Reviews by farsideomoon
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 309739
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

Geesh, seems she caved pretty easily. So is she the worst mother ever or just a survivor?

I wonder what it is she needs to learn to follow the correct path?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

Wow, not sure what to say, but that I'm looking forward to next chapter;0)

This whole story is a bit of a cliff hanger

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

Yes, I'm enjoying it. Good for Felix to separate himself from Aro, although he's pretty guilty, he'll have a lot of redeeming to do, I'd think if he want's much of a conscience.

Glad to hear Edward's arrival is not far off

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

This is such a different story, don't know what to expect, which is making it fun to read. I know there are people (Jamestown massacre comes to mind) with really persuasive powers but how does he get people to go in with him for this? He can't do it all on his own. I'm thinking him giving the men slave virgins might have some motivating factor. Makes me think of the suicide terrorists on 911. Who knew virginity had so much power? ha ha just kidding but it is ridiculous to me. You'd think this is farfetched but sadly it's too close to reality & actual events that occur in RL.

Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

you know the REALLY SCARY thing...  WE got all of our information about types of brainwashing and torture from the internet...  Like there are seriously sites that explain in great detail how to do this successfully....

Plus the history of the tragic stories of David Koresh, Jim Jones, and Charles Manson....your right...our world is FUCKED UP......but man isn't it fun to read and write about it...  hahahaha...

Thanks for enjoying our story...

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

Yeah, that was creepy enough for me. Loved it though. I was wondering if he would show his true evil colors. If your not up to no good, why else would you have to brainwash people?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

Yes, getting crazy is right & pervy Aro, shutter of distaste over here.

Thanks for updating. I'm so looking forward to what happens when Edward enters the picture. Will his usual protective nature step forward?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

Thanks for the update. I can't believe Edward is not going to become jealous or possessive and refuse Aro taking Bella's virginity. How do they not think that him planting the 1st seed in everyone won't lead to incest and inbreeding? 

Hope you have a great Easter & holidays. Thanks for writing. 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

Thanks for the new chapter, loving this story, just can't imagine where it's going. I like the mystery<3

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

Great chapter, thanks for the update, glad your get together was better than anticipated.  Can't wait for next chapter. Edward's insight was great, glad he's not completely brain dead and can think & feel some things for himself, even if he isn't capable of acting on his feelings.

What is with 2 chapter 12's?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

Great chapter, thanks for the update, glad your get together was better than anticipated.  Can't wait for next chapter. Edward's insight was great, glad he's not completely brain dead and can think & feel some things for himself, even if he isn't capable of acting on his feelings.

What is with 2 chapter 12's?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

Yes, he's creepy & the Aro in New Moon seems to fit with the Aro you;'ve created better than the one SM did. 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

Humnhh, the web of deceit weaves every which way. Thanks god, or I mean thank Father Aro

Thanks for the update, glad you are so pleased and proud with how the Gymnastic Events went;)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

Thanks for the update!

This story quite believe able. WTF is right about people putting themselves in other peoples control but it does happen too often & on many different levels. Heaven's Gate cult suicide with Hale-Bopp, Jonestown, Guyana massacre in 1978, prostitutes on an individual level.

I wonder how Carlisle is going to handle this news. He must know something, it seems acceptable to all of them to give over the virgin brides before there wedding night. Wonder how that works with incest if all the first born are possibly his off spring?

Can't wait for next update, I'm enjoying this really different story.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

What does he mean,"I will cast aside her hand and every time you look upon that hand you will be reminded of your disobedience? Is he going to cut off her hand? How can she look at her hand if it's cut off?

Nasty punishments.

Looking forward to next chapter, thanks for update.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

Yea, I had a feeling it was Felix, I guess self preservation wins out over guilty conscience. I'm enjoying your story, looking forward to next chapter.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

I hope it's not Aro, that would be deadly?? What did happen to Tanya?

Looking forward to next update, thanks for writing:)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

I can't imagine what the note says, maybe don't give up hope she's out there. Maybe, "cults suck." ha

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

What a tight spot the Cullen's have themselves in. How does E. get along in the outside world?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

happy holidays to you too;)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

Yes, she's done for. Hopefully Edward, Esme & Carlisle will step in & save her. Probably not

Looking forward to next update. What a cliffy!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

Poor Bella & Edward;(

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

Thanks for the update. A flier, it's nice to think that maybe they do work, for all the families & the people themselves that go missing everyday.

I hope Carlisle fesses up to his true identity and history so they can get a better picture of Aro, the raping narcissist with the twisted version of Hitlers racial cleansing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

Yes you should call father Aro & his camera so there is photografic evidence against him

update soon

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Yes, I'm guessing. What I'd like to read next is Edward grows a pair and fricking bashes Aro's head in.  Arghh   And what about Edward noticing the perverted stuff Aro had all over his walls & the flogging cross or whatever it was I thought I remembered he had in his room?

Hope you'll update soon;)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

;D)

Thanks for the update

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

Happy New Year!

Thanks for the update;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

Thanks for the update, so Bella & Edward were able to get away from the compound, I hope they'll be able to safely stay undetected until Edward is healed & that you will update again soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1499432
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Well, maybe Aro is less scrupulous than Carlisle & will deal with James as he should be dealt with;~)

Thanks for updating

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

This is the second story I've read with chapter 69 that was not able to incorporate it in the story, some how I'm thinking (or wishing) you'll make it up to us;D)

I don't like the idea of them going back to Edward's house & then potentially leading James & Laurent to their current hideout;(  the angst continues!!;()

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

James? Laurent?

Some how, I don't think James would use the word pleasure.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Well, I don't know if they were better off with Laurent or James. Oh my. 

Thanks for updating;))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

wow

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

Thanks for the update. I'd be interested in contributing, but would like to do so anonymously & not join a club. Sorry, nothing personal, I'm just not a club person..you know the saying don't want to be a member of a club that would have me as a member.haha



Author's Response:

absolutely...I mean you would have to use paypal and make it a donation instead of membership...but we would not post your name for sure...  also...when we send the banner..you have the choice as to whether you put it up.

 

Thanks so much for your support...we really appreciate it.

**** side note... I love your pen name... those were my all time FAVORITE comics... ****

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

If Jacob handcuffs Edward, I think I'll lose it, that's just James kinda crazy talk.

Looking forward to next chapter!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

Yes, great chapter. Looking forward to the next chapter & their HEA

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Thanks for the update, yes, James gets his just desserts;)

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3521]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

TPW banner

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1609375
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Thanks for updating. I really like this story. Am freaking out a little at what could be in store for Bella if Carlisle finds out she's lost her virginity. He may see this as the perfect opportunity to abuse her or just plain take her away somewhere & keep her in hiding for his own uses. aghh He's awful

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

Yes, we're going to need a new chapter right away.haha This is a horrible development.

I think it's time to call Emmett, Jasper & the girls & get some shovels & guns & start feeding the rose garden;))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

Yippeee! I can't wait to find out what's in the garden. I'm hoping it's a whole arsenal of firearms & torture implements to torture Carlisle with. haha  

I still dont' trust Carlisle, event with Bella locked up in the room. He probably has keys for every room in the house, it is his home after all. 

I'm sure the idea of killing your own father is repulsive, but is that less repulsive than allowing him to torture & sodomize your mom & wife/fiance?  I don't think there's any way with going about taking care of it with legal means, he would wiggle out of that most likely.;((

Thanks for posting & writing;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

i did not see the garden as just therapy. Why doesn't Bella tell Esme abouut Carlisle's planned rape/abuse of her? 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Wow, I didn't expect that. I can't imagine she'll find happiness without him, but maybe peace. Gotta say, I'm still hoping for the irrevocably ...in love sentiment.

Can't help but sing ding dong the witch is dead, which old witch, the Carlisle witch. ha

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Thanks for bringing closure to such an enjoyable read, twisted at times but still original, suspenseful & exciting read. And this was your first story? Awesome job, looking forward to more stories in the future from you.

I put you on author fav's not sure if that means author alert, like it does on ff or not?

Hope so.

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36635
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm missing Edward.

I don't like the way her father is so insulting of her character. Seems kind of abusive to me.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well, I hope Charlie gets in deep trouble for his macho misuse of his badge. Lord, $2,000. worth of tickets for a kid is almost a years worth of earnings from a part time job. That's crazy.

Thanks for posting, looking forward to next chapter!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 stories/12/images/Creating_A_Mate.jpg

Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123088
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm liking the story, hope you update soon.;)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Yeah for the update!  What can all this mean and why should it bother Carlisle? Plus that can't be what had him upset, he didn't see it before he came home and he was already upset, I wonder why?



Author's Response:

Be sure to read the next chapter/outtake and you'll know.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33

Uh oh.  Wow, this is quite the twist.  I can't wait for the next update, hope its soon!:-)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story. The next chapter is being a pain in my ass so it's taking a little longer than I planned to finish. Soon though.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Looking forward to a little ferris wheel fun!

Thanks for the update;~)



Author's Response:

soon!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

yikes!!!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, this is a different twist, I like it and am looking forward to the next update & some answers to what the heck is going on;D)



Author's Response:

The next chapter is in the works now. I should have it posted by next weekend.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thanks for the update, talk about a cliffy, yeah I feel like I don't know anything though.ha

I guess Edward's saliva provided the venom he needed to have in Bella to mark her as his. Yeah!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

so the mix up begins. Interesting twist with Rene & Uley. O wonder if theyran away together?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Good luck to Robbie and to you too Mic, hope everything goes better than you could imagine;D)

Thanks for writing, great to see an update.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 11 May 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

;-))

Looking forward to reading more as the mystery is unravelled.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! There's still a couple of puzzle pieces that haven't been revealed...though they've been hinted at.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Okay, hope you'll update soon, this chapter leaves an awful taste in my mouth and I find well worst kind of angst.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

She's picked up his mind reading;D

Thanks for the update, I've missed reading about these folks.

I'm so glad Charlie's got her back & is being understanding;D

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Sins of the Past-Carlisle's Outtake

I feel more confused. Bella has already chosen Edward as her mate, so this kinda doesn't make sense to me.  I'm also not able to follow why there is a problem with the inner beast finding their mate when Carlisle has his mate, Emmett/Rose, Alice/jasper, Aro/?, Caius/& his mate. So either they can have mates or they cant, right?

I'm just confused but thanks for the update, though:-))



Author's Response:

Sorry you're still confused. Hopefully the next chapter will clear things up..

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thanks for the update, what a turn of events. So maybe as Bella has picked up some of Edward's powers maybe Edward has picked up some of Bella's and he is able to block them completly from Alice's vision?

Can't wait to read more, congrats on your book completion;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thanks for the update, I enjoyed reading the chapter, not sure what's going on with Bella or why it matters if Bella has a gift already but looking forward to finding out.

Yeah for Robbie, hope he mends quickly & perfectly.



Author's Response:

Bella having a gift already as a human is unexpected. The concern is if Edward's venom is affecting Bella. Carlisle also found something that has him concerned.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Sins of the Past-Teaser for TX Fires

Thanks for the update

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow, that was sexy stuff, great chapter;D)

Merry Christmas & Happy New Year to you too! Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Thanks for coming back to update, I Ike reading this story. So she's turning vampire without going through the three day transition?

Looking forward to the next update, thanks for writing:-)



Author's Response:

She's not turning into a vampire yet, but she is picking up characteristics... I'm working on the next chapter now.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter, it's so nice to read some more CAM;-D)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it! I'm trying to write faster. :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 08 May 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

;-)

Thanks for the update, looking forward to finding out what's next!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. I'm trying to get the next chapter finished. Hopefully it will be done in a week or so.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

;-)

Thanks for the update. So she's drinking her own blood?



Author's Response:

I'd say that's a pretty good sign she's changing.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Thanks for the update, been missing this story;-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Yep, I'm here, looking forward to next update. Thanks for writing!

Summary:

bcd

Bella and Emmett are in a normal everyday realtionship with normal problems. Emmett's cousin, Edward, moves back to town. What happens when Edward and Bella meet? Will they be naughty or nice? Read on to find out! AH,AU,OOC, Lemons!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82358 Read Count: 21116
[Report This] Published: 26 Jan 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2010
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 17: My Little Secret

Yeah, I'm enjoying this story, I think. I find the whole unfaithful thing rather noxious. I don't get how you retain any self respect after the 1st time. I can imagine it happening once, but then to continue with it, it just is lying to yourself & everyone else.

So, what seems even more disturbing is to imagine that Edward still has Tanya there living with him, so he's cheating on Bella & on Tanya. ughh

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90508
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I hope that's one of the caretakers dogs;) Otherwise, yuck & scary.

Thanks for the update;))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Awe, nice chapter. Thanks for the update. I'm wondering where things are headed with these two love birds when they get to NY city?? marriage proposals?? How are they going to manage the Nawleans separation?? 

Hope you'll update again soon;~)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yeah, so who is Aro King?

Thanks for the update & Happy New Year to you & yours!

Summary:

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stories/1182/images/HPP_prof_banner_1_Taryn_fixed_2.jpg

Bella Swan is kidnapped from her monotonous life by the rich and reclusive Edward Cullen who has fallen in love wirh her from afar. Can she overcome her anger and fall in love & can they both learn from their mistakes? 

Rated: M (18 and over)

AH, AU, Contains: Violence, Foul Language, Lemons


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 95443 Read Count: 83177
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 03 Apr 2013
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Intriguing.;-))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

AH? not sure

OOC, definitely 

and loving it<3

Summary: Past Featured Story

sos

 

Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 54874
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, it was bad, in the best sense of the word;))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yes, I liked it. I like the pace you set to this story. It moves along, a lot happens.

So, I'm wondering is Bella back at school, as you mention Garrett still being her teacher. And how is she finishing school, is she just going to test out?

Thanks for writing;~)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I really enjoyed the story, thanks for wrapping it up. I hate when people leave stories midway, thanks for the closure & for writing;~))

<3  <3   <3

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by mehek18 site http://mehek18.tumblr.com/

A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 169956
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm feeling' a bit sorry for Rose. Her intentions were good:-/

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So yeah, Rose did kind of turn in to the selfish 'Heather' and it seemed like she was going totry & be sensitive toward Bella and self aware of her brashness. Maybe she's developed a brain tumor? Haha

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

There is definitely some mystery going on with Rose.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

What the heck, this is when they leave her alone?!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

"go all Scooby gang" haha love the reference. They do kinda match up like scooby & the gang. The Fred & Daphne are Em & Rose, Velma is Alice, Jasper for Shaggy that leaves Edward as Scooby (we know the real life RP can have some pretty goofy looks) and Bella is the victim?

Ok, maybe I'm reading to much into it, still...

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This is a. Scooby do episode. Rut roh, who would of thought. This is a good plot:-)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Sweet Christmas gift to Daddy C, brought tears to my eyes.  What creative gifts you came up with for everyone. Great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's first assignment as a journalist is to uncover the truth about Christian Polygamy. Dr. Edward Cullen is a small town doctor who lives his life by his own sets of rules. Edward and his wives live a lifestyle that many may not understand. After Edward treats Bella he invites her into his home, where Bella learns more than what she bargained for. How will her first assignment impact the rest of her life?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Edward/Alice, Edward/Rose
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162668 Read Count: 151590
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 01 May 2020
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Charge

What I think is there is no next! I've just discovered this story & been consumed w/reading it & now I'm caught up;((  .... MUst have more;)) Can't wait for the next installment, the curiosity 'will there be cannon pairings' is killing me. So, dang, it's a good thing E. has quite the libido, otherwise I think there would  be serious trouble at the C. household.;~)

Thanks for writing<3<3<3



Author's Response:

Well Edward is still young and being a Doctor he can always find help later if need be. Plus what guy wouldn't have that kind of libido when surrounded by supermodels.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Flashback

Thanks for the update. My wish would be either, ha just keep posting, but if I have to choose, shorter, more frequent would be my choice;~D)



Author's Response:

I am sticking with the longer chapters and I will update as fast as I can.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Fire's Blazing

<3 it!

looking forward to more. Wondering if Edward is going to find a way to add to Rosalie's burdens and let her know that he also wants Bella in the picture in a big way;)



Author's Response:

Edward did say that he would not keep anything from them, so I'm sure Rose is going to have a lot to say.... Don't you?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Everything On The Table

Thanks for the update, still they haven't dropped the bomb of Bella & Edward, looking forward to reading that part of the story & her reaction;)



Author's Response:

The big bomb is next I promise... And it will be in Edward's POV

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Risky Business

Okay, I watch stories like big love & think that it seems fine for people to share the polygamist life style if that's what they want, more power to 'em & to each their own. But for some reason I have a hard time with the Edward sexing up anyone other than Bella, and it strikes me as dishonest or unfaithful to his feelings for her. I know it conflicts with previous sentence as these 4 are all knowledgeable & agreeable, but I must just be stuck in cannon pairing ville;( ha

I'm enjoying the read though, thanks for the update;)



Author's Response:

I know I have a hard time writing it at times. I love Edward and Bella, but I felt the need to mix it up a bit. I'm glad that you are reading still. I hope that you can continue to read. Thanks

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Girl Talk

Okay, I feel like none of them mention {maybe slightly by Rosalie} the elephant in the room and that is jealousy & not wanting to share?

Thanks for the update, looking forward to next post!



Author's Response:

I don't think that jealously has become a problem just yet. Edward and Bella have only said that they are dating, the girls have not seen how it will effect them yet. Once that happens who knows what will happen. 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Girls Day

Yes of course your forgiven, now go update again;D) JK

So, nice insight into Alice, you've inspired me to up my charity to the community!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Lunch Anyone

Thanks for the update;D)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 314222
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - You're the Storm

I'm dying to read what's next, thoroughly enjoying this story, just sat & read the whole enchilada today.

I'm lame on reviews sorry, but thanks so much for writing. Those 2 are kinda breaking my heart with their pig headed self denial.

hope you post soon!:D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

Awe, they've almost told each other how they feel or are at least trying to show each other.  They are pretty messed up though, I think Jacob's idea of getting the hell out of Dodge is a good idea, but how can she do that & be with Edward?

I'm excited they're back together though. Team Jacob? I thought that was like unicorns.

Soooo looking forward to next chapter, thanks for writing;))

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

love this story, please update soon, missing BDR

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Roll Away your Stone

Great chapter, thanks for the update, I've been going through some BDR withdrawals.

Great burn on Rosalie, she's so deserving of it.

I'm so looking forward to next chapter, let me help you out w/hangover cures:

3 Advil or NSAID of your choice. along with non-greasy cheeseburger[bread works great at soaking up alcohol & protein good for you]

And there's always the: 3 Advil & restart the party all over again, preferably not with the same thing you got soused on, don't want to get sick. Champagne & O.J or Bloody Mary in the mornings doesn't make you look like such a drunk either.ha But ya know, we love that saying around our house...get a little Sheryl Crow going on in the morning, ie "All I wanna Do" you know the rest if not well...



Author's Response:

I'm liking your thinking about the party restart! I swear, going out in your late twenties just isnt as easy as it was when i was 19!!

Thanks for the review! x

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

(Hug from laptop right back @you)

I'm so glad these two have gotten on the same page and are getting better with sharing themselves with each other[ie the non-physical sense, they already had the other down pat].

Another great chapter. I'm totally hooked on these characters & in need of knowing what's going to happen to them. I like them & want them to have a HEA, maybe that's not in the works. Can't wait to find out!

Thanks for writing;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

Awww yes, their figuring it out, with a little help from their friends.;D) Great chapter.

I'm so glad you updated, I really like these characters, I was missing them.

<3<3

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- The Lines Begin to Blur

Thanks for the update. Why does she fight her feelings for him? I guess it's the disappointments from parents & James. I'm waiting from James to make an appearance??

Have fun in the sun, wear sun screen;~)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Hologram

No, I did not see that coming. WTF  is right, with Bella & her self sabotage, hope she can keep some sort of morale or self respect going & not do James.

Lucky you with the MN tix, enjoy!

Can't wait for next chapter, great chapter, missing E's pov. I hope u can update soon.;)