Reviews by twilightobession
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311074
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
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Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

OMG!!!! They have finally broke Bella. What are they going to do next? What will happen now that she believes that her name is Elizabeth? Where will they take her now? What will they do to her next? CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

Oh, Felix feel in love with Bella. How is he just leaving. I would have thought that Aro would not allow that. That Aro would be afraid of Felix telling someone what was going on there. I just figured that Felix lived on the ranch and was apart of it.

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Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

WOW!!! That is really scary. You know things like that really do happen to people who get involved with cults.

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Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

I GOT ME POST!!!!

I am really glad that you all got things worked out. I have missed the library today. Thanks for everything that you do here at the library.

You surprised me with this chapter. I was not expecting Edward to Aro's son and Esme to Aro's wife.

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Date: 20 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

Aro was enjoying Bella touoching him to much. Dirty old man.

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Date: 31 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Embrace

Finally Edward has enter the story!!!!!!!! YEA!!!!!!

I am so glad that he approves of Bella. Can't wait to see them enter-act with each other. Will we get to see in Edward's mind, hear from him?????

Thank you for updating. Please don't feel bad for keeping to your schedule. I am just glad you are writing such a wonderful stories and sharing them with us. Enjoy your time with your family and send us an update when you can.

I clilcked on the link at the end of the chapter to go to the forums for your stories and it says I am not authorized for that forum. I can go to others but I could not find any of yours.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Atonement

We finally hear from Edward. Love him. I am glad that he seems to really care for Bella. I hope Aro is not to hard on him with his punishment.

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Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - To Err Is Human, to Forgive....

Poor Charlie.

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Admonishment

I can not believe that I am this far behind on my reviews. I am sooooo sorry.

I felt so sorry for Bella having to make that choice. I am glad that Edward really seems to be interested in Bella.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Do Unto Others

I am getting caught up on my reviews for this story so I can ask a question about chapter 21 beofre you update again.

Father Aro creeps me out. I am soooo glad that Esme was there for Bella. Esme will keep her safe. Love Carlisle. He is sooo sweet trying to make Bella comfortable. I hate that Esme did not get to give Bella her bath.

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Confession

I am so glad that Bella listened to Esme and did not tell "Father" what she was thinking about. Esme knows that Bella was thinking of her pervious life.

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

OMG!!!! I knew Aro was sick. I am sooo glad that Esme is finally telling Carlisle about it. I hope that they can help Bella.

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - The Family

We finally get to meet Alice. Boy, "Father" really punishs harshly doesn't he. That is awful.

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

I feel so sorry for Charlie. I sure do hope that Felix will help Charlie find Bella.

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Fear Not, For I Am With You

I am glad that Alice and Bella got this chance to talk but I am scared of who saw them. I hope it is not Aro.

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Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 –Eyes Upon Us

I first amd most important question is....When Alice and Jasper have their ceremony will Aro take Alice and have sex with her first?????

Why will Alice be moved to the maternity building? What is this injection that Alice is having to take? They are preparing Alice for what she needs to do to wed Jasper. Will they prepare Bella also to wed Edward? When will she find out what is expected of her? Bella is in the complete dark about what is going to happen to her.

I am so glad that I have had a chance to get caught up on my reviews for this story. I am loving this story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Darkness Surrounds Us

I am so glad that Edward and Bella are together. I am surprised that Aro let them be in the same room. But I am guessing that Aro thought that Edward soom be dead. Can't wait to see who opened the door.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Temple

OH MY FREAKING GOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for not letting him have sex with Alice. It was bad enough the way she lost her virginity but at least she did not have to have sex with "Father". That would have been gross. Thank you for letting Carlisle and Esme always rescue Bella from "Father". I am glad that Edward got to escort Bella. I am really really scared for Bella because she is remembering and that can't be good.

As always....you leave us wanting more and more.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Trust and Obey

I am so glad that Jasper hit "Father Aro". Glad that Carlisle changed the ceremony.  

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Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Free Will

As always I have read this chapter sitting on the edge of my seat.

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Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Free Falling

OMG!!!!!! What is Phil doing....following in "Father" Aro's footsteps???

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Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - In the Beggining

Thank you for sharing Carlisle's background with us. That explains alot. Carlisle has had a hard life. No wonder he want a simple life.

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: The Dawning

So loving this chapter and this whole story, GREAT GREAT job ladies.

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Date: 01 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Seek the First

Edward is really messed up. I hate that he feels that he can not trust his own family. His realy family. I am assuming that Aro has Bella in his own chambers. Has he done anything to her. I hope we get her POV soon.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Transgressions

He has really lost his mind. What made him like this? You gave us background on how Carlisle came to the family but what made Aro form the family to begin with? How did Esme come to the family? Was she born into it? The more we get into this story the more questions I seem to have. GREAT GREAT story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG!!!!! What is gong happen??? Is Edward going to get caught? How is Edward ever going to get her out of there? Is Aro going to walk in and LOCK the door and then see Edward. If so, I hope Edward gets to him before Aro can unlock the door and then beats the hell out of Aro and then Edward leaves with Bella. After tieing Aro up and beating him with the cane that he used on Bella. Can't wait for more girls.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - These three remain: faith, hope, and love

OMG!!!! Finally Charlie gets a break. Ok, from this chapter we see that it is Aro who comes in one Edward and Bella. At the time that Charlie hears, Aro has not noticed Edward being in the room. Hopefully Edward hind before Aro notices him. What is Felix doing there? I thought he left. Felix does have a little heart if he came back. I hope he helps Charlie get Bella out. Can't wait for more and more and more girls.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - The Alpha and the Omega

Why did Edward not fight back???? When Aro was with Bella earlier when he beat her...did he take her virginity????? I don't remember. Awesome story!!!!!!

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Redemption

I am so glad that Flex decided to go back and help Charlie. Can't wait to see what their plan is. Awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

So glad you are back. We have missed ya'll. GREAT GREAT job as usual. Can not wait to see what is going to happen on the compound and with Aro. I wished that Edward would get better quickly and come back and knick the hell out of Aro. lol. I am worried about Alice. Poor thing. I know she misses Jasper greatly but to also know that you are carring around Aro's demon kid. That has to be hard. Poor Alice. And I am sure that Jasper is going crazy not being able to see Alice and to make sure that she is ok. CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!!!!!! GREAT JOB LADIES!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37: Exodus

They were talking about Edward may have to go to foster care.....How old is Edward????? For some reason I thought he was in his early twenties. I got so excited when I got your update notice. Thanks so much. I am sorry for all the illness and the hand accident. I hope things have settled down for the both of you. I REALLY hope you have more write!!!! LOL!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward over hears a very juicy secret regarding his younger sister, Alice.  The plot to blackmail Alice in order to get closer to her best friend, Bella, forms in his mind, but doesn't exactly pan out the way he wants it to.  Rated for Edward's foul mouth and the sprinkles of lemonade with the eventual lemon.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119049 Read Count: 57009
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 22 Jan 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - And I plan on giving Bella plenty...

This sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - This. Is. The. Best. Feeling. Ever.

This is really a good story.  Carlisle is a lot cooler about them then I thought he would be. Especially with the age difference.  I would love to know what Esme is thinking. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3 - How could you ask me to do something like that?

Wow lots going on in this chapter.  Loved it all. I can not believe that Edward was so open with his parents about them and sex. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Ch4 - He's got a knife in his hand!

Loved this chapter! !!!!!! Can't wait to see Charlie ' s reaction.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Ch5 - Remember your window, Juliet.

Wow Charlie is really upset. Which if Edward was as bad as they say he was i don't blame Charlie.  But i hope things get better for them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6 - Lalalalalala

I can not believe that Esme and Carlisle are that open and relaxed about letting Edward and Bella be alone and do the things that they do. Charlie is definitely hard headed.  Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - Oh no... no, no, no... not good.

Charlie really has some nerve.  I don't blame Bella for being pissed.

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Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Ch8 - For the better or for worse?

OMGosh! !!!!!! I just knew Charlie was going to catch them at some point.  At least they have their clothes on. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Ch9 - Blood on the Highway: The Bella Swan Story

Well I guess she told Charlie.  Can't wait to find out his reaction.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Ch10 - Its the best invention yet.

Wow she left Charlie.  I kind of don't blame her. He did not give her much choice.  Glad Esme and Carlisle took her in .

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Ch11 - Okay, that's not sexy.

Again, I can not believe that Esme and Carlisle are that open about them being together. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Ch12 - I... blow your mind?

Glad Bella had a good day at work.  Love that the whole family wanted to know how her day went. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 - For the love of God!

I can not believe that Edward is thinking that she will finish high school while living with him. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - That's why I need you.

Loved their 1st time.  Great job. 

I can not believe Charlie and Billy told Jacob all those lies. They have some nerve. 

So glad that I do not have to wait for an update.  I am so off to read the next chapter and find out what happened to Bella.  Edward is going to be sooooo upset.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15 - Look at what sleep got me last time.

Glad Charlie has finally got his head out of his ass. Glad Phil did not come with Renee.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Wakey, wakey, Belly.

I knew that Bella would come up with a plan.  Can't wait to go to your profile and find the sequel.  Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1514655
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 66: Edward DAY 22 & 23

So glad that Bella and Edward are telling each other that they love one another. Great lemon by the way.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

OMG!!! Edward is left at the house with Bella and Victoria, with Alice and Rose coming back. He is all by himself with a house full of women and James is going to come there, because of Victoria's tracking chip. James better be afraid really afraid. A house full of women will kill him. lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

OH MY GOSH!!!!! I as so scared for Bella and Victoria. James sure got there quick. I hope to goodness that Edward comes upstairs, SOON!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

How in the world did Heidi get away with Aro's private jet???? Laurent is alot smarter than we all realized.

Poor Edward. At least it did not take him as long to figure out that the girls where missing. I was afarid it was going to be a while. I am scared. Can't wait to see what else is going to happen.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

I got my email notice. Actually I got 3 for this chapter.

I am so glad that James dropped his phone. I just hope they get there before James does something to Bella.  Rose is so calm. What does she do for a living? Is she also in law enforcement? Or does her controling personality just take over in this case.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

Awesome Chapter!!!!!!

I feel like you have left us hanging over the Grand Canyon. Please don't leave us hanging long.

Ii would be really awesome if it was Bella who knocked James out. Then tied him up so he could not get away or hurt them. That would give Bella a confidence booster. If not I hope it is the guys. Can't wait to find out.

I just wanted to thank you guys for everything you have done here. GREAT AMAZING JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 17 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 75 - Bella

TWO CHAPTERS!!!!!! WHAT???? How can you finish this story in TWO chapters. I hope we get to read what Carlisle, Emmett, Jasper and Jacob did to James. Will Jacob or will he not give James to Carlisle????? THAT is the millon dollar question. Can't wait to find out. What will Aro do to him when/if he gets him. Can't wait to find that out too. GREAT JOB LADIES!!!!!!! LOVE this story.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

I am so glad that Jacob turned James over to Aro. James does not deserve death. He definately deserves what he is getting. He willl forever pay for everything that he has done. I just kind of wish that Bella and Victoria, at least Edward got to have their say with him also.

I am sad to see the end coming. But I have really enjoyed the ride here with you girls. You have done a terrfic job writing this whole saga. Can't wait to hear more about your book and also other stories you have in mind forh ere at the Writers shop. We all will be waiting on pins and needles for the last of this story and all other stories from you. GREAT JOB LADIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

OMFG!!!!! I can not believe that htis is the end. That is so sad. I can not believe that it is over. I LOVED the ending. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!! You girls have done a terrific job writing this story. I have loved every chapter. I am sad that it is over. But I guess, Every good thing must come to an end. GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!

I look forward hearing from you girls on the VO.

Summary: Past Featured Story

***SEQUEL TO THE VIRGIN SWAN AND THE CULLEN INTUITION***

 

 

The not-so-virgin Bella Swan is moving out of Forks and into Seattle with her beautiful tattooed fiance, Edward. When their perfect bubble pops, how will the maiden Swan fair in the Cullen's domain? Rated for Language and Lemons.



Isn't Selita grand?  Another big fat thanks to her for making this wonderful banner.

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This is my first fan-made banner!  SamasaurusRex did a great job!!  Thank you!!!

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This is my SECOND fan made banner! I feel so special!!  michelleab09 from ff.net made this for me!  Thank you, lovely! Motorcycleward and Bikerella anyone?

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michelleab09 did it again!!  Edward and Bella wedding photo!! :D

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Stories Read by CNYBella, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 168493 Read Count: 44028
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Ch10 - The Screaming Epiphany

Phil is pushing his luck. I have a feeling that Edward is going to get a hit in before Phil leaves.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Ch9 - Step Daddy Dearest

Yes I see some drama coming!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Ch8 - The Memoirs of a Fairy

Lots of drama in this chapter.  I feel sorry for Alice but I am glad that Bella stood up to her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Ch15 - The Big Day

I am so glad that everything went PERFECT! !!!!!!!

Glad that Jasper is back and it looks like Alice is welcoming him back .

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Ch16 - Fighting with the In-laws

Esme is going to kill Alice!!!!!!!! At least Edward and Bella are off the hot seat now. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Ch11 - Provoking the Groom

I just hope Phil does not ruin their wedding. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Ch7 - A Change of Plans

Loved Esme calling and blessings Edward out. Lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Ch14 - Forgiveness

I am glad that Renee believes Bella now and that Bella can forgive her. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Ch6 - The Birthday Gift

Awesome job with your 1st Dom/sub scene. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Ch13 - The Truth

So glad that Edward got there in time. I hope it opened Renee ' s eyes. Also glad she did not pull away from Edward. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Ch12 - The Proposition

I hope Edward and Emmett ' s plan works.  I hope Edward can keep his promise to Bella. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Ch20 - Repercussions

Glad things are working out for them. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Ch5 - The Birthday Boy

I just knew they had some Dom/sub in them. Love it!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Ch1 - The Wedding

So glad that you are continuing their story.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Ch2 - The Day After

Glad Bella handled Jane like she did.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Ch3 - The Big News

Edward is so sweet.  Doing all that for Bella and then having the cake taste awful. Lol. Loved that they were playing out a fantasy.  I am wondering if Edward enjoyed Bella sitting at his feet......that could be another fantasy. ..Dom/sub. Lol.  Just a thought.  He does seem to like to spank her ass. Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Ch4 - Party Time

Love that Bella did not let those shanks ruin her party.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Ch17 - Back to Reality

So glad that I do not have to wait for an update. I am off to read the next chapter. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Ch18 - First Time for Everything

Edward messed up big time with the Angela mess. Glad they worked it out.  Excited for Emmett and Rose. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Ch 19 - Boxer Cullen

OMGosh! !!!!! I just knew that Angela was going to tell Edward that he had a k8d. I am glad that did not happen.  Loved the Bella knocked her out. Lol. I busted out laughing when Bella fell a sleep on Edward.  Lol

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Ch21 - Closure

So glad Phil is put away!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Ch 22 - All Hallows Eve

Wow!!!! Was not expecting anal sex in this chapter.  I knew Bella wearing that outfit was not going to be a good idea

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Ch 23 - Surprises

OMGosh! !!!!!!!! I love this chapter! !!!!!!! I have gone to your profile. .......where is the sequel? ???????????? 

PLEASE PLEASE post the sequel.  Hope to hear from you soon. You are a wonderful writer. Thank you for sharing 2 great stories with us. Hope you will share your next one too.

 

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624942
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

OMFG!!!!! I am so nervous for Edward and Bella. I was reading this chapter on pins and needles. I yelled "Way to GO" when Bella slapped Demitri. Carlisle makes me sick. He is just doing this to get Edward back in his control.

I was surprised that Edward controled himself for as long as he did before he hit Demitri.

I truly hope Edward will explain things to Bella before he does anything. I know he feels like he is going back on his word to Bella. BUT this is to save her life. Bella needs Edward to do this to her to keep her safe. If he doesn't she will die from what Demitril will do to her.

As long as Edward and Bella are honest with each other they can get through anything.

She needs to tell Edward what Carlisle wants to do to her NOW!!!!!!!!!!!

I SOOOOOOOO hope you will update SOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story.



Author's Response:

Things are quickly coming to a head

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

OMG!!!!!! You scared the shit out of me. I was screaming at Edward and telling him he was such a jerk. I am so glad that Bella did forgive him. He really did it to protect her and he did not hit her in the process. I was VERY proud of Edward. Fantastic Chapter, as ALWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, by the way I did not get my notice that this story update. I just happen to be looking throught the most recent stories and saw this one. I also did not get my update notice for Voltri Order.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

OMG!!!!! I forgot to write about Bella telling Edward about Carlisle. I am soooooo glad that she told him. This was just the right timing too. I just love you!!!!!! You have done such a wonderful job with this story. You have always kept us on our toes. We never know what to expect. You just bloww all of us away. I am so thrilled that Bella trust Edward with this secert, especially after what just happen. But I think now she knows that Edward WILL do whatever it takes to keep her safe.

LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

OMG!!!!! It has to be Carlisle!!!!!!!! He is going to try and take her in the ass before Demtri takes her virginity. Poor Bella. Where is her cell phone???? She had to to text Edward earlier? She can text him from in the bathroom. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story has always been good but this is getting really good. VERY EXCITING!!!! I am sitting on the edge of my sit reading this chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I am really said the this story is winding down. But I guess every good thing must come to an end.

This chapter is soooooo intense. I was sitting on the edge of my sit reading it, not knowing what was coming next. LOVED IT!!!!!!! I am sooooo glad that Bella's family it there.

CARLISLE IS DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH HAPPY DAY!!! OH HAPPY DAY!!!! I am so glad that he got his. He had really lost his mind....calling Bella, Renee.

Exactly what does Bella mean "Let me go"??????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

OMG!!!! I forgot!!!! WHAT DID ESME DO WITH THE ASHES?????????? I hope it is in the oneshot!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

I so love this story. IT IS GREAT!!!!!!  Thank you for showing how everyone has moved on. I am sad that the epilogue is left. I hope we get to read about Edward and how he felt when Bella asked him to "let her go". What did Esme do with Carlisle's ashes???? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

I am finally able to write my review. I could not write it when I finished this chapter because I was so sad that this WONDERFUL story was ending. I have had a few days to morn. :) I love this story. You have done an AMAZING job with it.

I am glad that everyone has their happily ever after. So very glad that Esme has someone to love and treat her right.

I just have one quesiton.....What did Esme do with Carlisle's ashes??????

Thank you for sharing your amazing, wonderful, loving, caring, and PERFECT story with us.

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This was an interesting chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh no he did not say that to Bella at the end. If I were Bella I would make him pay for that comment that next time. lol. Good chapter. Is there going to be something between Bella and Jacob? What about Edward?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I was wondering what was going on with Edward. I did not even think about Charlie going after Edward like that. That was kinda funny. Love Esme for being so understanding. Can't wait till Mama Bear gets a hold of Daddy Bear. Now that would be funny if Charlie and Esme started going out. That would be a real punishment for Edward. HaHa

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thank you for the update. This was wonderful. You are doing a GREAT job with this one and The Perfect Wife. You said you were trying to finish The Perfect Wife...I am soooooo excited about that but also a little sad I always hate to see a good story end...but I guess they all have to at some point.

You are a really good writer. You have kept all os uf in supense and always leave us wanting MORE!!!!! Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 stories/12/images/Creating_A_Mate.jpg

Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 123485
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Poor Renee.  Her story is so heart breaking.  I hope she and Renee can get past everything.  I am guessing that it is Paul that is in the woods. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Very interesting. Can't wait to read about the hunt.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

WOW!!!!!!!! That was amazing!!!!!!!! LOVED everything in this chapter. GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!! Now I have to wait for an update. At least there was no cliff hanger. I still can not wait for you to update again. Thanks for sharing your story with us.



Author's Response:

The next chapter is already half written. I hope to have it up by the end of next week. I'm glad you enjoyed the hunt!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Is Bella blocking Alice's visions? Can she block Edward from hearing others thoughts. Is that what her gift is????

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Liked that explaination of the "growly thing"!!!! LOL!!!!



Author's Response:

The "growly thing" (or mating call) has been a huge hit. Just wait til you get to the hunt...

As for your previous question - Bella's gift is a shield. I tweaked it a bit so that when she is using it she and Edward are in a bubble. It hides her from other gifts. Since Edward is in her bubble (and there's something else going on that they aren't aware of yet) she can hear his thoughts.

More will be explained about her gift later and why it's manifesting itself while she's human. Edward's venom is doing something to her. They just don't know it yet. Carlisle's outtake reveals what's going on.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

What is Bella doing???? Really!!!! Does she really think everyone is going to believe her?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

What is Edward going to do to Bella? Is he mad at her?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Finally, they are together. I am glad that charlie is not freaking out. Loved the end of this chapter.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

WHAT  IN THE WORLD IS GOING ON?????? What do that vampires have to do with Renee?????? I am sooooooo off to read the next chapter. I am sooooo very glad that I do not have to wait on an update!!!!!!!