Reviews by aelita48
Feral by opalaline Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]
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When Bella signed up for a summer archeology program, she thought she'd be exploring fossils and sedimentary rock. Little did she know, she would find herself the primary caretaker for a man with no verbal capacity or human interaction skills-a feral man.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115615 Read Count: 42934
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Dec 2012
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Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This is a very exciting chapter!
Thank you.

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Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward does not recognize her mother.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Bella agrees to go with Esme and Edward!
I love this fiction.
Happy New Year 2013.
Kisses.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Carlisle and Esme approach.
I love it.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Good chapter!
A good shot in the nose of Jessica, well done.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Bella is hurt.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Luckily Edward is with her.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Edward Bella dream of course.
Jane is a bitch!

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Carlisle returns, all is well.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Carlisle and Esme auent their mutual attraction.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Edward made r03;r03;great progress.
He needs Bella, these feelings are in the process of developing.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Happy New Year with lots of kisses between Bella and Edward.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Good chapter.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Good chapter.
I think they love each other.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Another good chapter.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

The poor! Forced to sleep separately ..

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Good chapter.

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Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I think Edward is ready!

Summary:

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EPOV Companion Piece to Words with Friends. Movie star Edward Cullen is done with women and focused on his career. A stranger reaches out to him via Words with Friends. Will her words change his mind?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281270 Read Count: 56949
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
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Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Je aime toujours cette fiction.

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Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

But yes Edward, her has well the age.

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Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward est très drôle!

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
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Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

Merci, bisous, j'aime cette fiction !

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

J'aime beaucoup cette fiction !

Merci poiur ce bon chapitre.



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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Coucou ! C'est un super chapitre, j'aime beaucoup cette rencontre entre Bella et l'homme aux yeux vert.

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Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oui Je crois qu'ils vont être proche tous les deux.

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Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Bon chapitre !

J'aime quand Tanya est jetée dehors !

Merci



Author's Response:

Attendez jusqu'à ce que le chapitre suivant! Elle ne reste pas à très longtemps. Merci d'avoir lu mon histoire et je vous remercie pour vos commentaires.    

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Mon Dieu quelle salope cette Tanya et en plus son avocat est Jacob !

Je crois qu'il va y avoir de la bagarre entre lui et les Cullen.

Merci.

Summary: Past Featured Story


Banner by Kyndall

Isabella Marie Swan Volturi is the sister of the three kings Aro, Marcus and Caius. She can behold any power she wished and the true ruler of the vampires before Aro takes her spot when she leaves to travel the world. In the year 2009 does she only decides to become her original 18 year old human self and falls in love with Edward.

Only after 300 years on the day of her vampiric birth and the day he left does she return home.

What will happen when Edward finds out who Bella really was?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63048 Read Count: 39127
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Feb 2013
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I liked the story of Bella.

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

J'aime bien ce premier chapitre !

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Date: 05 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

C'est une autre histoire ! J'aime ce qui se passe !!!

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella had a great vision.

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The story unfolds slowly.

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bella goes to visit the world

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Meet Alice and Gabe.

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Alice has been changed.

I like this story.

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Good chapter meeting with Peter and Charlotte.

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow! She does not like Romanian.

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

They are here!

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

The first meeting went well except with Mike ...

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Good chapter.

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Date: 05 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Interesting.

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Mon Dieu, c'est horrible ce qu'il y a dans ce camion...

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Pauvre petite, heureusement qu'Edward est doux.

Bon chapitre, j'aime bien cette fiction.

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bon chapitre !

Elle dors pour le moment, c'est une bonne chose.

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Et bien je crois qu'elle voit une femme pour la première fois.

Bon chapitre.

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bon chapitre !

 

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Les filles se sont bien occupé d'elle !

Bon chapitre.

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oui cette situation est terrible, j'espère que ça va vite s'arranger.

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Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Bon chapitre ! Difficile de lire la dernière partie.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324331
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
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Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Our Bear and the Diva

J'espère qu'ils ne vont pas se séparer, ce serait vraiment triste.

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Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

Je les adore ces deux là et je veux qu'ils restentent ensemble et qu'ils nous fassent de beaux bébés (jumeaux, fille/gars).

Quand à Maggie, elle doit disparaître, peut-être enlevée par un prince du pétrole, enfermée dans un harem au milieu du désert entourée uniquement de dromadaires, d'épouses jalouses et surveillée par des eunuques pour être sûr qu'elle ne s'échape pas. 

Bref je la déteste.

Merci.

 

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Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Our First Christmas

I love this chapter and their meeting, they will repartire together because they love each other.
Thank you.

Des gens comme nous by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1621]
Summary:

Edward Cullen, star du cinéma, fait la rencontre de Bella Swan en tentant d'échapper à une meute de fans en délire. Cette fille est-elle un ange d'innocence ou un démon de luxure ? Sera-t-elle celle qui voudra partager ses fantasmes les plus osés ?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1278834 Read Count: 267962
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jul 2023
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapitre 2

J'adore cet Edward qui se laisse mettre au lit par Bella ! Trop fatigué ! Comme un enfant.

Bisous.



Author's Response:

C'est gentil de me poster des reviews même si ça fait un bail que ces chapitres ont été écrits :0)

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 120: Chapitre 120

FF ayant effacé les chapitres, je ne me souviens plus où j'en été... GRRR

Enfin je vais relire et je te remercie pour la traduction.

Bisous.



Author's Response:

^^

Broken Arrow by alexajaye Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 93]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is a professional assassin for Aro. He's ordered to kill Charlie, Renee and Bella Swan, but he can't. He won't. Now his new target . . . is Aro. All he has to do is make it out alive.  E/B, C/E, J/A, Em/R - All EPOV - AH - OOC - language, violence, a few lemons.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109715 Read Count: 35838
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
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Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Je pense que ça va me plaire.

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Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: What I do

James n'est pas un aide de tout repos !!!

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 3: New Assignment

Kate is angry, it is normal to James killed his sister.

That will kill James?

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Mortal Coil

So I wonder who is going to kill James?

Kate and Edward?

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: A Stone's Throw

I also want James or death!

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Isabella Swan

I love this chapter and especially the end.

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 7: The Shift

Kate damage but good for James.

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Cover Up

I like what you write!

Thank you, this is a good chapter.

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 9: New Tactics

I love and I found the story very well.

Thank you.

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Date: 13 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Taking a Chance

Bella is a naughty, she is playing with fire.



Author's Response:

First, I'm glad you've enjoyed reading, and I'm working on new chapters this weekend, so stay tuned.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Walk by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a betrayal leaves Edward reeling, he decides to change the course of his life. Starting over can be a daunting task. Will he let a certain brown eyed beauty help him find what he's looking for?

Rated NC-17 for adult situations and language           *Banner by Falling Stars*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110402 Read Count: 49586
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Mar 2013
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Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Edward a eu bien des misères avec sa femme mais il a bien surmonté, j'aime ça !

Rencontre avec Bella !

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bon chapitre !

J'aime bien Bella mais Edward aurait dû lui dire la vérité et ses projets.

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bon chapitre !

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

:)

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Bon chapitre.

Merci.

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

C'est un super BBQ, en plus Edward a compris que Bella était libre.

Merci !

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Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bien ce chapitre, ils se sont beaucoup rapprochés !

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Edward va craquer, c'est sûr !

Bon chapitre, j'aime beaucoup.

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Enfin ! Je suis très contente qu'ils aient des relations.

Merci, c'est un beau chapitre.

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

C'est un bon chapitre, quand tout le monde est là, ça fait beaucoup de monde.

Merci.

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Mon Dieu ! Bella attaquée par Laurent !

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Je viens de voire un extrait de twilight, c'est magnifique !

J'aime ce chapitre.

Bella va avoir un bébé.

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Mon Dieu !

Merci.

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Date: 02 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

C'était vraiment bien cette rencontre avec Kate ! 

Bella et Edward sont heureux ! J'ai hâte de lire la naissance des bébés.

Merci.

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Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !

Merci.

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Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It is the babies arrive!
Oh yes it's nice to meet a Tanya is not a bitch.
Thank you for this great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

What does Jason Taylor think when he meets 23 year old Christian Grey? After four years of working for him, what does Taylor think when he meets little Miss Steele?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166683 Read Count: 57735
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2012
Reviewer: aelita48 Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bonjour !

J'aime beaucoup cette fiction  !

La rencontre de Christian et Anastasia.

Taylor est très amusant.

Merci.

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Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

C'est un bon chapitre.

J'aime beaucoup cette fiction.

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

J'ai adoré ce chapitre !

Merci pour cette bonne fiction.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !

Merci

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Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - The Invisible Man

J'adore ce chapitre, Taylor est vraiment très amusant

Merci



Author's Response:

Thank you! Merci!

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25, Masquerade

C'est un bon chapitre, j'aime bien cette fiction.

Merci.



Author's Response:

Merci bien!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Banner created by Recklessangel007!

 

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Banner created by Canan ~ Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419023
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
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Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

J'ai trouvé la première fois de Bella et d'Edward très romantique !!!

Jasper est très décevant, mais j'ai bon espoir qu'il change.

Merci.

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

J'aime bien ce chapitre et je comprends très bien ce que peux ressentir Bella...

Merci.

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bella a de la chance qu'Edward soit là quand elle tombe.

Bon chapitre.

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

AH LES MAUVAISES ! Heureusement Angela et Edward sont là pour Bella.

Même son père est horrible...

 

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

J'ai aimé ce chapitre, Merci.

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Charlie méite bien une bonne raclée.

J'espère que Bella va faire confiance à Edward.

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Bon chapitre.

Merci.

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Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Très bon chapitre !

Merci.

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Ouf et bien il y a eu une grosse dispute ! Bella était vraiment fâchée.

Bon chapitre.

Merci

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

J'aime beaucoup ce chapitre !

Merci.

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Merci pour ce bon chapitre !

 

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Quel sale type ce Charlie !

En plus il lui a arraché les cheveux, j'espère qu'il va être puni pour ça.

Bon chapitre, merci.

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Bella est énervante et je dis bravo à Edward pour sa patience et son amour.

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Bella a bien fait de parler à Jasper et je crois qu'il va réfléchir...

Je pense qu'Edward sait le nom du nouveau chirurgien et c'est J***b B***k. Non ?

Merci pour ce bon chapitre.