Reviews by sarah louise
Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

aww bless her.poor edward.fab chapter.hope james gets what he deserves and worse.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

awww that was so emotional sat sobbing.fantastic chapter.omg she spoke her first word thats brilliant.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

fab chapter.aww glad she sback with her edward.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

fab chapter.she does belong with edward at home.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

aww bless her getiing her first pet.fab chapter.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

fab chapter.aww glad wisp likes her kitten.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

fab chapter i hope james never walks free again.

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

fab chapter omg poor bella that was so emotional brought tears to my eyes.hope they find the man in the drawing and he gets what he deserves and worse.update soon

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Date: 20 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

fantastic chapter so emotional.always brings a tear to my eyes.

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

aww bless her that was so emotional.fab chapter.

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Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

fab chapter.aww bless her.hmm wonder what jasper will say.update soon

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Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

fab chapter poor wisp that was so emotional.

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

awesome chapter bless wisp.

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

go wisp get some more cake bless her.awesome chapter.

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

aww bless her shes coming on so much.awesome chapter.

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Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

fab chapter aww bless her hope they get the bad doctor soon.

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Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

aww that was so emotional fab chapter.

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Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

fab chapter.aww he is a good edward.glad your back :)

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Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

fab chapter.glad she had a nice time at emmett and roses.update soon

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Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

wow she said her name fab chapter so emotional and intense hope edwards ok.update soon.

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Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

aww that was so emotional fantastic chapter.

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Date: 25 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

awww bless her.fantatsic chapter.update soon

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Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

oh no!hope they find the cat before wisp finds out.fab chapter.update soon.

A Slow Boil by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 190]
Summary: Past Featured Story

a slow boil

Bella's an exchange student hoping to find a job to keep herself employed for the summer, so that she can stay on at an exclusive University. Her best job prospect is a part-time housekeeping position with one Mr. Cullen.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78922 Read Count: 59614
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jul 2012
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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

fab chapter hmm i think hes testing her.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i think mr cullen is rather taken with bella.fab chapter

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

defo likes bella more than he should.fab chapter

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

fab chapter.awww that was so sweet.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

awww that was so sweet of him fab chapter.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

fab chapter.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

awww their gonna be so good for each other.fab chapter

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

he is defo a tease.fab chapter.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

wow fab chapter.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

fab chapter.update soon

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

yey he finally kissed her that was hot!fab chapter.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

awww that was so sweet bless him.fab chapter.update soon

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

wow the sexual tension between them is electric.fab chapter.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

awww that was so sweet.fab chapter.update soon

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

bless him.fab chapter.poor bella glad her knees ok.update soon

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

fab chapter the perfect first time that was so hot.

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow that was scorching.fab chapter.they are defo falling hard for each other.update soon

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

aww their so good together.fab chapter.wonder if alice will meet his brothers.update soon

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

fab chapter.glad meeting his family went well.update soon

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

aww they said the l word.fab chapter that was so romantic.update soon

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

fab chapter.their so perfect together.update soon

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

fab chapter perfect ending.

Heroes by naughtydreamz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary: Past Featured Story

heroes

 

A struggling single mom, a fatherless boy with big dreams, and a man on his way to fame and fortune.  All of them could use a hero.....

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23148 Read Count: 37148
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

fab start.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

fab chapter gonna check out your life can change in a moment



Author's Response:

I appreciate the review.  You're going to LOVE her story, I promise.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

poor bella shes been through alot.fab chapter



Author's Response:

It was heart wrenching to write..I cannot even imagine coping with her situation in my real life.  I wanted to write a Bella that's a strong and determined woman, someone who is really a role model for single moms...I hope I've been successful.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

awww that was so emotional.fab chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're enjoying it.  Thanks again.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

awww their just too cute.fab chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The reviews mean so much to me.

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

me neither its lethal.fab chapter.



Author's Response:

LOL.  I like the word lethal to describe it!

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Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

aww bless him.fab chapter



Author's Response:

CJ is the man, isn't he?  Thank you for reviewing every single chapter...I truly appreciate it.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

awww glad she said yes.fab chapter

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

lol he defo handled that really well.fab chapter.

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

me too lol!wow that was a hot moment.fab chapter 

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

aww thats so romantic.fab chapter.update soon

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh dear and it was going so well.fab chapter

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Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

awww bless him.fab chapter.hope they work it out.update soon

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

awww that was so emotional sat sobbing reading it.fab chapter.update soon

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

yey their talking again.fab chapter.update soon

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

poor edward lol.fab chapter bless cj.update soon

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

me to she is sooo lucky!fab chapter aww that was so emotional bless cj.

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

aww that was so romantic and hot.fab chapter

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow that was sooo hot and romantic the perfect first time.

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

fab chapter.glad she didn't over react to edwards offer.

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Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

awww lovely chapter that was so sweet.update soon n awww love this story

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

fantastic chapter and the perfect ending.so romantic.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028763
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

fab chapter.i think bella will be a different story.update soon

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

fab chapter that was so hot!shes putting on quite the show for him.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

fab start.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

sir sounds hot!fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love how protective he is of her even though hes stalking her.fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

hmm wonder if he works with her.fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh dear bye bye tanya.fab chapter.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

love how he acts so normal after havin sex with his sub.fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wonder if edwards giving tanya to james.fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

wow!fab chapter.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

hope shes good!fab chapter.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

hmm wonder what his plans r or should i say who is big plans are.fab chapter.hope tanya won lol

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

i agree lol.fab chapter.hmm the punishments he could dish out!

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

wow that was hot!fab chapter.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i defo can!fab chapter.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

wow!that was hot!

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

his voice would make u orgasm lol.fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

hmm wonder how hes gonna reveal his self to her.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

thats what she thinks fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

hmm think shes right up edwards street then.fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

fab chapter sooo hot!

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

hope sirs watching!fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow hes hot!

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i think their gonna be a match made in heaven.fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

im sure alice could have it furnished in a week lol.fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

awww bless alice.hmm to have jasper at your feet lucky alice

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

to be edwards toy bellas gonna be sooo lucky!fab chapter,wonder tanya won the challenge.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

poor rose lol.fab chapter n omg emmett a dom or sub thats hot!

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

fab chapter.

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

it defo did.fab chapter

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

it defo is lol.fab chapter