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Bio:
I am a 40 yr old married mother of six who loves reading fanfiction. MY loves of reading is moved online since I cant really afford book shopping other than trading in books. I especially love the characters from the Twilight series, my fav characters ever. I love my Edward and Bella and the rest of the gang. I'm interested in being a beta reader for the many fantastic writers out there. I have so many I'm a fan of. I love a site that promote creativity and freedom of speech, there is always going to be one who has some negative to say but i encourage to be true to yourself and your vision.
Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.
BDSM, Dark story.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514604
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Bella - DAY 3 PART A
This is my first fanfic on this site and now i see what all the hoopla is about, very, very and i mean very sexy, this is a different take and yeah i cant turn away like its an accident. well written and yeah did i say very sexy. You ladies can write some yummies tough i have to say Jasper could have been more polite and said that more quiet so as to not make her feel ashamed. those damn men.... love em but damn....
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Bella - DAY 8 PART B
this was a great chapter. this story is fantastic but very intense as a large so this helped bring me down from the high. love, love, love this story. way diferent take on these wonderful characters, shocking but i cant turn away.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: James - DAY 12 PART B
james is evil. loved it when charlie called him a wanker, too too true. what an ass.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Interview with the Master
this was so funny. ha ha
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 57: James DAY 20 PART C
Omg, Finally, he gets his. this is the one punishment im looking forward too. the cat of nines will work just fine on him. uggh i hate james and every other man like him out there who does this to women, well written.
Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24
wow.... greatuse of that microchip in the story line,
After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624776
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19
This is such a hard story. Such evil in the darkness of men. I hate to see Charlie as this weak, cowrdly man who could do such a horrid thing to his daughter. I love the Cullen men, Carlisle has always been a favorite for his honor- this one is dark and beyond evil. I cant turn away though because I want to see how the girls evolve and if Edward gets his head out of ass. Great plot, even though I will admit a big part of me was really disgusted at the beginning; to see what comes around go around for these dirty men, will be something I will look forward to.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23
WOW!!! That was a great chapter. I LOVE Jasper, just love him. Im so glad Alice got a good man, who got it. Im sure Edward will get it soon, but wow....
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41
I HATE this Carlyisle. he is evil. poor edward, esme, bella, they dont deserve this kind of evil.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Contest Nomination
This was an amazing story. Once i finished the first page i was addicted. a very hard read seeing my fav dad's in such a negative light. But in reality that it humanity at its worse. Im so glad that the Cullen made good on the demise of such a horrible legacy. Go Bella, your my hero Girl. Great reat, to say your talented in an inderstatement.
Carlisle Cullen finds himself tempted by the devel herself, his naughty step-daugher, Bella. NC-17 for language and lemons. One-shot.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3833 Read Count: 4649
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow that was ruthless but sexy and hot. i hope Edward is no fool
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 129662
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
very good start. anything u do I love. cant wait for more
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
awww how sad. To lose Charlie too. No wonder why her heart is broken. He sounds like my own father. she must keep her dream alive for him as well. cant wait to see how the girls will help her cope and hopefully she will let them in.
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.
I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 384211 Read Count: 238916
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
ooooh that james. i found this last night and read the first 3 chap before I konked out. I hae to say this story is fantabulous. I really like it that Charlie and Renae are vampires as well. That makes them equals to the Cullens which I very much like to see. Poor Bella went from the frying pan to the fire. Im reading on my ereader and will review every couple of chapters or when I get vampire fly in my head that gets me. So good you and Thaigher Lillie are so good at this. Im drawn in and before I know Im so many chapters in and obsessed.
Author's Response:
Hi *waves* =)
Thank you so much for giving this story a chance =)
Thank you. I'm happy that you like it so far. I decided to make Charlie and Renee vampires because I always thought it would have been neat if they were turned in Breaking Dawn to live the rest of eternity with Bella and the Cullen's. Yeah poor Bella, she's quite frightened...and the vampires can be vicious.
Thanks again,
I appreciate it very much!
~Jells
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
what an amazing tale. The whole mating thing is so fast, as a human its hard to imagine- seems a bit caveman. It is Edward so I'd go with the flow as well. What I enjoy is Charlie and Renae reaction to their mating. It bothers me in the original vesion is that Charlie and Renae didnt know a damn thing which was for their protection, here no need to protect. I love that. The vampire govt seems quite cruel, almost like Hitler's regime. What I thought of last night what controls were put in place to prevent the govt from taking Bella as an estate item to do with what they pleased? was their a will that said she went to Charlie, would the govt rerspect a human will? Yes i think way too much but it was in mind.. so good
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you still like it. Yes, lol, it is a bit caveman now since you mentioned it. The vampire males are quite dominant towards their females in here. But they cherish them very much. Since this story is a HEA, Bella will become a hybrid eventually. LOL yeah, kinda a spoiler but not really. There is a way around this whole hybrid law. So Bella will become quite dominant against her mate. LOL I guess you could say that the true mate concept is kinda like finding your soulmate, except this is way more intense, animalstic in a way because of the claiming and quite dominant. Yes, I know right? It bothered me a lot when Charlie and Renee didn't know a damn thing. Thank you, i'm happy you like Charlie and Renee here.
Yeah, the vamp gov't is very cruel. Good question. Unfortunately, in Bella's case everything was taken from her because there was no will ( Not a very smart move at all- her parents should have had a will. Now Bella's father was becoming quite ill- they were in the process of making a will -her mom and dad- but it was never completed.) But with that being said, Bella would have still lost some of her estate items, because most of the time the gov't would have taken what they pleased. So in the end, it all depends on the govt if they decide what is valuable enough, they'll snatch it anyways. Bella was only lleft with her clothes, shoes, music box and little personal items, but everything else of greater value was taken from her. Now because Bella's grandmother had passed away, she didn't have much left either. Her g-ma had a few belongings and she lived in a little aparment. Most of the humans in this story don't have much unfortunately. And then, the vamp gov't will snatch anything away of value. it's very cruel. =(
Thank you so much for your comments and questions. =)
~Jells
Date: 27 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
well when you deliver you deliver big... go big or go home,, thats my jels. such a freaking roller coaster ride.. the sex freaking amazing im so jealous... the adoration of edward is breathtaking.... I love how you built Angela and Ben, its taken me a bit to catch up but ma cherie you made the hairs on my arms stand up again... so good...
Author's Response:
Maaaaaaarge!!! *hugs*
Thanks so much!!! I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Although Edward and the male vampires are quite dominant, they love their mates passionately. Thank you. I adore Ben and Angela, tho Ben will have some apologizing to do next chapter. lol There will be more sweet Edward coming up soon. I just got to take a breather, this chap took a lot out of me. lol
Thanks again,
*hugs*
xox
Jells
28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 61889
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
this so feels like my life. love love, love, can i have an Edward? lol great plot line, cant wait to see where this goes..
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
he probaly forced himself on her, asshole. poor bella. go edward, do your thing; Baby.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
very sweet, loving. he is so tender with her you cant help but get pulled in. my only thought on this is no mention of protection. im just saying.
Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.'
After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.
Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.
Story is AU-Human and B/E (Jacob is only involved in flashbacks.) Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness
Story is rated NC-17 for language, future lemons, and depictions of teen bullying. Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV
Banner by ViiolentDelight, Evenstar, and Blinkie by Rason
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72778 Read Count: 23874
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *~My Best Friends Boner~*
oh yeah she loves him too. this will be fun.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 *~ Just Friends ~*
aww Poor Edward. one of boys sounds just like this so I have to say this touched my heart. I love the comic, the extra element is fantastic.
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*
he is so sweet. Im rootin for him GO Edward you can do it baby, the tattoo looks way hot
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 *~ It's My Party and I'll Puke If I Want To~*
poor poor Edward. I have a confession to make, In college I got so drunk some other drunk guy to put his tongue dont my throat and I cant even begin to say where it went wrng but I threw up all over this poor guy, he didnt shriek but the look on his face was priceless, i still cant help but laugh and thank god he was good guy and still one of my buddys to this day. so funny but oh what it what be like be a fly on that wall
**Judges' Choice Winner for the Blue-Collarward Contest** Edward is a janitor at Swan Publishing. Bella is the owner and CEO. Can Bella get past the fact Edward is stuck in a blue-collar job?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7088 Read Count: 495
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I like this alot. My father was blue collar and no man like my daddy. I married a architect though, lol too funny. loved
Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness.
A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner! Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!! http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief
Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!
Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!
Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door
Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389496
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...
I cannot wait to se these two together. They both need the release. Very good burn, their dream are intense. Cant wait for next update..
Other really good Rec's Edwards Eternal Kiss-HOT, Cambion-Really dark, Victim.. so many rec's so little time...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the heads up, I'm actually reading that one too! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!
Laterzz:)
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN
what an amazing well written story. the burn is amazing. cant wait to read who safe worded. I know its Edwards, he is over Tanya and wants out. Bella is around the corner and cant wait for those fire works for sure. great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing... you guys are great!!!!
Laterzzz:)
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...
your killing me here. great plot but im so curious what happened with edward. and i have to say they way they caught Jacob... omgee hahahahaha, thats what you get dumb ass. great read
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter: 4 BREAKING UP IS HARD TO DO...
You are such a naughty lill thing. teasing us like that. fab u lous chapter. Tanya has gone to a whole level of crazy bitch in this one. cant wait for more. the proposal was super sweeet. my son proposed to me when he was six dressed in his easter wear, now he is 13 and one of my joys of life. that part brought a tear to my eye. what mom doesnt love that her son adores as such.
Author's Response:
Wow I´m blown away by the response this story is getting. I really want to thank each and everyone of you for reading and reviewing. Each review is specail and you guys keep me going and make want to keep you happy. Thanks for the patience as I move these two along, even those of you with ´forced patience´... you know who you are! lol! i love the threats of taking me into the playroom for a punishment scene.. What can I say DomWard owns me. Hang in there with me and let´s enjoy this crazy ride!! *Happy Thanksgiving*
Laterzzz:P
Krazi
xoxoxo
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...
I love Mojo, he is so adorable and badass in his own way. Of coarse who doesnt love Esme, taking care of Bella in the bath was so sweet and special, Bella really neededd that and Esme as always is perfection. Yummy yummy to my tummy thats our Dom Jasper, gosh if i didnt love Alice so much i'd hate her that lucky bitch. Cant wait for the next update
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!! Laterzzz:) Krazi xoxo
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...
Im glad she laid it on the line. leah is just sad. I love lil Seth though. what a doll. bella's relationship with Charlie is special what a good man that Charlie
Author's Response:
You guys are so great! I thank you enough for reading and reviewing! The response to this chapter is absolutely overwhelming! For being so great check out the blog for a teaser of the upcoming chapter! Enjoy and as always, let me know what you guys think! www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com Laterzzz:) ~Krazi & Mojo~ xoxo
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...
so naughty. you never disappont. Gosh I cant wait for the real games to begin. Now time for my cold shower.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee! So here´s to TGIF! Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers! Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!
Laterzzzz:)
Krazi and Mojo
xoxo
www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!. How could you end it there!! that was evil, that was just mean. no way a virgin!!! was she not with Jacob? WTF!!! I love you so I'm gonna go calm down and mope.
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...
well alrighty than. Alice was so busted. I'm kinda scared what Edward is up to but not really. We all know that the world aligned when he looked in her eyes and recognized his pet. Soooo can't wait.
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...
First, your Laurent is Fuck Hawt. Two the scene was soooooo FUCK Hawt. oh my... sweety You killed it. I want to review more but honestly I want to go read the next chapter. I heart your burn, no one does it better. He fell hook, line and sinker. This goes to show you how blind men are when they are in their heat. Cant wait to read his shock
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...
I cant wait to see what happens next. Poor Bella and all her conflict
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....
so fabulous. hot on so many levels. always great. cannot wait to see the actual deed happen and what he plans for her.
Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140942
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house
You girls are the shit... I just peed in my pants. Her daughter omg- nuh uh. I knew Esme was in this but her daughter wow, wow wow. Poor Bella is taking a huge beating for this mes cuz of crazy Esme. I wanna see Carlisle rip into her. I love our Em all silly at the wng moments. His head must be awfully hard all that hitting him upside it. lmao I love him. I cannot wait for the next chapter,how did she-ang" play apart of being with Edward and esme with carlisle? did they both plan that? absolutely amazing. pls update love if you dont I will have to strip down to nothing and streak all of Roses work buddy's. Will this work for motivation and than schu- bam!!!! I'm naked. Don't hate, you know you want me to. lmao love ya's so much. Your hoor is bowing down to excellence as always.
Author's Response:
hahahah ur soooooo cute....no streaking heheheh ang doesnt know esme is her mother and I wrote Esme POv so u get to see how her and carlisle are togeteher....xoxoxooxoxoxoxoxooxoxox
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Great story. great burn, cant wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review! The story will be updated in the next few days. We're so glad you like it so far. Hope to hear more from you as the chapters go on. Again thanks so much for reading and reviewing our story...Ari & DLIR
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I really enjoyed this chapter. way hot. im sneding you lovely ladies a virtual cig. way to go!!!! cant wait for more you bad bad girls...
Author's Response:
*Sits back and smokes virtual cig* LOL We're sooooo happy you like! *doin happy dance* Bad girls *looks at DLIR* us? Sweet DLIR you hear that BB! We're BAD GIRLS that's awesome ; )~ The next chapter will be up in a few days.
We really appreciate your support! Thank you for review you are awesome!
Ari & DLIR
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover
I very much enjoyed this. What a hoot that Eric kinda, sorta get to come out and play. poor angela, she deserve better even though she is kinda a greedy bitch. if my man treated me like that i'd be a greedy bitch too. shoot if I cant have a O, I can have a great wardrobe, and a very good trainer. it goes both ways. what a bummer they are both stuck with people they do not love and even more that Eric punked out on Angela as well. Bella needs to give Eric his walking papers and enjoy her delicious bronze god, what a fantastic treat an update so quickly, cant wait for another chapter
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection
That was totally worth the wait. HaHa Mike as a gay guy, Loved it.. Aro, too funny. As for Angie, what a bitch, i want to slap her into next week, though I have to say that Assward is being a huge ass. Sweetie, you chose her; just because you have a huge dick doesnt mean you have to act like one. I love you Edward but drop her if you dont love her and stop giving her mixed signals and move on. and just so we are clear, I never say no to being teased in fact I love it.. Great job on a delicious read.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the wicked review. Yah he can be an ass hey...but then he wouldnt be our Spartan. And Teasing...hmmmm...we like teasing....xo DLIR AND ARI
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent
This had me on the edge of my seat. How scary for her. Edward took quite the beating for his Kitten. Go Spartan,!! Now she knows, what will she do to keep him??? Love this chapter but laurent was scary, Edward came just in time all badass, damn!! poor bella i felt for her when they were asking her questions about her husband, and his wife; uugh that deserved a drink and a cig. well done as always..
Author's Response:
Thank you soo...much....its one thing to visualize in ur head and another to put it on paper....Im glad u felt the emotions that bella felt.. A cig and a few drinks 4 SURE love DLIR AND ARI
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life
What a dream. poor edward doesnt know whether he is coming or going. i love emmett. what a good friend. when can we see rose appear? Edward style you say, damn,,, Bring it..wink;)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think
Bella thought very quick on her toes, a spa package for Angela, too funny. Poor Edward and Bella or maybe not getting all lucky in the elevator. Loving the fast updates, cant wait to see whats next.
Author's Response:
Yes...she was quick on her feet.. Elevator sex with EDWARD....always good lol...Hope to have the next chap out soon....xoxoox DLIR AND ARI
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy
This was so wrong it was sooo good. I guess Angela has it coming but he is so not playing fair. cant wait for next chapter to see whats up with Bella. What scared you that bad Bella? humm.
Author's Response:
LOL Ang does have it coming to her. BUt we also agree that Edward is not playing fair. We have a feeling something bad might happen. *winks* just can't tell you what yet. Great question, DLIR what did scare Bella that bad? I wanna know too LOL
Thank you for your review. We love reading them!
xoxoxxoxo Ari & DLIR
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness
These two are a mess. Poor Bella, she is so torn by her want and her ethics. and Edward honey, don't give up like that you scoundrel. I love him though that Spartan of yours which is why i am so glad Eric is going to be let go, not fair to him either, Angela is a sneaky lil bitch, hmmmmm..
Author's Response:
I love spartan to.......and eric HAS TO GO.....hope ARI gives us what we want in the next one......but i have a feeling Angelas is indeed a sneaky bitch
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings
I loved the spa talk, i love naughty woman talk, nothing like a sports sock(Yah Babeee) poor Barbie sock gotta get hated on. The break up with Eric was painful but necessary. I truly felt so bad for him what a blow to his ego but his behavior after the fact- I'm gonna kick his ass and yes I know he is not real but still her mom's blanket that was foul-poor poor Bella. I have to say I got very very ill for the holiday-in the hospital with walking pnemonia and all I could think of other than my kids and I felt like I was dying(" oh please dont update til I get home")-I missed my gals so seeing this makes me so happy though I cant catch my breath with all that my lungs hate me right now. Please update with our Spartan soon to make your girl better faster puhlease........
Author's Response:
Omg......take care of urself......DLIR AND ARI gives ur a hug....OH HELL....SPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRTAAANNNNNNNNNN get ur ass over here and hug the damn woman.....u can leave kitten for a sec GEEESSSHHH....Men...cant live with them but u cant live without them...especially if they are ROB aka SPARTAN HOTNESS......MUAH....Ari has her chapter written so a few tweeks and off to the BETA....xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)
Not once but twice, that was just mean, funny but mean. I could totally imagine from Ang pov Edward dry humping the couch, omg tooooo funny and than with Bella, how many shades of awkward was that. I love Emmett so much and Rosalie too badass for her own good, I love her and Edward in this one. Mr Magoo was a hot mess too-ewww 68 and with two, I know someone just like and it aint cute. As for Mike and Aro there are no words how hilareous this duo is, I having trouble seeing it but I cant turn away; how bad is that?... loved and loved you cock blocker you. Happy Birthday BB Smooches sweeetie.
Author's Response:
LOL The whole dry humping couch thing. Was just to funny not to write! :) Yeah he did kinda get thrown out there when Ang and Bella walked in LOL Poor guy :) Oh you haven't seen all of Rose yet. She's about to make a huge and I do mean huge appearance. ANd it's not pretty :) As the story goes on you'll see her and Edward are like brother and sister! Mr Magoo I couldn't stop myself with him. Mike and Aro are just like a car wreck...even I can't look away LOL
DLIR is up next with her freakin awesome chapter! Thank you for her B-Day wishes <3
As always thank you for your sweet review. We greatly appreciate all of your awesome support BB! <3
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Home
I loved the tage so much, the closure was needed and at last Ang had grown up. Yay. xoxoxoxo
Date: 18 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Weeping Willow part 2
This made me cry. I mean like I'm bawling like a baby. I read and re read Roses chapter and I have to be honest I cried hard than too, I knew Esme was out I expected her to be taken out but Carlisle well he was different, he was just ripped away and for me my father was taken in a brutal ripped away just like this so I shut down. Reading this takes me back to my fathers funeral and the eulogy I gave at that time, I love you guys so much, so much talent, you have taken me on a huge emotional roller coaster. I have to say that reading the two chapters of weeping willow made me see Edward in a different way. Does the man know how to shut down or what?!!! I saw my soon to be ex husband in him so much that again even though I reread these chapter several times it took me a moment to pull my own emotions out of it and just enjoyed it. Moving forward thru the rest but Yeah I'm now resorting to my fav ice cream death by choclate. you took me there its your fault the whole thing gone.....
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's
Those two are something else. The heat cannot be denied but I am glad that Bella put some boundries between them. I really dont like to see cheating even though its there it's RL. That made me feel better so thnks hon, you totally get your readers and thats why you RAWK. Angela is so up to no good that I cant wait to see those divorce papers being served, shit yeah, about time Edward. Merry Christmas, Happy Holiday, and Happy New Year. Hope to see you back quikly. Ari I heart you so much, I'm so sorry to hear the loss of your sibling, We're here for you when your ready, sending both of you a virtual hug. Until later
Author's Response:
I know how you feel about the Cheating... we are reallly trying to have them be repectful and do things right as best as we can... Obviously we need to spice it up a bit BUT MY BELLA is better then sleeping with him in their house.....xoxoxo
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Swing My Way
There was so much here. Angie is beyond a bitch but on the otehr hand I feel sorry for her. As always you make me all crazy what next. I always want more like our Bella AndEdward, just cant turn away no matter what. ta dum. I Heart ya both
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Use Somebody
hmmm. I just noticed my review is not here. uuggh, arrgh. sooo good. Bitch has a lot of nerve being mad. she is so guilty I was feeling a set up but Edward had to slip. Both Spartan and Kitten play dirty and we reap all the fun. and for the Letter, thats way too much wrk. I am so hoping that Bella opens a can of whoop ass On Angela and call it a day. If you like I'll hold her. just kidding
Author's Response:
hahah ok grab her arms...LOL....yah the chapter got all messed up so we had to delete and repost...so it erased all the reviews but thanks for leaving another one...just incase u didnt see this...i just made it....,enjoy
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1
So fantastic. Im so proud of them. how freaky laurent and eric together,hmmm, i smell a rat. who knew Eric would be such a threat. I am so torn over feeling sorry for Angie or hating her. the think about Angie she doent know love becuz it wasnt her's to begin with, realizing that is horrid for her and it will hit her. I love Em and Rose, really love them here, they are the kind of couple you want to go have a drink with and act crazy. The picture of her as the witch is perfect,haha.
Author's Response:
hahahah i loved making the pic of the witch...hahahha. And hell yah I would love to hang out with Em and Ro......we hope u enjoy part 2
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2
That was so awesome- you never disappoint. MY panties just melted, and my heart swooned. now thats a christmas present. I dont think they should come out til New Years. I have to admit that voice calling them is freaky. LMAO to Fred my bitchy bro got a shot out, hahahhaha MY real life Im happy and good natured but if you cross me I do admit I bite. how funny my inner-outer bad girl got to play too, omg I fell out of chair and my family looked at me crazy(its not the first time so the moment has passed.) I'm sending liquor your way, totally deserved I may say.
Author's Response:
Alright we need some liquor my dear! :) I'm with you they shouldn't come out till New Years! But *sighs* the come out waaaaay before :( Love your shout out babes! You rock :) We are working on the next chap right now!
Thanks for your awesome review BB!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners
Ari....... I miss you, come back, come back. Such a good chapter, Em is a mess but Im glad that Rose is bad ass enough to keep him in line, If Sparatan wants to charts new territory send him my way,I have some new territory for him. So yummy, I want some. She had nine, you flipping kidding me, Im soooooo jealous, now the ante has been raised and I have resolved if she gets 9 I want 9. ;)~ *pouts and sticks my tounge out.
BTW** i got goose bumps she is alone in the spa, wah, what if the bad wolf comes to get her. hurry Spartan, go get your girl. loved hunney as always. You made me happy, Smooches and high five's
Author's Response:
heheheh Bella is at the Spa....shhhhhhhhhhh.....nothing bad happens....just so u dont worry hun.....and 9 I want that too.....trust me..................
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2
I loved the spa. I am so jealous. a massage, sounds divine... Em is my buddy and that Rosalie abuses him endears me to her. He is a bear thats been declawed. Rosalie is a great friend all the way around. I so want to grab Ang by her hair and bitch slap her, Bitch what bout He dont want you dont you get. Other that I get what Rosalie told Edward, spot on but still give it up, maybe Edward should offer a huge dont worry ill pay you to go away to get away from you since money is her thing. so fantastic as alway, I just love you to pieces. and I know I've said this before but teasing me is a good thing so send that tease babeeeee...!!!!
Author's Response:
heheheh ohhh i will tease u all u want...lol....thanks for loving the story so much....we love each of ur reviews....
xoxooxxo
"Bella?"
I stopped walking and turned to look at who was calling me. "What's he want?" Jessica whispered to me.
"I don't know." I walked towards the security desk. I smiled at the guy I have said hi to on more than one occasion.
He smiled at Jessica and lifted his hand to her. "Hi, I'm Mike," he introduced himself.
Mike, that's his name.
Jessica giggled as she shook his hand. I knew that giggle. She was crushing on Mike. "Hi, I'm Jessica."
I stood beside her, deciding to stay quiet until they were done their introductions. "So you wanted to talk to me Mike?" I placed the bags I was carrying down on the desk top as did Jess.
His facial expression turned serious, his smile wiped away as he stood up from his chair and leaned closer to Jessica and I. "Um, well," he looked at Jessica.
"Whatever you have to say you can say in front of Jess," I clarified, feeling my heart race. He was starting to freak me out.
He looked at me now, nodding his head. "I don't know you that well, but I'd like to think were kinda friends since we say hello every day. I mean, you have always been nice to me so I only find it right for me to tell you this."
I furrowed my brows as he looked over my shoulder, and then his, clearly making sure no one was around.
"An Angela Masen came to me today."
My heart dropped to my stomach. I stood still lungs deflated, no attempt to fill them.
"What the ** did she want?" Jessica grabbed my hand as I said nothing. I barely functioned, let alone, comprehended what he was telling us.
"She actually tried to come on to me." He laughed a little which quick started my heart to life. I need to breathe to live. "Well after that failed attempt I noticed her staring at the monitors." He turned and pointed to the six screens that videoed various parts of the building. "She asked me if I had access to all the videos that were recorded and if we actually keep them. I had no idea why she was asking until she mentioned her husband."
I gasped, placing my hand over my mouth. "She wanted to know if I personally could help her. Maybe if I have seen Mr. Masen with any type of woman."
I shook my head not wanting to hear this.
"She offered me a lot of money. I mean A Lot." He started fidgeting with some papers. My eyes came down to see a small video cassette sitting under the papers he was purposely moving. He folded the paper, slipping the tape in the middle, placed it on the desk, sliding it towards me. "No one else has seen it and I plan on keeping it that way."
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick
You guys just got jokes all over the place, lmao. I swear I dont know who likes this chapter more me or my wabbit. My wabbit. Poor Edward and that elevator. I swear I felt those fireworks. Oh GOd she said sasquatch to rose oh shit. Edward is gonna have an attack. Looks like the war is about to begin. Who took her? Shall we play a game of whodunit. I want to place a bet cuz I gotta a good idea okay not my idea but this will have all of us screamin like banshee's. So good I wanna console Spartan until his kitten comes back ;)~
Author's Response:
LOL you wabbit I love it. Ah yes the war is about to go in full effect. Yeah lets play the whodunit game. This should be good. We'll let you console Spartan.
Thank you sweetie for another awesome review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period
I so love. huney you make me squeal like a girl,lol oh yeah I am a girl so your good. I love Em, you know that, if Rose wouldnt come over and kick my ass I'd be shagging her hubby after I finish with Spartan, I love his sense of humor, for me thats hot. rose too she is the best so I ain't messin with her man cuz I know better. the ring really is specatacular. thats a lot of money...... and for Ang can she really get any sleazier, she's gross. and the hairy back massage, sweetie I respect you that much more cuz I'd have to think about Spartan doing that too. Miss Ari alot but Im so glad your still hanging with us. Come back Ari, come back.....
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies
First, Welcome bck Ari. miss ya big time. I fell out of my chair and peed my pants. Best chapter yet....I love Spartan in a tizzy, so sexy when he's frazzled. damn straight if I were marge I'd be all over that, im sure her sweetness is only the outside, you know what they about the quiet ones. lmao, just kidding, okay not really. Jess deserves some luvin here she gots her girls back, though she got she to Spartan without his shirt on and didnt appreciate it. Who among us wants to kick the living hell out of Angela already. if she wasnt such a huge bitch id be embarrassed for her how bad she is making herself look. Happy dance for Ari and and that teaser. sooo good now I have to go change. you know im kidding right.. good day guys.
Author's Response:
LOL oh we love you!!!!! I'm so happy to be back! I've missed everyone sooooo much. Sorry you fell out of your chair and peed your pants. Next time maybe we should put a warning :) Yes he is all sexy when he's frazzled. I say we get a mob together track Ang's stupid ass down and beat her ass! What do you think? You with me :)
Thank you for your review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1
today was so long so I can come and review. Esme makes Ang look like mother Theresa. what a beoyatch. ooooh the party is a trick, im all freaking out. lmao,,,omg you kill me James is jamie,,,hahhahahahhaha I fell off my chair and spit out water at my desk, not cute with all kinds of eyes looking at me. I love you guys to the bottom of heart now hurry and update cuz momma needs to know whats next. smooches for my bday present, i loved it.xoxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
I know who is worse...Esme or Ang...I dunno..hahahah....Hope u enjoy part 2 xoxoxoox
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: The Truth Lies Beneath...Part 2
Ari, do you baby, ain't nothing like it. I just realized though I read it days ago I never acually reviewed. shame on me. I deserve a spanking, Spartannnnnn. HAWT, HAWT, HAWT. Though I did read like 3x and all 3x I combusted into heat. muah to all my girls.
Author's Response:
LOL oh we just can't have that. So yes we are sendin Spartan to spank you! Bad, bad, bad you are a naughty, naughty, naughty girl! Spartan is gettin on a plane as we speak.
Awe did you really read the chapter 3x's? Now wait is it cuz of our swesome writtin skills? Or just the hawt sex? Hell even I'm goin with the hawt sex! LOL.
Thank you sweetie for your awesome review! We love you sooooo much!
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Ari, DLIR & Spartin :)
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted
Now thats what i'm talking about.. Rose is the shit. Shit, I was panting watching her work. She must have been wearing boots. You know she's badass in some boots. lmao. So good. I dont see Eric as evil, stupid yes but not evil. Laurent is a whole other animal though. So scary. I have to admit and you both know I have been torn of Ang from the beginning but now I am rootin for her to be a hero out of this, if nothing else for herself. Let her take Laurent out, Yeah, Yeah. OMG in Forks, You got me there, I didnt see Forks in the equation but it's perfect!! I'm screaming at my computer so you know it was beyond fantastic. Great action guys.. I voted and cant wait to see you both win, in my heart you won on the first chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter and i'm willing to beg...***batting my eyes purdy please.......
Author's Response:
Awe your so damn sweet! Thank you for voting for us BB! Ok and just so you know we have the next chap done and we are already workin on the one atfer that! SO YAAAAAY USSSSSS LOL.
Rose is the shit and yeah she so should be wearing boots! Eric is just a creepy lil greasey ass! I hate him I want to kick his loser ass myself! I say we write all of us h00rs in the story and fuck him and Laurent up what do ya say? :)
Thank you sweetie for you kick ass awesome review!
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Ari & DLIR
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: My Baby Girl
Okay guys. This was a hard one to read. What a bitch but she was a bitch that played all the wrong cards. I felt really sorry for her. And even more I now feel so bad for Angie's loss. That woulda, shoulda, coulda kinda thing. I have to admit I read this when you updated but my husband and I separated that weekend and I could not focus on anything to say in a review for my own diluge hit me quite hard. No worries my dearest naughty ladies, I am well I just had to adjust and pick up. This is me picking up. I love you both, thank you for giving me something that I get excited for and even more distracts me. I want Spartan love so on to the next chapter and yes hookers I know Rosalie was wrriten for me.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world
Oh Golly Ms Molly. Ugh I hate Esme!! But I have to say that I kinda liked her too because normally she is so sweet, so loving, here she was a villianess called "Evil Woman" I love to hate this time. When she said these low life people I was like What?! Beoyatch you better not be talking about me and than she rips off the head of a barbie. If I was that momma I would have taken off my big hoop earring and grabbed some hair. How dare she.. got me all riled up. lol I love it that every time there is another way to get my blood rushing. I have to say that I think the shot came from Rosalie's gun hitting Eric. Also I want to see Carlisle tell Esme she is Fired!!! oh yeah I mean the big D. I want him to tell How you like me now? Than big Daddy C can come visit me. Just saying I'm a supporter of the fine arts the art being his body.*wink
Author's Response:
I know We hope u guys would love to hate her for once.. hahaha and I had fun making be a beyotch. I see what i can do about the carlisle situation lol
Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Bromance
OMGGGGGGGG no way. no fucking way. Oh god Ang is dead isn't she? omg that was brutal. Edward was kick ass with that gun but I have to admit I want more Rose. I can see Carlisle's fascination. I have a girl crush true and honest. She is the baddest bitch. I missed our Em, Em I love you, you can be my Amish love anytime sweets. and uhm yeah can we say awkward with Carlisle and his lusting over Rosalie, though Carlisle deserves a hot piece himself. So what will be Esme's consequence for this? hmmmm, pray tell sistas do not hold back becuz this dirty whore wont take no for an answer. Hurry, hurry, hurry pls update I have to know who died, omg Ang poor girl. or is it CArlisle? omg why else would he be crying? Please tell me, please.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG I LOVED UR REVIEW....hahah sooooooo Esme POV is next and then ur ROSE pov....she had to be heard again...xoxoox I just finished the next chap.so I sent it to ari.....i have a few fixes and off to beta it goes
Love comes to you when you least expect it. But can your love survive an unexpected event?
E & B . Not intended for readers under the age of 18. Mature content is involved. This story is written by DLIR, just for fun. SM own all Twilight. Edward. Bella. etc .
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132261 Read Count: 33801
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Pictures
I love your writing, This is oh so hot... Poor Renae to be in a loveless marriage, to have a husband who always critcises. I feel so bad for alice for im sure you have some wonderful piece of man lined up for her. and omg Rosalie, love and love her, Emmett still waiting on his girl.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much..and i love this review.....
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: My future
I love that song. I'm sorry for her loss, Every chapter is better than one before, like opening up a package and every layer is bettter than before.
Author's Response:
That is one of the nicest reviews I have had. I write for fun. And to have people enjoy it, makes me smile. Thank you so much...DLIR
When the Cullens lose Alice and Rose in the battle with the Volturi, Bella must become the glue holding the family together. Alice makes the greatest sacrifice of her existence to ensure Jasper lives on.
ExB, BxEm, BxJ, ExJ, BxJxE (Ending).
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Edward/Jasper, Bella/Emmett, Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 184848 Read Count: 63001
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons
Well, when they said sharing was good, I dont think they had this in mind. But hot damn, lucky Bella, how come Bella gets all the luck, Though the idea of Alice and Rosalie being gone is hard to imagine for this strong family, great read, very sexy, cant wait to read the next chapters
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Lake of Stars
what a chapter. the ache he feels is so stark so immense, who woulda thought that Bella would the one to keep this family intact. Her love is the love that keeps them tied together, no matter that its family, sexual whatever it might be. Its an amazing thing that grieve can go either way, it can tear families apart or bring them even closer, I love Alice and am so sad her influenece is just in letters even though i can love that as well, no getting rid of Alice, honey always finds a way back.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing!
In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC
Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.
Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.
L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie
Tkegl...Thank you!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129728
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)
It's almost like Independance Day. only on a more immense horrible level. The nightmare is ammplified. How funny they come in ships. I laughed out loud at that. Let the games begin...;)~
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah, it does kinda remind me of Independence day since you mentioned it.
Hope you'll enjoy this story!
Thanks for reading and commenting! =)
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Hate
The image on the attack on Bella's family was a scene out of the movies. I'm literally screaming at my computer DO NOT GET OUT, dont Do it. and oh my god he gets out. I know it was needed for a plot line but oh my god how gruesome, so im curious was this Esme? Only Esme in my mind would protect Isabella. The one good thing is that she was a baby and would have no memory hopefully of that fateful night, or will she remember? I do love so far very very dark but the fantastic writing draws you in and tells me to stay there and be a good girl and read, the kids have a microwave. lol
Author's Response:
LOL. Yeah, I happen to scream at my computer from time to time when reading too. No, it wasn't Esme. You'll see the Cullen's soon, but it may be something you aren't expecting.
=D --> "The kids have a microwave" *giggle* Thanks for giving this fic a shot!
Thanks again,
~Jellybean
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning
This is just fantastic, really really dark, I was just watching V the Return on tv.com and tv stuff, this is reminding me of that somewhat. IO love it that it was Elizabeth and Edward Sr. Lil Edward already want to fight to get out to his Bella. Give me more, more..
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying our story!
LOL! We'll give you more, more, more... soon!
Thanks for your awesome comments! =D
~Jells
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up
This was brutal. Wouldnt Jasper have some of that power? What did they presume it was just Edverr and not his twin as well sharing in that power. I guess we know who will good versus evil. love and love
Author's Response:
Answers to that will be posted, but i'll spill them here too. As explained, Male twins normally don't survive the term, If i'm speaking from the fiction that i came up with, they never give the news of twin boys, because they never both survive. It's always one. The technology and the way of life on their planet, knows how territorial a male can be, and even a male baby vamp can be vicious in the womb towards his brother. If elizabeth would've given a vaginal birth, edward would've killed him. Since it was c-section (of sorts, Jasper had a chance to survial, although weakly.) SO the doctors new, but did want to get the woman's hopes up only to find out , the other baby she bonded with, was dead. So the doctors don't say anything unless it's a boy and a girl or two girls.
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Taken
OH MY GOD!!!! That was a nailbiter. Edward was so close to her. Bella has such a open soul, so accepting of what is. Her innocence is endearing but also kinda sad. It guess its a good thing she doesnt remember her infanthood. Poor Mimi I feel so horrid for her, her distaste was born of terror and a life thwarted by bloodsucker's cruelty. I cant wait for Tygs chapter, where do Char and peter come into play with maybe Jasper or how will Edward find her now. I find it very cool and interesting that from outside the walls he could feel her but his memories of her were for the most part dormant. He was taught to hate humans from Caius but you cannot stop your hearts intent for his mate. If I may ask in what language is this actually in? I ask becuase if there is a vampire dictionary out there i want to read it.. I'm just sayin... lol so good as always, you never disappoint you always get better and better.
Author's Response:
Hi *waves*
It may have been a nailbiter, but omg it was a pain in the ass too. lmao
The vamp language is actually made up. I researched for weeks what language I could use. I even googled vampire language. LOL But came up with nothing. =( Oh and I watched 30 Days of Night since they speak vamp in there, but nothing hit me. My mom's side of the family speak German, Russian,Romanian, and Serbian...and a few sentences in English <---well, my grandparents and some relatives know a few English phrases. lol . But I thought maybe I could twist the letters around and create something different. I really wish there was an actual vamp language. That would be really interesting to read. =)
Thank you so much! =)
~Jells
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit
OMG!!!!! Baby you came back with a bang. Hot damn, he wasted no time. Those barbs scare the shit out of me. Not sure to be turned on or clenching my thighs out of sheer terror. Tracy said this chapter was the shit. She wasn't lying. Tygs said I was gonna fall out of my chair, she was most def not lyin. I'm go gonna go bother Tygs. cant wait to see if she lets me pre-read soon. Can't wait. Poor Bella, how scary to being taken like that your first time. I thought my first time story was bad, I don't feel bad now.And for the blood whores how sad of an existance. I see the True Blood bar in that part. Very vivid. I could see it. I am so hooked I cannot turn away...Jels Darling You scare me but I still want to be you and in that fabulous brain. LOVED!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much =) I'm happy you liked. Tracy and Tygs could tell you how frustrated I was. It was HELL writing it. lol Yeah, hahah the barbs are freaky especially here I tried to kick it up a notch when Edward tore the blood whore's skin inside. Ouch! =/ He's so cruel. Oooooo True Blood. I love that show. I love vamps with with fANGS!! FANGBANGER!!! lol
Thanks again,
xxoo
Jells
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Prepare to be Pissed
you tease me....wink*;)
Author's Response:
LOLOL
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1
So awesome. OMG that pulls is crazy insane. That love/hate thing is captured perfectly here. He is so torn by his emotions it made it fun to read. Poor Bella all used and abused but still confused by this pull as well. Jasper has some balls after all. Go on baby, drop that gauntlet. Let the games begin.
Author's Response:
Hiya!!!!
IKR? Tygs did an amazing job!!! As always!
Thanks so much for your comments. And hell yeah! Let the games begin ;)
Thanks again,
XxOo
Jells
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)
Finally I got caught back up.OMG You blow my mind like the most intimate of lovers barb cock and all. This Edward is stunning in his maleness OMG. I flove ya girls forever and every and ever!!!
Author's Response:
*Big HUGS*
Love you!!!
xxooo
jells n Tyggy
Date: 14 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)
Wow and wow... like an excellent lover you ladies blow my mind every time... I had to read it twice to wrap my head around all that. such a good chapter. I'm along for the ride for sure and in fact I just put my seat belt on so bring IT baby!!! Tease me like only you girls do and in fact I would worship if I could get Cambion.. seriously, I'm not giving up... Tygs. yes girl.. I'm almost 50 now time is a tickin,,lmao. Love you and whatever you do I bow down like a Vampire bitch!!! Kisses girls, Ya'll did real good..
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!! We appreciate it mucho. We're happy that you are still enjoying this story =) And I'm waiting for Cambo too! Can't wait!
*hugs n kisses*
Jells and Tyggy
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)
You evil evil bitches. I love you... Bad ass... omg IO got to read the next chapter.. Monsters indeed..
Author's Response:
LMAO!!!!
Love ya too!!!
Jells n Tyggy
Re-write Of Not So Average.
Isabella Swans' Life at home is no fairytale. She struggles with her weight, depression and family. Eager to get away from her verbally abusive mother and start afresh, Isabella journeys to her first year of college, where she experiences hardships, friendships and Greeks. After seeing her first Greek step-show and eyeing the most popular guy on campus Edward Cullen for the first time, the burn inside her to belong boils to the surface, but there is one obsticle in her way. Rosalie Hale...
Warning: This fic contains: Hazing, Bulimia, Sex,teasing, child abuse, Negligance, suicidal thoughts,OOC, and angst.
All actions that occur in this story are purely fictional.
Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13368 Read Count: 3341
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Rosalie What've You Done? Prologue.
oh god Bella, poor girl. Girl like Rosaliea are a dime a dozen. What a bitch. Oh yeah you made Lauren good this time. Lauren always plays the mean girl, she needs a a bit of slack this go. Love so far. going to switch to the original works and than I can have a better referenece to go by. Did I tell you that I am impressed with your works of art. really call me Dory. cuz your hooks always catch me. lmao,
Author's Response:
I'm really happy you like it. I got tired of Lauren always being the bitch. It's not old, but i like a little OOC in a fic. To be honest, it's not alot of fics out there with Rosalie being a bitch ot her full potential. I had the hazing in NSA, but this time it'll be more connected towards bells in a manner of speaking. I hope you like the next chapter.
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Somewhere I can Be Myself.
My heart hurts for her. Your home should be you oe safety net against the cruety of the world. You right I want to slap the shit out of Rene. I have an anut just like and she is horrid to my cousin who has some of the same issues. Last Thanksgiving was a nightmare cuz my sister and I finally had enough and had our words with our aunt. Not to say we wont be back next Thanksgiving. well written and real. I could still feel that lump in my throut over how uncomfortable it is see someone being picked on.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Somewhere I rather be…
Well looks to me that Rene missed the maternal line for the bitch line. How horrid for Bella> No wonder the issues she has with herself. What an utter waste of parents though, she has had to have her own back from the get go because her parents are too wrapped in their own demons to be of any use to her. So cant wait to see where she evolves and I have to say sigh to Jasper. dreamy and a good friend.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Somewhere I'm Placed
Rosalie is a bitch and I would like to yank her hair but I must admist this Bella I like, I'm glad that here she is a bit stronger and more resilient, I want her to see bigger than her and that she stood up for JAke says alot. I can see her going head to head against Rosalie and her minions and winning despite her insecurities. Jake sounds yummy and Jasper is a good guy that wants to do right. lol poor Jake didnt know to laugh or wince at his predicament. This makes me feel like my kids are going to community college. I may be biased but I love, I'm invested into this Bella and Im one of her homegirls fighting for her behind the scenes.
What do you do when the Mob is after you? Run.
After accidentally witnessing a New York Mob hit, Bella Swan and her brother Emmett are on the run. Due to a lucky pull from a bucket, they land in Montana at the Cullens' animal rescue facility. Will they find more than just refuge with the Cullens?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54397 Read Count: 35768
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Bonfire
he's too cute. Do I see someone falling in love?
Author's Response:
Aww, thanks. It is a romance, written by me so, it's probably predictable! Thanks
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Settling In
Of coarse Alice would have to bring em home
Author's Response:
LOL! Of course! Thanks for the support.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Road Trip
really really good. Em is a great brother,
Author's Response:
Thank you. Emmett is great, huh?
New Banner By Ima Twi Tard and I love her for it!
In my world when a man says "I do," he says it a lot. In my world it is not uncommon for a man to have more than one wife. We are not your everyday poly family, we are new breed. Or should I say a very old breed?
AH/AU Slash and multiples. Don't like it, don't read it. NC-17 (short story contest)
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25995 Read Count: 55728
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
wow. very good story. What way to be welcomed in. Its like a family meeting in the most bizarre way. I admit to being a bit of a voyeur and this was like looking in on someones bedroom, like being hidden in the closet watching this happen. very curious were you are taking this. Of coarse Tanya is a bitch. I like your Maxine, she is maternal and can watch out teach Bella the ropes of her new family.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
what a lurid family. i cannot deny way hot. I kinda feel bad for Tanya, she wants the love Bella has and it will never be hers. very good read.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
oooohhh what tangled web we weave. Edward was a big part of the problem, he completely rejected tanya and acted like an ass. a lil bit of respect to her would have prevented all of this. I know in their lifestyles it doesnt work that way and tanya gets what she deserves at this point and the community at large will judge her but Im hopong some mercy will come her way. Naughty lil diddy but the bigger plot is really well written as well
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I find this story interesting and a bit lurid. It really makes you think that out in the world that this is reality within some religious frame of thoughts. I dont condone but it is what it is. Fro the sake of Edward and Bella and the rest of the "Clan" (and for this group it matches) I find it crazy that sex in public is condoned in a religious belief system but again how grps of people can change their religions to suit their own needs is greatly behind this tale. Did Tanya do wrng, yes she did, but Edward was culpable in her misdeed by not respecting his wifes feeling and helping her wrk thru them in accepting Bella instead of dismissing her like yesterday's trash, I'm gonna follow because I want to see your characters evolve and I want to see the "clan" evolve and what if any consequences, if any, will they have to suffer for said choices.
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Santa was a Prick, or should i say Edward. What kind of creep breaks into your house looking for a Christmas list? Rather than ask questions first, i did what Charlie always taught me to do if the house had a intruder. I SHOT HIM.
Warning: Mention of child abuse, domestic violence, rude humor, small ooc, and Blitzen being a ass. You've been warned.
Not your average Christmas story, Give it a chance. Daily Updates.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Crackfic
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8395 Read Count: 927
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: T-was the Night Before December 18th
My poor Edward is a mess. What part of dont fuck this up didnt you get? hahhaa, so much for kissing santa under the mistle toe to shooting under the suger cookies. so funny, can I rub his arse though, I got the band aid. lol Love the Banner
Author's Response:
lmao he has a santa ass in the next chapter with those pants on lmao it isn't too pretty lmao
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Plumbers Butt....
I heart Blitzen that pain in the ass. I guess edward didnt hear the part dont duck this up. Lil Jacob already has had a rough start, the loss of his mother and grandfather and the betrayel of his father, Weakness is never pretty but it happens. I love this tough Bella, she is soft and maternal but still kick ass and touch, Santa doesnt stand a chance,
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Crazy Wench
Jasper as Father Time is absolutely perfect. So does this mean he "imprinted" on her for lack of a better word? The buzzing feeling he feels Is that the Immortal version of imprinting. He has most certainly met his match. and Edward my dear most women can use a broom and or a gun with the same result.. She would have still kicked your arse my dear had it not been for them seeing you mess this up.. I want to be the fly on the wall at family dinner when they get back. haha and oh yeah Who is Emmett going to be the tooth fairy? lmao, I just crack myself up.;)~~
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mashed Taters
Mashed Taters, lmao, loved and loved, Poor Edward just cant get a break.. Looks like to me this is a set up for all kinds of naughty. Does'nt take him much to find trouble so ta dum, what now.....omg dont let Charlie find it....
thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com
Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
well alrighty than. He is sexy and kinky. whats up with the little girl thing? lol. Renae is a mess and as always absent. Will you bring her father in the picture so to say at any point? So good, I want to see where you go with this. Sunday dinner so uhm intersting...
Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven. Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....
Warning! Contains: Very graffic content. Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.
If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 15645
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Of Blood And Ice
Your Back baby!!!! He is soo evil but damn he's fine. I thought my father had it bad with nothing but daughters, his girls are we say lil demons. could you imagine be stepmother to them crazy bitches?! good start bb.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Systematic Manipulation of De Population
This is just awesome!!! The darkness and the brutality he exudes is just mind blowing. This is a Edward that brooks no nonsense, There is so no compassion in this Edward. His daughters are horrifying to read. I have to say that I like Keres cuz you know what your gonna get with her, she is gonna burn your ass. With Mania she scares me more, for all of her beauty she has the most to take away, to drive her victims insane. with her though is she will be doommed with her inability to control her power. Evil ass bitches though. There is no bringing home a stepmom to visit unless they dont mind being on the menu. Can't wait to see where their travels take them and where the chaos ensues. Go on baby girl with your bad self and dont worry I wore my big girl panties for this so we're good. Chapter 3, come out to playyyyyyyy
Date: 14 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Throne
OH WOW... The visual you built here though very dark was really kinda of fluid like the water he found himself encased in at first. So many centuries of seeng the darkest of dark and discarding it as unusable is really kinda sad and dark angel like. a dead heart can only have so much mercy in him but I found it interesting that though he really is heartless that their is a bit of "parental instinct" in him. Though he is built for death that he is protective of the children says alot of his character. I can hate him and still admire he makes a great dad. CAll me crazy but I loved it. I'm sorry Tygs- this week is handing my ass to me, pls let me make it up to you. Hearts ya babyz. Ya rocked that boat..