Reviews by bevey99
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514607
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
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Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B

James is one sick fuck.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315694
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me

Funny

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy

Swallowing  = good.

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life

Way hot, just fucking way hot.

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Rock the Boat

God I love your pervy mouth.  LMAO

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Situations

I was wondering why no one playing safe.

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

I know this was finsihed  a while ago, but still loving it.  Your wit 'comes' through your writing.  The dialog keeps me smiling.

THX

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

The main thing is she doesn't love or even like herself.   - 0 - self-worth.

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

Clapping, and more clapping.

 

THX, bb  good ride.

Now write something else.

The Freshies Club by maelyn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 500]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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 A darker Edward learns a new technique from his brothers and starts a very special club, luring his new female classmates in. Will Bella be in or out? Can she handle the competition? Can Edward handle the competition when Bella and her friends are dragged into the dark world of the vampire's who want to collect them?

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This story is a bit dark and different from the usual twilight vampire lore, so beware.

 

 

AU/OOC/Canon/Non-canon pairings. MATURE for dark adult themes and language, lemons

 

 Disclaimer: Twilight and all it’s characters belong to Stephanie Meyer.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137637 Read Count: 60392
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jul 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5. Meet and Greet - Bad Tanya!

Excellent. Nice payback for Tanya.

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Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13. Feeling The Burn Twice

Well payback is a BITCH

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Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14. The Girl's Get Theirs

Damn, didn't he notice she was a virgin.

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Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26. Old Habits Still Hurt

Holy shit, what a cliffie!

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31. Escape

Wow. serious shit.

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Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35. Monogamy and Betrayal

Actually no I don't agree.  Bella is a bitch, period.  All the haters  feel free to bash me, don't care.

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Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41. Epilogue

Very good story, very well written.  A little to the left here and there but good none-the-less.

Going into Shock by Lori 94 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Threesomes E/B/J and A/Em/R. Lemons galore. No real plot. Threeshot... Did I mention the Lemony goodness? The Shocking series is finished! COMPLETE! Enjoy and please review if you have an opinion!


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Femme Slash, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12874 Read Count: 10852
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Feb 2010
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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Again,  love your wild side.  Good job.

Summary:

This is my take on what really happened the night of "The Cullen Bachelor Party" - SLASH Stlye.

It's the night before Edward and Bella's wedding in Breaking Dawn. Edward's nervous and doesn't want his inexperience to disappoint Bella on their Wedding night. Jasper is just the man for the job and makes Edward an offer he can't refuse... 

This story is Canon, Vamps, OOC, and SLASH.


tcbp

Many thanks to the fab CassieWhitlockHale for this amazing banner!


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3640 Read Count: 1086
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Jasper's POV

Love the line 'want to bend over and suck my own dick for some relief".  Funny.

Summary:

Edward watches Bella from the two apartments on either side of hers. What happens when Bella discovers a peephole and pays him a visit? All Human, OOC "Mentalward" Contest Entry. Contains Adult Content and Lemon


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5415 Read Count: 722
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 24 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Pinholes and Passageways

Chasee becomes the chaser.  I Like It.   Thanks for writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43561
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen

Don't know if you still check your reviews but this is GOOOD.  I started reading at work at lunch and I kind of got uncomfortable.  A little warm feeling kind started, so I had to stop.

I've had this on my to read list for quite some time.  Glad I finally started it.  I think it's going to get a little HOTTER soon. 

Thanks for writing.

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Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Anticipation

Now  THIS will be interesting.

Good story.  Thanks for writing.

Summary:

NCB

Miss Lillie runs a male escort service called Naked Cullen Boys, Incorporated. Come watch as they make every girl's dream come true!; AU/AH; Nominated for a Bellie award for Best Multi-Chapter Smut!

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/OC, Emmett/OC, Jacob/OC, Jasper/OC
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33425 Read Count: 6543
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Feb 2010
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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Tammy, Jasper and Edward

Did I like it?  Who would say No to 2 gorgeous men. Not me not ever.  This is why I read so much fanfiction.  Hot, hot, hot.

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Lea, Emmett and Jasper

Ladies, that was delicious.  Off to read the next one.

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Juliet, Jasper and Edward

Just an FYI - most Texans as a whole never pronounce the 'g' in ing.  ie. amazing = amazin  (I try to speak all the syllables & letters, but laspe all the time.)

Your stories are the best smut I read in several weeks.  This is all I can stand for today.  Have to give myself some time to recover. ;-)

Wait did I just read KINKY-shit now I have to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Cella, Jasper and Edward

Damn't someone finally wrote my fantasy down.  Double penatration  with the two hottest men ever.

Maybe TMI, but I think I need to bookmark this story.  The series is already on my favorites.

THis is the first story, on any web-site that I've given a 10 to.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Teacher's Pet Banner

 

Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Leave me alone

Good story.

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Broken

oh god no.  Charlie is one of the really good guys.

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Numb

I don't see how she can function - losing her Dad and Edward (again) at the same time.  I couldn't.

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

okay now this is a 'holy f' moment.

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Consequences

MOFO, did she get a good look at him??????????

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ultimate

I don't think anyone has gone back and written something about the 'THunderstrom game", good on you for finding your own voice about it.

Great new twist, BTW.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Matrimony isn't a dirty word

Visions, maybe from venom ingesting orally and internally.  She said it was wonderful.

And it sounds like (though only suggested) she getting loads of it. ;-)

 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Every move you make

You are the "Mistress" of plot twists and changes.  Damn.

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Back to Reality

Still have to ask, does Renee now think she's dead.

Without Love by edwardsisobel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

This is a story about LOVE.  It’s the eternal love of a parent for their child.  It’s the steadfast love for your best friend. It’s the passion of your first love and it’s the spice of forbidden love.  This is a story based on the immortal music of Elvis Presley and in his words, “Without love, we have nothing at all.”

 

 

 

Edward and Bella attend their son's wedding.  It is also their 25th wedding anniversary and throughout the day they reflect on events leading up to their own wedding day and what could have been, if only they had the courage to stand up for what they believed in.  Is it too late?

 

 

 

This story is rated NC-17 for lemony scenes of a slash and polyamorous situations in later chapters.

 

ExB  ExJ  ExBxJ

 

Medium Banner - Without Love


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20369 Read Count: 6086
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2010 Updated: 13 Mar 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Can't Help Falling in Love

While the sentiments were lovely, I was around in 1981 and it would have very very rare to have any kind of same sex "coupling/partnership" ceremony. 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 It's Now or Never

Now or Never came out in 1960.  Nice little slashy lemon.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Crying in the Chapel

Crying in the Chapel - 1960.   polyamorus wasn't even a term.  And, her having an orgrasm or him knowing what or where clit was not possible.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Without Love

Plot unrealistic for the time period.  BUT it was a very good plot and sweet story, nontheless.  Thanks for writing  - years ago.

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40825
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 5: The meeting

I held on to this fic for a long time.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club

Well that was painful to read.  Statistic bitch

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Like a virgin

glad to read they contected on a personal level.  But INCOMPLETE here. so not cool.  Sort of wasted my time.  Kudos for writing - but not so much for the abandonment.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Reasons

Yep some strong dom Carlisle is - pussy.

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Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

poor sweet man

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awe... I really enjoyed it.  Sorta Hot. You should continue.  She needs more tutoring, and he needs a lot of ink.

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading, i wrote this such a long time ago, oh she does need more tutoring and he ink, thanks again for reading

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner for TFICF

Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction.  Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love? 

 

This story was  made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.

 

**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story.  Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
[Report This] Published: 11 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2012
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: To Be or Not To Be

Oh Edward, how fucking noble.  Now you really have made her think she is a very expensive prositute.  Stupid wanker.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Best Laid Plans

Hafta revoke this bar's liquor license, way too much underage drinking. Alice is a freshman. Emmett's only a year or two more.

I'm getting wiplash. First Bella says it was years ago she received the letter - her Senior year was only months ago.  And he gave her the letter close to the end of the year.     The you talk again about Edwards Freshman year, again his Senoir year would have been only months ago.

Bella will have to return the money with her own version of 116.

The Affair by funkymunky2511 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

AH E/B J/B For two weeks out of the year Edward and Bella pretended that what they had was real.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1914 Read Count: 504
[Report This] Published: 13 Apr 2010 Updated: 13 Apr 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Affair One Shot

That's sort of a fucked up cliffie.  Good plot though.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom.  Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants.  Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom.  Can she get him? - Maybe!

  My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.

Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123433
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master

Wow, this was TOO hot for me.  So much so I read it twice. ;-)

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Christmas Break

All orifices used in every chapter.  You are a dirty girl and I love it.  My kind of writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading - glad you like it!!

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Break The Fifth Year

Good story, with fucking awesome sex play.  Love the little "dirty" girl.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Be My Master

Good job, very well written.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Christmas Break

??????  No electricity, so her bath water should have stone cold. PNW in winter is cold as ice. Literally

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 7: The Second Year - The Second Six Months

Having a diamond etched is cost prohibitive, and may be illegal if the diamond was registered.

We're Married by dolphin62598 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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1st Place Winner!! Til Death Do Us Part O/S Contest Entry:A drunken night lands four friends in Vegas with the purpose of getting married. Best friends getting to share their day with each other, but their spur of the moment nuptials don’t turn out as planned.AU/AH/OOC/ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7101 Read Count: 2055
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2010 Updated: 08 Jun 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 24 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: We're Married

That was great!  This has been on list forever, so sorry it took me years to read it.  I missed this contest on ff.  Thank you for wiritng.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 24 May 2017 Title: Chapter 1: We're Married

That was great!  This has been on list forever, so sorry it took me years to read it.  I missed this contest on ff.  Thank you for wiritng.

Summary:

Edward and Jasper, business partners and part time lovers, are in Arizona for a conference. When Jasper gets the bright idea to take Edward to a well known strip club, they meet their match in a dark haired beauty named Bella. This is 99.5% smut and 0.5% plot. You have been warned.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5129 Read Count: 1655
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2010 Updated: 16 May 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Arizona

Yes, yes I did enjoy this.  It's found a permanent home on my favorites page.

Wonder why???  And, what's wrong w/ people only 10 reviews - seriously.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! My fics definitely don't seem to get as much action on here than they do on ff.n (the exceptin being 'Covet', which isn't gettin action anywhere,lol)

Glad you enjoyed it!

~Ash

Summary: Past Featured Story

dwa

Bella becomes Edward's personal assistant. He is the chief-editor of EMC, the best fashion magazine, run by a man. And what secret does Edward have? Will Bella's past come to bite her? The movie, The Devil Wears Prada inspired this one. AH. AU.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185532 Read Count: 42717
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Meet the boss

It has potential.  Little to familiar right-off-the-bat.



Author's Response:

Thank you. If you like it, give it a try. :) I'd liek to hear your opinion on it as you read.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A Hurt Angel and Bad Jake

Okay I said this had potential, but it doesn't. Sorry.  I hate being negative.

 Main characters to familiar very quickly to the point of sexual harassment.  Crying in front of a new employee, wouldn't happen.  Everything totally not believable.   Plus, bad syntax, grammer and spelling.  The idea had merit.

You need a Beta.  Better luck in the future, keep writing you'll get better.



Author's Response:

I just got a beta that is looking over everything. When it's done I am reposting.

I know some thing don't make sense...but it's fiction.

What can I say? Thank you for trying it.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251323
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2023 Title: Chapter 32: The Apology...

So who paid this Teresa to say her baby was Edwards? I read it all and that question is not answered.  

Play With Me by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 236]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward gets talked into meeting Bella, a Dominatrix who is looking for a new submissive. Will Edward hand over control to a woman who he barely knows? Will Bella lose some of the control she fights so hard to keep? ALL EPOV. Cannon Pairs, lots-O-lemons and funnies.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81629 Read Count: 45276
[Report This] Published: 09 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Dec 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1 You Want Me to What?

So this has been in my list awhile.  I don't read over here much, but I told myself i needed to work on my TBR list.  Soooo.  I love the fact she "made" him get his dick pierced.  Good boy.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 5 Subward, meet Domella

Humm, he has feelings for her and maybe she has feelings for him.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Ch 8 Is My Toilet Clean?

Whew...

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 10 I Have the Best Girlfriend EVER!

hahahaha Charlie a porn and a nudist. EPIC

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 11: OT Bella's Interview

In the beginning she said she was a silent partner.  Even with stealing they ususally stay in the background.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 12: Ch 11 Happy Birthday Baby: Part I

 I LOVE EMMETT

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Ch 14 Antibiotics are the Devils Candy

Oops baby.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Ch 19 It's Fucking Magic

The best Edward enternal dialog, and the best freaking Emmeet.  Aswesome  So well written.  I would not have reviewed this mush on completed fic if it didn't move me in some way.  This one hit my funny bone.  Thanks for writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 dominated

 Thank you to Mekek18 for the great banner

Entry for the Twi-Girl Revolutions "Under Her Thumb" Challenge. Follow Edward as he auditions and becomes the sub of a strict Domme. Will it just be a professional relationship or will it become more? BDSM. Mature.ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39360 Read Count: 19735
[Report This] Published: 27 Jul 2010 Updated: 11 Nov 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Enlisting of a Rose

I think you left us hanging. Damn.  But Izzy and Mistress Isabella are the same person.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Hot Under The Collar

W/ as many errors.

Celebrity Pass by Lori 94 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:


Definition of ‘celebrity pass’: an agreement between a couple (married, dating, same sex or ‘normal’) that when a famous person whom you’d like to have sex with comes onto you…you have permission to indulge your desires…and it isn’t to be considered cheating.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: Romance, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4090 Read Count: 752
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Aug 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Armani and Hugo Boss do make the Best men's formal wear. Now that Tom Ford does to he's up there as well.

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

My Other Brother animated banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106920
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

Nice first chapter. Def, keep reading. THX

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstar
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Really, they stopped????

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

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Punishment by rbsschess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Summary:  Edward has auditioned to be Bella's sub.  However, he has a problem keeping his hands to himself and for that he must be punished.  Sample entry for the Dommella's Dungeon Contest because nothing is better than a strong Bella and an Edward who knows his place - serving her.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5305 Read Count: 2673
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Punishment

I will be so glad when the contest is over.  I want this story to continue.



Author's Response:

Thank you - when the contest is over this will be reworked into the second chapter of Anonymous Meetings.

Thanks for reading!

Covet by edwardsisobel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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What do you do when you meet the love of your existence a year after you marry the saviour of your soul?  Edward and Jasper thought they were doomed to a life of longing and regret until they meet someone who holds the key to unlock their future.

Vamp Slash

Jasper POV


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice, Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14714 Read Count: 888
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2010 Updated: 02 Oct 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Covet

Think I read this somewhere else [another site] but it's still good the 2nd time.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140942
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

Odd that I always go for coral colored roses, hummmm...

So who was laurent talking to, and what was going to happen to Edward????

Thank you both for writing.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Where did she get tortillas, hot sauce and salsa in the Loire Valley? They barely know what Mexican food is in Paris. Unless she had them in her purse she wouldn't have found them for sale. We've tried to eat Mexican or Tex/Mex in lots of different countries, France was the worst Kenya was the best.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, just wow.  Have to sleep now, but can't wait to read more tomorrow. Oops Anglea's husband is Edward.  Good plot twist. Not too mention fuck hot sex.

Thank you both for wirting.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

Ab-so-freaking-lutley  the funniest Emmett.  Damn, I had to cross my legs to keep from peeing. And, usually I have cross my legs for another, umm, reason.

Excellant chapter.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2

Fan, it's the dead of winter now (12/11) and I have to turn the air-con on.  My hubbs thinks I'm nuts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Summary:

You never think you would wake up and your life will be taken, throwing you in a world you never knew existed. Bella sees life through the black market only to be sold as a virgin beauty. Please no one under 18!!!  Rape, suicide, love and angst Rated MA

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Alright just so y'all know before you read this. This story is completely off the wall! Left field, I'm talking way out there! There is no HEA in this story. I cried like a baby writing the last 6 pages. So just before warned!

Ari

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14962 Read Count: 1417
[Report This] Published: 09 Nov 2010 Updated: 09 Nov 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Coming My Love

Sad.

Great poem.

Summary:

In a world where social networks invade our daily lives, what happens when our daily lives invade our social networks? Edward will soon find out that answer when his favorite tweep becomes a reality. Twilight O/S AH-Edward and Bella rated- M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6612 Read Count: 1374
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 11 Nov 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute, and so very citrusy.

A Family Affair by nickeyd26 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

This story picks up a year after Edward and Bella were married.  He changed her on their honeymoon and there was no baby or confrontation with the Volturi.  Bella realizes as they return from a trip to celebrate their first anniversary that the Cullens have been keeping a secret from her.  Now, they want her to join in on the fun.

 

This story contains slash, fem-slash, polyamorous groupings…ah hell.  It is a damned sexual buffet.  If you are not into that sort of thing or if you are under 18, then just move along little ones.  This story is NOT for you.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11296 Read Count: 13858
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 Nov 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Family Affair

Wow, holy fucking Wow.  You get a nine.  Loved it. But then I'm a very dirty girl, and my husband is very lucky.



Author's Response:

I believe that more husbands love Twilight just for the very same reason. ;)  I know mine never discourages my writing or reading. LOL.

Thanks for the rating and review!

All my best from one dirty girl to another,

Nickey

Toy by Irish_charm Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

After a long absence a submissive gets a summons from his Mistress.

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My entry for the Dommella's Dungeon.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7956 Read Count: 1087
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Dec 2010
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Toy

Really enjoyed this, but kinda of knew the ending.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Five years into her marriage, photojournalist Bella, is worried that she isn't enough for her bi-sexual husband. Can a meeting with a mysterious street artist allow them both to fulfill their undisclosed desires?

 

Lemons Poly/Slash Edward/Bella/Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9218 Read Count: 6224
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 05 Jan 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Undisclosed Desires

Soooo good.  That got my heart rate up.  Who needs aerobics when there is so much fucking incredible fanfic around.  You are my hero - 2 poly stories, can I have some more please.

Thank you for writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

PostSecret Used: My downstairs neighbor and I have screaming matches to see who’s the loudest during sex, I usually win.

Summary: Edward is a player and rising pornstar who abuses his peen on a daily basis, demanding performance and the utmost behavior from it. Well, now it’s time for the tale to be told.

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74658 Read Count: 41532
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Nov 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy fucking hell, THAT was the funniest thing I've ever read.  You are a fucking Peen goddess.  I was laughing out load so hard my husband told me to go to the other room w/ my laptop, but I didn't. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Hi Ho, It's off to Work I Go

Ahh, Hot Peen is so cute.  He needs a little taste of Hot Puss, come on.  I'll be his cheerleader. Hot Puss for the Win.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Bound Rose

Having to laugh into a pillow so I don't wake the 'hubs'.  Really?, Rod Pattinhead.  This shit is fucking hysterical.  

She messing w/ his head. Both of the them.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Turning Back Time

Revenge is sweet.  Way to go RODward.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Call Me Master Peen

I love you RODward! And, your dear smmiskimen for letting y'all play so rough.  Damn fine chapter. So Hot Puss got a little carried away from the sound of it.   The drawer is too small I have the door open.......

 

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Feeling Frisky

Public orgasm what could be better.  Not much. 

Great chapter.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Deals

Most of this fucking hysterical, but the back story is good.  Love me some Rod.  Really

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The AVNs and Admissions

Loved all of it.  Love, love, loved it.   Rod's voice was perfect.  How you managed 'his' POV is a mystery.

Not enough humor in Fandom - so this was a very welcome oasis.

Thanks

 

Have fav'd Cougar Town.  SO I'll be starting that tomorrow.  Only 2 days to read a bit cause I'll be at the theater all day Thursday, watching the entire saga.  Hope you enjoy BD1.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews! I absolute love Rod and his character will be my favorite forever more. I don't know how I managed to voice him so well either, but someone suggested that I was a peen in a former life or something.

Have fun on Thursday! I'd love to be able to watch the entire saga in the theater but I have duties to attend to before going to see BD1. Can't wait to squeal with the world that night!

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 26 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Epilogue

Epic.  Perfect "ending" to a really great story.  I've laughed so hard, I nearly pee'd my panties.  Wait - I don't wear panties, oh well.  You get the idea that I really loved it -right?

Can't wait to read more from you in any form.

Thanks for posting, and many thanks for writing. XO

Summary:

PostSecret Prompt Used: Everyone who knew me before 9/11 thinks I'm dead. 3rd Place Winner PostSecret Prompt Contest! SENSITIVE MATERIAL INCLUDED! PLEASE BE WARNED!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4371 Read Count: 1564
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 17 Jan 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy shit, that was incredibly sad.  9/11 was one of the most heinous acts ever committed.

And, now finally Bin Laden is dead.

Hunting party by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 110]
Summary:

Bella, Rosalie, Alice and Esme are BFFs. While they're out camping together, they become the prey of unscrupulous hunters. A tale for adults with highly explicit sexual content. Rated M for all the things you can imagine, and maybe some you can't. Canon pairings.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30882 Read Count: 17464
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2011 Updated: 26 Jun 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Last chapter

While the story was good, it took an unrealistic turn.  She needs medical attention, because she woulf bruised from head to toe at the very least, her head looked at  plus food. And tell her friends to fuck off.

Oh you would have to unload both barrells of a shotgun, at point blank range, on an animal that size. Typical shotgun shells have birdshot which would have just pissed out a mountain lion.

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2018 Title: Chapter 1: First chapter

Well THIS is an unusal plot.

Summary:

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"Mom sleeping?" I asked.

He nodded. "All pilled up and passed out."

"You drugged her." I assessed, rising to my knees.

"Only suggested she take a sleeping pill." He too kneeled on the bed. "So what can I do for you this evening?"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is dark. Characters: Bella, Edward, and Carlisle


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11281 Read Count: 26667
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 25 Mar 2011
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 18 May 2016 Title: Chapter 2: The Conclusion

Well the first chapter had and of sorts. Could've ended therer.  This one is definitly a ending with a big exclamation point.  All 3 were more than 50 shades of f'd up.

Quiet Storm by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1708]
Summary: Past Featured Story

QS

"Two weeks. Two years. Who cares?" A lesson in love, crime, and passion. When two young lovers find themselves in the middle of the storm, can love conquer all? AH. OOC. Rated M Mafia fic. 

Humor/Romance/Violence/Drama...you name it, QS has it, or will. Canon couples. Not canon characters. (Mafia fic) MobWard

 

Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight. 

Beta'd by aeglow

Banner by the amazing RoseArcadia


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Shena's Storys to Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Storm Saga by SexiLexi, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 618485 Read Count: 2671477
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2011 Updated: 03 Jan 2013
Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Bebella

okay it took me 10 DAYS to read this.  Could have read  5-8 fics in that time. Damn this was looong. [And, yes I now have to read the sequel]

I don't like fics about mobster, or sports, but I finally broke down and read this.  Been in my TBR list for years.  It was compeling.  Hooked me on the first chapter and kept me readin until 2am many nights.  Hardly have done any housework in these last 10 days.

I know nothing of that life style, and have only seen all 3 Godfather movies, nothing else no GoodFeelows, Sapranos, and def not Scareface. But you wrote this as though you had some insight into the whole mob life.  I say Bravo and it was a fucking great read.

THANKS

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed
Date: 29 May 2016 Title: Chapter 43: Icing on the Cake

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