Reviews by Celebrityhound
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1513829
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Bella - DAY 2 PART A

scary esme and carlisle

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Bella - DAY 11

I hope Bella speaks up to one of the Doms soon

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

don't plead you are doing a great job

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Oh one last lemon would have been nice rather than a tease, but it was a great story

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624281
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
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Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

wow what a start



Author's Response:

Be aware chapters 3-10 are going to deal with the abuse and can be hard to read. If you decide you want to skip that part let me know and I'll summarize. Just remember I promise a happy ending for Bella and I know how to do it.  See you on the other side.

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Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I don't know this is pretty disturbing, I enjoy and good Dom/sub story with consensual kinkery but this is incest, rape and pedophaelia. I am sincerely hoping Edward turns out to be a good guy and going to save her.

I also hope your daughters din't read this they might get the wrong ideas.



Author's Response:

No, my youngest daughter isn't allowed to read this story. My older daughter skipped the beginning, but read the rest of the story. She's an adult and chooses what to read.

This is not supposed to be seen as a bdsm story.  BDSM is consensual between willing partners.  This is about the horrors of abuse/incest and white slavery and being a survivor.  Just because I wrote it doesn't mean I condone it any more than SM condones necrophilia or beastiality (Edward is dead and Jacob is a dog).

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Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

what bhappened to Renee's wills and the money for Bella



Author's Response:

This is explaned later in the story.  Someone played a hand in bringing Bella back to Forks.

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36

These two are finally getting on the right track, now who's gonna kill Carliese, I hope its Esme and all the family helps cover it up



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're still with me. Soon!

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

Just an amazing story, good luck with your book



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the story.

The Cave by TheSpoiltOne Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

Alice stumbles into a cave with her rescuer, afterward s some interesting circumstances come out of it. Edward and Alice One-shot.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Alice
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3222 Read Count: 497
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2010
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Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that what unprotected hot sex will get u

The Letter by changedbyEdward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Letter Banner

Edward Cullen is superstar EC Velvet.  Bella Swan, professor of English Lit in Seattle, hears his velvety voice one day and it changes her life. She leaves her abusive fiance, Mike Newton, and writes a fan letter to EC Velvet.  Little did she know that fate was going to intervene and bring her together with this uber-famous hip-hop/rap star and turn her life upside down... or maybe it's right side up.  

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Disclaimer:  Stephenie Meyer owns all things Twilight.  I'm simply taking the universe she created and turning it inside out.  :)  All references to real people, real songs, or real anything else are for entertainment purposes only and only because if I mention it, it means I love it.  I'm not making any money off this story or any of the characters, names, songs, or anything else I might mention.  I'll leave the money making to the experts.  I'm only here to play.

AH/AU/VERY OOC - Rated for excessive language, mature themes, and lemons.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 148606 Read Count: 47776
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
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Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Okhotnichya

I am signed up for the tour

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Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Tequila

I wonder if Rob ever reads his fanmail?

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Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Venom

wow!!!

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Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Freedom

here, whore, I am passing out rewards to bad girls, good girls are no fun

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Date: 29 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

nice start

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Goodbye

we will miss him

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Confrontation

who is Mike I bet

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Justice

Edward Cullen being a rapper EC  Velvet is as unbelievable to me as Rob Pattinson being Spunk Ransom but I am enjoying the story

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Fuse

tease

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Redeemed

there should be a date in Florida

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Butterfly

great story

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Lucky

ok I guess I will have to deal with angst too, can it include Mike getting his just desert along with Tanya

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Conundrum

thank goodness these two don't need to make babies just make love and hard sex

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Sanctuary

you have great readers because you deserve them

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Change

waiting here in Tampa

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Paroxysm

you already know what you are guilty of enuf said lol

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Completion

thank you for sharing Velvet

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Date: 31 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

great I totally enjoyed it!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

sos

 

Bella and the gang are the popular rich kids of Forks high, new teacher Mr. Cullen starts, B wants him right away. What starts out as a passionate affair ends up as a cataylyst for the obsession of a dangerous drug lord to take action. Lemons.

Be warned- this is not your average teacher/student story

Now completed- Thanks to all my readers and reviewers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88667 Read Count: 55114
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 Mar 2010
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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26-Epilogue

great little story, I really enjoyed it

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

"I ridded myself of my jeans..." it is rid no ridded

"her bear and luscious breasts..." her bare and luscious breasts

"Our little seductress remerges... no such word either emerges or re-emerges

 

I will still give you a 10 for story

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

ut oh

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

see already getting better with lemons

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

no, actually is trying to do the right thing

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

pretty tame lemon, no mention of condom or discussion of the pill...oops

I am sure you will get better afterall it was your cherry

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I had a teacher in my senior year that I instantly was in lust with and boy did he turn out to be great in bed!!!

Summary:

Bella and Edward had been together since the first day of school. Jasper also had his sights set on Bella since he first laid eyes on her in 7th grade.  Constant flirtation over the years has brought Jasper to a climax. Is Bella going to feel the aftereffects?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4294 Read Count: 2959
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2010
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Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

too bad you did not make this one full length it was a great start

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 315667
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
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Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Closer

that was hot. keep up the good work SOmehow I think this is going to be a win win situation.

 

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Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- Jigsaw

give the laptop a hun because you rock

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Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Perfect Hands

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Bad Romance

great job

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108560
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

is Carlisle dead?

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I probably would have preferred it to be Edward instead of Jasper but it still looks to be the making of a great story.

I'm just a little partial to Edward

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

hot Jasper

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

this is just so awesome

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

that was a good chapter

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Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

didn't really like this chapter

Branded by Oleander Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 123]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After fifteen year-old Bella Swan and her older brother Emmett lose their parents in a tragic accident, Bella's life takes a horrific turn for the worse. Once Emmett discovers the secret she's been keeping, he moves them from Phoenix to Forks to live with their Godparents Carlisle and Esme Cullen, and their children, Edward and Alice.

Can a move to a new town help heal Bella, who has deemed herself ruined and unfixable? Can the love of a new family break through the scars of her past?

***WARNING:  This story contains heartfail, adult themes, violence, abuse, sexual situations, and is not intended for readers under the age of 18.***

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76124 Read Count: 20345
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Hindsight is 20/20 - Our Place

great

Defying Gravity by jenny0719 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen moves to Seattle when he takes a position as a trauma doctor in the local ER.  But fate has plans.  In walks Bella Swan, the woman literally of his dreams.  It's love at first sight, and after a whirlwind romance, Edward leaves his life and his love behind to travel around the world and help his parents give medical attention to those in need.  But he comes back to something completely unexpected, changing his life and his future forever....

WARNING:  This story has some adult language and will have some explicit sexual content.  Hence the NC-17 rating...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166492 Read Count: 64110
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, when I finish will certainly check out your sequel. I like this site better than Twilighted and Fan Fiction too.

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Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I totally believe in love and lust at first sight

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Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

so is she a virgin since she hasn't had a second date before?

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So does she get pregnant during this two week goodbye?

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

such a good story

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

awwwwww

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

great chapter

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Edward is such a dream but I can't believe women never came onto him before Bella. He did not get gorgeous and sexy overnight

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

great chapter

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

been there done that

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

lovely wedding

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Date: 27 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Epilogue

absolutely great story, totally loved it

Episode by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 384]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a writer that is on a trip of a lifetime. Edward Cullen is a famous actor and musician, whose life is a blur of film-sets, hotels and screaming fans. A destined encounter and a battle of mind over matter erupt amongst sensual music and a shared longing.

episode

episode

episode


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304253 Read Count: 76990
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 09 Aug 2021
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Date: 16 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Crescendo

yes great idea and great chapter, now just hurry back!

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Date: 15 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Unison

it was a very good chapter but the wait was was too long

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Date: 19 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Rhapsody

you are talented but after waiting so long and then you name the chapter rhapsody I thought we/they would finally get to the loving but then you stop just short. I love a good story, it is not ALL about the lemons but give it up already or are we waiting for Breaking Dawn and your next chapter to give it to us at the same time?



Author's Response:

lol, well, I was all geared up to use Breaking Dawn as my inspiration for the smexing scene, but then life and responsibilities that were not fanfiction got in the way. You're right, I've made readers wait 40 chapters to get to the loving. I understand if the delay has caused you to lose interest...it's the chance I took, but I just wasn't ready to post something I wasn't completley happy with, but you can't please everyone, right?

 

Thanks so much for reading this far... if you are still curious... next chapter posting any day :)

 

Luv BBxx

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Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Vivace

I don't flounce and I try t be patient but it's amazing she can stand up let alone run without a backbone



Author's Response:

lol. um, well, yeah. I donlt know what to say to that. Let's see what you think if you continue to read on xxx

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Date: 21 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Scale

looking forward to your post, but enjoy New York

Be careful the one and only time I was there I got robbed, would never go back

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Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

great chapter

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Treble-clef

great so far

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Crotchet

awesome

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Brace

great

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Alla Breve

great story

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Octave Clef

can these two move any slower, I know once bitten twice shy,

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Sharp

a shout for you

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Quaver

I would have taken advantage of Drunkward ;)

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Bracket

he is so cute,  bet e would be a lot like this is real life

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Demisemiquaver

just a great story deserves more reviews!!!!!

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Hyphen

great again

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Asterisk

ut oh there g Bellas insecuritiies again

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Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Exposition

finally lemons and they are together, now I have to wait for updates, hope to see you soon



Author's Response: It's been wonderful receiving your reviews as you read through each chapter. They have made me smile! Posting quickly, next chapter coming in a few days! Thanks for reading Luv BBxx

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Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Transposition

hurry back

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Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Episode

such a great story but I hope they work things out soon so she at least believes him

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Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Motif

yummy

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Interlude

lots of angst going on

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Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Rhythm

finallly both on the same page together

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Date: 11 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Coda

yes it seemed like a long wait but I am enxiously waiting for more'

Good job, These two need to talk and get everything out in the open soon

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Andante

welcom back hopefully you will get back into the routine now, looking forward to a lemon soon

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Rondo

ut oh must be Riley, she needs to kick him to the curb. Your updates are slow and then I read the newest and get all excited and into it again only to reach another cliffie :(

 

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Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Sextet

thought you had gone MIA and that this would be another unfinished story, so glad you are back.

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Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Ballad

wow a long wait but I hope this means you will be back to posting regularly



Author's Response:

Hi honey! Sorry for the long wait! The story will be finished, just a couple of chapters to go! ((( big hugs)))

 

love BB

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Alice have been friends with benefits for ten years. When they meet Edward and Jasper, they find their missing peices. How will their families deal with their relationships? NC-17 for Lots of lemons: E/B, A/J, B/J, A/E, A/B, E/J, E/B/A/J

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga, to read
Chapters: 56 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102919 Read Count: 303234
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Apr 2010
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Date: 27 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

this is more a story about sex addicts than a love story but I am OK with that

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Date: 26 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think  I read this once if so then Jasper's mom turns out to be Renee's lesbian lover

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 752064
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
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Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

glad they are back together, and hope Edwrad doesn't give her money or forgive her

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Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The Day From Hell

I think this is going to be a great story

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Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Avoidance and Disappointment

doucheward

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Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Puppet Master J

wait...wait...wait...here it comes

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Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Femmes Night Out

awww

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

she is just confused

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Be Careful What You Wish For

loving this story and look forward to the limes and lemons

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Perfection

They are just so sweet together, I feel lemons coming or cumming

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: The Inner Sanctum

so far so good

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: The Unexpected

Poor Bella blocked by her brother

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Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: For The First Time

great chapter, great lemons and very romantic but would we expect anything less from Edward