Penname: tds88 [Contact] Real name: Tiffany
Member Since: 13 Dec 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Sports-a-holic, love to make people smile, would like to think I'm easy to get along with, hopeless romantic and try to keep an open mind. O and utterly addicted to Twilight.


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Summary:

My entry for the Steamy Movie Crossover contest featuring the movie Serenity. Bella provides Edward with a distraction while the crew is away. Rated M for lemony goodness.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1678 Read Count: 3572
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 05 Nov 2014
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Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Welcome Distraction One Shot

I normally don't read crossovers, but when I saw this was a crossover of Twilight and Serenity I couldn't help but look. I watched all the episodes of Firefly and then Serenity, so I knew exactly what you were talking about and even pictured the people and events that were referenced. I could totally see Alice as River and Bella and Edward as Simon and Kaylee was perfect. Even Emmett, who I'm guessing was Jayne, made perfect sense. Well done. 



Author's Response:

It's nice to hear a positive review from another Serenity/Firefly fan.  I'm a huge fan as well and couldn't resist writing this when I came across that conetet.  Yes, Em was definitely Jayne.  He's the only one that could pull that one off ;)  Thanks for your great review.

Summary:

Bella is the local bad girl.  Edward is the new kid.  What happens when they meet while she is serving out her latest punishment at church?  Rated NC-17 for lemon and language.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5466 Read Count: 1480
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Sinner and the Saint One Shot

This would make a great story, not just a one-shot. It's got the potential to be a full story. Well done.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  This story really had me nervous because of the whole sex in church thing.  I wasn't sure if I would get totally trashed for pulling that.  I would love to develop this into a full story if my life ever slows down enough to allow me to.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 359366
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
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Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Edward's POV First Date

It's funny how much underlying foreboding I could pick up in this chapter since I knew what was wrong with Edward. Seeing just how much Emmett teased him and how it affected him. Even with this last scene where he says that Emmett would tease him about being tired out, just makes me want to smack Emmett. I'm not saying Edward wasn't wrong in keeping it from everyone, but with how everything played out, plus the hard feelings for what Emmett did to Bella, he is not totally innocent in it either. 



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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Piecing It Together - Part 2

I don't know what I would do in Rosalie's place. I think she's going about it the right way and the fact she was able to tell Emmett what she's thinking and how she's feeling is a good place to start. I can't decide whether I want to be mad at Emmett or feel bad for him and the position he's in. His ignorance to the whole situation pisses me off and then to see it from his point of view makes me want to cry for him all at the same time. My annoyance with him wants the family to find out about Emmett's screw up so the shit can hit the fan and Alice can chew him out. So now I just shake my fist and give him a dirty look.

I can't wait to see what happens with the Dr.'s appointment and the anniversary party. Ah we're getting close to the happy happy joy joy, I can feel it. Getting glimpses of it now (yes I'm having an Alice moment dont' burst my bubble ;D).



Author's Response:

LOL!!  I will certainly not burst your bubble. Enjoy your Alice moment to the fullest.

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Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 64: The Name Game

My eyes burn a litte from this chapter. I blinked a lot while reading, trying to keep from crying. Between the names and meanings behind them and the babies birthday, it was all so sentimental. I really love the names though. They all seem to fit perfectly. 



Author's Response:

Yep! EA and I were very sentimental as we wrote these last few chapters. Can't believe it's really ending but we are very happy to send them off with an HEA perfect for them.

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Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 54: More Than Words

I got a little upset with Edward in this chapter. He seemed so oblivious that his plans for the future needed to change. I just kept reminding myself that he never was put in a situation that would help him understand it. Also I like that Carlisle was getting him to understand that it's not that he can never have his dream of running his own business but that the path in which he gets there has changed. 

It's good to see Bella being more open and trying to open up, but seeing her war with herself about what to do and what to think drives me crazy. I just want to yell at my screen to tell her about what she needs to do. Too bad it doesn't work like that. Although I could go for a little Inkheart right now. That would be interesting...hmmm. OK fantasy over. As always, I can't wait for the next chapter. 

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Aloha Wau Ia Oe

That letter from Bella was so perfect. I thought it was going to be something short but it really was a declaration. The words were perfectly written and even reading them myself I couldn't help but smile.

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Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Perfect

Sad days that its actually over. I may very well find myself reading through this story again at some point. Its just one of those that you can read over and over and never get tired of. 

I didn't realize this was the epilogue until the kids were 2 1/2 yrs old. I'm going to miss this story and the characters. It was quite the ride. I'll keep a watch out for your next story. I'm already excited just because its a story by you and EA. I loved this story and your writing. I'll be sure to check out the blog too. 

Until next time. Abso-forkin-lutely amazing story.



Author's Response:

EA and I are both very saddened to see our WTB characters go and Extremely excited to see our new characters form and shape themselves.  We have lots of fun ideas for the next story and we hope all of you will enjoy them!

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Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Morning Aftermath

Once again I'm sucked into one of your stories...as such with all of them I read. 

I got a nice chuckle when I saw you used "lilliputian", I just read the definition for it on dictionary.com's feed for word of the day so when I saw it in the story I was both excited that I knew what it meant and surprised at the coincidence of having just read it.



Author's Response:

You are so nice! Thank you!  LOVE the lilliputian coincidence! That's awesome!!

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Next Contestant

Since I really haven't reviewed for this story yet I felt I could put one in for this chapter. I really like the personalities of the characters in this story. It may just be because it is more outlandish but it seems like Bella has so much more personality and attitude in this one. I love that she speaks her mind and the background in her story that she is kind of the "bad girl" with her tats and past activities. It gives new spice to the story. I also love Bree! I know I should have said that earlier when he was introduced but I was too caught up into the story to stop to review. 

Last thing I'm going to say...I love the movie references! I live by referencing movies and TV shows, so the fact that the characters in the story do to make it so easy to be caught up in it. 



Author's Response:

I too live by refrenecing movies and TV shows so I just had to toss that in there. My little part of myself in this story.  I wanted it to be "real", with real problems that we all face every day. They still have some things easier than the rest of us, but for the most part, they have to get their ownselves out of trouble when they get in it, just like we do.

I understand completely about you not being able to stop to review. The story sucks me in when I read over chapters all the time.  Glad you love Bree. He is a fun, strong character and I have a great time writing him in.

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: The Past Laid Bare

As someone who has dealt with a lot of loss in my own life, that chapter was perfect in the way to describe how it feels and how hard it is to not only work through those emotions but also to let someone into knowing how you are feeling.



Author's Response:

Sometimes letting someone in is almost as heart-breaking as the loss itself. And if you're lucky, once you have shared, it helps and makes you not regret the sharing.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: All Shook Up

I love Hawaii, there is so many beautiful sites and sounds there its just so calm and peaceful but full of fun and excitement at the same time. I haven't sat on the beach to watch the sunrise and after reading about it, I will be sure to do it next time I go. 

On another note, I've never heard of David Gray but for this chapter I looked it up and the song and played it while reading the lyrics. Not only did I get something good to read but now I have a new artist that I like to listen to.

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Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Don't Worry, Be Happy

I thought Emmett was going to propose not just a promise. As for the "snow cones", that was just funny as all hell. There really is a huge difference between real Hawaiian shaved ice and snow cones or even some other kind of shaved ice. It melts in your mouth like ice cream without the cream part. Although there is something called a "snow cap" that they put cream on top of the shaved ice that makes it even better. 

Ah damn now not only do I want a shaved ice but I want to go to Hawaii to get it.



Author's Response:

LOL! The great Snow Cone - Shaved Ice debate! Glad you're on our shaved ice side!!  If you can go to Hawaii, then do it! And then send pics! LOL

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Surprise

Jeebus...I'm so going to start saying that now...I can't believe I caught up without knowing I did. I was so looking forward to still reading some more chapters tonight, o-cha-wella. 

I'm glad to hear you're healing well. I've gone through my fair share of broken bones, casts, and surgeries so I know very well how getting back to normal is a process, and not an easy one at that. 

Good luck with your therapy and hope you have a great holiday. Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween Hook-Up

I've been to Hawaii multiple times because my family owns 2 2 week timeshares in Waikiki. We go every year, usually in the summer. Although its never enough, haha. I must have hundreds of pictures just of the sunsets and water, it's so clear. Plus I've tried Idk how many times to try to get a picture of a turtle popping it's head out of the water. I guess this next time I'm going to have to make sure to get a shaved ice and take a pic (I might even go with something yellow ;D). 



Author's Response:

Hee hee! Love that idea!!  My Hawaii helper sent me pics and I want to go see it in person so much more than when I started writing this story.

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Eclipse

I think I have to agree with Bella on this one...there is only one way to describe this chapter, Le Sigh!  

Amazing chapter. I'm glad at how long it was too. I didn't want it to end. I'm still trying to guess what's going to happen next, but you always surprise me. Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

I love that she says Le Sigh like that!! It's one of my favorite lines from her. She's def been teaching me a lot for sure!

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Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Crash & Burn

Ok I have to admit I really had no clue as to what was going to happen. I'm sure if I really tried I could have had an idea but I was too busy just reading that I wasn't trying to figure it out. I want to cry after reading this chapter. This is certainly a side of Emmett that I've never seen. He's always so brotherly with Bella that him being the one to go off on her was surprising, but I guess if it was going to be anyone Emmett is a good choice. I couldn't see Alice doing it. 

As always, great chapter. I can't wait for the next one, although I am pulling for a happy ending.

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Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Cry

I couldn't help but keep reading faster and faster hoping that it all came out in the open and they were able to talk. I kept looking to the scroll on the side to make sure there was still more to read. Then when I read about Edward and Emmett talking I was hoping that Emmett was going to tell Edward what he said to Bella, but he didn't. 

I can understand the drama and everything but I really want Bella and Edward to figure out how stupid they are. The romantic in me is screaming at the computer right now and then I start laughing at myself because I want to yell at the computer. I guess its all the sign of a good story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Pulling All The Right Strings

Le sigh. Where to start...PREGNANT?! That certainly got my attention. I feel a little stupid that I didn't put that together or maybe its just your sneaky writing that threw me off. I really hope nothing happens to the baby. I don't know if I can handle anymore angst. I was starting to think that Bella wasn't going to tell Edward anything about Emmett for a while there. There is still so much that needs to happen and leaps and bounds that happened in this chapter. I can't say how much I love these long chapters. If they were shorter I may have died. I'm so addicted to this story, that only the nice long hit of that addiction keeps me going. Once again, I can't wait for the next chapter...hopefully it won't take 2 weeks again (cross fingers, hope, pray, beg if need be).



Author's Response:

I'm hoping it's my sneaky writing b/c I was definitely trying to be sneaky!

Nothing will happen to the baby! I can state that firmly!

LOL Yeah, I keep trying to end them sooner, but the chapters have minds of their own.  As of now, the next chapter will be this upcoming Saturday.

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Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Will It All Away

Ugh, I could tell that was going to go like that as I was reading the letter. It was so vague that the interpretation could be left open for anything. I really am happy with how Jasper was painted in this chapter. He really is a sweetheart and knows just what to say and do. It's so frustrating seeing all the things that Bella and Edward are doing wrong. I just keep chanting in my head "why don't they..." "if only they would..." I'm desperately trying to fix it all in my head, but doesn't do much good unless you write it. 

Glad to hear you are feeling better. The worst is getting sick and having it linger. I can't wait for the next chapter. I constantly check when I'm reading to make sure there is still more to read, because I hope to see some hope of resolution. Yet in this case it got worse. Why are you doing this to me? I know, I know it makes for a good story, but the anticipation is killing me!

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Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Piecing It Together - Part 1

Wow where to start....ok first, the rebuilding of Bella and Edward's relationship seems to be going good. I love the little steps they're taking and how they are talking to each other and I certainly love this last scene where they talking on the couch. It was such a sweet moment, even with everything still between them, it felt like something that would have happened at the beginning of their relationship. 

I think the talk with Emmett went well. I kinda wish that Bella would have seem the conversation between Emmett and Edward when Emmett came back from the bathroom. That seemed to relay a lot more emotion and might have helped Bella see Emmett's really broken up about it. 

I'm always a little suspicious that Bella is going to overhear Edward saying that she is pregnant. Maybe I've read too many stories and just sit here trying to figure out what's going to happen before it does and not just letting the story go as it will and enjoy the surprises from reading it. 

Ok well I think I've rambled enough. Love the chapter and can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Bella gets that Emmett says he didn't mean it, she's just not able to reconcile that in her head yet.

She won't be overhearing Edward. And when she's there with Dr. Bennett, it's not gonig to sink in right away with visual proof. LOL

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Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Searching for a Reason

Ahhhh Cliffy! I was sooo surprised to see this updated twice and so close together but I'm happy nonetheless. 

As much as I would love for it to be a quick fix, I love the real quality that makes this story so awesome. There are so many little things that would have never been portrayed if it was a quick fix. This builds such a wonderful story and shows more personality of both the characters and the story itself. (Yes I do read the author's notes)

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 47: So Different Yet Still The Same

Woohoo they kissed! I love the progression and the detailing of how their relationship is moving. I wonder when they are going to find out that they are actually talking to each other on the internet. Once again it was a great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Yes, they did!!  My PIC was sooooo correct when she felt Edward needed a good luck kiss from Bella.  LOL  Thank you so much for saying you're loving the progression and detailing!  We appreciate hearing that so much!  We certainly don't want to drag it out, but we also don't want to move too fast because that wouldn't be honest to the personalities we've built for these characters.

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Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 48: My Guiding Light

Ah two weeks?! Ugh I guess I'll have to live with that. I love Esme. She is so awesome. She kind of reminds me of a combination of my mom and my gma. I'm glad that she was able to open Bella up a little more and finally someone is figuring out the whole Emmett fiasco, even if it is only noticing Bella's reaction to his name.

Can't wait for the next chapter, I'll have to come up with something to do for the next 2 weeks.

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Date: 07 May 2011 Title: Chapter 57: Learning to Breathe Again

I was extremely happy to see the early update, even though I couldn't read it until now. This was just one of those chapters that made me smile and finally got us to a point that I was waiting for. It feels like we're right back to the happy go lucky times. I know it isn't quite there but it's been so long that this chapter feels so fluffy. 

I loved the tattoo idea for the rings. I've always loved that, especially having all the "symbols" in the middle of it. I'm all for inner meanins and symbols. I've thought of getting a tattoo and I use some of the ideas I've read from these stories to help me pick. 

Its so great to see these two being able to be happy and relaxed around each other. I can't wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

The "ring" scene tops my list of favorite things I've written so far.  It was definitely filled with meaning and emotion.  Tattoos should definitley have a strong meaning behind them.

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Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 52: One is the Loneliest Number

I had wondered how Bella was going to react to finding out she was pregnant. I didn't think of the possibility of 3 babies so that was surprising. I thought she was going to say that they were wrong and she wasn't pregnant, but her actual reaction seems so much more accurate. 

Just when I thought we were past all the angst and heartache, then this happens. I can't say I didn't expect it, just that I like to live in my bubble of sunshine and rainbows as Bella so eloquently put it. 

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Ghosts of Broken Hearts

Even though I can totally understand Bella's reaction and the whole drama surrounding Edward's lie, doesn't mean I am not desperately wanting the happy happy joy joy to emerge sooner rather than later.

I'm glad that Bella was able to get a little guidance from Rosalie. I was worried that all the things she was thinking would never be addressed because she was keeping it to herself. Then Rosalie was able to just read her so well and tell her exactly what she needed to hear. Thank goodness for Rosalie! 

I am such a conflicted reader. Whenever I read about Bella saying how much of what Edward does frustrates her and how him only showing how happy he is isn't helping her trust him, I want to just scream at her to tell him that. Then there's Edward, and how he talks to his dad and Charlie about everything when a lot of the time it's all things he should be telling Bella, I want to yell at him for it. I find myself thinking that if they would just talk to each other they could kiss and make up and then I would have my happy happy joy joy, but that's not necessarily realistic. Plus it wouldn't make for as awesome a story as this so once again I'm stuck. Damn you and your amazing writing abilities! You make me feel as emotionally unstable as Bella and I don't even have pregnancy hormones to combat with.

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Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Finding Our Way

Bummer, I guess I was a little too into the chapter to notice that it was coming to an end. That Train song would have made the perfect proposal if it was the right time, but it wasn't. I love that song. I just about cry everytime I hear it. 

It's good to see Bella opening up more to Edward and that they are getting along more. They are able to express their feelings a little better. 

I can't help but wonder if they will realize that they are talking to each other as Numb and BB. Then I think maybe Bella will find out and it will help her to come to terms about the situation a little more. (Just thinking out loud) 

O I just wanted to say: "Damn you scuba Steve!" Now I really want a beignet. It sounds so good right now.

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Date: 01 May 2011 Title: Chapter 56: You Found Me

I wondered if this was the chapter that one of them found out about being online buddies. Especially after the little teaser summary in the AN at the top. Once I started reading their conversation this last time and saw where it was going, I was nothing but a squealing psycho. I'm glad I was alone otherwise I'm sure I looked crazy. Although my dog was giving me funny looks, its a good thing she can't tell anyone. (Yes I'm one of THOSE people that talks to their pets) 

I could just imagine how all the pictures that were described in this chapter came out. Even the WTH scared face Edward made with the living statue. Just the visual idea of the black and white of Bella's belly and Edward's profile, made the chapter that much better. I love being able to feel like I'm there. 



Author's Response:

EA & I work hard to describe it well enough for you guys to feel like you're right there watching so it's good to know you feel that way.  I'm having fun imaging you squealing and the dog wondering what's up with you. LOL

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Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 58: If At First

Yay for happiness, happy happy happy. I could just picture Edward laying in bed facing away from the door listening to his parents talk with a smile on his face and then all of a sudden cringing and frozen hoping not to hear them. I wonder how Alice is going to respond??? Hmmm, she's always so exuberant but then again the pixie can be unpredictable. I think it comes from too much "pixie dust"...no one told her it isn't for snuffing (j/k drugs are bad, not funny). I miss Bree and all his awesome gayness. 

I do realize this was all incredibly weird and random, but as it is after midnight and I'm teetering on the edge of consciousness its all I got.



Author's Response:

OMG! Snorting pixie dust!! Love it!!!  Bree will be back soon! Don't you worry on that one!!

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Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 59: The Reason

Before even starting this chapter I was already squealing. That is what just seeing updates does to me. 

I knew Alice was going to be excited. I just pictured a cartoon-like person jittering and shaking like someone that ate something hot and her head was going to explode, with steam coming out of her ears. 

I was glad to hear from Bree again. Even though it was a little more serious than I was looking for. I liked that we got a litlte look into who Bree is and see a bit more depth to his character. 



Author's Response:

Oh, don't you worry. Bree will be around with his usual sillyness turning Edward's ears red all too soon. LOL

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 60: I'm Not Calling You A Liar

Its the end of the chapter already!? O well, I was glad to see we were back to a little lemonade. I worry about Alice though. I can see her go both completely ballistic or suck it up, talk it out and be the best friend with a chip on her shoulder to her brother.....OK maybe I've read too many stories. 

Nothing like a little pregnancy scare to keep the readers on their toes, right? As long as its not a tragedy, I don't mind the little drama here and there. 



Author's Response:

LOL Yes, the chapter had to come to an end.  Yep!  A little sweet lemonade for these two people.  Alice will take it hard but at the end of the day, Bella will be more important than anything else to her.

No tragedies in this story. Promise.

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Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 61: Life After You

I love me some Emmett ass kickin. Although this seemed to be a failed experiment, I think more trials need to be taken to see if you can beat the stupid out of someone. Emmett is thick-headed; you need to break through the concrete barrier before it sinks in. I hope there's going to be a Alice/Emmett encounter, cause I wouldn't mind a little Ninjabell action. It will be interesting to see how the family interacts with Emmett now. After Jazz went psycho killer on him and he's the calm one, what is everyone else going to do?

It was nice to see some Bree/Edward time. I love that they interact like they've known each other for years. They seem so comfortable around each other. 

 



Author's Response:

LOL If Emmett doesn't behave himself, I'm sure someone will attempt to beat the stupid from him. But I have faith in his committment to his counseling.

There will be an Alice/Emmett encounter, but I can't promise Ninjabell. LOL That would be interesting to see though.

Bree and Edward both see how important the other is to Bella and how they each contribute to her happiness. Though, there will never be a shortage of moments where Bree makes Edward's ears turn red but that's just life with Bree. LOL!

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Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Moving Forward

Aw so cute. I love how sweet they are around each other again. Even with another scare, there isn't a lasting problem. I'm glad Alice was able to get a little of her frustration and anger out without really hurting Emmett. I think he needs to get a good wake up call from everyone to have an idea of how big he screwed up. 

There might not have been kungfu moves from ninjabell but she has stealthy mind tricks to go with her ass-kicking manuevers. 

Now to go check out that costume!



Author's Response:

Hee hee! Mind tricks! Love it!

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Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 63: Cheesy Cullen

OMG it's really coming to an end. I don't know what I'll do when I don't have WTB updates to look forward to. 

I have to admit I was surprised that not only was there a proposal in this chapter but also the wedding. I'm glad that the proposal happened as it did though. I just couldn't see ExB's proposal happening in front of everyone. Heck they had a hard enough time saying "I love you" to each other let alon in front of everyone so I didn't see that proposal going over well. I loved that Bella made a flower ring and proposed first. That was definitely WTB ExB. 

I can't wait for the babies! In a way Alice did kind of get her namesake. 

In honor of this chapter and all the quoting glory I thought I would end on a quote. I read this and thought of this story.

"At the end of the day faith is a funny thing. It turns up when you don't really expect it. It's like one day you realize that the fairytale may be slightly different than you dreamed. The castle, well, it may not be a castle. And it's not so important happily ever after, just that its happy right now. See once in a while, once in a blue moon, people will surprise you, and once in a while people may even take your breath away." -Meredith Grey (Grey's Anatomy)



Author's Response:

Don't worry, we are already plotting a new story so we'll keep you busy! LOL

Yeah, Bella managed to surprise everyone. ha ha!

Alice def kinda did, but she's Alice so she will continue trying to get a full-on namesake. She doesn't give up easy! :)

Love the quote! Thank you so much for sharing!

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Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 66: OT1 E's Halloween

I was so excited when I saw this posted. It's nice to get a look into what Edward was thinking and feeling during that first chapter but also it was like a blast from the past in the story. It was like reliving the beginning of their relationship but now with the knowledge of what happens afterward. 

There were points where I had to think and remember what happened in the beginning, like what Bella and Alice were talking about when they went off by themselves before Edward brought Bella's drink over. 

I hope there will be at least a couple more outtakes. I'm having attachment issues with this story and the little outtakes here and there help keep my clingy side to a minimum.



Author's Response:

There will definitely be some more outtakes.  We are working on the First Date from Edward's POV right now.  Then we are going to have a couple chapters with the babies, like when Emmett and Bella really start to work things out.  We also *hope* to have the first Halloween with the babies.  We will definitley have their first Christmas - this is being written for Charity for the Fandom for LLS.  Details are up on my website. :)

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 68: The Best Birthday

Le sigh. This chapter was awesome-sauce. I love that Emmett and Bella are still rebuilding their friendship and are able to talk more about it all. I can just picture their outfits; adorable. I'm loving these future/outtakes.



Author's Response:

Awesome-sauce! Love it! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Lonesome and second-guessing his career as a baseball player, Edward never imagined that it would only take one foul ball to turn his world upside down. That he might possibly find everything he had ever dreamt of, everything that had been missing in his life. Would he embrace it, or would he strike out, never knowing true love?

Special thanks to NoelleSeven for the awesome banner she made me.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 274561 Read Count: 75581
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Epilogue

Great story. I think your right about ending it the way you did. Most stories would end it right after the wedding and just do a epilogue of everything else. It was nice to be able to get a good look at their life after the wedding. It allowed more detail of their happily ever after then just a list of what happened in the epilogue. 

Now its time to go over to Worth the Burn, I haven't read the most recent chapter yet!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, So glad that you enjoyed the story. I have another one going right now. So maybe I will see ya over there reading it.

 

EA

The Office Temp by Lori 94 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Bella just moved to NYC. She away from her friends and family. She takes a postition at a temp agency and they send her to the law offices of Cullen McCarty and Whitlock. Will she find what she's missing or is this just another job?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4578 Read Count: 1566
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 10 May 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Office Temp

Fan-freaking-tastic. I love that you built up the story. The ending was perfect too. I liked how it is like a never ending cycle. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 247011
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Extra (takeout)

Absolutely a beautiful story. I was hoping there would be an epilogue or even just a closing chapter that wraps everything up, but I saw that this story is listed as complete so I guess that's it. 

I have to admit I'm a little confused on the whole "baby scandal". Kate was behind it? 

I'm glad to see Charles was able to finally say his peace and really apologize to Bella like he should. I loved seeing the different POVs too. I think it was important to see how certain characters were feeling and thinking for some of the events in the story. 

I hope to see one last chapter posted but if not, this was still a great story with amazing writing. 

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Since I didn't think there was going to be more, I'm super excited that this was posted. I would love to read more. I'm a greedy reader, so I take what I can get. I love reading the story of how ExB get to their HEA  so it's icing on the cake when I get a look into the after. I'm just going to throw this out there but with another baby on the way have you thought about making a sequel with Edward getting his business off the ground and they go through another pregnancy?

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Aw I love this Edward. He may have started as an ass but he has his moments. 

Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love the absolute happiness that is the sonagram appointment.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I was going to stop at last chapter to go to bed, but of course it had to be a cliffhanger. So I had to keep going through this chapter to make sure she was ok. I am now incredibly tired and emotional and have to try to fall asleep without whipping out my laptop or phone to keep reading. It helps that I know I'll be able to come back to it tomorrow, though. Here's hoping...

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I don't have much to bribe you with, but promise to review every chapter if you decide to continue. I've always wanted to see Phantom. I'm been to the theater many times and absolutely love it but Phantom is one of the last shows I've yet to see. 

It certainly is hard when you want to control your dreams and can't. Even when you know it is just a dream it seems like you can't get out of it until it lets you. I think Edward did exactly what he needed to, even if he didn't feel like he was doing anything. The constant reminding her of his happiness and love helped her, since that is what the dreams were opposing, but I think this end scene is what really let her see. It showed that he remembered what she said when they were first dating and he was being standoffish. He may not have made it seem so but now he could show her that everything she wants matters to him.

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 208482
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

OMG I can tell this is going to be an amazing story. 

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

Absolutely loved this story. Its been in my too read list for a while now and I finally got around to reading it. I found it on a rec site and it had nothing but great reviews for it. 

The dynamic of this story was perfect. I loved the plot and how the characters interacted. Also it was fun to see how you incorporated all the characters into the story. I have to admit I'm not a huge Jacob fan so "douche" Jacob didn't bother me. The only way I like Jacob being on the HEA side is if he's gay or an innocent brother-type. 

I loved Jack. His personality was perfect. I laughed too many times to count with some of the things he did or said. All around, great story. I'm sad to see it end but I loved the HEA that it ended on.

Summary:

Outtakes and missing scenes from my story, Parachute. Rated M for possible strong language and lemons later in the story.    

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29004 Read Count: 14529
[Report This] Published: 25 Jul 2010 Updated: 12 May 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 11: In My Daughter's Eyes : Charlie POV

Awww poor sappy Charlie. I love getting a little glimpse inside Charlie's thoughts and emotions. It was also nice to see how the kids were growing up. 

The Cake Boss by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Edward and Bella have been in love for years, but are oblivious to the other's feelings. What happens when you combine that with a birthday cake and a meddling Pixie?  

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6250 Read Count: 653
[Report This] Published: 11 Aug 2010 Updated: 11 Aug 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Boss

I absolutely loved this. It's hard to believe this was all just one "chapter". It feels like it was a long fic, which I love. The whole Cake Boss really worked for it. There are times when all the characters really do seem like a disfunctional tv family. 

Summary:

Edward Cullen is a world famous actor and singer.  At just twenty-four he has received several awards for his acting and is currently in the running for a Grammy for his debut album.  What happens when he meets Bella Black; a thirty-five year old wife and mother who is in town on a business trip?  Anything can happen…if you let it.

 

 

 

 

This is a one-shot I wrote for a friend as a birthday gift.  She has begrudgedly granted me permission to share it with you all.

 

My banner and blinkie are thanks to my banner goddess Misskingatyourservice.  check out all her creations at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3261 Read Count: 1806
[Report This] Published: 18 Sep 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Chance Encounters

That was like a teaser for a story. At least that's how I feel, teased. I would really like to see this turned into a full story. I'd love to see what happens in this story. Its got a lot of potential.



Author's Response:

Ahhh, I'm sorry I left you hanging.  But the good news is that I will be continuing this story!  However, you will have to be patient.  I am working on another story right now (A Voice in the Darkness) and I can not focus on two sets of personalities at the same time. :)

Thanks for the review and for the interest in the story.

Nickey

Across the Hall by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 487]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Edward Cullen was in a marriage that was doomed from the start. Having been overseas when his wife left him, he's now coming home to Washington newly single and ready to reclaim his life.

Bella Swan was married right out of college only to find out that he was a cheater, a liar and an abuser. After escaping the marriage, she's moved back to Washington to the safety of family and new friends.

Will sparks fly when she moves across the hall from a mysteriously handsome and newly single neighbor?

*Rated for strong language and lemons*           Banner made by: Kiwibeme

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74537 Read Count: 93531
[Report This] Published: 19 Nov 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

O how I love a happy ending. I found it highly hilarious that the dog was named Jake. I guess that just happens when you're Team Edward. This story seemed to go by so fast. I loved the plot line and little differences that you made in it. 

I was wondering if James was ever going to make a reappearance in the story. The short cameo was about all he needed though. 

Great story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Yes, I must admit that I am 110% Team Edward...poor Jake will always be relegated to being a pet, a villian or a gay bestie...LOL  I do try to keep my stories moving-not weighing them down with too much detail or extraneous dialouge. I don't enjoy reading stories like that, so I don't write them like that. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts!

A Family Affair by nickeyd26 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

This story picks up a year after Edward and Bella were married.  He changed her on their honeymoon and there was no baby or confrontation with the Volturi.  Bella realizes as they return from a trip to celebrate their first anniversary that the Cullens have been keeping a secret from her.  Now, they want her to join in on the fun.

 

This story contains slash, fem-slash, polyamorous groupings…ah hell.  It is a damned sexual buffet.  If you are not into that sort of thing or if you are under 18, then just move along little ones.  This story is NOT for you.

 Create your own banner at MyBannerMaker.com!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11296 Read Count: 13585
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 23 Nov 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Family Affair

Wow that was like a smut circus. I'm not saying it was awesome in the smut department, but there was definite parts that weirded me out a little. Although now I may have to check out some of your other stories.



Author's Response:

All I have to say is that I gave you a fair warning in the A/N.  Sorry about weirding you out.  This was just a dirty little idea that bounced around my head till I finally let it out. 

I hope you will give my other stories a try.  They are nothing like this.  They are each individuals and come from different places in my head.  I hope to hear from you again.

Thanks for the review!

Nickey

Summary:

ENTRY FOR THE CHERRY EXCHANGE 2010 CONTEST!

 

How far would you go to prove your love? How pure would you stay, just to have that one night? 3 years & a country may have separated them, but both kept the one thing that the other wanted most. E/B.

 

When virtue is the only thing of value.

 

Rated M for language and lemons.

Kick-ass banner by miss FrozenSoldier :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14798 Read Count: 729
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2010 Updated: 28 Nov 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Believe The Hype...

I would love to see this as a full story. It certainly has potential. Great one-shot. I can understand how weird it is to write something that can really be summed up in one chapter. You did a fantastic job. I've read several one-shots that either were entirely too long or so short they didn't give any details at all. The best one-shots can definitely be made into stories and this is one of them.

Summary:

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After spending years in love with her best friend, Bella deals with heartache and learns to grow when he chooses another. 

 

My winning entry for the FanFicAholics Anon's 100 Pictures Contest.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2263 Read Count: 1361
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2010 Updated: 07 Dec 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Not That Girl

I almost didn't read this because I couldn't believe that it was all about how she doesn't get the guy. Of course that was also under the assumption that the "he" was Edward. It was a great surprise to see that it was actually about Emmett. Not to mention that Edward comes in at the end and "dazzles" Bella into moving on. The big reason I gave in to read this was because of the song. Wicked is my all-time favorite musical so as soon as I saw the title I knew I had to read it. So in the words of the wiz, this story was Wonderful. 

Misery Business by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When snarky lead singer Bella falls for a sexy bartender, is it a match made in heaven? Or will his girlfriend throw a wrench into the works?  A One Shot Soundtrack Contest entry based on Paramore's song, Misery Business.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5088 Read Count: 1487
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Dec 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Misery Business

This story caught my eye because you mentioned Paramore. Which really is enough for me to love it without reading it, but the writing and storyline just made it that much better. I loved that you you reference Paramore in your story as well. 

From Afar by ange de l aube Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Summary: Edward is a reclusive College freshman. He holds back from making contact with the girl he believes could be his one true love because he doesn't think he's worthy of her affections. Fate intervenes, and they become friends during a biology class. Will he have the courage to tell her how he really feels or will he be stuck with admiring her from afar?

 

Banner made by me :)

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12859 Read Count: 603
[Report This] Published: 21 Dec 2010 Updated: 21 Dec 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Love was right before my eyes

That has to be one of the best one-shots I've ever read. I'm all for the fluff and romance, its the hopeless romantic in me. I'm sure this would make a great multiple chapter story too. 

Well done.

Adeste Fideles by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella returns home for Christmas for the first time in 5 years. Who awaits her when she arrives?

My one shot written for The Southern FanFiction Review's Countdown to Christmas.

Rated M for lemony goodness.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6073 Read Count: 2064
[Report This] Published: 23 Dec 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Adeste Fideles

Great one-shot. Interesting concept of how they finally ended up together.

Summary: Past Featured Story

GupCL

Edward's always gotten what he wanted, from a baby sister to the career of his dreams. When Alice invites him to a holiday dinner, it brings him face to face with the last thing he'll ever want. Written for the SFFR Christmas Compilation.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5844 Read Count: 3301
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautiful story. I enjoyed reading it.



Author's Response:

thanks, it means a lot that you took the time to review the story.  Every review i get telling me what you think is a blessing.

The Servile Gal by verucasin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

OOC. All Human. A one-shot made for 'Squeeze my Lemon'. SMUT GALORE! ExB    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4947 Read Count: 1821
[Report This] Published: 28 Dec 2010 Updated: 28 Dec 2010
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow that was hot! I can't believe you ended it there tho. I want to know what happened the rest of the night. This could definitely be made into at least a short story (with several chapters), delving into what Bella's occupation is and what happens with her relationship with Edward. Then what happens with Riley and what was the connection with Jasper and Alice.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. So many people are requesting me to continue this...Well, I can't promise but I'll find time one of these days. Thanks! =)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Valentine's Day had been the most magical day of Bella's life, everything was perfect. That is until Edward left. Now four years later on Valentine's Day, she's about to marry another man. Can Edward make Valentine's Day theirs again? Thank you Noelle Seven for the awesome banner!!

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22741 Read Count: 2698
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Compared to the couple thousand word one-shots that I've read, this is certainly more like a story, even though it was more like the "reader's digest" version of the story. I would love to be able to see what happens as closure for this story. It was truly a wonderful romantic Valentine's Day story. I keep up with Worth the Burn and when I got an update that you posted this story I was immediately looking forward to reading it. It didn't disappoint. 



Author's Response:

HI,

 

Sorry it has taken me so long to reply. Real like has been super busy. Glad you liked the one shot so much. I will be continuing it just as soon as I finish up with the full story I have going now. It won’t be too much longer I promise.

 

Thanks for all the support and I look forward to seeing what you think when Bella and Edward have to go back to Forks and face everyone.

 

Thanks for reading,

EA

Summary:

Beautiful Banner moved to chapter 1 comply with Google requirements

:: TFFA FANFICTION IN MOTION CONTEST WINNER ::

 

Isabella was the epitome of perfection for them.

She let them own her time, her body and her pleasure.

But who was the one that once owned her completely: body, mind, heart and soul?

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/Jasper
Genre: Angst, Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2278 Read Count: 5041
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2011 Updated: 02 Mar 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Requiem for a Dream

Ah how sad. I liked the little hints as to who each one was. It's so heartbreaking to how it ended, but it was good nevertheless.

Summary:

** Winner of the DirtyBJH00r Contest **  EPOV  Edward & Bella are running late.  Edward gives in to his lust filled emotions and shows Bella, Just how much he wants her. Rated NC-17. Sexually Explicit Content. Canon.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4190 Read Count: 2216
[Report This] Published: 06 Mar 2011 Updated: 06 Mar 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot Damn. I didn't realize this was a Vamp fic. Loved it.

Summary:

A three part songfic inspired by the song by Lady Antebellum. Edward and Bella naturally. Can Bella forgive Edward for what he "did"?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Historical, Horror, Humor, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6724 Read Count: 2887
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 11 Jul 2012
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Edward

Ooooo there's more right?! It can't end there. I'm happy to see that you gave Edward's POV too. 



Author's Response:

i'm glad you liked it and there is one more chapter hunny :)

A Higher Power by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Sister Swan is disappointed when she is forced to confiscate marijuana from her favorite student. What happens when she goes to Father Cullen to ask for his mercy? Priestward/Nunella Lemon/Drug Use. Entry for the High Times Contest

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8946 Read Count: 3689
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 13 Mar 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Higher Power

After my laughter of the picture of Bella as a nun died down. I was able to fully enjoy this O/S. 

Centerfield by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

A sweet moment shared between a married couple.

My entry in TwiNetwork's First Iron Pen Challenge.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 724 Read Count: 1576
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 22 Mar 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 28 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Centerfield

Awwww very sweet. Great capture of a tender moment.

Summary:

Edward lives in the world of beautiful people as a modeling agent, but a brief encounter at a poetry slam has him thinking about a real woman.  Will his poetry skills be enough to win her? FGB piece for azucena, M for plenty of reasons.

Below is the amazing banner by Rosalynn

RubyLips


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10598 Read Count: 1172
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2011 Updated: 26 Mar 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Ruby Lips & Words of Want

Perfect. I'm glad that you gave the poems too. I wanted to have an idea of what was being performed. Great story.

Summary:

 

After five years of marriage, Edward knows all of Bella's deepest, darkest desires.  Now they find themselves alone in the first class cabin with the exception of the sexy stranger who is sleeping across the way.  Bella may finally get one of her most erotic wishes granted. 

 

WARNING: Rated NC-17 for lemons and a threesome.  If that is too much for you, then run along little ones.  You have been warned.

 

 

 

 

This gorgeous banner is brought to you by the artistic styling of one MissKinkAtYourService.  I bow to her greatness as she always gives me the most amazing banners.  Check out her blog at

misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4432 Read Count: 7615
[Report This] Published: 29 Mar 2011 Updated: 29 Mar 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Mid Flight Ménage-à-Trois

WOW I don't know if I have anything more to say than that. It seems inadequate and perfect all at the same time. That was certainly hot and kinky and did I mention hot? How am I supposed to fall asleep now? Just WOW!



Author's Response:

Sorry if I have caused you insomnia.  Dr Whitlock prescribes a good man or a good vibe, have two orgasms and call him in the morning. ;)

Thanks for the love and rating!

All my best

Nickey

Bridging the Gap by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

After having her heart broken, Bella comes to meet the handsome and caring Dr. Carlisle Cullen, her sister Esme's best friend. Can they find in the other what they've been searching for?

This beautiful banner was made by Rosalynn.

Bridging

 

Another beautiful Rosalynn banner.

BridgeOverTroubledWater


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28132 Read Count: 2892
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Bridging the Gap

THis was a great story. It was more of a short story than a one shot. It gave so much more info and spanned over more time than most O/S. Also there was a lot more story than just bits and pieces of events. I liked the interaction between the characters. There is certainly potential to become a multichapter story, but if it never turns into that it is still a wonderful short. 

Summary:

Isabella Swan is a flight attendant running late for work; she crashes into a handsome stranger and her future. She what happens when love is found on a flight bound to LA.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3637 Read Count: 675
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Apr 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great O/S. I loved the dirty old man, I can just picture him giving a denture-y smile....as creepy as it is. 

Summary:

Edward didn't come back in New Moon. Eighteen years later, Bella is about to get married to Jacob Black, but what if Edward shows up?

Named after Taylor Swift's song. Rated "T" for content. AU. Please R&R.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1254 Read Count: 314
[Report This] Published: 04 May 2011 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Speak Now

Interesting O/S. It was a little out of the ordinary in the way everything played out and how it was written but I do love the end. I can't help but love it when they end up together.

Summary:

 Bella Swan and Jacob Black are best friends. They know each other well…well; as good as any best friend can know each other. Welcome to the WTH Chronicles where Bella and Jacob spend time learning about each other in a totally different way…getting to know each other as lovers and learning to balance a relationship in a way they never thought would ever happen.


Thanks to the best BETA ever, Kim67255
Very graphic lemons.  You've been warned.
Theme Song:  What the Hell by Avril Lavigne


Be aware Books are written periodically and when I get inspiration.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: One-Shot Haven
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5012 Read Count: 701
[Report This] Published: 13 May 2011 Updated: 13 May 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Book 2: JPOV

I'm not usually a Jacob and Bella reader but this was just wow. I noticed it said it wasn't complete, does that mean there might be more?



Author's Response:

WOW!  That makes me feel honored, sweetheart!!!  I'm glad you enjoyed it so far and yes...there will be more.  Since this is a one-shot series I write when inspired.  I've got a few Book stories in mind that I'm working on getting down on paper.  However I'm taking my time because I don't want to feel rushed and make this rubbish.  Keep looking for more.  I have more plot-lines in my head so hopefully I can get you over to read more Jake/Bella fics.

Love Tokyo Style by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

 

Edward, a lonely executive on a business trip in Japan, is encouraged to loosen up and enjoy the city. Will he find a cure for the monotony in an uninhibited punk he meets in a Karaoke bar?

 

E/B AH Explicit Lemon/Drinking/Language

 

A O/S for Fandom Gives Back Autism Awareness

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6827 Read Count: 1619
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2011 Updated: 19 May 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Love Tokyo Style by SoapyMayhem

Loved it. Great O/S.

My Worst Fear by KitsuShel Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Every parent's greatest nightmare is the loss of their child, what happens when Charlie's worst fear is staring down the barrel of a gun? My entry in the TwiFicPics Crime Scene Banner/Drabble Challenge.    

mwf


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Charlie/OC, Jasper/OC
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1006 Read Count: 623
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2011 Updated: 01 Jun 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: My Worst Fear

So did Jasper kill the other girls too? Poor Esme. Why do selfless acts always seem to get her killed? This made me think of Grenade by Buno Mars. 

 

Summary:

 

A/N: This is my entry from the Beautiful Bellies Contest. The prompt and picture I used were surrogacy & #7 (milkshakes).
To Read all the other entries, visit www . fanfiction . net / u / 2791564 / Beautiful_Bellies

Huge thanks to saritadreaming for holding my hand on this one and pushing me in the right direction and working her beta magic with my abuse of the comma. If you haven't read any of her stories, run now.

I admire those who chose to be a surrogate and those that decide to use that method to bring a child into their lives. I've thought about being one myself, having enjoyed both of my pregnancies (I know, not everyone has the same pregnancy experience), but now that I'm older, it's no longer an option. Hope you enjoy this one shot.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10005 Read Count: 747
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2011 Updated: 10 Jun 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story. I'm not sure if I would ever be able to be a surrogate but I applaud those that do. 

As always with O/S, I would love to see it continued even if it is for only one or two more chapters. 



Author's Response:

thanks for reading, yeah, hats off to those that do become a surrogate

yeah, i've tried to think of where to take this one, maybe one day i'll add some more

thanks for reading!

Summary: Past Featured Story

bcd

 

To their families, Edward Masen, and Bella Volturi hate each other. Their secret relationship isn't the only thing they are hiding.

 

*Will be part of a Multi-Shot Series*

 

Rated for explicit Lemons and Violence

 

Banner by the lovely ViiolentDelight

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10234 Read Count: 27394
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Behind Closed Doors

Ooooo I didn't realize this was a spy story. This definitely had some surprises in it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

all

 

When Bella became a police officer against Charlie's wishes, he forbids any of the male officers from dating her. Will he ever forgive her and accept her as a police officer ? And will he accept it when she meets the man of her dreams, Sargent Edward Cullen.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11758 Read Count: 2353
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2011 Updated: 15 Jul 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

As much as I was surprised that this was a O/S and wanted it to continue, I really loved it. It was perfectly written. I'm such a visual person that it really did seem like a movie, fading in and out from the past to the present. I don't feel like there are missing pieces just maybe a little withholding of more information, but there was detailed portions of the more important events. Great story.



Author's Response:

Hi,

 

Thank you so much for the wonderful review. This was a blot bunny I'd had sitting on the shelf for a while, and when the opportunity to write for the Tusnami relief presented itself, I thought it would be the perfect time to share their story. 

 

Thank you for reading I am truly glad you enjoyed it so much.

EA

Wonderful Tonight by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Happiness, Love, Joy. What more do you need in life? 

This was my entry in The Lemonade Stand's Lyrics & Lemons contest.    

wt


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2008 Read Count: 731
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow this fit the song to perfection. I've probably heard this song before but can't think of it right now. I guess I'll have to go and listen to it. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Ex-Senator Edward Cullen has denied himself the pleasure of living the BDSM lifestyle for years now. Shortly after deciding to seek a new sub, he meets artist Isabella Swan in the most unexpected place - her high-school graduation!

 

 

Fabulous blinkie by RoseArcadia

 

Lemons/DirtyWords/BDSM

 

Join the AToH Facebook Group for exclusive teasers and x-rated content!

 

Big thanks to Twimarti my beta!

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 114439 Read Count: 418674
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 **Unexpected**

Ooo cradle robber Edward. Hmmmm now for a nickname.....Grandpaward? no not old enough, middle ageward just doesn' roll off the tongue very well, Masterward could work due to his lifestyle. Well I'll have to keep thinking. Maybe someone else comes up with something. 

 

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 *>Proposition

I can't believe I didn't add this to my favorites to get the alerts when it was updated. It wasn't until I saw someone post the update on a FB group that I came back to it. 

This Edward certainly has no problem going after what he wants. I like aggressive Edward. Now that I have this on alert, I can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 **History**

So Emmett's call was more of a false alarm. Nicely done, making it seem like there was already going to be some kind of situation. Now it's off to Seattle. I can't wait to see how Bella reacts to the house that is likely a mansion and when she meets Alice. 

Is there a link or something for the AToH FB group? I tried looking for it but came up empty.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 **Encounters**

I totally wasn't expecting to press the submit button and have a email pop up saying that there is a new chapter, it was like magic. I love Bella. They always say it's the quiet ones you have to watch.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Beginnings

I don't think Edward is going to have to wait that long. That teaser for the next chapter certainly seems promising, at least maybe a little humorous. I can only imagine what made that noise and what Bella will be disrupting or walking into. 

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Shopping

Ah poor Edward didn't get a big part in this chapter, he must be lonely. I should probably make sure he's okay. ;)

Sex Machine by SoapyMayhem Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

In the year 2029, bio-mechanical engineer, Bella Swan, has created the perfect machine for Whitlock Robotics. Masen can be anyone or anything you desire... but who does Bella want her Masen to be?

 

This is a O/S

 

B/E M for Lemons/Language

 

Banner made by the fabulous Time_Lights

 

Special Thanks to Carsen Choi!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9105 Read Count: 4400
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sex Machine

At first I thought this would be really strange, but after reading it and thinking about it, it's really creative. I don't mean that in the "I'm trying not to say something negative sort of way"; it is a very creative story. I wouldn't mind seeing some future-takes or outtakes, like what Edward was up to or a couple years down the line. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 164097
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 25: 25 For Love & Tacos

You just can't go wrong with a "Come to the dark side" comment. Although I always raise my voice at the end to make it squeaky when I say "we have..."



Author's Response:

LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: 1 Intro

OMG I have a feeling I'm going to love this story; not just because it's written by you two, but because it's marine biology. (I almost majored in Marine Bio, but went for the regular Bio, in the end) I still have a secret desire to become a trainer at Sea World...shhhh don't tell anyone. ;)

I can see where Bella is intimidated by sharks. I'm terrified of them. It's one of my worst fears.

I'll be looking forward to updates on this one.



Author's Response:

Your secret is safe with us!

I know that a lot of people are afraid of sharks and we are doing our best to write Bella honestly in that respect as both EA and I are shark lovers like Masen.  We're glad to have you on board with us for this story!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: 3 Let Me Introduce Myself

It's good to see that they at least have calmed down and aren't ready to kill each other. That being said, it seems there will be some weirdness between them in the morning. They seem to be drawn to each other and fighting it.



Author's Response:

You are quite correct about that! ;)

Summary:

Bella and Edward dated in high school When a tragedy occurs she is forced to move away from Forks. Six years later another tragedy occurs, but this time it brings her back to Forks. What happens when she spends Christmas Eve with the Cullens and she comes face to face with Edward for the first time since she broke his heart six years earlier.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 74931 Read Count: 8062
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2012
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Renee makes me so mad all I want to do is....is....take an eraser and delete her. Character punishment: being erased from the story. It will be like she never existed. ;)



Author's Response:

HI, I have to say I think that is the best punishement anyone has suggested for Renee yet. I love it!!!  Thanks so much for reading. Chapter 5 will post on Friday. In the mean time here is your teaser for it. EA.

It had completely baffled and amazed me how fast Alice, Esme, Rose and I had been able to pull together all the details for my and Edward’s wedding. It had only taken us three weeks to pull it all together. 

Our first task had been to reserve the View Point Inn and the second had been to find my dress. Alice had said that once those two things were accomplished the rest would fall into place. Of course she had been right and after scouring several online sites, looking through every page of every Bride’s magazine Alice could get her hands on and spending a weekend in Seattle combing every bridal shop there was, we had done it. I had my dress and had known it was the one the instant I’d seen it.

There had been a few bittersweet moments along the way though. We had all gone to Seattle on the excursion to find my gown and the bridesmaid dresses. While Alice, Rose, Esme and me had gone shopping for the gowns, the men had gotten fitted for their tuxes and had gone to the college football game at U-Dub.  But when Alice and Esme talked about some of the experiences they’d had while shopping for Alice’s wedding gown, I couldn’t help wishing things were different between my mother and me. I couldn’t help thinking that she should be there with me, helping me choose my dress and taking part in all of the planning of my wedding.  And I couldn’t help but wish that I could at least know that she was happy for Edward and me.

For the most part I had not let what she’d done interfere at all in my life. I was so very, very happy with Edward and I loved him so much.

However there were just times like now, when I was contemplating on whether or not I should send her an invitation that I couldn’t deny how much it hurt. She was my mother and was supposed to be happy for me.

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Epilogue

Ah, I do love a happy ending...all around. It would definitely be troubling to feel as though you are stuck and want to be somewhere else. I think it would be somewhat special for Carlisle to be so involved in his grandchild's birth; although could be uncomfortable for Bella to know that her father-in-law is all up in her nether regions. 

I like that this epilogue focused on the event that was happening, but with subtle bits of what has happened since the last chapter. Great way to end this awesome story.



Author's Response:

Hi, sorry it has taken me so long to get this reply out to you. Real life got real crazy there for a bit. I am so happy you enjoyed the way I ended the  story. You are right it was very special for Carlisle to be involved in Charlie's birth and helped Edward and Bella both having him there.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I would love to hear from you in a few weeks when my new story begins to post. It' salmost ready to go. You can check out the summary below.

Until then take care and happy reading,

EA

Title: Somewhere I Belong


Summary: Born to parents living a rich and glamorous lifestyle, Bella had never felt as if she belonged in their world where life often felt fake and pretentious. Wanting more out of life and wanting to make a worthwhile difference, Bella assumes a fake identity and heads off to spend her last summer before college doing something real and meaningful. Her journey starts with meeting a handsome stranger, raised to help those in need—and to detest the rich.
1hr 33mins ago

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

It really seems like a beautiful idea and decorations for the wedding. The whole theme and little additions to it were perfect. I like the pictures. They help to make the visual. I'm sad to see this story end, but I'm excited to read the epilogue. This was a great little story.



Author's Response:

Hi, I am so glad you enjoyed their special day and the pictures too. I am a bit ofr a visual person so they help in the writing process too.

 

I will be posting the epilogue tomorrrow and also giving a teaser for my next story.

 

Thanks so much for reading,

EA

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OMG this is like the perfect story for this time of year. I'm loving it, as I knew I would. 



Author's Response:

 

So glad you liked the story. As a special Christmas treat, here is a teaser for chapter 4.

 

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Before I’d even had a chance to turn off my truck, Bella was jumping out as soon as it had come to a stop in the driveway. There was a big moving truck with a ramp leading from the back of it to the porch for easy loading.

 

Bella in her anger marched right up to the two guys who were loading a big piece of furniture onto the truck. “You can stop right where you are with that and don’t you remove another thing from that house until I say so.”

 

The man replied, “Ma’am, I’m sorry but I was hired by the owner of the home to empty this place out.”

 

“Well, Chad,” Bella said as she poked the name patch sewn onto the front of his shirt. “That’s impossible because I am the owner.” 

 

I wanted to laugh at the look of pure confusion that spread across the guy’s face. He looked like he was about to shit his pants.  And Bella…well…she was furious. She reminded me of the kitten Alice had had when we were kids. Every time it got spooked or irritated its back would arch and its tail fur would poof out and look like it had been electrocuted.

 

However Chad being much taller than Bella must have thought he could manhandle her and grabbed her arm as if he were going to pull her out of his way.

No one touches my girl but me. I was instantly at Bella’s side and had Chad’s other arm in my hand and twisted up behind his back.

 

“Take your hand off the lady now. That is unless you want this arm broken,” I ordered him while giving his arm another small twist.

 

“Hey, John, you need to call the cops. We got a situation out here,” Chad called.

 

***********************************************************

Thanks for reading. See you on Thursday with chapter 4.

EA

 

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I don't mean to be picky, but you've mixed up your dates. The past ones have been 2010 and now its 2012, but supposed to be just 8 months later. Sorry couldn't help point it out. 

Renee is starting to give me heart burn. I can't even put into words how much I'm starting to hate her. She just doesn't know when to quit. She is infuriating. 

 



Author's Response:

 

Hi, thanks for pointing that mistake out to me. It's been fixed. I'm so glad you liked the chapter.I promise what Renee is up to will be revealed real soon as well as how it all affects Edward and Bella.  As a special Christmas treat, here is a teaser for chapter 4.

 

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Before I’d even had a chance to turn off my truck, Bella was jumping out as soon as it had come to a stop in the driveway. There was a big moving truck with a ramp leading from the back of it to the porch for easy loading.

 

Bella in her anger marched right up to the two guys who were loading a big piece of furniture onto the truck. “You can stop right where you are with that and don’t you remove another thing from that house until I say so.”

 

The man replied, “Ma’am, I’m sorry but I was hired by the owner of the home to empty this place out.”

 

“Well, Chad,” Bella said as she poked the name patch sewn onto the front of his shirt. “That’s impossible because I am the owner.” 

 

I wanted to laugh at the look of pure confusion that spread across the guy’s face. He looked like he was about to shit his pants.  And Bella…well…she was furious. She reminded me of the kitten Alice had had when we were kids. Every time it got spooked or irritated its back would arch and its tail fur would poof out and look like it had been electrocuted.

 

However Chad being much taller than Bella must have thought he could manhandle her and grabbed her arm as if he were going to pull her out of his way.

No one touches my girl but me. I was instantly at Bella’s side and had Chad’s other arm in my hand and twisted up behind his back.

 

“Take your hand off the lady now. That is unless you want this arm broken,” I ordered him while giving his arm another small twist.

 

“Hey, John, you need to call the cops. We got a situation out here,” Chad called.

 

***********************************************************

Thanks for reading. See you on Thursday with chapter 4.

EA

 

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

As much as I hated Renee for all that she did, I can't help but want Bella and her to reconcile. It may be because of how close I am with my mother, it's sad to think of not seeing her every day or not talk with her; especially for something as special as a wedding. 

I love their house. It looks beautiful and seems huge. I'm a little jealous. 



Author's Response:

Hi, I am glad you liked the chapter. I was a little worried about how everyone would take Renee's changes, but I am happy to see that everyone was agreeable with it. I had toyed with the idea of not having them work out their differences, but then also thought about the fact that Renee is the only living parent Bella has and that if she truly changed that Bella would welcome her back into her life once she was certain that Renee was being sincere. I also thought about having Edward and Bella walk down the aisle together since Charlie isn't there or having her go alone, but neither of those ideas felt right and Carlisle doing it did since him and Esme had always been like a second set of parents to Bella. Oh and I am jealous of their house too!!  LOL

 

Thanks so much for reading, chapter 6 will post tomorrow. Hope you are ready for some Bachelor and Bachelorette party fun.

 

EA

 

Here is a teaser for you to enjoy :)

 

Bella walked over to Jasper after we greeted my parents. She poked him in the chest and said, “You see that overgrown gorilla over there?” She removed her finger from his chest and pointed it at Emmett.

 

“Yes ma’am,” he replied.

 

“While completely cute and loveable—”

 

“That’s me,” my brother interjected proudly.

 

Bella shook her head and rolled her eyes at him and then continued, “He is trouble with a capital ‘T’. You are Edward’s best man correct?”

 

Jasper nodded not quite sure what my lovely fiancée was getting at, but certain he was probably much better off to agree with her than not to.

 

“That means you are responsible for him. To make sure he doesn’t get in any kind of trouble tonight because of that one over there.” She pointed at Emmett again while the rest of us struggled to keep from laughing at the surprised look on my brother’s face. Bella then looked back at Jasper and continued. “That also means I am holding you responsible for making sure Edward comes back to me with not a hair on his head injured. I’m putting my trust in you as his best friend and as his best man. I am holding you personally responsible for him tonight. Think you can handle that?”

 

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That sounds like one hell of a party. I almost thought that Edward was going to punch Emmett after the lap dance. I guess the alcohol in his system helped out a little, saved Emmett at least. Alice and Rose may not have been as outlandish but they still knew how to make a memorable party. 



Author's Response:

They really did have a great time. And while I am sure that Edward might have wanted to punch his brother, I think he had fun too. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter and can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter. I will be posting it later today.

 

Thanks so much for reading,

EA

Hurricane by KitsuShel Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Would you kill to save a life?

My oneshot in Breath-of-twilight's 2011 Halloween Countdown.    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1491 Read Count: 418
[Report This] Published: 05 Dec 2011 Updated: 05 Dec 2011
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Hurricane

When I first glanced at this story, I was unsure on whether I would like it. I thought it was about a bloody vampire fic, which could be argued, but I should have known that since it was by you, I was bound to like it. I loved the vigilante angle. It makes me think of Spiderman's "With great power, comes great responsibility." 

Thump by chartwilightmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 94]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU OCC A drabble involving one vampire, one human, and one heartbeat. M for mature subjects.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9381 Read Count: 14471
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2012 Updated: 06 Mar 2012
Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Nineteen

It's good to know she has this awareness of what's going on. I was starting to worry that she was going past the point of no return.......damn it, now I have Babes in Toyland stuck in my head.



Author's Response:

um, the fic isn't over yet

don't hold your breath

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Fifteen

Be strong Bella, be strong!



Author's Response:

yes! be strong!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Twenty-Six

Well that went over well. No running, no screaming, no chasing and killing. I say it's a win-win



Author's Response:

definite win-win!

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Fourteen

What is it!?!?!?! It's probably a good thing, cause it sounded like she was getting a little carried away and this might be the distraction to keep her from doing something she'd regret....then again, this Bella doesn't seem to be one that regrets much.



Author's Response:

hmm, good or bad, possibly both!

nope, not a regretful bella at all

Reviewer: tds88 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Twelve

I'm sure I just missed it in the beginning, but where are they now?



Author's Response:

never really placed them anywhere in particular, just started in the club and now have moved outside

but there are somewhere very tropical