That was a very powerful chapter - so much to take in.  You out did yourself.  Thank you.

Wow - what a turn of events - you write a great story - this is so good, some times I save it till later just to have time to myself to enjoy it with out interruption.

This is turned into one of my favs - so original and yet familiar and very very touching.  Please keep writing.

I think that Eddie is going to get his "ass" handed to him.  He still needs to learn to be a bit more diplomatic when they are not in their "usual" time.  This should be a riot if this is where you are taking it.  Of course, this comes from not having had any "real" girlfriends along the way...maybe Dad and brothers need to have a sit down with him, haha.  Perhaps he needs an adjustment like he gave Bella after the bar incident back in Forks.  She should ask him about that!!  It is so funny that he is clueless when it comes to women and are stuff in our purses and such.  I have two kids and a husband who make fun of all my stuff I bring but are always grateful for snacks bars, gum, water, bandaids, etc...   This is one of my MOST fav. stories.  They are a great couple and each chapter is a mini psychology episode.  This last one spoke to me about not getting caught mourning over things you can control.  It is such an easy thing to do and you must make yourself aware not to fall in this trap.  I hope that when you end this story, you might update us once in awhile with a litte ch. on how they are doing.  I CAN't LET THEM GO!!!  See what I mean about control. lol

Another great chapter, although sometimes I feel that he is too harsh with her.  I don't always see his point of view when he gives her "tasks".   It is just mu opinon, but I felt like saying it -- this is a great story - she is a very complex Bella which I love!

Rob should have gotten the joke right at the awards but he is so so nervous when he has to speak to a live audience - it is a riot Kristen must have been laughing her ass off.  When they missed him swearing I almost died!!!  Reese gave it right back to him - I think that they will be life long friends.  Breaking Dawns looks pretty good, but I wish the two parts were one year apart - that is just mean.

Underwear - that when you know that a relationship is real.  I redid my now hubby's wardrobe about 8 months after we were dating when we planning a trip to the Bahamas and I got a look at his horrible summer clothes.  He was fine with it and now 16 years later I still "take care" of clothing items except for hunting & fishing clothing & "junk" like that.  This was such a great chapter and I love how Edward explained things to Jasper - now on to Emmet!!

As always this is so so good, they are evolving in such an interesting way.  This story never ceases to amaze me - you are so good at giving them each an distinct perspective on how things are working out.  Thanks for writing.

So, are you a cheesehead?  I Am... love your story line.

This chapter was well worth the wait - you are a wonderful story teller.  I am going to miss these characters when it ends and that it the mark of a very good story.   I like the way Edward handles Charlie - he is now taking care of Bella and let let Charlie know that - it was so cute! Thank you!!

He deserves everythings he gets - if my fiance ever accused he of cheating on him - it would be the last conversation we would ever have.

This is such a refreshlying new story line, I am really enjoying it and now it is getting really exciting.  Thank you!!

How romantic - I think he wants to put an end to all of this nonsense tonight!! What a caveman - she is mine!!!  This is a great story and I am really enjoying it, each chapter gets better and better.

Wow, I am hooked, it will be so interesting to find out what happened before he met and and since then.  This is a great story.  You are doing a wonderful job of keeping readers on the edge.

This story has me so so hooked, you give away so little each time but it is very very good.  Thank you for writing such an intriguing story.

This story is wonderful ... I sat and read it all at once ... I also read the other ones within the one you are writing.  This is going to be so so good.  Thanks!

OK - Edward ia ao so dumb - it is adorable!!!  He is going to read something or better yet his Mom will and reveal it to Bella in a conversation.  Of course, it will have to be something only known to readers of her story!!! It will be great - it should be a family event.  I absolutely love this story and have read everyone of those stories you listed in Bella's favs except one.  Yes I am a FF addict, but only of the high quality stories like yours.  I always seek out the favs of writers I like to get more stories to read.  I switch between vamp and human for varieity but I only like the vamp stories that really change it up.  One of my absolute favs is Beyond Time by Tkegl.  It is a real gem.  Thanks again for the entertainment.

I love your stories ... I hope you don't let the haters get you down.  You rock as a writer!  Thank you for such an entertaining and real story.

Wow, very interesting...Bella will have to watch her back...that Esme is crazy and you can't reason with crazy.  Esme may come after her in some very crafty way, you know accidents can happen (hair dryer fall in the tub!!).  Good fodder for the future.  Loving the story. 

I just found this story and it is great, what an orginal idea!!!  How very very naughty!!!  I can't wait to see what happens next.

This is such a good story line, I always felt that the original was way way too simplistic with Bella just accepting him back like she did when she was so emotionally upset for all those months before.  A little drama and Edward having to work at it and change in his outlook is a good thing!! Thanks for writing this version.

I just found this story a few days ago and I love it.  I hope that you aren't discouraged by the haters.  I like the developmnet - Edward isn't perfect and it makes a better story when things go wrong.  Thank you!!

This is by far the best fic I have ever read ... And read again.  You never disappoint, I feel like i know these characters personally and I will miss them when this fic is truly over.  Maybe you will treat us with some future fics of Grandpa Skip and Grandma Bebella - please :).

Terrific new story, great to read not the same old thing again and again. In am hooked💑

Terrific 

Excellent story, I'm so intrigued. 

This was an awesome insight into both their thoughts when apart and now their time together.  Please please continue this story.  

Ouch

Great story - Bella can finally argue as an equal and Edward has to embrace long forgotten human feelings and frailty.   

Lovely little update.  I hope that everything works out for you.  I found out I was losing my job of 12 years by finding a new description for my job which was "accidentally" left in my desk.  They were combining my job wth another due to someone else leaving and I was no longer qualified.  Then the pandemic hit and it was difficult.   These past few years have been trying but Europe has the added burden of dealing with Russia.    Praying for you and our fragile planet.   

Sounds intriguing