Reviews by TheSpoiltOne
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 76213
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Trapped

poor Bella that is really scary.......

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Ultimatum

wow that is really scary.. 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Monster

omg poor bella!!!



Author's Response:

hehe i knw, but it can only get better right, thank you very much for reviewing, i am a huge fan of your stories :) xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Surroundings

god that is evil.. well I guess that will teach bella that he is a monster no? LOL

I am reading your story slowly I am not supposed to be reading so SHHHH! LOL I am sniggering as I type this.. 

the girls will kill me I am supposed to be writing.. 



Author's Response:

hehe dont worry i shall keep it on the down low haha. Well i must thank you very much then, it means a lot that you have chosen my story to sneak to hehe. so thank you very much :) xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Hopeless

hmm that is a delightful bed time story! that was the last chapter I can read tonight as it is 12:40am here in Australia.. so going to sleep and will continue this at some point tomorrow.....

Hope you have a great day and I am really enjoying this story! thanks for writing it!

xxx



Author's Response:

hehe i write it for you guys :) thank you so much for reading it :) and wow austrailia, my boyfriend is over there at the moment :) im glad your enjoying it.

and yh i wouldn't recommend that chapter for a fairy tale haha xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Inside the Mind of a Monster

oh wow... this is getting good.. (I just realised I had to wait 15 minutes for a download.. LOL)

 

 



Author's Response:

oh kwl hehe, i get more of your lovely viewing hehe :) xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Magic Eight Ball

hmmm Alice was different! I like this alot. and my download is finished so I will talk to you tomorrow!

Mandy xxx



Author's Response:

thank you very much Mandy :)

 

Abi xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole

wow this is greatness I am going to put it up as a featured story! thanks for writing it!



Author's Response:

wow what does that mean, and were will you be putting it? hehe im all excited and no seriously thank you xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Mr Nice Guy

loved the ending of the chapter I like how all the characters are different.. and look on the front page of the library (home page) on the right hand side...



Author's Response:

hehe i knw i just saw, i almost cried when i spotted it, ever since i came on the site, iv been longing to be on it :) hehe i sound very gushy lol il stop, but thank you so much for enjoying my story and for placing it on features and im glad you like my twisting of the characters :) i thort they were better this way :) and i sent u a PM on ffnet xx thanks

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Cruelty & Kindness

that was a really great chapter I am smiling.. it is so different from other stories I like how dark and twisted you made the characters.. 



Author's Response:

aww thank you :) im kinda in a bad place, but not that bad lol and wanted to write it down to get rid of my frustration haha by torturing bella lol xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Taking Control

how could you do that to me? I so want some more smut here!! can't wait for this story to continue so I am going to keep reading.. 



Author's Response:

hehe i gotta keep u wanting it, and plus when it does finally come, you'll be happy :) xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Kitchen Confessions

awww... that is so cute........ love it.....



Author's Response:

hehe well he can be sweet too :) xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Bitter Heart

awwww.... I love the bite me part.. YES PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

hehe i know, doesn't every girl want Edward to bite them? haha xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Peeping Tom

ahhh emmett? and jacob like this is fun.. LOL



Author's Response:

yess indeedy that is our little Emmett hehe and i thort people may like the sick and deranged mind that is jacob :) xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Manipulations

lol Jasper is so different actually more believeable in this way.. 



Author's Response:

well thank you very much :) xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Killing the Corrupt

I was wondering if he could feel jacob that close that was a good chapter!

 

thank you! Do you ever sleep? LOL



Author's Response:

lol yes i do sleep haha i just dont have a life, and i dont understand, feel jacob that close? and thank you very much xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Waffles

really loving your story.. 

 

good luck with uni!

 

 



Author's Response:

thank you very much.

And I'm kinda nervous, but rli excited :) xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: To Touch a Psychic

I am a little behind.. this is great.. way to catch up and I am pleased I don't get lift on this cliff hanger..



Author's Response:

hehe yup you joined at the right time, and i was worried you didnt like the story anymore haha i thought id lost you with the first sex scene lmao im glad to have you back on board :) xx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf

omg... Umm I just ate lunch how strong does it have to be?

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: The Truth Hurts

omg... okay do I have another chapter?

Summary:

Bella hasn't spoken a word to anyone in over two years. Charlie is frustrated and lost at how to help her. When the Cullen's move to Forks, will they be able to help her open up? Will Charlie still be there if he really knew what she was hiding?

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Banner by, rpattz1990 

 

Warning: This story deals with dark subject matter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85605 Read Count: 161755
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Apr 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow what a start poor Bella

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well you have got me hooked I want to keep reading! Great work

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

hmm didn't expect that

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow that is drastic trusting someone you have just met with your daughter but I guess when you are that desperate.. you would do anything

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

awww poor bella! I would have run too.. 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

going to keep reading I promise it seems far fetched in a way but hey this is fiction what isn't LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

aww that put tears in my eyes.. poor charlie.....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

hmmm wonder why she frowned? doesn't like turkey? LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

omg poor bella

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm surprised at how open she is being about it considering she was so quiet for so long but what do I know!? LOL

A very emotional chapter! 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well this is a first I bet you are the only story around that charlie moves in with the cullens as well as bella!

That is quite hard to do, find new things! lol

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

hmm I wonder how she will react......



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the reviews:) I love hearing, or reading in this case, my readers thoughts as they read each chapter. I know that it's seems like Bella is too trusting but she sees the Cullen's as the only people, other than Charlie, who she can trust. Once she was able to open up to Charlie about everything, it opened a flood gate of sorts.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

gosh poor bella it is going to take alot of time for her to heal.......



Author's Response:

Yes, it is.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373175
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Silk and Brocade Shackles

I read the first few chapters on my mobile so hence the no reviews.. but I am really enjoying your story I am going to keep going..


Thanks for putting it up here..



Author's Response:

Thanks TSO.  I'm doing a little happy dance to have you reading it.  I hope you like it!  

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Princely Reformation

awww.. can't wait till they meet LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Eve Festivities

I am glad angela is going with her.. (hopefully)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: A Day For Miracles

LOL Can't wait... for the NC17 rating.. LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

LOL that was one hot chapter..

 

I am laughing though, poor them with the consumation... hell..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

so charles isnt alll bad a glimmer of love for his daughter there!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

yeah don't get off the boat... LOL

Summary: Past Featured Story

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AU/AH OOC Bad girl Bella Swan takes on a challenging bet to turn Edward, resident golden boy, to the dark side. Can one bet turn into a life time of love? Lemons and adult situations. Better Summary inside. Collab w/Luvrofink and Chartwilightmom


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64046 Read Count: 38007
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2010 Updated: 13 Apr 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Good Boy Edward: This Is Where the War Begins

LOL this is great start.. I can't wait to keep reading!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Bad Girl Bella: The Stakes are High

LOL this is fun! okay got to keep reading.. love the bet.. there is some terms there!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Good Boy Edward: I Dub Thee Sir Prudeward

LOL oh she is taking the bet seriously then!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: The Bad Girl Bella: Men Are Too Easy

LOL ha ha ha ha just a little awkward.. yep

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Good Boy Edward: Minions to the Army

LOL oh poor eddie.. ha ha ha ha

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: The Bad Girl Bella: The First Fall Is The Hardest

LOL loved the first kiss....... hot........

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Good Boy Edward: Redo and Make It Up

awww..... hmmm wonder what he will think if he finds out about the bet.. hmmm.. disaster no doubt..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Bad Girl Bella: Making Waves

ha ha ha ha ha! He thought it was hers not his.. I bet.. 

 

what's the go with edward's Daddy huh?

 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: The Good Boy Edward: A Little Birdie Told Me So

Happy jig! ha ha ha ha

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: The Bad Girl Bella: Put On Your Dancing

oh no LOL this will be interesting......

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: The Good Boy Edward: I Like The Way You Ride

LOL I love she knows what time Black rides around the school ha ha ha ha.. that is great.. 



Author's Response:

Holy shit, you are reading this one tooo?!! Wow, again, so honored. Well, don't spoil it for you. This one is completed on FF and the sequel has started. Oh yes, good times to be had with these two. Eddie's dad comes in to play later, as well as Charlie. Enjoy reading more.

Thanks for reviewing. You have made my day, well night, since it is midnight in the States.

=0 J

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Bad Girl Bella: Smoke and Mirrors

LOL go bella!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Boy Edward: Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic

awww.. she lost lolla.... 

and I am going to read it on here if that is okay... I put it up on featured stories I will just wait for you to update and get your reviews up here....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Bad Girl Bella: How Sweet He Is

awwww.. how romantic......



Author's Response:

Oh thank you! So glad that you are enjoying. We are posting every other day, so you won't have to wait long for the next chapter.

Thank you for making it a featured story. =0 J (chartwilightmom)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The Good Boy Edward: Down, Down Baby, Down By the Rollercoaster

well that was nice and hot... 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Bad Girl Bella: There Are No Words

LOL I love that last line.. makes me think naughty things..... LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Good Boy Edward: Welcome to My World

oh hell that was hot and sexy... loved it!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want

LOL ha ha ha ha ha ha!! that was greatness... I am still laughing



Author's Response:

So glad to make TSO laugh. =0 J

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995704
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow great start really liking this so far!!



Author's Response:

thank you - coming from you - that is a huge compliment!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

really loving this so far... I was told I would love it.. 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wow that is one long gap there! LOL 

great chapter I can't wait to continue reading.. I am putting you up as featured this week great story!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am totally loving this story!! 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

hmmm you write excellent smut this is a great story!! It would be interesting to see if Jacob ever comes into it.....



Author's Response:

later maybe...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

yes pay back is a bitch

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

sorry someone had taken your pen name that sucks......

loving this story 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

LOL can't wait for the next update! I was laughing quite alot through that chapter!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 14 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I loved that chapter well done.. and don't listen to people's views about right and wrong in the Dom/sub world... everybody is different.. this is fiction but Dom's are not perfect.. as you say in your story.. 

Honestly I think you are doing bloody well.. can't wait for the next chapter.. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! That makes me feel a lot better. I have gotten some dismal reviews. If BDSM I would have failed and been sent to summer school (hmmm).  But I try not to let it affect me too much, although I have really dragged my heels typing up the next chapter. 

So thanks again! And any time you want to drop me a line - please do!

 

Michele

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well I think you did well to write all of that!! it was a huge chapter!

loved it.. loving the story.. 



Author's Response:

OMG! It took forever to type - I keep second guessing myself! I should just leave it up to B & E - they keep changing the f**king storyline in any case!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

LOVED the chapter!! thank you so much for sharing.. and yes it is adictive! I should know!! LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

ooh I love this.. honestly it is one of my favs.. can't wait for the next chapter.. 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

totally still enjoying this story.. keep up the good work honey!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

hmm great chapter I love how this is moving.. cam't wait till the next chapter..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Happy Birthday...

 

and great chapter as always.. really picking up.. can she find much more trouble? LOL

Can't wait for edward to get back and please let her just stay there until he returns.. LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am sorry but I am cracking up badly... I love it when Alice and Bella go out.. it is freaking hillarious..

I am still laughing this is brilliant fun..



Author's Response:

I CHUCKLED just writing the damn thing! In fact, I was giggling when I thought of the plot - at about 4 in the morning (yeah, I don't have a life!)  Thanks for the review

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

really enjoying this...

 

can't wait for it to continue..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow... really really enjoying this story.. can't wait for the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

Every time you review, I feel in awe! Thank you for reading my silly story, and I hope it is as enjoyable as I find your work!!

Michele

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

LOL ha ha ha ha ha I loved the ending of that chapter.. I wanted them to come out as such this is greatness..

Can't wait for it to continue as always...

xxx



Author's Response:

you are wicked!!

 

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TEASER FOR CHAPTER 29

“P-pardon?”  Bella felt faint.  This is bad! This is really, really bad!

Mona looked at her as if she was in awe, “Sit down Bella, you don’t look so well.’’

Bella groped her way to one of the chairs in front of Mona’s desk.

Riley cleared his throat, “Your face says it all. When I went outside to ask the photographers what they were doing here, one of the guys that I have become sort of friendly with informed me that they were not here for me, but for you.  It seems that your secret is out.” He raised an eyebrow.

Bella felt her stomach heave. She put a hand over her mouth and ran to the little bathroom adjacent to Mona’s office.

 She made it just in time as her stomach was emptied of it’s contents.   Bella sat sweating on the floor for a moment with her head leaning against the toilet bowl.

My secret is out? Oh my god! Do they know about what Edward and I are? Have I ruined his career? His life? 

Her jumbled thoughts were racing around in her head.

What had she done?

Her phone vibrated as she was rinsing out her mouth. She answered it with a shaking hand.

“y-yes?” she whispered.

“Bella?”

“Edward…” she closed her eyes as she heard his voice. She could feel the tears well up in her eyes and she felt the hot trail down her cheeks.

Summary: Past Featured Story

It's You've Got Mail meets Pillow Talk meets...eh, you get the picture. It's the usual ABG yuks and lemons. Playerward v. Straightlacedella. Love/Hate/Love/Banter/Sex. RATED NC-17 COS WHY ELSE DO YOU READ FIC, HONESTLY? AH, CANON PAIRINGS


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 174770 Read Count: 64140
[Report This] Published: 25 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL I am grinning like the start of this.... Someone told me I would love it..... so thought I would give it a go......

 

great start!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOL that was funny!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 50129
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh hell that was an interesting chapter.. evil Edward..



Author's Response:

:) Thank you!  That chapter was a dream inspired by the Darkward competition and I actually dragged myself out of bed and started writing it in the middle of the night.  After a few hours of sleep that I forced myself to get, I wrote it all day on and off while I was supposed to be working.  His voice just wouldn't go away and here it is with me all these months later :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

lol nice chapter... I like dark edward



Author's Response:

Ha, this was a fun chapter to write and very therapeutic if you don't like Jake :)  Thank you!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

LOL I think it is funny... I think Edward has gotten himself into a bit of trouble here he seems to be backing down and changing his tune.. LOL

serves him right if Bella is the leader in this relationship..



Author's Response:

Haha Smugward certainly does have a battle on his hands with Bella, he's gotten a lot more than he bargained for :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOL that is so funny.. game on.. she is going to find that tough..



Author's Response:

Ha!  She is but so is he, maybe even more so because you know, he wants the hell out of of her! :)  Glad you found it funny!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL that was funny I love how he is tormenting her..

He is evil in so many ways LOL



Author's Response:

:) He can be evil, yeah, but he really does care about her as well, he just doesn't realize it yet!  Couching it all in sex is a wonderful way to cope with emotions for him!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LOL he is so evil.. but it is so amusing.. poor Bella.. I wonder if this back fires on Edward as well..



Author's Response:

He makes me laugh, all the time ;)  I'm glad he does you as well! 

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Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48850
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Late for Class

Nice first chapter.. looking forward to reading more.. poor Bella..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Leave me alone

I am sure I have already read this.. and I only read the first few chapters *rolls eyes* I had it on my to do list and I have only just gotten back to it.. I don't remember what actually happens LOL

So lets see how far I did read LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Old Friends & Familiar Faces

LOL I remember that chapter too.. LOL no clue.. what I was doing when I was reading this story.. most likely off line which is why I didn't review...

Sigh.. serves me right..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Difficult Conversations

hmmm I don't know I think I am catching up I can't remember what happens after here..

 

so this is a good sign yes? LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Dreaming

okay yeah I haven't read this so I am super happy LOL

great chapter.. I am really enjoying your story..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Broken

omg that is so sad.. poor bella...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Numb

Okay I am crying.. that was so sad..

great chapter..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

omg poor Bella....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Allegations & Transgressions

that was really well done...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Dinner with the Cullens

awww that is so cute and i loved drunk bella!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Consequences

OMG that is horrid.. poor poor bella

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Conciousness

LOL at your a/n...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Cain

LOL I am glad you didn't take that any further it wouldn't be realistic.. well done..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Audi

oh this should be so much fun...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Ultimate

Oh hell now I am all caught up... really great chapter i am really loving this story.. I am going to put it up on recommended stories this week if you have any problems with that let me know..