Wow, so Bella has more than one power & one of them is the same power Aro has. No wonder he's suppose make an appearance later. She's going to be pretty powerful. I also see why Rose was the only one who could go to Bella. Rose had had nothing to do with her at that point. If Edward or any of the others had showen up & they touched her hand she would have known Edward was watching her. Her heart probably would have given out. This way she gets easied into the whole vampire thing a little at a time & they will know not to touch her till it's time for Edward to come clean about spying on her & being her mate. That was funny, "What took you so long Dr. Cullen?" next chapter please. 

Well that was quite a bit to process. 

Wow that was a lot to take in. I wonder when they'll figure out or rather find out that Bella is the one suffering from thirst. I hope Edward & Bella get around to having sex. It doesn't have to be soon I just hope it'll be in the story somewhere. 

This was a fun story to read. I'm a little sad it's over but I liked how it ended. 

Thank you for the great story. 

Well now that they've each yelled at the other maybe there can finally be some healing. 

Wow, with everything that has happened it's no wondered he tried to killed himself twice. I know he has to deal with things (well should deal with them, I'm a runner. If I can run from something or pretend it didn't happen I will.) but honestly I think what will help the most is moving away. Starting over somewhere else. 

Wow, this was so painful to read. I loved it!!!!!!!

That was seriously harsh. Does this story have any form of a happy ending? Like, does Bella die taking Edward with her? Do the Cullens know what Edward is doing? Are the okay with it if they do? Would they try to save her if they didn't & found out? I hope she doesn't get pregnant. 

Uh oh, I wonder what he's got planned. 

Gotta say I'm worried about what he's up to. This "normal" life Bella's living can't last. 

Ah, this story is so evil & painful but I can't stop reading it because I wanna know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay! Progress!!!

Wow, is she really out?

Ah so sweet

Ha that's cool, not is Charlie alright with what the Cullens are he talked Bella into giving them a chance.

I was wondering if she could go back to the white space and; since she can go back Edward can join her there 'cause she wants him to. 

Wow that was a lot to take in. Damn that Jessica, how insensitive can you be. She said all that really loud & in a room full of people. So awesome she got slapped, not once but twice. 

I guess Edward was going to make an appearance at the party but was running late. That or Jasper was trying to convince to show up. Either way Bella's on her way out so Edward's going to miss her. I hope she gets to the house okay, I'm not sure she should be driving in her current state of hysterics. I understand it but she needs for a bit longer before she drives. 

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Yay, good happy sex!

So that's how Jasper got the blood in there with anyone seeing. 

I hope but at the same time am dreading Bella getting pregnant quick. If she doesn't conceive within 3 months the whole house gets to fuck her. 

It says that in the bible? Damn, I think I might take it off my books to read list.

that is the most messed up wedding I have ever read. 

I hope Bella is okay. 

Your story is always so painful to read but damnit I can't stop reading it!!!!

I need to know that they get off the island or that they escape somehow. The only good part about Tanya bring so severally hurt is that she'll be left alone for awhile.

So next is the wedding then?

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Edward needs to seriously man up & quit being a pansy. I'm glad the Emmett & Rose finally got to talk to Edward & Bella and quit being wierd & uncomfortable. 

I guess the men folk are going back to the island to "clean up." Hope it goes smoothly. 

I hope this plan works I really really do but I can see it going horribly wrong. 

Okay that was awesome to read. I was just thinking in an earlier chapter that those two should know what I felt like to be fuck in the ass with out mercy. Also the way that Edward handled fucking Victoria: genius, simply genius. Kootos Bella & Alice on the comments to James at lunch. 

This was a good night for everyone, well the five of them. At least I hope Tanya was okay, she wasn't with the couples so I hope she was n her room alone. I've never asked my husband to paint my toenails, I should asked when I was pregnant but I wasn't sure he would, now I'm curious. I wonder when and who figures out that Alice is Edward's missing sister.  

I wonder how long till her birthday? Months? Weeks? I'm glad she gets away from that life. So judging from her husband's name they have a boy: Charlie :) Aro was just as sick & twisted in his youth, if not more so then he was as an old man. 

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm so sad this wasn't the big moment. I was hoping it would be. 

Im still trying to decide if I'm greatful for the teaser or not case it really was a tease. 

Awwwwww That was sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn she bled alot. She was lucky though, she got to enjoy her first time & even orgasmed during it. For me it hurt like the first 4 or 5 times & I kept bleeding a little the first 3 or 4 times I had sex. I think it was around the 3rd time I started to enjoy it. 

Next chapter: the Q & A then the wedding I'm guessing?

That was interesting, poor Bree. I'm glad her sister is safe & hope she stays that way.

James is one fuck up individual. I really hope that Bella & Edward & the other "guests" of the house hold get saved. Preferably during the time that Bree gets sent there to deliver her baby so she can get saved too. 

What's happening back in the real world? Emmett & Rosalie? Carlisle & Esme? Charlie & Renee? I really hope they find them before its too late. 

I knew it. Alice is Mary Alice Edward's long lost sister; saw that coming.

I feel really bad for Bree, she got caught in a world she couldn't get out of. Sounds like she's going to kill her self once she's made sure her baby & sister are safe.

I would not be surprised if Bella is caring multiples. If she is hopefully its no more than three & more than that is just ridicules.

When will they get off the island? How? I hope it's before Bella gives birth or is too big to run. Gotta say, I don't think Bree gets out of this world alive. Sad but that's the feeling I get. 

Wow, I honestly didn't think they would make it that far. I really hope that they make it all the way. I also hope that Emmett at least mentions the phone call to Carlisle, maybe if he hears Aro's name he'll think there's merit to the phone call, that its not a prank. Whether Carlisle gets the message & sends help or not I hope they make it to where they're all safe & don't get caught.

I knew Victoria wouldn't go. She's was raised in a house like that, born into it. She believes in that lifestyle & does know of another, probably doesn't even dream of it; sad.

That was also terrible what they did to Bree. They just threw her away without any thought. I'm not surprised but I was still terrible, they get a police team to that island Bree's body will be more evidence of what went on there. 

Next chapter please!!!!!!!!

is this story almost over or is this event just leading into more horrers?

Poor her, I wonder what her real name is; does she remember?

I am glad that she had a friend on that miserable island. 

I'm glad that got stopped. So yay, she's free! I don't remember anyone saying anything what happened after she ran away. Just that she ran away with the sable boy & then they bought a new Elizabeth who was raped & became pregnant with Carlisle. So Elizabeth #1 suffered longer but Elizabeth #2 suffered worse; in my opinion at least. 

That was a nice ending to Elizabeth & a good beginning to Charles & Isabella's new life together. I love a good HEA. 

So Bella was named after her grandmother. 

Yay!!!!!! They're all safe!!!!!!

Im glad baby Bree will be kept safe. I really wish Edward & Bella would talk to each other instead of jumping to conclusions & getting all upset. I hope he doesn't get into any trouble & comes back to the hospital.  

Next chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay!!!!! Consensual sex!!!!!!!

im glad they'll be sharing a room, it does make more sense. 

Poor Bella, I'm glad she understands but, I still really hope her & Edward can finally talk. Plus he needs to know that Bella is keeping the babies. He needs to be with her. 

Edward is such a fucking idiot, but at least he & Bella will be together again soon. Damn, Bella is going freak out if Edward is right behind her, she's gonna think someone is following her. 

Im glad Edward finally knows that Bella is still pregnant. 

Next chapter please. 

Thank goodness he never got the chance to do anything mor than scare Bella. I like what Bella did to his dick. I'm kinda hoping that James lives so that he can be questioned & charged. However I'm not a hundred percent he would make it to trial, that community is good with cleaning up messes & staying hidden. 

Oh boy when the Cullens & the Swans hear about this in the morning . . . . . . . I can only imagine the chaos of screams, rage & the fear for Bella/twins & Edward. Emmet isn't going to forgive himself for this. Not his fault but he is going to feel so guilty. 

I wonder who killed James?

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I'm glad jake is gone, question though: the scene with Victoria, was that real or a dream? 

The whole Jake scene, much more believable then in the book. I gotta say, I don't think this is the last they see of Jake, I think he'll be back. 

That would not be a bad place to stop but I'm not opposed to more chapters.

i like that thought, it's true for most families too, as long you're together it doesn't matter where you are, you're home. 

Is this a Darkward fic?

Edward basically stole her & now appears to be hiding her away from everyone.

He started dating Renee to get close to Bella didn't he? He was watching her for awhile before he made his move would be my guess in this story so far. 

I thought I odd but didn't think too much of it when Esme walked away without saying anything to her husband that day at the bakery. 

Edward wants to control Bella & make her completely reliant on him. He's shuting her away from the world. Poor Bella is so excited someone cares for her she's not questioning whats happening. A lot of little red flags are going the further I read. Let's see if any of my guesses are right. 

Esme is nutts. Edward is losing his mind & seems ready to snap at the right (or wrong) question. 

Bella needs to get away from these people, maybe that Charlie guy is someone she can trust. 

I was right, he wants her to be dependent on him & stay that way. 

So was it Leah that tried to kill Bella?

I was hoping that Esme & Carlisle would move out there & glad that they were able to bring Alec with them. I wonder if Carmen is going to be honest & truthful with Esme, probably not. I really hope that Elizar walks in on his "wife" showing her true colors & leaves her. Hope there was prenup. 

Ahhhhh more please I want more of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Emily? Jacob? Kate? The reseptionist he got fired?

Idk what Carmen has up her sleeves, honestly I'm wondering what she wants from him. Edward, I do believe is trying to do the right thing & I do believe that he cares for her (I'm going to call it love yet) but I'm also thinking that once Bella rejects him & calls him a lier he's going to turn into a jerk again.

Jasper's place is honestly the safest place right now, he'll protect Alice & Bella. I'm also glad that Carlisle & Esme are going to LA. Hopefully they are moving there, they should've done that from the beginning but then again most people don't think that family is going to betray them. I hope Elizar devorces Carmen kicks her out & cuts off Kate. Heidi is possibly innocent of this plot, though she may choose to go with her mother. Sure hope there's was a prenup. 

That's a lot to take in. I believe Edward's story though, not Carmen's. So question, is what Carmen said the story Emily told her or did Carmen make that story herself? I'm gonna guess Emily spun that story since. I'm not surprised that happened or that turned out the way she did. James sounded like a horrible man & to raise basically on his own like that, yeah not surprised she turned out like that. Still though, Carmen don't exactly smell like roses herself, she's a real piece of work & doesn't care who she has to hurt to get what she wants. I still hope Elizar wises up & leaves her ass & cuts his kids off to teach them to behave. 

Next chapter please. 

That was a very sweet moment. Embarrassing but flattering. Wondering when they are going to give into each other. 

I think that Tanya has no idea what is really going on & is just willing to do anything to get Edward. Funny I was so into the reason for the fighting that I completely forgot how it looked to others who weren't in on the conversation; which was everyone but Edward, Jacob & Tanya. 

Im glad that they still got to enjoy their night together though & at least some of their morning. Edward can't protect her from that forever, he's going to have to tell her so she before she finds out on her own. 

It could be anyone in the car from Emily to Tanya, anyone. I'm glad the babies can stay in Bella for awhile longer like they are suppose to. NICU isn't a bad place but the absolute best incubator is a mother's womb. 

I'm glad that Bella is going to be okay but I wonder how long she'll have to stay in the hospital? 

Well, next chapter please