship with the elder Cullens is now. Carlisle seemed nice enough but Esme, she was so mean! Edward was very sweet to her though (which is why she and everyone else loves him :))
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I think i pretty much hate the Cullens and Dwyer equally. The Cullens because they are willing to throw away their relationship with all of their children because they don't approve of their signifgant other even though they don't know them. Dwyer is just a wild animal who needs t to be put down.
can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 21 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
As a teacher of younger children myself, no there is no way in the world i could have chosen just two children to stay with me. It would be just too impossible.
I wonder what will happen. Can't wait to see Edward's POV.
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Please hurry and update! this was a huge cliffie! i also hope that you show us more of Alice and Jasper at the justice of the peace (when Esme, Carlisle and Bella enter). Great chapter...patiently waiting the next one!
Bella is a senior in college looking for a realtionship. Edward is a firefighter who wants someone to care for. They are set up together by none other than Alice. See where the road of life takes them and why you have to 'Just Have Faith'. AH
Epilogue was been reposted after many questions
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112119 Read Count: 48033
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Forks
This was another cute chapter. Kind of interesting that Charlie has met Edward before (glad he likes h im!). Also thought it was cute how Edward texted her to let Bella know he was okay after the fire.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I thought it would be funny if Charlie knew him. I also thought it was and 'Edward' thing to do to let her know that he was ok.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Seeing Him/ Seeing Her
Cute chapter! Cna't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Next chapter up tomorrow.
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: A Sad Edward
I'm kind of nervous for Edward (fire is my biggest fear). Wildfires sound kind of scary.
I love how Bella and Edward just clicked right off the bat. It seems like they were meant to be together (of course!).
can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I won't say what happenes with the wildefire.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: The Meadow
I liked this chapter. It was sweet. I'm still a little nervous for Edward and the fire.
Author's Response:
You will have to wait and see with the fire. Thanks for the review.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: LA and Dress Shopping
i don't llike the feeling I have about the wild fires. I love Bella and Edward though...they are adorable.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Happy 22nd Birthday To Me
Cute chapter...btw-I don't like your author's note when you say wait and see. Told you hI had a bad feeling. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Sorry, I had to put somthing in there.