Reviews by Irish_charm
Summary:

Bella didn't like surprises. Her life was safe, predictable, and she knew what to expect until fate brought her breast cancer, and everything changed.  This is a story about love and hope because that's what life is all about.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62917 Read Count: 23640
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh what a miracle. 

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Date: 22 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

What a bright life. I wish you the brightest future. 

Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2243]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan.
They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats.
There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 176 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253102 Read Count: 661072
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 06 Oct 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 76: Edward

http://www.alibaba.com/product-gs/392740425/Sexy_Lingerie_Valentine_Ribbon_Big_Bow.html

 

Here's what I think Bella should get Edward for his birthday......

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Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

The tattoo choices were so symbolic of these two. It was really a thoughtful romantic gesture. 

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Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 75: Bella

I love your song choices, but are amazing songs

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 118: Chapter 119: Bella

Oh Bella is such a tease. I hope Edward is alone when he reads that message or someone might get the wrong idea. Lol

 

Im really glad you left Robert and Kristen's personal lives alone. We don't know The whole story and we never will. They deserve the privacy to work things out on their own. 

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home Prequel: Edward

Tanya is a selfish cow. I can't believe someone would do something like that. Here's Edward fighting for our country and she can't be honorable and tell him the truth. I love what the boys have cooked up so far. Serves her right. And there is no way he should send her picture back. He should send everyone's but hers. 

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Coming Home Prequel: Bella

Bella is really sweet. My cousin is active duty and he always says they appreciate anything anyone takes the time to send something. 

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

They are really going somewhere with the letters. I'm guessing they are going to be halfway in love with each other before they even meet. 

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 7: Bella

Cheeky Bella. 

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Date: 29 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 11: Bella

Wow. Bella has really uped the game. 

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 13: Bella

Okay whenever anyone writes about a song I am obsessed with finding it and checking it out. But I couldn't find Fall. Does it have another name or is it published by someone else as well. 



Author's Response:

Nope. It's on YouTube. You can find it here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VWp7tPe77Jk

:)

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 16: Edward

It's really sweet that he is taking into account how hard it would be on Bella if they start something. 

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 17: Bella

Yeah! She admitted it to herself and others. That is the first step. Lol

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 24: Edward

I have a feeling Bella's dream of being pushed up against the front door just might come true. 

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Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 26: Edward

Very sexy dirty talk. 

 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 29: Bella

Poor Christopher. Thank god he had someone who cared and didn't look Tge other way because it was easier on them. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 32: Edward

Edward really is sweet. I want one just like him. You know where I can find one but a little older you know between 30-40 would be great. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 38: Edward

It's so sad that Edward has had no body for so long. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 39: Bella

Mmmmm! Broccoli cheddar soup. I think I am going to have to go to Panera's to get some soon. They make the best and their rolls are really good too. Tgere goes my diet. Lol

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 40: Edward

He's calling her love. *Swoons*

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 41: Bella

OMG! Now Edward, Emmett and Jasper are going to have 5 odd months to plan and sceam on what they are going to do to Mike when they get home. There could be a whole lot of fun had at Mike's expense. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 42: Edward

Now that's what I call the long arm of the law. Lol

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 43: Bella

The guys really are great. 

I'm a little surprised that Bella doesn't have the class make pictures and letters for the guys. My daughters class 'adopted' a soldier and they sent cards and we would all pitch in and send a care package every few months. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 44: Edward

Hopefully that will be the worst of the injuries that Edward will ever get. My cousin was hurt during a training mission he broke his arm after 2 surgeries they realized part of the bone was dead and had to remove a 6 inch piece of his Ulna. He was given a honorable medical discharge. He did 3 tours overseas and nothing happened, but was hurt at training if it is going to happen at least it was minor. Hopefully that was Edward's one and done. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 45: Bella

I'm so glad that they all have each other. It's much easier to handle when there are people there to help shoulder the burden. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 46: Edward

That was amazing. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 47: Bella

Finally we're getting to the important questions. I was wondering how long it would take for one of them to broach the subject. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 48: Edward

God that my heart swell and it wasn't even directed towards me :(

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 51: Bella

I hope that once Edward is home he can change Bella's mind about once upon a time. It is one of the best shows on right now. 

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Date: 01 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 54: Edward

:( I'm all out of chapters. I guess I'll just have to do some housework now. :(

 

I have to agree with Edward about Renee. I wouldn't be able to stay away from my daughter I don't know how she can. 

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 55: Bella

I wonder what kind of stories Tge boys would have about a drugged Edward? I'm sure they will have some fun stories to tell Bella at the shooting range. 

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 56: Edward

Wow!

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Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 58: Edward

That was the best Independence Day present ever. 

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Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 62: Edward

Happy Independence Day! 🇺🇸 

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 63: Bella

Oh silly silly Bella. 

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 64: Edward

Good for Edward. I'm glad that he told her it as it was. 

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 66: Edward

They are finally back to their loving foreplay. 

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 67: Bella

Being on a training base I would think they may have a little more free time. A friend was a drill sargent at Ft Bragg. He had almost a normal swing shift job. Sure there would be 72 hours where he never made it home but for the most part he was home every day. I hope the guys realize this and the girls get to spend time there. 

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 68: Edward

This chapter was great. I loved all the teasing. 

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 69: Bella

I'm surprised the girls haven't had a pow wow about how they are going to surprise the boys. There is no way that I would wait. 

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 70: Edward

Ah the girls are the greatest. 

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 73: Bella

That's the scariest time waiting for their answer. Lol

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 74: Edward

That's great. Who knew phone sex could be so fulfilling. 

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 174: Chapter 175: Outtake 1

That was really heart warming. Nothing could replace his mother but it's nice to see that all is to lost. 

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 77: Bella

Awww. I was hoping for some fun girl plans for suprising the guys. I guess I'll have to wait and be patient. 

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 78: Edward

The slow burn will hopefully make it so much better. 

 

Sarge is amazing he can go from sweet to sexy in 30 seconds flat. Lol

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 79: Bella

I loved how Bella put Edward off the trail.

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 80: Edward

Thank god Edward hates to see her upset. Otherwise she would of faced and gave away Tge surprise. 

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 84: Edward

I'm practically giddy with excitement over the thought of tomorrow. 

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 85: Bella

Poor Bella is going to give herself a heart attack with all her worrying. 

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Chapter 86: Edward

The girls know Emmett all too well. They just knew he would try to get them to a strip club. Too funny. 

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 87: Bella

They are so sneaky. 

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 88: Edward

That was really amazing. It was so intense and just so real. 

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 88: Chapter 89: Bella

I'm glad they cooled this down. Rushing wouldn't of been as fun for the first time. 

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 89: Chapter 90: Edward

WOW! That was hot. 

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 90: Chapter 91: Bella

They are so perfect together.... It almost makes me feel bad for wanting Bella's man.... Almost

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 92: Edward

That was so perfect. After all the time, anguish, and heart felt months they were communicating this as the perfect start to the rest of their lives. I can't wait until they find out in person each others little quirks. 

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 92: Chapter 93: Bella

That was really romantic. 

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 94: Chapter 95: Bella

I am so glad that Bella is preparing herself now for what is to come instead of pushing it into the back of her mind. At least this way she will be a little more prepared. 

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 96: Edward

Always with the panties. Lol

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 97: Bella

Sarge is pissed. Too bad they won't be able to use that in a naked way. 

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Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 98: Edward

I love how Sarge turns to mush for Bella. 

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Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 116: Edward

That was incredibly sweet and heartbreaking. 

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 116: Chapter 117: Bella

Hopefully this will be the hardest goodbye they have. It's almost over hopefully. Maybe they will even get to see each other again before October. 

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Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 117: Chapter 118: Edward

The guys handled things just like you would expect. Cool and mildly broody. 

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 125: Bella

Of course that would turn him on. Guys are suckers for girl on girl contact. 

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 126: Edward

Things are moving along so nicely. 

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 126: Chapter 127: Bella

I wonder what else was sent. 

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 127: Chapter 128: Edward

I'm glad Irina was such a smart woman. She was completely right and Edward and Bella are both going to be able to cherish those things for a very long time. 

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 130: Edward

I can sooo see the guys sending someone to her school. Especially if you let Emmett plan things. 

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 130: Chapter 131: Bella

Naughty picture time. I wonder if Edward will be jealous the girls got to see Bella all sexy. 

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward

Yeah. I'm so glad he's going to her. Best birthday ever. 

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 135: Chapter 136: Edward

Who needs dinner when she has Edward. 

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 133: Chapter 134: Edward

Awww! That was great. Not only did Bella get a wonderful suprise but the kids did too. I will never forget how awed my daughters class was when their adopted soldier came for a suprise visit. 

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Date: 02 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 134: Chapter 135: Bella

God they are so amazing together. 

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Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 137: Chapter 138: Edward

Such a nice day. 

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 140: Chapter 141: Bella

So was there story of where they were during 9/11 based off of where you were? I was at Temple Univ. when it happened. Didn't find out until almost 11:00 am because we were in a class that started at 7:40. Our whole school was evacuated because we were considered a target. It funny how after all these years I still remember every moment. 

 

Wow that was really dirty. Loved it. 



Author's Response:

No, both Deb and I were out of school already. I was getting ready to take my son to preschool when it happened. :(

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 142: Edward

That was a really sweet birthday. 

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Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 143: Bella

I'm glad Bella's okay. 

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 143: Chapter 144: Edward

I don't remember her story. I am surprised I remember my name sometimes. 

 

Emmett is great. I wonder if he'll really hide the games? Because truthfully it may be more painful if he does. I'm sure Emmett would be a big baby about it. 

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 144: Chapter 145: Bella

I love there countdown so cute. 

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 146: Chapter 147: Bella

Hey! Where was our tissue warning?

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 147: Chapter 148: Edward

Amazing. But there was still no tissue warning. 

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 148: Chapter 149: Bella

Wow. I'm shocked they lasted that long. Lol

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Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 151: Chapter 152: Edward

Now the guys can truly. Will Edward follow in his fathers or his mothers footsteps. Maybe Miss Mary's husbands story will inspire him. 

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 152: Chapter 153: Bella

They are so incredibly sweet. 

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Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 154: Edward

Edward is such a guy. He had to mention getting her naked. Lol

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 167: Chapter 168: Edward

I dont know who would be a scarier shopping partner. Renee? Or Alice?

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 174: Epilogue

This was truly a amazing story. I am very honored to of had the chance to read this amazing story. 

Summary:

Edward is getting married in a week, his best friend isn't returning his calls and ignoring his texts. Will Alice's parting words help Edward figure out just who he can't live without his future wife or his best friend. Can he make up his mind before he says I Do?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2666 Read Count: 676
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Dead Man Walking.

Poor Heidi that had to be embarrassing, but Better she find out now then 5 years and 2 kids later. 

 

Im so happy that Edward had to guts to walk away and it was amazing that Bella was there. 

Summary:

"It seems neither of us could keep our promise." Edward smiled sitting cross legged in front of me. He was dressed in his uniform looking as handsome as they day I last saw him.

 

"I tried, Edward." I whispered looking up into his green eyes. "I've missed you."

 

He smiled reaching his hand out for mine. "I've missed you to my love."

 

"Are you here to take me to heaven?" I asked knowing that was the only option if he was here.

 

He nodded his head sadness in his eyes. "Yes."

 

"Will I get to stay with you?"

 

He smiled and squeezed my hand gently as he pulled me to my feet. "Yes."

 

For the first time I felt something other than emptiness. It had been awhile but I knew the things I was feeling were joy, love and hope. Thing's I had avoided my whole life. I looked down at myself and saw I had the body of a 19 year old, I was wearing the clothes I'd worn the day I said goodbye to my soldier and my hair was no longer grey, it was a rich chocolate brown.

 

I looked back at the old lady sleeping peacefully in her 9 thousand dollar bed, and knew she had had enough of this world. She wanted to go home to her soldier, she wanted to know real love and hope for a future that could have them together always.

 

"I'm ready." I said looking back at Edward. "Take me home, soldier."


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2958 Read Count: 405
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Take Me Home Soldier.

That was a touching story. I wish I had thought to grab tissues first. It was truly beautiful and I'm really sorry to see only one review. 

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104501
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21- What feels right

Congratulations on the baby. Take the time now to have fun and presue all your passions. Because your time will soon be someone else's. but truthfully it is the best feeling ever. Enjoy it. 

 

I am so glad Edward finally broke things off with Tanya. I know in his head its been over for a while but it's nice to finally have closure. I had to laugh when he kicked everyone out. I'm sure it was very liberating. And I'm sure Bella was pleased as well.

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9- Family time

I want to shake the two of them. They both still love each other but they are both just to stubborn to admit it to themselves or each other. 

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Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20- Hide and seek

Amazing. This story really is brilliant. 

 

You know that Bella is going to be in Edwards arms when they wake up. I wonder who is going to find them? The girls? Esme and Carlisle? Emmett and Rosalie? Maybe even Tanya? She does have to come back for her car. 

 

Its sad that Edward had to pretend with Tanya today. But really I'm glad he wasn't a jerk and just broke up with her in front of everyone. I hope he can do it next time. 

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8- The first day

I have really enjoyed this story. Can't wait to see where it goes. 



Author's Response:

thank you for all your reviews!!! I loved reading those! Made me want to write more!

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7- It is the east, and Juliet is the sun

I can see where everything went wrong. Neither one of them realized the double meaning behind their words. I hope they can get back together in time.

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6- The beginning of the end

Ah the joy of a pill baby. 

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5- His girls, angels & muses

It was nice to see that they didn't just fall into a sexual relationship right away. It makes it mean more that they waited.

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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3- Edward's side

These poor kids. My heart is breaking for them. But at the same time I can't help but be proud at how well they are really handling it.