Reviews by Rie
Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Calm Before The Storm.

hmmm.Is he going to marry her first? About time hes going to change her. Good chapter

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Intermission

Team EDWARD...unless you wanna go crazy and have Bella and JASPER run away together.... :D

Summary:

What if Edward had said yes when Bella offered to bar the doors at prom? Written as a part of the FanFicAholics Gift Exchange. Rated M for suggested violence.

 

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Banner by snugy1


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1924 Read Count: 394
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LOVED it! hahahahahaha

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211493
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

This story just keeps getting better and better! It is now favored on 2 different sites just so I don't miss a single update :D I can't wait for the big reunion! Awesome chapter but thats nothing new~



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post sometime tomorrow!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened. 

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

sigh...another great chapter! Your making it hard to be patient!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

YES! That was awesome :) Best story ever!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you so much for your review! Just in case you're unaware, the story updates every Friday and I post teasers on Mondays. The latest teases are up on the Parachute Blog as we speak! This past weekend was absolutely crazy and hectic for me, so I wouldn't be looking for Parachute to update early this week! Friday around 1:00 PM, EST will more than likely be when it posts! 

I love you guys and I'm always happy to hear your thoughts, whether it's on FB, Twitter, the Blog or the Twilighted thread. You guys rock my world!

<3 Shel


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As Bella yawned and stretched, her hand hit something soft and feathery. She opened her eyes and saw her fingers resting on auburn hair. Warm green eyes smiled happily at her. She sat up quickly and glanced around the room before turning back to the person in her bed.

"What are you doing?" she asked, slightly confused at his presence.     

 

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

I can't get enough of this amazing story! You are a wonderful writer :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (http://kitsushel.blogpot.com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! Included this week are teasers for the next Outtake, titled: Save Me San Francisco.

Also, today is the last day to vote in The Hidden Star Awards! Even if you decide not to vote for Parachute (Best Canon Category). stop by and support your favorite authors/stories that might be up for awards! Link is on my profile and up on the Blog!

XoXo

Shel


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"Good afternoon, Mr. Cullen," a beautiful brunette with ice blue eyes simpered, as she stood from her seat behind a large desk. "I was told you wouldn't be in the office for a few weeks." 

Bella quirked an eyebrow at the girl's blatant flirtatiousness. She looked over at Edward and noticed that his posture immediately straightened and his voice took on a cooler tone.

"Gianna," he nodded to the woman. "I'm only stopping by to grab a few things and to show my family around a little bit."
Bella's eyes cut to his face, surprised to have herself included in that statement. He smiled gently at her before leading her and Jack towards the large corner office.

"Family?" Gianna asked, confused. She didn't spare Bella a second glance, but her jaw dropped as soon as she got a good look at Jack. "Oh my God," she whispered and sat down quickly. As soon as Edward's door closed behind them, she picked up her phone and dialed.

"Jane? You are not going to believe who just walked in here!"    

 

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254417
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Gotta love the hot tubs....great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. yeah, hot tubs do it everytime..

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love this story! I can't wait to read more! Awesome chapter :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like my story, thanks for taking the time to review...lml

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter! The story is believable and I really enjoy it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and leaving a review, here’s a teaser for you…lml

 

 

“What are you thinking about?” I turned to face his voice; he was sitting in one of the chairs, watching me. His face was relaxed but he had an intense look in his eyes. I released the lip I didn’t realize I was biting “I was just imagining being restrained and blindfolded”

 

He didn’t say anything at first, he just shifted in the chair, before asking “What was happening to you?”

 

“Mmm...”I hummed “....nameless, faceless people were sitting in those chairs, watching me struggle not to cum.” I blushed with the last word.

 

“Ahhh... and that would be something you would enjoy?”

 

 I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, I didn’t realize before but the room had a smell of Jasmine and Lavender. “Yes...I think I would enjoy that very much.”

The Reunion by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 254]
Summary:

Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 79068
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2010 Title: The Reunion

Hey..wheres the story!!!!

 



Author's Response:

Sorry, the site has a glich or something that is messing up with the updates. Hopefully it will be fixed soon/

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C

stories/34076/images/TrueHeartsBanner.jpg      Banner By: Rachel MS

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 28903
[Report This] Published: 16 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Another great chapter... I wonder what a half human/half vamp mixed with elf child would be like....



Author's Response:

Any Child of Jasper's would have to be to cute for words... LOL... Thanks ~ Hugs~ Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 10. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 11.

Just so you know ahead of time. Chapter 11 is HUGE. I talking nearly 13,500 words. Almost triple my usual chapter size. 27 pages on Microsoft Word in 12 font. HUGE CHAPTER! Oh ya, it also holds a LEMON!!! Love those. Anyways, don‘t get use to my chapters being this long! Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 11

(BPOV)

Then the full realization of my new revelation hit me. Jasper’s eyes grew wide while I was thinking. His face broke into the an absolutely gorgeous smile. Without saying any words, he knew. Then without warning, he projected his feelings back to me. It was the most euphoric feeling that I’ve ever experienced.     Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks I had to take it down after I posted it last night. I'd got a messege from a really nice reader who informed me that the spelling and Puncuation was Crap! So I tried to fix it on my own. I have sever dyslexia.When I read or write. I start at the right and memorize the letters going one way. Then read them going the other way. So you can imagine how difficult this is for me. That's why I use so many comma's in my story. They help me keep my place in a sentence.

So I did start using Window 7 instead of word processor. Hopefully now I should alright. I think I might even have another Beta to help out. Thanks Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for review from Chapter 11. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 12.

Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 12

(BPOV)

 

“What’s there to work out this better not be over my mark. Peter told me that the wolves bit there imprints so this wasn’t going to be a big deal.” I said scared about what this could mean.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Hmmmm either the ex or Alice. Loving the story!

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Awww..A shower fantasy?

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

WOW....just wow

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I am addicted to this awesome story! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks, Rie. What a nice compliment. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

This story ROCKS! I can't wait for the ending! Then i can read it again without have to wait for updates :) Great job!

 

~Marie

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Great chapter! As much as I want to read the rest of the story, I love the alternating POVs. Seeing Epov is the icing to this awesome story!

~Marie



Author's Response:

Thanks, Marie. I typically do two Bellas and then Edward. I have always liked EPOV the best. It's so easy to do him. Tee hee.

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Ok.... That needs a tissue warning label! You could not of written a better chapter to end this story! The epi is only going to be the yummyy icing on the cake :)

Rie~

Summary:


    Elizabeth Masey didn’t believe in ghosts - until she started having an affair with one...

  

Our heroine is a trust fund baby suffering from a recently broken heart. Needing a project to distract her from her heartache, she decides to turn her newly inherited family estate into a bed and breakfast. Her plans grow complicated when she is informed by the caretaker that Stormclyffe House is haunted. Things heat up when the sexy contractor she hired to do the remodel starts showing up in her dreams. Add to that one stuffed weasel, an ancient hi-fi system that only plays oldies, and a new proclivity for sleep walking in the nude, and Elizabeth just may be in over her head.


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2217 Read Count: 3559
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yay! I am very excited to read this story. I love original work. :D



Author's Response:

Thanks! Feel free to check out my other two stories. They are both original - one finished, the other almost finished.

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi :) Good 4 chapters but I'm confused...Is that the end? It says complete but it didn't feel that way at the end. I hope its not because this story has a really good story line going. Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Rie! It's got twenty chapters total. I'll be posting a few a day. If I get enough positive feedback I might add a bit more to it now that I don't have to keep it under 20,000 words.

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Okayyy....Well thats a crummy way to start the day! LOL Can't wait to see how she gets off the island.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it would definitely suck to wake up that way.

Thanks for continuing to review. Reviews are like tiny cheerleaders cheering on my efforts.

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Aww poor Devin! Good chapter...hmmm just a tad worried about her, huh?

~Marie :) 



Author's Response:

Yeah, he's fallen pretty hard.

Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well if they can find her grandmother floating around they could all live happily together! Can't wait to meet Miss Donna :) Great chapter as always!

~Marie



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm confident Lizbet will make an appearance...

Summary: Past Featured Story

really hot, shirtless guy, hot chick, snowy backdrop and the always awesome fire

                                                             Banner by: Ellie Wolf

"Don't you understand, he'll die if you dont't!" Iz just shrugged a light sholder at her, "I understand perfectly. What you fail to understand is how little I care. What happens to him is in no way my problem."

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Adventure, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116973 Read Count: 94584
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 36

Okay ready for the next story! Loved this story and your Peter. this story will remain in my favs to read over and over. Great job :)

~Rie

Surprises by EmziBob Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Jessica comes home after a 3 year trip expecting Edward to be waiting to marry her, but she is in for one hell of a surprise. Told from Jessica's POV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3430 Read Count: 5747
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2012 Updated: 17 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Rie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!