Reviews by jalee1118
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Heartfortwilight Productions

 

Wolf-Shifter and Earth Witch, Bella Swan, moves with her father to Forks, Washington to join the "Midnight Sun" Wolf Pack. After almost 21 years of living in hiding in the human world, Bella struggles to find her place amongst the Pack. There is so much she doesn't know or understand. Will she ever find her place when so many are against her? And why does she have such a strong connection to the pack's Beta, Edward? Will they both learn to follow their instincts, or will they simply be too stubborn?

 

Thank you Heartfortwilight Productions for this beautiful banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed, Mate Series
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105198 Read Count: 32339
[Report This] Published: 07 Oct 2019 Updated: 16 Jan 2020
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 8: An Unexplainable Moment

Edward is fighting it tooth and nail!!  Poor Bella so confused and now hurt.  He needs to get a grip.  What did he mean about Bella's mother?  What information will Aro provide?  Will he try to turn her against the pack?  So glad Charlie is on the mend!  What is going on with Charlie and Sue?  Were they a couple before Charlie met Renee?  Please update soon!  I am greedy!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 11: A New Job

So they are both suffering and very stubborn.  At least he came to her and she finally rested and I am sure  he feels better too.  This story is wonderful and I can’t wait for the next chapter .



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 10: A Time to Dance?

Oh boy!!!  That has disaster written all over it!!!  I hope that Aro and the Coven have Bella's best interest at heart and not trying to come between her and the pack.  So Edward thinks he is above having Bella as his mate.  Well he is being an ass and I hope Bella can put him in his place.  Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2019 Title: Chapter 6: A Witch and a Wolf

Poor Bella!  She is in the dark about so much and literally thrown to the wolves.  I am so glad Charlie is ok.  I can't wait for the next upate!  Love this story!!!!



Author's Response:

:-) Thank you!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 12: A Disappearance

Well Alice is finally with Jasper!! Edward and Bella are fighting it tooth and nail.  Sooo who is with her in the Forrest?  I bet Edward is an ass again and Bella will be hurt by him again.  Please update soon.  



Author's Response:

Just a few more days now!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 13: A Connection

Well they have made some progress!! Their wolves definitely have!!  Soo when  how long will it be till we get caught up where the prologue was?  Love this sooo much!



Author's Response:

;) It will be a little while yet. Not too much though. 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 14: A Training Session

Bella is a strong earth witch.  Loved this chapter.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 15: A Bond

Loved it!!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 16: A Place to Belong

Love it!! They are still fighting it.  I wonder if they will make it to Bella’s Birthday?

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 20: A Broken Friendship

What is going to happen?  I am sitting on the edge of my seat reading this!  Poor Bella this is all so hard on her.  Seems she is alway left in the dark about alot of things.  Thank goodness for Leah.  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

I hope you forgive me for putting you guys through the emotional wringer! Thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 21: A Council Meeting

This was a great chapter!!  I hope Bella and Edward can get it together so that Balls does not have to leave her family!  Ready for more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 22: An Imprint

Love it!  Can't wait till Book 2!!!!!

The Perfect Summer by val Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

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Bella thought she had it all figured out, but then she met her best friend’s older brother and everything changed. How can one simple vacation change your whole life around?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5035 Read Count: 514
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2019 Updated: 09 Oct 2019
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I hope you continue with this story.  Love it and cannot wait till the next update!!!

Summary:

Banner

 

Edward and Bella are coming to terms with their surprising imprint, but there is a lot to be resolved. Will their new relationship manage to weather the storm as both new and old challenges are thrown their way? Book 2 of Mate Series. Read Book 1: My Stubborn Mate before reading this book. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 169738 Read Count: 38412
[Report This] Published: 31 Jan 2020 Updated: 05 Feb 2021
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 3: My Troubled Past

Love Love Love them!!!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 1: My New Mate

Love it and can’t wait for more!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 2: My Turn

Wow!  They can’t get enough of each other!  Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 4: My Request

I don't think Bella will like what Edward will say in that conversation.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 5: My Mate's Past and Future

Well when will they have to leave the cabin and face the pack?  I thought that Renee was Charlies mate.  If not then I wonder who his mate truly is?  Sue?   I hate to see how Edwards grandfather will take Bella and Edwards mating? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 11 May 2020 Title: Chapter 17: My Wolf

Go Bella!  Well I wonder what is going to happen next?  Bella's wolf is on a rampage and Jessica might get what is coming to her.  Please update soon.

Man of Omerta by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 197]
Summary:

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Silence. Honor. Humility.  This was the world as I knew it. Isabella didn't change this for me, she made it clearer. She became a part of that oath as I spoke the words, because a man who couldn't protect his family, couldn't be trusted to protect the organization. “We settle things like men, amongst men, we don't run to cops like cowards.”

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52604 Read Count: 27356
[Report This] Published: 03 Mar 2020 Updated: 30 Apr 2021
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Please update soon!  Love it!

 

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait for more!!!

Caledonia by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 601]
Summary:

caldonia

 

Edward moves back to Seattle after working under his father’s shadow for five years. Wanting to make a name for himself, he uses his mother’s surname to establish himself. What happens when his father, and a friend call in a favor, and need him to first help a struggling restaurant. Will he want to when the owner let it fall to pieces while she vacationed and what other secrets will unfold along the way?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 195622 Read Count: 56860
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2020 Updated: 15 Jun 2023
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I feel like Bella was thrown into the deep end and doesn't know how to swim!  I fell bad for her.  I think her reason for being gone is a good one and one that I hope we will find out soon.  Edward is very hard on Bella and not knowing all the facts.  The employees have no respect for Bella and need to be taken down a peg or two.  Bella is trying and is working on little to no sleep.  Edward should see that if Alice is taking up for Bella then there is a good reason.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hopefully there is a very good reason why Bella was away for so long.  Is there a family member that has been ill or is it Bella?  I hope that she isn't a spoiled girl and doesn't care about her grandmothers resturant, but I get the feeling she is far from spoiled.  I hope that she will give Jasper a chance and give him the family he needs.  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Summary:

If the Boughs Break

 

Edward Cullen, son to Carlisle Cullen the mafia Boss of New York and New Jersey has been off to college in Boston. Hiding under his alias Anthony Masen, he has led a normal existence except for the ever-present security guard. Going out to his favorite club, to find someone to scratch his itch, however, he finds someone unlike anyone else.


Bella Swan, daughter of Pentecostal Preacher Charlie Swan, defines her father’s wishes and goes to school in Boston. In his eyes, she has already shamed her family. One night her roommates talk her into putting away the books and going out with them. The moment he asked her to dance, she knew her life would forever be changed.

 

Will they find love in the end or will blood be spilled?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63910 Read Count: 68122
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2020 Updated: 06 Apr 2021
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five ~ Blood Stained Suits

Edward you have some esplainin to do!!!!!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 05 May 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three - Blood Stained Dress

How long will it take for Edward and Bella to meet again?  Is Bella irish?  Will Edward have to marry an full blooded irish woman?  I can't wait for the next chapter!  Please update soon!  

Summary:

BCGCover

Edward is a young British actor on the rise. His problem? He's absolutely clueless, about everything. Bella is a kick-ass legal assistant at a glamourous London law firm. They hop on and off planes all the time. Will their paths ever cross?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 229572 Read Count: 21900
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2020 Updated: 04 Jul 2021
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am hooked on this story and can't wait for the next chapter!  Love this Bella!  Edward kind of got his feelings hurt because she didn't pay any attention to him.  Little does he know the shite she has going on with her boyfriend or soon to be ex boyfriend.  Please update soon!

Summary:

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Summary: Edward Cullen, the Grand Duke and second son of the King, must find a bride. Isabella Sinclair, daughter of Countess Catherine and Duke Charles, was born out of wedlock and has neither titles nor land to her name. Could she be the bride Edward's looking for? But how is Isabella to marry a man of the royal family without a proper dowry? Plot adopted from the Twi-Fic Plot Bunny Farm on Facebook and credit goes to Nicole M Santiago


To give you some context, this story takes place in an imaginary country and the titles (royal, noble, gentle) are a mix of different monarchies.

This is the rank of title for this story:

Royalty

King/Queen - His/Her Majesty

Crown Prince/Princess - His/Her Royal Highness

Prince/Princess - His/Her Royal Highness

Grand Duke/Duchess - His/Her Royal Highness

Grand Prince/Princess - His/Her Royal Highness

Duke/Duchess - His/Her Grace

Nobility

Marquess/Marchioness - His/Her Grace

Earl/Countess - His/Her Excellency

Viscount/Viscountess - Lord/Lady

Baron/Baroness - Lord/Lady

Gentry

Lord/Lady

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 70918 Read Count: 31262
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2020 Updated: 21 Oct 2021
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Isabella.  I am very sad for her and the way she is treated.  Does Edward want a wife that is beautiful and also has a personality and opinion.  Please update soon.

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

love it!  I hope that they discover Bella is not illegimate! I hope her father gets what is coming to him.

Before I Die by britter18 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 422]
Summary:

 

Before Edward Cullen can become Don of The Cullen Family, he must do one thing first. Something he doesn't want to do but to become Don something he has wanted since he was young he will have to do it.

Bella Swan runs away from an abusive ex, and ends up seeing something she shouldn't. Edward Cullen offers her a choice what will her answer be?

Mafiaward/Bella

Thanks to Clo for the banner!

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Before I Die
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319940 Read Count: 73358
[Report This] Published: 27 Sep 2020 Updated: 10 Sep 2023
Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 3: Terms

Love it!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Should've Said No

Love it!!!  Please update soon!