Penname: carebear31374 [Contact] Real name: Samantha
Member Since: 22 Dec 2010
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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1486105
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42: Edward DAY 16 PART B

karma mike - karma :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46: Bella DAY 17 PART B

this chapter just makes me want to cry :(

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella has grown from an orphaned sixteen year old raised by her older brother Emmett and his friends affectionately known as ‘her boys’, to an up and coming first year medical intern. When a day in the ER turns dangerous can her boys, now members of the best SWAT team in Chicago save her? Eventual Canon pairings. Rated 'NC-17' for strong language, lemons.

 

 

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Newest fanmade banner that I thought was cool and had to add by Twilighted's ebonyy:

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Fics to Read, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Twilight - Read, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 413119 Read Count: 737152
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Feb 2010
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Bonding and Plotting

sorry i haven't reviewed before but i have been too busy plowing through your chapters. loving this story has great plot - onto the next chapter

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Decoys and Deprecation

really enjoyed this chapter the ipod game was a great idea. reading on.......

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 112047
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

i read a couple of your other stories and thought i would give this one a go - enjoying so far - onto the next chapter :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

FREAKIN AWESOME CHAPTER!!

tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 216]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 15104
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

omg i can't stop reading this story...........love  all the characters



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading, glad that you like it.

 

 

T

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

man i love this story - can't wait for your next udpate :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

oh crap def didn't see that happening

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

let daddy make it all better.....hehehe - love it



Author's Response:

You're funny!

Thanks for reading hun

 

T

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

go bella alice had it coming

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

what a slease edward is saying all that stuff about jasper what a dick.........i hope jasper kicks his arse - love it

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

possesive jasper gotta love it

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wow really enjoying this story - had it on my to read list - now can't stop

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMG awesome chapter.......can't wait until the next update :)



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

 

T

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

loved it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 129997
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

bloody hell that was intense - not sure how much more intense it could be

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hopefully her group of friends and fam can help get back a little of who she use to be - i am sure she will never ever be the same no matter how much time passes - somethings just scare too deep :(

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

:(

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

how hard that must be for charlie and renee not being able to help your own daughter - just glad she has em **wiping tears**

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

she has opened herself up a little to them so that is a great start to bella

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

now i am crying - i am  not sure how much i can read of this in one session but i will continue its just really really sad

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i loved the empov



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the amazingly kind reviews. I hope you don't mind me not responding to each of them. This story is quite the emotional roller coaster so I understand about not being able to read more than a bit at a time.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

again with the crying - i think i am going to run out of tissues :(

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

ok what is it with those bitchy girls are people really like that towards people after something like that happens - i can understand the staring and people whispering but to be so nasty?????



Author's Response:

It will make a bit more sense later in the story, I promise. But yes, I do think there are people who would be like that to someone in Bella's shoes. It's the fear that pushes them to be like that. As for your previous reveiw with the tissues, I went through several boxes.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

i was wondering how she was able to ace that test - surely he didn't give her books to read........did he? i love how to school is reallymaking a huge effort to accommodate her needs that is awesome!!



Author's Response:

No, he didn't give her books to read but she's a genius and was already taking classes at tthat level before she was taken.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

those b***h's need to be thrown into a glass door face first. it is nearly 2am here is Australia but i can't stop reading your story i have gone through too many tissues i am just glad the hubby is in bed and can't see me blubbering like a baby :( i can't even imagine what that would have been like for carlisle to do that :(



Author's Response:

I imagine it was the hardest thing he ever had to do. Not only seeing what that monster did to her but having to add to her pain...

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

ok this is def the last chapter i read before i go to bed....i can't believe they are going to take rose and jasper away - like thats what she needs - is carlisle going to try and ship her away somewhere for her own good........dont like the sound of what he is planning - good night :(



Author's Response:

Good night:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward moves to Forks with his sister, Esme, he is immediately drawn to the mysterous Bella Cullen. Will he be able to break through her tough girl act? Will she let him? Usual pairings, AH, NC-17 for language and possible lemons in later chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Fighterward, to read
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131302 Read Count: 131009
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2011
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh nice twist i like to role reversal - great :)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

its funny when to coach called out to cullen i just automatically thinking of edward i will have to get my head around that - great chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

gotta love to over protective brothers :)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh no you guys are in big trouble



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i love this story so much - it is freaking awesome :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

it makes me tear up when you can feel how desperate bella is to not go back i am assuming to a mental hospital :)



Author's Response:

It was hard to write, pouring so much of myself in there.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

glad to hear what happened to her - poor thing they found them a couple of days later :(



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

HOLY SHIT!!!! THT IS NOT HOW I SAW THAT CHAPTER GOING!!



Author's Response:

Hehe, always keep them guessing:)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

i thought this story was good before - it just got even better :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!!

The White Swan Lodge by arkin1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 143]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tragedy led her there. Commitment forced him there. Can a place of beauty and solitude hold the fate they were both seeking…

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53492 Read Count: 16730
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 14 Mar 2011
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

well it was good it makes me want to continue - so here we go!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140290
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: tķ eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

yes he is hiding under my bed......hmmm.......hang on i think i need to check something in my bedroom ;P



Author's Response:

hahahha .....trust us....we wish he was under our bed too.....xoxoxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

OMG i didn't see that coming. excellant chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!! We thought it would cool to add some of the lines from the book into the story but in a completely different situation.....xoxox hope you enjoy the rest and thank you for reading and reviewing xooxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

i am so glad you didnt' have bella trying to keep her identity from edward that would have just sucked - when ang said that she maybe pregnant obv. not with edwards........right? they dont sleep together.......right? please tell me that is the case.......**fingers crossed**

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think

now i just feel bad for all threee of them :( however the elevator was awesome ;)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

I laughed my arse off at emmett - awesome what a pussy. gotta luv jealous people they do some strange stuff. another awesome chapter really enjoying this story - thanks

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

i am glad bella is trying to make the decision for herself without thinking of anyone else because at the end of the day i gues she needs to be prepared that may happen. but of course she is figuring edward into things even if not intentionally - lovin this story so much :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing,,,,we do appreciate each and every one....and love u too....xoxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings

ahhh i am lovin the sport sock. wow eric what a tool can't believe he did that - another thing i didnt' see coming - i heart your story hard :)



Author's Response:

WEre soooo glad ur enjoying the story... We love to see new readers and all the kind words. It keeps us writing xoxoxoxoxo the sports sock was classic xoxxo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Use Somebody

wow that chapter had my emotions all over place - absolutely loved it - thanks

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

AWESOME CHAPTER!! i love this story :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Thank you Part 2

OMG i just love this story - Angela is on he war path.....should make for good reading :) cant wait until next update :)



Author's Response:

Thank you sooooooooo much for reading and recviewing....Im sooo happy ur loving it...The next update is taking a wee bit longer than we wanted but its over 16000 words so that should make up for it....Much Love DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

i love your emmett he is sooo funny - i wonder how he doesn't get hit in the head more often!! love this story so much. can't wait to read about the spa treatment wonder how much of  a fight he will put up before he relents and lets her do it. hope this finds you both well :)



Author's Response:

Thank you sooo much....I cant wait to post part 2.....The spa talk is soooo fun since I try to write real events....and Em.....yah lets say part 2 has a few more hits in the head by Ro.....

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Sinners Part 2

great chapter!!

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

wow shit is doing down with this pair. love this story get so happy when i see an update. glad to have you back ari.......big hugs



Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much......and I LOVE HAVING ARI BACK........yay....next chapter is great........and its with the beta...,.xoxoxo

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 128402
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

wow can't wait to see where this goes. i was a little unsure about starting it because it started being posted in 2010 but i was curious enough to start - glad i did :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 138286
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this sounds really good - can't wait to read the rest oh does "edwards human" know he isn't



Author's Response:

Welcome to the story.  It's a wild and crazy ride.  You'll meet Edward's human in a few chapters.  Bella is coming up next.  XOXO

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LMFAO



Author's Response:

Bella's got a backbone now, doesn't she?  Thanks for the r and r.  XOXO

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

awesome chapter



Author's Response:

Jasper + Corvette = SEX

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

ah emmett always there to lend a hand......lol



Author's Response:

Yes, Emmett's a trooper--he's also not very imaginative when it comes to excuses.  XOXO

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Amanda hehehe - lmao



Author's Response:

Only a complete brain transplant will work for her--hence the dog.  XOXO

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

ah this story makes me grin like an idiot



Author's Response:

I grin like an idiot when I write it.  XOXO

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

tsk tsk tsk jasper you are going to be in a big pile of shit



Author's Response:

Oh, Jasper needs to fear for his life.  He's in deep cacas.  XOXO

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

LOVE MIKE!!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you like how I've written Mike.  He really wasn't a bad kid in the Twilight books--just hormonal.  XOXO

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella Swan is looking forward to going to college, when she is raped and left for dead. She is sent away when her parents find out about her pregnancy. She meets Dr. Edward Cullen who has come to help his mother. Can Love truly Heal? Human/rape/language

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Current Reads, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 61003 Read Count: 58564
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 05 Mar 2012
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence

i knew this story would be sad :(

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul

i feel sorry for bella that she didn't have to type of parents to confide in about what happened - it wasn't her fault not one bit of it - just because she went to party and drank a couple of drinks doesn't give anyone the right to do that.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Common Thread

sounds like a good place to be when you dont have your family to take care of you - i can't believe people actually kick there kids out when this happens this should be the time everyone comes together to help not abandon them :(

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace

another awesome chapter - i am so glad that rose and bella had a chat  good for both of them :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect

f****r had it coming good on jacob. i am glad she has decided to tell :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight

ok so now i am crying like a baby - for both bella and charlie - awesome chapter - thanks

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings

loved the epov :)



Author's Response:

I am glad you are liking the story so far... it means alot to me

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Poison Pen

OMG there are no FREAKIN words for renee well i have alot but i dont think i should type them out :(

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Life goes on

Hpayy birthday Kayla - hope you had a great day with mum. another awesome chapter - i feel so sorry for victoria :(



Author's Response:

Thankyou for your review

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Karma's present

does edward want bella to keep the baby - i have notice in this chapter as well as the last just to way he touches her or talks about it.....just wondering. another awesome chapter - can't wait for the next udpate :)



Author's Response:

 He has an attactment to the child... and we will see that  evolve

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box

oh i so love this story - can understand why edward is back away.......i hope rosalie copes ok - good she has emmett



Author's Response:

I am so glad you get why he had to back off from her, rosalie will have a hard time for awhile, but it not like she will never see her son again, and we love emmett

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 The ties that bind

wow another awesome chapter - glad edward put his hand up and has given her the options of returning to them - he is so sweet. enjoy your move - cant wait until next update :)



Author's Response:

thankyou so much:)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings

awesome chapter >;) can't wait til the next one



Author's Response:

Thankyou so much for your review

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie

gotta love rosalie protective mumma bear. awesome chapter - enjoy setting up your new house - until next time :)



Author's Response:

thankyou so much. rosealie is one of my faves here

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Strength

so a great chapter - can't wait for the next:)



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your review:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When single Mom, Bella, opted to drive her children to Colorado for their visitation with their father, she never dreamed she would find something unexpected while stranded in a winter storm.  Can Edward heal Bella’s wounds and restore her faith in men, love, and herself?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44043 Read Count: 28762
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Dec 2010
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

poor bella - jake is such a dick.........enjoying your story - onto the next chapter.

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Poor millie - no wonder she is so mature for her age - she has to be......sad

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i am really enjoying your story can't wait until the next update. i hope it does go longer then your 10 chapters - love your characters. hope you had a merry christmas :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i am glad that jake a realized what he gave up when he left bella and the kids. i am really glad how this story is turning out - will wait for next update :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 72086
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Which Life To Choose?

loved this chapter nickey can't wait for the next one :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the love!  I am writing the next one as we speak.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong

never read a story like this before thought it was something different and give it a go glad i did - onto the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking a chance on something new.  I have been wanting to write this story for a while, but there were certain aspects that I needed to nail down before I could start.  Now I just need to find the time in my RL to write.

Thanks for the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Bad Things Come In Three's

oh good lord i didnt' see that coming with esme - still sticking with you onto the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, unfortunately Esme had to go.  I figured since she attempted to kill herself over the loss of a child in her human life, why wouldn't she do the same in this life?

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- A Race Against Time

i can understand why they saved her and i can understand why she has switched herself off. i guess she is numb now and blocking out everything from her mind



Author's Response:

Very good.  Not everyone has picked up on that.  Sometimes the mind hits its limit on what it can handle and Bella most assuredly hit hers.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Exodus

why have they taken off with her? poor charlie - i know they dont want to loose her again but charlie has just lost her i hope not for good. poor carlisle is he so upset over esme that he is putting all his focus on bella to help him forget? so many questions - onto the next chapter



Author's Response:

They took her because Carlisle felt it was the best option.  Taking her to the hospital with those types of wounds would get her locked up in the psych ward for sure.  Not only that, he knew that she did it because she wanted to die.  Though, he didn't want her to die, he knew that he could give her more options when she recovered from her injuries.

And yes, Carlisle has already lost the first two members of his family, so he focused all his efforts on saving Bella and making her well.  I hope I answered all your questions.

Thanks for all the reviews so far!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- And Then There Were Three

i had to break out hte tissues for this chapter - thanks :) love a good cry. wow look at emmett considering carlisle's feels for bella. great chapter onto the next. oh and how often do you update and what day?



Author's Response:

Sorry for making you cry.  It is never my intention. :(

As for my updates, I write as often as I can, but I work and have a husband and three busy boys, so my time to write is not as much as I would like it to be.  I try to update once a week and it is usually Thursday or Friday by the time I get the most recent chapter back from my pre-reader and proof read it one more time myself.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Choices

i fell sorry for all of the because c/j/a life are no longer there own however i dont think they should take her life - they dont know what is going on in her head and coma victims can be out for years - time hopefully will help :(



Author's Response:

Yeah, it is not a great situation for anyone involved.  I think a little more time will shed some light on all of their darkness.

Thanks for sticking with me and for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Songs of the Heart

i am glad that edward is helping her get back to living although it must be very tuff knowing that carlisle wants to be with her as he would be if given the chance. so sad i have caught up on this story but so glad i found it. can't wait until your next update.



Author's Response:

It's true that Carlisle wants to be there for Bella, but he has not gotten to the point where he can see her in a romantic way.  Edward knows that he will take care of Bella.  He knows he has to let her go, but it is hard for him just the same.

Thanks for reviewing all the chapters so far.  I will try to update ASAP. ;)

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Picking Up The Pieces

great chapter love that rosie and emmett are back. hope all goes well with your husband - until next chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and well wishes.  He is recovering nicely. :)

I am trying to write when time allows, so hopefully I will have the next chapter up by the end of the week.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions

that was absolutely perfect you couldn't have writen then any better. thanks for the tissue warning ;) loved it loved it loved it. i am glad both edward and bella both felt peace at their parting ways :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review.  I thought this chapter out several different ways before I settled on this.  I am so glad you liked the direction it took.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska

awesome chapter loved the snow fight. go rosie sticking up for your sister. i hope this is the start of carlisle realising his feelings for bella......can't wait for next update!! til then nickey :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review!  Yeah, Rosalie kind of opened a door for Carlisle that he didn't realize was shut.

Till next time (I'm writing like a mad woman, so hopefully you won't have to wait long).

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills

ok so now i have used 1/2 a box of tissues for this chapter i guess i will leave the other half for the next one ;) - loved it. this story just pulls at my heart - thanks can't wait for next time Nickey



Author's Response:

Crying is good for the soul. ;)  Thanks so much for the review.  I will try to keep the tissue factor down, but I make no promises.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

another awesome chapter nickey....can't wait for the next one :)



Author's Response:

Ahhh, thanks so much for the review.  I struggled a bit with this one, so I am glad you liked it.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings

anywhere with carlisle would be perfect!!



Author's Response:

Damn straight!  You are a woman after my own heart.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Yes

lve that song - awesome chapter - can't wait for the next one :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I am working hard on the next one right now.

Till then

Nickey

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- There Can Only Be One

loved this update - thanks for coming back to us - i have read all the above stories you are reckin except the last one - dont usually do slash but will give it a read - i am up for anything;)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Sorry for staying away so long. ;)

As for that final rec, I honestly see it more as a BDSM story more than Slash.  Edward is the Dom and Jasper is the sub and as much as it is a sexual relationship, it is the build-up that really pulls you in.  I hope you give it a try.

Till next time

Nickey

Summary:

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Edward is an Incubus, Obsessed with an impending war with the Volturi Coven.  Although he is powerful, he isn't powerful enough to take over their reign by himself. He cultivates a plan secretly using women around the world a to carry his seed, breeding hybrid warriors, that will train and aid him in his quest to over-throw Volterra. The time is comming near to take the vampire community by storm, yet the one thing he can not continue with-out, is a male heir. He will stop at nothing to find a vessel strong enough to bear his son, Unfortunately for Bella.....she just may be the one....

Warning! Contains: Very graffic content.  Sex, Violence, Murder, Blood and Guts,Somnophilia,Biastophilia,Extreme Darkward and other characters, Morbidness.

If you have some sort of hero complex and can't deal with the above issues, don't read this, keep it moving, find another fic.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 23561 Read Count: 15487
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Systematic Manipulation of De Population

well i am glad he loves his daughters that is his only redeaming quality.....waiting for next update :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Of Blood And Ice

your weren't wrong about it being full on but i am still here and onto the next chapter :)

Summary:

 

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A vampire finds the true meaning of temptation, an innocent beauty with a siren's blood. Is she prey for the wicked or the prayer for a salvation the wicked never know they need?

For Edward Cullen, a dark hunter with a niggling conscience, only one thing remains to be seen. When love knows no bounds and obsession has no reason, where will he draw the line?

AU E/B - Dark themes - Canon pairings - Rated Nc17 for sexuality and violence and intended for adult readers only.

No sparkling, no venom, very little vegetarianism.

The Twilight series and its characters belong to their creator and author Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement intended or implied.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 94370 Read Count: 14062
[Report This] Published: 08 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Dec 2012
Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Temptation

wow awesome first chapter :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Goddan

no need to worry come out from under your hands - awesome lemon - great chapter - love that is is all epov......can't wait for next chapter :)

Reviewer: carebear31374 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Frestelse

awesome chapter