Reviews by farsideomoon
Relative Humidity by kimmrz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Bella Swan runs a public relations firm. She reconnects with her college room mate Alice who has also through the years tried, without success, to push her two favorite people into a dating relationship. Little does Bella know that soon fate will intervene. Bella is soon to find out that "relative humidity" has a whole new meaning.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165318 Read Count: 19359
[Report This] Published: 08 Aug 2010 Updated: 02 Jan 2011
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Reconnecting with Old Friends

Awe, adorable meet cute;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- A Stark Reminder of the Past

Yes, what is it with the Roberts? humma humma

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13-As a Lawyer I Must State My Case

Yes, I've enjoyed it:D)  But, I want them to get Joe & get back on that plane for a quick trip to Vegas & get married then back to Tahoe to honeymoon!  Tahoe is where my hubby & I honeymooned.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Meet the Parents

“He loves you Bells. This is what a man does for a woman he loves. She asks for the Earth and he also brings her the Sun and Moon.” Charlie explains. --I was in tears, really touching scene;D) & my wish came true. I knew the chapter was already written but I couldn't help but wish they would tie the knot. ;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16-Explanations and Expos

Thanks for writing. I like that this is not a torturous affair of a story, it's sweet and they are very pleasant, hot duo.;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Closure

Cliff hanger;~o)

Thanks for the update & hope your holidays are happy;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18-New Beginnings

Awe, sweet chapter, thanks for the update;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Yes, me liked. It was adorable

Thanks for writing this story & for finishing it, I love it when authors finish their stories.

 THanks

HAPPY NEW YEAR!

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/be_my_sub_banner.gif

 

   

Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105120
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

great chapter & cliffy has me anxious to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

No, it was very,very far from terrible & you better continue or I'll send my vampire friends after you;)'

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

Great chapter. Tanya's disturbing. How weird to have the fam all vying in their opinions on what Edward's sex life should be. But I guess it makes sense and fits with how a physically abused mother and a sexually abused sister would react. Just awkward for Edward.

I hope you'll keep writing;D)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it! I be writing more right now my beta is going over the next chapter and as soon as I have it I will post it. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter to get the deets on the dream.

Okay, I'm confused though. I don't know what she did wrong to get punished. He told her to wait to have an orgasm & she did until he told her to have one so what did she do wrong? Not have one soon enough? Was it the questioning him the first time he told her to have an orgasm?

I hope you can update soon, I like these characters so far & am interested to see where their relationship goes & where her experience comes from.



Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay in answering your review. The reason for her punishment was he told her to orgasim and she refused by trying to hold off and started to say so when she said "but" he had to tell her again before she would. Thats disobeying his orders. Someone who lived this lifestyle explained it best as saying Edward's ectasy is hightened but hers so he needs her to finish first to give him a higher orgasm. There are two types tops and bottoms these people who only roleplay the lifestyle (like Tanya) and true dominants and submissives poeple who live it and need it. Edward and Bella are the latter.

New chapter will be posted today. Thank you for readng it and reviewing!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The punishment served

what can they be up to?

Great chapter;-]

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The fixer

Wow, last chapter I thought, help Tanya seduce him, that was where you were going with the cliffy, but thought, no way, that is rape. How could Esme not see that?

Then you did go there, yuck, and to be there & then watch your son have sex even if it was something he wanted, yuck, that is just nasty. Bad choice, even if they are able to hear everything already that's just a whole 'nother level of wrong. Then to watch your siblings engaging in foreplay at the club? Those guys need a boundary check.

I love where this all went...lust crazed kitchen sex, him living with her full time.

Thanks for the update, am really enjoying the read;~D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The apology

the flogger 8~{o  ??

Thanks for the update, hot. I wonder if he's aware of the vamp couple that are into BDSM & if he would check it out to see how it works for them, so he could consider for him & B.?



Author's Response:

the vamp BDSM couple will be intro'd later, little hint there. LOL thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas

I can't imagine what the deal is with the stalking Vamps. Except maybe we'll find a Victoria, James & Laurant that wanted Bella alone & vulnerable?  Can't wait to read & find out;D)

Thanks for update & Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up

Great chapter, and yes worth the wait. Not crazy about the wait, as I missed reading this story and the characters. He's starting to realize his feelings for her and not just the lust and blood lust.



Author's Response:

I know about the wait but it took me over a week to write it and then the beta needed to do her thing. sorry we'll try to keep it to a minimum but we are always working on it in one form or another. Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The wooing begins

Great chapter. thanks for the update! 

good luck with the voting!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's

So, Edward's a bit jealous, indeed. So, if he can smell the dogs, can they also smell the vampire on her and wonder what their reaction is to her being with a vampire. I wonder about the vampires that killed her family? Many questions still out there unanswered.

This has been a great read, hope you do win awards;-D) Yes, I'm surprised you've had so few reviews. Left us speechless maybe?

Good luck, and thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

when they figure out who she is with it will be explosive! answers are coming. Love your speechless reasoning! sounds good to me.

Thank you for reading and reviewing! nails233

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Thanks for the update I really enjoyed it.

It's weird how some times stories are good & people read but don't review, not sure why and I'm glad it doesn't stop you from writing;D). I've really enjoyed reading this story & hope you'll continue it to it's end.

Thanks for writing

<3  <3  <3

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Thank you for the update. Gosh, what a cliffy, I hope Bella's not dead or turned into a vamp by someone else. I'm guessing Jake kidnapped her. I hope Leah's ok.

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/12/images/ForTheLoveOfMyObsession.jpg

He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wowser, what an intro. He's purely devilish, eek. I'm kinda scared for B.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

dunh da duhhn dunnn

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

kill him in his sleep.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow, what a living nightmare. 

Thanks for the update!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

stories/33558/images/VirginsVillains-BestLoveStory.jpg   stories/33558/images/VIRGINSVILLAINSBestCanonPairing.jpgstories/33558/images/VIRGINSVILLAINS-BestShockValue.jpg


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311996
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Milkshakes & Big Moo

Great chapter, felt like i was there.;D)



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad everyone's enjoying the trip. :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Vcards & Vows

romantic, sweet, first-time angst and hot sexy loving… sigh-- I'd say you nailed it. pun intended'D)-

loved it<3<3

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

:D)

Lots of happy tears

<3

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Dream Jobs & Photo Shoots

I so enjoy reading  about these characters. Very cute 'meet cute' for the Leno audience & Bella.

I'm getting anxious about B. being alone on Monday;-{o}



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I wouldn't worry about Monday though.  LRM posting in the next day or so.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: The Dude & Dirty Harry

Too cute, very cute 'meet cute'



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you like the story

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

Totally enjoyed;D)



Author's Response:

Thanks again!  i appreciate that.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Quiet Comfort & Perfect Words

Yes, I'd say Edward & Bella certainly don't know what's good for them & kudos to Father Pat to standing up to them & treating them the same as everyone else. I don't think in this case special treatment would be beneficial.

Thanks for the update, I been missing it;D)



Author's Response:

i'll probably be slower with the updates until I get a new computer.  Hope everyone will be patient.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

cuppage, is that a golf term too?;D)



Author's Response:

LOL...you are killing me.  I need to look that up...maybe it is.  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Edible Art & First Steps

great chapter, but in the mystery department I'm still mystified as I don't see it as Mr. James being her yellow carnation stalker. He seems too upfront.

Thanks for the update, I didn't realize there was a LRM, will go there after reading next chappy.:~D)

<3<3,<3



Author's Response:

Thanks!  glad you're enjoying the story...LRM is a little different.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

gotta love Karma;D)



Author's Response:

very true.  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

Thanks for the update. There are still scary unanswered questions about those yellow carnations & mom's boding warning. 



Author's Response:

all in good time my dear.  We have lots more story ahead.  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

Yes, I enjoyed the chapter update. Sweet Prom scene complete with prom fright[Emmett, the real one, Kellan L.] did that scary "Prom Night" movie, which is different than Scary Movie with the masks, nevermind;D)



Author's Response:

oh..i didn't realize he did a move called prom night...if i had known i'd had lifted something from it ..lol.  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Hallelujah & Zombie Dances

Thanks so much for the update! I'm dying to know what all these foreboding dream nightmares are about.

That was a really adorable & cute idea to have them go to the prom together, very Twilight;D) but V&V style.



Author's Response:

well thank you.  we have to have a touch of twilight once in a while.  Glad you like it.  Edward's nightmare is revealed in the new LRM chapter.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Making Plans & False Allegations

Thanks for the awesome update!

I'm surprised by E.'s rejection of Bella, that's kinda cold & totally unacceptable, except that it's from 'him' so it's acceptable because he's 100%perfect.

Thanks for writing:~D)



Author's Response:

lol..and i was trying to prove that he wasn't perfect!  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Family Photos & Mama's Squeezebox

thanks for writing:D)



Author's Response:

you are very welcome.  Thank you.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

*_*



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 64: Wrap Parties & Shattered Glass

Okay, I'm trusting you but I gotta say I'm not liking you too much right now, arrghh, what a cliffy!

Thanks for writing.

Seriously, no birth control? I don't blame him for worrying about her physical safety.



Author's Response:

keeping it real.  ;)  I'm so far behind in responding to reviews..ugh.  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

Great chapter, and ~1/2 way through I was wondering how it is that I'm crying reading this? {It's not that time of the month.}It always seems like a such a sweet light story about a movie star & young college girl that swept him of his feet & young college girl who was swept off her feet by the dashing movie star;D)  It seems like strange dichotomies ..the laughing about Emmett's shenanigans, the movie star drama and the serious tragedy of attempted rape & murder but you make it all work really well in this story. So it always throws me when your story gets really touching, but I love it.

So, now that I've reviewed for you, feel free to go right that next chapter! ha ha

No, really, thanks so much for writing, it's been a pleasure to read what you've written.



Author's Response:

What a wonderful review!  thank you so much...next chap is up..and as usual it's got a little of everything.  thanks again!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

Love reading your story, thanks for the update! 

:D)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm trying to catch up with review responses.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Scenic Views & Meeting Duke

Not a cliffy. Yeah. I loved the chapter;D)  V & V always a good read.



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  glad you're sticking with it, and still enjoying it.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Shock Therapy & The Mother Road

Thanks for the update, a pleasure to read;D)



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Teepees & Tribal Law

I want them to elope in Vegas, I think they can still have their wedding but they should just do it already;D)

Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

hahaha...you and Edward both.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 73: Red Garters & Fuzzy Dicks

Wild times. 



Author's Response:

yes indeed.  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Ultimatums & Quality Time

Thanks for the update, I really enjoyed reading the update. 

And thanks for the rec's, that's how I found out about your story I think. I am reading a couple already & they too are great reads.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Outtake - Magnum Farce

Very funny, thanks for the outtake/update

Summary: Past Featured Story

Picks up at the end of Eclipse, where Bella is kissing Jacob and instead of discovering some love for him, she finds him just a friend.  This is my version of Breaking Dawn, wherein sacrifices have to be made for eternity with the one you love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Bella's Must Reads!, Gelesen
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271871 Read Count: 43040
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter & spontaneous sex scene;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Thought it was a fun way to handle the honeymoon!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm guessing key= clit:-}



Author's Response:

Haha yes, that's what Renee told him in chapter 15 :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Great chapter. That Renee phone conversation was laugh out loud, funny.

Thanks for writing;-))



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I wanted to give Renee a happy memory of her daughter :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Well that was a good air clearing.



Author's Response:

Haha yeah much needed!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

W hat about the fact that Aro has a shield? Won't that protect him from Bella's powers?



Author's Response:

All will be handled :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

How about she can tell her Dad now if he agrees to keep it secret?



Author's Response:

The wolves wouldn't allow that :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

That was a more than two hankie ending. Great writing and great ending.

Thanks so much for writing;-)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

stories/33558/images/LRM.banner.final.jpg

 EPOV of Virgins & Villains. **Important- Read the first 15 chapters of V&V before reading this**. Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly.

 

Thanks very much once again to Coleen561 for the awesome banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 312799 Read Count: 77198
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Mar 2012
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Humiliation For A Worthy Cause

that was such a funny interchange it was great to read again. This has been nice reading Edward's point of view.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm always glad to hear from folks who are reading both stories...makes all that effort very much worth it!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Higher Love For The Marked Man

Ha ha, Team Charlie, my sister told me when she went to see the Eclipse movie @ midnight there were a bunch of fan girls chanting Team Jacob vs others chanting Team Edward, she said she yelled Team Charlie. She was alone in her cheer;-D



Author's Response:

lol.  Well, i'd feel super creepy shouting Team Jacob...Taylor is so freakin young.  I could be team Edward since he's actually really old...but Rob isn't so...Team Charlie works for me!  Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Empire Builder to the Windy City

I really liked this chapter, it didn't feel like it was rehashing V&V at all. thanks for writing;D)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Day Trip For Bird Watchers

;D)



Author's Response:

thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 44: The Stuff of Nightmares...

Awe my gosh poor E. I can't imagine how stressful that would be. 

I'm enjoying reading E's POV



Author's Response:

thanks! I'm glad to hear it.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 48: A Shiner for the Birthday Boy

:~D)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 50: On The Road Part 1

As soon as he said Cadillac Ranch, I have to admit, I thought Hoor house too. Cute.

Thanks for the update;D)



Author's Response:

LOL  Thanks!  glad you could identify heehee

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 51: On the Road to Sin City (aka On the Road Part 2)

Yes, I enjoyed reading this chapy. Thanks for writing;D)



Author's Response:

you are very welcome.  glad you liked it!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Boys Will Be Boys

:-D)

Summary:

Feeling unsure about her wedding night, Bella Swan seeks out world reknowned sex therapist and hands on instructor Dr. Edward Cullen. Things start to change during the course of their sessions, leaving them both unsettled. OOC/AH/LANGUAGE/LEMONS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18511 Read Count: 10088
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2010 Updated: 31 Oct 2010
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awe, I've just reached the end of your updates. I hope you come back to this story and continue with it, I've been enjoying it. Thanks for writing;D)

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389564
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

Well, I'm really looking forward to them finally interacting some in reality, although dream life's been pretty hot.;D)

Happy holidays, thanks for the rec's



Author's Response:

Same to you and your family!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

 

Laterzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...

great read & thanks for the update & recs I'm reading almost all of them.

Here'a another great story I've recently found: "My Beautiful Storm" by troublefollows1017 @f fic

Looking forward to next update;-))



Author's Response:

I love, love, love troublefollows1017 me!  God, she nearly killed me with Fridays At Noon, and Once Upon a Saturday!  Thanks for the heads up on the new story, I've already read the first chapter and loving it!  As for this chapter, I'm glad you liked it!  Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to leave me a review!

Krazi

xoxo

FYI... Next up! Master collars his pet, and they make their official debut at Breaking Dawn...also there's the Valentine's Ball at the hospital!

Hope to see you soon!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

Thanks for the update & I am looking forward to the next chapter & playtime!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

okay get started I'm so ready for more. thanks for writing. I gotta say this has felt like a lot of filler in between the 1st chapter & now



Author's Response:

WELL WE CAN´T JUST KABOOM MAKE IT HAPPEN, WE´VE GOT TO GET THERE. PATIENCE! SIT BACK AND JUST ENJOY THE RIDE! LOL... THANKS FOR THE REVIEW!!


LATERZZZ:) 


KRAZI

XOXOXO

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

thanks for the update & rec's;D)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

Thanks for the update, great long chapter. I'm glad they could share the depth of feelings for each other they've been secreting from the world for years. Now, getting the dog on board with things. Was this a reference to Twilight & mut interference? ha

Thanks for the rec's have not read them, I'll check em out;D)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Twas A Night With Sir... And All Through the House...

I'm sticking;D)

Hope Laterzzz if soonerzz;-P



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late response to reviews, but I figured everyone would rather have a new chapter instead. Lol! Well how about both, along with a teaser from chapter 10! Squeee!  So here´s to TGIF!  Don´t forget to checkout the blog for updates, pictease, and chapter teasers!  Thanks for reading, reviewing and being the best readers an author could ask for!


Laterzzzz:)

Krazi and Mojo

xoxo

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: How the Douche Stole Christmas...

Can't wait for next update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: The fall of the Cullen Empire pt. 2... The Aftermath....

;D)

<3

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

I'm looking forward to them finally making it into the playroom and the reveal... Thank yoou for sharing this story;D)

Don't really care for reading Bella's defensive self talk on cleaning up dog poo. It just didn't seem to be necessary because why would a person be defensive about being a responsible pooper scooper? That makes it seem like Bella thinks people are second guessing that, "Sue me" ? I don't get that, it kinda dumbs her down, IMO. This seems like an act someone would carry out without needing to waste a second thought on. In developing her character, I can see why you want to add that she's thinking of Mojo's needs & taking him out for potty breaks & cleaning up for him because he can't do it himself but enough already about this;D(. gish. thanks for writing, & hope you know I don't mean to be destructive critical but constructive;D)



Author's Response:

Happy Super Bowl Sunday! I hope your favorite team wins!

Yeah, so not a big deal, anything added in the story concerning Mojo is just to bring a little laughter to the story. I am not a stuffy person by nature and so I like to have fun. It wasn´t intended to be negative or defensive at all, sorry you took it that way. Don´t take those moments so seriously! Lol!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Check out the blog for chapter 9 & 10 PicTease!

www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com


Laterzzz:)


~Krazi & Mojo~

xoxo

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

Thanks for the update, very citrussy lemons you write there. whew. So, I hope the slow burn of the meet will end with the next chapter, aghh.

 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: The fall of the Cullen Empire...

Very un lawlerly like behavior not being able to spit out what you got to say, he he. 

Looking forward to E's reaction to the "V" news. I wonder how long she's going to forget to mention that she's not married? And what's with no contract?? Not very great Dom like behavior there.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Guess Who´s Coming to Dinner... the Morning After...

So that was it, eh? I have to say it was a little abrupt, but I'm always glad for closure, thanks for the rec's;D)



Author's Response:

Have no fear, this story isn´t over by a long shot!  I was just a little nervous about people´s response to the meet.  There will be plenty of fun left for these two to have! Not to mention all the little bumps and bruises along the way!  Thanks for reading and taking the time for to review!  

Your welcome! I love rec´ing and giving lots of love to other great writers!

Make sure you submit to the blog: www.fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

the teaser for chapter 12 will be up tonight or tomorrow!


Laterzzz:)

Krazi & Mojo

xoxo

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

:~D

Sexy times!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Be sure to check out the blog there's a teaser up of the next chapter!


Krazi

xoxo

http://fortheloveofdomination.blogspot.com

 

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

Greaat chapter! Charlie sure as heck better act like he didn't see anybody get punched because I'd be sorely disappointed in his arse if he did something like try to arrest E for sticking up for his daughter. What can Jacob's story be?

Can't wait to read more, missed reading about these guys.

Thanks for writing;D)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Checkout the blog for a teaser to chapter 18!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

Thanks for the update & rec's

great chapter, am looking forward to next one;D)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140942
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Detective Hale

This is fiction right? So, like you could bring Daddy C back to life, right? Although it may of been his time to go, he was sounding kinda like he was close to his expiration date with all that Grandma Hale talk.=D}

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Get the fucking bitch out of my house

Thanks for the update. Yeah for Ang growing a conscience. Will miracles never cease? Lets hope they won't;D



Author's Response:

Well we never know with Ang but I think this has changed her life for sure....xoxoxoox

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

Uhmm why do I have the feeling that Angela is the one that hired Laurent to rape/beat Bella? And why doesn't Edward just do what he needs to do & divorce her? Yes, it should back fire on him, being an idiot it would be befitting karma for him.



Author's Response:

Hmmmm honestly we dont even know who hired Laurent....not sure what Angela has up her sleeves..her lips are shut. xoxoxo my chap is up next..so hope Bella can shed some light for all you guys on whats going through her NOGGIn...DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

Yes, Edward's ideas of making Bella jealous seemed pretty immature & lame. He kinda, no totally deserves to have that shit backfire on him.

Thanks for the update



Author's Response:

Well.....he may get tortured .....soon muahahahahahha DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings

Yes, I liked the chapter;D)  I still think Angela is no good. I wonder  if she was involved or if Laurent or whoever was involved with attacking her was involved in this too?

Thanks so much for updating~.~



Author's Response:

i loved your theory with Laurent......Not bad...not bad....your just gonna have to see if Angela was being it or not.... :)  DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Pom Pom's

thanks for the update. Really enjoy reading these characters story.

I'm curious why/who is behind [or maybe it was just random] the attack on Bella?

I still feel like Edward is living his life rather foolishly. He needs to leave the house, ignore that Bella is there & high tail it out. Tell Angela he cancelled the date because, in all honesty, he did not see their relationship going anywhere nor want it in any way shape or form to work out. Now that would be some clarity for her, he's fostering her cluelessness, kinda cruel or at least a very unattractive quality.

I'm sorry for your loss Ari;D(

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2011 Title: Swing My Way

So, does E know that she screws Ben?  Does Angela just assume that Bella told him?

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to part 2!

Laurent's definitely involved with either Eric or Ang or all 3 of them, those 2 are pretty close to bat sh*t crazy as you can get. Does Angela have no self respect? I get she says she loves him but like he said why? He's been a complete jerk to her.



Author's Response:

Part 2 coming up xoxoxoxoox

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

All right, is he dumb or just plain stupid? I realize the day is not done but if he doesn't mention to her the anonymous prank phone calls he's been getting then one of the former is true. I know it's early, but really, but I guess he's been pretty reckless throughout his life, marrying Angela just to appease his mother's wishes. Ugh, and no one has to stay married, why not just serve her & then proceed with a contested divorce? I'm not a lawyer or been divorced &  that seems pretty obvious, but like I said I've never been divorced nor am I a lawyer, so what do I know.



Author's Response:

LOL He hasn't said anything to her about the calls. He don't want to worry her. But in the next chap you will see why. You're right again. But if we just went ahead and the divorce was through where's the fun in that? We like drama baby LOL <3

Thank you so much for your review!

x0x0x0xx0x0x0

Ari & DLIR



Author's Response:

Thanks for the great review......I guess we didnt want to dampen their day with tooo much ang and eric talk....the next chapter will explain a lot more....he will be telling Emmett about the calls.....And yes he doesnt need her signature....but he would need her signature to settle it out of court. So of course he will proceed to have a judge grant him his divorce.....xoxoxoox Were not lawyers either soooo hope we dont butcher it up to much...were trying.....xoxoxoxoo hope u enjoy the rest DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

<3

Great chapter, very light and fluffy;D)

But why didn't he ask her who the phone call was from? I'd have to be nosey and ask especially if I was concerned for her safety.



Author's Response:

xoxoox thanks for reviewing......part 2 gets a bit deeper and I love it......I think he hasnt asked her about the calls to not scare her further....and she isnt coming forth with the info....but part 2 should be good....I hope :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2

I'm glad they didn't have sex in the spa, that would of been very unhygienic for the other customers, yuck, plus it made it really more romantic without the sex. But I must say sex at the spa sounded pretty hot to me;D

Why doesn't he request the courts to petition the witch for a divorce?



Author's Response:

hahahah thats actually in the next part. Edward actually gets a few balls rolling in his part lol xoxoxoxoxoand yah...I take my job serious so I wanted Bella and edwards first spa experience to be something she was proud of...and yah hygenic to..glad u caught that...doesnt mean they cant bless other parts eventually oxoxoxoxoxo

 

heres a teaser

 

"Bella?"

 

I stopped walking and turned to look at who was calling me. "What’s he want?" Jessica whispered to me.

 

"I don’t know." I walked towards the security desk. I smiled at the guy I have said hi to on more than one occasion.

 

 He smiled at Jessica and lifted his hand to her. "Hi, I'm Mike," he introduced himself.

 

Mike, that’s his name.

 

Jessica giggled as she shook his hand. I knew that giggle. She was crushing on Mike. "Hi, I’m Jessica."

 

I stood beside her, deciding to stay quiet until they were done their introductions. "So you wanted to talk to me Mike?" I placed the bags I was carrying down on the desk top as did Jess.

 

His facial expression turned serious, his smile wiped away as he stood up from his chair and leaned closer to Jessica and I. "Um, well," he looked at Jessica.

 

"Whatever you have to say you can say in front of Jess," I clarified, feeling my heart race. He was starting to freak me out.

 

 He looked at me now, nodding his head. "I don’t know you that well, but I'd like to think were kinda friends since we say hello every day. I mean, you have always been nice to me so I only find it right for me to tell you this."

 

I furrowed my brows as he looked over my shoulder, and then his, clearly making sure no one was around.

 

"An Angela Masen came to me today."

 

My heart dropped to my stomach. I stood still lungs deflated, no attempt to fill them.

 

"What the fuck did she want?" Jessica grabbed my hand as I said nothing. I barely functioned, let alone, comprehended what he was telling us.

 

"She actually tried to come on to me." He laughed a little which quick started my heart to life.  I need to breathe to live. "Well after that failed attempt I noticed her staring at the monitors." He turned and pointed to the six screens that videoed various parts of the building. "She asked me if I had access to all the videos that were recorded and if we actually keep them. I had no idea why she was asking until she mentioned her husband."

 

I gasped, placing my hand over my mouth. "She wanted to know if I personally could help her. Maybe if I have seen Mr. Masen with any type of woman."

 

I shook my head not wanting to hear this.

 

"She offered me a lot of money. I mean A Lot." He started fidgeting with some papers. My eyes came down to see a small video cassette sitting under the papers he was purposely moving. He folded the paper, slipping the tape in the middle, placed it on the desk, sliding it towards me. "No one else has seen it and I plan on keeping it that way."

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Lick

Yeah, that's quite a cliffy, hope you'll be posting soon! They were having such fun;D(



Author's Response:

Yes it was a huge cliffy! That's for sure. We are workin hard on the next chapter.

Thank you for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x0x00xx0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Edwardian Period

<3 <3 <3 a34; you're a star;D) hope that fills some of the love you were looking for!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

Lordy, Edward has finally grown a pair. Hallelujah, there's hope for them yet.

How about Jess, what a firecracker, loving her character.



Author's Response:

LOL yes he has grown a pair! It's about time. Jess is a lil firecracker thats for sure! :)

Thank you so much for your review.

x0x0x0x0xx0

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

Yes, I'm wondering how he can be so naive & not realize that Esme is working with Angela & has been since the beginning to get that money back from Edward. He's not so smart when it comes to people being deceptive & he's reckless again with his relationship with Bella, it seems to me.

Thanks for the update, more angst ensues... 



Author's Response:

hahahha part 2 is sooooo good...and were updating tonight

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Wanted

Wow, cliffy. Edward sure acted like an idiot, way to blow a chance at helping them. arghh

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Not in my world

Well, that was a huge cliffy. I hope you'll update soon;D)



Author's Response:

Hope we can update soon too....