I've loved your story so far and was disappointed as I thought it was complete when I started it.  Are you planning to finish this story since it has been so long since the last update?

I think after the way their actual story ended, that this is a really warped out take and I am sorry I even skimmed it.  

What an eventful chapter.  I'm thinking there has to be a connection between all of the missing people.  I don't understand why Bella wants to keep it a secret about James raping her.  Seems like that would solve a lot of the current problems and it seems like James is getting off way too easy.  The officer is spot on regarding the restraining order holding no real power over James if she will never turn him in.

Loved this story so much.  These two are so cute together.  I'd love a sequel of any kind.  

I have missed this story a lot and I really hope you decide to update it soon.

Lol, this is so funny.

Wow, James is bat shit crazy.  I suspect maybe he was carving his name or something to the effect in her back,

With all that is going on, it is intersting to me the the envelop didn't get more reaction.  It is obviously not something good.  

Kind of seems to me that Bella is getting the short end of the dating stick since they both left her at her bedroom door two nights in a row and stayed with each other.  Not sure how she feels but I'd be jealous as hell....

When I first foudn your story I have to admit I started reading it for mostly the lemons and the love of baseball.  However, it ending up being a much better story than I ever expected and I really enjoyed it.  The way you wrapped it up was a perfect ending.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Wow. I am hooked already so I hope you decide to continue with this story. 

Just caught up on the last 6 chapters and a lot has happened.  I am glad edward finally knows about Bella so they can work it out before she does something stupid.  Jasper is dangerous with a bat!

ARO is a piece of s... and should be held in prison on a metal table until the end of time!!

I am so glad that their dinner is going so well.   The both deserve to be happy and I would like to string Aro up by his balls!!!!

Edward is so good to her,  I do feel so badly for Bella is it has to be hard to deal with all of her injuries and physical side-effects of her kidnapping right now!

So I think her just leaving without saying anything is kind of bad given everything Edward has done for her.   HE is only doing what she asked him to do.

Hope this goes as easy for Bella.

So glad they found him guilty...although lethal injection is too easy of way for him to go out.  

Great proposal.  So sad that you will be done as I will miss them.

Well that was way out of left field for me.   Is she trying to distance herself so she doesn't get more attached to Jasper?

Something is up with Angela too and I am wondering if she is a plant from Alice or whoever Alice is working with?

i am kind of surprised that Edward or no one from the school followed her.

I would love to read it if you decide to do it.  

Lizzie needed her cool Aunt Bella to make her feel better.  Levi is so cute.

SO love the relationship they are finally building.

He basically just told her he was feeling close to her if she reads between the lines.  Tanya kind of screwed herself.

Edwards Leter was heartbreaking, I feel so badly for all of them.  Tayna needs to be slowly tortured.

Poor Edward, that made me cry.

Wow, between the family get together and Jack  they've had a hard day.  I wish Renee would pull her head out as it is not that bad.  

He is such a sweatheart.....I want one!

Awwww, such a giving boyfriend!

Hope she wises up on this vacation.

In answer to your last question....pick me!!

Wow, don't mess with Lawyer Edward.  He is so hot when he gets protective. 

I love your story and your writing style and I am totally in agreement on the don't like don't read!!!

While I hope Bella starts to believe Edward's feelings for her are real and won't change, what she has gone through in past relationships is nothing short of abussive.  For every negative comment a person hears it takes 10 positive ones to override it.  So it will just take time and patience for Edward to convince Bella she is worth it. 

He is so sweet to her....

These two are so cute with each other. 

I so hope they are able to find the underage pregnant girl as they DNA alone will nail him to the wall!!

If a brother is dating another brother's ex girlfirend should they he give him a heads up?   Surprised that part went so well.  Anticipating Bella and Edwards next talk.

Paul needs to be strung up!!!

That is the right decision about Edward and the trial.  Partner sounds good.

That was a great proposal.  Lucky girl.

They are finally making progress and now she will probably lose her memory or something.

Glad he stopper but now I think we will have to lock her up to keep her.  So glad for the new story as I missed them.

Keeps getting better and better!  So Demitri is trying to turn Eddie against Edward or use him to get to Bella, either way it is probably not good

I really love this story and can't wait to read others.  

I can't believe the Charlie could be so heartless and cruel as to knowingly sale his unborn grand children know what was intended or to agree to his daughter being raped and killed.  What a &%$&#$

First of all, it is ridiculous that you have to put up with harrassment just to keep your stories posted on FFN.   This is a great story so I am so happy you are continuing it here.

so glad he didn't disconnect the call like he thought.  

He is being so sweet with her, but I am really wondering how Bella is going to take it once she learns he is Anthony.  She might be angry for him misleading her.

Its about time for Edward and Bella to seal the deal.  I thnk she is definitely seeing the Anthony Edward similarities.