Reviews by Footroza
Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time,

where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

Story Blog: http://planet-twilight.blogspot.com/

 

image made by GSRgirlforever

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 174480 Read Count: 187854
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2011 Updated: 20 May 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: He Picked Me

Nice...I like it



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Rosalie Acts Up and Intros are Made

I enjoyed this chapter, but I wish I could see more of what they are all feeling.  Is Bella Scared?   Is she happy to be there?

I am nervous for her.



Author's Response:

I got better at the feeling part in later chapters.  This is my first story and I didn't start out with enough emotions.  Still working on it.  Bella is happy with Edward.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Edward's POV of 1st Day

Okay... this was much more intimate.  I liked his insight into the situation,



Author's Response:

Thanks, that was my first attempt at getting into Edward's head.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Tattoos and Gowns

Oh this is very interesting, Thanks



Author's Response:

Again, glad you liked and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Intro to the Denali's, Tanya's Seduction

WOW.. Tanya is not nice at all.  Poor Edward



Author's Response:

Yes, Tanya is crazy.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Edward's Rape

Oh that's just RUDE... hahahahah.. God I hope she isn't pregnant



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Honeymoon Night, Binding Completion

I am loving this... I want a super sonic tooth brush  :)



Author's Response:

I tried to find of a photo of a space age looking toothbrush, but all I could come up with is the normal looking battery operated ones.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Morning Lovin'

Love the pictures...so good..



Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying them!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 21: I'm a What? and Exploring the Books

Very lovely... They are so sweet to each other.  BTY.. as this story develops so does your writing... I can really feel the emotions now, and the amazing details really adds to the overall effect.  Great job



Author's Response:

Thanks, I probably should have rewrote the first chapters to see if I could improve them before uploading.  But I was trying to get my story moved to this site because fanfiction is on the fritz.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Edward's Special Place and Addy's Tea Party

I love Addy.  I have a boy, and forcing him to have a tea party with me is not fun.. he he he  Great chapter



Author's Response:

Now, you wouldn't force him would ya'?  I had trouble keeping my boy out of the dirt, I don't think I would want to have a tea party with him....lol.  Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the reivew!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Movie, Music, Emmett's and Rosalie's House, Claiming Bella

What a brilliant idea....I love it.. They are changing more and more everytime.  That is such a unique Idea... Great job.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am glad you are enjoying the story! 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Confinement Chambers and EPOV Lemon

Where in the world are you coming up with these pictures.. I am beginning to think this place is real... If it is... have Edward come pick me up please... I am packed and ready.



Author's Response:

I spent hours going through pictures online, doctored some up and some I used as I found them....you hadn't seen nothing yet...got lots more to come....lol  That is why I am using so many pictures, I want you to see what I see in my head and visualize yourself on Planet Twilight.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Rosalie Chooses, Clotheslines, Ride Through Forkington

I was just about to go to bed, and I got one more..email ping... yipee!!!  I really am starting to feel that the pressure is building.. there are too many things stacking against them.  And you have roundaboutly, hinted that they need to be really careful.  Scary

I also keep waiting for her to mess up something and get punished.  I wonder what his punishment would intel. 

very interesting... Thanks for the very creative story.. I am thrilled you brought it here.



Author's Response:

So far, she hasn't gotten into trouble.  Rosalie is getting into enough trouble by herself...lol.  I would say she would get a spanking, if she got into trouble...but I really hadn't put much thought into it.  Thanks so much for all your reviews!  I am glad you are enjoying my story!

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143205
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

humm... very interesting.. still analyzing everything thing he says.. this chapters conclusion ----  he is a fucker of huge perportions. 

I don't even have a degree in Phyc.. can you believe it.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I about shit when i first read this.. like really.. I just knew it was him... but you are so sneaky.  love it

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Okay.. so is Alice really a bitch?  I just can't tell.  And yes, we do have a glimpse into our Bella.. Great chapter

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

well.. yes.. I would say corner.. as in now she can offically stand on one.. hahahaha.. kidding. 

Angela was right.. she needed it hard. 

WOW.. what a chapter.  Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

oh gosh.. so sad.  what has happened to our Edward.  sniffle

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

so scary.. I would fall over..what an intense moment. 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

We are so glad you are here.  The spoiltone and I know a thing or two about getting kicked off ff.com.  But then again, if that hadn't happened, there would be no place like TWCS.  (Silver lining.. yeah).  I hope you find a happy home here, and if you need anything, or have a hard time with anyone here, please let us know. 

As you said, while we respect others opinions, we will not tolerate death threats.  That's just... wrong.  I mean come on people. it's fiction.  it's fun.  it's not real. 

Thanks for a wonderful story.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I LIKE A CLEAN WORK SPACE... HA HA HA HA.. He is a real fucker..that one.  But funny.  I may put that on my husband's facebook.  he he he..

Love it..

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

Can you imagine?  She would be under some serious post traumatic sexing disorder..Okay.. here is the thing.  I am reading this again..(so I can review each chapter.. he he he.) and I am noticing things this time around.  Things that Edward is saying that make..more since?  Maybe?  I mean he is clearly fucked up, but things like.. "You want to take and take and take. But not from me you won't"  That is a very interesting statement knowing what I know now.  HUMMM..

Shit who am I kidding.. I am just along for the ride.  and loving it.

Love it..

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I love Roughward... more than I love my dog.  AND that is huge.  I am just so anxious to hear his whole story.  Something horrible made him this way.. Will he ever be normal again... so sad. 

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

OH MY GOODNESS.. i am soo glad to have you hear.  I can't believe they pulled you.. This is such an amazing story.. I will review EVERY chapter, even though I have read and re read MANY times.  hahahaha.  Your writing is amazing, and the depths of your characters are so wonderful.

LOVE IT. 

WELCOME to the coffee shop

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 05 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

OH WOW!!.. My heart is beating out of my chest.  GOOD GRIEF THAT WAS INTENSE...

Summary:

Bella comes from a neglectful home, and is sold to a carnival to save her sister. Once there she's put in the care of Edward, but who to trust?

 

WARNING: CONTAINS ABUSE AND RAPE AND DRUGS. IF YOU ARE SENSITIVE TO THESE TOPICS PLEASE DON'T READ.

 

Massive thanks to Mehek18 for the amazing banner!! *much hugs*

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Fics to Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33772 Read Count: 23061
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2011 Updated: 29 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OH WOW.. you had to end it there?  hahahahaha.  This is a great story.  Thanks for bringing it over to our site.  James and Laurant are so scary.  I think I may have nightmares.

Thanks

Summary:

 

 

 

A heartbreaking tail of Edward and Bella in foster care. How do you become a "normal" person after being abused in every way, brainwashed, and manipulated. can they make it life together or will it rip them apart?

This story contains physcial, mental, and sexual abuse. slight slash. this story may offend some, so don't read if you offend easily. very occ.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85652 Read Count: 19356
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2011 Updated: 04 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I'm with Bella.. Lauren needs to go.  I don't like her at all... but I do love this chapter.  Great job

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I'm scared that Edward's new freedom is going to land Lauren in his lap.  OH NO

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is really so sad... I mean I absolutely love it.. but they are both such a mess.  I can see glimpses of their healing, but they have to talk to someone.  JAMES was a horrible person.  BOO JAMES.

 

Love it

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh this is really good.  I am a little scared of what made them both this way.  If Edward was there for 10 years, i am sure he was in some dark places. 

 

Nice job.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

oh I love it.. I can't wait for the udate. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

stories/46180/images/where_she_belongs_banner4.jpg

Edward Cullen is gifted Isabella Swan as a reward for a job well done.  The more time he spends with her, the more he becomes enamored of her.  Will he be able to make amends for his behavior and win the girl’s heart?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 50513 Read Count: 112136
[Report This] Published: 15 May 2011 Updated: 16 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 May 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well. I do like it... Can't wait for more...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

it was... "ok" 

 

ha ha ha ha.. I bet I am not the first one to say that... Seriously, this was wonderful.  I really like it... but then I love dark and disturbing.  lol

Thanks so much.

The Breakers by les16 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 308]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After spending 7 years in prison, Edward gets a new start in the fishing village of Corea, Maine. Can a little girl and her mom, Bella, see beyond his past and can they all find love again...or will the ocean swallow them whole?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Finished, My all time favorites, Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 293066 Read Count: 68463
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2011 Updated: 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

OH WOW.. I just found this today.  Great start.  I am HOOKED already... Get it.. a little fish humor.   HAHAHA.. um.. yea...I will be quiet now.

Thanks

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 08 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This is so freaking good..  Your characters are amazing... really not at all Twilighty...this could so be an original story.. I really love it.  Thanks so much

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

God.. this is just a wonderful story.. JUST FREAKING WONDERFUL.  Thanks so much for the HOLIDAY update.  Love it. 

Connected by kathryn gayle Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

The last thing Delilah Preston wanted to do was be a hero, but when she finds herself in a position to prevent an assassination, her conscience wouldn’t let her walk away. As a result, she gets caught up in an FBI investigation and the media spotlight. The problem? Delilah Preston is not who she claims to be. Seven years ago she fled from a cruel and sadistic husband, a powerful underworld figure who wants her back, dead or alive.

Enter Special Agent Dominic Santiago who discovers Delilah’s true identity and realizes that after many years of dead-ends, she’s his ticket to taking down notorious crime boss Cap Grimaldi. But Cap isn’t about to let anyone threaten his family's empire, and quickly devises a plan to not only discredit the Federal monkey on his back, but also recover his errant wife and the fortune she took from him when she fled.


Categories: Romance, Original Fiction, Action
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4004 Read Count: 116
[Report This] Published: 24 Jul 2011 Updated: 24 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is an absolutely GREAT story.  If you are looking for a book with Drama, Action, Mystery, Love, and Angst... this is IT.  I would put this story right up there with some of the John Grisham books.  Check it out.

People Change by kuntrygal Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Edward Cullen was the bane of Bella Swan's young existence until her mother unexpectedly moves her away. What happens years later when she moves back? Do people really change?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 82271 Read Count: 32257
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2012 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh so good.  I laughed..cried...hated that rat bastard...everything I was looking Grier in a story.  Thanks so much...and thanks library Facebook page fr the rec!

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 411998
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well.. I'll be.. that was fun.  I was told about this little gem from Jennmc75... she said I should read and give your fic the love it deserves.  I am loving it so far.  Jenn usually doesn't steer me wrong. 

Can wait for me.  Thanks for posting we are glad you are here.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OH NO.. he is a kinky bastard isn't he.  Now, I just have to say.. Tanya being his PA makes me nervous.  Just saying

 

Loved the Edward POV.. Thanks

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Soon sweet.  Great chapter

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Scary.  But a great chapter. Thanks 

Always on my Mind by jess2002 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 196]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Written with Siobhan! He said I had no life before him. He said that he was my past present and future. I couldn't remember life before him so he must be right. He promised that he would never leave me, but one day that all changed.

Thanks to Christag for the banner!

Thanks to Stepaine Mason for the other banner!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159709 Read Count: 59744
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2012 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OHHHH.. I like this.. I REALLY LIKE THIS.. FUN!!!!

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

OHHH YES.. Charlie is a bastard.. and she is being watched.. aren't these the best stories EVER!!!!!!

 

Thanks ladies.. This is fun.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

OMG.. that was soooo freaking scary.. SOOO scary.. I love it.. but I may have nightmares.. but soo good.. (God, I'm a walking contradiction.)

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Edward is a really creeper.. but he is better than Charile.. I think.. poor Bella

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Her special place is HORRIBLE.. poor bella...

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

GULP!!... holy cow.. what the hell.. you need more readers.. this is amazing......... amazing...

 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OH NOOO.. I am at the end of the chapters... oh please oh please write more... I can't wait to see Esme... I went back to the first chapter just to get a better picture of what is going to happen.. and I am convinced she is going to be just as bad as Edward.

 

I AM LOVING THIS.

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh so scary....how do you come up with this stuff....   Love it 

Kismet by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary:

Olivia Spade thought she'd lost the love of her life at 16, but ten years later Sebastian Grady returns. Everything is different, he is different, and nothing will be the same. Can they accept that the hands of fate have tied them together again? Can Olivia get past her fears that he will leave her like he did then? What happens when other factors enter their lives bent on tearing them apart?

Fate is strong, but is it strong enough?

 

kismet


Categories: Erotica, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25802 Read Count: 9800
[Report This] Published: 17 Jul 2012 Updated: 04 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - The Haunting of Foxes and Hounds

Oh nice...and the kiss...yummy 

Reviewer: Footroza Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - First Love's Phantom

Oh this is going to be fun!!