Poor cluless Charlie! Working to provide for your child is great, but spending time with that child is the best! It seems hard for him to recognize the changes she is undergoing now, but nice that he wants to try!

Bella and Edward really are wonderful parents. They have to be a bit sad at having their only child grow up so quickly. Nessie and Jacob are finally in love, so the family circle just grew some more. Good thing love is so elastic and can  stretch to fit everyone!

I would say you did a dandy job of writing this bit of historical romance, well done!

This was a great start to her college career! It's so nice to like your roommate and liking her brothers has got to be a bonus!

At least she told him a bit of her awful secret. Matbe she can tell him the rest later! It scares me that those flowers showed up like that! If it is her stalker, how did he find her?

I'm afraid Bella is right and this will turn out to be the handiwork of James! According to the prologue, that sure can't be a good thing!

The weekend went great, but I'm afraid telling Edward how she feels isn't the only problem Bella has! James is still out there with murder in his heart!

I knew that sicko wasn't through  messing with Bella's life! It scares me that he watches her so closely!

I hope she gets this sacrificial nonsense out of her head and soon! Even if she goes to James, if he hurts or kills Bella, it would devestate every one who loves her! Plus there is no gaurantee that it would end his vendetta against her loved ones!

See, this isn't keeping Edward safe at all! I hope she has a knife, or a gun and just kills the crazy creep!

Thankfully Edward and the police arrived in time to save Bella. Broken bones and cuts will heal, but James was determined to kill her, so I'm thrilled he died instead!

Too damn bad about angry blue eyes! If he wasn't such a selfish bastard, she wouldn't have turned to her old love!

Now things are back to the way they should be, Bella and Edward are together!

Thanks for this glimpse into Charlie and Renee's beginnings. I sure hope you plan to finish this sometime! Charlie Swan is one of my favorite Twilight characters.

Smart of him to get help with his lack of sleep and see a therapist about the nightmares!

Oh be so very careful what say, Edward or you may find out what life can throw your way! The proposal picnic was just lovely and I'm glad everyone is happy about it. Ther's still that odd feeling about Drew, though!

I'm willing to bet money that Drew and Victoria are one and the same! They just can't seem to catch a break!

No wonder so many readers are convinced of Drew's true identity, this is nearly proof! Too bad it ended Christmas, because it had been a great day otherwise, except for Emmett teasing Tommy. Reading the journals and telling Bella about the accident that took his parents was probably pretty hard for Edward, though!

It's toomuch of a coincidence that those flowers and card were delivered to their room just as they arrived! It has to have something to do with Drew. If she isn't Victoria she at least knows who is! Some New Years this will be with all this hanging over their heads!

Well, well, Drew isn't Drew, but at least she's not Victoria! She has had a bad time of it, under James and Victoria's thumb! Love seems to have redeemed her, luckily for Tommy!

I can't help but wonder why Edward keeps seeing Victoria kill his mother and his Bella? Maybe Dr. Young will give him a push in the right direction! At least the group is all moved in to their new digs and school is about to start again. It may even be time to pick a wedding date!

Okay, what the hell are you going to do to them now?

I hope Victoria chooses hanging, so she can slowly strangle! The wedding was quite lovely and a tribute to Alice's planning skills!

This chapter clears up a lot of Bella's misconceptions, so at least she and her mother are in a better place. The scary thingis the deep angry voice from the woods! The little geek in the grocery store parking lot was probably a vampire, too, so that's a worry also!

So, Alice knew all along where Edward would have to look for his mate. There must be a good reason for her to keep the scenario from him, and it's most likely some big problem they'll have to work out.

I hope Jasper isn't going to make an emotional yo-yo out of Bella. Edward kind of makes her upset, or ticked off, or intimidated, and Jasper zaps her mood. If he's not careful, she may figure out something is going on. Edward needs to take a deep breath and calm himself  a bit.

Alice sure is a sneaky little vampire, buying all those clothes for Bella , pretending they were things she didn't like for herself. It sounds as if Rosalie got the word to be nicer to Bella, too. With the snacks and the movie, Bella just zonked !

The dream Bella had was surely Edward and Mike fighting over her. I'm fairly sure her mood swings were courtesy of Jasper  and it was most likely Edward streaking like a ghost through the trees around her house. I'm sure he was having a fit over Mike being with "his" mate, plus daring to kiss her!

Just a normal day at Newton's Outfitters! It was so funny with the Cullens coming and going all morning. I would love to know what Charlie was thinking when Edward showed up to take Bella out.

Things were going beautifully there, for a little while. What's up with wolves running around a carnival, anyway? I loved Bella standing up to Emmett and Rosalie's complete approval. That was a moment, for sur!

A mental high five to you for the totally original scene you just wrote ! That fight on Charlie's front lawn was the damnedest thing I've ever read in a fan fic!. I'm sensing a bunch of stuff we've never heard before, concerning Bella, the Cullens and the wolves. Pardon me while I speed over to the next chapter to find out the mystery!

Just when I thought it might be okay, Jake has staked his claim to Bella. I'll bet a hundred dollars he's blowing smoke. That was quite a sad tale Alice just related. People have a way of hurting themselves, don't they?

It was never about faith with me, only disappointment. Plus I picked the wrong wolf. Should have known it was that idiot Paul, damn troublemaker! Now we're back on the right path! Let the explanations begin!

Great, it may be a problem, and it comes and goes. Sure scared hell out of the Cullens, when they thought Edward and Bella were dead. Some kind of supernatural change is happening, only nobody knows exactly what!

Maybe Bella remembered more than Rene and Charlie are aware of? Something that happened in Alaska when she was four. Maybe the poor girl has real good reasons to be afraid of needles? Curiouser and curiouser!

Somewhat scary, but kind of exciting at the same time! Mazes always sort of creep me out, but I see why this would add to the thrill of the chase, so to speak!

Hold the phone! How is Bella purring, as a vampire, if Edward hasn't changed her yet? Something spooky is going on here! This has to be connected to whatever Carlisle is trying to track down!

I knew something was up when Carlisle fell back into the wall. He  needs to stop beating himself up and just tell Edward whatever it is that has him in such a state!

Poor Bella, she was a lab rat, just not one of Carlisle's. The Volturi are responsible for what she is. They were the Eskimos in black she has nightmares about. This is going to get messy now that the past is coming back to haunt Bella and Edward. Since  they are mated I'm unsure how it affects her changing, or what the Volturi will have to do with it. I do know it usually means really bad stuff  when they get involved . Did I happen to mention what a sucker I am for a happy ending? Really!

How the hell is Bella going to be Felix's mate, when she already is mated to Edward? I can't believe Aro could be so unaware of developments in that quarter! It's looking worse and worse for Bella and the Cullens. The shit is about to hit that well-known fan! We had best all duck, quickly!

Whether she wants to admit it or not, Bella is changing, and not too slowly, either! What a mess! Can't wait to see how she reacts when Renee arrives!  Hopefully, Eleazar will be able to help when he finally gets there,  someone needs to!  I sure hope your mom is doing well and you are feeling okay, along with all the rest of your family! Take care of yourself and we'll be seeing you later!

Now I see why the Cullens want to keep Bella safe from the Volturi. If she unleashed this power she's supposed to have, it could be devestating, controlled by the bad guys! Since they are angry with the Cullens, that must mean more bad stuff is on it's way!

This girl has got it bad, and Edward is all she can think about! Makes me wonder what he thinks about her?

That's a pretty good start, him telling her about himself and his family. I think he may be going about this the right way. Hope so anyway!

Kind of don't blame her in a way for feeling ambivalent, angry and wanting all at the same time. I think Edward is going to have to do some major groveling, and it may take a long time.

Hearing whose home this is should piss off Bella a whole bunch! She seems  a bit volatile right now and may not appreciate anything Edward has to tell her! This situation is overwhelming to say the least!

Poor Bella, this was exactly what I was afraid of , that being unprepared, she is having a hell of a bad reaction. She may never get over the way she was changed! Too bad, too, because he didn't think beyond the fact of how much he loved her and she loved him!

How very disappointing to go to the party to see Edward and him not be there! At least Angela is happy to see Ben, so all is not lost. Though, I am curious as to who just locked the door and why?

Bella and Emmett had a pretty good day, all things considered. Too bad Edward didn't ask her what kind of car she wanted to drive! That could have earned him points and he blew it!

Perhaps with the help of his family, Edward can win back his Bella. Reading Charle and Carlisle on the phone was pretty sad , no wonder Bella cried.