Reviews by ant1gon3
Unconditional by SimplyMatt Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 66]
Summary:

 

Jasper, a single parent for the past five years to Alice-Rose, awaits the arrival of his childhood friend Emmett who is living the life he once dreamed of. Can Emmett help him see that he can have the life he wanted and still be a father, maybe find love.

THANK YOU JA MASH FOR MAKING THIS BANNER


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Emmett/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61976 Read Count: 7684
[Report This] Published: 29 May 2012 Updated: 28 Dec 2012
Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

No, it wasn't a dream. We can all hate on Jessica but in the end she is her mother. If she is willing to try to be in Sprite's life than Sprite deserves it. Jasper knows that it doesn't matter how he feels about Jessica but how Alice-Rose feels and as long as she doesn't pose a threat of any kind than she should be allowed to see her mother. I hope that made sense. You have an uncanny way of taking peices of my life and folding them into this story. Or maybe your just good at telling true to life stories, either way, I'm amazed. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Being a child of divorce, I truely get it. My parents NEVER said a bad word about the other (at least not that I am aware) and for that I am truely grateful. I am very impressed by the way J/Em are handling it. Let's hope Jessica is as mature and puts her daughter first.

I use to go down the stairs in a laundry basket. Thanks for the memories! As always, thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing x

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

It seems Jessica wasn't as evil as we all thought. I'm so glad Alice-Rose will be ok. I don't think the boys could kept it together without her and all of their lives would have been a little less. Well done as always. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the great review

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I believe in the magic. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks honey xxxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start. I hope you continue. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Jasper and Alice-Rose are adorable together. (Is it bad that I wished he were blowing raspberries on my tummy?) Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is such a sweet story. Emmett and Alice-Rose are adorable. I look forward to the next update. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I can't wait for their night out. Maybe there will be a "druken" first kiss? Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I was hoping for a drunken kiss but a flag pole in Jasper's boxers is good. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

For most of the chapter, I had the dumbest smile on my face. When Jasper said "the thought that without the wood between us, our heads would be touching" was perfect. Also, Emmett's romp through the streets throwing flowers (I think he even said something about birds singing), made me think of an old Carpenter's song "Close to You". Until Jessica called, things were great. But I always like a little drama. Great chapter, it brightened my day. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Every parent worries about their kids coming into the bedroom at the wrong time. It's probably because most of us have walked in on our parents in that situation. There isn't enough eye bleach in all the world - ick!

Emmett wouldn't have time to react if I were alone in his bedroom with him. Oh, the things I would do to that poor man. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I want my own Jasper oasis! It was definately worth the wait! Great chaper. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

Mmmm Jasper Oasis xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well done! Emmett should have walked away or better yet reported it to security. It was a childish to stoop to the other guy's level. But I think we can all agree that the guy deserved it. I can't wait to see what Emmett has up his sleeve. You are so great at cliff hangers! Great job. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Jasper did an excellent job! He may hate her and she isn't going to win a parent of the year award but she is her mother and as long as she can at like one, Sprite deserves to have her in her life. Some parents use their kids as pawns in their stupid games of "lets hurt the other parent" but Jasper rose above the crap. Hopefully Jessica can too. For Alice-Rose's sake. Great chapter although these poor boys could use a little less cock-blocking. *wink* Thank you as always.

Author's Response:

ta babe

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 27 May 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

I can't believe it's over :'(  I loved it. Bravo.

I wish you luck with your original fiction. I will be waiting anxiously for it. I hope you will come back with another Emmett story. You are truly talented and would love to read more. Thank you, as always, for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I find it amazing that this story brings up so many of my own memories. My 5 year old daughter, shy and a bit timid, once threw a rock at a boy who was teasing her and nailed him in the head. I didn't know whether to ground her or give her a high five. Last chapter you reminded me of sliding down my own staircase in a plastic laundry basket. I loved the lemon and I am glad you showed that it isn't always the perfect romantic senario with white candles and perfect execution. Often times it is filled with other emotions that aren't so sexy such as fear and self doubt. It can be messy and clumbsy as well. Great job. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading and reviewing x

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Congratulations! It was well deserved. I'm so happy that Emmett's small lapse in judgement didn't create a larger problem. Poor Emmett, he doesn't realize that we love him no matter how big the tire gets to be around his waist. I really like the thought of he and Esme going out for morning runs. I had to laugh at his inner monologue during their run together. Great job as always. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I love your brand of drama. Keep it coming. Ahhhh.... we've all been there haven't we. The sickening sounds that emits from your parents bedroom. It is truly vomit inducing. LOL  But, feeling like a teenager in the backseat of a car is a wonderful memory. That is what it felt like reading about Jasper and Emmett's morning. You have a way of recreating memories from the past. Well done! Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thank hun

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Jessica is the epitome of a bad mother. She abandoned her as a new born and now only wants her back for selfish reasons. Never once does she think of her child's needs and wants. Poor Esme. Every mother in the world has fallen asleep hoping their child will be ok for the durationn short nap we must take. I really felt for her. I also hope that Emmett has some tough skin. Jasper is looking to place blame and Emmett and Esme will be at the top of his list (I wouldn't want to be Jessica when they find her either). Well done. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thank you kindly for the review x

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

No parent would sit and wait for their child to be found. I would be knocking on doors and annoying anyone and everyone. Well done. Thank you for writing.

Thank you for the update on Jasper1863Hale. I will be looking up the book. I would also read anything you published so please keep me informed. Thanks.



Author's Response:

thnk you lots and lots xxx

Summary:

 

Emmett is finally leaving the safety of the clinic after months of therapy, knowing nobody in London except a volunteer at the clinic, Carlisle. Can they overcome how different their lives are form a friendship, maybe more? 

WARNING - DARK THEMES!!!!!

THANK YOU JA MASH FOR MAKING THIS BANNER


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11063 Read Count: 763
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Day One

This is definately a great start. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Day Two

Don't appologize for writing the "tough to read" stuff. It makes the story more realistic. Not all stories are rainbows and unicorns and I appreciate that you risk a lot to put it out there. I am looking forward to reading the last installment. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Thanks, looking forward to your thoughts

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Day Three

The sequel is the reason I read this. I am so glad that I decided to read it. Great story. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

hey there,

thanks for the review. Hope you like the sequel xx

When Doves Cry by SimplyMatt Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Sequel to The Next Three Days.

Emmett has already gone through so much, lived through what most could not. Yet after three perfect days, we was back to where it all started.

Can he live through it all again?

Will the thought of Carlisle be enough to pull him away from the beautiful light?

THANK YOU ARC MORPHEUS FOR MAKING THIS BANNER


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Emmett
Genre: Angst, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35608 Read Count: 1619
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 20 Jan 2013
Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: And On The Third Day...

Poor Carlisle needs to quit blaming himself. This is all Charlie's fault. You do a great job of conveying Carlisle's feelings. Great start. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

ta hun

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: We Should Of Had It All

I could just picture Alice talking Em's ear off and him sitting straight up to tell her to shut up. (ha ha) I hope that he is waking up and that his hand really did move. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks so much xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Choices Must Be Made

Evil cliffy! It could go either way. Update soon. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

hey, many thanks. next chapter will be along soon xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: You Promised No Tears

Yay! He's awake. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

many thanks xxx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: No Matter What Happens

I don't know whether to commend you on what is probably my favorite chapter you have ever written or scream at you for torturing our poor Emmett some more. First, the reference to the dole of doves. I'm no literary scholar but that was the perfect metaphor for me. Also, Emmett's fear that Carlisle would leave him and Carlisle's fear of leaving him while he was screaming. I was almost in tears.

Now, don't you think this poor boy has suffered enough! He just wants to go home with the new love of his life after one of the most tramatic events in his life and have some good old fashioned nookie. (Ok maybe that's what I want.) Loved this chapter. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks soooo much for the review xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Hope and Hopelessness

I agree! People with a physical disability are stronger than most of us without. I really don't think I could do it. Great chapter. It's good to see Emmett smiling again. And, who wouldn't want Jasper? ha ha Emmett's right, Nettie has good taste. But, then again, so does Emmett! Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks for the review xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Friends, Lovers, & Other Strangers

One amazing little girl has shown that Emmett that he is strong. I kinda felt bad for Jasper (who is NOT Charlie) cuz he was just checking out the hottie in a wheelchair and didn't realize the emotions he would evoke in Jasper. Yeah, it was lustful, but pretty innocent too. Who wouldn't be checking him out. Great job. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Crescendo of Emotions

Carlisle needs to cut himself some slack, Emmett is f*** hot and causes woodys to pop up all over the world. He isnt' forcing himself on Em, just fantasing about the possiblities. And thank you for putting just a little bit of Edward into the story. I love the pace of the relationship. It has an innocent quality to it. Thank you for writing.

Author's Response:

thanks for the review xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Patience and Prudence

I loved it. You are a brilliant writer. I don't think I could live alone after what Charlie did. I mean come on!! Carlisle may not realize it but he is a very patient man. I love him!

Please don't let me disturb you lemon writing process. I look forward to it.

Great job. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Facing Fears

Wow!! That was amazing. Brilliant! To watch Emmett be so torn between to opposite experiences. His past will always be there, in the back of his mind. Always. You captured it perfectly. I can't wait to see Carlisle's pov. He is probably more torn than Emmett! Great job once again. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks hun

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: The Sweetest Gift Of All

Most definately worth the wait. He definately gave Emmett some memories that would replace the old. You did a fantastic job as always. I love the candles he lit in the early morning by the way. Might use that myself one day. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Candles are always great hehe, thanks for the review xxx

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"The difference between men and boys is the price of their toys" unless you're Toyward...and you decide to share your toy box. When Jasper wanders into Edward's adult toy store...his life will never be the same. TrueEnglishRose/texasbella E/J

 

 

Also up for Best Humor in the Non-Canon Awards

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46510 Read Count: 32428
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jun 2012
Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

No fair! My security blanket is nowhere near as cool as his! Great references to all my childhood shows (loved the Carlton Banks one). Thanks for writing.
*repost from ffnet.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Poor babies. I can't wait for Jasper to tell Edward about the break-up. Great chapter. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Gotta love his security blanket! He shouldn't have to take care of it all by himself and I am available! Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Cherry flavored AnalEaze is still your best one yet. LOL! My only complaint would be that he didn't pierce anything "south of the boarder". Although, Edward could always accompany him back to the tatoo parlor. Great chapter. It lighten my day. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

You are killing me! I can't believe you are going to make Jasper keep that plug in until Monday and I have to think about that for an entire weekend. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The build up is going to kill me. Ugh! Great chapter, so hot! Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can already see Charlie rolling his eyes. BTW, I have a few place Edward's tongue bar hasn't met yet. (Although, I can't wait to see where he puts it on Jasper.) Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Definately once a day for the week. I can't believe you stop right there. Ugh. Loved the chapter. Thank you so much for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I hope we all get to go see Bella together! (NEVER thought I would say that!) I just want to watch as Jasper gets his piercings. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I hope part of Edward's plan is to obtain a couple of togas for the trip. Loved it. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter. See you tomarrow.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

The most shocking thing in the whole chapter was not Emmett in a brides maid's dress or the fact that Rose said dick in the presense of the justice of the peace. No, the most shocking moment was when the female cab driver told them to stop making out in the backseat. I for one don't believe it happened. I for one would have taken the detour through Oregon before I made them stop. It is all about pleasing the customer.

I can't wait til Greece. Thank you for sharing this hilarious story and I hope you continue to be inspired to write many others in the future.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Outtake #1 The Stool

I've missed the boys. Thank you for the outtake.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Outtake #2 Jasper's Second Piercing

Loved the flashback with Edward's piercing. We need an outtake of how nerdward became toyward. Or an outtake of the frustration they have over 6 weeks of healing time. Edward does have a toy store that could come in handy. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 14 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Outtake #3 Never Squat With Your Spurs On

Congrats on your wins they are well deserved. I really love this Emmett and would love to know what he got up to while Edward was away. Did he test out any of the merchandise? Great chapter. Thank you for writing.

Summary:

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The boys are ready to start their future together, drama free and full of toys. Having said their ‘I do’s’ they are headed to Greece for their 3 week long honeymoon. What antics can they manage to get up to in a foreign country?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28328 Read Count: 34722
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Girls, the visuals are to die for!!! I can't wait to see what the boys will get up to in the club. Great job!! Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I just want to thank you girls for all the research you must dread. Looking through, what I can only guess must be in the thousands, of pictures to find that perfect shot to put into the story. It must be a grueling process. I just want to thank you for all the hard work! See ya next week.



Author's Response:

It's so hard to trawl through all of the pictures and we do suffer, we really do, but we do it for our readers *hehehe*

True & TB xXx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I was starting to wonder if you girls were going to put a visual with this one and was pleaantly surprised when I reached the end. I was glad to see them slow it down. They tend to be VERY entusiastic but to see them show how much they care for each other was sweet. Another great Monday! Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Haha... yeah, they're insatiable, but its only because they love each other so deeply, they tend to carried away.  Thanks for reading!

 

xoxo

tb and True

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hot damn!!! I have so been looking forward to this story. Thanks for the picture as well. I'm starting to think this ffn business isn't so bad if we get visuals to go along with this story now. I can't wait for Monday! See you bright and early. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Yay!  We're thrilled that so many were willing to head over here to TWCS... its a learning curve for all of us, but as you said, the pics are a BIG bonus to the move.  Not too mention no fear of harrassment or sudden story pulling!

 

xoxo

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It is so sweet that Jasper lets Edward borrow his security blanket. How convienent that they had first class all to themselves. Citrusy goodness. Great chapter. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Of course they had to have it all to themselves, but even if they didn't, I'm sure they would have got up to something lol.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Kinky uniform? I wonder what Edward would come up with? Great chapter. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Edward's mind is a wonderous thing hehe

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

God, Edward has the BEST toys. I always look forward to seeing what he comes up with next. Jasper is so lucky! Lemony goodness from beginning to end. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

You are very welcome.. and thank you for reading!!

 

xoxo

tb and True

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh, it's Monday and my insatiable boys are at it again. I wonder if it is possible to steal that camera. Because I would love to see all the of......scenery in Greece. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Hehehe, we'll find you some good pics :)

TB & True x

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I can't see me lovin' nobody but you, for all my life..... Hell yeah I'm singing one of the corniest songs ever written and I'm not ashamed. I don't care who you are, when that song comes on the radio, you turn it up and sing! Great job. I always look forward to Mondays now! Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Thankd for the review hun and we're glad that we can brighten your Monday's lol

True & TB

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

These boys are just.....insatiable. Which is one of my favorite things about them. See ya next week! Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Yep, they have so much love and energy to share hehe. See you next week hun!

True & TB xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I have a real problem with sex on the beach in stories. Rule #1 of sex on the beach - lube and sand do not mix. Thank you for at least putting down a blanket! Thank you for writing. See ya next week.



Author's Response:

Sand and lube do not mix well at all, we agree, but we just can't stop these boys lol xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Edward, my darling filthy boy, hetero women around the world are turned by two men (or three or four) having intimate moments. I don't think my husband could have pulled me away! These boys need some hot make up sex. I keep thinking that their honeymoon is a little too perfect and they need to have an arguement. Just a suggestion. See you Monday and thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Hehehe, we might have to do that for you. I love some hot make-up sex :D

True & TB xXx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great job babies! Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thankyou!!

 

xoxo

tb and True

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I love my smut early Monday morning. Great job. Thank you.



Author's Response:

Aw thanks, we love it too hehe

tb & true

xXx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

They bring PDA to a whole other level! I love these boys. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, we love their PDA hehe

tb & true

xXx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

At least they behaved around the kiddies!! I'd be flirting too! Great job girls. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Thank-you for reading hun :D

tb & true

xXx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I loved their "drag" night out. You picked the perfect songs!! Great job as always girls!!! Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I'm sad to see this end. Thank you so much for writing it!!

Summary:

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At the end of story Hostage, NYPD SWAT boys Edward and Jasper married. This is their Honeymoon.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Hostage
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17871 Read Count: 5380
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

I am so glad to see these boys again. And the chapter that is full of lemony goodness. I am wondering (I feel like an idiot) why would it be better to use condoms due to the nature or their jobs. Great chapter and I can't wait for more. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Hi Ant1gon3

Glad you are enjoying the boys. I'm sure you've asked this question over on ffn too re their condoms. In their line of business, they can be inadvertantly covered in all sorts of disease transmitting gunk. Hence, regular testing. Therefore, for the protection of their partners, they responsibly use condoms.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Oh to be a gay man! You make it sound so wonderful! I hope to come back as one in my next life. For now I'll have to endure all the awful thing that go along with being a het woman. Edward might have something to his theory! Thanks for the smile. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi ant1gon3

Glad to raise a smaile. I agree with you, I'm a het woman that would like to come back as a gay man or maybe a cat??? All good fun eh. Thank you for reading and reviewing - much appreciated. Next chapter will be up at the weekend.

Take care

maryhell xx

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Jasper is afraid of the hot tub! So cute!! Loved it. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Heyyy ant1gon3

Yeah, it was a bit of a cute chapter. Glad you enjoyed it. Cut turns animal next when a table gets involved.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Take care

maryhell xx

 

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Pool

Oh, I definately enjoyed!!! I sure wish that your stories would come with sound effects. Maybe you could get Alice to figure out a way. Great job once again. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Hi ant1gon3

Glad you enjoyed - HAHAHAHAH maybe one day I will have the technical know how to produce a sound track - alternatively a narrated version of the story (including sound effects). If there was a way - Alice would have found it. lol.

Last two chapters are with my beta and will post when I have them back.

Take care

maryhell

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Hike

I prefer Ed as a lover not a fighter but he is hot when he's a fighter! Loved it. Great job. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

Hi ant1gon3

I know what you mean about liking Ed as a lover - I do rather enjoy writing fight scenes though. All good fun either way.

Take care

maryhell  xx

 

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Great chapter. I am said they had to return from their honeymoon but happy you will continue with another story. Congratulations on being published. It is well deserved! You are a fantastic writer.



Author's Response:

Hi ant1gon3

Glad you enjoyed the story - yes, sad it's over, but they had to go home sometime. I have started on the next story, so it's a case of watch this space. 

Many thanks on the congrats and your very kind words. I'm blushing. SQWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE.

Take care

maryhell x

Popular by SimplyMatt Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

MY ENTRY FOR THE SWW HALLOWEEN PICTURE PROMPT, THIS ENTRY WON SECOND PLACE. Seth had looked forward to getting invited to Alice Brandon's Halloween party and worked hard to be accepted by the in crowd at school. That was, until the guests started dying.



Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Horror, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17981 Read Count: 253
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2012 Updated: 07 Nov 2012
Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am loving this story!! Your discriptions of the storm and the "creepy-ness" is brilliant. I'm as jumpy as Seth is. Great job. Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, great job! Very suspenseful. I am definately curious to know who is doing all of this. I love this pairing as well. Looking forward to more! Thank you for writing.

Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great twist!! I really did think that Edward would be the killer. I did think of Seth but in a different way but I was too stuck on my Edward theory. I assumed that Seth was telling the truth and thought that maybe he has some sort of split personality disorder and all of the people were in his mind somehow. I loved it!! Thank you so much for writing.



Author's Response:

thank you xxx

Your House by SimplyMatt Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

Edward has loved Jasper since the day they met. His every waking thoughts are about him, but something is not right, something has changed.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8670 Read Count: 394
[Report This] Published: 16 Dec 2012 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: ant1gon3 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! I'm feeling so much right now. I want to wring Edward's neck for not TALKING to the love of his life. One small conversation would have cleared up everything. I loved watching him walk through the house and remembering all the different things that brought them together. They seemed so beautiful together. How Edward could even dream that Jasper had found someone else... You are an amazing storyteller. I'm not someone who reads one-shots and I almost threw out the email telling me about this story, then I received a couple of recommendations to read it. I'm so glad I read it. You are one of my favorite fanfic authors. Keep up the great work. I always look forward to your updates. Thank you for writing.



Author's Response:

thanks so much for the review