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You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104501
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4- Doing what's right

Edward is a very honorable young man. I'm so glad that he really truly loves this baby. A lot of guys older then him have a hard time loving the baby even if they are in a relationship. 



Author's Response:

thank you so much! I'm so glad you were able to see that side of Edward. :)

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2- Dropping the bomb

Well that went really good considering. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- That hot, drunken boy

Wow that was fast. I know the story was going to be about getting pregnant right away but I never thought it would be from a one night stand..

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow! This chapter packed a lot of hurt. 

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Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27- Change of plans

What a wonderful gift Alice gave them by taking the girls. I hope the good news allows Bella to work from home. Or maybe they are opening a new office in LA

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10- Explanations

OMG! I love Emma. She can see what her parents can't. I can not wait to see what she does to try and get them together again. If I didn't know better I would swear Juliet broke her arm on purpose. 



Author's Response:

:D I'm really proud of both Emma and Juliet and how they turned out to be! They're sneaky, bright little girls, but of course Juliet's accident wasn't planned. They're not THAT desasperate ^^;; lol

thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11- Moving On

Alright these little girls really need to start laying it on thick to get Edward and Bella back together. Hopefully Esme and Alice will help. 

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

God Tanya is just digging her own grave and she doesn't even realize it. I can't wait to see Edwards reaction to her last statement. Lol

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Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13- The jet set life of my ex-husband

Yeah. Bella is starting to see it. I hope she gets brave enough (or drunk enough) to tell him how she feels. I have a feeling Tanya is going to start something and I can't wait. Alice and Bella are right no one is that perfect. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14- Part of his world

Oh. Is Edward going to go all cave man on Bella and James? That would just finish the night off perfectly. Lol

 

Julie giving the chewed up food to Tanya was great. I actually had to take a few minutes to stop laughing. And I have to admit that I two have eaten food that has been spit out of my daughters mouth. I guess it is a parent thing. And Bella is so right if tanya can't handle that then there is no way she is ready for a baby, because lets face it they can be pretty gross a lot of the time. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15- Fireworks

Edward is good. Getting the girls to do his dirty work was amazing. It was the perfect way to get the job done and keep his hands clean. 

 

I loved this chapter it was funny, sweet and made my stomach flutter seeing them as a family. The love between them is amazing I wish that they would get their heads out of their asses and realize how they feel and what they could have. I can see a little boy I their future.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17- Confrontation

They finally talked. I'm glad that they have finally gotten all that off their chests and spoke of their love from so long ago. Now they just need to be truthful about how their feelings have never changed. 

 

Im glad they were interrupted though. Edward really needs to end things with Tanya. He can't prove to Bella how much he loves her if he has Tanya waiting in the wings.  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16- Confused

Yeah. I knew the password had something to do with Bella. And I'm glad Emmett pointed things out to Edward. Because truthfully Edwards a guy and he could of realized it to late. Plus he really needs to let Tanya go because he is being dishonest not only to her but to himself as well. They both deserve better. He can't kept Tanya around because he is scared of never getting Bella back. 

 

I love this story it is truly amazing. I love the complex characters and how well everyone moves around each other. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18- A long way to go

Edward needs to slip away after Alice's house and go talk with Tanya. He ford my want to be with her and he needs to let her go. 

 

I love this story. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19- Eagerly awaiting... not!

The poor guy can't catch a break. Tanya knows that he's done with her and she is trying to keep her claws in him. Not that I blame her. I feel bad for her because she is a nice person and she's about to be hurt bad. But with her showing up like this Edward is going to be forced to play nice for the end of the night. Then after everyone goes he can pull her aside and break things off. 

 

 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 15 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25- Our happy place

Oh that was brilliant. There is going to be a lot of pain and uncertainty in the beginning. But they will make it through as long as they are honest with each other. 

 

And i I love the cheesy lines. Lol

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22- Terrified

While yes this chapter was a little disappointing that nothing else happened between them it really was great. We now know Bella's fears and Edwards as well. I love that he wants to take her on a date. It's about time. Sure they have the girls who are their top priority but they need to make them a priority as well.  

Congrats on the little girl. I'm sure she is born by now. And good luck on trying to find time to write. As I'm sure you are finding out it may be hard to find time to shower alone (I had started bring my daughter along, she loved it) let alone be able to string along whole sentences at one time. 

Enjoy her. We will all be here waiting when you can pick up the time to finish it. 

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Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28- Normalcy

Oh another baby in the family. And I love the girls idea for the book. Bella could write the screenplay. 

 

I really hope hope she doesn't leave. But if she does I hope it's not for long. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23- The Date

Oh it is never to late for love. I'm so glad they are finally talking. 

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Date: 01 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24- I promise I'm worthy

I absolutely love Carlisle. I can't even be mad that he ruined their kiss because it just made the next one so much better. They really are meant for each other. I wonder how long their coming separation is going to be before they crack. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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"Divorce is like an amputation: you survive it, but there's less of you."  -Margaret Atwood

Bella and Edward Cullen; they were the envy of couples everywhere. Until the Denali sisters came into their lives, that is. Did Edward cheat on Bella? Or is there more to the story than what it seems?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 147580 Read Count: 61721
[Report This] Published: 17 Jun 2012 Updated: 21 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It makes me sad but proud at the way Bella handled herself. Yeah maybe the sexy outfit was a little much but she stood up for herself and wouldn't take any excuses. But I'm really glad Edward didn't deny it. So to me that means he's not a complete waste of space. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm glad Bella is in a good place even if she doesn't have the best taste in men. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh it is sort of sad seei g them together. It's plain to see they still love each other. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm so glad that she is able to remember those times now. Because even if she never gets back with Edward. (Which I'm really hoping she does.) at least she will be able to look back with happiness and not just grief. Esme really is brilliant. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I hate Bella for that. It was almost just as bad as what Edward did. Bella knew he still loves her and she used him anyway. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Alright I don't really hate her. And truthfully making him work for it is the right things to do and I'm glad that she is thinking if herself first here while going for what she really wants. 

And I wonder if Edward is Eric's silent partner. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I hope Bella doesn't let the power go to her head to much. I hope she doesn't abuse the power Edward I trusted in her. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

There are so many possibilities it makes me glad I don't have to wait. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh shit. Bella beating Tanya's ass is just what Bella needs to feel better. I hope she goes for it. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm so glad Bella confronted him. I'm glad she kicked Tanya's ass, so to speak. Now she has to drag the truth out of Edward. I think he got evolved with the mob somehow. I think Tanya's dad was mob and it followed him to Chicago one if the biggest mob cities. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Bella is very strong and truthfully I don't blame her for the choice she made. Really there was no choice at all. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

It's sort of sad that Bella had to lose her friendship over this. But at least it's happening now. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It's so good that they are starting over slowly. I think this is going to help them both truly heal. 

 

And yeah another baby. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love how Bella got thru her first day. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm so glad that Bella is doing what is best for her. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh god. Edward is not going to forgive himself for this, hopefully Bella will be able to help him get over this. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

God I hope Ben isn't involved with James or Edward's life in Chicago somehow. You introduced Riley and that is scary. Then Tyler dies. I mean was it really suicide? He didn't seem to have a drug problem. And that is the easiest way to murder someone and get away with it. And from what I gather James is good.  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I know that it is a real problem, it's just never talked about. I'm glad you are shedding just a little light on such a horrible problem. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Guys have so much pride that over 90% goes unreported and its almost always harder for a man to prove rape then it is a women. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Bella took it very well considering. I'm glad she made it known that she wasn't mad at him for what happened. Just that she was mad he lied. 

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Wow. I can't wait to see Charlie in action. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

You know I don't think Riley is really who he says he is. I think it's James. 

 

 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Why does Tanya not feel right? Is she really that smart. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

This chapter was great. But your comment at the end was even better. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23 EPOV The Incident

Edward asking Charlie permission to marry Bella was amazing. Really funny. 

Mcharlie kicking Edwards ass not so much. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26

God that was hot and they didn't even have sex again. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

It is amazing that Rosalie and Edward will be civil for Bella and Emmett. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

What a amazing chapter. So much was revealed and settled. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

Wow! They took not just one major step but they put everything on the line. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

God you have so many possibilities there. I'm not sure the she is Tanya though. Irena is still out there. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

They really need to stop all that. But I'm glad at least one of them smartened up. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Well I'm really sad that I got that one right. Poor Edward all this time his worse fear has been coming true. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Oh god! 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

And even if he never walls again that doesn't mean he won't be able to have sex or father a child. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Epilogue I

No jumping. Just glad they are together and happy. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36: Epilogue II

That was such a amazing story. Just what was needed when your snowed in. 

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Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Fandom Against Juvenile Diabetes outtakes

Emmett is crazy. I love it. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Outtake I

It's so good to see 'real' characters. It's not all perfect. 

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Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Outtake II

Wow! What a homecoming. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

That was amazing. 

Love Life Family by Carliec Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 59]
Summary:

Bella has her hands full being a single mom, her career, her son's deadbeat father and interfering parents. How will she cope when her high school crush reappears in her life?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, To Read (Geddy), Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83389 Read Count: 64139
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2012 Updated: 27 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed the first chapter. There was a lot going on and I am looking forward to seeing where you take it. 

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It was great to see everyone getting together. I wonder what will happen after their crash meeting. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I would of been on the phone reporting his ass for child  endangerment. Stupid jerk. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

This is going to get even messier I can just feel it. 



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Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan works as a nurse at Cook County Hospital in the ER. She's older and desperate for love. It's hindered by her shy personality and plump body. Her father, whom she lives with, teases her relentlessly for being fat and single.

Edward Cullen, thirty-three, is hired as a doctor in the ER. He's getting over a divorce. He moved to Chicago to be closer to his family: sister, Rosalie, and brother, Jasper. Rosalie is younger than Edward by ten years and is struggling with an eating disorder brought on by a heinous rape of her ex-boyfriend. Jasper, twenty-seven, is finishing up his doctorate in history.

Bella is charmed by this new doctor in the ER. He's kind and thinks about his patients and maintains a friendly rapport with the nurses and orderlies. Edward is intrigued by the sad nurse who does her job efficiently but doesn't have a sparkle in her eyes.

Will she allow Dr. Cullen into her life or will she let her insecurities get in the way of her happiness. Perhaps, Dr. Feelgood can write her a prescription. A prescription for love...

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 331720 Read Count: 419155
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

The girls really had it hard separating like that. But I'm so happy for both of them. I hope Bella can let go of the money issue. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love Garrett. I hope he and Alice can make it work they both deserve happiness. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm glad that Jasper's finally understood what an asshole he was and is looking to better himself. 

It's great that Dr volture has so much faith in Bella. I'm glad that he is encouraging her she didn't get enough of that growing up.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

While yes the court sentence was not real realistic, it was damn close and we got the result and vindication that every rape victim should get. So yeah. I'm glad jasper showed up. It shows that he has grown up a little bit. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

That was the best birthday present for Edward. I don't know how Bella will top that one. Unless next year she'll be able to tell him he's going to be a daddy. 

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Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh I just knew there was going to be a confrontation at the hospital and they would take the ER hostage. 

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Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

See I had faith. I knew you weren't evil. 

 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Bella. With all these people talking down to her it's no wonder she feels the way she does. She is such a sweet and caring person who won't stand up for herself because she doesn't think she deserves any better. 

 

Im glad that Edward sees her for Tge amazing person she is. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow! Poor Rose. I have to admit I peaked at your blog before reading this and I was horrified when I saw Rose's picture and the works minus 20lbs. I wasn't sure what you were getting at with that but now it all makes sense. 

 

Edward is so caring. I'm really glad that he is already so caring of Bella. She really deserves it. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Edward really is a miracle worker. First Rosalie started to make some progress. Yes I know it won't be that easy. I myself suffered from a eating disorder at one point in my life so I knew its not going to be smooth sailing. Then he shows Bella kindness and she starts to realize that she deserves better. I also know her journey won't be easy. I'm sure there will be a lot of guilt associated with her leaving her father. But she deserves this. She deserves happiness.  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love all the new characters. Emmett and Alice are great. I can't wait to see them with everyone. Now that Edward is working on Bella's mental health maybe it will give her the push she needs to feel better about herself. 

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Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The whole Charlie situation is just sad. It sounds like he was a good man once. Losing his wife, the his job, then his leg turned him into a butter old man. Maybe now that he has hit rock bottom, or he will when he realizes Bella won't help him anymore. Maybe he will realize what a monster he became and get the help he needs. 

Im so glad that Bella is starting to realize her true worth. Size doesn't matter it's the person on the inside that's important. 

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Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm so glad that everyone is moving forward. 

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Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow what a date. 

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I hope that Bella realizes what she has. 

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella really is coming a long way. She finally realized what was holding her back and is doing something about it. The girls are great, I can't believe they dragged Bella to a sex shop. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm really glad that jasper got his head out of his ass. 

That was a great dance ad Edward was so sweet and attentive. 

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Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

While I'm really glad that Bella stood up for herself, I wish she had remembered who she was a didn't act out quite as much. By screaming at him like that she was lowering herself to his level and she is so much better than that. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Can't the poor girl ever get a break. It seems as soon as something good happens something bad knocks her right back down. 

If this doesn't prove Edwards love I don't know what will. 

 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yeah Bella. She put jasper in his place. Hopefully he'll see her for who she really is now. 

 

Fuck. I hope the new Dr isn't Jacob. But I have a feeling it is. I hope Edward can keep his cool. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'm glad that Bella is handling the Jacob issue so well. She didn't run screaming, crying or anything. I'm sure it hurts seeing him but what she said to Edward is correct she has done much better for herself. Too bad Charlie came back when he did. Dealing with Jacob was enough but add that to it and I'm sure there will be some setback. I just hope she remembers all those who love her and that she is so much more then that. I'm not really worried about Jacob to much. He'll screw up soon enough and be out. 

Jasper is a ass but maybe hitting rock bottom like he has will wake him up to what's really important in life. 

I think that Charlie may of had the money all along, but was using Bella to pay for everything. I hate to say that because I was hoping that he would come around but that doesn't seem likely. I mean Bella's mom died in a accident. There would of been insurance money, maybe even wrongful death suits. I'm also wondering if maybe he is the one who owns the building, or he's selling drugs. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I am so proud of Bella. Eventhough she is right and Edward should of written her up. But thankfully Jacob didn't see him so they don't have to worry about it. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

There first time together was perfect. It wasn't too much it was real. 

 

My theory is James is the good guy. I don't know he was just too weird. Maybe that served a purpose. Then I always hoped that Charlie would come around. Jake has been too solid a bad guy. From the bet to getting fired for sexual and drug misconduct to his asshole attitude. Now Jasper I have no clue what his problem really is. There has to be something buried really deep. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm really glad that they are moving in together. I wonder how long it will take Edward to convince Bella to let him buy her a new house. Lol

 

Poor Rosalie I know the prospect of Royce getting out is scary but I'm glad that Edward was able to talk her off the ledge. 

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Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well the reprimand letter was a long time coming. Bella's right it should of been done a long time ago. I wonder how long it will take Edward to forgive himself. 

 

I hope Jacob and company don't come in with guns blazing. I can see them shooting up the ER. With Jacob saying Sam I know it's involving Bella's dad. Sams his land lord and he gave Charlie a 'job'. I'm sure some of the drugs were for him. It also explains why Charlie made bail.  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

You aren't kidding it was long. I always read before bed and I was so tired after the car sex scene. That I stopped reading and finished it now on my lunch break. It really was a fun chapter. I'm glad that they have found out more about who they are as a couple and it was nice to hear about Edwards past.  

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awwww! They really are perfect sexual deviants for each other. 

So where were you when 9/11 happened. I was at Temple University in class. It was weird my class had started at 7:45 am so no one knew what was happening. My second class of the day had been cancelled so a bunch of us sat in the quad just talking around 10:30 we went into the Anderson building to get something to eat and someone was pulling a tv into the room. Once the tv was on we thought it was some kind if movie it took us all a couple of minutes to realize what was happening. Then it seemed like all hell broke loose. Apparently there was a list of potential targets and Temple along with the Penn were listed on it so the campus was evacuated. Let me tell you that gain ride home was the longest of my life. It's funny how you can remember it like it just happened yesterday.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I'm glad that Bella got a little good news about school before the shit storm happened. Poor Rosalie while it's horrible What they are saying about her. I'm glad that she is going to fight them. 

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Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I'm so glad that they have found their way back to each other. It's also great they have there plans for their future started. I'm not worried about her response one bit. So I don't mind the cliffy. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 26 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Awww. I love the babies name. Very cute Nei is adorable. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

What a perfect ending. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: Epilogue

What a nice ending. It was great to see how far everyone has come. And the kids are adorable. 

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131907
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow that's a tuff break. I don't blame Bella for feeling a little nervous and upset. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love Alice. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I wonder what Edward is think about the new and improved Bella. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yeah. Bella and Edward were Rolling around on the bed kissing like teenagers. Well I guess one of them is one. Lol