Penname: TheSpoiltOne [Contact] Real name: Mandy
Member Since: 21 Jan 2010
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Reviews by TheSpoiltOne
Summary:

What happened that final summer Bella spent in Forks that forced Charlie to visit her in California? This is what I think happened. A one shot written for THE GAZEBO FIC CHALLENGE: The Essence of Charlie Swan.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Charlie (non sexual)
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4466 Read Count: 1164
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 Jan 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Daddy's Little Girl One Shot

You love your cheif......... I have to say you have converted me...

 

love you honey

 

TSO xxx



Author's Response:

*sigh* I do love my chief :)  Bwahahaha!  Converting Twifans one at a time.

Love you too!

Honeymoon in Vegas by Jennmc75 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

This is my idea of why Charlie and Renee ran off to Vegas to get married. This is a canon fic set in pre-Twilight. Rated M for lemons. Entry for the Love for the Unloved Contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Charlie/Renee
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: For the Love of Charlie
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3035 Read Count: 114
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2010 Updated: 24 Jan 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Honeymoon in Vegas One Shot

Ohhh I like the pictures Jenn...

You know I loved this one-shot.!!!

 

TSO xxx



Author's Response:

I love being able to add pictures to the chapters :)

I know you love my Charlie and I love you, hun!  Mwah!

Summary:

Sequel to My Sacrifice. Bella and Edward have made it through the confrontation with James alive and together. How did all of the hell he put them through affect their lives? This is Edward's story of coping, loving, and learning to live again.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63715 Read Count: 7680
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2010 Updated: 24 Jan 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am glad you put all your stories over here........ I love this story.......

 

mwah xxx

Coffee Shop Angel by Jennmc75 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

This was written for TotallyObsessed82, the winner of my FGB auction. Edward is a broken man new to Atlanta. Will he find happiness with the angel in the coffee shop? Rated M for lemons. No Bella in this o/s.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5233 Read Count: 527
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Coffee Shop Angel One Shot

sigh................. Love that it was shawna......... LOL

 

love you......

TSO xxx



Author's Response:

Yeah, she was one lucky bitch, huh?

Love you too :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 88354
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am totally loving this story as you know..

 

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Date: 29 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

great chapter... Esme seems like the typical mum there huh? Just what you would imagine a mum in hollywood would be...

curious about felix.... can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi TSO

Thanks. That was actually hard to write, Esme with a sour attitude.

The next chapter almost done and should be on it's way to beta's quickly. Pimping TWCS on all my stuff on FF, and the numbers are growing, crazy stuff.

Thanks =0 J

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Loved the chapter.. still loving this story.. great work....



Author's Response:

Thank you very much. =0 J

Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 34572
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Dilemma: Bella's POV

Nice first chapter! I have been meaning to read your stories for awhile now.. can't believe I waited so long this is a great start!! Wouldn't expect anything less mind you LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Dilemma: Jacob's POV

awww... that is so hard that type of love.. been there.. done that..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Moments: Bella's POV

Nice.. and how true.. LOL 16 year old boys often screw up big time!!

this is great!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Moments: Jacob's POV

Oh yeah he is a boy.. rolls eyes LOL

I love that it is so realistic..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Perceptions: Bella's POV

LOL go Mike!!! NOT LOL...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Perceptions: Jacob's POV

lol ha ha ha ha ha ha that is funny......

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Persistence: Bella's POV

lol Jake is alot of fun.. I personally think he is like my husband.. and I want to kill him daily!!

Don't do it bella!!! RUN!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Persistence: Jacob's POV

lol i sort of dont want edward to come back....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Revelation: Bella's POV

i like emily....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Surrender: Jacob's POV

LOL Love Embry.... idiot...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Blunder: Bella's POV

OH this is greatness

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Comfort: Bella's POV

LOL that is fun.... way to stir up trouble Jake..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Comfort: Jacob's POV

Jake is so normal it is so good to read this...  I love it

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Curiosity: Jacob's POV

awww. that is georgous

Last Wish by lindseyfair Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Three men... One had her. One has her. One wants her. What happens when the one who has everything he could want and more loses it? Can she over come her grief and confusion about wanting someone else? Will she give way to the man that gave her pleasure in the past or find out what she can have with someone new?

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This is AU/AH. There is both Canon and Non-Canon couples in this story. Multiple POV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50741 Read Count: 5659
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Miracle

wow this is a very exciting little story, young lady LOL I really enjoyed chapter 1.. moving on..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: One Breath

okay.. I am balling my eyes out.. I hate to cry.. I avoid tear jerkers all the time.. but then can't stop reading them if I stumble onto them and the story is brilliant..

well done.. I am going to feature it I hope you don't mind..



Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it. I'd be honored if you would feature it. I'll be posting the next chapter in the morning.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: End of the Beginning

and yep I am crying... STILL...

great story though.. the kids just pull your heart strings more..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Moving On

hmmm nice.. like that authors note.. that is great..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Very Merry

Ahhh thank god you told me that chapter 6 is soon.. how cruel.. to leave it like that! LOL  yeah yeah I know.. and I have to say I can't talk I love cliffy's and expectations.. i just want more of this story.. great work..

until next chapter..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Old and New

I agree.. 1st real date.. yay!!!!

really enjoying the story.. can't wait until the next chapter..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Roller-coaster

LOL loved your a/n!

great chapter.. I loved the whole thing.. want to smack jacob out however.. smuck that he is...

keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Making Up

Okay loved that.. nice surprise.. it is so lovely.. and perfect.. God I wish I didn't have everyone at my wedding and it was just me and my husband..

 

IF ONLY....

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 115469
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

LOL I love how you had to put in your notes what an STD means.. oh hell.. if they don't know they def. should not be reading this fic..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

hmmmm... yeah she better not be pregnant.. LOL skankya Love it..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

LOL Facebook!! ha ha ah ah

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oooh interesting 1st chapter.....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

holy hell.... possessive huh?

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

lol oh hell .... great story!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

oh yeah edward is hot

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL this is great!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

surely he isnt going to tell emmett?

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

umm hell that is hot..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

and the scary thing is you can actually see that happening in real life..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

omg!!! chapters are fine in length and updates once a week are brilliant!!!!!

 

well done honey!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

god parents suck sometimes!! wonder what i will end up doing to my daughters lol

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

LOL loved the whole they should of been living in the 1800's LOL great line

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

lol yeah I guessed it too but it still was interesting to read.. and it makes the whole story more fun..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oh hell....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

great story!

Homecoming by dont_run Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1227]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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A troubling childhood has left Bella shy and scared of her own shadow. Her life is turned upside down when she is sent to live with the Dad and brother she never knew at the age of 15. Can Charlie and Emmett along with Edward and the gang help Bella? E/B, A/J Em/? *abuse is discussed*

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 160653 Read Count: 168171
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 May 2012
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a mamoth of a 1st chapter.. going to keep reading..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bella's life seems so awful, I am glad she has moved now..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOL yeah she is lucky Charlie wasn't there...

Bella is going to die at the clothes.. LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love that she bought her a brand new computer.. that is so funny..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

god what did it say?

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

got to love alice!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

AWWW poor Rose

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OH that was a mean ending to the chapter when I was loving she got a puppy....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

AWWWW   I was wondering how they sat back and watched......

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh helll I am glad i can keep reading....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh no tanya is now on the scene again... poor Bella...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow.. what a chapter.. Didn't see that coming I thought it was going to be the normal she got raped.. great change...

 

Great story..

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

One Bet. One Week. No Rules.

Bella bets Edward that after a week of some raw sexcapades he won’t want to stop. He bets her otherwise.

A slightly tongue in cheek smutathon and my first fan-fic.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Twilight - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, To Read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 137672 Read Count: 311904
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Sep 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Kiss with a Fist

OMG I do promise to go back and review but your a/n crack me up! I do love this story... really enjoying it!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Add it Up

awww.. poor Bella........ got to love edward........ and a bit of Jasper on the side.....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - End Credits

ha ha ha ha I love the little sex education in your a/n.. I might try that instead of condoms!! freaking brilliant

great chapter.. loved it......

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Destroy Everything

oh it started in New York............... nice........

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Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Trav'lin' Light

thanks for bringing BDR over here it is a brilliant story I am really enjoying it I am going back to review the other chapters now!

 

Loved it.. can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Local God

I didn't know what to expect when reading this.. but I have loved the story so far..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Son of a Gun

:) - sorry just want your reviews to go up but no idea what to say anymore!

 

you know I am enjoying it!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Freak Like Me

great chapter!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Something in Your Mouth

love the story it is so......... fucking good

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Sex and Candy

I have to say I love emmett and Rose in this.. it cracks me up!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Giving the Dog a Bone

the whole Dirty in the title works for me! Perfect.........

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Closer

Great!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Kiss of Life

brilliant!



Author's Response:

Um...hello new crush! Your comments are making my monday, seriously- ILU! I'm so pleased you like this little fic  xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Edge of Joy

ooohh liked this chapter.. nice.. hot....

Sons of Silence by Jezzeria Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Edward, Bella, Jasper and Alice believe in white supremacy after years of misjudged actions. How many lives will they destroy before they finally destroy their own? Very Mature Content. Please read disclaimer before reading. AU AH OOC


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19501 Read Count: 1825
[Report This] Published: 11 Feb 2010 Updated: 16 Jan 2012
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Anarchy

Wow this is very very, wow.........

Have to see where this is going...

Good on you for being brave and writing this...

 

If you have any problems please send me a PM...



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Annihilation

horrible fighting......... nice to see that edward isn't cheating.... didn't see that coming.. LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Abomination

fuck........

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Accusations

hmmm should be interesting.........

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward broke Bella's heart the night she came home, wanting to share the happiest news of their lives. She leaves but stays in the marriage for appearances sake. Bella has decided that she finally wants to move on.

What will Edward do when he realizes that Bella intends to end their marriage? Fight for her? Or let her go?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 233369 Read Count: 89027
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Dec 2014
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Reconstructing Bella

I have been meaning to read this story for ages.. What a great start!!! Can't wait to read more.....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Reunion

awww... poor Bella.......

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: How To Make An Entrance

omg that was very powerful.....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: A Turbulent Affair

OMG I am in tears.. that was heart wrenching!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Confessions and Consequences

LOL "only I get to hurl insults at Edward Cullen. I think I've earned it!" that was great...

 

oh btw I will be putting your story up on featured stories next week on the library.. I hope you don't mind.. if you do please let me know.. 



Author's Response:

Hey Mandy!

wow. So not an issue about being featured. If i did i think i would have to be committed or something!  I am totally floored. First Daisy featuring me for her one shot fridays and now this!  

Really i appericate you taking the time with my story.

xoxo-FunkyD ~ Darby.  

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Tropical Fruit and Twirling Pastries

oh god that is so sad...........

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Difficult Dialogue & Unexpected Nightmares

OMG.... that is horrible....... and such a great story......

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Nostalgic Nightmares

awwww..... and love the groan from felix and jacob.. LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Deception Unveiled

find the bitch and find her fast.. ha ha ah ah ha

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers

aww how hard must that shoot be!!!?? and victoria what a bitch

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Painful Poses and Pestering Posers Part Deux

she still hasnt told him

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Desperate Devotion

oh this is getting worse and worse she needs to tell him.........



Author's Response:

BABY. YOU HAVE NO IDEA. I had to dodge bullets for the next couple of chapters.

xoxo

FunkyD.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Youíve Made Your Bed..

omg NO!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Shattered Dream & Coal Black Curses

I am full on crying here...... so sad.....



Author's Response:

I cried while writing. yeah it was that hard.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: When a Man Loves a Woman

okay that was all kinds of fucked up that chapter........

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Taking Care of Business

wow..... poor jake... understand but shit.. poor jake....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Playing the Part

omg!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 21: False Allies

well wow she really isn't getting a break here is she?

Summary: Past Featured Story

 am Edward Cullen and I have a deadly secret: I am a hit man. My new target: Isabella Newton. With the help of my friends, we plan the crime of the century. What the hell am I going to do when she becomes more than my target and becomes my life?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125711 Read Count: 41496
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Dec 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow.. this is different.. I am shocked at little Mary Alice.. LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Sinful Pleasure

LOL okay the Jane Doe line had me laughing..

It is like Dexter but better.. LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 17 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Fallen Angel

wow Alice is hard core...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Visions of Duct Tape

hmmm who is dead this time?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

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Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 75768
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Beautiful Stranger

hmmm got to keep reading.. interesting first chapter.....



Author's Response:

thank you very much :) xx