Reviews by mistydeb
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: The set-up

Edward will surly kill Caius when he gets older for the killing of his parents

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue (In Peace we do not come)

This sounds sooo good

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Red Sky (Part One-Mini)

Oh sounds like the fun is starting..not that it hasn't already but I think the camps are going to get a rude awakening

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Pull

Oh yay they met again. Only who is gonna stop Edward from taking what is his.

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Urge

Not sure that Tanya knowing will be a problem, after all sex is allowed. Maybe Bella and Tanya will become good friends.

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Hiss Pt.3 (Actual Chapter)

Jasper is a sneaky SOB, and poor Bella is caught up in the middle of all the drama and family hatred.

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 8: The Forbidden Fruit

Oh dear will jasper try and buy her and use her as a personal slave. He is bound to try and do something to tease and taunt Edward.

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Taken

Oh so close yet so far away. They still have that amazing bond, but will Edward be able to find her again.

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Revolutionary Red pt.1 (actual chapter)

Dimitri is a good guard to Edward, I hope that Bella treats him better than she has so far. After all he is helping them

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Revolutionary Red pt.2 (actual chapter)

Oh yeah, dominant Edward has woken up. I hope they take head of her warning and get the fuck out. I'll stay and keep the fit one (cant remember his name) company lol.

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Grand Funk

?? I take it someone was dreaming a really weird dream lol

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Hiss Pt.1 (Actual Chapter)

Wow.

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Hiss Pt.2 (Actual Chapter)

Poor Bella witnessing Edward in his true asshole form must not have been pleasant for her at all. I hope he gets a better attitude as time wears on otherwise Bella will truly despise him despite them being mates

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1

Oh jasper is playing with fire. Lol. Edward serves this kick up his ass.

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Red Sky (Part Two-Mini)

Wow can I have Lulkis..pretty please, I am not above begging. He could definitely go Dom on me, I wouldn't have a problem submitting to him lol.

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Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Red Sky (Mini part 3)

Oh Edward is changing too, this should be a good fight between emmett and him, if they catch up to each other. I hope he has managed to get Bella away to safety.

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Hate

Aww well at least Bella was safe..for now anyway

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Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: A New Beginning

Great story so far, really looking forward to these two meeting up and read about this bond they had

Fold Your Wings by Jadalulu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1036]
Summary:

'The liberties he assumes with my body should enrage me, anger me beyond my own sanity. But it's just not that simple.' Encounters born of need. Consequences neither saw coming. Guard your hearts. Not the ExB you're used to. 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 104224 Read Count: 143206
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2011 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
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Date: 10 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Well it's about time she tries to make an effort. Edward has tried so hard over the past few months. Bella needs to go and see a therapist, she has way too much baggage and has been carrying it around since she was very young. She really doesn't know how to deal with emotions. Even if she hadn't entered into the arrangement with Edward she would have struggled with a normal relationship. She just used to tie it down with working so hard and being so tired with school and work. Once she figures that out then she will start to move forward. What a pair these two are, both too fucked up for their own good. Thks for the updates, Debbie

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Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

This fic is so good, sorry I haven't reviewed so far but I just couldn't stop reading it. I'm all caught up now in two nights. Looking forward to how this plays out, will Bella get the therapy she needs or will she just keep trudging along. Hopefully by the time they end up back in bed together Edward will be able to stand her touching and kissing him. Thks for sharing, Debbie

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is used to getting everything he wants. Good looking, wealthy, and charming, NYC's most reputable playboy doesn't take "no" for an answer. Then he meets Isabella Swan and all bets are off ... Except for one.

Banner by Rochelle_0089.

-Winner: Best Edward, the Winter 2012 Sunflower Awards-
-Winner: Fic of the Week (12/10/12-12/16/12, 4/16/13-4/22/13), The Lemonade Stand-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Quote, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Winner: 3rd Place Best Friendship, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Edward, Eclipse Awards-
-Nominated: Best Rosalie, The Wordsmith Awards-
-Nominated: Best All Human, The 2013 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Fic of the Month, December 2012, The Lemonade Stand-
-Nominated: Favorite Drop Everything Fic, The 2013 TwiFic Fandom Awards-
-Nominated: All Time Favorite Story, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Bella Swan, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-
-Nominated: Best Supporting Cast, The 2014 Fandom Choice Awards-

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Stories I've read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202423 Read Count: 112984
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2011 Updated: 05 Aug 2014
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Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: The Countdown

Yay, he finally grew some and decided to be exclusive with Bella. Lovely chapter, Debbie

Blood In The Snow by shewoolf Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary:

Author Edward Cullen finds a man buried in the snow, nearly beaten to death. Love grows as he cares for the man, but will his attackers find him? Slashstories/35461/images/BloodInTheSnowBannertwcs.jpg

Thank you  to Slash Kitten Mina for the wonderful banner!!

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83463 Read Count: 15001
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2012 Updated: 11 Nov 2012
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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh dear, I hope the boys saw demetri - but then that would put them in danger too. Glad James got what was coming to him, sly bastard, but at least he can't continue to be a spy in the camp any more. Demetri really is a piece of work. Thks for the update, Debbie

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Well at least James won't be telling on the boys again. Carlisle was quick at informing the boys of the news and they have some kind of protection even if jasper can't shoot. I just hope the Calvert isn't too far behind the volturi.

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Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Aw such a sweet proposal and right at new year too. I know this will be the best start to the new year after this it can only go downhill for a short period of time. At least until some of the goons are killed.

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

OMG, I hopethe Feds and the cops get there just after the hit squad get there. I hate to think that edward and jasper could get hurt out there on their own with no help. As for Aro I hope feds also manage to take out the three of them as well. Thks for the update Debbie

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Aww so glad all the baffles got killed or maimed and arrested. At least the boys got out of it ok and they no longer need to hide. & Alec is ok, so glad he didn't get shot.

Dear Reader by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
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Edward is running out of time to find his mate before the Volturi will demand his allegiance. It will take more than just infatuation to make it out on the other side. A story of vamps, witches and more. NC-17 for lang, violence and mature content.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15131 Read Count: 1698
[Report This] Published: 30 May 2012 Updated: 30 May 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story, very intriguing - glad James died the slimy bastard, shame the volturi couldn't follow him. Thks for sharing, Debbie

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading mistydeb.  This one was different and fun for me, and I definitely want to try my hand at a 'witchy' piece after writing this one.

 

xoxo

tb

Summary:

'We sit in silence, her tears slow but not stopping. I wish I knew more of what to say to here, to comfort her. I wanted to see her with red-rimmed eyes, rings gone from her finger, but not in pain like this.' BxE/OOC, FAGE3 gift for One Brave Lamb.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7172 Read Count: 782
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent fic. So dismal at first, how many people are in the same boat as Bella but then don't get their sun.

Author's Response:

thank you very much, i don't know, i hope that if i was ever in that situation that i would find the help or have the support to find my sun

thanks for reading

Summary:

Major Jasper Whitlock is one of the most feared and respected vampires of his time. Only the truly foolish would challenge him, and those foolish enough have met with an untimely end.

Jasper sets out on a mission to protect the supernatural and human world after visions from his sister Alice. Under the pretense of exposing a secret alliance between his former Master and leaders of the Romanian coven he sets out to Volterra to inform Aro Volturi of their intentions. Does Jasper have ulterior motives for informing the leader of the vampire world, or does it do it out of respect for authority.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22539 Read Count: 3366
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2012 Updated: 16 Jun 2012
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Date: 22 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Extended Epilogue

I read this initially on FF and I have re-read it on here with the extended epilogue, what a great ending. Really looking forward to the new one. Thks for extending and continuing, Debbie

Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Sticks and stones may break our bones... but Bella will surely kill us."

 

What happens when an overprotective father sends his innocent baby girl to a private self-defense course run by a gay man?  Oh if he only knew what he was paying for!  Edward and Jasper aren't the only ones who have something to teach, seems Bella does as well... the art of patience.

Poly/slash included.

Extended past the June Drabble War entry.

Picks up right after Bella shoots Mike. :)

Beta'd by the amazing texasbella and the beautiful banner made by the ever so talented JA Mash

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Erotica, Family, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 126 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25886 Read Count: 407788
[Report This] Published: 22 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Sticks and Stones

Wow a great story, all that sexual tension in the first place was amusing. Sorry I didn't review each chap, but I wanted to get to the next chap. Thks for writing & sharing Debbie

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The boys are ready to start their future together, drama free and full of toys. Having said their ‘I do’s’ they are headed to Greece for their 3 week long honeymoon. What antics can they manage to get up to in a foreign country?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: Can't wait for an update
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28328 Read Count: 34749
[Report This] Published: 30 Jun 2012 Updated: 22 Oct 2012
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Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Mmm that was hot, I can't wait for them to go house hunting either, it does sound like fun. Looking forward to the next instalment, Debbie

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh that was hot, hard and fast against the marble in the middle of a tour guide no less. Naughty boys *snickers*

Author's Response:

If they can get away with it, they'll do it hehe

True & TB xXx

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Mmm, these boys are def insatiable with each other. I'm surprised their balls haven't shrivelled up and fallen off the amount of kiss they have shot whilst being there. LOL

Author's Response:

LOL, we couldn't let that happen to them hehe

True & TB xXx

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Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

On my last review! Auto correct changed 'jizz' to kiss, dontcha just hate that. No wonder they are sore, all that sexing on the beach, rocks & shower

Author's Response:

Mmmmm, I just saw the word 'jizz' in your review and thought about the boys lol

True & TB xXx

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Mm sex in hot water in public is a huge turn on *taps chin and reminisces*

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh no don't tell me some of the family have crashed the last few days of their honeymoon.. That stinks

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Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Mmm I'll bet he would like to see him handcuffed. I'm sure if he looked hard enough he may ven find some in Edwards bag of tricks. Thks for the update, Debbie

Author's Response:

There's a lot in that bag of tricks lol

TB & True x

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Maybe Edward will try to get jasper dressed up in drag, either that or trying swing around the pole lol

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Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Very domesticated, papa jasper..sounds nice.

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh yes we like

Author's Response:

:D

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Date: 02 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh that was hot and what a lucky bitch Kate was to be able to witness that scene.

Author's Response:

Kate was very lucky lol, more hotness to cum! hehe

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Mmm looking forward to see if Edward is gonna go all Dom on him. Also to when they start being full partners and trying the new toys in the store room.

Author's Response:

Ohhhh, you wait and see what Edward gets up to hehe

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh my, jasper in those restraints..yummy, no wonder Edward wanted to eat him and then his dinner.

Author's Response:

Gotta love eating like that, right? lol x

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Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Mmm thoughts of sharing a hot tub with ruses two sound yummy. Thks for the update, Debbie

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review hun :)

True & TB

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Mm these two are so hot and so are the pictures.

Author's Response:

Mhmm, we have a great time 'researching' pictures hehe

tb & true

xXx

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Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Lovely chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks hun :)

tb & true

xXx

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

These thoughts are so creative and the images you get are just something else. Great chapter as per usual, Debbie

Author's Response:

Aw thanks, Debbie :)

tb & true

xXx

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Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was soo funny, well not for them maybe. I couldn't imagine anything worse than having both sets of parents and siblings turning up, uninvited to the last few days of your honeymoon. What a cockblocker, that just sucks, and not in a good way either. Thks for writing and sharing these stories it has been truly fantastic and funny to read them, debbie x

Summary: Past Featured Story

Jasper is hurt by an old enemy, and it's up to Carlisle to save him. Can he show his son what family is all about?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Carlisle (non-slash)
Genre: Family, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7350 Read Count: 266
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2012 Updated: 03 Jul 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww the ending was soo sweet. So glad that they ripped Maria and the others apart then had a bonfire. At least he won't have to be worried about her ever again and he can start his life with the cullens again. Now he is touch with his new feelings he will probably be much happier as well. Thks for sharing, Debbie

Again & Again by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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After a lifetime of love, Emmett has to find a way to live on without Edward. With the help of their daughter, he discovers that it is possible to recapture that love...again and again.

**Entry for The Summer It All Began anonymous slash contest

**The beautiful banner is by JA Mash


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Edward/Emmett (slash)
Genre: Drama, Family, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3602 Read Count: 538
[Report This] Published: 08 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww, such a sad yet warming story. Thks for writing and sharing, Debbie

Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me words touch you.  

 

xoxo

tb

Reptile by Thaigher Lillie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

 

She spread herself wide open to let the insects in. 
She leaves a trail of honey to show me where she's been. 
She has the blood of reptile just underneath her skin. 
Seeds from a thousand others drip down from within. 

Devils speak of the ways in which she'll manifest. 
Angels bleed from the tainted touch of my caress. 
Need to contaminate to alleviate this loneliness.

Come what may, because  even creatures of the night have to live it large, but Karma has always found away around strokes of luck right?

Warnings- The usual: Things you wouldn't want you children to read.  Keep away if you're under the legal age to buy cigarettes. 

 

Short, multi-chapter, Prompt for Durty Nelly's  Gore Corner Vegas Prompt.

 


Categories: Original Fiction, Horror, Humor
Characters: None
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3297 Read Count: 470
[Report This] Published: 19 Jul 2012 Updated: 24 Jul 2012
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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: I Don't Wanna Know About Evil...

Oh a conniving and gold digging man..wonder if he gays her cash

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: I'm so Sick...

Oh have they just buried her husband in the dessert? He is a conniving bastard

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Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Smoke and Signal fires...

Oh so much hatred for her late husband and so much lust for her young lover

Summary:

 

I was given 3.5 days to come up with a story for the Drabble War 'DYAC' prompt.

 

 

 

JA Mash and Texasbella said 'You have to use this one' and showed me the picture.

 

 

 

Of course, never one to turn down a challenge, I agreed.

 

 

 

They gave me a maximum word count of 9k and a couple of extra words to use, can you guess what they are?

 

 

 

This is an Edward and Bella story, with a sweet Esme thrown in :)

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4666 Read Count: 54767
[Report This] Published: 28 Jul 2012 Updated: 28 Jul 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

So funny, I loved this story. Can't imagine a 60+ Esme learning txt spk and then learning about cock. Good job blow job or cock cumin wasn't in their txts.

Summary:

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One is the mayor, happily married to the perfect woman, adored by the townspeople.  The other is the sheriff, distant, gruff and feared. They both have secrets that can only be shared behind closed doors.  Written for the pick a pic challenge.

 

Banner made by vbfb1

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4664 Read Count: 2378
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, don't normally read this pairing but it was really good. Thks for sharing, Debbie

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the chance on the pairing Debbie, so glad you enjoyed it!

xoxo

tb

Summary:

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Bella doesn’t see herself very clearly which makes her shy, geeky and withdrawn.  Her favorite place to hide and escape?  The local comic book store owned by her only semi-friend, Emmett. When Emmett isn’t there one day, will her imagination get carried away over the new guy? Bday shot for my Jelly girl... JA Mash (who also made the banner!)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4316 Read Count: 1563
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww, so sweet of emmett and jess to tryband get these two to hook up. Thks for sharing Debbie

Summary:

 

"It takes a village to raise a child" and apparently, sometimes a man.

 

Jasper wants to do right by everyone around him which results in him avoiding living, until an outsider comes in and shows him how to live again.

 

A special Birthday One Shot for my dear and loving friend, Jess (JA Mash)

 

Have a great one babe!

 

Beta'd by the totally amazing and talented lady, TexasBella

 

Banner made by the beautiful and amazing lady, Arc Morpheus

 

This is slash, of course, so please don't read if it's not your thing :)


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, One-Shot, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8188 Read Count: 1431
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 05 Aug 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Turn the Tide

Aww so sweet and yet sad as well. Thks for writing and sharing, Debbie

Stress Relief by TheSongSmith Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Edward is stressed, and it's driving Jasper crazy. Can he find out what's wrong and ease the tension?

WARNING: Adult themes/language, LEMONSSS!


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5669 Read Count: 778
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2012 Updated: 06 Aug 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Mmm that was sweet and hot. Would love to see the tables turned and for jasper to experience his first time with a man. Thks for sharing, Debbie

Nightmares by TheSongSmith Rated: M starstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Jasper's past keeps coming back to haunt him, and they decide that something must be done. Can the family band together to help him, or will he continue to suffer? And what will be revealed? Rating may change for later chapters.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Family, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13753 Read Count: 841
[Report This] Published: 16 Aug 2012 Updated: 16 Oct 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I don't normally read jasper and Alice stories, but this has me intrigued now as to what his nightmares are about.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

At least jasper is starting to feel more relaxed about the hypnotising part.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 24 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Yay brotherly bonding, after jasper relives his story I'm sure he will feel he can trust the whole family.

Summary:

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Two men, lifelong friends, set out on their journey as lovers as they travel to Scotland for their honeymoon.  Will a secret wish they made so long ago come true?  Birthday shot for nmydreamz.

Thank you to Arc Morpheus for making the banner on such short notice!


Categories: All Human, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4472 Read Count: 968
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2012 Updated: 17 Aug 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome story, loved it. It was so sweet and romantic. Thks for sharing, Debbie

Beach Bum by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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*DRABBLE* Bella is stuck in a loveless marriage, nothing more than a Stepford wife, when her world is turned upside down by the appearance of a certain beach bum and his dog. E/B

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6805 Read Count: 32287
[Report This] Published: 18 Aug 2012 Updated: 18 Aug 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Aww such a wonderful ending for them both and the dogs too. Thks for writing and sharing, Debbie

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Aww.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my their similarities are quite something

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Poor Edward, too young to loose his wife.

Summary:

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At the end of story Hostage, NYPD SWAT boys Edward and Jasper married. This is their Honeymoon.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Hostage
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17871 Read Count: 5380
[Report This] Published: 02 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Sep 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Beach Cottage

Nice to see these boys back. Mrs cope throwing water on her was funny as hell. They seemed to have really enjoyed their first day at the cottage so far and so did I. Thks for sharing, debbie

Author's Response:

Heyy misty

Glad ur enjoying the boys. Sexy times ahead and a somewhat controversial discussion in chapter 2. 

Take care

Yvonne

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Orientation

Loved this, the theorising at the end was so funny. Like you would imagine two guys theorising whilst high, coming up with all sorts of reasons why they are the dominant of our species LOL

Author's Response:

Hi Misty

Over the moon that you enjoyed the chapter and the boys theorising. Men sure are a funny breed. Next chapter coming up today.

Take care

Yvonne

xxx

 

 

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Reflections

Aww this was such a sweet chapter, they are just soooo cute together. I can imagine some hot secs scenes in the jacuzzi, pool table, granite tops, all the bathrooms and not forgetting all them beds. I hope they're there for a month LOL, and they may even grace us with some more wacky theories. Thks for the update, Debbie

Author's Response:

Heyyy Debbie

Please feel free to use your imagination re where they satisfy their loins. Yes, there will be some fun with the pool table next and somewhere down the line, the jacuzzi. Other surfaces will be mentioned but only in passing. The reason being is that, as much as I love the boys, my true love lies with writing drama and action. I really do find it hard writing love and fluff. I am aching to get started on their next investigation. Therefore there are only three chapters remaining to this story. 

I just might manage to slip in another wacky theory or two. I'll have me a think.

Take care bb

Yvonne xx

 

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Pool

Yay pool table secs. Always wanted to try that but never been anywhere private enough :(. Great chapter, thks for updating again so quickly Debbie

Author's Response:

Heyyy Debbie

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. One day I'm sure you will get your wish with the pool table. Last two chapters are with Nancy. When I get them back I will post.

Take care

Yvonne xx

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Hike

Yay so glad Edward managed to kick the ass of those guys, that was sooo much fun - esp the part when jasper said no man goes behind his man only him lol so funny.

Author's Response:

HEYYYY Misty

This was my personal fav of all the chapters. Love writing action scenes, Love Jasper's sense of humor. I can't for the life of me write anything toally serious.

Take care bb

Yvonne xx

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Dance the Hula

Loved their frolics on their honeymoon, so hot. Marcus is back on the scene...oh shit. I'll bet that put a damper on their welcome home party. I have loved this sequel. Thks for writing & sharing, Debbie

Author's Response:

Heyyy Debbie

Sorry for taking so long to respond to your review. I have been away on holiday.

Thank you for loving the boys. Yup Marcus is back and flexing his mafia power. Quite right about it putting a dampener on their welcome home party. The sequel will be drama and action based, with a good dose of loving. Want to get a few chapters under the belt before posting, so we are looking at a christmas P day.

Speak soon luv

Yvonne xx

 

 

Summary:

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On a cross-country road trip, Bella finds herself stranded in TX, her only means of help a sex store, because there is nothing else for miles around. Will the staff be friendly enough to help her get on her way again ... or just help her get off? There's a first time for everything. **Written for the 2012 The First Time Anonymous Contest**

 

Beautiful banner made by JA Mash


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Alice/OC, Bella/Edward/Emmett, Bella/Rose
Genre: Erotica, Femme Slash, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4700 Read Count: 5378
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Just great wasn't expected the ending though. Thks for sharing, Debbie

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Debbie :)

xoxo

tb

Hot Shot by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

“It’s just a job, she’s just a client.”  That’s what freelance photographer, Masen Cullen, has to convince himself of as she changes personas like she changes outfits and strikes her poses, each one more tempting than the last.

 

*written for the 2012 Fandom for Suicide Awareness Compilation

** Thank you to JA Mash for the amazing banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10092 Read Count: 5282
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story and hot too

Summary:

FAGEY McFAGEINGTON THE 5th for Widdle Wombat. Prompt used: A dark and stormy highway in the dead of night and her tire blows... OCC/AH/AU BxE, M for the usual.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5143 Read Count: 455
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2012 Updated: 12 Dec 2012
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes she finally got her man..and jasper didn't run from Alice that quickly this time

Author's Response:

yes, she did and he man'd up this time, thanks for reading!

Hurt by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

 

Jasper is a carefree senior on the cusp of graduation, ready to settle down and play house with his longtime girlfriend. A new friend works his way into Jasper’s bed and gets a different reaction than he expected. When Jasper realizes he’s lost it all, how bad will it hurt? J/C lemon. Graphic descriptions of mayhem.

 

***Written for the 2012 Consumed In Blood contest***

NOT FOR THE FAINT OF HEART

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Jasper/Carlisle (slash)
Genre: Sci-Fi
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2641 Read Count: 601
[Report This] Published: 06 Jan 2013 Updated: 06 Jan 2013
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that was heart wrenching in a weird way. Carlilse sure was a disillusioned freak..reminds me of those who think 'well if I can't have you then neither can she'. I did enjoy it though, thks for sharing, Debbie

Author's Response:

:D Thanks darlin'!

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717284
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I wonder is she is still a V, and she has been saving herself for Edward. Maybe jake only says he loves her cause he wants to pop her cherry but she keeps holding out...maybe, hopefully :)

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh jazz is gonna end up in big trouble, Edward should just ditch the cheap trash and go for the classier brand. Although they would probabaly just screw him for his dough

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well at least he has loads of money now and jasper doesn't need to struggle any more

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh oh, he just waved a green flag at Bella and she is gonna go for it lol

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I liked jaspers warning about staying away from Bella. Looking forward to when Edward and Bella meet though, that should be fun. Also looking forward to how this pans out in the future with these two.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sounds good so far, very intriguing and seems to have lots of depth. Debbie

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh oh, i sense a pissing contest. Jake totally caught him checking her out and visa versa. I hope he doesn't take it out on Bella, he seems like a real jealous douchebag.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I don't think jasper will be so happy if Edward hits on her and neither will Bella. She seemed kinda jealous in the car.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh Bella is soo jealous of Alice offering herself to Edward like that.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Well at least he blew Alice off nicely with that little tidbit of info about jasper

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm sure he will figure out why carlilse sr didn't look out for him.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Mmm wonder what carlilse is up to

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Oh she is def teasing him, little minx :)
She might bite off more than she can chew though especially with jasper as well.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh dear, it seems as though Bella is more worried about being on her own than anything else. Hope she dumps jake soon

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

He really needs to get laid, maybe he will stop ogling Bella so much ...who am I kidding he's a man after all

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I knew she would lose her shit when she found out. Jealous much Bella, I hope she doesn't do something stupid.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh he must think that all his birthdays have come at once lol

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh Bella needs to sort her head out and def dump jakes ass before she makes a serious play for Edward.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I hope jasper and Alice hook up. Edward and Bella won't at this moment, she needs to dump jake first and edward needs to get his dick wet a few times before he hits Bella. I love this fic so far, looking forward to how it all plays out

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Now jake has ruined the end of their night

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh oh he just kicked up a shit storm

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

LOL he is gonna get cockblocked again..by himself.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh shit, I hope jasper doesn't see them on the stairs, they better get their asses moving.

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Thankfully they got away with that for now.