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Married with 3 grown young handsome men that make this momma really proud.
Lover of fan-fic & too many things twilight. Work part time read fan fic full time. ha
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Bella lusts after the hunky man who takes care of her pool. Perhaps if she's lucky, she can persuade him to perform a bit more than just pool maintenance; AH JazzyBells.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4288 Read Count: 523
Bella Swan is an aspiring sports writer and her first big assignment is to interview the league's biggest, not to mention hottest, quarterback. Will Edward Cullen school her in the rules of the game or will she teach him a thing or two? Rated NC-17 for language, lemons. An entry in The Sport of Love contest.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 351776 Read Count: 189000
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Game Plan
OMG, this is tragic. I've been devouring this story all day & now I'm out of new chapters!
This has been a great read, thanks for writing and I hope you'll update soon;DD)
Author's Response:
:) I'll update on Monday, promise! So glad you enjoyed it and want more. I have the best time writing this story and combining football with fic! Thanks for reading!
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Leaping
He he, very funny chapter, Rene & Charlie are a kick. Loved E's POV
Author's Response:
Thank you! They are definitely that. I had to do it in his POV, all that confusion and inner turmoil :) Thank you!
Date: 17 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Press Pass
What a happy fun chapter;DDD)
Author's Response:
Haha that it was! So much fun to write. Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Press Pass
;D) good for Bella & Ronnie putting Fox people in their place, doesn't happen enough.
Thanks for the update, Happy Holidays!
Author's Response:
:) You're so right on that front! Ronnie's a good guy and Bella sure can handle her own.
Happy Holidays to you and I'll have EPOV for you soon :)
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Post Game Interview
Did someone leave the faucet on? I think I hear dripping..;~P)
Author's Response:
*laughs hard* Um...wow, hehe That's a hell of a compliment! I thank you!
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was awkward for a moment, cute meet cute!
Looking forward to reading more;D
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for checking it out :) I hope you enjoy it!
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Rumor Mill
Their getting out there. Go Alice, huh, that was an awesome smack down she put on Ted.
Thanks for the update,
Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
Yep! Step one of going public is underway. They'll be all the way out very soon but there are certain people that need to know first.
I'm glad you enjoyed Alice getting fired up on Ted. Such fun!
Thank you for reading and reviewing and I wish you a very Happy New Year as well!
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 The Offensive Line
Cute, meet cute:D)
Author's Response:
Thank you :) So glad you liked it!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Going Long
Favorite color? "Yellow" --reminds me of lemons;~D)) And this chapter was deliciously tasty.
Thanks for the update. Yes, they are moving fast but they are very in love, what about getting married?
Author's Response:
Haha glad I could bring your favorite color out to play, so to speak!
Marriage is on the horizon, but no rush. They're right where they need to be at this point. :)
Thanks so much for the review. See you soon!
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Upon Further Review
That was a great read. Very funny banter with the parents;D)
Can't wait for the next update & the auction and the gossips reaction to Edward & Bella's relationship news. I have a feeling they're going to say some really derogatory remarks to her & piss Edward off.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I had a blast writing Charlie and Renee.
The Gossip Girls are up next. Maybe one of em will surprise you :) We'll see!
So glad you liked it!
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Airing It Out
'I had been afraid they’d be bitchy and catty but they both seemed fairly decent,' --that's exactly what I thought. Thanks for not going for the cheap shot, makes for a much more intelligent read, IMO. ;D)
Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted to make them different from what was expected. They don't always have to be evil :) They like Bella and though they're jealous, they'll have her back! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Emmettake: Emmett & the Extinguisher
Awe, what a ham. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
Haha he is indeed. So much fun :)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 The Game Winning Drive
What great fun it was to read this chapter. I had a feeling Tanya would be making an appearance, never saw the Esme effect coming though. ha Great introductory lines too, they were perfect. You do a great job with backing up the illusion of Bella being a quick wit with a great sense of humor.
Thanks so much for writing, looking forward to next chapter:D)
Author's Response:
I had a blast with it! I knew some of you expected to Tanya to show but I'm glad I was able to surprise you a bit with Esme and maybe Rose. The intros were my favorite part ;) Bella is quick witted and I like to think she has a great sense of humor!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Defensive Pass Interference
oh my I hope you'll be updating soon. I really hope E. doesn't mess up his throing hand on a jerk like DM, that would be very sad. I was just smiling & reading & thinking what happy light fair this was to read{and pleasant} until she opened the door. Dunnhhndadunhduh
Author's Response:
I'll be updating tonight, I promise! It's still going to stay light and pleasant, I promise. A little drama here and there but nothing that will derail our fave couple!
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Forward Progress
Big smile over here;D)
that was sweet & fluffy, a great treat after reading too much angst ff.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! I love writing a happy story that makes people smile! Thank you!
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Scrum
<3<3<3
Thanks for the update, cute.;D)
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thank you :) More soon!
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Calling An Audible
Yeah, I had a feeling that the one thing to get to E. would be ribbing about Bella. His achilles heel. Let's hope he figures out a way to deal with that before word gets out about his weakness.
Author's Response:
Yeah, definitely, but of course, he had a tough weekend with the Dan situation as well. I think it was all too much for him. He'll get it under control :)
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Changing Fields
Yes, I liked it. Fun read, thanks for updating<3
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it :) I'll see you next week with more!
Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Gaining Ground
:-D)
Author's Response:
:) Glad you're smiling!
Date: 12 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Celebration Flag
the commercial, I'd almost forgot:D)
Author's Response:
Hehe good thing I didn't! Was fun to bring it back :)
Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Timeout
I hope you update soon. I know, I just finished reading, give you a minute. ha that's what my husband says.
Love your characters, want to bash Edward up the side of his head though;D)
Thanks for writing!
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Blitzing Scheme
oh my gosh, what a ridiculous place for the statue to turn up, hilarious.
Author's Response:
Haha had to be there! At least nobody knows it's him! Thanks for the review!
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 Divisional Playoffs
they won!!
Winning;D)
Author's Response:
They sure did :) Thank you!
Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 Conference Championship
Super Bowl bound, yahoo! I hope that they win and can't wait to read what the plan is!
Congrats on your nominations, your writing really has me laughing out loud a lot, thanks for writing;~0)
Author's Response:
:) I'm glad you're excited for it! Thank you!
I love to make you laugh :) Glad I am! Thank you! see you tomorrow with more!
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 Super Bowl XLVI
What a great story! You do great 1st and 10 suspense. I love that excitement you feel with everything on the line chance of a lifetime at your fingertips. Thanks so much for writing this story. It was nice to read a sportsward/footballward. I also really liked the time jump.. I had to go back & preview last chapter to be sure I hadn't missed anything it was so seamless. perfect.
:~D)
Can't wait to see what you write next. Will there be a epi, yeah can't wait for dancingembear. Will you include a wedding out take and a 1st Cullen offspring outtake?
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you liked it! Thank you! Writing the gamea nd then the proposal, just felt right to me! I promise I'll fill in the gaps via outtake! You'll see what the epi holds, I think you'll approve! Thanks so much!
Bella finds herself in dire financial need and takes drastic action -- she offers her virginity up for auction. Will this desperate plan to save her college education actually turn out to be a second chance at love?
This story was made possible by the generous contribution of CandraJade to the Support Stacie Auction and is based on her fabulous prompt.
**If you are not old enough to purchase Adult Material, you are not old enough to read this story. Rated for content and sex in later chapters.**
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39762 Read Count: 45132
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Moment of Truth
Yes, I'm with her, time for more...
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your reviews. I know this story is somewhat frustrating with all the missed opportunities and miscommunication -- but to me, it is classic Edward and Bella! We promise a happy ending!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Whatever Could Go Wrong, Probably Will...
Wow, she's being a little bitchy to a guy that professed his love for her & she maybe had fantasy crush on, isn't she?
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Second Chances
Yes, Okay, a little less bitchy attitude, but it seems to me she could still be more forthcoming of her failures and asinine behavior to try & look cool in some mean girl friends eyes.
Hope it's good enough for him. It's working some for me;D)
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Regrets
i hope he shows
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Desperate Times, Desperate Measures
So, I guess Alice is not his sister or what kind of parents would they be to not foot the bill on a long long loan that could be paid back sometime after their death, ie never?
But, who cares? We got the premise & she's doing it, yeah, let's see what happens!
Bella is graduating high school and looking for a Dom. Edward is the Head Master at her school and he is who she wants. Problem - he is married, has kids, a friend of Bella's fathers, 35 and oh! he isn't a Dom. Can she get him? - Maybe!
My entry for FF's Forbidden Lemon contest.
Banner inside chapter 1 to comply with Google ads requirements.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, To Read , Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 210865 Read Count: 123434
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Christmas Break The Fifth Year
This has been a great read, I'm feeling a little bad for not reviewing more, but it's not due to lack of enthusiasm, your writing is a pleasure to read. I like the intelligent, insightful and honest dialogue between B & E. And it's like Thomas said, she keeps things interesting. It's refreshing reading a self assured & empowered Bella.
Thanks for writing;D)
Author's Response:
Glad you like it and thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Christmas Break The Sixth Year
Awe, what a great Christmas present! I thought maybe they would try & have a natural delivery.
Thanks for writing, looking forward to next update, happy holidays!;D)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later
I like what a happy story this is, sexy parts are good too*~D)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Fifteen Years Later
HEAE 'eternity' ha
<3
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading - Beth
Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material
Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:
Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76139
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: TPOV
Thanks for the update. Really looking forward to reading what's going on with B & E.
Jasper is quite the numbskull, I wonder what E. is going to do to him.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Missing this story.. hope you'll continue writing, hope all is well with you;D)
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
uh oh, Hope you can update again soon, I'm missing this story. Thanks for writing, though;D)
Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I'm hoping E's still in Chi town & won't be waiting @ Bella's apartment when she returns to Seatle
I'm hoping you'll continue with this story, I like the premiss and what I've read so far;D
After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183997
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Edward and Bella
I'm not sure what's coming next, it's been 32 chapters, I'm thinking they may never do the deed. Not really, but can you tell I'm ready for them to?;~P)
Author's Response:
Of course they will do the deed in next chapter. Actually it's chapter 18 in French, so I'm sorry you have to wait until chapter 33 in English... (my story in French has 27 chapters in all because the chapters are longer. This version will have between 45-48 shorter chapters when it's complete)
Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73242
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Let It Be Me
Ya think? Lord poor thing is going thru PTSD.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One
Ok, is anyone else freaked out that this would be the smartest place for Alec to go to find Bella? And also for it to be the most likely place to run into him if he was after her?
i also want to say I'm a huge fan of your music choices, love Ray LaMontagne & Black Keys, Robert Pattinson etc
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Are We Really Through
Great date!
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Heart Attack
Aghh, don't freak out, that's impossible. I'm scared about Roy & James. He has no way of protecting them from those guys since they have weapons, and he's to damn stubborn to ask for help from Charlie or Carlisle.aghh
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Rusted From the Rain
Oh, that Lucy part got me crying crocodile tears.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Dosed
Wow, this has been an awesome story. It was all so well woven together with their individual histories it just flowed into a lovely tapestry of life.
Thanks so much for writing it.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Hard to Concentrate-Epilogue
Awesome epi, it couldn't of been more lovely some tragedy and a whole lot of love;-)
Edward Cullen, enigmatic, flirtatious, and career focused, 30 year old General surgeon, moves from NYC to the sleepy town of Port Jervis, which is a small town in upstate NY, to join his father's practice, after residency. Bella Swan, shy and independent, 23 year old surgical technologist, has lived in Port Jervis all her life. Same stuff different day, is her usual mantra. How will the arrival of the new Doctor in town change things?
This is a Edward/Bella story, which is all human, with canon couples. The story, which is centered around a hospital, is not your typical medical based drama. It takes place in the operating room, where two people from two different sides of the surgical spectrum meet. There is not only romance and drama. There will be Angst and a crap load of humor too. Plus this is rated M for language and future lemons. Please enjoy! FYI this is my first Fanfic and is not Beta'd. So I apologize a head of time for any grammatical errors that there may be. The first few chapters are short, but hold on tight, for they do get longer. This story might just surprise you. I love it and hope you all do too. Please leave a review. Let me know what you all think.
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Turning to Edward, I felt a magnetic pull. His eyes alone wrenching me forward. Stopping myself, a foot away from him, he lightly touched the bruises that adourned my jaw and kissed my forehead, I then closed the distance, latching my arms around him. He embraced me and I buried my head into his chest. Holding me tightly to him, I had finally found the comfort that I have craved since last night.
This was when I just knew, I had fallen in love with Edward Cullen.
By- SexyLexiCullen
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 359531 Read Count: 420691
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Southern Deviled eggs
Haha, cute & sweet
Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Epilogue: Parents just don't understand.
That was a wild epi, I loved how you expanded on the characters & at the same time kept them the same, EJ, coc-blocker extraordinare, and lucifer jr incarnate. Haha
I hope there is a sequel, I thought I saw one, if not that would be a great idea,IMO.
Thanks so much for writing this, it's been a joy to read:-))
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 37: A Hard Day's Night
Oh my, watch his dream girl be Bella. That would be too funny & you know what they say, 'it's a small world.'
Date: 26 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Lingerie and Lasagna
They are a totally cute couple. How adorable will it be them running around dressed in period clothes? Haha
Thanks for writing!
Date: 26 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Jenna's
Being a nurse, I can't seem to get enough of the medical stuff either;-))
Great chapter, I'm starting to wonder if she got pregnant while on antibiotics after the shooting, what with all the horn dogness going and is due to pregger hormones (technical term)or if something else is going on besides a healthy sexual appetite, not that there's anything anything at all wrong with that:-))
I absolutely love reading completed stories but thanks for updating regularly on your wip
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Tulips that bloom at Christmas time
Great chapter. Okay, I have to admit I was a little anxious about E feeling emasculated with the 'you're my bitch' talk, but what could I of been thinking, that man is too much man to be emasculated.
Fun read. Can't wait to read about New Years bash.
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 36: The proclaimers
I love that song, one of my fav's;-))
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Big Day
Awe, my 1st born son was born December 15th, it was such a great Christmas present, best ever.
Great chapter, I can't believe guys actually look at delivery & think like that, I've seen so many deliveries & each one beautiful & moved me to tears with the beauty of it;-))
Date: 25 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Following her lead
Awe, great chapter, I'm with Edward, what if he was the one who lost his job, she'd want to help him not have him move out.
Date: 28 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Alistair Scott MD
Great chapter. You are a great comedy writer, crack me up
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Out of Character.
I'm glad to read your AN that the drug use for them is done. When Bella couldn't completely recall & had remembered having a great time, I was a little worried about her future. No worries, great chapter!
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Quagmire and the hag
Damn, they can't get a break. Oh wait, they did get a break, just not the kind they wanted;-))
Great chapter.
Lim starting to get a little bummed -- there's not many chapters left.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Crawl inside you
I loved the chapter.
Date: 23 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 11: The empty bottle saloon
Wow, no cock block a ily block.
So we got a new guy in the picture & there was no mention of his wopife on his arm or anywhere in sight,hmmm
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Sliding into home
Okay,you had me laughing so out loud that I had to read the XYZ jokes to my husband who now thinks I have some sort of penis obsession {& I do of course} but that is beside the point and then in the next chapter I was crying with that sweet baby serenade. Great chapter, as always.
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Complications
Liked it?, loved it is more like it.
Date: 29 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Long Beach Island
I think this might of been my favorite chapter yet. Cracked me up & very adorable scene of Bella and Edward sitting in the waters edge cuddling & holding onto each other for dear life, really sweet & great visualization with your writing, I wanted Ca hous to take pictures or a video of them, titled 'love' and the funny parts are too many to mention, but I gotta mention a couple. The comment Bella made about the burgers and not being an animal & willing to wait till it was cooked. Also Jasper when Jasper told Olive Oil, Chelsea to keep it moving the feelings were mutual was classic. Love Jasper's wit ie yours;-))
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Baby Baby
Great chapter, love how much B & E are head over heels with each other. Adorable, I like adorable;-))
Date: 27 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Lake George Escape
Yeah, great chapter, definitely brings back memories of good times!;-))
Date: 30 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Somethings never change.
I adored this story just like all of your stories so far!!
cant wait to read more and this weeks up update of 'WtS'. Woohoo!
Thanks so much for writing.
Did you read the cover & story on Entertainment weekly, one of our fanfic heroes made good (EL James), & I can imagine that being you one day if you ever aspired, IMO.
bella is a naive girl. she thinks nothing can happen to her, she thinks she will find the perfect man, have an okay job, struggle alittle, than have kids and settle down.
how wrong she was. she meets this boy who is perfect, or so she thinks. one thing leads to another and bella is stuck in a world she can not nor ever get out of. she tries but in the end she is always for ever his.
nc-17 for rape, lemons, killing, drugs,etc.
warning: dark edward and sexual abuse
Hey everyone so my story has been reported for all the lemons sexual abuse drugs and rape. Even though it states these things in the warning and is in the nc-17 category. I have not violated any rules and my stories are not as graphic as many are on this website. So if this story is deleted you know why. Sorry to all those enjoying it and wanting more, I apologize for this one persons actions in advance. If you want to know who reported this story just look in the reviews and you will see!
-Love Sinister :D
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49477 Read Count: 49642
Date: 21 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Love the kid pix. I used to know a lady that had 25 children.
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Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.
Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?
Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.
Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q
Teaser Trailer #2
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86078
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fourteen- Wax On, Wax Off
So, I'm wondering if this is going to just turn in to a long lesson in karma for Edward. Life can be a bitch, so I'm wondering just how far Edward is going to go to please Bella.
Thanks for the update;D)
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Fifteen- Blurred Perceptions
Okay, surely she wouldn't & he would call it quits if she wanted him to have sex with mister cotton top. ughh
I mean slash is sexy if everyone's game but E. seems turned off by that. Maybe she is a sadist?
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve- Riding The Horse
Yes, I'm down with Dommella to a degree, there's no input from her though and it's like she's this empty shell that seem's just like Edward was when he was just being a big whore & going through the motions. I think maybe James is right or else maybe she's just a sadist?
I'm enjoying the read, alot, and excited to read what's next. I hope he doesn't blow off his commitment to the kids at the 'Y' it sounded like they are so attached to him.
I like how he recognized how immature and naive he's been.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen- CBLW Outtake
Yes, I guess by not giving Edward the sexual satisfaction he's craving she's actually feeding his deeper craving that he's not completely aware of yet.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Thirteen- A Long Grocery List
please, PLEASE update soon. ME Love E. reading this
He's messed up & I think I'm equally there with him, okay .. maybe slightly over exaggerating. hehe
Thanks for writing
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter Sixteen- Russian Roulette
Thanks for the update:D)
I think at several points I've thought Edward needs to get the hell out of Dodge.
Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254866
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75
Well, that was just awesome, really. I thought it was really well done.
Thanks for creating something that I feel was really thought out and well edited. I was feeling rather bored reading about shopping, with a 'why do I have to read this & where is this going' attitude but in the end I feel like it added the perfect distraction, frustration that was exemplary of Bella's behavior. It was like she wasn't paying attention to Edward and not giving their relationship her all & was only thinking of herself and missing the big picture. And that those little things in life can sometimes seem to be what life is but in reality they are irrelevant. I loved the teeter-totter analogy, perfect, it all just came so full circle. Nice job. I'm not sure I explained articulated what I meant but there ya have it.
The first time I heard someone calling their spouse Daddy I was completely creeped out, since reading Sugar Daddy, not so much, they had fun with it in that story. I guess sometimes I'm not as open minded as I like to think I am.
Thanks Louise for writing, I can't wait to find out what happens with Mr Weiss. Love E's pov.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47
Nice way to even the score, eh? So, what can Heather & officer Hawk be up to? I think they're into cahoots.
Thanks for the update, great chapter;D)
Author's Response:
Do you think they are working together??? Thanks for reading, I have a teaser for you....lml
I should have expected that she would have a nightmare, the trauma of having our home invaded was enough to unnerve me, I can only guess what memories it stirred in her. Removing my shirt that was full of tears and dirty from her nose I laid back down with her head on my chest. “We’ll change the locks tomorrow and figure out who it was, that will make you feel safer. It was just a dream Bella, I swear I would die before I let anyone hurt you.”
“Don’t say that!”
I wasn’t sure what she was talking about when she abruptly shot her head up to look at me. “I couldn’t stand it if something happened to you. I couldn’t take it”
Even in the darkness of the room I could see the fierceness in Bella’s eyes as the tears fell down her face. “Nothing is going to happen to me, and nothing is going to happen to you. Now stop with the tears and lets go back to sleep”
Cupping her face my thumb wiped away the tears as she nuzzled her cheek against my palm before turning her head to placing a soft kiss in the center of my hand. “Do you think I’m crazy?”
“No…” why the hell would I think that?
“…I think it was a stressful night and I think you have a lot on your mind and have dealt with more in your life then any one person should have to deal with. I told you before baby, I think you are the strongest person I know; a lesser person would have called it quits a long time ago. Now let’s go back to sleep, I have a promise to keep to a dog”
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
Is she sure she needs those tampons??!! hehe
Thanks for the update:D)
Author's Response:
Yes she does ...Thanks for reading and here is your teaser....
A piece of tomato fell to the floor but instead of squatting down Bella bent from the waist, causing the back of her nighty to rise up over her thighs showing me the ruffled yellow thong she had on. The groan left my mouth without consent while my dick pressed painfully against my pants.
The giggle that came from Bella gave away her intentions, my girl was fucking teasing me – again.
A hand landed on her ass before it registered in my mind what I was doing, Bella gasped standing to give me a shy smile. “What did you do that for?”
I raised my eyebrows in disbelief “If you stick that in my face you know damn well what’s going to happen.”
“Oh yeah? “ Bella looked up at me through her lashes taking a few steps back out of my reach dropping the tomato she had just picked up “Oops”
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 69
Great chapter. I wonder who Mike's doing? I'm guessing Caius & ?
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
thanks for the update!! lady gaga song?
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Nice job putting T. in her place by Edward. Nice lemons too!
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
Thanks for the update, I love reading this story;D)
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Nice intro, I'm intrigued;)
Author's Response:
Thanks I hope you like the rest...lml
Date: 11 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
well she could sleep by going back to the original fantasy but skip the James intrusion part;)
Author's Response:
she could have and woke up a whole lot happier...lml
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
great chapter and very sexy scene.
Author's Response:
Thanks...I'm glad you liked it...lml
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Yes, that was disturbing. I guess I'm not clear what Bella did wrong in not answering Caius & what the deal was in him saying she doesn't know her place & all that. It seemed she did exactly as Edward had taught her over the weekend when in the presence of another Dom. He was a jerk, I get that but still. And what are all these Doms doing at Edwards house?
Thanks for the update! hope you'll post again soon, I'm enjoying the read and am all caught up now, so this is going to be torture to wait;))
Author's Response:
umm..update will be Thursday as usual and most of your questions will be answered in the next chapter ...thanks for reading ...
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Thanks for the update! I'm really enjoying this story & the characters development.
Irena & Caius are perfectly terrible, can't wait to see what evil comes their way,hehe.
For some reason I don't recall Alex, but I gotta tell ya, I keep waiting for James to jump out from behind the love seat or closet or bushes, aghh!
Author's Response:
They are terrible ... I'm glad you like my story, it makes it easier to write when people actuall enjoy it...lml
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Thanks for the update, great read.
I'm worried about Edward wanting Bella at his house more or more importantly worried about her being there without him as his place doesn't have the security system in place that hers does & ya just gotta know that that creepy fuc* James is out there somewhere.
Author's Response:
I think that he just wants to keep an eye on her thinking that he can keep her safe, I guess we shall see...Thanks for the comments, I have a teaser for you....lml
Edward was standing at the sink brushing his teeth, the muscles in his shoulder flexing as his arm moved. I reached out to run my fingers down the length of his spine before wrapping my hand around his waist and laying my head between his shoulder blades.
“I’m trying Edward, please don’t be mad at me” I could hear the air leave his lungs.
“Bella, I’m not mad at you. I am furious with a world that would allow so much hurt into your life. I want to take it all away, right now- today. I can’t and that makes me feel inadequate. But I know it’s going to take time and a lot of reassurance and baby…” He stopped abruptly.
“What?” I wanted him to finish his thought. But instead he turned around to face me.
“Nothing…” I knew there was something but I had no clue what it was. “…I told you last night I would give you all the time you needed, and I’m not going to push you, so…nothing. When you’re ready to let go of the shame you carry, you’ll tell me.”
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Nice;D)
it's a good day when there is a DIR update!
Author's Response:
Thanks, it really is nice when people like to read my story...lml
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Great chapter, and "I love you's"
Man, the dog barking, dog collar left where it couldn't possibly get to on its own, mysterious vans parked on the street is starting to get to me!! I can just feel James lurking out there. I don't care if Jake & his buddies did put the beat down on him, if he's still breathing then he's still a threat. I like the rip him to shreds & burn him beat down version, but I must confess the suspense if fun, he he;D)'
Author's Response:
yeah ..the story is starting to bubble....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. I have a teaser for you
“The phone Bella” I could see him trying to rein in his anger and I knew that had we been anywhere else but this room, I would have been Isabella at that moment.
“I turned it off”
“You…” Edward didn’t get to finish his statement because I continued to explain.
“On the way back, Sally was upset and we were talking and the phone kept ringing and interrupting us, so I turned it off.” He sat there with his head down running his hand through his hair for what seemed like forever before his eyes finally met mine again and he released a long sigh.
“Bella..” Edward sighed again “I’m going to give you one more chance to just stay in this room and relax tonight. I’ll bring your dinner up here; we’ll take a long bath and watch TV.”
Date: 13 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 82: Chapter 82
Great chapter. Edward is the best Dom,IMO, following thru with his consequences,nit makes him a good teacher. 10 more huh? That out to get a message across to her.
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Awe, that brought tears to my eye, he did come in her mouth, haha, funny but true.
Author's Response:
what do you mean he came in her mouth?? I'm confused ...
Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Thanks for the update!
Edward calling Aro for advice, slightly in a panic, needing a little encouragement & direction makes him seem much more real & shows a deeper connection to Bella.
Nice chapter;D)
Author's Response:
he needed a pep-talk from his coach ..lol ...Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml
Bella it sounds to this one like you are depending upon your Master.”
“I am and that scares me.” I admitted in defeat. I could see the question raging in her eyes I didn’t give her a chance to pose it.
“Jane I never depended on anyone in my life. Anytime I did it was a complete disappointment. So I just learned to do everything on my own. I hate the fact that I am so weak to need Edward so much.”
“Bella there is no such things as needing your Master too much. Let’s make that clear right now.” Jane’s voice turned demanding “He wants to be needed, it brings him satisfaction to meet your needs and see that you are properly taken care of. There is also no such thing as a weak submissive. It takes a lot of strength, courage and confidence to give yourself over so completely to someone else. It is not an easy thing to do and those that try because they think it is an effortless life find out very soon that it is not. That usually happens with the first punishment.”
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Wow;~{o)
The see-saw? I guess it's inevitable that she's going to make a mistake again, that's how the learning process goes.
So, I'm curious about what the symbolism is with staying in the light. I think I've got it though, Edward is the light. Who's coming is James. Bella trying to stay independent & running off on her own, not accepting help from others is going to keep her in the dark & right where James can get at her again and hurt her again.
Can't wait to find out, thanks for the update!
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
So does Bella think Sally's spouse is a sadist like James?
Looking forward to next installment!
Author's Response:
no, i don't believe she does. Sally's husband is a typical abuser, who goes through the abuse cycle, unlike James who was never sorry,..Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you....lml
While the men went out to get started we worked in the kitchen making lunch. There wasn’t much room in the galley style kitchen, so I stood on the outside of the counter preparing the fruit salad, While Alice worked at the counter pressing burgers and Rose stood opposite me chopping vegetables for a salad.
“Alice thanks again for all the outfits, I’m sorry I should have called you yesterday” She looked up from her goo covered hands.
“I wasn’t sure if Edward was going to give them to you yesterday or not. Did everything fit?”
“Yes and I didn’t show…” I hesitated for a second catching myself before saying Edward’s name, I wasn’t sure if that was allowed. I cleared my throat to not sound stupid then added “…how the dress looked on me”
I was sort of proud of myself; Rose caught my eye and smirked, I guess I didn’t fool her.
“The only real problem with that dress is you can’t get on your knees.” Rose announced like she was telling me the time. Alice looked over her shoulder while she washed her hands.
“I don’t get on my knees Rose” I bite my lip trying to hide my amusement at their exchange. Rose spun around quickly putting her hand on her hip.
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Happy happy joy joy, happy happy joy. Joy joy happy happy joy. {Ren & Stimpy reference & Stinky Wizzleteeth?}
Author's Response:
lol ... is that the happy sex..happy sex..happy sex dance ????
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Yeah it was a great chapter! I thought you did a great job capturing their joy in being outdoors cutting loose & playing in the snow. Sex was hot too.
I thought that Edward's behavior in the bedroom was really effective in getting Bella in the right mind set, can't wait to hear the real story;)
Author's Response:
See, yo get it and he does have his reasons, they might be what you are expecting but still it's a reason ....Thanks for reading and leaving a comment, I have a teaser for you...lml
When I got back to Bella she was half awake thanks to Seth’s persistence, I sat on the edge of the couch looking down at her.
“Hey” my fingers ran along the line of her jaw.
“Hi. Do I smell food” I smiled at her
“You do. Are you hungry?”
“Starving” she admitted while she sat up “It’s weird because I ate lunch”
“Yeah well that was four hours ago and your body worked really hard on the way home” her lip went between her teeth while her face flushed pink. I chuckled at her response “What are you thinking?”
“I’m thinking about my reward. I get a reward.” Bella’s whole face lit up and her eyes sparkled.
“That you do, what would you like?” I asked tucking a lock of hair behind her ear
“You” I looked into her eyes “You have me love.”
“Nooo…I want you” Bella flung herself at me straddling my lap with a force so hard she knocked me backwards on the couch.
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Ya think?! Caning viewing sounded like a bad idea when I first read it & then I thought no it would be done for pleasure. He already disciplines her without corporal punishment (except for the withholding could probably be considered corporal punishment] but then he said for punishment, ahh, panic attack coming up.
Thanks for updating, really enjoying reading your story & these characters. The Leah is just perfect in her goodness & unfortunate bluntness. I know people like that. Love your Edward;~D)
Author's Response:
I know people like that too... Well have you seen her limit's on my extra's ...if not take a look and then you might see why Edward didn't see anything wrong with having her view it...thanks for reading ..lml
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
wow, what an adventurous day they had.
The constant lurking of James in Bella's head is distressing. great angst. Yeah the smell & sound are two senses you can't just override like closing your eyes, self preservation kicks in/fight or flight.
Thanks for the update, great chapter and yeah it's pretty wet around here.
Author's Response:
fight or flight up until now Bella was in flight mode ...now she is going to have to fight and so is Edward ...thanks for reading and leaving a comment, i have a teaser for you....lml
After taking a quick shower I started to dress in the little cubical but it’s hard to move in there and the floor was wet. Once my underwear was on, I moved out into the main part of the locker room to dry the ends of my hair and finish dressing. Sitting on the bench was the reason for my uneasiness. I had only seen her once before but there was no mistaking the tall strawberry blond, Tanya.
Fucking great…
She eyed me as I moved to plug in the hair dryer; her intent gaze on me making my anger flare.
“Do you want something?” I asked catching her gaze in the mirror.
“No. There is nothing you have that I want.” I didn’t miss the double meaning in her statement and frankly I didn’t believe her anyway. I knew damn well what I had that she wanted.
“I am surprised though, Edward doesn’t normally collar his flavor of the month.” I turned off the dryer yanking the plug out of the wall while she went on. “You do know that’s what you are right? Just something to pass his time with, I wouldn’t get too comfortable if I was you.”