Reviews by 84Gemma
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366378
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: New Start

It's funny how Bella has no idea she loves him when will she wake up? You had me worried with the fight at the start but it's good cause yes we do all fight with the people we love. In most stories i read they both have the big O and true to life it does not always happen that way so thank you for keeping it real :o)

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: First Date Insanity

I don't no what is sexyer Edward on a bike or Bella...Oh thank god Bella needed the bathroom i hate to think about what might off been with Alice :o(...i think i love your Bella lol Who is Aaron? please tell me Edwards not going to get ill?

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Surprise

What's with Edward is he really taking drugs? and Stella that was awesome

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Moment of Perfection

What happened with Mike and Bella?

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Hook-Up

I f**king love Alice and i may like Jake a little bit for helping out (oh god did i just say that about Jake?) i will defo be back for more :o)

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Morning Aftermath

Bella with short hair are you mad? like you said it's nice to shake it up lets see if Edward likes the new cut

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Gonna Make Fools

I like the bad ass Bella and loving the story

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Reaction & Adaption

PMSL at this chapter i love how Bella is with Emmett....how the f**k did she stop Edward from playing???

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Safe Sex on Gilligan's Island

Ok i loved it.



Author's Response:

Gemma, I'm so excited you started to read and love it already. Just wait until you get to Emmett talking to Bella about safe sex. LOL

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: He's So Yummy

I think B is falling for E again who is Aaron? i really don't want to ask Jo lol

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Walk Away

I'm glad Edward went back in with out Alice dragging him kicking and screaming. Bella us falling in love and I don't think she knows it it's the second night see is in bed with him after saying she need time to herself

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Why Can't You Stay

Oh my god Bree is a man what the f**k I had to read that twice how could Jo not tell me? Now Edward has some ass to kiss and make up



Author's Response:

LOL I bet Jo wanted you to be as confused as she was about Bree the first time!!

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Angry Men and Farfegnugen

I'm happy Jake want's to talk to Bree again it's always good to have friends around when you need them

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: I'm Not Afraid of You

I thought Bella had really short hair if so then how could Edward brush it from her shoulder?

"

His fingers brushed my hair off my shoulder and turned my face toward his. "Who was the man that stepped all over your non-traditional viewpoint and left you pissed about it?"

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: You Got My Head Spinnin

Oh my god i loved it...so sweet and kind :o)

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bad Day

Thank f**king you not a lot of people will write about the cycle we all no it happens so sometime's it needs to be in the story. Take SM Edward is with Bella every day then 24/7 after he left and come back so it would be nice to no how he could be around her when she had her period like on the honeymoon she was meant to get it but ended up pregnant so she must have had more then one when being with him??

I have only seen Doctor Who as a kid and it scared the crap out of me but then i started watching with hubs and liked it then the new season with David Tennant started i was like fan me down now :o)

I want Edward to take care of me when i'm sick he was so sweet



Author's Response:

David Tennant is THE Doctor Who to me!! LOL  And yeah, the cycle is a real part of our lives and I wanted a Bella we could all relate to in some way.

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All I Needed

PMSL i really like Bree....poor Emmett

Ok so i thought the Best line come from Emmett

"if the house is on fire, no need to save the food ‘cause it’s cooking". i was so wrong i couldn't stop LOL i has tears running down my face it was so funny...the poor bunny BEST CHAPTER EVER

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: I Won't Back Down

It's a good job Bella didn't sleep naked lol loved the bonding in the woods

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Morning in the Meadow

that was great hon :o)

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Scars & Ninja Mind-Fucks

Wow just wow the party should be a lot of fun lol

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Drive

sooooooo sweet i love it next chapter please

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Longest Day

How could anyone cheat on Edward??? Good call Karen glad she like's Bella :o)

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Next Contestant

I really like pissed off Edward and the put in a fight i'm DEAD now i had better go do dinner for the kids lol

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Somewhere I Belong

I really like his tattoo and Bella's yes I found the blog lol I love drunk Bella and Edward can't wait to find out why Alice is so pissed at them :0/

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Learning As I Go

Am i right to think Aaron was just under a year old? If so who's child who he?



Author's Response:

Aaron was almost three and the son of a neighbor.

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: The Past Laid Bare

Ok saw the note so knew what i was doing before i read it but Bella say alll the things Aaron would never do had the tears falling :o( I'm glad Jo phoned as i was reading this cause i needed the brake and time to stop the tears falling more It was a big turning point for Bella

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: That's How You Know

Every Bella i read knows from day one that she is madly in love with Edward and life is not always like that this has to be the best story i have read.



Author's Response:

Life is very rarely that sure so I definitely wanted a truer route!

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: No Turning Back

Edward all she asked you for trust how could you not???



Author's Response:

How does any man manage to do something assinine?? LOL  It's on area they all share the same talent level!  Even the best husbands I know are aces at getting their heads up their butts once in a blue moon.

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Keep Holding On

If only you could see how happy am i that they are still trying :o) awesome chapter hun

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Need You

what a step she took...now if i say i need Emmett will i wake up and find him making me coffee?



Author's Response:

LOL Sadly, I do not have the power to grant you that wish. LOL

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: And So It Begins

Ok that was so damn funny but then sad at the end thinking about no Em or Rose and top it with Edward gone i think i'm going to cry :o(

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Aloha Wau Ia Oe

That was the perfect way for Bella to say I love you and I still have Mike. Love Emmett but we all no that ;0)

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Hoaloha

Emmett so rocks well this story rocks as well lol i think i need so sleep night for now :o)

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Moe'Uhane

I reviewed this once and it didn't save? Bells has come a long way over 5months but um waiting for the break up it always happens :0( and what was with her dream?

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: All Shook Up

Is Bella pregnant? Emmett and bella with the guns so funny



Author's Response:

Emmett and Bella with weapons is always a lethal combo for those nearby. LOL

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Beaches, Boys, & Blues

Emmett and Bella's day was the best I couldn't stop laughing I loved it. Bow I still think Bella may be pregnant?



Author's Response:

Emmett and Bella's day was so much fun; I would love a day like that!!

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Don't Worry, Be Happy

Nope didn't see Emmett's ring coming but i did like Rose's POV now I'm scared to read on knowing Em and Rose plus Edward are going :o(

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Complications

Oh my i have tears in my eyes after this chapter....i love the mix off POV'S

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Adjusting

Damn now I'm all up to date now what will i do? I'm so ganna miss Emeett :o(

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Air & Water

I really hope things won't change when Em and Rose go...Bella did really well with the moods wish i could

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373182
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

I love fics like this. Oh just had a thought (doesn't happen a lot) is Edward going by his middle name. Don't know if Bella will see this as a good or bad thing. Good cause it's her first love but bad cause he was kiss her when he's to marry another (even if it was Bella he didn't know) cant wait to read more. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: A Brief Escape from the Royal Mask

So young to be a wife and mother yet now just look at teen mums and people looking down there noises at them. I don't mind the little slips cause I'm enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: The Mind of A Prince

I so wanna know what Bella sent to Jacob. Ang will tell Bella that Edward was kind to her? Hope so

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

I'm not liking Charlie but come on who is? As for Edward I can see why he gave up on love and started sharing his bed but just wait till the wedding :) 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

God I'm so nerves for them. Glad Ang is going with Bella. Oh and I could have anyone watch or be in the same room with me and hubs 0_o I know they did but still 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

You would think Charlie would be happy Bella has love 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

Wow. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

I can't wait for Rose and Em to meet. Edward may call on Bella for help if war was ever going to happen. She's smart and sees what they all missed 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

I think Bella will be with child soon if they keep this up lol 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

I hope they can have a few good months before the drama starts

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

Awww now you have me crying. So sweet

Everything by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

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Santa always knows what you want for Christmas. For Jasper, Santa’s willing to give his gift early and it will be everything that Jasper has ever wanted. Jasper/Edward/slash/AH.

This was written for the Make the Yuletwi’d Gay one-shot fic exchange. See the other stories here: 

 

http://community.livejournal.com/yuletwid/

 

Thanks to Robrator http://robrator.tumblr.com/ for the fantastic banner!


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4870 Read Count: 450
[Report This] Published: 07 Jan 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2011
Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Everything

You "pulled it off" that was bloody great



Author's Response:

OMG Thanks sweetie for leaving me a review! I'm glad you enjoyed it *squee*

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Edward has or had a daughter? Why did Alice say it didn't matter? I get why Edward's cold now. 
Is you leave I won't be coming after you....that's what Edward said?Saturday's at 6 pm no later, yet he's gone and found Bella at work for some fun. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

First what did Bella stop herself thinking about with the flash back? 

 

Why can't Bella look at Edward? It's like he's disgusted with himself for doing this. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

He's a hard ass but I like it and by the sound of it so does Bella. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Damn that's hot. Still with you, think I'll stay till the end. I like a Dom Edward. If Kellan/Emmett would have me as just a play toy I'd be all in lol 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

That's why that meeting was changed. So Edward could make it? Alice is very bad...trying to see what will happen and if Bella really does know Edward. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Edward gets what he wants and knew she would come round. 

 

I take it Bella won't be working at the hotel again? 

Will you be doing an EPOV from him watching her and wanting to make the other? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

No strings is never just no string, one will always fall for the other. £500 a night. Is more then I get right now, I might just call him up lol. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Is there a nice way to hand over the money? Nope didn't think so. One good thing is now Bella knows Edward won't be at the wedding. 

 

My friends read the story yet won't tell me anything, even if I beg. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Yes but it's the 2nd time he's taken her in the week. She should feel smug about that as well he can't wait for her. 

 

how did he know last time to find her at work? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

She hasn't yet but she should google Edward cause I wanna know what she finds. I know when I find out I'll be crying I just know I will

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Oh no he's about to walk in and see Bella. Maybe now we will get anwsers?  

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I thought Bella would make it out with out Edward knowing, I mean he had a lot going on. Bella may be getting a phone call soon. 

 

I had to wait all night to read this but I couldn't stay awake anymore or I would of lol

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Lol loved the a/n. 

 

See you got me again I thought Edward would call find out why Bella was at Esme's. Nope it took 5 years, why so long? Did he get help cause I think he needed it. How did he find Bella? 

 

Maybe if I stop asking and just read the next chapter I'll find out :) 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

She needs to hear it just as much as he needs to say it. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Ask him in for coffee or water just anything and ask him everything you needed and still what to know. 

 

I followed you on twitter but I'm locked so you can't see me talking to you lol 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

It might help for him to talk to Bella about his girl. 

 

 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

All this time I thought she was dead, why can't he see her if she's not? With the money he has he can't follow her to the end of the eath and back. He just showed up again at Bella's for a run? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Wow the pics are great. I love seeing a story in pics. 

 

Bella will have to talk Edward down or call 911

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

Is it a bad thing getting to know each other? Not in my book. 

 

As for finding daddy dead, that's gotta be hard for anyone does Renne blame Bella for it? 

 

 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

So why can't Edward see his girl? Why is Renne a bitch? Kate isn't happy and Bella is a little lost. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner made by the talented chistagbanners.

 

Join Bella in her million dollar life. All she wants is one night with sexy barman Edward, desired by every female who enter's Twilight nightclub, but Bella soon learns she is playing a dangerous game and may end up with more than she bargined for.     

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124180 Read Count: 50296
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2012 Updated: 28 Apr 2012
Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Damn why sleep with Jake (gonna puke) let him down and screw Edward :) in a very good way

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I wanna know now *stanps foot*

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Well yeah he was nicer to Bella but what did Alice do? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I wanna know so start talking

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

She can't go :( 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Emmett and Rose are home 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Whys he so mad? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Why would you live like that???

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Why wouldn't he get a job? He's living with wild animals

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Edward the hobo? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

He lives with animals lol

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

He's not sick is he? Mmm

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Not with people they don't like

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Why would she want Edward's baby if she hates him? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

How do you just ask a man for his seed? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

No not James 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Lest see what happens 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Lmao kids will say anything 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Holy fuck is right....

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

And that's why the ex left. You have me crying. I've lost 2 very early in pregnancy and in some ways I think that was better cause holding your baby for just 6 days would of killed me more. Bella needs to go back and talk to Edward. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Did Edward loss a baby?

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Give the man time to think about it. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Oh god she needs to run fast. :0/

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

She better be going back to Edward. Now I have to go and finish crying. 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Damn it. But I'm glad she's told him first. They can talk about it or just fuck I like the 2 nd idea better 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Did Edward say that? He doesn't really want a baby baby does he? 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I think they all need a bloody good shower. Rose isn't so bad 

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Hey what's going on with Bella's work?