Reviews by TheSpoiltOne
Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254866
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ahh yeah sorry about the site problems we had a server file problem it kept automatically changing the type of file that the stories store on here.. which means it didn't work and we changed it back.. and then it changed it again automatically.. we had to hire a technician to de bug it.. shouldn't happen again.. or we might kill it :)

You have the emotion spot on I am really enjoying this..


Can't wait for the next chapter

 



Author's Response:

I didn't get a chance to respond to any reviews that came in yesterday, but I just want to tell you I am humbled by your words. I'm so glad you like my story, I debated even posting and then I thought ...the hell with it, if no one likes it, so what...But it really is great that people seem to enjoy it. As far as the site problems, that's technology...can't help it. And anyone who asked I emailed them the chapter, got to keep your readers happy...lol

But again thanks for reading and leaving all your comments and for posting my story on featured stories. I was really excited when I saw that. I have a teaser for you...lml

Edward grew serious looking at my eyes through the reflection of the mirror over the dresser.

 

            “Do you feel more confident? By the time you laid down, you certainly acted more confident.”

 

            “Yes, I do. At least I have a general idea how you want me to act and what you expect from me.” He stood up straight placing his hands on my shoulders before kissing the top of my head.

 

             “Good, get ready. Can you try to be in the kitchen by seven-thirty? I want to talk to you.”

 

             I pursed my lips “You can’t talk now?” He sighed drawing his pointer finger in a circle in front of him.

 

            “Edward and Bella here, Master and submissive in the kitchen” he said pointing towards the door.

 

            “Am I in trouble again?” I asked with interest my voice coming out in a whine.

 

 

Mocked by Faith by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 58]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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For Alexia Cross and Justin McNear, things are not what they seem.  Both were born and raised in hidden, gated communities.  A place where time virtually stands still and marriages are arranged by parents before a child’s 18th birthday.

Alexia is destined to be her community’s first spinster.  In a last ditch effort, a husband is found.  The only complication?  He has no idea he has been betrothed. Will his history of dating outsiders help or hinder his relationship with his future wife?

Justin McNear searched outside his church for the woman of his dreams. Returning home after failing, he knows he needs to rectify his life and his faith. Can a woman he’s never met make him whole again?

Will this couple end up mocked by their own faith?  Follow Alexia and Justin through the trials and tribulations of finding, falling, and surviving each other's love. It’s never easy saying “I do” to someone you don’t.

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Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2359 Read Count: 1129
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Alexia Cross’ crossroads.

oh this is different!

great start!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

LOL omg... so.. she thinks she is undesirable and really it is her parents being picky.. OH GREAT.. you have to love parents!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

wow... that is just wow... I would be sick!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

I liked reading about that.. well done

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2010 Title: Mocked by Faith

I am really enjoying this story... I cant wait to read some more.. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and review ever chapter! I will be updating on Tuesday. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105120
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Claiming

sweet he felt so bad and wanted to hold her

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Nice first chapter :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

Well that was fun :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You know I love you.. I am loving this.. great work.. :)



Author's Response:

I feel like I have my second wind now to write!  TV outline will fly out of my head now! 

Love ya!

Adesse Olympus by Billiegirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 78]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Separated at twelve, childhood friends grow up in different worlds.  Bella waits for her soul-mate to return to his roots and to the mountain ranch she and her brother have built from scratch.  Somebody or bodies will go to any length to make sure they don't get their happy ever after.  AH, cannon pairs.  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140161 Read Count: 30119
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2010 Updated: 07 Sep 2010
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

That was an amazing 1st chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm crossing my fingers you like the rest. 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Oh yeah I am loving where this is going! I read slow as I have to work as well as read so don't freak out at long gaps! LOL

Poor Alice I had to laugh though



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read this.  It means a lot.  Yeah, Edward and Alice have had it quite nice and she is somewhat clueless.  He he he

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

LOL please have horses in this fic!!!

I know you have finished but I still can beg! LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

yep she really doesn't see herself clearly LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

LOL about Jake...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

awww... that is too cute...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

i love the banter! I am going to feature this next week up on recommended fic's :) Hope you get a few new readers it is a wonderful story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the vote of confidence and that you like it enough to recommend.  There's no better compliment.  You're a doll.  Muwah!  I'm standing by a statement I told another reader, you guys on this site are amazing and awesome.  Thank you from the bottom of my heart.  

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

awwww... I love he wants to be more for her... that is so awesome!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

This story is fantastic... I will pick it back up again at some point tomorrow.. I am really enjoying it thank you for posting it here :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

oh hell that is scary.. who would do that? and who was around to be able to do that?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311998
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Stellar Hineys & Carriage Rides

ha ha ha ha... honestly emmett and church is hillarious



Author's Response:

Emmett haunts my dreams.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The Dude & Dirty Harry

I am still laughing that is a crack up of a chapter..

brilliant :)



Author's Response:

That was a fun one to write too.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Enchiladas & Store Bought Ta Ta's

I cried...... I laughed.....

 

great job!!!!!



Author's Response:

Very glad you're liking the story.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

I am really enjoying this.. thanks for putting it up here :)



Author's Response:

you are welcome.   Like I said before, I love your stories, so thank you too!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Grits & Vitamin R

I am laughing a lot during this story you have a great sense of humor.. :)



Author's Response:

In a few chapters you'll realize that i'm probably just insane.  lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Mercer Island & Minibars

Awwww... how cute :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 3: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

Okay I sniggered all the way through that..

btw I take time reading as I am working and this is my break LOL

I am glad you like my stories.. I am liking yours also. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you like it

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark

hmmm... let me guess he will turn up to dinner? shock the hell out of her?



Author's Response:

maybe..i'll never tell, well actually I will in the next chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Armpits & Coffee Stains

LOL that was a really good first chapter.. can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Thanks very much!  Btw...I love your stories.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Cosmic Boogers & Black Eyed Peas

Little secret... the whole laughing thing emmett does in church and can't stop.. I am terrible I do that..

God.. I am juvenile LOL

 



Author's Response:

I love to watch people...so it naturally leads to inappropriate laughter ... often. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Fried Ice Cream & A Cup of Tea

LOL after a horiffic chapter then you make me laugh... so good :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad.  Thanks very much!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Hello Kitty Undies & Lucky Thirteen

hmmm there is a lot of bitches in this story... LOL kill em off!! ha ha ha..



Author's Response:

yes...i could kill them.  As I've said before one of the reasons i enjoy writing is getting to play God.  lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Red Roses & Burst Bubbles

nahhh I reckon he wouldn't of :)



Author's Response:

All is revealed soon enough.  Thanks!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

really sweet chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

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Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389573
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: It´s Playtime...

NEARLY..... NEARLY... :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Everyones got secrets...dirty little secrets. Bella Swan is tired of her life, so will a swinger's party have someone swing her way. BPOV and EPOV. Warning...LEMONS AHEAD


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 281157 Read Count: 140944
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Eyes of a Tragedy

aww thank you so much :) LOL We love a good story...

Poor Ang.. she is a bitch yes... but does she know who Eric is? hm.... interesting..

And oh yeah this plan very very entertaining to read...


Great work girls!! Keep them coming :)



Author's Response:

Nope Ang has no clue that Eric is her Dr. Lame-O LOL Glad you're finding it entertaining! DLIR has her chapter with our beta. So yaaaaay more S.M.W coming up! Thanks for all your awesome reviews BB! We love hearing from you.

 

xoxoxox Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh god.. that is so hot..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yeah this is really good girls.. well done :)



Author's Response:

thank you so much....<3 DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Spartan Lover

ooh got to keep turning the page..

great little story you have got going here :)



Author's Response:

Thank you...we like writing it...and reading reviews...their awesome xo DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Mirror's Reflection

oh no.. that is just cruel..

Looking forward to more girls..

I'll put this up on recommended stories for next week :)



Author's Response:

thank you for the review. And we appreciate that you will recommend this story. Thanks  DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Laurent

oh poor bella and edward....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Fuck My Life

This is close to being one of my favourite fic's at the moment great work girls.. for keep the drama and tention going It has me thinking.. even when I am not reading it..

Thank you for the two chapters today! :) I feel spoilt :)

Can't wait until the story continues thank you for posting this on our site.. It is truely a great little story you have here :)

Can't wait until you get the reviews you deserve girls!!

xxx

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Time To Think

Oh this is soooooooooooooooo good....

Keep it up ladies :)


Can't wait for the story to continue :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review...we love to see how much everyone loves this....DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: To Happiness

nice chapter!!! looking forward to more!!!



Author's Response:

thank you very much.....hope u enjoy the rest DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: I fucking love swings

your still really holding my attention with this story..

Quite hard to do at the moment as I am so flat out... well done :)

 

eric has lost it.....



Author's Response:

Were glad we still have u by the balls...hahah if u had them....hope u like the rest DLIR AND ARI

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: tú eres mi pecado mortal. (you are my mortal sin.)

great chapter I laughed most of that and though omg edward is such a guy.. HA HA HA.. loving it girls..


And Happy Birthday :)



Author's Response:

LOL Edward is such a guy :) I had a blast writing this chapter. We're so glad you like it! We really appreciate all of your support. Thanks so much for your review BB!

 

Thanks for DLIR B-Day wish :)

 

x0x0x0x0x0x

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Use Somebody

oh crap.....



Author's Response:

shit is right....hehehe.....xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Thank you..Thank you..Thank you..part 1

oooh bribing :)

 

great chapter girls :)



Author's Response:

and my bribing worked hahahah part 2 is coming .......................

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sinners

that was hillarious..

great work girls :)



Author's Response:

Thank you......Ari is hilarious....i just add to it.....xoxooxxo hope you like part 2 xoxoxoxo

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Save your pennies

oooh can't wait for the next chapter

great work xxx



Author's Response:

:) We are working on the next chapter now! Well more like I'm working on it. DLIR has been busy and is done with her part. So everyone is waitin on my slow ass :) But I'm workin on it as fast as I can!

Thank you for your review!

x0x0x0x0x0x

Ari & DLIR

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Truth Lies Beneath part 1

okay this ball is a BAAAAAAAAAADDDDDD idea... LOL

Can I tell Bella now "she probably doesn't want to attend that" LOL

and the hits just keep on coming... and no.. sadly I haven't been drinking :)



Author's Response:

actually Bella does want to attend the ball hahahah .......trust me part 2 will knock ur socks off....

 

teaser

 

I searched the crowd around me, as I continued to walk towards the dance floor. The beat of the song fueled any emotions I was starting to feel. It grew stronger by the second, the words now increasing the desire and passion I was desperate to have.



I stopped at the edge of the dance floor, turning in a slow circle when I felt him. His fingers slipped over my waist, pulling me into him as he wrapped his arms around my chest. His face slipped over my shoulder as we both inhaled one another’s presence.



His chest vibrated electricity up my back and spine as we just stood, together. “God I missed you,” he spoke into my hair as my eyes rolled back at the sound of his voice. I grabbed his hand in mine, bringing it up to my lips and pressing a kiss upon it.



His skin was warm under my lips. I kissed his hand again before I turned to face him. My knees shook weak as my eyes met his. The green in his eyes were breath taking against his black satin mask.



My fingers slid up to play with the hair on the back of his neck as he took a moment to look down my body. He licked his lips as his eyes made their way back up, I smirked at him once our eyes met once again.



“You look gorgeous,” he leaned down and kissed my lips. I held his neck tighter, pushing his mouth into me as I deepened our kiss. I pushed my hips into his, starting to move my body slowly to the rhythm of the song.



Neither of us slowed or stopped our kiss as we began to dance seductively. Te amo…then she put my hands around my waist…oh she cried…Te Amo…



I broke our kiss, taking each of his hands in mine as I swayed my hips back and forth, allowing him to watch me dance for him. “Don’t it mean ‘I love you.’?” I sang along with the song. “I think it means ‘I love you’.”



I tilted my head back, allowing my hair to cascade down as he lowered his lips to kiss up and down my neck. I didn’t give a shit who was watching. It was just me and Spartan, enjoying our reconciliation.

Pets: Bebe by Maren Smith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 172]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Welcome to Bebe’s world, where for centuries human beings have been the focal point of the exotic pets trade.  But now, the government has declared humans an endangered species, shutting off the supply from the wilds of Earth and leaving only those who are born into captivity available as pets.

Meet Bebe, taken from her captive mother at a tender age, she is now the companion of monsters.  She has been pampered, loved and cared for all her life.  She has never seen Earth, never known the hardships of life in the wild like the humans living in the nature preserves.  And yet, life is change, and for Bebe, there is no escaping this one irrefutable, universal fact: An overprotective parent is a good pet’s worst nightmare.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Fantasy, Erotica, NaNoWriMo, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 106 Read Count: 10838
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Pets: Bebe

awww... it really does make you think about them being a dog... and what our dogs think when we leave them like that..

This world you created really makes yout think.. can't wait until the next installment :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

you should post the link :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74031
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- When It All Went Wrong

Okay I am looking forward to where this is going. :)



Author's Response:

I am so glad because the story is just turning in my head begging to be put to paper (if not for RL and big girl responsibilities, this would be completely written by now). 

Thanks for the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Bad Things Come In Three's

oooh nice chapter.. I didn't expect Esme...



Author's Response:

I know, but I needed to off her for this story to work.  Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- A Race Against Time

hmmm.... I have no clue.. I need to keep reading :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- Exodus

hmmm this is really good... keep up the good work.. 1 more chapter to go before I am caught up :(



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- And Then There Were Three

hmmm I am liking where this is going.. can't wait for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

I am glad you are sticking with me.  I will do my best to keep you interested.  I will have the next chapter up sometime next week.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Choices

oh... it really is doom and gloom at the moment.. poor cullens :(



Author's Response:

It is for now, but it will start getting better soon.  I promise.  Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Final Goodbyes and Reunions

yeah I am not heartless I cried :)

I'm going to put this up on recommended reading I hope you don't mind

xxx



Author's Response:

Of course I don't mind!  It means a lot that the story has touched you enough to inspire the rec.

Thanks so much for the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10- Which Life To Choose?

I have missed reading this.. great chapter ;)



Author's Response:

Welcome back!  Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska

oh this isn't good I don't like Alice's visions at all...

 



Author's Response:

No, Alice's visions sometimes give us too much time to think on the bad things that could happen.

Thanks for the review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills

awww that was so sad...



Author's Response:

I know.  But things are going to get happier soon. :)

Thanks for the review.

Till nxt time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

lol nice chapter I would put my hand up too and ask to be in the other car..



Author's Response:

LOL!  No kidding.  I think Rosalie would be the lesser of two evils in that case.

Thanks for ther review.

Till next time

Nickey

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors

LOL no it wasn't all doom and gloom... :)

nice chapter **smirk**..



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Till next time

Nickey

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

thanks to christagbanners.blogspot.com

Renee is cutting Bella off. Bella needs money and Edward has a lot of it, but Bella gets more than she expected. Can she handle it or will it be too much? lots of fluff and lemons consentual spankings. R&R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139157 Read Count: 223945
[Report This] Published: 04 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh this is an interesting idea :) have to keep reading...

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

omg LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

lol

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL people are creeped out by her calling him Daddy? bwahahaha omg that is hillarious.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I love how much of a teenager she is.. great job on that :)

Summary:

PostSecret Prompt Used: Everyone who knew me before 9/11 thinks I'm dead. 3rd Place Winner PostSecret Prompt Contest! SENSITIVE MATERIAL INCLUDED! PLEASE BE WARNED!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4371 Read Count: 1564
[Report This] Published: 17 Jan 2011 Updated: 17 Jan 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow what an amazing one-shot...

well done :)

Summary:

Bella and Alice are best friends trying to make the best of their situations. Alice has Edward and Bella has her teacher, Jasper, who has a few secrets of his own.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118047 Read Count: 33683
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh this is really interesting.. great start to a story very different. :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

ahhh I like how he knows  :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh no... Jasper is going to blame edward

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

hmmm this is really interesting I have to keep reading to see what happens.

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

awww... this is good... I can't stop reading :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LOL Alice

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Now Alice pushing so hard makes sense :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

nice lesson on trust :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

GOOD!!!!!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

poor bella..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I love jasper :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

lol

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

AWWWW

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

LOL

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

awww.... so cute..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

LOL the phone

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

oh god

 

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

awww....

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

ahh I am glad she is sore a little more realistic :)

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

oh the birth planning clinic oh hell..

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

go bella

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

nice! looking forward to more!!!

The Transfer by bannerday Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 389]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/43371/images/The-Transfer.jpg

Bella transfers to the University of Washington her junior year. The incredibly beautiful guy with the coppery-bronze hair is such a jerk when their lives first collide, but they can't ignore the fact that they are drawn to each other. However...Bella has a boyfriend back home and Edward is adamantly unavailable; a horrible experience in his past has made him reluctant to form any attachments or new friendships. But sometimes, when you least expect it, you find something you didn't even know you were looking for; something that will change your life irrevocably and unconditionally.

Lots of humor, tons of romance and occasional angst, featuring a rather nosy and intrusive Emmett, Rose, Jasper and Alice. Add a potential stalker into the mix to stir things up. Top it all off with undeniable sexual tension and eventually some very hottt sexy-times.

A big round of applause for Z-21 and Twi-Holoic for the amazing banners! *clap, clap, clap, clap, clap*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012
Chapters: 73 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 511972 Read Count: 89162
[Report This] Published: 13 Mar 2011 Updated: 09 Dec 2011
Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 24 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Putting The Move On

LOL oh this is a match made in heaven :)

Can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Hi TSO!

Glad you liked that first chapter. Yes...it is a match made in heaven, they just had to go through hell a little bit first. But they'll get there. ;)

Hope you are continuing to read. Drop me a line and let me know what you think. Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Settling Down, Settling In

LOL I will read on and off I don't have a lot of time to read these days so what I do is read a chapter... do work... read a chapter.. do MORE work...

sort of a reward :) ha ha

really enjoying this story so far :)



Author's Response:

Hi again, TSO!

Glad to know you are still reading and enjoying. Keep doing that bit of work in between so you keep earning your chapters. :) I mean...earning your Edward. What a great incentive Edward is to get things donw. ;)

Thganks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Shaking Things Up

yeah poor Jake needs to realise there is more to life :) go and live a little ha ha



Author's Response:

Hi bb!

Jake is a clingy boy right now. His girl has gone off and left him for the big wide world. :) There is more to life and Bella wants some of what it has to offer.

Thanks for the review once again.

-bannerday

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Ground Rules

LOL her running into edward is very entertaining... poor boy is going to wear bruises for days :)

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi TSO

Edward really should invest in body armor if Bella is going to keep running into him. then again...I'd probably do the same, just throw myself at him bodily in the hopes that he might notice me, or grasp me and I could say he "held me."

Thanks for the smile.

-bannerday

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Reorganizing

LOL might give Edward time to let his guard down though if he thinks she is taken :)

xx



Author's Response:

Exactly, TheSpoiltOne! If Edward thinks she is taken he won't have to worry about her putting the move on him. She'll leave him alone and then he can get to know her. Everything will be safe and worry free! But nooooooo-oooooh...we already know what's going to happen here. Well, at least I do, I wrote the damn story, you're reading and catching up...but I'm convinced you know where this is headed. ;)

Thanks for the review.

-bannerday

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Starting to Squirm

okay that is hillarious... bagpipe work out music



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA Yes...bagpipe music to slim your thighs and tone your butt and abs. Not that Alice needs to slim or tone anything. I can just see her jumping around in great abandon to nasally, whiny bagpipe music. I'm glad I was able to share that visual with you lovely readers. ;)

Thanks for the review once again.

-bannerday

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed
Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: You Call That Dancing?

OMG I was laughing so hard at Newton.. that is classic..



Author's Response:

And the Doofus of the Year award goes to......MIKE NEWTON!!!!!!!!!!!!! Glad you liked twirling, spinning, thrusting, bird-of-prey Newton making the move on Bella...which made Edward make a move on Bella as well---he just doesn't realize it yet. ;) Newton...such a lay-dees man!

Glad you enjoyed that little scene with Edward the Protector. Gah!

Thanks for reviewing once again.

-bannerday