Reviews by dj071688
Summary:

Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.

Banner by Mkystich

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156928 Read Count: 119844
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

6 sets????  What was in the drinking water?   Was there a blizzard 18 years before???  Just kidding.  Loving it so far.  Really like the relationships.

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254405
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

OMG, I wanted to strangle Alice.  Who the fuck does she think she is.  She definitely showed her rue colors.



Author's Response:

She is her mother's daughter

Summary: Past Featured Story

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 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183695
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

I personally think that the Jessica situation needs to be resolved permanently.  Death would be suitable.  As for him proposing, he is an idiot to even consider it, and she would be a fool to accept.  She should have never went back to his house to begin with.  She should have went to Alice's, or even Esme and Carlisle's for that matter.  Their track record speaks for itself.  

Come Undone by Scorp112 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She took a risk that didn't pay off, and it left her with nothing. How do you tell someone to come home when you're the one who sent them away in the first place? How does Bella break the news to her ex-husband that the baby she's carrying is his?


 


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12753 Read Count: 3303
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2011 Updated: 08 Jun 2011
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Totally worth continuing.  This was a truly angsty, yet touching story.  Definitely want to see where this goes!!!  Definitely.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!! I'm working on the next part now... :)

Summary:

How far will Edward have to go to earn forgiveness? Has Bella set the price too high? Will there be any winners in the end?

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2537 Read Count: 602
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2011
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Forgive Me Not

Wow. Very powerful piece, which by the way, is just begging for more!

 

Coppertop

Arms by Virginia May Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Competitive shooter Bella Swan had an Olympic gold medal and dreams of another before witnessing the brutal murder of both her parents.  Now living under a new identity as a high school student in tiny Forks, Washington, she must learn to cope with  the loss of both her family and her future.  When she meets the local math teacher and her older "foster-brother", Edward Cullen, things are complicated by an instant and unexpected attraction.

 

**Nominated for Best Bella & Edward in the Emerging Swan Awards!! 
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**Featured on The Lemonade Stand in TLS Nursery!  Click to visit!


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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's faves - not updated in 2012, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 158957 Read Count: 88719
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2011 Updated: 03 Oct 2018
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well you have me hooked.  Tangled webs and all.  Got the story from the Top 10 Poll for this month, and am glad I gave it a chance.  

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well you have me hooked.  Tangled webs and all.  Got the story from the Top 10 Poll for this month, and am glad I gave it a chance.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Hot Commodity Banner

Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 112949
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Chicago

The story is phenomenal.  Still have the secret of the bet hanging out there.  The story of Jess lurking in the closet, and of course, the future of their relationship.  Love it.  Rec'g on my FB Group and other pages. 

Noticed that the last Polyvore was for chapter 4.  Any chance on getting polyvores for some of the other chapters, i.e., the New Years Eve party?  Just asking.  Excellent story sweetie.  Glad to have you back for the long haul.

Coppertop (Denise)

FB:  Coppertop Johnson

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Back Again

Although I am all for an HEA, I think Bella is too fucking immature for a serious relationship.  She either runs or wallows, and she has done both to the extreme in this chapter.  She needs to either shit or get off the pot.  Personally, I could have kicked Edward in the balls for becoming such a pussy and letting her ride rough shod all over him.  Yes he was wrong, Yes he fixed it.  But when all was said and done, and she still wallowed in self pity, he should have done them both a favor and brok up with her.  Simply put, Bella really got on my nerves this chapter.

Oh, and welcome back.  Congrats on the paper and the new job.  I have sorely missed you.  As you can see by this review your writing has illicited more emotions than I was anticipating.  Great job.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: At Home

I know I read and review on FF, but it is one of those stories that you have to read the update on all sites it is posted.  

Thank you for the acknowledgement, and please know that although you may have times of self doubt, we do not doubt your abilities in the least.  And the recent update was proof.  

Proud of you!!!!!!

Dying To Love by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

FBI coroner Masen, tries to find evidence to stop the Necromance Killer. With the newest ‘victim’ really alive, will her information help him catch the killer? One-shot for Halloween. Joint collaboration of: Weekitty and TeamAllTwilight.

The wonderful banner is SoapyMayhem Fanfiction.  You can find her on facebook under that name.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16554 Read Count: 3363
[Report This] Published: 31 Oct 2011 Updated: 31 Oct 2011
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot For Halloween: Dying To Love

Wonderful story.  Dramatic, scary, endearing, and romantic.  WOW, you really know how to cover all the bases.  Nicely done.  Very nicely done.



Author's Response:

Thanks so very much, sorry for the lag in replying.  Kasi and (Nikky).

Summary: Past Featured Story

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President Edward Cullen decides to pass a bill that will change life as Bella Swan knows it. A misplaced Jimmy Choo and a stupid publicity stunt will change the lives of Edward and Bella. Are either of them ready?

Banner by the lovely vbfb1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 130734 Read Count: 215884
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 Fulfilling Fantasies

First, good luck on the exam.  No bombing.  Second, I want Mystery POV drawn and quartered.  Soon please.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Following Directions

I really love this story, but am so not happy with Seth being used.  So not right.

Summary:

Edward and Bella overcome death, destruction, drugs, cheating, and everything in between. But can they withstand the possibility of divorce? AH OOC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30149 Read Count: 14870
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Destruction

I see that Edward didn't see this coming, so why the hell would she disconnect her phone not permitting him to at least talk to her.  Must say, I hate her right now.  Very painful.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: A Phone Call

Damn, she is just cold-hearted.  I know we are only seeing his side of things, but from what I am reading, he is clueless which begs to wonder......what the hell.

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Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Anti Nausea

That bitch.  She devastates the man, then CASUALLY asks him how he is doing?  I don't know where you are going with this story, but I do not want them to get back together.  Anyone that can be that callous after ripping someone's heart, does not deserve a second chance.  j/s

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: No Regret

Edward needs to sell the house, and get the hell away from the area permanently.  No phone contact, no forwarding address, let her see how it feels.  God I hate this Bella.  Which translates into good writing on your part.  In case you were wondering.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Intoxication

Now he is apologizing.  Damn.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Glimmer of Hope

Bitch,bitch, bitch.  Edward.....just say no.  Now you need to tell her you need time.  Don't do it.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: A Truth Revealed

BINGO.  The fact that he saw her making out with someone else and still he took her back.....well he is a better man than most.  I would not have taken my husband back if had been me.  A relationship without trust can not stand.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Car Ride

OMG. 

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Moment of Truth

Yeah, Edward, I would like some answers myself.  You know after thinking about his statement, "I want my wife back", "I want to save my marriage", my question is why.  It is obvious that she did not think enough of it to even discuss her reasons for leaving, and why would someone want to spend the rest of their lives with someone who could easily do a repeat performance.  Is is the fear of being alone?  just asking.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Soft Touches and Whispered Words

No comment.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Remembering

My son was two in 2000, I was a huge fan of sleep.  Sorry.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Getting Closer

Okay, you are not shy to have sex with your wife who left you, but you don't feel right sitting next to her.  Oh, Jessica needs to know this.



Author's Response:

And i totally envisioned Edward telling Jessica and them talking about it, but when I went to write it I just couldn't.  Guess that's not how it happened. lol. But yes it just plays into how her actions have made him feel guilty and insecure about things he shouldn't, but when they were alone it was just them and he didnt have time to think about anything.  

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Date Night

You did great with the fluff.  Still don't like her, but you did great.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Is It Worth It

No answer to that question.  I reserve the right to read further and pass judgement at the end.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: A Flash of Anger

Alrighty then.  I feel slightly vindicated.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: I Don't Know

Bravo, bravo, bravo.  Finally Edward finds his balls.  Alright.  Pride.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Getting Rid of Bella

I am usually an HEA type of girl, however, the only HEA I see in this story, is this marriage needs to be over.  Excellent writing.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Hear Me Out

Okay you do realize that chap 22 is a repeat of chap 1?

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411738
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I can't even, nor do I want to, the pain of being trapped inside one's own mind.  Well done!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I do believe this story is teaching me patience.  Grrrrr.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

So glad to find you here.  She farted.  Really?  This girl will never get laid.  Or pregnant.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

*Lifts leg in the air*, where the hell is my EdwardCullen?  :(

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Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Da bomb.  Literally.

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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

I truly hope you are wearing full body armor and a helmet.  WTF.  It is bad enough when others cockblock, now she is cockblocking herself.  Quick, call the men with those white suits.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Never thought I would say this, but he needs to let her keep on running.  This is the second time someone has intentionally deceived him.  However innocent her reasons, her methods are totally questionable.  Let her go Ed.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Aw damn.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Damn, just as good on TWCS as it was on FFN.  Just saying.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward is a choral director, reeling from his recent divorce from his wife, Jessica. His world is filled with his daughter, Emma, his music and his job. Bella is an English teacher, running from her past and wary of love. ExB, AH, AU

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Shena's Storys to Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 252329 Read Count: 127474
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I am so happy with this chapter.  And with the story overall.  But then I have loved everyone of your stories.  Truly talented girl.  I even liked reading it here.

Copper

 

Summary:

Follow along as Sexy Geek Boy and Nerdella continue to grow as lovers and parents. Be aware, there is danger around the corner. What, you ask? Read and find out! ExB, AU/AH

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , A Nerd Story of Love Series
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 161783 Read Count: 114423
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 01 Aug 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Forgive Me Brother, For I Have Sinned...

Lots of love girl.  Yes, you are on my favorites here now.  This was an extremely difficult, sensitive, and emotional chapter.  After all Emmett has done, it still stunned me to hear the sentence.  You did a wonderful job on the closure of this character.  As usual you have outdone yourself again. 

 

Coppertop

La Vita Sospesa by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured Story

La Vita Sospesa by JenRar

What if the result of Bella jumping from the cliff in New Moon hadn't turned out like it did in the book? What if Alice hadn't seen Edward's
decision to visit the Volturi when he heard about Bella jumping? This story deals with the consequences of those actions.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16899 Read Count: 3094
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Passion

Okay, Jen, where the hell is this going???????

 

Coppertop



Author's Response:

Hehe Got your attention, didn't it? ;)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Acceptance

Shit!!!!!!!  Always a catch.

 



Author's Response:

Haha Little bit. ;)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Tranquility

No, it did not ease any worries, because now Carlisle is going to call the dogs.  Not a good thing.  I can just see/hear their response.  Let me start practicing my eye rolls now.

 

Coppertop



Author's Response:

LOL I didn't make them too bad. ;)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Resolution

Thank God.  Dogs see reason.  Now the ploy begins.



Author's Response:

Haha Yup. :)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Evolution

Well done as usual.  Is there any story you touch that doesn't turn to gold? ♥



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :) Be sure to check out my co-fic with Drotuno! We're posting Coming Home under Sarges Girls here, on Twilighted, & on FFn. :)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Desolation

Will do.  You and Deb are my favorites.  I actually have all of Deb's stories on my Sony E-Reader.  Are any of your stories in pdf format?



Author's Response:

No, they aren't...not yet anyway. heh I'm going through all my old stories & editing. Once done, then I may do that. :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 411998
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW.  That was, WOW.

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Exactly, who would?

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Date: 18 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Aw, that is so sweet, already planning how to best serve the Senator breakfast at the end of their night.

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Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Please tell me that you will be feeding my addiction SOON!

 

Copper

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

WOW, I just want to be Isabella for 24 hours.  That's all, just 24 hours.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

WOW, stunning, beautiful, romantic, erotic.  Damn girl, you covered them all.  Nicely done.

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Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Hot, Hot, Hot.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

So sad to see this go.  Loved the characters, the plot, and the writing.  You have done such a wonderful job with story and are truly a treasure.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hate to see this end.  But very grateful for their HEA.  Beautiful story.  Thank you.

Walk by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/38123/images/Walk_banner.jpg 

 

 

After a betrayal leaves Edward reeling, he decides to change the course of his life. Starting over can be a daunting task. Will he let a certain brown eyed beauty help him find what he's looking for?

Rated NC-17 for adult situations and language           *Banner by Falling Stars*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110402 Read Count: 49585
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Mar 2013
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love the twist.  Can't wait to see where this goes.

 

Coppertop

 

Got the rec from

Euphoria FanFiction on the Underfictionated Group on Facebook.  So glad I did.



Author's Response:
Thank you for giving it a shot, and for reviewing. Euphoria is one of my besties! I <3 her much :)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loving this story.  And Edward.......never judge a book by its cover.  Or age.



Author's Response:

Thank you, and I agree :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love this Jake.  As for their reactions to each other Bella and Edward may be intelligent, full of ideas, and creative, but they are both socially crippled, and suck at interpreting the opposite sex.  LOVE IT. 



Author's Response:

Bella's going to take notice before Edward does. (and do something about it...) But, poor Eddie is still feeling the sting from Kate. It's going to take him a little longer. Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love Jake.  Hate Tanya already.  Pissed at Bella for acting the way she does.  Guess she's right, she is immature.



Author's Response:

Jake is awesome. Tanya, poor Tanya. Everyone hates her already. Before this fic is over, you might actually like her. And Bella just doesn't understand Edward. She'll come around soon. Promise :)

Thank you for reading, and reviewing! I really appreciate that you took the time to do both!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I swear, him realizing Jake was gay, was so damn cute.  I can just picture that look on his face.  Priceless.  Well done my dear.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you liked it! Thank you for reading!! :)

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

BINGO!  Now that's what I'm talking about.  Let the games begin.  Giddy up.



Author's Response:

Aahaha  Giddy up   <<  love that  ;)  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Not too sure how I feel about Esmeralda.  Loved the communion of the group.



Author's Response:

I knew that some people would have an issue with Esme, I wasn't sure that I liked her much when I wrote it. She just kinda came out that way and I went with it ;)  She's a good egg, though. She just needs to back away a little and let Edward live his own life. Thanks so much for reading! xoxox

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Love the united front on the *stomping* of Cunt Kate. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Bouncing in my seat.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  No long wait please.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Lucas and Lillie, love it.  You did such a wonderful job with the writing of this story.  Thank you so much for all of your hard work.

 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

So, so, so worth the wait.  Well done.  Loved the addition of Mary, Philip, and Lydia.  Excellent job.

Reign of Terror by Jezzeria Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Ever wonder why Alice was committed?  Maybe you don't want to know why.  AU, AH Alice/Jasper O/S written for Ellie's House of Horrors


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Horror, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2996 Read Count: 84
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2012 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Reign of Terror

Wow, sort of saw that coming.  Poor Alice.  The child could only take so much.

Raising Alice by Jezzeria Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

After losing Bella during childbirth, Edward finds himself alone and grieving. He is left to raise their newborn daughter, Alice. Will Edward be able to heal himself and be the best father possible for Alice? A story about the bonds of a parent and a child.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/None
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4374 Read Count: 393
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2012 Updated: 16 Sep 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Neverending

Laughed my ass off picturing this.  Poor Edward, be glad it isn't a boy without that diaper on.

Summary: Past Featured Story

cc

 

In 1843, Queen Victoria reined alongside etiquette and protocol. Everything was judged from who you were to what you owned and how much status you had.

 

Can a small farm girl from Lord Cullen's estate bring life and happiness back to his son? Will Master Edward see her for what she is as a person, or who she is by birth? And what does Lady Cullen have up her sleeve?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Historical, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 89224 Read Count: 248345
[Report This] Published: 01 Sep 2012 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

It was truly an exceptional story.  Every last chapter.  *I curtsey to your talent, my lady*.  Bravo.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 1: September 1st 1843

So love period pieces.  Saw this was pulled on FFnet, so here I am.  

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 1: September 1st 1843

So love period pieces.  Saw this was pulled on FFnet, so here I am.  

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: September 22nd 1843

I do truly love this story.  Knew about Michaelmas from Sense and Sensibility.  Kinda proud of that.  

Conventioneers by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?

 

conventioneers


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30221
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2013
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Year One, The Day Before

Looks like the beginning of a great relationship.  Shall we continue.

Shame by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

It was a union that was never supposed to happen, an affair that took over her life and altered it. Unable to keep him from advancing, can Bella keep her brother-in-law away and save her marriage? Or should she give in on what could possibly be what was always meant to be? Perhaps fate will make the decision for her.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8627 Read Count: 2814
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Shame

Wow.  Well done.  Loved it.  Alls well that ends well they say, and you did the job with this one.

Summary:

 

Bella orphaned, ward of the state, reaches adulthood. She meets one person and she thinks she has found her forever, but he breaks her heart and throws her aside.  At twenty-one she finds she is the sole beneficiary of the Swan Hotel.  Weird things happen, and the evil spirit in the hotel has decided that Bella belongs to him.  Will he get her, or will a local ghost hunter be able to save her. Rated for Adult reading. AH

Banner made by: TeamAllTwilight 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Mystery, One-Shot, Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23222 Read Count: 2986
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2012 Updated: 27 Oct 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween 2012

WOW, I'd give this a 20 if I could.  Outstanding job!



Author's Response:

Well this was our second Halloween scary story to share; I am stoked to see what kind of stuff Nikky comes up with for next year.  I am not a big super-natural writer, or alternate universe writer, so this was mainly all Nikky; I just helped research things, reworded and worked things and added bits here and there.  Be sure to check out our other stories and if you like yourself some Older-ward and Dom-ward stuff be watching for the new story we have coming out soon, because it is going to be good. 

Well I promised that I would tell you all about my experience with the super-natural.   When I was 18/19 I lived in this house in Rock Island, Illinois.  The house was old and quite spooky anyway, but not huge in size.  The basement had closed off walls that had been bricked over that were at one time part of tunnels used for the escape and hiding of slaves.  The second floor was one large room and it had a dead bolt lock on the door.  I used the whole second floor as my bedroom.  The only people, who had a key to my room, were my mother, my best friend and myself.  Well one night my best friend and I went out to a movie, before leaving I got mad and threw a wadded up bunch of necklaces and earrings on the comforter of my bed.  I had been trying to untangle one necklace, but couldn’t get it.  There must have been fifteen or more necklaces, and several dangling earrings and bracelets in the wadded mess.  When I left the house I locked my door, because I didn’t trust anyone in my room.  My mom was also gone and the whole house was locked up.  My mom was with her boyfriend and actually spent the night there.  My bff and I went to see two movies back to back and then went out to eat and came back to my house.  When we opened my bedroom door, and turned on the light all of the knotted up jewelry was all separated and laying out in neat rows across my bed.  All three keys were accounted for, and there was no sign of someone breaking into the house or my room, all doors had been completely locked up tight.  A few weeks later we had someone come in that claimed they could converse with the spirits and that there was a family who had died in the house many, many, years ago of some sort of plague like disease.  Well it was a younger woman her husband and 2 children a boy around 6 and a baby girl and the couples grandmother.  It was the boy who unknotted all the jewelry, he apparently liked to do puzzles, that is what the person said who talked to the spirits.  Several other weird things happened in that house.  The toilet used to flush all by itself.  Someone hid my mother’s glasses and then threw them at her when her back was turned after looking for them for a few hours.  My mom came home one day to a pot of water boiling on the stove, and she was the only one in town, me and anyone else who had access to the house were out of town for a concert and she had locked the door before work that day, when she came home water was boiling on the stove.  Many other odd things happened, but I was never so happy in my life when the people we rented from sold the house and we had to move. 

Thanks for all the story love,  Kasi and (Nikky).

Summary: Past Featured Story

five

 

At 30, Edward realizes that he made five monumental mistakes in his life, but what he didn't realize was that those mistakes would be profoundly life altering; leading him to her. A romantic drabble in EPOV.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), To Read , J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18116 Read Count: 68511
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Just Smile

Dpn't say goodbye.  Don't say goodbye.  You can do this Edward. 

Determined Heart by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Determined Heart by JenRar

 

Eighteen-year-old high school senior, Bella Swan, falls for the unattainable: her twenty-eight-year-old English teacher, Edward Masen. Will they give in to the temptation of forbidden desire or walk the line of the law?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14413 Read Count: 3432
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2012 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, erotic, emotional, and exceptional well written.  Knocked it out of the park babe.  Well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

ddkc

 

ddkc

Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1813047
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 317: Chapter 317 Charlie & Lauren Out-take

Outstanding story.  Read entire story last night.  Job well done.

Deep Trouble by JenRar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

 

Bella & Edward are married and spend time as a D/s couple. One night at dinner, Bella disobeys the rules and must pay the consquences. BDSM, but nothing too heavy, plus LEMON warning. See Story Notes for more.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2107 Read Count: 3831
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2013 Updated: 12 Apr 2013
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why, yes, I did enjoy it.  Well written.

 

Coppertop

My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 826]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 272049
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Okay, I read this story yesterday and today, and caught up.  However, I am chomping at the bit for continual updates.  Excellent story.  Love the authenticity you have incorporated into your writing.  Truly a wonderful job on the writing.

Summary: Past Featured Story

What Bella would look like with the Volturi

 

Life in Volterra is a dark and twisted one and many challenges uprise. Story begins during 'New Moon' after Edward leaves Bella. Her life is just getting back on track after she be-friends Jacob Black. But what happens when the Volturi find out a mortal knows the big secret? What happens when Edward tried to return to Forks?

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22619 Read Count: 3257
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2013 Updated: 30 Oct 2013
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Red flame

Dun, dun, dun.  Go get her Bella!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 9: A fight to remember

That was close.  Ah, Jane, shame the newborns didn't know to rip off your head.  I think Bella should choose Felix.  

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Home

Still say she should choose Felix.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Aro's blessing

Well, I may not agree with her decision to choose Edward, however, I just wanted her to be happy.  Now I am hoping Felix finds his mate.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 12: New life

Yeah, it was definitely left to support a sequel.  Great story.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Familiar face

Damn, should've known that bitch was at the heart of the trouble.  Excellent writing on the action scenes.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Training

Wow, so much for poor Felix.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Marcus

Not looking good here.  And isn't there an unspoken rule about separating mates?

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 6: The mystery of the South

Okay....who the hell is it???  ;). Loving this story.  Excellent writing.  Couldn't believe only one review.  Definitely a hidden gem!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Visitors

I would like to see Aro and Jane tore apart and torched!!!!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Preface

Damn.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Volutri Life

It is not like Bella has a choice in diet there.  Poor Felix, wonder if she ever told him about Edward?

The Lost by Mamasutra Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

Bella Swan was not normal. She had been born with the gift of seeing the dead, but to her it was a curse. She had sworn off her abilities as she returned to her hometown to live out her final year of high school in an attempt at being normal, but nothing is normal when you are the one hope at redemption for the spirit of a lost boy. *paranormal romance & drama* beta'd


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 115308 Read Count: 9384
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 May 2014
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Great job.  I knew you could do it, but what a job.  You worked your ass off.  Thank you.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Yeah.  Thank you for the update, but I'm not feeling too good about this right now.  Poor Edward, he can't seem to catch a break in life or in death.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, free from an abusive ex and his controlling family, takes her son and moves away from the life she knew. Opening a Bakery, she meets Edward, a fireman, when her partially deaf son runs off. Can Edward be the Baker’s Man, and Irina’s daddy too? What baggage does he have?

fs

Banner by: Chandrakanta


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15651 Read Count: 3430
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2014 Updated: 01 Jun 2014
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Exceptionally well written.  Sad that some people never learn.  I blame the Similac and Enfamil.  js  :D

Summary:

He's roamed the world, protecting the innocent from the evil who prowl among them, an Angel of Death on Earth. It is his sole purpose in life since he lost his other half and became immortal, until he finds her again. She's young and innocent, studying the criminal mind and how to combat it. She's glimpsed the darker side of humanity and is ready to join him in his crusade.    

im


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12940 Read Count: 1627
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2014 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautifully done.  Love the subtle changes you did.  This could be developed into additional chapters, and I would love to read them.  Exceptionally well written.

 

5 Stars.

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by FemmeCullen

 

Summary: Edward’s grandfather’s business has been closed because of his investment partner died and his daughter, who he calls the viper, wants more than just money to reopen. The viper makes life hard for the Cullens when Edward refuses her ‘offer.’ When an angry Edward meets another poor little rich girl that needs some tutoring, will she be the one to teach him a thing or two?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69931 Read Count: 84900
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Finally!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

mm

 

Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

fs


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113226
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 8 part 6

Love to see the pics.  Worried about Tanya wanting custody just to spite Edward.  Hate seeing adults using children as pawns for revenge.

 

Noticed that this did not update on FF, are you going to continue there?



Author's Response:

I will... it's just that FF isn't as easy to use as here. It takes me a lot longer. I have to post it here and then copy this one to put there... but first create a doc with it, then upload, then manage stories, then select, then pick chapters, add new chapter. Then I have to find the doc I created, then select.   Here I can do it in under 5 minutes.  :)