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Bio:
My entry for the Steamy Movie Crossover contest featuring the movie Serenity. Bella provides Edward with a distraction while the crew is away. Rated M for lemony goodness.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1678 Read Count: 3590
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Welcome Distraction One Shot
Loved it! =)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked.
Thanks for reading and taking the time to review :)
Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!
Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.
As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin. Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back. Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush. Damn, she was 26 years old. When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?
A HUGE thank you to colorguard_girl for my new updated banner
All Human/Alternate Universe
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85741
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I'm really enjoying your story. I wasn't sure I would understand everything that goes on, because I've never had a baby, but you wrote it in such a way that it's easy to follow. I really love the storyline, and of course your Edward and Bella. Thanks for writing. =) Kelly
Date: 02 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Wow, there is so much going on in your story already! I love it. I mean, I'm not happy about Billy, or anyone's sadness, but I love a story with lots going on.
I just love Edward and Bella in your story. I can't wait to see how long these two will keep thinking they can keep it professional. I also can't wait to see how dinner goes over at Alice's house on Saturday. =) Kelly
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Hi there! I really like the beginning of your story, and I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks for writing. =) Kelly
A collab between Kitschisme and Rosette-cullen Isabella Swan has lived as a servant her entire life. She has come to expect cruelty from her masters, but will her luck change when she is purchased by the mysterious, brooding millionaire Edward Cullen?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 58565 Read Count: 33358
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
I love the hotness of these two, but I'm going to be waiting for the other shoe to drop. A shoe we'll call Rosalie...
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
*Giggles* So Bella has unwittingly cast a spell over our Edward, has she? :D Oh, and I want to beat the crap out of those little harpy servants.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I wonder if Edward knew she was a virgin, or if he just assumed that she wasn't one. I can't wait to see how he acts towards her now. Will he go back to his brooding or will he be nicer.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
What's he going to say? I can't wait to find out. =)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I can't wait to have the mystery that is Edward Cullen revealed. =)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
*Giggles* Oh this is really fun! ;)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I'm loving your story so far, very much. =)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Oooo, let the party begin! This should be fun. =)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Well at least she's away from bitchy, nasty, gold-digging Rosalie; is she better off with seemingly hard-ass Edward? I guess time will tell. ;)
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
So if Bella's not going to be a slave, why did Edward buy her? And why did he pay so much for her? Hmmm.
Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I'm so excited to read your story! =)
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I can't wait for Rosalie to be put in her place.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Yay, that went better than I expected it to. =)
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Oh, thank-you so much for writing your story; I really loved it. =)
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
This is not good. If and when Edward finds out that Bella had anything to do with JB, he'll flip out and be reminded of Tanya's betrayal.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Oh how I love a good romantic story, and yours just fits the bill... =)
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Oh cripes, leave it to that damn golddigging Rosalie to ruin things.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Well crap; I should have realized that Edward couldn't tell Bella that he loved her too, even if he does feel it. I think the pain and betrayal he still feels for what Tanya did to him is still fresh. I'm sure he'll come around soon enough. ;)
Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Oh Bella, I think Edward might just surprise you. ;)
Set during Eclipse - Night of the Tent/Snow Storm – Bella, Edward & Jacob – this two-shot story is my version of events, as told from Edward’s POV, while he battles his demons over Jacob’s presence in the tent that night.
Neither of them comes out too well from the experience.
Note: This story is rated NC-17 for language and explicit sexual material.
Note: This story has migrated across from the FanFiction site.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Jake/none
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4747 Read Count: 1051
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - HEARTBEATS
This is good, but I'm almost afraid to read the next chapter. I'm cringing already. =)
Date: 10 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - DISENCHANTED LULLABY
Ewww, Jacob! I can't help it; I can't stand that mutt. =)
3rd Place Winner in the "A Picture is Worth a Thousand Words" contest.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1030 Read Count: 328
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Boy with the Guitar
That was so good. It started out melancholy, then ended on a happy note. I think somehow Tanya did send Bella to him. Thanks for writing. =)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I loved trying to write something that was exactly 1000 words, made things interesting. : )
Edward, a well know author, starts working at Bella's bar to help with research for his next project. But as circumstance pushes them together, and feelings grow into something serious, Bella's afraid her past will change the way Edward feels. AU/AH/Canon
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94430 Read Count: 55106
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Research
Sometimes I can just tell right away; I think I'm really going to love your story. It's started out great. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Flirting with Disaster
Nice. Just jump right in the deep end already! ;)
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: An Officer and a Gentleman
Awww, I just love your Edward and Bella. Edward is so sweet. I can't wait to find out more about their pasts, and if whoever broke into Bella's place knows her, or if it was just random. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Cleaning Up and Baring All
I was right! I knew I'd love your story, it's great! :) xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Drinking Games Sober and Shopping Sprees
If only we all had an Alice in our lives! :)
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Secrets, Questions, Lies, and a Partridge in a Pear Tree
I absolutely can't wait to know what Bella's secret is, and how she knows Rosalie, and how Rose knows her secret. First I wonder if has something to do with Bella getting checked/monitored for cancer, or if something happened to her. I can't help but think that something is up with her physically because of the fact that she wouldn't let Edward perform oral sex on her. Then there was her reaction to Quils girlfriend being pregnant. Or I could be totally off base. I better just get to reading to find out! :)
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Buried Under the Guilt
I didn't cry while reading the chapter, but I feel like I might now. Things are going to be rough for our couple for awhile aren't they? I'm so sad for both of them. I hope Edward doesn't push Bella away, but I have a feeling that he might, or the other way around. Powerful chapter, wow. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Another Country Heard From
Oh lord, now what? Things are so emotional right now, I feel like crying or hiding under the covers like Edward. I hope Esme is going to be alright. This was another really powerful chapter. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Limbo, Lunacy and Self-Loathing
I don't know what to say right now, other than I really love your story, so much. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Someone to Watch Over Me
Not sure what to say. But big hugs to you for writing this story. xo
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Way Beyond Empty
Your story is so fabulous and I thank you for writing it. I may have already said that, but it deserves repeating. xo
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Finding Inspiration
So glad Esme is home...Awww, that card Edward gave Bella is so sweet. *swoon* xo
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Indescribable
Great chapter, and I loved date night. ;)
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Positively Negative
I just love your story! :)
Edward is Bella’s geeky calculus tutor. Edward naturally develops a crush on Bella, but knows she would never be interested in nerd like him. But when something serious happens, and Bella needs help, who’s the first person she calls?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8002 Read Count: 573
Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Face Down
Oh my gosh, that was so, so good. Thanks for writing it. This was one of the best 1-shots I've ever read. =)
A one shot story following ExB from the time they met, to their happily ever after. Set for Valentine's Day and for Breath-of-Twilight's Countdown on fanfiction.net
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5690 Read Count: 302
Date: 07 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
You should be so proud! You wrote a fabulous story; I loved it! It was so sweet, and cute, and so touching and heartfelt. I really loved it. Thanks for writing. =) xoxo
Bella is on her honeymoon when a storm hits and she is tossed off the boat along with her husband. When she awakens on a desert island she is rescued by a beautiful angel with crimson eyes. Lemon included.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4808 Read Count: 892
Date: 08 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Honeymoon in Paradise
That was so good; I loved it! It was different, in a good way. =) xo
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Written for the Summer of Smut '09 one-shot contest. Has been rec'd and featured by the Perv Pack's Smut Shack.
On vacation, a beautiful woman is taken captive by a sexy bartender. They become consumed in a night of...ahem...fun. Rated NC-17 for mature themes, profanity, lemons, etc.
[created by me]
I ignored the cat calls that were flowing around me, leaving Rose to deal with them as I leant on my right hand, using my left to coax the bartender forward. He stalked towards me and swung my legs to his side of the bar, grabbing my hips to close the gap between us.
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[created by me]
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6473 Read Count: 1587
Date: 10 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Captive
I loved it, it's beyond hot! It sizzled and smoked! Thanks for writing. =) K
Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106330
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I just can't say enough how much I love your story! =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Oh, what a great chapter! I'm so happy for them. You write a great story, do you know that? I hope you do. =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
This part is so heart wrenching, but at the same time happy because of the new baby coming. I think all of the drugs that Kate took really fried her brain, the stupid bitch. I still love your story! =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
I feel so tense, this is killing me! You've written such a good story. xo
I hate Kate so much, she is so selfish. She's convinced herself that what she's doing is justified, she doesn't really care about her daughter or she wouldn't be pulling this bullshit! Arggggg!
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I knew it! I had the feeling this was going to happen. I was on the edge of my seat this whole chapter just waiting for this to go down. That fuckin Kate; I want to kill her, even though she's just a fictional character. I'm so emotionally tied up in your story that sometimes I forget that! =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
What a great, emotionally packed chapter; I loved it! Oh that Kate, what a bitch! Can't wait to see what's next. =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Love is in the air! I haven't giggle-snorted so much in a while, this was a great chapter. Great lemon too! But all your lemons are great! ;)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
My heart kind of aches for these two. I swear it's so easy to misunderstand things and jump to conclusions, especially when you are so far away from the person you need to talk to. I am just so wrapped up in your story; I absolutely love it. =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
And here it comes, the inevitable drama. *sigh* I can't wait to see what happens next. And I especially can't wait to know what the hell Kate wants. xo =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
I don't know if this is the right word to descibe your story, but I think it's so sweet. I know E/B have quite large obstacles to overcome, but of course anything worth having is never that easy, it takes work. **Then we have the Jake factor; I wonder how he's going to try and screw things up.**I'm still in love with your story, by the way. =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I'm so in love with your story already! I love the heat between E/B, and I can't wait to see what's going to happen between these two after the holidays are over. =)
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
*Big smile* I just love your story so far. I love Edward with Emma, so, so cute! I think I'm really going to love reading your whole story. =)
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I loved your story so much! Thanks for writing it. xoxo
Date: 15 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Awww, I feel all mushy, and sappy. Great chapter. xo
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Oh shit. Things are going to get scary aren't they? I think Bella is acting pretty much the same way a lot of us would in the same situation. JMO. There has been so much going on with everything, and she's got to be going stir crazy being in the house all the time. I know she wanted to take back the lie she told Edward, and I have a bad feeling about that. xo
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I love your story so much, but why am I starting to get a bad feeling in the pit of my stomach? :o
Edward is the hot QB for the Pittsburgh Steelers. Bella is the hot rising rock star. In what seems like another lifetime he was everything to her. When life throws them together again can they reclaim old feelings and build new ones? Maybe!!
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9810 Read Count: 1793
Date: 02 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Make-A-Wish
That was awesome, I loved it so much. I think it was one of the best one-shots I've ever read. Thanks for writing. xo
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for reading - Beth
Written for the Devirginizing Edward One-Shot Contest. He fantasized about her for years. Now, she'll make those fantasies come true. EXB, Lemons!
Rated M/ NC-17
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4116 Read Count: 1292
What happens when Edward allows a bit more before the wedding? Call it a practice run... Call it desire... I call it Lustful Temptations.
Originally written for the Fun With Your Clothes On Contest.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2929 Read Count: 1397
After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183993
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Rosalie among the Volturi
Hi there! Did you miss me? I would never flounce on you.
I loved this chapter so much! I was laughing like an evil woman just imagining what will happen to those three disgusting pigs. I can't wait to see how much damage Rosalie and the girls inflict upon the brothers. I look forward to your next chapter.
=) Kelly
Author's Response:
Actually,yes, I missed you :0)
I'm currently reading Slave in French (again) to relax while I'm translating Collisions... You're in for some hilarious moments in the coming chapters, lol...
Date: 05 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Alice Brandon, comtesse de Marillac
Wow, what a coincidence that Jasper and Alice crossed paths when they were children. Sounds like poor Alice had quite the revolting childhood. If he remembered her when he saw her in the infirmary, then I have to wonder why he didn't recognize her when he took her from the beach after the ship wreck. I guess she must have looked like a drowned rat. I can't wait to see what happens next. xo Kelly
Date: 05 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Jasper Whitlock
No wonder Jasper is such a bastard, he grew up with a bastard for a father. I guess he had no choice? No, I think everyone has a choice. To see what he saw at such a young age though, had to have had an affect on him. I however, will not cut him any slack. xo Kelly
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Bella's punishment
Bella has no idea what kind of an education she's in for. I really can't wait to see just what's going to happen with her, especially regarding Edward. xo
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 10: The training room
I've really missed your story, but I was trying to finish up with some of my shorter stories. So I'm back so I can get all caught up with you. =)
I think, no, I'm sure that Edward is going to have his hands full with Miss Swan. Bella is way too feisty for her own good, not that I blame her. I think I would be just the same. I sure as hell would put up a fight.
I think Edward went a little overboard with the punishment. After all, Bella had not been told of the rules. I understand his 'job' requires him to give out punishments when deserved, but...I suppose it's just the way it is, the women aren't there to be treated well.
I wonder if Bella will try to escape. I wouldn't put it past her, but I really hope she doesn't; I can't even amagine what her punishment would be.
Oh, I have to say that if/when Bella has to go serve the three pig Volturi brothers; I will hate it and not enjoy it at all. Just saying. It certainly won't stop me from loving your story though. =)
I worry about Rose and Alice too. What about Esme? Hopefully she'll be saved by the good doctor. Oh and poor Jacob too. I'm eagerly awaiting the punishment of Jasper. hehe He's such a prick in this story.
Thanks for writing. xo Kelly
Date: 29 May 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Freedom
What a great chapter! But I had a bad feeling about one of the mercenaries not being found and killed by Emmett and Jasper, especially when Bella asked Edward about it and then forgot to ask Jasper about it later. I knew it! I feel like my head is going to explode!!! Now what? Where are they taking the four ladies? What about Edward going to see Bella's father? Not to mention Mike Newton.
It's all too much! I'll be dying until your next chapter! :o) xoxo Kelly
Author's Response:
Right now, translating the two last chapters is my priority and I'm in the middle of chapter 44, which should be posted by the end of next week.
Date: 20 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 40: The end of a reign of terror
Hi M! I loved this chapter so, so much! I especially enjoyed the three perv's punishment; I laughed my ass off! That was awesome, I'm still grinning! I just love your story so much! I'll be looking forward to your next chapter. xo Kelly
P.S. I hope everything in your life is going well. =)
Author's Response:
Don't worry, the next update should arrive soon, the chapter 41 is in the hands of my beta :0)
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Between heaven and hell
I really, really like Edward's bedside manner. ;) Oh damn it, I just knew someone was going to cockblock Edward and Bella. I say it's frustrating but for the best, after all, Bella's going to want to be all healed up so she can actually enjoy herself, be able to move freely, not just lay there more or less. I'm pretty sure they will both get a whole lot more pleasure if they wait. There's nothing like pent up sexual frustration. ;) Also Edward will be able to show Bella lots of different ways they can please each other when she's healed completely.
Now I'm dying to know what's wrong with Jasper. But that'll have to wait; I need some sleep! Hey, once again I must say thanks for writing. xo Kelly
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Caring for Bella
Cripes! I have to go read the next chapter, fast!
=) Kelly
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Don't cross Aro
I guess I should not have been surprised when Aro told Edward that he'd be dishing out Bella's punishment, but I was floored. Poor Bella. Poor Edward. May Aro burn in the fiery pits of hell, or how about let Bella bite his dick completely off, shove it down his throat, and then Edward could whip him to death. Maybe the other two brothers could just be drowned in the sea. Or better yet, let the slaves loose on them, yeah that sounds like justice to me. Just a thought.
Thanks for writing. xo Kelly
Author's Response:
Like I said, maybe your wishes will be granted :0)
Date: 04 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: A slave trainer's obligations
What a mess these people are in! It's just one giant clusterfuck! I'm glad that Bella did such damage to Aro's little dick, but damned if she isn't going to get a severe punishment.
Aro is such a depraved MoFo; I'm not surprised that he issued a threat concerning the other slaves, just to make sure that Edward beat the crap out of Bella and Alice. Poor Edward. I don't think he's going to figure a way out of this.
Alice is safe for the time being, so that is something. Oooo, I had a thought; I wonder if while Alice is in the infirmary, if she'll get a chance to talk with Jacob. I'll bet that Carlisle will 'hide' Alice in the infirmary with her broken leg, that will keep her safe and not available to the whims of the jackals upstairs. At least I hope so. I also wonder if Jasper is going to come out of his coma. (I know you can't say, but I can't help being curious) =)
Well here I go to the next chapter; I'm thinking the next couple of chapters are going to be hard to read. I'm still looking forward to reading it though, because things have to get better, don't they? Eventually? I'm going to say, yes they will. =) Thanks so much for writing. xo Kelly
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, things will definitely get better eventually :0)
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The Volturi's request
Oh ick! Poor Bella and Alice, their young innocent eyes should not have had to see those repulsive, gag inducing,(no pun intended)pieces of crap Volturi brothers.
I was so proud of Bella for 'taking one for the team', she is fiesty, strong, and brave. Bella is also, no doubt in a whole lot of trouble. I'm worried what kind of punishment Aro will demand Edward to deliver, or if he'll take care of her himself. Oh crap, I just thought of something; will Aro blame Edward for Bella's actions?
I can't wait to read more! I'm getting all worked up, worried, and nervous for Bella, Alice, and Edward. Although Alice may not be in any danger at this point in time.
I hope you aren't tired of hearing it yet, but I really am so invested in your story, and characters. Thanks for writing. xo Kelly
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Third day in Volterra
I'm glad that Carlisle told Bella a bit about Edward, though I'm not sure that it sunk into her brain. I think her body had different ideas though. ;) I imagine that Carlisle will end up being a great ally to Bella, as well as Esme and hopefully Alice and Rose too.
If I could wish for the perfect scenario it would be this: for the nasty Volturi brothers to be killed or to rot in some dungeon, all the slaves to be freed, for Jacob to find happiness, and of course for Edward and Bella to fall in love, and for Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, and Alice/? to find happiness with each other.
I also have to wonder if Rosalie's parents will try searching for her, and end up on the Volturi lands. Also will stupid manwhore Newton come looking for his bride to be, or will he be too busy sticking it,(so to speak)to some other young lady with a wealthy family. Hmmm, should be fun either way, if it happens.
Oooo, I just thought of something else too; Maybe Edward, Emmett, and Carlisle will come up with a plan to escape with their heart's desires. Or something like that. I feel like poor Alice is left out here, but I of course want her to be out of that *ell hole as well.
Sorry for the long review, sometimes I get carried away. =) Thanks for writing, you are awesome! xo Kelly
Author's Response:
I love when my readers get carried away :0)
Well, as far as I can tell all your wishes will be granted, but I don't want to spoil the story by telling in advance what is going to happen. Alice won't be left out and yes, we will see lord Newton later on in the story...
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Doctor Carlisle Cullen
Love your Carlisle; I would love to see him smack some sense into his sons. I think they are both smitten with their respective slaves.
It was great to meet Carlisle, and I'm pretty sure he thought it was great to meet Esme. I'll bet they will be enamoured of each other in no time.
I'm really looking forward to what Dr. Cullen is going to say to Bella about his son. I hope like *ell that she doesn't get caught being away from the harem.
You know, I haven't meant to leave Alice out; I wonder who will be her trainer. I get the feeling that neither Emmett nor Edward will want that job , but what choice do they have?
I can't wait to read on, and see what happens next. I just love your story so much! xo Kelly
Author's Response:
I couldn't envision having Alice touched by Edward or Emmett, so I had to find a way out... you'll see.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Rosalie Hale, duchesse d'Essanges
I really love your Rosalie, she's one hot seductress. I love how she handled Emmett. I can just picture his confusion when he wakes up still shackled. I'll bet he's already in love with Rose. ;) Hey thanks again for writing; I'm having a blast reading your story. =) Kelly
Author's Response:
Thanks for telling me that :0) In fact, most of the people who take the time to read my story are not disappointed :0)
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Emmett Cullen, comte de Morvalle
I really like your Emmett, it was really cool to hear from him. =) I wonder if that hidden door in the harem's spa room will play a part at some point in your story, besides to let Emmett sneak in to ogle Rosalie in the pool. ;) xo Kelly
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Another kind of punishment
I just knew what Edward had planned for Bella, as he was pacing back and forth. Just for a minute, I thought he might use nipple clamps or put a clamp on her clit, then I thought no he wouldn't because she'd probably enjoy it too much. *Laughs*
I have to say I'm beyond happy that Jasper is in a coma. (I'm not very nice am I?) Hey; I just love your story, you know. xo Kelly
Author's Response:
Nipple clamps on poor innocent and naïve Bella... I'm not sure Edward would gain her affection if he was this naughty :0)
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Second day in Volterra
Oh good, I've been waiting for Jasper to get some kind of punishment; I hope it's brutal. *grins evilly* =) Kelly
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Jacob Black's escape
Oh yes; I am really, really looking forward to Jasper's punishment. I hope it's really brutal. *evil smirk* At least I hope he gets punished. I think you said he does.
Oh cripes, I'm really afraid for Jake. He is going to be severely punished for his escape attempt. I wonder if Emmett is just laying in wait to catch Jake, afterall half the men there have attempted to escape, Emmett and Jasper surely know where the slaves would go to hide or which routes they would go in their attempts.
Thanks for writing. xo Kelly
Author's Response:
Jasper will not be punished per say, as you will see, but rather incapacitated, which I consider as a form a punishment...
Date: 03 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 13: The trap
*Grins* I wondered if Bella would try to do something to help Jake. I'm so proud of her. =) I guess I should'nt smile too much, as she will undoubtedly be punished, again. I hope she really did some damage to Jasper though, that almost makes it worth it; I would imagine that Bella feels the same. xo Kelly
Author's Response:
I'm glad to see you didn't abandon my story, for there is much more in store in matter of turnaround. Also, you'll be happy to know that I sent chapters 37-38 to my beta, so I might be able to update pretty soon :0)
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Isabella Marie Swan, marquise de Courville.
Loving your story so far. I'm such a sucker for a historical romance. Even better when it has a wicked twist, and it seems from your story summary that I won't be disappointed! I'm really looking forward to reading more. =)
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Pleasing Bella.
Poor Bella, she has no idea how much her life is about to be turned upside down. I can't wait to read all about it. ;)
Date: 16 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 3: The ship wreck.
Noooo! Jasper can't be one of the bad guys, or can he? Maybe he is just one of the Volturi's lackeys or something. Guess I'll find out soon enough. I'm anxious to see exactly where they are being taken, and who will be there. ;)
Author's Response:
Ah, I can't tell you much because I don't want to spoil the plot, suffice to say that Jasper will not go unpunished for being such a bastard...
Thank for reading and reviewing :0)
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The lords of Volterra
Well, aren't the brothers just wonderful; I can't wait to see what kind of sadistist shit they are into. Lucky Edward gets the use of the slaves anytime he wants; I think that might just change when he sees Bella. Maybe? Can't wait to see what happens to Alice, Rosalie, and Esme. Oh, and Jacob too. xo
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 5: The good doctor and the bad masters.
Oh, I'm so wrapped up in your story already; I can't wait to get farther into it. =)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like this story and take the time to review it. Not a lot of people do so these days, and it makes me even less motivated to update soon :0(, but I will do my best anyway.
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Edward and the slave Tanya.
Yes, I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to Bella. xo
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 7: The journey to Volterra
I can not wait for Jasper to be punished for being such an asshole. He's going to be in deep shit when the Lords see the bruises on poor Bella's face. I'll bet that Bella's smart mouth will get her into quite a bit of trouble. Won't that be just horrible; Edward will have to punish her. ;) xo
Date: 17 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Edward meets Bella
Oh, I'd like to be punished by Edward, repeatedly. ;)
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 27: There's something about Rosalie
I love that you have given us some insight into Jasper, Alice, and now Rosalie. I'm sure they all have more to their stories, but at least you included them. I look forward to Emmett next. I always love Edward and Bella the best, but it's nice to have the rest of the characters included, especially when they all play an important part in the story. Not all authors do that, so I thank you. =) xo Kelly
Author's Response:
I think it has to do with the way this story is written, multiple points of view is something I did at my readers request because they wanted me to write a story in which we would see different perspectives. The Training school saga by TSO and Fotrooza is written this way as well.