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Volturi Order by TheSpoiltOne, Footroza Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2811]
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15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Blessings

:) grate new story

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Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Promises

I hell...:)

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Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Life

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Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother

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Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Breaking Down the Self

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Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

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Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

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Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

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Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

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Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

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Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

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Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

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Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

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Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

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Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

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Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

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Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

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Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

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Author's Response:

:P  lol

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

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Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

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Date: 16 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

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Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

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Date: 23 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

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Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

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Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

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Date: 31 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

Happy new year!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

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My Secret Admirer by Jennmc75 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
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My entry for the "For My Valentine" contest. Bella is the invisible girl at Forks High. What happens when she learns that she has a secret admirer? Fluffy one-shot.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Young Adult
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3189 Read Count: 1210
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Secret Admirer One Shot

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Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Today by totallyobsessed82 Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a foster child who is constantly being shipped from home to home. He attempts suicide daily. One night Charlie is sent to arrest him during a break in. What happens when Charlie finds out his real story? AH, OOC, Rated M for language/themes.


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36910 Read Count: 10095
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2010
Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

:) realy cute story

The Training School Saga by TheSpoiltOne, Footroza Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2139]
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Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514577
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Bella - DAY 1

Ilike that you have put all the sory lines in the same story.... thanks

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Bella - DAY 2 PART B

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A

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Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews have you not read this before?

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: James - DAY 3 PART A

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Bella - DAY 3 PART B

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: James - DAY 3 PART B

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Bella - DAYS 3 & 4

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: James - DAY 4

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Bella - DAY 5

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: James - DAY 5

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Bella - DAY 6

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: James - DAY 6

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Bella - DAY 7

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Edward - DAY 7 PART A

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Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Carlisle - DAY 7

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: James - DAY 7

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Edward - DAY 7 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Bella - DAY 9 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: James - DAY 8 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Edward - DAY 8 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: James - DAY 8 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Edward - DAY8 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Bella - DAY 11

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: James - DAY 11

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Edward - DAY 11

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Bella - DAY 12 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: James - DAY 12 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Edward - DAY 12 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31: Bella - DAY 12 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Edward - DAY 12 - PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: Bella - Day 14

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: James DAY 14

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Edward DAY 14

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Bella DAY 16 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Bella DAY 16 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38: James DAY 16 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Edward DAY 16 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Bella DAY 16 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: Bella DAY 17 PART A

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Interview with the Master

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44: James DAY 17

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45: Edward DAY 17 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46: Bella DAY 17 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47: Edward DAY 17 PART B

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48: Bella DAY 18

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49: James DAY 20 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50: Edward DAY 20 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 51: Bella DAY 20 PART A

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Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 52: James DAY 20 PART B

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