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Two Blue Lines by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 706]
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Bella, a good girl, was dumped by her long-time boyfriend. Edward, a young doctor, is feeling suffocated by his father's plans. Waking up next to a stranger is a shock for a good girl. Seeing the girl of your dreams run out on you the morning after sucks for a nice guy. What if two blue lines will bind the two together for life? What if they can't even remember how they came to be? AH



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 138987 Read Count: 145373
[Report This] Published: 18 Jun 2014 Updated: 21 Dec 2015
Reviewer: kyla713 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Behing Closed Doors

After weeks of trying to find the opportunity to sit down and catch up, I finally have, and now I'm all ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh I need more. Hopefully I'll beable to remain caught up. Loving this story. These two are so adorable and I'm so glad Riley fucked up but that Bella is not all torn up about it either. She sees it for the dick move it was, though understandably hurt bythe betrayal. Good for her!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you found the time to read the story. And, yeah, if Riley hadn't fucked up there wouldn't be any story ;). See you next chapter.

Reviewer: kyla713 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Like a Fucked-Up Fairytale

Anxiously looking forward to the next chapter. Really enjoyed the peek into Edward's head. And no, I don't necessarily think its wrong of him to move on per se, since he knows that the odds of finding her with so little information to go on is very slim. Even though we obviously know that he will, he has no way of knowing that, and having a date or two when a girl he barely knows the name of is nowhere in sight, nor might he ever be... nothing with that

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing. Well, Edward will try to move on but I don't know how successful he can be when he's all hung up on Bella. We'll find out in chaper 4. But before that, we get a peek into Bella's head in chapter 3. See you then.

Reviewer: kyla713 Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Twist of Fate

Well.... yeah Riley is a collasal douchebag. At least she's not tied to him in any way anymore, but especially biologically. Pretty sad when the result of a one night stand is preferable! Definitely looking forward to then next chapter. Judging by the mention of a hidden bottle of Jack coming into play, should be interesting. 

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Riley's an ass. And I think Bella's quite relieved that she's not having his baby. Next chapter definitely will be interesting. I had a blast writing it. See you then.