Reviews by Celebrityhound
The Affair by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Thanks to M81170 for the great banner.

Bella is married to her favorite Cullen but what happens when his past changes her future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57358 Read Count: 16997
[Report This] Published: 18 Feb 2010 Updated: 18 Feb 2010
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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

:(

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well a little bit of one so will she be pregnant she wouldn't be on the pill because Carlisle had a vasectomy

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

ut oh

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

go jake

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

wow

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

l0l

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

guess she will fix Emmett up



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews. You're going to triple my review count on this story. LOL

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

sounds like my dad and I

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

awww

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

rose and em are fast movers

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

intense but now it is out there

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Carlisle will forgive Edward I am sure not sure about Bella

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

she did a good thing

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

hmmmm Bella Swan Cullen Cullen

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Epilogue

great

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Outtake 1 CPOV

true love lasts forever

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Date: 06 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Outtake 2 EMPOV

yay

10 to 40 best I could do



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed. I really appreciate the feedback

Sinful Thoughts by vampiremama Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Sinful Thoughts

 

Edward is adopted by the Swans at birth. A growing attraction threatens to destroy a family.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84224 Read Count: 25614
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2010
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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

great story



Author's Response:

Thanks! I really appreciate it

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

YAY CHARLIE

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

UT OH

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Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

do they know he is adopted?



Author's Response:

Edward and Bella do not know he is adopted at first, no.

Thanks for checking out another of my stories.

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

POOR KIDS, IS CARLIESLE WITH ESME? IS HE EDWARDS DAD?

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Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I GUESS THE SUBJECT MUGHT BE UNCOMFORTABLE FOR SOME BUT THERE IS REALLY NOT ANYTHING INCESTUOUS HAPPENING SO THIS STORY DESERVES MORE REVIEWS



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.

Dance with Me by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 206]
Summary:

Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon

 

twilight

 

DwMbanner


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55041
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2010
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Date: 05 Dec 2020 Title: Chapter 22: Little Things

too bad all your pictures are gone

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Date: 29 Nov 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Flirting with Disaster

wow that was fast

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Date: 19 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Research

great start

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen loves two things in this world: his twins Wendy and Car, and his tattoos.

Bella Swan is jaded by her husband, who left her three months pregnant. Now her daughter Lily is her entire world and she wears her love for Lily on her skin...

Can these two broken hearted people overcome their fears and come together?

Or are they both to stubborn?

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fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48082 Read Count: 108984
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Jun 2010
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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love Ink and Edward

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hot Tattward

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

great

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

sweet story so far

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

well done, but I have never been in a haunted huse that ever really scared me

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Not sure how he carried her upstairs, undressed her and redressed her without her waking but I won't nit pick because I really like the story

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I don't understand, and your is not the first, but girl and guy meet they fall in love, and some how it is implied that girl would break off with guy because he is a millionaire...why? that is like the cherry on top of the sundae. The sundae is great without the cherry is just an added bonus. LOL just my thoughts

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

sorry to hear it will end so soon

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Epilogue

great story

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 372980
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

different, suspect that Tony is Edward Anthony

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

poor bella

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

;)

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

hooray, wondeed how Emmett was going to get to Rosalie

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Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

great great story

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Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

wonderful storu this epilogue hav me chills

Than you for sharing this

Summary: Past Featured Story

ADC,fanfic

 

Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH OOC Rated M b/c they are adults & will do adult things! Canon Couples


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 91018 Read Count: 27771
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7, Songs & Smooches

great

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Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1, Bella

AWE sweet Daddy Edward

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4, Duckies

I love fairs and carnivals

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10, Walls, Tears, & Words

poor Edward

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14, Thoughts

I thought it was an amazing chapter

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16, Happily Ever Now

awe so sweet

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever

This has been a wonderful emotional journey, you are amazing. Thank you for sharing this wonderful love story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

prelude

My version about what happens between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.  Bella and Edward push the boundaries of their relationship, while Emmett, Jasper and Rosa must go abroad to keep the Volturi at bay until after the wedding.  Alice is the only person that knows everything.  B/E/Emm/APOVs.  Rated M for future chapters.  Canon.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84289 Read Count: 10852
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Mar 2010
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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The End and The Beginning

this is just amazing, I have totally enjoyed it and am flying to the sequels

yo did an excellent job

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995606
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
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Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

this was my first read in the world of fan fiction and thought I would revisit. Still a great story

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Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

this was my first read in the world of fan fiction and thought I would revisit. Still a great story

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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I think you are doing a great job and I am really enjoying the read.

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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I love long chapters and long Edward...you are a rock star

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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You are doing wonderful

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Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

THAT WAS HILARIOUS

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Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

one thing I don't like is whenever she finds the nerve to express her feelings he yells and shuts her down. no wonder she just keeps it all in

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Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

looks like Jim and Jacob will be bonding for a while

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Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

the gift exchange between Charlie and Bella really touched me and mde me cry.  You are reakky a god writer you develope such undepth charachters far beyond the normal Twilight characters

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Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I am just loving this, but sad that I have caught up and now I have to be patient. Will check out one of your recs.



Author's Response:

thanks honey - here's a little something to keep you going....

PEOPLE LIKE US – OUTTAKE # 6

OUTTAKE – CONVERSATION BETWEEN JASPER AND ALICE

“Guys, I’ve got to go – Jazz please give this some serious thought and Alice, you need to stop being so fucking stubborn. I love you, Squirt!”

Edward almost crushed her in a hug. He slapped Jasper on the shoulder as he ran out the door.

 

“So… you talk about the size of my schlong?”  Jasper said.

Alice looked up at him with mounting excitement, “Well, it’s quite impressive…” she said huskily.

Jasper smiled at her.  “Can we talk? I mean really talk; I’ve missed you Tink…”

Alice smiled through her tears. “I’ve missed you too Jazzy….”

Jasper looked uncomfortable for a moment and it bothered Alice.  She was used to Jasper Whitlock being decisive and in control.  Seeing him looking ill at ease was new.  There had been many disagreements in the Whitlock/Cullen home since Alice had moved in with Jasper two year before.

She had never lived alone, besides when she had gone to college and even then, she had attended Berkley, so that she was close to her family and Jasper.

Although over the years, they had learned to deal with Jasper’s travelling for work and Alice’s part time job as Edward’s PA which had taken her away from time to time, through everything, including Alice’s training as a submissive, their lines of communication had always been open and honest.

Alice had grown up in a house hold that was opinionated and not scared of voicing their points of view.  Esme and Carlisle had encouraged their children to have their own opinions and to share them.  They had also taught them to stick to their guns.

This was one of the many things that had attracted Jasper to Alice in the first place.  Although she was much younger than him when they met; he had always found Alice to be interesting to talk to and inevitably to argue with.  She was a spirited and enthusiastic young woman, with a warmth and energy that seemed to draw him in from the first moment.

Jasper on the other hand had grown up in a large family with two parents that had stuck together over the years because there was no other alternative for either one of them.  They were hardened by life, worn down by reality and for a reason that Jasper had never been able to fathom; they had decided to have three children of which Jasper was the youngest.  Eventually Jasper’s father had strayed and a few years later, when Jasper was about twelve, he had suddenly come back to the trailer park where they lived with three small children in tow!

He had told Jasper’s mother that they were his dead sister’s kids, but after awhile he had confessed that they were his.  Jasper felt sorry for the three youngest children and when he had begun to make money from modeling and small acting jobs, he had made a decision to see that they would have an opportunity to further their education, go to college and make a proper life for themselves.  Although none of the children were really close or affectionate with each other, Jasper had stuck to his word and the three younger children had gone on to college.

Jasper couldn’t believe that Ricky, the youngest of his stepsiblings had taken advantage of Jasper’s generosity the way that he had!  Jasper had never asked for any compensation or payment for the money that he had given to his siblings or parents over the years; the only stipulation he had for continuing to support his mother and father was that the house that he had purchased for them remain in his mother’s name.  Jasper was not close to his father and the distance had only grown when the man had abandoned his young family, leaving his wife to work three jobs to feed and clothe their three children.

Jasper had always thought that he would never find anyone to settle down with.  He didn’t ever want the life that his parents had; tired, sad, disillusioned and settling for something because there was no time or money for dreams of something or someone else.  Someone better.

So the first step that Jasper had taken at the age of sixteen was to have himself emancipated.  He had tried to live in Los Angeles and he had hated every moment of it but as he begun earning good money, he decided to take classes at the local community college.  The first one was on finances.  Jasper wanted to know how to look after his money and how to make it grow.

He trusted few people and although people liked his quiet charm and whit; Jasper had a way of standing to one side and observing people that he found made him a good judge of character.  Jasper had come to rely on that instinct over the years.

It was an instinct that he could no longer rely on.  He had never thought for a million years that his younger brother would ever turn out to be the low life, perverted bastard that he was!  Every time Jasper thought of what Ricky had done, how Richard had betrayed his own brother by lusting, perving, salivating over his Alice!  His Alice!  Jasper wanted to kill Rick with a cold fury that he had never felt before.

How he had touched her, fucking forced himself on her when Jasper had been careless enough to leave her alone with him… FUCK!

Alice gasped as Jasper jumped to his feet.  His face was a cold, furious mask.

“Jasper please!  If you want to talk to me, then you need to calm the fuck down!  I can’t reach you when you are like this!  If you are angry with me then just say so and let’s get it out there!  If you think that I did anything to encourage your brother…” Alice cringed away as Jasper was suddenly in front of her with his hand clasped over her lips.

Never – NEVER, EVER call that fucking piece of low down shit my brother!  I will kill him if I ever see him anywhere near you again!”  Jasper spat out as he held her.

Alice whimpered and she closed her eyes.  “Jazzy, you are scaring me…” 

This wild man wasn’t her Jasper…

Alice felt the tears running down her cheeks and over Jasper’s fingers.

Suddenly she was free.

Alice pushed a fist into her mouth to keep the sobs as quiet as she could.  Her whole body was trembling.

“Alice… sweet Jesus, I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to scare you… Ali…”  Jasper choked out as he sat crouched clear across the room from where Alice sat.

Alice could see the anguish clearly on Jasper’s face and she felt even worse than she had in the past few days.

This was all her fault!

“Come to me…”  Alice said, but Jasper just shook his head.

Alice slid off the sofa onto her knees and she crawled slowly across to where Jasper had slumped down against the wall.

Jasper could feel the intensity of Alice’s gaze as he watched her moving slowly towards him.

“Ali…” he said in a half pleading, half warning.

“No.  You’ve spoken and now it is my turn…” Alice said when she was inches away from his face.

Her eyes searched his intensely.  The remorse and sorrow that Alice saw gave her the courage to move closer until her lips met his.

Jasper’s head jerked backwards, but with nowhere to go, he hit the wall.

He cursed and rubbed his head.

Alice grinned at him, “Maybe that’ll knock some sense into your thick skull!”  She quipped as she arranged herself between his outstretched legs; her thighs straddled his open ones so that he could feel her heated core through her jeans.

Jasper shut his eyes tightly and moaned as he tried to adjust himself.  Alice giggled and winked at him.

“We can get to that later, but first let’s please resolve this ‘thing’ once and for all!”  She said with determination.

“Gladly, Darlin’.”

“Okay, I’m going first.  I need to tell you why I didn’t tell you about… what was happening in the first place, but you cannot freak out on me!  Do you promise?”

Jasper could see how anxious Alice was and once again he was filled with remorse at his earlier behavior.

“I promise.”

Alice took a deep breath, “I know that this might sound crazy to you, but when it happened the first time; I tried to just shrug it off.  I thought that perhaps I had imagined it or misread his signals in some way.  The next time it happened, your… well your father was in the room.  He, Rick grabbed my ass as I walked passed him.  I turned around as saw them looking at each other and Rick just winked at me and they burst out laughing… Jasper… you promised…” Alice broke off as she watched Jasper’s eyes become dark and wild again.

Jasper felt as if he was ready to explode!  That no good, low fucking, good for nothing… BASTARD!  I. will. Kill. Him.

Jasper felt Alice’s tiny hand stroking his cheek and he refocused on her anxious face.

He kissed her quickly, “I’m okay, Ali, I promise.  I won’t freak out on you again.”

Alice nodded slowly, “He apologized to me later – your father, I mean.  The next day he told me that he had too much to drink and that he had made Rick promise never to touch me again.  He begged me not to tell you and then he said that… some girls just have an ‘air’ about them…”

SON OF A BITCH!

Jasper opened his mouth to speak but Alice put her fingers over his lips.

She continued. “I know better than that, Jazz!  I know better!  I was raised to know better than that!  With all their bullshitting and nonsense, my brothers have never, ever treated any woman including me with anything than the utmost respect.  You have never treated me like a whore, but at that moment, I felt dirty.  And I felt like a two bit whore, who didn’t deserve anything better.  Rick kept touching me, stupid little insignificant ‘slip-ups’.  Every time he was around me, sometimes you were in the next room or you had your back to us… He would graze my breasts by pushing past me in a doorway, or he would rub himself against me if he were standing behind us…” Alice shuddered in revulsion and Jasper couldn’t take it any longer.

His arms wrapped Alice in a vice like grip. “Never, never, never…” He said over and over again against her neck as he pulled her closer.

“Jazz…”

“No – it’s my turn now… never, ever again, Mary Alice Cullen.  Promise me that you will never let anyone ever make you feel like that again.  Especially not me!  God, Ali, I love you so much!  Just the thought of another man touching you… Fuck!  It’s too much to even contemplate!  Do you know how I felt when I found out that Rick was… forcing himself on you?  When we forced Bella to tell us and we did force her – she didn’t have a choice really, I wanted to fucking kill someone there and then!  As you know, I sat up all night just thinking about what could have happened to you!  And about how I was going to take care of you this time!  I couldn’t help you last time, Darlin’.  I wasn’t able to stop that animal putting his hands on you… but I was going to make sure that Rick never ever touched you again.”

Alice brushed the tears of Jaspers cheeks.

“I love you so fucking much, Mary Alice Cullen-Whitlock.  You own me mind, body and soul.  If I lost you, my life would be so empty… please forgive me for hurting you and dragging this shit out.  Please, please don’t ever put me through this again, Tink, my heart can’t stand it.”  Jasper whispered as they held each other’s faces and gazed with longing into each other’s eyes.

“I love you, Cowboy; you are my everything… my lover, my best friend, my Dom, my love.  I am sorry too.  No more secrets.”

Their kiss was a relief.  For the first time in almost two weeks, their lips were soft and forgiving.  Lips touched, brushed, nibbled.  Tongues dueled and teased.  Eventually they couldn’t take it any longer and Jasper held Alice to him as he tipped her onto the floor and loomed over her, his knees pushing her thighs apart.

Alice panted into his mouth.  “Can I get my clothes back?”

Jasper smiled against her lips, “yeah, especially the underwear…”

Alice giggled, “can I get my car back?”

Jasper shook his head, “sorry, you will be driven around for a while…”

Alice groaned, “but I can see my Bestie?”

Jasper rocked back on his knees as he looked at the bright twinkle in Alice’s eyes. “Mary Alice…” He said with narrowed eyes.

Fuck! He is so sexy when he does that… now I need to change my panties! Damn Cowboy!

“Hmmm… take me upstairs Jazz… I’ve missed you…” Alice uttered the magic words.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

An hour later, Alice lay sprawled across Jasper’s bare chest.  Her eyes were closed but she was humming as Jasper played with her hair.

“Alice?”

“Yeah?”

“Supervised visits only…”  Jasper kissed her forehead.

“I know – but that’s only for now…” Alice smiled to herself.

She wondered what Kate, Bella and Rosalie were doing on Saturday after the therapy session?  She had heard that Gap was having a sale….

Everything was right with the world after all.

J&A****~~~~PLU~~~~****J&A

I hope that you liked it!

Love

Michele

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

all of these are on my Fave list too, must be why I love yours so much, we both like the same erotica



Author's Response:

it seems that way! thanks for the review

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Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

great as usual

 

the rec looks good too



Author's Response:

thank you! And it is - check it out!

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Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I did not like that he went ahead and told Emmett when she asked him not to he betrayed her and Esme.

She also took her punishment stayed focused and did not cry out so why maintenance for two weeks.

 

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

great chapter

Happy Holidays to you too



Author's Response:

thank you so much

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Date: 01 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I think Erica James got some of her ideas for 50 shades from this

Semper Fidelis by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 106]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has a great life but she's missing something...Will the new Marine in town be that something? Will she be able to handle the life that a Marine leads or will it all be too much?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93026 Read Count: 23379
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2010
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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Ch 1 Happy Alone

yea

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Ch 2 California Waiting

how she end up staying on base?

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Ch 3 Red Morning Light

love for you and your story

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Ch 4 Holy Roller Novocaine

someone's gonna get hurt

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Ch 5 Genius

I would hate to use BOB is Edward or Jasper were available

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Ch 6 Molly's Chamber

but you just made my mind think of all you can do without a condom and most of them are good

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Ch 7 True Love Way

what a way to spend a weekend

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Ch 8 On Call

they should get married in vegas too

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 9 Ragoo

glad he came back to you

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Ch 10 Four Kicks

I don't like fighting or physical violence whether between a man and a woman or two men

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Date: 17 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Ch 11 Crawl

Bella is always the scared little but thoughtless bitch

not just your version of her but many make me hate her so bad

Summary: Past Featured Story

game

Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 77040
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
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Date: 12 May 2019 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 First Base

yes

My Mia by angela4148 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]
Summary:

 

Bella's tortured...body, mind, and soul. Can Edward save her from herself? Sensitive topic dealing with relationships and struggles. ALL B/E POV'S


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126768 Read Count: 15706
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 30 Jul 2010
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Date: 31 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Life

wonderful

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Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Ch 6 True

so good

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Date: 30 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 10: Ch 10 For You I Will (Confidence)

HE IS A KEEPER

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 246]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Could It Be Destiny? by JenRar

Bella Swan opens a bookstore in Port Angeles, which happens to be located right next to the
music store owned by a young man named Edward Cullen. Watch as they meet and form a relationship.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167136 Read Count: 84597
[Report This] Published: 27 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2011
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Date: 21 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Outtake 2: Gettin' Our Honeymoon On

good job



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

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Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great start

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Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wtg, Bella will meet her beloved and his family

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Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

you must have some ALice in you, lots of shopping details



Author's Response:

Haha  I would do that part all differently if I were writing it now. Ah well. The things we learn in two years!  Thanks for your reviews so far!  :)

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Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

yes 1st kiss

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Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

awwww

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Date: 03 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

nice date

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Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

In real life the guy would want reciprocation



Author's Response:

Hah  Of course he would! But this is fantasy world.  ;)  haha Thanks for the reviews!

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Date: 04 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

A+

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Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

hot



Author's Response:

Hehehe  Thank you for your reviews!

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Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

HOPEFULLY HE IS STILL IN PRISON AND LAURENT WILL BE BACK THERE SOON

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Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47: Epilogue

excellent

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Date: 11 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Outtake 1: Getting Back to Normal

great



Author's Response:

Thank you.  :)

Friends in Love by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

Edward Cullen is desperate to move out of his apartment with Alice and lands in the only campus housing available, a co-ed apartment with Bella Swan. Both have feelings for the other but are unable to voice them and find themselves in separate relationships. As the friendship grows in spite of deeper feelings trouble brews and Edward finds himself being pushed to his limits while Bella deals with some of her issues. So what can you do when you love your friend...read to find out! Be warned that this story deals with the subject rape and abuse.

 

FriendsinLove

Banner by IllicitWriter

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119515 Read Count: 36669
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2011
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Date: 25 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Breaking Point

do not understand why she is protecting Jake

Summary:

On a mid-September evening, Edward Cullen broke off his relationship with Bella and the entire Cullen family left Forks never to be seen again.

2 years have passed and now Bella Swan is a Psychology & English Literature undergraduate at MIT University. She has abandoned love and any sort of relationship, burying her self in her studies and a limited social life. But when an unexpected guest arrives at MIT during the fall, she finds herself reunited with The Cullens and embraces the dawning of a new threat on the horizon that could divide her and the Cullens for the last time.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 185139 Read Count: 17980
[Report This] Published: 01 Mar 2010 Updated: 06 Feb 2011
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Date: 13 May 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

an awkward triangle

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Date: 13 May 2015 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

this is great

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Date: 13 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Guest

great beginning

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Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

he is just like Edward denying her what she wants and trying to shelter her from everything but not successfully

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Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

damn this is good

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Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

you create major cliffies

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Date: 14 May 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Part 2

what happened to the epi