Reviews by dbg
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 88020
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I finally found out how to post on this site. I needed to turn off the "use tunyMCE" button.

This is a great opening. It really brings me in. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great citrus. You are a great writer.

Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

The rougher the story got, the harder it was to read. I was hoping for a different ending, but I see where you were going.

The twist didn't add or change anything for me. I still felt bad for the situation and how it ended up.

Good writing though.

Summary:

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"Grrraaannngggeeerrrrr...." his voice called tauntingly. He was close. Too close. I ran faster, looking for somewhere to hide. I threw myself behind the first object I came across. "You can run, but you can not hide.."


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2444 Read Count: 2544
[Report This] Published: 17 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Apr 2010
Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1


Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105119
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Please please update.  Or let us know that you aren't writing anymore. Are you working on any of your stories on any sites?

Summary: Past Featured Story

A Fanging Howl-o-Ween to Remember

Banner by the awesomely creative LunarEclipse1

Summary:  Halloween night?  A full moon? With Billy Black volunteering his babysitting services, what could possibly happen?  Find out in A Fanging Howl-O-Ween to Remember.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Paul, Jacob/OC
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12224 Read Count: 1866
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Oct 2011
Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: A Fanging Howl-O-Ween to Remember

Great one shot. Good writing. A HEA that is funny and believable. Thanks.

Dark twilight's by may of rose 2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

were the Carpathian wold whit the twilight one. This a light costs over story. twilight name use. But it is in the Carpathian wold. Dark Edward. blood, lot of sex.over 18 to read.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 20439 Read Count: 8959
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Apr 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great. Opener, really draws me in.

Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218283
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - New Beginnings and First Dates

Awesome story. Most chapters I have tears in my eyes, a good cry. 

 

This is written very well. Good job.

 

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

Great first chapter, really draws me in.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 263011
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Trash Talking Turkey Day

Glad to get the story of the past. I was confussed.

 

I'm loving the story, but Alice and Rose are so mean, petty and one demential, they almost don't make sense.



Author's Response:

The pety sides of Alice and Rose does give resolution well I think, and I loved how we brought things full circle for them all. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered.  Thanks, Kasi~

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Illness and Surprises

What a precious chapter. So cute, the family xoming together.

I'm glad Gina finally got what she deserved.



Author's Response:

yeah me too, hated Gina~ 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered.  Thanks, Kasi~

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: First Times

Yes, Bella and the twins need to live with Edward.



Author's Response:

Yes they do! 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered.  Thanks, Kasi~

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: A Shocking Situation

This makes no sense. Rose shouldn't ask anything of Bella and Bella shouldn't get it. I know it is a plot point, but it bugs me.



Author's Response:

I know and it bugged us too, but rose knew to play on Bella's kindness. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered.  Thanks, Kasi~

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: The Faith Within

Why didn't Edward contact a lawyer and getting legal work going on the slander the newspaper was printing?



Author's Response:

I wanted to do this part alone to show people in another way how what the press writes hurts people... to bad it seems liek people care more about fictional characters than they do the actors who play them. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered.  Thanks, Kasi~

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Getting the Answers

I know it works, but I kind of feel icky with Sally realizing who Anothiny/Edward is.



Author's Response:

Yeah I know, but we had to make it so he had some kind of redemption, and I love how she was about it.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered.  Thanks, Kasi~

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Epilogue - Welcome to the Masen family

Great story. I love Jane being so protective of Bella and the kids.

 



Author's Response:

me too Jane rocks! 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and I am both blow away by the response this has garnered.  Thanks, Kasi~

Romany by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 184]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set in England mid 1800's. Edward and Bella live in different worlds, ruled by class and money, where prejudices influence and dictate who you can love. Can they overcome the stigma and gossip to be together?

We can’t help who we fall in love with; however we are responsible for how we react to that knowledge or how we treat that person.

Thanks to fab betas RAH07890 & js18

Awesome banner by ML

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: To Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78582 Read Count: 45739
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2012 Updated: 05 Oct 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great story, full of intrigue and emotion.



Author's Response:

Ahhh, thanks for the reviews and I'm glad you're enjoying. :)

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm glad mrs. Cullen heard what Tonya said.

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Yeah Edward, making a stand.

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Good story.

Summary:

Will they accept each other? Or will they fight what is inevitable… Both the same yet so very different, one a hot head the other calm and collected… can opposites attract? (This is a few weeks after she slapped Paul and before she jumps off a cliff).


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Paul
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3149 Read Count: 1704
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start, wish there was more.

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 660777
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

Love this chapter. I can imagine Bella baking and shopping for someone she didn't know just to be supportive.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Ginny's in debt over her head.  Can Lucius help bail her out?  At what cost?  Contains side pairings of SS/HG and HP/DM.  Very adult content, includes both slash and femslash.


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy, Hermione/Lucius Malfoy, Hermione/Other Male Character, Hermione/Severus Snape
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 57 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109708 Read Count: 46550
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Jun 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

Well done. I love the Christmas Eve scene, 17 people, 2 bathrooms and one house.

Author's Response:

Thanks!!  I'm so glad you liked it.

A Slow Boil by kts Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 190]
Summary: Past Featured Story

a slow boil

Bella's an exchange student hoping to find a job to keep herself employed for the summer, so that she can stay on at an exclusive University. Her best job prospect is a part-time housekeeping position with one Mr. Cullen.


Categories: All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78922 Read Count: 59581
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Jul 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Great story. It has me intrigued and enjoying this unique May/Dec romance

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great story. I love it and how their relationship evolved. I'm glad you explained so much of why they did thing a certain way and also had each of them grow and change.

Great job!

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love the recipes. Is great to have them. I will think you you and your Edward and Bella when I read them.

Summary: Past Featured Story

really hot, shirtless guy, hot chick, snowy backdrop and the always awesome fire

                                                             Banner by: Ellie Wolf

"Don't you understand, he'll die if you dont't!" Iz just shrugged a light sholder at her, "I understand perfectly. What you fail to understand is how little I care. What happens to him is in no way my problem."

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Action, Adventure, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116973 Read Count: 94675
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Jul 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great opening. The first two chapters are awesome and just pull me in. I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

This chapter was a little confusing. How did Alice cause fire to erupt ? I'm not sure what happened. How did Aro read Izzy?

Author's Response:

I am so sorry I haven't responed to this sooner. Life has been a little hectic... the only one of those questions I will answer is the one with Aro... he is a soul reader in this story, not a mind reader. He can read Bella because she has a soul... plus, she isn't a shield in this... she has preservation as a gift.

Summary:

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A lot of you have been asking about this story, so here it is, Snape's Room in the Basement.  Ginny hears Snape alone in his room at Grimmauld Place.  Sneaking downstairs to spy on him, they start off on a strange and forbidden relationship.  Can they fall in love despite all the obstacles?


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Severus Snape/Ginny Weasley
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36077 Read Count: 20631
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2012 Updated: 24 Jul 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Yeah! The epilogue is good and Snape didn't die. This is a great story. I have so enjoyed it. Thank you. I'm glad you found this site.

It took me over a year to find out how to post reviews to this site. You might want to put something on your home page. The key is to click the box and remove the default x of " Use tinyMCE".

Great story.

Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

No.. I was hoping Snape wouldn't die in this version. I love the pairing of Ginny and Snape.

Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great story. I love the girls going to the bathroom together and depending on each other.

Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, great opening.

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

mhnf


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131903
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow, terrific story. I can't wait to read more and hear more of the past story.

Great chapters.

Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love the teasing build up and how cute Bella is when learning to drive.

Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This chapter was a little weird. It started out awesome, but the whole goth doctor Edwar's ex seemed to contrived.

Blood Ties by cullens_pet Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 183]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She winced as he pressed her against a tree, the bark digging painfully into her back. She shuddered as he pressed his nose against the column of her throat. She struggled ineffectually against his superior strength. He didn't even look like he was trying. "Hold still, Granger," he murmured against her neck. "Let me go!" she snarled. "I don't know what kind of sick game this is but I don't want to play." "This is no game, Mudblood," he replied, his tongue lapping against her skin.

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Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Hermione /Draco Malfoy
Genre: Horror, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 41446 Read Count: 72566
[Report This] Published: 11 Aug 2012 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Epilogue

Story was much better once I got into it. At first I was so mad at Draco for Tricking Herminone.   

 

Thank you

Summary:

Set in the mid to late 1800's louisiana. Bella and her family must make things work..when her Brother and sister-in-law disappear, only to re-appear as something else...how will she take to the changes? and who is this mysterious man they bring to the ranch? and what will happen when the one he escaped from comes for him?

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90446 Read Count: 14291
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Misery Loves Company

Awesome story. I can't wait to read more

Author's Response:

glad ur enjoying the story. it was one of my favorites to write. thanx for the review.

Undecided Fate by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary:

Banner by Ellie Wolf

Fear and uncertainty will drive humans to do the strangest things; like wander down a highway alone, talk to strangers and throw caution to the wind. When you don’t know any better, when you have no idea that there are things to be wary of, fate intervenes, even if it has no idea what to do with you.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40877 Read Count: 27478
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm enjoying the story.  This chapter was off, confusing, and didnt fit -for me.

 I' ll keep readings. I'm likeing the pair.

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95323
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: dbg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, great start. I can see the situation happening from both view points. Alice is a good friend to help and watch Liam.