Reviews by smlpate
Summary: Past Featured Story

A night of Halloween trickery & secrets leads to some unexpected treats for Bella. Will this night of debauchery be a one time occurrence? Or will Bella & Edward risk the burn and attempt a relationship? Contains Mature Language and Situations, along with some violence.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 69 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 726775 Read Count: 366143
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2011
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Moving Forward

love!

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Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 64: The Name Game

too freaking sweet!!! i love that they were born on aarons bday!

in love with thea! 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Tadpole Xmas

awwe!  so freaking sweet!  i loved it!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Perfect

i absolutely loved this story through and through!  all the happiness, sadness (which i was teary eyed), surprises, heartache, estatic, wishful, seriously every emotion i got in this story!  thanks for my entertainment!  next story im starting is your other one!

love,love,love



Author's Response:

We are so glad you enjoyed WTB so much!!  We had a blast writing it and we love that the readers came to care for the characters as much as we did!  Thanks for reading and for letting us know you enjoyed it so thoroughly!

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995606
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

holy grossness!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Idk but I like it!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Beegeez!  F'ing Jacob what a dick!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Holy crap!  That was a very emotional chapter!

The question is what is Ali up to?

Ido t think Angela is going to show either:(

 

Ethics Be Damned by krazyk85 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 489]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ebd

Banner made by xrxdanixrx

Bella Swan is a 28 year old woman who is a narcotics detective for the Seattle Police Department. Bella is assigned to go undercover as a high school student to bring down a massive drug ring fronted by the elusive Drug Lord Aro Volturi. Bella soon finds herself falling for her English teacher Edward Masen...

Edward Masen is instantly attracted to this new student, but can't pursue a relationship with a young girl.

 Will these two keep things in perspective or will their ethics be damned?

Based loosely on 21 Jumpstreet and Never Been Kissed

d

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191208 Read Count: 71563
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2010 Updated: 23 Dec 2010
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue

freaking love the weddimg in italy!

i hope you will do a sequel to this! 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183957
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Rosalie among the Volturi

i love this story!  i stsrted reading it yesterday and have gotten through all you have yet, sorry i havent commented prior to but when i get going to dont want to stop until i have to!  this is definatley one of those stories!

i feaking love rose!

i wondered how jasper and alice were gonna get together!

i knew edward would get to bella in time!

tanya is batty and her and jacob are perfect for each other!

until you post again, which i hope is soon!



Author's Response:

I will try my best to update next week :0)

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Date: 01 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Two lovers, ten prisoners, and one hundred freedmen, part 1

bella is coming into her own sexual self, huh:)  edward sure will enjoy that!

fing vultori and their offspring!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Rescue

Thank goodness!

I was worried about the girls!

 

Thanks for finishing. I keep checking;)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 40: The end of a reign of terror

go rose, go rose, go rose!

get that volturi ass:)

love me some edward and bella times!

until the next chapter!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

awwwe  i love how you summed everyone up!

thanks!

great ending!

Memories of Love by mizzdee Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Bella Swan wants nothing more than to prepare for her future.

When Edward Cullen moves to town he quickly realizes that he wants nothing more than Bella Swan.

Will her painful past and his recent mistakes keep Bella from seeing the man Edward truly is?  Can she let Edward in?  Can the two form that lasting bond that can never be broken?  Or will the heartaches and tragedies tear them apart for good?

Rated NC-17 for some strong language and eventual mature content.

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 199361 Read Count: 9583
[Report This] Published: 25 May 2010 Updated: 26 Apr 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Hoping For A Miracle

she may be too late:(

poor edward!



Author's Response:

It is very possible that Bella's too late. She may have done enough damage in the past to be able to fix things, but she was rushing to see Edward to try to make things right between them. All she can hope for is that he'll give her the opportunity that she's denied him for the past year and he'll listen to what she has to say.  Thanks for the review, darlin. Love you tons - D

Here's a quick peek at the next chapter that will be posted later today:

Edward's voice came through the door again and I stopped, hoping to hear what they were saying.

"Let me go!" he yelled at Emmett.

"No! You don't need that girl, Ed. Just let her go."

Hearing Emmett say that, I tried the doorknob this time, desperate to get into that room and make him see how sorry I was for hurting Edward all those times in the past. It was locked, of course, so I started beating the door and yelling for both of them this time.

They were yelling at each other and I heard Rose's name thrown around a couple of times. She had nothing to do with this, why would they even be arguing about her.

"...are you gonna let that damn girl..." Emmett yelled again.

His words were so hurtful and I tried as hard as I could to ignore them. I knew he hated me right now and how could I blame him. I hated myself for everything I'd done to Edward. But I was here to make things right. I was here to tell him that I was here for him.

"Fine! Bella can go to hell!"

Edward's words stunned me. All the air left my lungs and I fell against the door when my legs gave out.  

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Moving On

i just read all you have up to date!  love it!

hate jake!

im glad she finally realized jake is and only will be her friend!

wtf charlie!  he got fired, huh  he found out about the drug coverup  

i was really hoping she would have ran to edward:)

 

gladnshe finally 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - Clearing The Air

finally!

emmett totally doesnt like bella right now!

Summary: Past Featured Story

cblw

Banner created by xrxdanixrx

 

Edward Cullen is a 21 year old man who has the world at his finger tips. He has a great education, money, and plenty of women. The things he feels he's entitled to...but what happens when an innocent meeting with a beautiful, but older Isabella Swan at a coffee shop turns into something he never expected.

Will a hot and assertive woman like Bella, who likes to take control, finally be able to teach a young cocky Edward about life, sex, and women?

Thrust into a world filled with pain, pleasure, and all too consuming desire...Edward soon realizes it's a life he can't live without.

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 Chocolate Brown & Leather Whips teaser trailer by Emily Bowden

 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HBsINM0Nu3Q

 

 Teaser Trailer #2

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=20q3OG5zRwQ


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 318670 Read Count: 86074
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2010 Updated: 30 Jun 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter Thirty-Seven Auld Lang Syne

she said it!



Author's Response:

Yay!!!!! LOL!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Have a great weekend, babe!!! xoxoxoxoxo

~K

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-One - What Comes Around

thank fuck!

woman you had me scared and heartbroken for edward!

it was a lesson he had to learn but jeezus!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter Thirty Nine - Technicalities

poor edward, not inly did he not get the loan ,but now on his own  bella'is gonna kick his ass  

aro is a prick!



Author's Response:

He is not having a good day. Aro. *sigh* Angela should've killed him. 

Thanks for the review!!! :)

 

~K

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty Three- Purgatory

booo!  i was hoping he would've already been back!

I hope it doesn't push bella away!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter Forty - The Reckoning

are you serious right now?

she is lying thru her teeth! she does love him!

my heart is breaking for him.

wow!  until next time!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Three - Shell-shocked

i dont know if i want to hug him or kick him in the shin!

poor guy, i get why he is upset but idfk?

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Four - Moving Forward While Standing Still

yeah!   shes there!  oh my what is going on with her? what was angela trying to tell him?

yes, if bella talks to you, definately a sister story!

until the next one!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, babe...and yes, if you pay attention very closely, Angela was trying to tell Edward about Bella and her whereabouts...but was bound by a promise to keep her mouth shut ;))

As for sister story...I think I will do some version of that ;))

Have a great weekend!! See ya soon :))

~K

Diamond in the Rough by lmlx8 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4248]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ditr                   

Bella is coming from a bad marriage, and memories that haunt her. After recieving her Master's degree in Psychology, she begins to embrace her submissive nature. When she mets Edward she is drawn to his Dominating character. Can Edward help her to get over the pain from her past, and find peace at his feet.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 110 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 949046 Read Count: 1254420
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2010 Updated: 18 Sep 2014
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very, very true!

By manners, I meant how disrespectful she was about Bella, b&e's relationship, and how rude she was.  Let's just hope Bella didn't hear any of it. 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 103

This chapter had me giggling left and right!

so, quil and Claire wil fit in just right I think. It will take some getting used to , but they will enjoy it!

dougie!!!!!! What is he up to?? That boy, smh!  LOL 

I think Bella is going to be punished for sure, she may not get the fruity pebbles for 3 months!

rem is Soo freaking sweet and good.  Was Isabella freaked because of cauis and that's why she didnt respond??

Hmmmm...I can't wait for th rest!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

B  definatley is going to win!

alot did happen in this chappy, whew!

the bets winnings, which is too cute!

laurent, caisus, jess, emmetts perspective on whats going on is interesting and i almost agree!

i love the last scene of bella and edward and the camera!

cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

alice is a little spoiled bitch!  regardless of how spoiled she is, she needs to learn some manners and ooen her eyes to the fact of how bad truelly was!  she thinks bella just got tired of an murderous man!

i hope to hell that bella didnt hear any of that, or bella and alices relationship will be like esme and janes.

photo shoot sounds hot and im glad edward took over!  im glad that leah is seeing past the pain part niwbthat she sees for her own eyes bella is not being abused! jacob is freaking hilarious!

i hope your vaca was great!

until your next one!



Author's Response:

Manners...well Alice would never say those things in public or even to Bella's face, and well all i can say is Alice is her mother's daughter

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 97

I'm glad Edward told Bella and she didn't over hear it. It makes their relationship sooo much more loving, equal, and caring!

I know it always has been, but it shows his true love and his worries for her. And I love as he is telling her what Alice is saying that she remembers that Carlisle said the opposite:)

Vinny is too sweet!  I love how his one sentence to leah made her feel Soo much better!

Can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98

I loved the super long chapter!  

I'll be honest I was torn back an forth about the usual. I guess in my head I keep going back to the abuse she went through with James.   And some of the things he did just reminded me of the things James did to her. But then I go back to they are both doing this mutually, if not then she would safe word. Like she did in the bathroom!  And the only time she did was when she couldnt hold it any longer!  :). She is good by the way!  Then I remember how much be loves her and that showed too, during the usual which is not normal!  I did love that part!

Now how he handled Alice!  That I want to jump his bones for! Go Edward!  He loves her Soo much!  Alice is, like you have already said, a spoiled snobby brat!  And I do think she is preggo!  Drinking the OJ, huh:)

Ok, now the last part and how James said what he did to Edward about double penetration, I hope he really didn't do something like that and she doesn't remember:(

Only you will let us know:)

Amazing chapter!  Can't wait to the next one! 

And a sequel to top it off:) **jumping up And down**

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

I loved this chapter!

dougie!  LMAO!  Challenged her to a bj competition an I think she proved her point!  LOL!  Master does have more stamina!!! Woo hoo!  How funny was that! I'm glad she admitted it to the OCB! I knew she would, but it was still a feel good to see her do it when she did. 

I'm liking the way quil and Claire are seeing things, like you said not sugar coated.  

Demetri is such a good friend and Dom, I never once though he wanted Bella for himself, he was just doing the most important thing, keepin Bella safe. ;)

now the pissy worship was fucking hot! A little jealous here! LOL

i can't believe there are only 4 chapters/days left :(. Will you be continuing like you have mentioned?? I hope so!

happy V day!  Thanks for the little gift! :)



Author's Response:

I love Dougie, you should hear the things he thinks in my head...lol..he cracks me up...yesssss,,,,I hear the characters talkin to me...they never shut up....lol...I guess maybe my husband is right and I am crazy...lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 183697
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Epilogue: Blessings

i freaking loved it!  it made me laugh, cry, get mad, then happy!

amazing writing as usual!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Moving Day

i freaking love that this story is here in st. louis!  I love reading about my town! 

I'm loving the story line too!

I am assuming you are from this area, also?

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 741]
Summary:

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Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 105114
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Interveiwing

Holy hell!  Why did Esme & rose freak?

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The collaring

Oh my!

I freaking love it!

He is doing sooo good controlling his thirst!

Fing Tanya! Such a dumb bitch!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 First time in the playroom

Hot hot hot🔥🔥🔥

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I can't believe you left us with that!  Omg!

They are trying to protect her, are t they?

Good luck on your publishing!

Hopefully you will update soon, I love this one!

Intimate Ties by TellMeNoLies Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 122]
Summary:

Edward is a self-proclaimed Dominant and P.I. with a grudge. Bella and her brother are his target for revenge. Will he adhere to his mission for revenge, or fall in love with the one woman he shouldn't and bring forth her deepest desires?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95232 Read Count: 141807
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2010 Updated: 07 Aug 2016
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

That was one hell of a road!  Wow!  I figured it was James!

Im glad they are both able to be each others other half completely!

Absolutely loved it!  Now onto the sequel! :)

Summary:

This is the sequel to my story Intimate Ties

 

Dom Edward finally has his submissive, Bella, right where he wants her. But when Rose decides she wants to enter their world, they start to feel their ties come undone. Can their relationship survive Rose's attempt to sabotage? OOC/AH LEMONS, BDSM


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites, Bdsm stories only, Ageise02 not updated in 6mo reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11580 Read Count: 8772
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I just found your stories and I love them!  Its been quite some time since you updated this one, but I was curious if you took it elsewhere or are just not finishing it?

I am totally hooked to this story!

Summary:

flod

 

 

 

Dr. Edward Anthony Masen Cullen is a world renowned pediatric neurologist, he´s also a very sought after Dominant living in the Seattle area. What happens when the thrill of the playroom is no longer enough? What happens when he wants more than just a Friday through Sunday arrangement... Bella Swan a very young and very successful Corporate Attorney, who happens to be secretly crushing on her best friends older brother. It all starts with a dream, but after a very short, but failed marriage, Bella decides it´s time to give in to her submissive nature. With the help of her best friend and a blind date, can Bella finally find all the things her live is missing. ExB Rated for BDSM themes and lemony goodness. 

 

A very big thank you to the wonderful Kris Mkystich for my new banner!  Isn´t it sexy!!! Check her out in the December Drabble Wars!!  http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8769101/3/School-Of-Mischief

 

 

Winner of a Tomato Soup Award!

 

 

Nomimated for two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

Voted Must Read Monday by Twi Girls Next Door

 

 

Winner of two Wordsmith Awards!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, Twilight - Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 312058 Read Count: 389400
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

happy birthday!

your a tease! :)

james is my guess, crazy fer

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: For the Love of Domination

Well that was Definatley worth the wait!  And I knew she would get caught!  Hell she had to know:). She's gonna be in trouble!

I can't imagine how hard it is for them with both their jobs!  Thank goodness he wants to be with his gf tonight!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...

Oh my my! Oh hell yes!  I just read the last two back to back and poor Bella!  He was fighting between the right and wrong and even Edward was too! They both knew why it was wrong for her to pleasure herself, but at the same time it is complicated due to there b/g relationship.  

I think they were both making up just nice for the mishaps.  Now, I can't wait for the next chapter with the punishment and I am highly excited abou the Dom making up to his submissive.  




Author's Response:

First, let me start by thanking all of you who have been with me since the birth of this story or who have picked it up along the way, but continue to stick by me even when life gets in the way and updates are few and far between. Have no fear, tomorrow you will get what I hope is a much anticipated update, pics included! I noticed that there others still putting up nude or highly risque pics, so I won't deprive you guys of any devious pleasure either. I just have to make them smaller. Lol... Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement, and for sticking around to see this thing through to the end. As promised, here's your teaser:

Master had stepped out of my line of sight, but I knew that his glorious cock was out. Not only could I smell his unique musky scent of arousal, but I could feel the heat of his exposed flesh burning my skin. As if reading my mind, Master rubbed the tip of his silky, yet firm flesh against my cheek, awakening the wanton whore buried deep within me. “Mmm...” Master hummed thoughtfully. “So close, yet so far away, my little pussycat.”

 

My body remained stock still; the only indications that Master’s touch was affecting me was the way I swallowed thickly and the heaving of my chest. If this was a test, which I know it was, I was going to pass with flying fucking colors.

 

Nevertheless, it was still pure torture!

 

He was right there!

 

Right fucking there!

 

Suddenly, I felt overdressed.

 

My clothes felt too tight, constricting.

 

All of a sudden, the room felt like it was being engulfed in flames, and I swear it felt like my body was being consumed from the inside out. I could feel sweat forming on my brow and at the nape of my neck. Never before had I wished to be naked more than I did right now. As a matter of fact, I cursed the day that they ever invented clothes.

 

I blame that bitch, Eve!

 

Master gently glided his cock from the apple of my cheek to the corner of my mouth and stopped.

 

What?

 

No!

 

Give it to me!

 

Don’t tease me!

 

Pleaseeeeeee!

 

At this point, I wasn’t above fucking begging for what I wanted, but I knew that would be the opposite of helpful right now. Master wanted to test my control, and I wanted nothing more than to please him.

 

 

One quick swipe of my tongue and I would be able to taste him, taste the delicious nectar dripping from Master’s cock. Stopping right at the corner of my mouth, Master paused. “Does my little pussycat want a taste of Master’s cock?” Again I remained quiet. “Good girl, open,” he demanded.

 

He didn’t have to tell me fucking twice.

 

Dropping my jaw, I moaned in delight when I felt the pressure of his thumb on my tongue.

 

Surely, this is just a preview of what was to come.

 

Right?

 

Wrong...

 

Taking his glistening thumb and tracing my bottom lip for a second time in less than five minutes, Master brought his lips to my ear. “I’m afraid that naughty pussycats don’t get rewarded, pet.” Stepping back, Master tucked the beast back inside his pants, sadly cutting off my view.

 

Once his pants were zipped and everything was back in order, Master returned his attention to me. “Your journal is on the patio, pet, along with your robe, and I suggest you strip for inspection before working on your assignment. You will find instructions inside and have exactly one hour to complete it, after which, I will come to retrieve you so that I can dress my girl for this evening. We have a stop to make before heading to the club tonight, but I’ll explain more and give further instruction later.”

 

Knowing that was all I was going to get for right now, I waited until Master was out of the room to remove my clothes and slip on my robe. It was a beautiful spring day, so I didn’t bother with the belt, letting the sun warm my naked flesh. Living in the penthouse had its advantages, and also, the idea of some nasty old perv getting a peek at my goodies from one of the neighboring buildings turned me on and had my already wet pussy glistening even more.

 

Hey, don’t judge me...

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268726
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 12 May 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

congrats on the books!

bella doesnt know which way to go, i can only imagine how she must feel  

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

nope this doesnt suck!  i have been siding with bella this whole time, and just now got with how she was acting  at least she asked for help!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 10 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

idk who im more sad about?

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Baby steps! And she's taking them!

Yeah!  

Thats so sad what happened to merianda'

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

That was the sweetest chapter!  And sooo healing!

it also shows that everyone deals with tragedy in their own way, yet very similar 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I can only imagine how hard that was to write!  That was hard to read and not in a bad way!  That was amazing how her revelation came to reality!

Although I realize why she locked them out, it still hurt to see. 

Now Marcus!  He is truly a savior, along with Miranda! I love them!  I hope that they become closer!

Edward oh Edward! I do love that boy for her too!

its coming to a close, huh?

absolutely amazing chapter!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

That was Definately an emotional one!

a good emotional one!

those boys are hilarious!

i love her necklace!  It is an amazing heft they they all have!

edward is beyond sweet!

a pony!  I love it!

Summary:

 

Bella is Domme who is in search of the right sub.  After several profiles are searched she interviews two.  Go through the interview with her, and see how her test weekend with her potential new submissive works out.  Is he the right one?  BDSM themes, Hard core Lemons.  AH, very adult themes if under the legal age to vote please move on to another story.  The top banner was made by the fantastic and awesome: Christagbanners ... You can see her wonderful work by checking her out at christagbanners (dot) blogspot (dot) com.  The Black and Red banner, below is my First place award for Fans Vote in the Dommella's Dungeon Contest.  Thank you to all my loyal readers. 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Bdsm stories only, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 127084 Read Count: 48030
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Up to Hump Day

ooohhh! i like where this is going!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much

Sorry for my lag in responding to your review.  Kasi~

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Thursday in Chi-Town

holy hell that was a hot hot hot chapter!

too bad they are both too nervous to admit their true feelings for each other....



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much

Sorry for my lag in responding to your review.  Kasi~

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Love, Sex, and Pictures

i freaking knew that phsyco was going to do something and he was the one on the phone!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much

Sorry for my lag in responding to your review.  Kasi~

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Out with the Old, In With the New

they are a perfect dom/sub and vanilla couple! im sure it isnt all rainbows and roses, but they are too sweet!  i love that after so long they bith finally got their happily ever after!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much

Sorry for my lag in responding to your review.  Kasi~

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: A Sub Search: Epilogue

yeah they had 4 babies!  

i love that they are still able to enjoy the lifestyyle after all that time!

perfect!

 was that the first time he ever yellowed/almost red?



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much

Sorry for my lag in responding to your review.  Kasi~

Summary:

Sequel to Sex on the Beach. Rated XXX for violence, language and even hotter lemons. I recommend reading Sex on the Beach first. No one likes a cheater. :P


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325974 Read Count: 68251
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 26 Dec 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Confrontation

tanya is a crazy, delusional, whore, bitch!  shes going down!

miguel  so sweet!

until you post again!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Outtake 2: Isn't it Romantic

They were sexy sweet hot horny adorable and amazing!

Loved the b&b!

a cruise?? We will see!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Outtake 3: Somebody's heartbreak

Raises hand!!  Yes! You freaked me the fuck out!  I was thinking I needed to go back and reread the last chapter. 

And yes, that talk was needed!

whew?

Summary: Past Featured Story

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                                                                                   -thank you to mkystich for the beautiful banner-

There is only one person on this earth that Edward Cullen hates, and that's his boss...Bella Swan. She's cold. She's ruthless and incapable of human emotion, and to Edward's greatest frustration, the hottest woman walking the face of the planet. Will a proposition made change the course of their lives forever? Will they break the rules, or will all terms and conditions apply?

Lemon? Yes please!

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-thank you to evilnat for the beautiful banner-


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167815 Read Count: 84269
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 01 Apr 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - OUTTAKE

i love it!   thank you, thank you, thank you!

seriously perfect!

any more outtakes?  i love them :)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Past Part Two

i freaking love it!  all of it!

her seeing edwards love, her telling jake they ate forgiven, and definately her telling and showing edward her love!

perfect!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 - The Perfection

love esme! and renee in this story:)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - The Prowling

thank goodness for that persuasion:)

Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 693]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Reconnecting with her friend, Bella meets Alice's brother, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for 2 years, what happens when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to a sexy new Bella?

(Special thanks to shockwav for the Wild banner)

 

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  • Winner of FIVE 2011 Sunflower Awards: Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance, Best Bella, Best Alice
  • Winner of Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, To Read, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 436372 Read Count: 184399
[Report This] Published: 03 Apr 2011 Updated: 19 Dec 2011
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46 - Futuretake Two

Love, love, love this story! I am sad it ended, but all stories do!  And you did it great!

I was totally addicted to it, and read it in less than a week!!!

Can't wait to see what you write with Brother Edward:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112136
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Awwww!  I gotta say he did amazing!  Sooo sweet and caring!  He remembered all her favorites!

i gotta say the last line made me giggle!

 

Summary:

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BANNER BY THE INCREDIBLE READERGOOF!!!

Bella needed to change it up. Moving to Savannah for a year after graduating from UGA seemed like a good plan. However, bills needed to be paid, and money was tight. Unfortunately, her playboy boss, Edward, doesn’t make her nights easy. After reconnecting with old friends, a pattern of miscommunication about engagements and one night stands, and a stalker dead set on keeping the pair apart, Bella and Edward find themselves thrown together in a whirlwind of events that will shape both of their lives in ways they never imagined. It's gonna get hot in the South!

Set in Savannah, Georgia. OOC, AU-AH. Canon couples. Lots of lemons...it's rated NC-17 for a reason.  Some violence, though not much.  The devil went down to Georgia...you wanna go? 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189712 Read Count: 74722
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Feb 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - Epilogue

I love love love your story!

So emotional, so sweet, so entertaining!

Loved the ending!  the reenactment of their wedding!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Quiet Storm Sequel. 

How does the head of the world's most powerful crime family juggle being a father, husband, and boss? Surrounded by trouble, Edward tries to manage his organization while struggling to spend time with his children and wife, Bella.

Two years have passed since the epilogue; do Bella and Edward still have what it takes to Weather the Storm? OOC. AH. Mobward/Daddyward. 

Edward/Bella. 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, To Read , All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 535952 Read Count: 1531334
[Report This] Published: 10 Aug 2011 Updated: 24 Aug 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Voices Carry Part One

well i'm happy she got her answers, but not happy edward didn't go with her:(

aro is a good friend, I just hope it stays that way forever!

poor sonny, all he wanted to do was make sure his momma was ok.

that totally makes sense now with how Charlie was with bella, that jackass!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Trick or Treat Part One

i freaking love this sife of edward!  the side he only shows bella!

i wonder whats gonna happen with the sit down?

has carlisle found his bella? i hope so  even though hes a man whore he still deserves it  hes been a good daddy!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Logic

i seriously love them! thru it all they get thru!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 58: Long Day

this chapter cracked me up!  i was giggling the whole time:)

i know its gonna end soon, but im going to miss them!  i cant wait to read it every week!  

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

NO NO NO not DAME!  Though in reality I guess it makes sense!

He is a dangerous little fucker, huh!  I do love that part!  The jew costume was hilarious!  He totally got Sonny there!

I can't believe that Sonny fucked Bianca, knowing his little brother (that he obviously is jealous about being a better player in the company) could be interested!

I can't believe because of Sonny is why Kylie and Joe were getting married, I mean his reasoning of being the overprotective brother makes sense.  But Fuck, knowing his little sister was not happy, then why!

Ant & AJ- classic!

I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to Dame being the "guy".

Until the next one!

I am still soo absorbed with this story, that it makes me sad that it will be ending in quite a few chapters.  I know all good stories must end, but I will miss this group!

XOXOXO  your one of the best out there!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

lexi,

i for one love love love this syory, as you know.

this is your baby and they are YOUR characters and of course you are going to be offended is someone puts them down!  i just wish that reveiwers would be respectful and considerate. considering this is YOUR story and it goes the direction YOU take it, not us the readers!  

i love all the differnt povs, it gives us more information and emotions!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

i love the relationship dame gas with ant & aj!

seriously he lost his v card to lauren? desperate whore!

i cant believe how he works everything to his favor:

alex, even though that was a little harsh, manipulating her like that, i get hes in love with her but still to hurt her like that, kinda makes me sad

sonny, he knows how to push his bros buttons Cant wait for part 2

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2012 Title: Weather the Storm

Ok. If  this is sporadic, I'm commenting while I'm reading it, again:)

First, Kylie is a little freaky like her momma!  "get it!" :)

Sonny still challenging Aro, I see:). AJ is being a sweet big brother to both if them!

Dame is freaking hilarious!  Oh. My. God!

I can't believe Edward said that to Kylie!  I get she's his baby, but wow!

Go Bella! For reminding him how they met and how he is acting like an ass! 

Sonny is too sweet, trying to set things straight and explain Edwards irrationalness. 

I'm glad Bella and kylie are getting back to normal. They need each other:). I'm glad we understand why she was being a raging brat. 

Now she just needs to talk to Edward, dum, dum, duuuummm!

I never going to tell you to stop!  If anything I'm going to try to keep you going!!

 

I love it too much for it too stop!

 

 

Come Closer by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 437]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Come Closer... Isabella. The one woman Edward can't have. The one woman he doesn't dare claim. Does he? Is he strong enough to resist the forbidden?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169215 Read Count: 103458
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 : Slammed

uh oh

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice

i fing love her right now!  poor jasper is  gonna have a heart attack!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart

i  fing love drunk mad at edward bella:)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Like it Could Be Anyone Else?

**while clapping hands**

Yeah!!! He finally told her what he has been doing!  I love it!  Their new house....fucking swoon!

i love you's being said, forest floor kisses, full body touching, and most of all i missed yous!  Awwe!!!

alice and jasper!  Jasper is fighting it too much!  LOL. I love Alice's tenacity!  He's got to though!  

Congrats on the nominations!

 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Firsts

love them!  i love that they are soo open with each other now!

jasper, jasper, jasper

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 20 May 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: The Little Things

nope not mad, just hopeful that you will update soon;)

i love her and how she is pushing him and i oove how he is keeping his ground, for now:)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Value

I'm soo happy to see you updated:)  I hope you got everything fixed right!

Wowza, this one was heart wrenching.

Jasper, Jasper, Jasper.  While I understand he feels betrayed.  This is his BFF and his sister.  Whom he loved with all his heart!

Has he never seen how much Edward cared about her?  Edward just needs to tell him why he was a whore, before.  That it was his way of dealing with not having Bella!

I hope Alice gets through to the dumbass:)  He is hurting her again!

Until your next one!

I'm sorry if people just dont' get it:(

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong

Woman!  Omg!!!!!!!!

How do you leave it right there? 

Jasper is a fucking asshole! Wow, just wow!

That was Definatley a chapter worth waiting for! 

I hope you post again soon:). Please!

That's all I have to say.....

 

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: A Beautiful Life

Heart wrenching, loving, sharing, forgiving, and not yet all in one chapter!

Amazing work here!  Get your RL situated and we will be right here when you get back!

Finallly jasper see and gets it!

I love that all 3 guys are going to "punish" the little girl!  That was funny!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34: From the Ground Up

I love the persistence of both jasper and Alice!  His of trying not to like Alice, good luck jasper, and hers of getting him to.  I couldn't agree with Alice more. It is now time for jasper to try for his happiness, but poor alice!  Lol. Bella sure did spoil him. And in no way did I think he was dead. I just figured Alice massaged his crabby Ass to sleep. 

Now, onto the princess and prince :)  these two are just Adorable! I love all their flirting and teasing!  The build up they have going on, my god!  When yet and it happens it is going to be edplosive!  I can't wait!

the love they have for each other is pure and true. Too bad it took so long yet it will happen and be hea! ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward leases out his late aunt's house for extra cash. "Property Management for Dummies" should've prepared him for this. AH, ExB will update every other day.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63833 Read Count: 117743
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2011 Updated: 11 Jan 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Epilogue

awwwe!  so sweet and thank you for making her stand up to the crazy renee!

Summary: Past Featured Story

For new Detective Isabella Swan, protecting the recluse professor of music from a stalker, sounded easy enough. They find themselves mixed in forbidden romance, filled with hidden ink and red lipstick kisses from a deranged stalker. AH/OOC 18&Up ONLY.

The Banner was made by Christag Banners...She is phenominal...Thank you, Christag.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, To Read (Geddy), G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82761 Read Count: 35242
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2011 Updated: 17 Feb 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso: Epilogue

perfect ending to such a agnst filled story!  i love that bella got closure from that batshit crazy mother of hers:)



Author's Response:

Review Reply for Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso

 

Hello we are so sorry that this author’s response is so late in coming to you.  Jess and I are so very proud of the work we put into Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso, and working together on it was a pleasure for the both of us.  Thank you for the story love and appreciation we got from you along this journey.  We are both pretty open to answering questions regarding the story, so feel free to ask anything if you like.  There is no sequel planned for in the foreseeable future for this story.  We have been asked about Out-Takes and at this point that is also not a plan.  Jess and I have a story outline we are working on, but both have other projects that have to wrap, or age more before we really sink our teeth in.  We have almost the first full chapter written, however it will be no sooner than September 2012 before any of it will or would get posted.  Keep us on Author alert, who knows when we may change our minds…LOL 

Jess has a lot of wonderful story ideas that she is working on right now and they are great.  I am sure if you haven’t already, you would never regret checking out her other stuff she has already written either. 

I am currently working on His Cimmerian View with WeeKitty, it is published under Weekittyandtat.  I also have a few irons in the fire, but I don’t really like posting more than one story at a time.  I would rather give all my attention to one stories details.

We hope to see you again, and again thank you so very much for all of your support in this fandom we both love so much.
Kasi (& Jess)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: And The Truth Will Be Known…

she is crazytown



Author's Response:

Oh yeah not only is she crazytown, but she is the mayor, the president and the whole population too!  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (&Jess)

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: Surveillance and a Gunshot

finally!  they got her!

fing crazy beotch!

poor emmett, no gun for him:)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for reading and reviewing our story.  Both Jess and I are very proud of this story so far.  Things are not over yet, there will be a total of 23 chapters including the epilogue.  We want his story to ring as true as possible and neither Jess nor I believe that anyone could go through what Edward and Bella did and come out unscathed.   We hope that you all keep in mind over the next couple of chapters that Jess and I are both 100% tried and true HEA H00Rs.  We both appreciate and love how much our readers have gotten into this story, and it is really hard having the story wrap, because it feels like a loss.  But, there is also that great sense of accomplishment you get from being able to say that you completed another story, which a lot of people seem to love.
Thanks again for all your support!
Kasi (&Jess)

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Date: 16 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Sex And Drugged

"I am not sure I want to get up. I think I might end up walking funny."  hahaha

It is one of Jacob's sisters.



Author's Response:

I loved that too, it was sp funny.  I love adding small bits of humor.  Great guess, Jess and I update every Wed and the next chapter is the BIG reveal chapter.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Thank you for the story love, and I hope that you continue to enjoy this story of ours.
Kasi (&Jess)

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Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Kidnap Aftermath

i kinda figured renee was up to something  so whats going on with bree? first edward saw her and now rose is screaming?

 



Author's Response:

Bree is okay I promise.  Thank you for reading and reviewing, We just updated today, and are looking forward to your thoughts after this chapter.  Good detective work!

Kasi (&Jess)

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Date: 02 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

wowza!  didnt see that one coming:(

forgrt that ass who is too chicken shit  to tell you anything with their pen name  

until the next one!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso

 

Well quite a few of you are upset with us.  Or at least upset with the way that we had the characters behave in the last chapter.  Edward and Bella are both currently very emotionally consumed in things.  Bella does not trust herself or her judgment.  Edward cannot trust anyone to not be secretly plotting against him.  There is no way that either of them could go through everything they went through in that house, and jump right back into a new formed love they found in each other.  They BOTH need therapy and they both will be getting it.  We meant it when we said that we are both completely happy ever after kind of girls, and we are grateful for the support from those of you who have stood by us.  There will be a total of 23 chapters posted when this story is able to say it is completed.  There will be jumps in time, because no one wants to read about the misery of having them lay open their souls in therapy.  There have been many questions about the tattoo that Edward had done, and we only ask that you be patient and wait for the rest of the story, certain things are best left to learn in time.  Lots of you wanted to know why we didn’t have Edward just shoot Renee, and where we both agree that she doesn’t deserve any sympathy, we could not bring it to ourselves to make him be the reason she is dead.  Plus closure is important, and Bella needs that closure.  The next chapter is better, but it is still not the end.  As for those of you who said those uplifting things to us, regarding the anonymous reviewer, thank you for your support.  Kasi (&Jess)

P.S. For those of you who are reading the story I am writing with WeeKitty, I want to say an extra special thanks to you as well.  Nikky and I received a review telling us that sometime this next week, our story ‘His Cimmerian View’ will be featured in the vote on The Lemonade Stand.  We are so excited and honored by this, and hope that you all will go and vote for us.  Thanks, Kasi~

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Date: 09 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 20: Learning to Heal

finally that crazy lady is taken down!

I hope it is Edward pounding on the door!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing Lipstick Kisses And Inked Virtuoso
I know that the cliff hanger was mean, but we needed to end there or the chapter would have been much longer.  We have tried to not dwell on the negativity of the break up and the route of the therapy.  We certainly could have dragged out the angsty drama of this much more, but it hurt us too much to see them this shattered.  Edward is at the door, and rest assured that they will be talking.  I refuse to thrown them back together as if nothing happened, but I think the final chapter of the story and then the epilogue bring it full circle.  If there are any questions left unanswered by that point, then maybe jess and I will do a big question and answer thing or it may bring us to writing a few out-takes…However Jess personally does not like out-takes.  I am excited about posting this Wednesday’s chapter; I hope that you all love it like we do.  Thanks again for reading and reviewing.  We are up for the best asshole award for Renee in this story at the Hidden Star Awards it is a BlogSpot address and you can find the link on our Facebook page and also you can Google it.  LOL...  I love saying that….You can Google it.

Darkest Desire by britchick69 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 339]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Set on the Yorkshire Moors in 1800's, Edward Cullen isolates himself from the lust and want filled thoughts of humans. He is disturbed by an injured traveler who stumbles across his mansion in search of respite. Upon reading his mind Edward is captivated by the man's beautiful daughter, Isabella. Edward will stop at nothing to make her his...whatever the cost.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49752 Read Count: 77434
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2011 Updated: 06 Jan 2012
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Erotica

oh yummy!



Author's Response:

YEP! This was one of my favourite chapters to write, loved researching victorian erotica....it's made me more of a perve!!

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Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Parting

i am truly surprised that edward didntnthink it was a trap  

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Date: 12 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Forever

loved it! thanks!

gonna check out some more of your writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you, my pleasure, hope you enjoy the rest.xx

Summary: Past Featured Story

One summer, an internship in Africa, bloodlust, sharp teeth, and a boatload of fear are all that stand in the way of Bella Cullen landing a job at the Atlanta Aquarium - As long as she doesn't count cocky shark expert Edward Masen on her list.

 



Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 58 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 705146 Read Count: 167421
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2016
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 4: 4 Confuse Me Mister

whales?  loving this story!



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it!!

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Date: 23 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 5: 5 Another Side

i love the fact they are fettimg to know each other better and have inside jokes!  

until the next one

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: 1 Intro

i figured he was going to put her back into the intern/friend role.  gotta love bella for teasing him, along with coming straight forward about her feelings for him, especially the no goodnight kiss teasing;)

i love the interaction of whit and bella during the story.  especially the bird comment, hilarious!

bella impressing lee is monumental and making lee see she really does want this  

i love how esme just puts it out there on edward for his feelings, since you know he didnt want to think about them  

also love her teasing him about the octopus!

 



Author's Response:

So much great stuff to love in this chapter for sure.  And it's fun for us to see that our favorite parts are also the readers favorites. :)  From here on out, Lee and Bella will have a very different relationship - whether Masen likes it or not. LOL  This Esme is so much fun because while she can certainly put herself into mom mode, she spends more time just being herself and having fun - especially at Edward's expense since she knows he takes himself too seriously most times.

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Date: 16 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: 17 Course Correction

Oh my gosh!  This was a lot and I love it!  Even if it was sad at some parts!

im glad we got to hear Bella's story, that poor girl. No wonder she was/is scared to death!  Now that Edward knows, he can understand better!

my favorite part is when he opened up to her and she wrapped her arms around his neck!  So documental!  Oh and his reaction to her dress!  

I just love Esme even more than I did before!

ill swim over to the blog to take a look at the pics!  I love tha part!

until the next one ladies!  Love love love!



Author's Response:

Love all the love for this chapter!!  And yes, Bella's arms around Edward's neck was pivotal for him in so many ways!  I'm excited for Bella in the next chapter because she'll figure that out!

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Date: 24 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: 19 Diving Deep

Omg!  This was one of the best chapters to date!

i was sooo worried she was walking away!  This was such a turning point for both if them!  And a humongous turning point is it!!!  Love is in the air, water, and on the boat!

what they saw with Ben and Ang!  What Ben saw with Edward and Bella ;)

i freaking love lee and jazz, those fucking nudgers are amazing!  Telling her everything she needed to hear at that time. And then Jazz telling him what he needed to hear and know how to make her understand!

Oh my god!  My heart was racing!  I loved it!

Thank you for the wonderful Christmas gift!  I hope both if yours are amazing!!!

Xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

those fucking nudgers are amazing -- this had me snorting hard! Thanks!!

Summary:

A Swirl of Circles and Stars

All his life, Edward Cullen has had visions of the future…visions that always came true. But when he foresees a tragedy that could cost him everything, he'll do whatever it takes to keep it from happening. *WINNER, Best Tragedy in the Seasons of Our Discontent Anonymous Angst Contest*

Best Tragedy


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5399 Read Count: 677
[Report This] Published: 16 Dec 2011 Updated: 16 Dec 2011
Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 1: A Swirl of Circles and Stars

that was crazy!  but great!!

so sad!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the talented: SoapyMayhem FanFiction

Bella at age thirteen is left with nothing more than a fake ID, and two year old twin half siblings to care for.  She makes due knowing it is up to her to give them a good life and education, she was never given.  Working as a cleaner at the university five years later, she meets Professor Masen a man who believes all women are out to hurt, or destroy him.  Can an uneducated Bella teach him something?  What will happen when Bella is another woman who has hid the truth from him? 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , Misstoria's Stories to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325411 Read Count: 262605
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
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Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: A Sketching Surprise

who are they?  this is going to drive me crazy! 

what happened to his parents again?



Author's Response:

Thanks again for the outstanding and wonderful reviews!  We are so excited and happy to have you all on board with us for this journey and we sure hope that you all continue to love and praise the story the way that you do.  I know that you all learned some rather interesting pieces of information in the puzzle we call His Cimmerian View.  I bet a lot of you have more questions than you are asking.  But to answer a few of the questions that don’t take away from future story line here you go.  Yes it is possible that Tanya and Sue are the one in the same, but do remember that Tanya Denali was positively identified by dental records.  Some are asking if Sue could be Edward’s long lost mother... I guess that is a thought, but the age thing would be difficult to swallow.   Sue could very well be masquerading as Bella and trying to get her hands on the money that has been left to her both from her mother’s Estate and her grandfather’s.  Wow more of you seem to be worried about who might have their hand on Edward’s shoulder than much else, so I will relive you of that stress, it is in fact Carlisle.  Between this chapter and the BPOV on EHCV we have had many question how Harry/James could have gotten into Bella’s apartment after Aro did all the security measures, and I assure you that his ability to get into the apartment will be answered, just have faith in us, and you will see.  Lots of new things will come out in the next chapter as well and unfortunately you are all going to hate us, because it will be ending in a cliffhanger as well.  In the next chapter we will get to see Edward come face to face with Harry though... insert evil laugh... but at least I am showing you the teaser from that meeting!  I am excited about the ending of the story; however we will not update any faster than we currently are.  I am working on chapter 28 and Nikky is on chapter 29.  At this rate we are going to be pushing to keep up with the schedule of posting each week.  No I am not saying we will not post, but I am saying we will at this point be sticking to the every Thursday posting.   If you haven’t yet, go check out Enduring His Cimmerian View... the Bella POV chapter is posted.  We will not be adding any chapters to EHCV, until we have the main story cracked out of HCV.  Thank you for being some of the best readers and reviewers out there and for loving this story we are sharing with you all.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

Chapter 26 teaser...subject to changes during Beta process.
All of it; I mean, this mother fucker broke Seth’s arm.  I close my eyes, and when I open them again, I see nothing but him. Without even thinking about what I’m doing; I hit the fucker as hard as I can.  I just keep hitting him until I feel someone pull me back. With the rage still blinding me, I knock whoever it is off of me and hit Harry again. 

Suddenly, I feel a lot more people dragging me back. I feel a sting on my face, and I look around to see Aro shaking his head.  Garrett has his arms wrapped around my waist, Felix is holding my left arm, and Emmett is on my right; I have no clue when he got here. Standing right in front of me is Jane. 

“Jane, I don’t think you needed to slap him,” Aro says as he walks over to us.  That fucking bitch slapped me! 

“He was out of it, and it brought him back didn’t it?  Besides that, I get to do the beating up around here,” she huffs, walking away from me to bend down and look at Harry.  I look down as well, noticing that I knocked the fucker out. I can’t help but grin about it.  “Wipe that look off your face! You broke some of his ribs and his nose; that’s my job, Assward!”  Jane jumps up and walks over to her bag. She brings out some jars and sets them in a line on the desk.

“Eh...what the hell is in those jars?” Emmett asks as he gives me a look to ask if I’m alright.  I nod and the three of them release me.