Reviews by TheSpoiltOne
Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking

oh now this is diffrent.. fantastic first chapter.. can't wait to keep reading it is mid night here so will only get in a couple of chatpers I am afraid..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Of Rituals and Really Big D***s

LOL omg we are so paranoid about upsetting anyone with anything I loved your a/n about the spirit walk is fictional.. it cracked me up.. after a tense chapter..

Great story..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion

oh I have to get some sleep but I will pick this back up in the morning..

loving it.. would you mind if I featured it on the site?

 

 



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it so far... and feel free to feature it wherever and whenever you like! :-)

Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces

ha ha ha ha this story is fabulous..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Of Finding a Job and Formulating a Plan

OMG this is fantastic.. why do I have to do real work and leave this fabulous story? it so not fair..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5: Of Hanging Up and Hunting Down

I konw what happens next I want to know what happens after that LOL.. NEXT



Author's Response:

Lol! Keep reading! :-)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Of Sunday Picnics and Shattered Expectations

wow this is soooooooooo good...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Of Movies, Lunch, & Samantha's Hunch

I am enjoying this so much... I am a little worried about when I catch up as I don't want it to end..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties

LOL ha ha ha ha ha ha that was classic... this deserves a gold ribbon.. but I did give it a coffee cup! :)



Author's Response: So glad you liked it! LoL! And thanks for the coffee cup! ;-)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

LOL fantabulous... yes it is a word look in edwards thesaurus

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Of Raspberry Jam and Rivalry

oh you have done this super well... it is a shame you can't do this as an original.. or maybe you can in a way.. totally different..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Of Making Peace and Meeting the Parents

OMG I am laughing so hard.. that was fantastic I am so glad he isn't perfect that was brilliant..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Of Scars and Sexual Frustration

oh yeah let him be right lets make it happen PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors

OMG this is fantabulous.. got to keep reading..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Of Big Bows and Birthing Babies

ahhh thanks for the explanation of Peter.. needed to know that.. LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Of Hot Kisses and Horrifying Visions

death turning into a vamp? please?

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 29 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Of Chocolate Syrup and Charity Balls

okay that is just evil evil evil.........................

 

so good though.... until next chapter.......



Author's Response:

Wow - you have been so busy reading while I've been asleep! Lol!

So glad you're liking the story so far - hope you like where it goes from here!

Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Of Making Out and Missing Persons

wholy hell I am behind and you made me cry when alice left and get angry about James..


Awsome chapter..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

Wow... that was a fab. chapter.. I have the biggest smile on my face.. Bring it on in deed.. well done.. LOL



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it - thanks! :-)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

awww... that is so beautiful.. great great chapter...

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

ooh nice first chapter.. 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

LOL   I like that she doesn't want him cause he would waste her time and not take it seriously.. that is funny.. and probably oh so true! 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

awww.. that is so cute.. I felt awkward for him LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

awww.. that is so cute.. I felt awkward for him LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOL really enjoying it.. 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL you are even putting the songs they are dancing too.. wow that is commitment!!



Author's Response:

I figured some of you might be curious. :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL you are even putting the songs they are dancing too.. wow that is commitment!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

okay I am going to feature your story on TWCS I am loving it.. thanks for writing it.. do you want a forum for it I can put up the link and put it up if you would like.. 



Author's Response:

Ahh sure. You can do that if you want. A forum for it is cool too. I'll sign up for an account to the forums.

Thanks for all your help. :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I liked that it was cute and you can see it growing as she normally doesn't hang out like that.. very good.. 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

lol and again with the music!!! brilliant

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I like he didn't do it perfectly very realistic.. thank god! LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I like he didn't do it perfectly very realistic.. thank god! LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

LOL you have done your home work I like it.. 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Awww.. I love their chemistry.. it is great.. 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

awww.. sexy.. that was hot.. nice nice nice... 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

awww.. sexy.. that was hot.. nice nice nice... 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

awww.. sexy.. that was hot.. nice nice nice... 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

LOL ha ha ha ha ha ha.. that was a great chapter.. I am smiling huge!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

LOL I love you have asked for DWTS faves! LOL Shame I don't get to see the American version.. we have our own here in Australia but yeah it would mean jack shit to you! Although Kim who is over there now... basically had a similar affair with one of our male celebrities.. and it was very HOT!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

LOL I love you have asked for DWTS faves! LOL Shame I don't get to see the American version.. we have our own here in Australia but yeah it would mean jack shit to you! Although Kim who is over there now... basically had a similar affair with one of our male celebrities.. and it was very HOT!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

LOL I love you have asked for DWTS faves! LOL Shame I don't get to see the American version.. we have our own here in Australia but yeah it would mean jack shit to you! Although Kim who is over there now... basically had a similar affair with one of our male celebrities.. and it was very HOT!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

aww that was so cute!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

hmmm don't know if I like the sound of lunch... what does jasper want to talk about?

 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

LOL oh yeah she is pissed.. I would be too.. 

 

MEN!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

LOL oh yeah she is pissed.. I would be too.. 

 

MEN!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

LOL oh yeah she is pissed.. I would be too.. 

 

MEN!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

aww.. to whoose house? and will she be okay with that in the morning? 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

aww.. to whoose house? and will she be okay with that in the morning? 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

aww.. to whoose house? and will she be okay with that in the morning? 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

aww.. to whoose house? and will she be okay with that in the morning? 



Author's Response:

She'll be okay. ;)

Oh, thanks for the forum. Umm, I can't access it... am I not supposed to? I'm sorry I'mvery new to this site... so I don't know what to do.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

LOL I have been so busy I am now playing catch up.. love the story.. you are doing so well with it.. and now.. i can keep going.. LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

LOL that is cruel... thank god I don't have to wait.. snigger..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

LOL sad to see the story wind up but I did so enjoy the ride.. got to keep reading..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

He is going to stay with her? lol I have no clue.. but that would be adorable..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

nope I can see her point.. and I see his...

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the beautiful, bi-racial, Director of her church's Afterschool Program, has been faithful to her commitment to remain a virgin until she is married. Tallahassee Police Officer, Edward Cullen's charm and sex appeal severely challenges her resolve. AU/AH Rated NC-17 Adult Content

Trust, Loyalty, Commitment Story Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242523 Read Count: 16527
[Report This] Published: 07 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I have been meaning to read this for so long... and a bought of insomnia made me go... hmm.. I want a good story to read.. so here I am

Very powerful prologue.. can't wait to read more.

xxx



Author's Response:

So glad you decided to give it a chance.  I find that reading fanfic, while not a cure for insomnia, makes it bearable for me until I'm able to sleep again.

Hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: A Commitment Is A Promise

Nice Chapter! starting to get into this story.. I have a big smile on my face about him trying to get into the apartment but not getting into the apartment.. poor boy is so torn LOL



Author's Response:

Yeah, Jasper's warning was ringing in his head, but deep down he really wanted to take a chance.  He'll make that move, eventually, right?

Bev

xoxo

Escape by sheri17awhile Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Sheri, an older divorcee, goes out hoping to find a one-night-stand, for some physical hot sex, and meets her soul mate. The mystery man, is an upcoming younger actor. Escape is the story of their life together.


Categories: Romance, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2054 Read Count: 47
[Report This] Published: 08 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Apr 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg.. this is fab start.. can't wait till you continue it.. well done..

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens when bad girl Bella is forced to attend church when her newly saved mother forces her to go? What happens when the handsome Youth Pastor, Edward, catches Bella's eye? She puts into effect Operation Seduce Mr. Innocent. Will Edward fall from grace or will Bella be his saving Grace?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143297 Read Count: 48613
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 13 May 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

LOL I was recommended this story by jenn.. And I am already laughing.. got to keep going..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 What A Wonderful Maker

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha this is fucking awsome..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Beautiful One

this is so much fun...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Opposite Way

wow... not such a funny chapter.. can you not make me cry today please? Bad day for me..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 I Still Believe

Okay I am telling my husband that... "you are a man and no man is perfect.." bwaha ha ha ha.. some how I am not saying that in the way you are in your story...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 Walk By Faith

That was good.. I am really enjoying this story...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 The Blessing

God I love your renee and jasper and bella's reactions to her.. it is classic..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 Anyway

he really is a saint.. LOL

 

poor edward... bella is on the loose...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 Live For Today

u o...

should be an interesting conversation...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Hanging by a Moment

awww.. nope he is breakable Bella.. go for it.. LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 Let Me Sign

oh poor edward...

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 Give Me Your Eyes

OMG.. that is just ... OMG.. I am so not a god person but poor jasper...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 Is This Love

yes will his mum like him?

 

poor jasper

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 Broken Wing

LOL poor edward he really is fucked...

If I say poor such and such again.. shoot me will you?

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 Your Grace is Enough

Okay I am now crying.. poor jasper.. okay you can shoot me.. I love Jasper.. he is so cute.. make him be in love with Alice.. please?

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 Slow Fade

ha ha ha ha ha ha god Love your renee.. she is a fucking idiot.. and yes I talk like this.. sorry.. my poor husband... yep had to get the poor in there..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 Lifesong

oooh that Jane is a bitch... LOL and now... You have already shot me at my request so....

 

poor Bella.. edward leaving her for the summer...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Monday Comes Around

FINALLY.... THANK GOD.... ha ha ha ha lucky Bella... LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 Breath of Heaven

aww I would want to keep him forever too...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 Please Don't Leave

oh thank god this is a finished story this is hell if I had to wait...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 Have We Lost

oh yeah there will be trouble

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 Halo

oh god.....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 Love is the Movement

awww that was super sweet...

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 Lonesome Town

LOL I would have Robby.... PLEASE?

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 Angels

oh it is so going to come out now.. isn't it? fucking Tanya...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 Iris

that was so moving and sad... really well done.. I am glad they didn't....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Let Your Mercy Fall on Me

okay I cried...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 I'd Lie

LOL that was cute..

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 Hallelujah

oh god.............

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 Losing My Religon

okay I am going to kick his arse...

And I am supposed to be asleep... you know it is good when you can't put a book down..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 Stand in the Rain

omg... omg....

thank god for the sequel....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 Grace

oh goodie.. please ring him...

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Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32 White Flag

oh god....... I am saying that alot huh?

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 May 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33 Still Calls Me Son

yeah forgive him but kick his arse first...

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106330
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow that was a great chapter.. can't wait for the next one.. going to read on..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

aww that is so romantic.. and what a hot chapter..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

aww that is super sweet i am loving this.. would you mind if I featured this on the library next week?



Author's Response:

I would be honored!! So glad you like it!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

hmmm this complicates things.. not a nice neat bow... LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh yeah... and is bella going to say she slept with Jake one last time? well I guess they weren't technically together? hmm... grey area.. lol

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

oh poor bella.. this is sad... FIX IT!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

aww that is so beautiful...

 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 May 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

nice buttseck!!!!!!