Penname: jalee1118 [Contact] Real name: Jessie
Member Since: 03 Feb 2010
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Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 75910
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Saving Grace

I have enjoyed your story very much!!   We have something in common, I have scoliosis Ihad a 40 degree curve, and have had a rod in my back sinceI was 14 which was about 30 years ago.  I had bone taken from my hip to help fuse the rod to my spine and it was agonizing for about a year, and have had no trouble since and have given birth to 2 children with no complications.  I am sorry for all the trouble you have had and hope that it gets better for you.  Take care and thankyou for your story and hope to ready more stories from you.

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 193785
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Finding Purpose

I was so excited to see the update.  I am so addicted to this story and am so EXCITED that there will be a sequel.  Can't wait till the next chapter.

 

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3983]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 985872
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

OH Please!!! SEQUEAL SEQUEAL SEQUEAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  



Author's Response:

I think I got your message! thanks so much for your review

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79

    I absolutely love the uncles they are hilarious and very protective of their family.  I am so happy that there will be a sequel!  I was getting very sad that this story is close to being over but you just made my day.  Can't wait till the next update!

 

Memories of Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Bella Swan wants nothing more than to prepare for her future.

When Edward Cullen moves to town he quickly realizes that he wants nothing more than Bella Swan.

Will her painful past and his recent mistakes keep Bella from seeing the man Edward truly is?  Can she let Edward in?  Can the two form that lasting bond that can never be broken?  Or will the heartaches and tragedies tear them apart for good?

Rated NC-17 for some strong language and eventual mature content.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 199361 Read Count: 9565
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Clearing The Air

Oh it is about time she got her head out of her ass!!!  She made poor Edward wait and broke his heart!  She is messed up and I understand that she is young and so is he but she was so opinionated against him without getting the facts and she want to be a journalist and that is one thing they are suppose to do is get the facts!!  I think this is totally on her and thanks to Jake for making her that way.  I hope that Bella and Edward can get through this and from the story of Esme and Carlisle , I think they can and will have a strong relationship with lots of love and trust.  Bella now needs to get on Emmetts good side and it takes alot to get on his bad side.  Don't mess with baby brother.  Please update soon!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Making New Friends

No no no !  Not Jessica Stanley!!!! Please let Edward wise up soon!

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1231229
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

    Wow.  That was alot for them to take in and with Charlie there also.  Charlie just wants to be a part of Bella's life and loves his daughter very much.  He is right and Bella should put James away, not only for her but for Karen as well.  Bella has alot of strength in her and a great support system in Edward and the rest of the family.  I know she will be worried about Jacob and his assult on James, but is there a statute of limitations in that and is there one in Bella's case also?   James needs to be sent to prison and be Big Bubbas's Bitch for along time!!  Can't wait for the next update.

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100

I LOVE ME SOME DOUGIE!!!!  A sweet sweet man and I want a best friend like him!  He had a hard life but is happy now and that is all that matters is now!  He is like a breath of fresh air and his honesty and personality is wonderful.  I can see he and Bella becoming besties.  Will Edward find out about Bella's little outburst of fowl language?  I can't wait till the next update.

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Diamond in the Rough

I'm excited about the next chapter and will wait patiently. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 178531
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Nannygate (Pt. 1)

It seems like the nanny wants her niece to get with Edward and the money.  She really over stepped her bounds in the relationship with Edward and Carlie, even if she had the best intentions but I dont think she did.  But I wont know till it is revealed by you. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

What the Fuck!!!!  This has blown me out of the water! I am blindsided didnt see it coming.  My heart is breaking for them both and Carlie.  Please update soon and get this family back together and get that cunt (a word I detest but it fits Jessica to a T) out of their lives for good!! Again Please Update soon!!! Love the story.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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'The story of us', was 'Bon Secours'. And 'Instructions Not Included', was 'Bon Secours the sequel'. Sorry to throw you off, but a name change was a must. 

Sequel to 'The Story of Us', if you didn't read that, please do so before you read this. The title says it all, since children do not come with an instruction manual. This picks up right where the original leaves off, 'The Story of us' epilogue. If you liked that, you will LOVE this. How will Edward and Bella deal with a house full of teenagers? There's flashbacks, more drama, more lemons, much more humor, and a whole lot of story. 

Doctorward is there too, just like the first story. 

It's incredibly long because we have the (A) story, which is Edward and Bella. Then we have the (B) story, which is EJ and CC, their two oldest children. 

Points of view will fluctuate. Chapters will be split, since there's essentially two stories in one. 

Rated NC-17 just in case for Lemons and Language galore

Edward, Bella, the whole gang, their kids, plus a few original characters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , The Story of Us Series, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 706984 Read Count: 452750
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Thump, thump, thump

I FUCKING LOVE THIS FAMILY!!!!   I have laughed so hard that I am crying and my husband is wondering what the hell I am laughing at.  Bless you and thankyou for this wonderful story.  I don't want it to ever end.  Keep it up!

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 385585
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!   Love the story and can't wait for the next update.

Summary:

In this story, Bella is an orphan who has never met her parents. The only things she has from them is a golden bracelet and a box she was given on her seventeenth birthday. She also starts having strange dreams and her body is slowly changing. Then she meets the Cullens, but what are they? And what about her new friends?

Things cannot be any more confusing about Bella….or can they?

It can happen to anyone

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love and immortality
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44525 Read Count: 11018
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2011 Updated: 30 May 2011
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think this will be a lovely story! Please continue.

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So the adventures is beginning.  Bella had a mom that loved her dearly and left her only to protect her.  Going back to Forks is going to be a life changing event for Bella.  She won't be alone anymore and will find love. I can't wait to find out what happened to her parents and when they will be reunited.  Plus finding her true love (hopefully Edward!)  Love the story, I have it on my favorites.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

     Bella seems to be dreaming of when her mother was little and maybe getting to know her a little in the process. Her body is changing with no apptetite for human food when will she start the need for blood?  Will she be a hybrid or will she turn into a full vampire?   So will Edward and Bella get to meet in the next chapter?  I am loving this story and hope that you will update soon.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Welcome to the Academy! Bella Swan, former American Ballet Academy Prima Ballarina and Ballroom dancer, finds herself employed with her friend Alice Cullen at Alice's families dance academy. As a Seattle institution the Volterra Academy of Dance received national acclaim when the dance prodigy signed on, but is that the only purpose when the Cullens hired Ms. Swan or did they have hopes that she could teach more than just the students something? Edward hasn't placed competitively since his partner left him high and dry three years ago. That was when he came to teach ballroom at his family's school. He's convinced he's happy, spreading the love for dance through the younger generation, but that all changed when he spied a brown haired stranger. He saw the way she moved at the club and now he can't get her out of his head. He tells himself that it's best that he doesn't know who she is. He doesn't want another woman in his life to complicate things. It would be best just to forget her, so why can't he. What will happen when he finds out that the girl he can't forget is the new ballet instructor at the Academy? More importantly can they ignore the chemistry that they have from the beginning? Will Bella shake Edward out of his shell and will he find the strength to get out and dance again? Can she teach him to leave it all on the floor? Find out

 

Thanks to FrozenSoldier for the amazing banner

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76946 Read Count: 42034
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2011 Updated: 18 Dec 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Past Actions and Current Consequences

Oh boy!  Did Tanya drug Edward?  I hope Edward and Bella will be able to talk this out and beat Tanya's skanky ass!  I love the story and how you write it.  People are cruel with words and cowards.  I hope you will continue writing how you want,  if people don't like they way a chapter goes then they can quit reading and grow the fuck up!  Hope to see an update soon!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 989]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 142197
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

I just started reading this story last night.  I am hooked, I can't wait to find out what has gotten Edward to this point in his life.  Bella has never had love in her life and with Edward its nothing new it just takes everthing that stresses her out away for a little while.  Till she see's him as a man who has loved and then for some reason has lost everything including himself, is ther any hope for him or Bella?  I can't wait till the next update.

Summary:

 

 

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Long, Long, ago, in the deep southern bayous of New Orleans, a time when the world seemed so simple, A single mistake was made by a ravenous immortal during the night of carnival; a holiday we now call Mardi Gras. A simple amulet bathed in the power of a mysteriously, magical religion was used to interfere with what fate had written in stone. Its sole purpose was not to protect  the endangered, but to keep 110yr old Edward from finding his true mate. Watch from beginning to end how even with interference, what will be shall be. Nothing can stop true destiny. It is only a matter of time until our dear Edward finds his l'âme soeur. It is their Destiny

 

 

 

 

 

Warnings: Darkward...sorta. um  : Mild violence, mentions of voudoo, ghost and spirits, little gore,sex,alcohol, small drug use, fictional use of historical people, mentions of conjuring practices...

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10854 Read Count: 1793
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 25 Dec 2011
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Vorace

I know you haven't updated in a long time but I do hope that you will please keep this story going. Thankyou

Summary:

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BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 72374
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Epilogue

Wonderful just Wonderful.  Thankyou so much for this story, I have enjoyed reading this so much and just absolutely adore the characters.  You have a wonderful talent and hope to read more stories from you.  Again thankyou.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 129939
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2011 Updated: 27 Jan 2013
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Aide-de-Camp Black

Poor Edward had a little fright with Jake.  That was great and can't wait to read the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Moving Right Along

It just keeps getting better and better!   Thankyou so much for this wonderful story!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It

Fabulous!!!!!!   I had tears laughing so hard!   I can't wait to read the next chapter, and I just love it and I am sure that the next chapters are just as good!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse

That was so good!   They will be so good together, please tell me there is a HEA for the couple! 

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44307
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love it!  I am so glad that you are back!!

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 100304
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Learning

     I hope that you will be feeling better soon and I thank you for updating with all that you have had going on.  I love this story and will wait patiently for the next update.  Your health and education comes first.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1464123
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 09 May 2012 Title: Chapter 50: This Woman's Work

Is it Dereks son?  I can't wait till the next chapter!

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 101589
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 : Slammed

Oh I just hope it's not Jasper.  Maybe it is Rosalie just wishful thinking for Edward, cause Jasper and Emmmet would kill him.  Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Update is up, if you haven't seen, since I'm behind on replies... I try. Why does no one want it to be Jasper? ;)

Collisions by Milk40 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A story by popular French author Drinou. Bella is a shy and clumsy girl employed by Edward, an authoritarian and abusive boss. Between games of seduction and indifference, a passionate relationship develops. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92324 Read Count: 100377
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2011 Updated: 27 Sep 2014
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Harsh day after

It could be the $20 or a bill for the dry cleaning of his shirt!  Please update soon!

 



Author's Response:

If you want the teaser, you have to contact me on FF

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Provocations

GO BELLA!   Check mate Edward!!!  Love it!  Please update soon.

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Difficult awakening

#1!!!!!!

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 76283
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Enraptured

Can't wait for the next chapter.  When they do come together it will be epic for both I believe.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Revelations

Oh My!!  Loving it and can't wait till he makes her a vampire.  I hope it will be before Jacob finds her.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Parting

Oh please let there be an HEA for Edward and Bella and let Jacobs head roll!!!!!!

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 213745
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Revelations and Goodbyes

     Breaking my heart!!  I know Edward feels he needs to get away for his good and for Bella's  but maybe if he could have talked to her, she could have helped him.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

     My heart breaks for Bella, she wanted that baby so badly so she would have someon to take care of and love, a family.  What she doesn't realize is she has a family if she will just give in and let them love her and her love them in return.  I think she is getting there and she will have the family and love she always wanted.  Will she be able to learn more about Charlie Swan?   I hope so.  She needs to know that she was loved by her Daddy.  Please update soon.  I love this story so much.  Thankyou for it. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - TO SIR WITH LOVE?

Damn!!!  Don't leave us hanging for too long please!!! Update please like yesterday!  I absolutely adore this story and can't wait to see where its headed next!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Finding the way back

Loved it!!!!  People make mistakes and if you love someone the way they do then you work it out.  Nobody is perfect.  I can't wait till the wedding chapter.   I alos cant wait till "A Family Like Ours", I absolutely loved "People like Us" and am looking for to the sequel.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 - Epilogue - Never Goodbye...

I am sorry to see this story end!  It is such a wonderful story and I just love it!  Future outakes would be awesome!  Maybe when they have their last child and udate on the family.  Thankyou so much, you have such a gift for writing and can't wait till your next one!  Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 255943
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise

Is Sue actually "Tanya"?  So if she is then that would make Leah and Seth his children?  Wow if it is true then shit is about to hit the fan!  That does not make Bella related to Edward because "Tanya" was her step mother and Bella's dad was not the father to Seth and Leah.  Am I right?  Please update soon!  I can't take the suspense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the outstanding and wonderful reviews!  We are so excited and happy to have you all on board with us for this journey and we sure hope that you all continue to love and praise the story the way that you do.  I know that you all learned some rather interesting pieces of information in the puzzle we call His Cimmerian View.  I bet a lot of you have more questions than you are asking.  But to answer a few of the questions that don’t take away from future story line here you go.  Yes it is possible that Tanya and Sue are the one in the same, but do remember that Tanya Denali was positively identified by dental records.  Some are asking if Sue could be Edward’s long lost mother... I guess that is a thought, but the age thing would be difficult to swallow.   Sue could very well be masquerading as Bella and trying to get her hands on the money that has been left to her both from her mother’s Estate and her grandfather’s.  Wow more of you seem to be worried about who might have their hand on Edward’s shoulder than much else, so I will relive you of that stress, it is in fact Carlisle.  Between this chapter and the BPOV on EHCV we have had many question how Harry/James could have gotten into Bella’s apartment after Aro did all the security measures, and I assure you that his ability to get into the apartment will be answered, just have faith in us, and you will see.  Lots of new things will come out in the next chapter as well and unfortunately you are all going to hate us, because it will be ending in a cliffhanger as well.  In the next chapter we will get to see Edward come face to face with Harry though... insert evil laugh... but at least I am showing you the teaser from that meeting!  I am excited about the ending of the story; however we will not update any faster than we currently are.  I am working on chapter 28 and Nikky is on chapter 29.  At this rate we are going to be pushing to keep up with the schedule of posting each week.  No I am not saying we will not post, but I am saying we will at this point be sticking to the every Thursday posting.   If you haven’t yet, go check out Enduring His Cimmerian View... the Bella POV chapter is posted.  We will not be adding any chapters to EHCV, until we have the main story cracked out of HCV.  Thank you for being some of the best readers and reviewers out there and for loving this story we are sharing with you all.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 26 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
All of it; I mean, this mother fucker broke Seth’s arm.  I close my eyes, and when I open them again, I see nothing but him. Without even thinking about what I’m doing; I hit the fucker as hard as I can.  I just keep hitting him until I feel someone pull me back. With the rage still blinding me, I knock whoever it is off of me and hit Harry again. 

Suddenly, I feel a lot more people dragging me back. I feel a sting on my face, and I look around to see Aro shaking his head.  Garrett has his arms wrapped around my waist, Felix is holding my left arm, and Emmett is on my right; I have no clue when he got here. Standing right in front of me is Jane. 

“Jane, I don’t think you needed to slap him,” Aro says as he walks over to us.  That fucking bitch slapped me! 

“He was out of it, and it brought him back didn’t it?  Besides that, I get to do the beating up around here,” she huffs, walking away from me to bend down and look at Harry.  I look down as well, noticing that I knocked the fucker out. I can’t help but grin about it.  “Wipe that look off your face! You broke some of his ribs and his nose; that’s my job, Assward!”  Jane jumps up and walks over to her bag. She brings out some jars and sets them in a line on the desk.

“Eh...what the hell is in those jars?” Emmett asks as he gives me a look to ask if I’m alright.  I nod and the three of them release me.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Making Amends

Can Bella not read?   Edward wrote down directions but she asked him to tell her how to get there.  My heart breaks for Bella but I am in such awe of her. She was only 13 and started taking care of her siblings and putting them before herself.  Like a mother would do.  I hope when Edward finds out about Bella that he does not fly off the handle but I have a feeling that he most definitley will and poor Bella is just doing what she has to to take care of her brother and sister.  It is breaking my heart and I just want to give Bella a big hug. 

 



Author's Response:

No Bella cannot read or write, she has never attended school.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Kasi (&Nikky)

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 03 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: New Job

I am in tears!  Bella is so good to those children just like a mother, which she really is. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am posting chapter 17 now so I hope that you continue to enjoy the story.  Kasi &(Nikky)

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 05 May 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Weekend Revelations!

Poor Edward and bless Bella's heart!   She is so scared and never had anyone besides the twins, I hope Edward will calm down and come around that age does not matter.  Bella is just a sweetheart and needs his love and he in return needs hers.  Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Hello our faithful readers and reviewers!  We were expecting a bit of a lashing from some of you, and we have gotten a few but nothing like I expected.  Please let me remind you all now first and foremost that we are both happy ever after kind of gals.  Little refresher is needed about ages, and a few other things, since there were a few questions.  Edward is 28 and will soon be turning 29.  Bella just turned 11 when the twins were born, Sue left when Bella was 13, and Bella has been working for the university for over 5 years.  Bella just turned 19 in chapter 8.  Edward is 9 and 1/2 years older than Bella.  Before Sue left, she obtained a fake ID for Bella that said Bella was 18.  Therefore everyone surrounding the apartment building assumed she was of legal age.  Sue needed everyone to think Bella was 18, and she was sure to scare tactic that into Bella.  All these years, Bella has continued to maintain the age Sue said she had to say she was, in fear of not being able to stay with the twins.  Now for Bree Tanner and James...Bree Tanner was the female student from Edward’s Summer school course he taught.  In the summer for the past several years, Edward has been helping his good friend Marcus by teaching the kids who struggle to pass, or are so far behind they may not graduate high school.  Bree Tanner was the hoodie wearing shy and quiet girl from chapters 1 and 2.  Bree lives in Forks and attends high school at Forks High.  James Hunter is a Math teacher and the truancy officer for the Forks school district.  We don’t want to give too much away, but if you think back to the earlier chapters, when Edward had to take a break from his panic attacks, he was clear to tell Marcus his concerns about Bree being abused.  Bella is naive about many things, but she has grown a lot in the past few chapters.  We want to be clear that Bella feels as if she lied to Edward, she started trusting him a long time ago and when she started trusting him she feels she should have told him then.  Edward doesn’t feel betrayed by the lie, but he is more of in shock by the lie.  When he thought he was almost 5 years older than Bella he was concerned with the age difference, mainly because of how innocent she is.  Now that that almost five is almost ten, he is confused.  The next chapter will have you cheering Edward on, and hating his guts too.  We don’t want to give too much away, but I will say this, we are both excited at the prospect of the reviews after the next chapter posts.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing this story, you all have no idea how much your words mean to us.  Thank you, Kasi (& Nikky)

 

Teaser for Chapter 18: Confessions  (As always subject to changes in the Beta process.)

Leaving Bella’s place, I get in my car and drive.  I don’t even slow down when the speedometer hits one-hundred-thirty miles per hour; I just keep driving.  I am racing to get away from the fear and the rage that is inside of me. I still feel so angry; how the fuck did I not see that she was only nineteen?!  I mean, she looks so young; I am so fucking pissed at myself.  She is still a baby, and the fact that she is only nineteen, doesn’t keep me from wanting her.  I want her, and I need to be with her.  I want her in every way, which is so fucked up. I shouldn’t want to be with a nineteen year old girl.

 

She was thirteen when Sue left her to look after Seth and Leah.  She was so fucking young, and she ended up in Aro’s club at thirteen!  Fuck, if he would have said yes to her…if she was in the pictures I had to choose from…I would have picked her…I know I would have… fuck! I could have really hurt her.  I am really fucking sick! Thank God he said no! Fuck, the dip shit pimp that said yes...shit! I’m sure she would…fuck I don’t even want to finish that thought.

 

“FUCK!” I scream out and I do an illegal U-turn at eighty miles per hour.  I decide I need to see Aro. If I find out that fucker knew her real age, I am going to add that motherfucker to my shit list.  I am going to hurt him so fucking much, and anyone who tries to stop me, too.

 

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation

Wow!  So Sue is "Tanya" and the children are Edwards.  Poor Bella is going to think that Edward is going to blame her and leave her with nobody.  But Edward only is worried about Bella knowing from someone else and who would it be but the BITCH known as ROSALIE!  I am loving this Jane and Aro, Jane is going to give Harry a lesson he will remember!  I hope that Edward will be able to calm Bella down enough so he can tell her he doesn't blame her and would never leave her.  Edward needs to be very alert with Sue and Paul out there.  Please update soon! LOVE IT!

 



Author's Response:

Well hello to our faithful readers and reviewers.  It is hard to believe that this story will be coming to a close in just about five to seven more weeks.  Yeah chapter 27 posts next week, 28 is written and off to the start of the beta’s (yes more than one) process.  I am working on 29 and Nikky is kicking behind on her part of 30.  After 30 is written there will be either 2 to 5 more chapters.  Jess2002 threw a monkey wrench into chapter 29 for us, and I was actually shocked she asked for the thing she asked for.  I will not leak the info on what she said we needed to do, but man alive it does give a nice twist.  (LIKE WE NEED MORE?) twists that is...LOL.  Okay so you got quite a bit of the mystery settled on the real Tanya Denali.  I never lied to you , when I assured you all that Tanya Denali was in fact dead and buried.  I also stated many times that the toddler found in the burnt house with Tanya Denali was in fact the child she gave birth to.  Neither of those statements was untrue.  I never said that he was in fact Edward’s, just that he was in fact Tanya’s.  You will get to hear more about good old Uncle Harry again, but trust me when I say that he will be quit forthcoming on the information.  Jane has incredible ways to make assholes talk.  Many of you want to see Jane get her hands on Sue, and well I will not say if that happens or not, you will have to wait and see.  Sue and her bullshit are not yet complete and I will say this, she makes an appearance in more than one chapter upcoming.  She is quite sly, like a fox.  We are both so excited to see what you are all thinking.  I know that this was a lot to take in with the double identities.  I want to assure you all that everything written so far was all part of the original plan, chapter 29 will be the first deviation from our starting outline.  We hope that you all continue to enjoy and read and review this story, because it is nice to hear how much you like, love, or hate parts of it.  We are amazed that we have written a story that is garnering so much emotion from our readers.  Thank you for all you say in your reviews, they really mean the world to us!  Kasi (&Nikky)   

 

Teaser for chapter 27: Subject to changes during final beta process

I look at Bella and Alice sitting there on the floor.  Alice is in front of Bella holding her arms while Bella is shaking and crying.  I walk toward them, both seeming to have missed Emmett and me coming in the room.

“He’s going to hate me... they are all going to hate me. What should I do?  This is so big. I... I didn’t know. I swear I didn’t know.  Why…why would she lie about that?  I did everything they ever asked.  I never questioned them. She could have told me. I would’ve still loved them, I do still love them.  Why?  I... it’s not fair, Alice.” Bella’s hand goes to her hair, and she begins to grip and pull at it. 

“Bella, please calm down.  I’m not sure I fully understand what you’re talking about, but Edward loves you very much, and he knows you; he will trust you, I’m sure...”

As I move forward, Alice stops talking and turns to me. This makes Bella look up at me, too.  She looks broken and scared.

“Bella Baby,” I say, holding my arms out to her. Instead of coming to me like I’d hoped, she shakes her head.

“You’re going to hate me, but I swear I didn’t know.  I thought that... I thought I was the best for them. I didn’t know really. I swear didn’t know.   If I had, I would’ve looked for you, I swear.  Mom and Harry couldn’t have done or said anything that would’ve stopped me from finding you.  If I knew, I would have made sure that they were where they belonged.  I would have been punished, but I would have taken it happily knowing that they were safe and loved.  I am so sorry.” I look at her, seeing her hurting, and I hurt too because she is still putting herself last.  “Your son, Edw...” She cuts off mid-sentence and begins to wail.

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Torn between a woman he loves, and the woman he has, but can never love, Edward comes to a fork in the road; which path will he choose? "The road to hell is paved with good intentions; "I m already going to hell, I might as well do it right!"* Drabblesc Fic* ExB


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85715 Read Count: 60804
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 16 Feb 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

     Very sweet!!!!   Edward has her calling him Masen now?  He is getting closer to the truth at least.  Wonder when they will let each other know their real names and when will Edward tell her about his "wife" and children?  I am so glad you updated and can't wait till the next one! 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

     Edward is so in love and needs to tell Bella the truth as soon as he gets back.  Love it!

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

     It is fixing to get good!!   I am so excited I can't wait till the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Things are certainly going to get intersting!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 31 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

    Love it!!   I hope that the friend that Alice is talking about is Bella!!  I hope Edward is the one to tell Bella.  I would love 2 more chapters!  Being the greedy person I am. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh Yes!!! Here and waiting for the next update like the greedy person I am. I love this story! I can see that perhaps Bella's drink gave her a bit of liquid courage? Poor Edward he seems to be having a hard time of it. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

You got it!  I´m gonna update right now!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

     I need a smoke and a big drink after that and a new pair of panies!!!!!   Loving this Edward and Bella.  This is going to get very interesting very fast.   Can't wait for the next chapter.  Love it!



Author's Response:

Well get out the Tequila while I upload the next chapter!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

FYI... just forgo the panties!  I won´t tell if you won´t!

 

Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

     What to say about Edward?   I want one and I need one!!!!!!!!!!!   Sweet, Sexy, Well endowed, and to top it all of a (swoon)  loving father!!!!!!!!!  Thank god the children look like him and his mom and not the crackheaded mommy dearest egg doner known as Tanya.   I can't wait till they really talk and tell the truth.  I hope you get more than 10 reviews.  Love it!!!!   The Greedy Bitch hopes you get to update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

   Oh Edward come clean now!!! I have a feeling Bella would understand more than he could hope for.  He is in love and feels the same way she does.  Now honest needs to come from both of them.  Thanks for the great story!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

    Off to the hotel!!!  I am just loving this story and can't wait to see when they come clean with each other about everything.  Please update soon!!!   I am a greedy bitch.

 



Author's Response:

You´re in luck, I love greedy bitches! Lol!  Glad you liked it!  There´s plenty more twists and turns coming, so hold on!  Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

     Edward has a panic attack apparently and finally gets it together enough to see  Bella consoling Brooklyn and hopefully they will finally be able to talk and move on.    Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Whew!!!!!   What can I say?    I love it! 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OH YES!!!!!!!!!    Fake names will come back on Edward I believe, maybe Bella will become friends with a certain girl named Alice and then she will find out Alice's loves name is Jasper Whitlock?    Bella is going to get the big salami and I bet she will be very please and so will Edward.    I know I am being greedy again but please update soon.   I am so captivated by this story and can't wait to see where it goes. 

 



Author's Response:

Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: What Becomes of the Brokenhearted?

    Come clean Edward and Bella will do the same (hopefully).  They both are crazy about each other and will probably try to fight it a little, but in time they will just have to give in to it.  He has nineteen month old twins and I don't that will be the problem for them.  Their luck with their previous loves or in Edwards case crackheaded whore and bad mother  will be the problem but love must prevail.   Loved the chapter and loving this story soooooo much.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I hope that he moves on now too!  Lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

     I want to joing the mile hight club with Edward and his massive peen!!!!   Poor Bella hurt so good. (Lucky Bitch)   Yes Bella will want more of Edward and I am sure vise versa. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, me too, so I guess you´ll just have to get in line and wait your turn!  Lol!  Yeah, but it was well worth the pain!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!


Krazi

xoxo

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

 I am so glad they worked it all out.    Poor Edward,  blue balls then balls up near the liver.   I hope the kids were oblivious to what was happening but I have to say that is hilarious.   When you are a parent it does'nt matter how careful you are and quiet and even when you think the door is locked, BAM busted and cockblocked by you own kids.  Please up date soon. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I am so excited that it is out.  Now all they have to do is talk and move on.   Love it!!  Bella couldn't be too angry because he has tried to tell her and she has refused to let him.  So suck it up Bella!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

     I can't wait for her to find out that Edward is Masen!!   Please let him come clean soon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

     Love her plan!   I just hope Alice does'nt call Tex by his real name before they get there because Bella would have a heart attack.  I hope you have another chapter for us tonite!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

      I am so glad he will come clean with Bella and I hope she will be understanding and not turn her back on him.  He already talks to the children about her and show her picture to them and for them to call her "Ma" that is just the sweetest thing.  Edward needs to let her meet them and his family.  Has he started divorced proceedings with the skank crackheaded Tanya yet?  Please update soon because you know I am a greedy Bitch and absolutely love your story!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

     OH YEAH!!!!!!   WHAT TO SAY ?   WOW, HOT, I WANT AN EDWARD TOO!!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oops!!   There we have it.  Now how will this go down?  Please let it be a great one!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

     Go Bella!!!!!!!!!!   She takes everything especially that mmm cock!!!   I would too!   So at least we know she will stand by him.  She just needs to let him tell her and all will be well.  I am so hoping you get 10 reviews because tomorrow start another work week and I would love to read another chapter before I have to turn in!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

    Oh Hell No!!!!   That fucking bitch just needs to od or disappear forever.  She doesn't need to be in the same state as those children or Edward!!  I bet she will shit a brick when she finds out she will get no money from Edward.  James will probably dump her ass or they will concoct  a plan to get money from Edward.  I really can't stand the slut and hope she gets what is coming to her and fast.

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

     Well Bella is scared of what Edward is going to say that is for sure.   Edward, what can I say about Edward,  I WANT AN EDWARD LIKE HIM!!!!  He is a total package and from that picture of what his cock looks like, he is purfect!!!!  Damn!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

     Edward is on the move and taking no chances with Tanya and I am so glad that he does not want her near the children.  Now all he has to do is come clean with Bella and I hope it turns out like I am hoping it will. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

    That cracks me up!!!    I am so glad Tany has not shown up and has given Edward the opportunity to get her rights to the children terminated.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

     I need a smoke after that!!!!!!!!!!  Again I say I want an Edward like him! Please update again tonite!  PLEASE!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

     Loved the chapter and hope she will say yes!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

     That was beautiful!!!!   What a loving family they are.  I can't wait till the next update.  Will Tanya be making an appearance?  The bitch needs to be put in her place.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

     LOVE IT ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

     Esme is the mother of all mothers!  She loves and loves with all that she has and Bella needs it and in return love the "mother" that Esme has become to her.  I hope Bella will be ok.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

     What the hell just happened?   Where is Esme?  Why is he so fucking pissed?  How long has she been in the hospital?

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

     Okay Edward is going way OVERBOARD!!!  He is going to get his ass handed to him by Esme for sure and I am also sure by Bella once she gets her shit together, the poor girl is overwhelmed and Edward bursting in has not helped her any with her being sick and all.   Oh Edward,  sweet, loving, sexy, well hung Edward what shall we do with you.  We will see what is in store for him in the next chapter and I hope it is really soon.  Greedy bitch is in the building!!!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

    Ok so in Chapter 40 that wasn't Edward and Bella right?   Could it be Tanya and James?  That really had me doing a double and triple take.  I am sure we will know soon.  Maybe tonite?

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

     Edward is on cloud nine!!!   He is the total package.  Bella is too! Please update soon!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

     I am with Bella, I love me some Mac Taylor too, but I love me some Edward more!  Horny Bella is going to be a force to be rekoned with and poor Edward is not going to be able to keep it in his pants if Bella has anything to do with it.  The woman is on a orgasim mission and Edward is the key!!!!  Love it and can't wait for the next update.  Forget football update as much as you want cause I would rather read your story than watch a football game. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

     Well little baby Cullen is going to make them wait till he or she is born to know .  I can't wait to know what it will be.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

   love it!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

     Hope Sue will move when Seth does.  I can't wait till the next chapter!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

     Mmmmm Edward!!!   Bella has to get her some!   You Go Girl!!   Love it!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

     I have drink and smoke in hand!!!!  Whew!!   Intense and making want to drag my husband to the bedroom!!   Edward could teach him a new thing or two I believe. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

     Are they going to try and pass it off as Edwards kid?  It's not his is it?  It can't be because they have not been together for a long time right?  Say it ain't so!!!  Please tell me they get their asses handed to them big time.  That poor baby that Tanya is carrying.  I hope that he or she won't have them as parents for long. 

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Oh hell no that bitch didn't !!!   Please don't let them take Bella's baby please!!!   Don't let them get her out of the building. Let Edward come home and have a big old throw down with crackhead James and let him and Tanya get what is coming to them.  Also please protect Bella and Edwards baby and Tanya's baby, it's not that baby's fault who her mother and father are.  I am dying here!

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

     Damn!!   Don't let them leave the building and please let help come soon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

     That is one crazy bitch!  Can ya feel me!!   Let her shoot and kill James and somehow let her be overpowered !   Let Tanya have her baby and go back to Alaska and stay there or better yet let her family take the baby and put Tanya's crazy crackheaded self to prison for the rest of her life. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 61

     Please let Bella be ok and maybe that was Tanya that was talking to him?

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 62

     You had me about in tears thinking Bella had died and Edward was left brokenhearted having to raise the three beautiful children without her.  Now what happened to Tanya and James and that poor baby that Tanya was pregnant with?   I don't want this story to end yet!  It has been a great story and I hate to see it end, but as they say "all good things come to an end".

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 139650
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Little Help from My Friends

Absolutely love it!!!!!!!!!!  Edward seems yummy and Bella is a lucky girl. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Coffee, Tea or Me?

     They really like each other!!   I can see them falling for each other and can't wait till they do.  Please update soon!

 

Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37111
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Double Play

     Oh Please write some more!!!!!!!!!   Love it!  

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Words Unspoken

Bless their hearts.  It will be a difficult road ahead but they can get through it.  Will Edward ever be able to walk again or at least be able to make love to his wife?  I think that is what bothers him the most.  While making love is wonderful it isn't everything and their are other things he can do to please her.  She just wants him in bed beside her and to hold her.  Please update soon!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Now

I am so glad he is going home where he needs to be!  Please update soon!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421067
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Please update soon!  What did she show him?!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

A cocky QB runs into a snarky band geek. What happens when they collide on and off the field?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 182382 Read Count: 104169
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

     I absolutely LOVE this story!  The Cullens are hilarious and Jasper also!!  True stoner!  I have laughed so hard through these chapters.  Bellas gives just as good as Edward and I think they are awesome together.  Please update soon!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you love it!  They're a lot of fun to write and Jasper kills me all the time :)  Bella definitely knows how to keep her man on his toes!  Thanks so much!  More in a couple weeks!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

My side hurts from laughing so hard!!   Freak out much Edward?  Loved it and can't wait for more! Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Hah he is a natural freaker when it comes to his girl :)  Glad you had fun with it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I am so happy that there will be a sequel!  I am crazy about this story and was getting very sad that is was going to end soon!  You made my day.

 



Author's Response:

Aww glad to hear that!  Yeah I'm not ready to say goodbye to these two, they're too much fun.  Plus Rainbow of course :)  Thanks so much!