Reviews by Footroza
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella eventually moved on with her life after Edward left and never returned. Seven years have passed and she is now a teacher. When she starts her newest teaching assignment destiny intervenes to reunite them. Now she is faced with new challenges and decisions. Canon pairings. (Warnings: Violence/Mild strong language/Adult situations)

 

NB: I will be posting the EPOV (Student Liaison) alongside this as much as possible. The full version of Teachers Pet is on fanfiction.net but that will be the watered down version - this one will be complete with outtakes in place.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116512 Read Count: 48849
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 22 Nov 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Trouble

OH GOD.. WOW.. I am on pins and needles...  I saw that this story was featured this week and decided to check it out.  I am glad that I did.. SO GOOD.

Great job.

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Conciousness

I have a funny feeling about JAKE.. I wonder if he is thinking what i think he might me thinking.... HUMMMM.. only time will tell.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Audi

I HAVE always wanted them to have Jacob play ball with them.. This is going to be gooooooood.  YEAH

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 60994
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

I am proud of her.. I mean, it would have been harder in Dr. C if she had stayed.  I am just sad that she thinks they won't see each other until Biology.  Will he remember her?  This is so sweet.

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Of Warm Skin and Wishful Thinking

oh wow...ok... I diving in...Amanda(TheSpoiltone) has gone on and on about this story.. She is absolutely loving it, as are many many more.. I saw you updated today.. so here we go.  I can't wait.

Can you imagine seeing the "real" edward after loving the "vampire" one for so long.  That would be so surreal..(Well, I guess you have cause you are writing this.. hahah)

 



Author's Response:

So glad you're giving it a try - hope you like it! :-)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: Of Rituals and Really Big D***s

Wonderful chapter.. and the huge dick chasing Jacob.. hahahahahaahha.... That is really funny... I was afraid in the chapter's title that she would be having sex with him.. but this was MUCH MUCH better. 

Great job.



Author's Response:

Lol! Yeah... no. Just say no to sex with Jacob! ;-)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Of Corsets and Confusion

OH I JUST LOVE .. Maggie.. that's wonderful. 

OK.. Maggie.. Alistar... are they THE Maggie and Alistar.. or are they just names..

thanks.. great chapter.



Author's Response:

No, just names... no connection to the vamps...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: Of Fainting and Familiar Faces

HOLY COW.. this is so wonderful. I want her and Charlisle to have a great friendship.. oh and Alice.. This is so fun.

 

 



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying it so far! :-)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Of Butting Heads and Birthday Parties

OHHH.. I don't want them to ever get out of this era.. I want them to get married and have kids, and grow old together.. it is kind of breaking my heart to know the truth.  sniff sniff.

Such a remarkable story.. I love it.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Of Motor Cars and Making Friends

I am scared now that you said that.. What if he doesn't ever change and he gets killed in the war.. oh god.. and what on Earth is up with Alice.. she is freaking me out a little. 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: Of Squealing Fangirls and Surprise Visitors

OMG OMG OMG.. she is THERE.. oh wow.. didn't see that coming.. so fun

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Of Dancing and Dark Alleys

oh gosh.. please update.. poor Alice.. I don't want her to have to go to the institution..

so sad.

 

 



Author's Response:

Update's coming on Friday... and what's happening to Alice will be explained.

Thanks for reading and for all the reviews! :-)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Of Clearing Names and Coming Clean

SOOO.. good.. BUT GAH.. if he doesn't become a Vampire.. that could change everything.  SOOO many things could be effected.  Rose, Emmett, heck even Jasper and Alice.  Not to mention that she would NEVER meet him if he doesn't live forever, so there would be no reason for her to go back in time... come on Bella.. SNAP OUT OF IT...

cough cough.. so yeah.. I got a bit passionate about this chapter... lol.

Love it though



Author's Response:

That's why she told Carlisle what she did. She finally realized that by taking Edward out of the equation, she could be altering Carlisle's path. Her confession was an attempt to keep him going in the right direction. Let's just hope it works! LoL!

Thanks for R&R!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Of Carousels and Cracker Jacks

Girl.. you have just endeared yourself to my heart.  I loved the baseball history in this chapter.. SOoOOoOO good.. I loved the mention of Babe Ruth.  That was classic.  Great job.  I am still freaking out about Edward not going through with his change.  BUT.. I will trust in you always.  Thanks for the amazing chapter.

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, played with the history a little on that one... Ruth actually did say that about Shoeless Joe, but not until later in his career... *shrugs* The baseball game was real, though... and really played on June 1, 1918. I tracked down an old copy of the Tribune online and that's where I got the stats. Glad you enjoyed that! :-)

Thanks for the trust - I think you'll find it was not unfounded. :-)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

I am crying my eyes out.. That was the sweetest most wonderful chapter ending ever.  Thank you for that.. Thank you so much.. sniff sniff.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30: Of Fear and Fate

My goodness, this was a thilling chapter.. I think I read it in record time.  I am so glad she didn't stop him from returning home.  It would NEVER have worked out for them if she had told him not to go.  BUT oh goodness... what on Earth will happen now.

 

BY THE WAY.. I got the flu shot this week, and I thought of your story.. hahaha.. See look at all the good fan fiction does for the world.  You are doing your part to rid the world of sickness.  VERY NICE. 

 

Great chapter as always.  Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

so good.. what an absolutely perfect last chapter... Thank you so much for your creativity and dedication to your story.  It was a wonderful journey, and I will miss the updates in my in box.

 

Thanks again.

Insecurities by JamesRamsey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 176]
Summary: Past Featured Story

insecurities

Suddenly I realized the family had it wrong. I had it wrong. Jasper was not attacking me and Edward was not protecting me. AU OOC Rated NC-17 to be safe

 

My first story - This story was originally posted on FanFiction.net and is being reposted here due to the amount of fic's being deleted there.  5167 reviews and counting. Winner of two 'Everything's Bigger in Texas Award


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future , Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200830 Read Count: 184605
[Report This] Published: 14 Mar 2010 Updated: 01 May 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Do you know how much fun it is to find a great story...and then click on the chapters link and see that it is really long... I am so excited.  Thanks for creating such a gripping story and I have only read three chapters.  I am gitty and all a flutter.  (I think that's good, or it could be gas.. humm)..

No seriously.. I am really going to enjoy this.

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 29032
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Well.. I love this story... Thank you so much for writing it.

 

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT.. I can't stand death in stories.. I am a WHIMP.. lol

I just reread this whole story today.. Love it all again.

Thanks for the chapter.



Author's Response:

I hate them too! It's too sad if they dont die of old age. Thank you for reading it!, Again! :)

Summary:

This is the story of young Domme Isabella who is looking for a new sub. Her old master Carlisle was the one to introduce her to the BDSM-community of Chicago and he is also helping her find a new sub to train.

On her way to meeting her new sub, she thinks back on her last ten years in the BDSM community and relieves some very hot moments from her life both as a sub and Domme.

At the same time we meet Edward, strong and confident boss of his own firm until the day he discovers a hidden submissive side of himself. We follow him on his journey and maybe one day Domme Isabella and submissive Edward will meet?

Strong content and lots of lemons, be warned!

This is not a BDSM-how-to, so please just read it as the smutty fanfic it is ment to be, thanks! Always wear a condom and take good care of yourself, Edward would!

 

Beta'ed by the lovely MarchHare5


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Wonderful World of Dommella, Bdsm stories only, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 59156 Read Count: 40804
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: The job and harsh introductions at the club

Oh now that was GOOD.. well.. BAD... but GOOD...(I have no idea what I am saying...but I liked it.)   lol

I am so glad your story is here, and I hope you are starting to get lots of reviews.

 

Love it.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Crush

Gosh.. I am crying.. I can't believe how horrible he must feel.. I know you understand this...but I have to write it out for me...so if you don't want to read my ramblings just skip this next part...(Considerate my journal of thoughts...a introspection of how this story makes me feel...)

By "loving" her, Edward had put all his trust and well being in her hands.  Something that I am sure was very hard for him to do, but it is clear that once he makes the leap of faith, he is 100% committed.  He didn't want to let her down, and would have taken anything she gave him to prove himself to her...  SHE...(can't even say the nasty cunts name) took that love, trust and obiedance and used it against him.  She KNEW that he would make her push him hard, and that he really wanted to make her proud.  So, instead of telling him... having a conversation about what she was feeling... she abused her power and broke him completely.  I have seen kids like this at school.  They would do anything for their parents love... They trust in their parents to do what is best for them...They would never go against what their parents say...Only to have that thrown back in their faces over and over again.  The one advantage Edward has is that he DOES have a safe word... However the damage is done.  My students that have struggled with this type of abusive power struggles will NEVER trust again.  As I suspect Edward will have a hard time as well.. for long time. 

Okay.. sorry about that.. just had to get that out.. As you can tell your story is evoking some pretty deep emotions for me.  Which, as an author's stand point is a wonderful thing. 

Thank you so much for your story.  I am really enjoying the journey...(even if I am mess right now..)  lol

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Reasons

OH NOOO.. I didn't realize this was the last chapter.. What on EARTH are you doing to me...  :(.  lol..

So YES.. I will be on pins and needles patiently waiting for the next update...

I can't wait to see what Edward thinks of Bella's aftercare.  I wonder if Tanya ever provided aftercare... ??

Thanks again.



Author's Response:

I really enjoyed your reviews, though I'm sorry for making you cry (not!) ;-) It means a lot to me to be able to touch readers like that, even if it means that I have a very twisted mind for coming up with stuff like this. It's good that you've only started to read my story now, I've just given it a months rest for personal reasons, but now I'm back and ready to entertain! And it will get a lot more easy from now on, at least I think so *winks*

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Awakening

soo good.. soo soo good.  poor edward.. I am very glad he went with her. I wonder if he was just to overwhelmed to go back to familar surroundings. 

Can't wait for more. Great job.  Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Under the canopy

It all makes sense now.  they had to "know" of each other a little for him to be able to trust her enough for them to get to this point.. cause had she been a mere stranger... There is the possiblity that he would not have gone with her... So.. in a word... you rock...and your story is amazing.  All this build up to get us here.  VERY NICE.

Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, it really means a lot to me! And yes, it has been a long journey for them to get to this point and I hope you aren't the only one thinking it was worth the wait.

Summary:

 

Bella Swan is given one night to experience being a Domme. But having Edward Cullen as her sub might be more than she can handle.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5443 Read Count: 1131
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You did a wonderful job...and hell yes.. I want you to continue... Very nice job...

 

Your lemons were great...Thanks so much for the shout out.. So happy to help you reach into your inner goddess.  lol..

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I hope to continue this story. So many ways to take it.

*blushes* thank you.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella was a shell after Edward left her.  She hated men.  She was disgusted by them.  She wanted revenge.  What better way to get revenge than to use them?  The plan works well…until Edward comes back.  Bella’s POV. 

Bella's Revenge

Bella

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59871 Read Count: 68963
[Report This] Published: 06 Apr 2010 Updated: 09 Apr 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Edward

oh wow.. I am so excited... GO EDWARD



Author's Response:

Team Edward all the way!  :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Alex & Jacob

oh no.. this isn't going to end well is it.  



Author's Response:

For Jasper or Victoria? 

Summary:

Bella Swan is starting a new job with the FBI. Not only does she have to prove to the boys that she belongs but she has to face the demons from her past before they find her. NC-17 for language and lemons B/E, R/Em, A/J, Es/C

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga, to read
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95413 Read Count: 135326
[Report This] Published: 15 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 May 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

SO fun.. I am looking forward to this.  Actually how I found this was you lastest update on the LAST part of this series.  That one sounded GREAT, and I though.. my god...there are two more.. What a find.  Don't you love that.  I hope this is the first in the series.. I think it is.  If I am wrong tell me now..lol. 

Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ok. Edward is just a HUGE Dick... I can see veins from here.  I am sure he will some around, but man.. i want to punch him.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I really don't know what I would do if I was Bella.  I would probably move out too.. Not realy to punish them, but just to get some perspective on the whole thing.  She doesn't need to see them in the "Honeymoon stage of their relationships anyway.

 

Great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a student at UW who lives a routine, struggled life, but that changes when she meets Edward Cullen,CEO of his Company. How exactly do they meet? What happens when their lifes collide? Does Bella uncover Edwards darkest secrets or does Edward learn Bellas hidden truths first. D/S Material

 Thanks to bjelaja for taking the time to make this awesome banner! (:

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 38146 Read Count: 76112
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 May 2014
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

GOOD GOD NO.. I did NOT see that one coming,, and I have read lots of stories where Bella is attached, and this one FREAKED ME OUT.. I mean you really got the emotion of the situation in that.. I was having a hard time breathing with her.

Great.. really great chapter. 

Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Great chapter.. something tells me.. This Bella isn't going to like the "playroom" idea any time soon.. (What a shame...)  BUT YEAH.. the wicked witchanya is gone..  YIPEEEEE..

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

oh heavens.. that's imbarrassing.  i am so glad you are updating again.. i have missed this story.

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32990
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh gosh.. I have been waiting to read this until you had more chapters loaded.. at eight.. I couldn't wait anymore.. hahaha.. and you did not disappoint.. this is going to be a scary fun ride.  yippeeee!!

Love it.

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

shiver....shiver ... shiver.

Great job.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh gosh.. who is this... scary...

 

Great chapter.. you do DARK very well.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh no.. SETH!!... I am glad he is being protective.. but Jasper is going to kill him.. lol.

 

I am so sad this is the last chapter for now.. I am sorry about your surgery. I hope you are feeling better. 

Can't wait to here what happens.  Great job.

Summary:

A darker romance. Searching for balance and trust, Edward and Bella negotiate a tangled web of sex, blood, secrets, kink, and demons from the past. NOT CANON-STYLE VAMPIRES but canon pairings. Very, very AU.

WARNING: This story contains much in the way of lemons, violence, and dark and dominant Edward.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49922 Read Count: 11466
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 20 Jan 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Jacob

Well.. I reviewed on ff fiction too.. but I would much rather read this here.. and omg.. ESME is a scary ass bitch.. I am a bit concerned that her Mothering Instincts may have died off with her humanity.. hahaha..

I wouldn't cross her.. I really love this story... I have missed it..

Thanks

Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a terrible shipwreck in the Mediterranean Sea, Isabella Swan, marquise de Courville, her two best friends and her loyal servants are rescued, but only to become slaves and serve the Volturi brothers, three men with very dark desires. All human. Domward.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Finished, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 201090 Read Count: 183957
[Report This] Published: 05 May 2010 Updated: 14 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: The harem

HEY NOW.. I love your story.. and I was thrilled with the update.. yipeeeee...  ok.. you need a PICTURE.. some type of banner to REEL them in..  You are right.. your have a very good story, and I want to have an update.. hehehe.. (selfish me)

So as part of the TSO writing team.. I DEMAND that readers come over and read this fic... How was that.. are you feeling it.

YEAH.. me either.. but I had to try.

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The training room

I think I missed this chapter yesterday... That's wierd.. Maybe I got so worked up over getting you some more reviews, I missed that next button. 

You know... this "type" of story has been done before...BUT... your twist on it is so unusual.  Not only is she stubborn and willful, but she is nieve and sensual...complete polar opposites..AND then there is Edward.  He is dark and twisted, but also kind and careing...not that he shows it, but you know it is there.  I don't even think he wants to accept it. 

 

I am sure that her fist time with the three Masters is going to be very horrible... but just as I am sure that Edward will be there to help her...OPPOSITES.. see.. this is so different..and I am very excited to read more.

 

Love the banner...Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

Yes, i can portray a creepy Aro too...lol (you ain't seen nothing yet). And without revealing too much of the plot, I can tell you that all my French readers want Aro dead by now...relol. ;-)

Milk

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The lords of Volterra

hey there.. seeing that I am slacker.. I am going back over all the chapters again... and once again.. I am in love.. Such a good story.

Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bella's punishment

oh gosh.. poor bella.  She really needs to listen to edward..

Great job

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: The trap

Swing away Bella.. Swing away.. That was awesome..

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Rosalie Hale, duchesse d'Essanges

HAHAHAHA.. GOD.. I love ROSE.. SO GOOD.. Great job.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 7: The journey to Volterra

Oh man.. I forgot how ugly Jasper was..Thanks for the email.. so sorry it's been awhile.  But I remember now why I love this story.. Edward is such and enigma.  On to the next chapter..



Author's Response:

Jeez, I thought you already read that stuff during summer, lol.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Edward meets Bella

It still makes me giggle that you make Dimetri and Felix eunuchs.  Sorry boys... But hell the bath time made me all happy too.  Poor Bella. I forgot how innocent she is.  I can't believe you have so much more up since I last read.  Yipee for me. 

Great job.

Oh and I have read all this before, but I felt like I needed to re-cap.. lol



Author's Response:

For what I recall, the last chapter you read was the one about Rosalie and Emmett in his training room...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Another kind of punishment

Just when I think she is ready to give in.. she pulls back...Edward is really very patent.. I think I would have drowned her by now.. hahah.. Kidding..

I have this kid at school that just knows how to push my buttons. 

Here is a typical conversation, "You need to get started on your assignment."

Boy - "NO!"

Me - "If you don't get started on your work, you will have study hall."

Boy - "You can't make me."

Me - "You're right... I can't, but if you chose not to work, you will sit in here with me after school until it is finished."

Boy - "I don't care."

 

It got so bad that one day, he wouldn't stop trying to staple his finger.  I would move the stapler, and he would find it.  I finally lost it... and threw the damn stapler at the wall and yelled, "Now, GET TO WORK!"

Yeah.. I need a vacation.

 

Anyway.  That's how I feel that Edward's feeling with Bella.  (I bet he wishes he had a stapler.)

Great Chapter



Author's Response:

Edward is sure not used to a woman who stands up to him, lol, but let's face it: he's been mostly an ass to Bella.

My little boy won't do his homework, and it doesn't help that his teacher gives him a load of it. I don't have any patience whatsoever and I could never have become a teacher, even if that's what all my family did for a living. More power to you :-)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Doctor Carlisle Cullen

oh now that was fun.  I would have loved to have been a fly on the wall when Edward and Carisle found Emmett.. greatness.

Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Third day in Volterra

WOW... lots of questions answered, but a hell of lot more asked.  I wonder what's going on back home. 

Great chapter

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Volturi's request

EWWWWW... small and covered with hair??????  THat's just gross.  and OLD?  That is just not the picture I want running through my mind today as I try to teach fractions.  HAHAHA.

I am glad they got out of there... but holy hell... she bit him.  He is going to KILL HER.



Author's Response:

There are so many ways to make Aro look creepy... mouwhaha!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: A slave trainer's obligations

oh man... she is going to be in such a bad way.. and poor Edward has to do it.

BUT...I am liking that Alice is in the clinic with Jasper now...and maybe his hit on the head has given him a change in attitude....

Great job.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Caring for Bella

oh goodness.. what did she say... Damn it Bella.. stop with the Jacob already.. DAMN IT..  hahahah

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Between heaven and hell

oh god... let him not remember anything about being so mean.. let him and alice fall in love... please please please.... oh goodness.

when you say Merry Christmas does that mean no more updates till after Christmas?   sniff sniff.

 

Great chapter.. just what I needed.



Author's Response:

Sweetie it's not up to me when I update. Here's the thing: I'm on a schedule. Every other week I translate a chapter from the original story in French (one chapter in French becomes two chapters in English) and every other week I do write a new chapter in French. Last week I did translate chapters 25-26 and sent them to my beta. From then on I'm on hold, I depend on my beta. If she has time to edit chapter 25 before Christmas it's all for the better, but she's very busy and I doubt she will have time before the holidays.

I'm glad you liked this chapter.

When are we going to have an update of the Volturi's order?

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Jasper Whitlock

oh gosh... That was harsh... Still not loving Jasper though.. hahah

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Alice Brandon, comtesse de Marillac

okay   jasper is growing on me..he still has aways to go  

 

thanks for the update

Fuggiasco by kdc2239 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 848]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward, homeless since age twelve is used to the gritty, hard life. Now twenty, his main goal is to make it in the world, and off the streets. What happens when a girl who seems to be broken beyond repair becomes his new shadow, and needs help more than he can possibly know? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153298 Read Count: 73190
[Report This] Published: 11 May 2010 Updated: 23 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Flying High

OH NOW that is just MEAN.. hahahaha.. Loved the chapter. Great job.



Author's Response:

Sorry for the cliffie! I hope you like the next chapter!

Katie 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ain't no Rest for the Wicked

oh gosh this sounds good

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Voices of Violence

THis is so good.. and I just had to google the Italian words from last chapter.. VERY INTERESTING...

Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story!! I hope you like the rest of it :) 

Katie 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Only One

I just love this story.. They are so sweet together.. Great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Carlisle Cullen has been the object of Bella Swans fantasies for years. The problem with that is he’s a very bad boy. Hot tempered and tortured by his past. Can Bella break through his cold, hard mask and warm his icy heart? What secrets are hidden inside the home and hearts of Carlisle and his Brother and sister?

Story starts out light with some humor becomes more intense in later chapters.

 

All human characters….contains underage drinking, drugs, sex, abuse. 

 

 I'd like to thank Moonlit Wishes for making me an awesome banner for this story.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55668 Read Count: 23163
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2010 Updated: 04 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Jasper Remembers How and Why his Mother Died.

HOLY CRAP.. that is sad sad sad.. poor Jasper.. BUT GOD did you nail his emotional termoil or what.  Nice job.. Just like the books, he is feeling everyone's emotions and trying to calm everyone down.. SO GOOD.

NOW... where is Rose working..?  Is she stripping?  oh man.. I hope not.

Great chapter thanks



Author's Response:

WOW, I am so touched at what you have said. Thank You doesn't even seem to be gratitude enough for the compliments. IF I could give you coffee cups I would. :) :) :)

Rose, hummmmm.....well whatever she's doing you know Emmett is looking out for her!

Hope to hear from you again soon, Diane

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Trouble

FUN!!!!.. This is going to be GOOD...



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it, happy readers make me smile.  :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Bantering with Carlisle

oh gosh.. poor Bella.. I am soo glad that wasn't me.



Author's Response:

But it was kinda funny though, don't ya think? .... Diane

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Ride

that was cute.. I love the Bella/Charlie interaction...



Author's Response:

You gotta love Charlie, right? I think he's awesome and clueless...lol.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

WOW.. he was very honest with her.. I am guessing that he has been watching her for some time TOO. lol

 



Author's Response:

Carlisle is a very honest person, or at least he tries to be. He knew she was around, most guys notice girls that watch them as much as she did. I bet he didn't even think that she really liked him, 'cause guys never have a clue even when it's in their face like that. :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

he he he.. Bella is going to be SURPRISED



Author's Response:

Hi Footroza, Thank you for reading the story and reviewing it for me. I love getting feed-back from everyone. :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bella Loves Sex

OH NO.. poor Jasper.  This is not good



Author's Response:

:( I agree

Summary:

Sequel to Here We Go Again. Bella, Edward, Carlisle, and the others are all back for a new case with the FBI. Will this be the case that breaks them all for good? AH, NC-17 for launguage, lemons, and violence.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, The FBI Saga
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 95951 Read Count: 79390
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Holy Crap.. what a beginning.  YIKES..

She Sleeps by Bcullen1026 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 88]
Summary:

What if when the Cullens left Bella never recovered? What if when they meet again Edward's worst nightmare was real? **Warning: This story contains graphic sexual abuse. Please do not read if this offends you. It is rated NC-17 for a reason.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65223 Read Count: 21938
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh this is sad and sweet.  I like it already...  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reviewing!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OHNO...this could be good.. or REALLY REALLY BAD... I am scared to hit the next button.. Here goes...

 

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oh gosh...MATT is a horrible person... COME ON EDWARD...WHERE ARE YOU!!...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Matt...Victoria...oh hell.. poor bella.  WAKE up... get out of there.. quick..

 

ok..  much better.

THanks for the wonderful story.. I am loving it

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

YEAH...ALICE...and Molly...and Cat.. They are my new favorite people. 

This is very addictive.  You write so well.  Thanks for the wonderful imagination you have.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I really enjoying hearing what people think. Also It's a huge confidence boost when people like it since this is my first story and all. So thanks again!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OH GOD.. That was horrible..poor thing.. Please let someone see the bite mark.  That would prove it right?  GOSH.. This is breaking my heart. 

HUM??  Do you believe in HEA...?  Cause I don't think I could take it if this ended badly.. sniff sniff.

Great job though.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OH WOW.. this poor girl.. she is never going to be right in the head again.. lol.. well not really lol..but gosh..

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

LOVE IT... Thank god... they are going to be okay...wow.. this was one hell of a ride... whew.



Author's Response:

Thanks! It was a crazy ride, but it was a lot of fun, well fun might not be the right word, but it was great. And the response I got was amazing so thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue

I am adding you as we speak.. I really enjoyed this story.. I am a sucker for the happy ending, and you didn't disappoint.  Thanks for the wonderfully creative ideas. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! It really makes my day to hear that people enjoy my story...I know I loved writing it!

Uprising by allforkedup Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 424]
Summary:

Kidnapped into slavery, Edward tries his best to work diligently in order to avoid punishment and keep his wife safe.  Nothing about his life is his own, not even the intimacy between him and his Bella... and she, too, could be taken away at any time.  What happens when he has no choice but to make a big 'mistake'?  What will the punishment be?  Will it break him?  Inspired by the song 'Uprising' by Muse (which I think has a stupid video).

Contains adult situations and language; please do not read if you are under 18.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 181405 Read Count: 61310
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Gosh this is so good.. and I am amazed that you were able to just rewrite it...That is very cool.. Thanks for not making us wait..I can't wait until next chapter... I want them out of there... hahaha

Thanks again.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I am positive that it changed somewhat.  But that's okay.  Actually, I just have a vague idea how the story will go; I mostly play it by ear.  Laurent didn't tell me that he had grown a conscience until yesterday, and of course that changed everything!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

OH MY GOSH.. I am so nervous.. Good grief.. I am going to go light a candle or something..



Author's Response:

Between you and the spoilt one reading my story, I am over the moon; you guys are among my favorites.  Thank you so much.  Yeah... ya might wanna light a candle... or a dozen...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

whew.. yes.. a little.. but.. is this the calm before the storm.. I think it is..

Thanks for Alice... That was too cute.. love it.

 



Author's Response:

why, thank you.  I like our little Alice, dirt and all :)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 24 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

oh wow.. was it a bomb???? I had to re read this like five times... Did he close them in the mine..?   THat is wonderful..

Are they staying there for a few DAYS??   Is that because of Bella..?  Why don't they just leave..?  I really don't want them staying there.  REALLY!!!

Drive away.. Drive away..

Rose is wonderful.  She did GOOD. 

thanks for the fast update.. I need it.. otherwise this is all I will think about.. hahaha

 



Author's Response:

You will find out soon why they need to stay for a few days.  I am so glad you like the story.  I know what you mean when you say it is all you think about... this thing is almost always in my brain; I have trouble falling asleep at night for all the possibilites...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMG... what are you doing to me.. That was wonderful.. but oh so sad...

BUT...they have a PHONE.. yipee... and it is a satelite phone... maybe they can get there coordinates from its reception.  (I am reaching here.. but hey.. it could happen..)

Thanks for the quick updates.. I love it.

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I may never forgive you if she dies.. hahahaah..kidding.. kind of.. not really.. lol.  I am already crying.. if that really does happen, could you send me a PM so I can prepare myself.  I am already way too attached to your characters. 

Banana leaves will relieve the swelling ... how about some coconut milk.. doesn't that have some type of healing properties... THINK PEOPLE THINK... OHHHH.. how about alcohol... you know those bastards had some vodka or something stashed somewhere... Wouldn't that help fight the infection... It always helped the cowboys in the old western movies. 

SEEE.. I am becoming way to attached.. I may just have to stop reading until it is finished.  I can't take it. 

I am going to google more natural antibotics found in Africa now....

 



Author's Response:

OMG!  Google all you want, sweetie, but it won't help them; they can't google.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OLIVE LEAF EXTRACT... very good for fighting infections... RUN ALICE RUN.. go get some.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OH GROSS... but yeah Edward.. His father is better than google any day... I did find a few more "Natural" antibotics... if you are ever lost in the Jungles of Africa and cut your leg... Just let me know..

 

Thanks for the chapter.. I am soo glad they are there...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oh how sad is that.  I mean it is so sweet, but oh so sad.  Poor them.. Now, really.. how do you get out of a country without a passport.  humm?  In that movie, "Not without my daughter" with Sally Field... she got a fake one just to get out of the country.. but of course she was in Afganistan or something.  I wonder... maybe they will find them??

This was another very emotional chapter.  Thanks.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I"VE GOT THE SOLUTION... Charlie.. Charlie can help... Witness protection.. they don't ever have to come out of hiding.. Bella can be a chef and Edward can still play..

 

Of course.. they might regonize him.. but hey.. they say that Toupac and Elvis are still alive.. Edward could do it too.

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Bella could make Elvis one heck of a fried peanut butter and banana sandwich....

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

OKAY.. i totally know what you are saying with that movie.  It was really good..but my god.. could it have been any more depressing.  Just when you think.. ok I can breath.. WHAMMOOO...

Thanks for the chapter.. and I am going to trust in your judgement.. Surely, someone that gets in a funk about "Remember Me" wouldn't put us through too much Heart Fail... RIGHT?????  Ok.. i know there will be some.. but .. come on.. nothing like the end of that freaking movie.

 

hahaha.

Thanks.



Author's Response:

I know... pretty pretty Pattz in the window...arrrrggghhhh!  Heck, DH was upset, too, and he doesn't even care how pretty Pattzy is!

Thanks for the vote of confidence.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

HE better stay with them .. our I WILL KILLLLL HIM... This is wonderful.. surely he will see the bigger picture now...

Witness Protection....???  Maybe ???  I could google it...if you want.. hahahahah..

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251278
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH WOW.. doucheward at his level best.. (or worst).. haha

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So good.. I love it.  I must admit. I was sobbing when it switched pov... I thought like Bella that he was going to deny her.. so sad.  Love it

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

oh god.. is it the vodka.. or am I crying..

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

oh man.. that was sad sad sad.. you did a great job with the characterization of each of the characters.. they seem so real... which of course makes it harder on us readers.. hahaha.. great job.

thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

awwww.. that is so sweet.. I am glad Edward pulled his head out of his youhaha...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

oh gosh.. I have a bad feeling about this..

OH.. and it is offical.. I hate that CHARLES dude..

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

oh no.. not good.. Well.. the chapter was great.. but her boss talking to her.. so not good. 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

FUCKING JESSICA... she must DIE.. oh.. gosh.. I didn't mean that.. just mame her a bit.

great chapter

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

oh no..

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Tammy's POV

I KNEW THAT S.O.B was a part of this.. That grumpy old man needs to DIE..  lol

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OH .... Daddy Warbucks is GOING DOWN.. it's about TIME.. hahahaha.. I really love this story.. so good.

Makes me hate the VIEW. TMZ and Maurey.. hahah