Wow the response to this chapter has been amazing, over 150 of you thus far have spoken out about chapter 22.  First let us say ... THANK YOU for reading and reviewing.  The fact alone that we have been able to instill so much emotion in our readers for the characters within this story makes us so pleased, that alone tells me the story has the back bone we wanted it to have. So, on behalf of Jess and I, THANK YOU for caring and showing us that you care.
Now we warned you that Edward would not be a favorite after this chapter, and Alice well we all already hated her.  Alice has taken a presence in the story and stronger one than we first intended, however I think her presence helps show how much Bella is growing.  Alice is still stuck in that kiddie stage, where Bella is showing that she is learning as she grows.  If you remember, Bella has made lots of mistakes and acted out too, but in this chapter she showed not only that she is growing, but that she is and can be responsible and dependable.  Many of you believe that Bella is pregnant, but she is not.
The next chapter is in Edward’s POV and we hope that you will all be able let your anger for him and his actions go by the end of it.  Edward has a lot to say and some of the things he thinks about and even discusses will give a little new light regarding his seemingly blatant disregard of Bella over Alice.  Edward never completely said anything in chapter 22, so chapter 23 is going to be his outlet chapter.
As for Esme, she has seen through Alice’s shit, and I think right now for her you will find in coming chapters she is trying to do what is right by Alice.  Gary has made Alice come back to St. Louis and work for the company, because he is trying to get her under control.  It wasn’t pre-planned for Edward to take her back to St. Louis, and you will learn more of why he did it soon. 
Well I think this answers most of your questions, if you have more and or want to chat about this more, you can find us on Facebook under two different groups:  Jess2002 FanFiction or TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  See you all Wednesday with another chapter, Jess & Kasi~

TEASER:
“I know, Esme told me what all has been going on.”

“You talked to Es?”

“Yeah, she calls me every day.  How was Landon tonight, his mouth still sore?”

“Yeah the poor kid is cutting at least two maybe even four teeth at once.  He is very cranky, but he was all smiles earlier.  I think he may like his Uncle Edward.”

“Oh you think that do you?” Bella asks with a smile, and it is sadly the first totally genuine one I’ve seen on her face since before I left Forks.  “I think he likes his Aun ... sister Bella better.”

“Oh you do—do you?” I ask noticing how she started to say Aunt, but changed it to sister.

“Yep,” she says popping the p. 

“Well I guess he will have to like you twice as much, after all it isn’t often anyone can claim that their sister, is also their Aunt.  Keep in mind, though, that he may claim the right in the future to get two gifts from you for every holiday or event—one from his sister Bella, and one from his Aunt Bella.”

“I doubt that he will ever be that greedy and self-absorbed,” she says and her smile falls.

Well I know this is late in coming to you, but I have been so crazy busy, I actually forgot to write the review reply.  Nikky has been such a help to Jess and I with this story and she is the one who is not only making sure you all get this review reply, she reminded me again to write it.  I don't really have a teaser to give to you for the next chapter and hopefully we have tied up all the loose ends that you may have questions on.  Jess and I want to seriously thank you all for all the words of kindness, wisdom, and even words that set us straight on matters of how you viewed things-without you all and your words and reviews, we would not be who we are.  Thank you, later today when the Epilogue chapter posts, there will be a special authors' note from both Jess and I at the bottom.  Thank you again, for reading and reviewing.

(Jess) & Kasi~

Wow... what a turn out for the first chapter so far.  I know that this has been an anticipated story for a few people, so we are happy to be posting it for your reading pleasure.  The wonderful kick ass banner for this story was made by the very talented and wonderful Stephenie Masen and we just love her to pieces for it.  There was a question regarding Carlisle’s age, and I want to be clear on things so there is no confusion.  Elizabeth was 14 when she became pregnant with Bella, and Carlisle was 15.  After nine months of pregnancy Elizabeth was 15 and Carlisle was 16, hence the fact that Bella is 14 and her mom is 29, and Carlisle is 30.  Edward is 31, and Esme is 36.  We hope this wraps everything question wise up for you all.  Thanks so much for the wonderful response and reviews we are getting.  We are planning to stick to the updating schedule of every Wednesday.  We are excited to hear more from you in the future.  Thanks, Kasi (&Jess)

I always try to write a little bit of me into every book I write or have a part in writing... So yes I once owned a 1980 Chevy Monte Carlo with factory T-tops and power everything.  It had a rebuilt (not stock) 350 with a 4 barrel carburetor man alive that car could SCREAM!  She was midnight metallic blue and the interior was white leather.  Yep... I say it was a female... I blame it all on her disposition.   Okay enough about my personal life... LOL.  Many of you are seeing the bratty side of Bella, but keep in mind she is close to seventeen now and she thinks she is in LOVE with Ben.  She has these lingering feelings about Edward, but she doesn’t understand them – yet.  Bella is territorial about her mom and her time with her.  She has always had contact with Carlisle, but while he was in medical school and doing his residency of course there was a lull in just how much time he had to be with her, but he has always been a good father.  Thank you all for reading and reviewing.  I will try to get my head on straight and be sure to post the teaser for next week’s update to Fictionators... Matter of a fact I will go do that now.  See ya all next week, Kasi and (Jess)

Thanks so much for another outstanding bunch of reviews for chapter 4.  We understand many of you are not pleased about the whole Ben getting Bella’s virginity, but we wanted to really keep this story as realistic as could be, and sadly there are so very many-many girls who give it up to the wrong guy, convinced that they’re with their one and only forever love.  The next chapter will make a few of you smile and a bunch will say ‘I told you so’ or ‘I knew it’.  Jess and I both are so completely in awe of our wonderful following of readers, and we thank you all for your reading and reviewing of our story.  Kasi~

PS… no teasers on Fictionators until they fix the issues with the Trojan viruses and such they have going on so here is your teaser!

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My face hurts from smiling. I call Esme to talk to her about it, but she doesn’t answer. I get a text from her the second I hang up.

~What’s up? Did you hear about Edward?~

~I did! Where are you?~

~I’m with your dad. The team is having a few drinks to celebrate!~

And just like that I’m reminded that I’m only a kid and I can’t be with them to celebrate such an amazing thing.

~Do you want me to come back? We are right down the street.~

~No, I’m okay. Night.~

Now what will I do with myself?  I start watching the TV again as they are showing the series of hits once again.  I watch all five hits and the interview again, before my phone dings.

~Edward’s not much of a drinker so he’s staggering back to your room right now.~

~Okay. Night.~

And just like that, my night gets a whole lot better. It feels like an hour even though he is walking in the door within ten minutes. I hear the door lock click and I jump up and run to my man.  I highly doubt his smile could get any bigger. He drops his bag and I throw my arms around his neck. I giggle as he lifts me of the ground as we hug.  I wrap my legs around his middle and don’t let go.

Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places.  Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter.  A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not.  A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard.  A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid.  We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser:  “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.

“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.

“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”

“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.

“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.

“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”

“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.

Another wonderful bunch of reviews for chapter 8, we are super excited to see the reactions from the next few chapters, they will be an emotional rollercoaster in places.  Many of the reviews are stating they’re worried that Edward will pull a New Moon move, but we will not give the answer to that right now, it would take away too much from the next chapter.  A lot of you are torn over Liz’s behavior and if she is over the top or not.  A lot of people understand where Liz is coming from, yet think she has gone way overboard.  A bunch of you are like me with teen daughters who would flip a lid, and I would flip a lid.  We absolutely loved that one of you tagged Jasper with the nick-name Assper, soooo funny.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser:  “I have something to tell you. I want you to hear it from me and not anyone else,” he says as I sit up.

“Is it something bad?” I ask with my voice laced with worry.

“No, Sweetie. Nothing bad... actually I hope you think it’s great,” he says as I stare at him. “After the holiday, I’m going to announce my pending retirement.”

“Oh... okay, that is good news as long as that is something you truly want,” I say with a smile.

“Yes it is something I have wanted to do. I’m getting older and I have done all I can do player wise. You are going to be graduating and for me it’s the perfect time. This way, after the season is over we can start our life together. Well, as long as you don’t find someone else,” he says making me laugh.

“After what just took place here, I won’t ever want anyone else but you,” I tell him as I lean over to kiss him. “You make me so happy.”

“I’m glad. I love you,” he says with a sigh running his hand down the back of my head.

So virtually everyone has figured out that Liz (not Renee, who in this story is Bella’s hardly ever mentioned grandmother) is indeed pregnant.  Liz is not too old to have a baby, in this story right now she is only 33 years old, women well into their early forties are having babies without worry, so she should be more than safe.  Where you all have figured it all out, no one else in the story seems to know, other than Jim of course.  Liz is currently out of control; however she will not bend or change anytime soon.  Alice is a piece of work, and Bella is upset with her, but still loves her.  You will learn more about what is going on with Jasper and Alice soon, we promise.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, we think you’ll really love the next couple of chapters.

Kasi & Jessica

Teaser:  I open my eyes to see it is still dark out. I look at the clock and I see it is five in the morning. I look at Edward and he is sound asleep on his stomach with his arms under his head. Just as I go to wake him up for some morning lovin, I hear my door creak open. I lift my head to see Alice smiling at me. I quietly get up and we head downstairs. We make hot cocoa and go and sit in front the tree. Our parents still made us go to bed before they would put anything under the tree. I kind of liked it that way. Even though I knew Santa was real I still was able to have the element of surprise.

“Look at all this stuff,” Alice says with a giddy giggle. “Uncle Edward spoiled the shit out of you. From where I am standing I can count twelve gifts.”

“No way!” I say in a half whisper. I go to her and see my name over and over again. “Are there any stores open? I think I need to go buy him more. I only got him six gifts,” I say as she giggles.

“The gas station is open we can go buy him a box full of Twinkies,” she says as I smile.

Wow the overall consensus is that Liz is a class ‘A’ number one royal bitch, and well we would have to agree.  Some question how Jim could have been under the impression that Liz had told Bella.  Liz and James had chosen to not tell everyone yet, but he thought that Liz would have at least told Bella.  Isn’t ironic that James in our story is such a decent guy?  There was some questions regarding Esme and Carlisle and if they will ever marry.  Esme is against marriage and more on that will come into the story in later chapters.  Don’t want to give away the farm, before the crops have time to grow.  We hope that you all continue to love this story, thank for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & (Jess)~

Teaser:
“Are you allowed to move around?”

“Yeah, but I don’t think I can walk,” she says with a groan.

“Here, let me help you. Don’t worry, you don’t have to walk.” I take her hand and I have her sit up with her legs hanging off the bed. She sighs at the different position. I climb on the bed and start to massage her back. She moans and sighs again as I move my hands over her bare back.

“Where did you learn this?” she asks with a moan and wince together.

“Am I hurting you?”

“No, the contractions are getting closer,” she says with ragged breath. “You’re making me feel better.”

“Edward taught me how to do this. Spring training took a toll on him,” I say quietly as I make small circles on her lower back.

“That’s nice,” she says with a groan as she sits up straight. “Get a doctor, I have to push.” I jump off the bed so fast that I feel like I’m running around with my head cut off. Before I can get to the door, the nurse I had been talking with comes in.

“Her contractions are really close,” she says to me as I nod.

“I was just coming to get someone. She says she needs to push,” I say as she nods.

Well we are again so pleased by the turn out and response to this chapter.  Yes Bella will be a tad bitchy in the next chapter, but she has her reasons.  Let’s see how Edward handles it.  A whole lot, like 99.8% of you are begging for more Daddy-Kink, and we want to share that where they role-play, it will not be all daddy-kink... With that said, there will continue to be daddy-kink in the story, and there will be play on the age difference.  There will be time jumps, but they will start to lessen in amounts of time.  There is quite a bit of story yet to go.  We’re loving all the comments about Jasper and the ways you think he should be handled.  I can’t wait to hear all your thoughts after Chapter 20 posts.  LOL... yes I am teasing you over a chapter you don’t get to read for 4 and ½ long weeks.  Don’t be mad, it will be worth the wait.  I promise...  The next chapter is going to be Bella at one of her bitchiest times, and I was sure to give you a little piece of her bitchiness in the teaser... so excited to see next Wednesday’s reviews.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi & Jess~

TEASER:
My first thought is to knock his ass off the couch, but then he will probably follow me around and try to talk to me, and that is really the last thing I want right now. I somehow manage to get off the couch without waking him, and go to start the coffee before heading up the stairs to get ready for the day. By the time I am done in the shower, I hear Char crying and I know that my mom and Jim are up.

Just as I am about to walk out of the bedroom, I see the air horn that I bought sitting on the dresser. I bite my lip and think twice before I pick it up. What can I say... the bitch on my shoulder is rooting me on.  Knowing what’s about to happen makes my day a whole lot better.  I head down the stairs with a little pep in my step, and walk to the couch.  I peek over to make sure he is still sleeping, and when I see that he is, I give the can a little shake and brace myself. I press the button long enough for it to let out a startling honk. I watch with a smug smile on my face as he flips off the couch, hitting his funny bone on the coffee table. Not so funny, is it? We make eye contact for a split second before I turn for the kitchen.

“That was very uncalled for, Isabella,” he says as he storms up the stairs. I high five the little bitch on my shoulder as I throw together some sort of breakfast. Jim walks in a little later with Char as my mother follows them.

“Bella, did you set off a smoke detector?” Jim asks as he makes himself a cup of coffee.

Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit.  Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper.  A few of you think post-partum depression.  There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters.  Things will really roll along here story line wise.  Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon.  I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon.  Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward.  They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well.  The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & Jess~

Teaser:  “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.

“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.

“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”

“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.

“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.

Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues.  My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little.  Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.

Well, I did give warning that things would not be super peachy.  Edward is an asshole, and he is very demanding of Bella’s attentions, yet he seems to forget that she is young and wants to have fun.  Bella does act very immature at times, and her ability to communicate properly sucks.  Edward being a complete dick is not going to change for a few chapters, however he will have great moments along with shitty.  Bella however will start to blossom and show her maturity level rising.  Edward’s emotions were running very high in this chapter and the way that they played emotions off of the other caused them both to act in a way they normally wouldn’t.  Jess feels this chapter is as bad as it gets for them, I think there is one more where Edward makes me want to hate him, however chapter 23 will be in Edward’s POV and that chapter will show everyone where he stands.  There are questions regarding Edward’s age and Bella’s age and the difference in ages.  At the start of the story Edward was 31 and Bella was 14, so there is a 17-year difference between them.   I want to touch on the fact that we have had two people at this point message us saying they are walking away from this story after this chapter—I am personally sorry to hear that mainly because the resolutions planned for them are alone worth sticking around for.  Now we asked what your favorite line was and not everyone participated, but I still will share with you all Jess’s favorite line.  This is from when she was at the club and after meeting Riley and talking to him she thinks to herself ... “He reminds me of Jake, and I’d bet money his girlfriend has a dick, too.”  Oh and speaking of her time at the club, her friend from School Corin, knew Seth before the club, somehow that got over looked by a couple of you.  So no worries Seth nor Riley are bad people, and Corin is cool too.  Thanks for reading and reviewing and if you still have questions hit us up on Facebook or PM.  (Jess) & Kasi~
Chapter 20 TEASER:  I’m sitting here in a sexual innuendo filled daze, but the timer dinging gets my attention.  I pull the pan form the oven, and it smells even better in the kitchen than it did ten minutes ago.  I put the garlic bread in and pull the salad out and toss it.  I place everything on the table and pull the garlic bread out just as Edward comes in the room.

“Damn Baby, that smells better than it did before,” he compliments and I smile.

I watch as Edward gets out a bottle of wine from the chiller cabinet and opens it.  I don’t drink often, but when we have a nice dinner we almost always have a glass or two.  He pours our glasses and carries them to the table.  I get everything in place and light the candles, as he dims the light.

“This is very romantic, Baby,” he says pulling out my chair.

“Thank you, my love,” I say after sipping the wine he gave me.

Dinner is amazing and we eat quietly while exchanging looks that say we have much better things to do than talk.  We clean up together and I smile when I see him cover the apple pie I made and place it in the warming rack on low. 

“I can’t wait any longer, come with me,” he says pulling me by my hand upstairs.  Instead of going to the bedroom, he pulls me into his office.  Walking to the wall safe he punches in the code and opens the door.  My eyes grow wide as he pulls out a rather large light blue velvet box and turns to hand it to me.

“What—what’s this for?” I stammer.

Well hopefully after the next chapter things will be smoother for you all.  Edward is still very much hated by the majority and I don’t know how to alleviate any of that hatred without giving away any of the story.  Things in the story do cycle fast from here and there are only a total of 27 chapters in this story as a whole.  So basically there will be a whole lot of info in the next few chapters.  There will be some time skips because some things we would rather not dwell on and make each person suffer through.  I know that a lot of you are mad, and we hope that we can make things better for you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We do love hearing your thoughts.  Jess & Kasi~

Teaser: 

“I know, I know, Baby,” he says rubbing his hand down the back of my head. “She thinks that you are out to get her in some way. When all the bull happened with Jasper and you and I moved on, she hated it. She wants what we have—with Jasper. When he rejected her, she just went on a downward spiral. Her journal was filled with horrible hateful words. I don’t understand it. I hate that you are the one she is attacking, but I have high hopes that she will get better.”

“I hope she does. I’m just gonna let her be until she comes to me,” I tell him as he nods.

“I agree. I think if we all just give her space, but let her know that we are there for her, she will get better. I don’t think she will ever be a mother to Landon, but I hope one day she can be part of his life. Like I said before, I will always be there for her, but I will do my best not to get fully sucked in and ignore you,” he said with a smile.

“Part of me knew you weren’t ignoring me on purpose. I was just being a brat, I guess. I wanted you and I felt like I was losing you. Everything was all, Alice, Alice, Alice, and I got to the point of—who cares. I know that’s a shitty thing to say, but that was how I felt. I didn’t think about your family history and I felt like she was causing her own problems. I’m sorry for the way I acted,” I say letting out a big breath.

“I’m sorry too. This is the stuff we need to talk out, not fight out,” he says as I giggle. I couldn’t agree more. “So, where do we go from here?”

“Wherever we go, we go together.  Since the topic has already been brought up I want to talk to you about something that has been on my mind.”

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Well it seems that most people have gotten the grasp that we were not going to let them become parents until they were working better together as a couple.  I know that it seems like the story traveled fast, but when we started this we never intended to show everyday life all the time.  The majority of the story was learned through her diary entries.  We really hope that you like the final chapter and the Epi that will follow.  The Epilogue is not yet written, but Jess and I plan to have it hammered out by Wednesday of this week so it should post on time without any issue.  If you get the time please check out the Jess2002 profile and hit up her story Raising Ashlynn it is AMAZING and if you want to read a drabble there are over 200 chapters posted of Diamond Doll's Kitty Cave, by WeeKittyAndTAT.   You could also check out You Own Me by BeeCute82.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing and we will see you on Wednesday with the final chapter before the Epilogue.

Kasi & (Jess~)

Teaser:

"Are you almost ready to leave?"

"Yes, where are we going?"

"To the airport," he answers cheekily.

"And after we get to the airport?"

"We will get on a plane," he says, sticking his tongue out at me.  I lean forward and nip the tip of it.

"Well, I guess I better go change, huh?"

"Yes, I think that would be wise.  Getting through security even for the private plane I've chartered would not be easy in this beautiful dress."

"Private plane?  Where are we going?"

"To another airport," he says with a smirk, and I smack him on the shoulder.

"Go change out of the tuxedo while I get ready."

"Yes, Ma'am. Not even married a whole day and she is already bossing me around."

Even though I see his smile, I give him a bitch brow and am surprised when a camera flashes rather close to us.

"Oh buddy, I can't wait to get this picture printed and blown up.  Now we know who wears the pants. She gave you the look and you immediately tucked tail," shouts Emmett.

"I want a copy of it," I say with a smile as Edward shakes his head.