Reviews by lazydaisy679
Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37302
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: A Beautiful Mess

Wonderful chapter.. Love Charlie!

 

Looking forward to more Bella and Edward :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Whispered Words

I think she has amazing strenght to take all of Edward's bullshit and not kick his ass.  JS!

 

But love the story, the fact he was so worried at the end showed how much he truly loves her.  Wonder if he realised that??

 

Looking forward to more! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

third time

 

Summary: Time is too slow for those who wait, too swift for those who fear, too long for those who grieve, too short for those who rejoice, but for those who love, time is eternity.  ~Henry Van Dyke

 

Thanks to EddieBell69 for the banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6320 Read Count: 778
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2012 Updated: 16 Apr 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2021 Title: Chapter 1: Fourth Time's a Charm

Oh wow... Tears :D

Hear Me by smmiskimen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1926]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.

 

 

Banner by vbfb1

Banner by FallingSnow


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Oh, no I don't think it's odd. The mind is funny. If she has to pull herself out of the car. I don't think it's to werid.  I do haVe a question. How long has she been in a coma?? Living this. I don't think you are going to slow. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Born to parents living a rich and glamorous lifestyle, Bella had never felt as if she belonged in their world where life often felt fake and pretentious. Wanting more out of life and wanting to make a worthwhile difference, Bella assumes a fake identity and heads off to spend her last summer before college doing something real and meaningful. Her journey starts with meeting a handsome stranger, raised to help those in need—and to detest the rich. What happens when he finds out her secret?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 202993 Read Count: 68922
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2012 Updated: 12 Jan 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 20: I'll Stand By You

I am so sorry your life has been so hard lately.  I hope you and your daughter are happier.  I get the whole crazy ex...

 

Now I would like to say a couple fo things. (Venting, NOT FLAMING!! Please don't get mad.)

1. He wants her first time to be special..  Am I crazy, didn't they make love on the island?

2. Bella's  confidence might not have been shaken to the core, if Edward would have just grown up  and not acted like a "I don't know if I can forgive you"BRAT!!  She didn't tell him who her folks were.  It was miner all in all!

3. Her folks are POS's!! ( yep that is pieces of sh*t!)  She will need a lot of support to come to terms with these ash-holes. Her mother is the worst... but her dad is no angel!!

4. IF he hadn't been such a jerk, then maybe his fears of her leaving him wouldn't arise.  Guilt will do that to you everytime Edward.  You have created that little demon!!

5. He talks a good game.  Hope he stands by what he said.  And not get his panties in such a twist anymore.

 

I hope you stay happy, and good luck with everything.  Thank you for letting me vent.  I do love your story!!

Have a wonderful rest of the week.

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Slippery When Wet

Oh, I hope you update fast!! I can not wait to see what happens next!! This is a wonderful story...  So unique and different!! It really great!! 



Author's Response:

Hi, I'm so glad you are enjoying the story so much. The next update will be on this coming Friday. But to get you by until then, there will be a teaser on my blog on Monday. The link to my blog is

http://eternallyaddicted.blogspot.com

 

Thanks for reading,

EA

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Mississippi

Glad to see you updated this.  I was thinking you had forgetten about it!

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Done

She has some balls calling Bella a whore.  Wonder if she has looked in the mirror lately??

Why isn't Bella talking to Charlie.  Has she even had a conversation with him at all? 

 

Looking forward to more!!  SOON PLEASE! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 23: The Cabin

I wonder what Renee and Charlie are saying about the interview with Tyler?  Bet that nasty beóthc has plenty to say.

Loving Edward's granny!!   I hope she and Esme get a change to speak (or slap the shit out of) Renee!

Loved Edward and Bella's lemon :)

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Family and Freedom

Babs is a good woman!  Wonder what the evil trolll... I mean Renee will say to Bab's gift?

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Somewhere I Belong

This was so good.  So what does Charlie really think of everything that has been going on with Bella?  Is Renee giving him the truth or her BS??

 

Loved it and looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue

I loved this!  I really hoping you will to a few future takes!!

 

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412077
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I loved this story!! It was really good. I love that they were able to find each other. And build a relationship on that love!! Its really a great story.

I'm a Doctor by texasbella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

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DRABBLE How does a man cope when his world crumbles around him and he thinks he's lost everything? What lengths will he go to in order to find happiness? Dark, disturbing, not for the feint of heart. NC-17 for MATURE CONTENT.

 

 

 

AWARD

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Horror, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5930 Read Count: 34061
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I am reading and reading, thinking "no, this ani't right. Im thinking wrong..." then it got to the " OH SHIT!".          

It's a great, if not a whole lotta twisted story. A very different Nutsward, i mean Edward.  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! While not a route I want to visit often, it was fun to take a detour down nutty lane...lol.

xoxo

tb

Summary:

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Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730

Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Home

He is home!! So what happened to Faith?? I hope they beat the crazy bit@h down!!  Love the story!!  

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324331
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Our Vindication

Lauren cold cocked Bella with a award??  Damn!!

Looking forward to more.  Was so happy to see the update. :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Our D-Day

Amazing chapter..

 

Glad to see it was drama and Maggie free!!  :)

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ycte

Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

fs

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104499
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26- Making plans

When this is all over.  When you hit complete I am going to go back and re-read.

Because I am as confused as heck!   Maybe its the lenght of time in between chapters (please dont be offended. I am not complaining.  I understand the RL can be a bear!)

But when did they get back together? When did they become a WE???

I hope you answer/reply. 

I am looking forward to more :D



Author's Response:

Hey :)

Not offended at all. I know long waiting between updates can be confusing, but that's better than me just dropping this project. I couldn't, even if I wanted to... it's all in my head and I need to get it out, haha! ;)

As for the becoming a 'WE', they didn't. Not really. It's still not clear, most of the time Bella refer their new relationship with the words 'whatever is going on between us'. But to try to get clearer, at the end of chapter 24 (I promise I'm worthy) when they ~finally~ kiss goodnight, that's where they know they're going to be okay. The next chapter is the morning after, it's Bella POV who still has lots of doubt and don't want to tell the kids. And yet, at the end, she decide to just 'enjoy' being there with Edward, not overthinking everything.

This chapter is actually that same day. So they're still on their little bubble, not yet a official couple, but clearly happy to be together at the moment. Also, Bella realize she can't hide from her daughters who see and understand more than she gave them credit for. So she try to explain it to them (Emma, mostly.)

Hope that helps. :)
Kat

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 May 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Thanks Kat!  It did clear alot of it up.   I think I will go back and re-read it.  I am enjoying it :D

 

Thanks for answering, so many authors don't.

Looking forward to the next chapter!! ♥♥♥♥a86;a86;a86;

Have a great week :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12- Eye-opener

I really like this story. But it makes me sad at the same time.  I am always excited to read the updates.  Looking forward to the next one! ;)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18- A long way to go

This story always makes me wanna cry. This chapter being no different.  I hope update soon. It would be nice to see it in my inbox and wonder if I will shed tears this time?   Update soon please! :-)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22- Terrified

Please don't get mad... but something about this Edward ticks me off and he breaks my heart at the some time.

It seems to me it is all about him.  He and what he wants comes first.  I just get they were young when they got together.. but he is just... grr.. then he breaks up with Tanya an wants Bella  torun right into his arms and his bed.. That is still warm from Tanya??  Yeah, right!! 

 

Anyway glad everything is settled in to your new home.

Congratuations on your daughter!!  To fun!!  :)

Love the story!!  Looking forward ot more.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28- Normalcy

Merry Christmas!!  

 

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29- Going home

Hey Kat! Thank you for the update!! I have been missing this story!

Glad they are working everything out.  He is coming to her and she is getting a promotion to LA!

 

Looking forward to a quick update! ( I hope)

 

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30- Brand new ending

I did love this story!!

Thanks for the update and sharing the story!!

 

Amazed by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 570]
Summary:

amazed

 

They come from two different backgrounds and lifestyles, one simple, one fabulous, yet both know what it means to suffer.

Can they face the future together and learn to let go of their demons?

Can they find what it is to be Amazed?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 122 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29805 Read Count: 206053
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ut oh!! Edward is in TROUBLE.... 

Heroes by naughtydreamz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary: Past Featured Story

heroes

 

A struggling single mom, a fatherless boy with big dreams, and a man on his way to fame and fortune.  All of them could use a hero.....

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23148 Read Count: 37148
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2012 Updated: 26 Jun 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I have to say, I had tears in my eyes after reading CJ reaction to the tickets.  I loved Edwards comment  "I'm getting a stomach ache just thinking about how much food you ate, kid. How are your mom and I going to be able to afford to feed you when you're sixteen if you eat this much at eleven"?

Thats was sweet!! :).   Love this story!


Summary:

 

 

This is a look into the minds of those who have watched Edward slowly remove himself from his own cimmerian view. These are Outtakes based off of His Cimmerian View. Read through chapter 24 of His Cimmerian View before starting this. AH/OOC

Banner made by the wonderful SoapyMayhem for His Cimmerian View, we just added the word Enduring.  Thanks SoapyMayhem you ROCK!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71046 Read Count: 5928
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 Dec 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

Oh, poor Bella!! She had such a horrible life!! To be so abused and mistreated!! That poor girl!!  I am so glad that she found Edward even if he was a total ass at the beginning.   What a love she has for him.   Looking forward to more, of EVERYTHING !!! Everyone's POV!!  Update soon please!!



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Love is Strange by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 301]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Story cover

Bella Swan and Edward Cullen live in the small town of Ligonier in Pennsylvania. They've been best friends since they were six years old, and not much can keep them apart. Bella wants to leave small-town life behind, while Edward is fine with whatever, but that's not the only complication in their relationship. What happens when they fall in love ... with each other?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142307 Read Count: 86912
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jun 2021
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2012 Title: Love is Strange

I really like your story. But you  to use SPACING!! It got good bones. But is harder than hell to read... Please try and space your sentences.  I almost quit reading last chapter!     Hope you continue it.  It is a great story.  

The One by naughtydreamz Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

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Edward meets Bella on the first day of elementary school.  Their story as told by him.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2495 Read Count: 26301
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Jul 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a little ornery ass!  I can just see him and shy little Bella. Update soon! :)

Our Vicious Cycle by teamvamps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

He didn't let up, pounding the door with his fists, screaming. Crawling into the bathtub, I curled in a ball placing my hands over my ears. As I lay in the bathtub, I wondered how we had gotten this messed up.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1289 Read Count: 971
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2012 Updated: 20 Jul 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 04 May 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Our Vicious Cycle

Hey I read this this afternoon and I posted on a Facebook site, called Cheatwards Spot.  come check us out! 

 

Great story.  Would love to have some back story with it!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

bbc

*BANNER BY READERGOOF*

The residents of Bennett Circle are being terrorized, and none of them have been able to catch the culprits.  When they take aim at Edward Masen, he makes it his mission to find them and bring them to justice.  What he finds and who he finds isn’t anything he ever expected.  Oh, and their mother…she’s not anyone he ever expected either.

AU/AH.  OOC.  Canon couples with a few surprises.  NC-17 (as usual).  There’s language and there’s a lot of fun…well, I hope you have fun.

SMeyer owns all Twilight characters.  No copyright infringement intended.  This story and the way in which I’ve fashioned the characters…yeah, that’s all me.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 159192 Read Count: 39312
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2012 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really love this!! It's a great story!!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

From a redneck bar in Georgia to the bright lights of Los Angeles and New York. They were nobodies, but together they became America's Sweethearts. Will fame and temptation destroy them? Or will their love go the distance?    

FS


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15491 Read Count: 15744
[Report This] Published: 05 Aug 2012 Updated: 10 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is starting off pretty sad. I am a HEA girl.  Like the song say "ya gotta hurt sometimes".  Looking forward to the next chapter. Do you know your posting schedule yet?   :).  Love it!



Author's Response:

Hi, thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  I'm probably going to be posting twice a week, on Sundays and Wednesdays.  

Summary:

  

When actor Edward Cullen meets with professional photographer Bella Swan to review his proofs from their recent photo session, he's in for a big surprise...and so is she!    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2806 Read Count: 1998
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2012 Updated: 12 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I would live to photograph Edward!!! (Rob to ;)).   Cute story, with a lot of fun fantasy's!!   I loved it.

Summary:

Of all the coffee houses, in all the cities, in all the world, he walks into mine. That was the only thought that ran through my head when the ex-love of my life walked into my local haunt. Is fate giving us a second chance?

Still

banner by: LunaVengeance

Still

banner by: candykizzes24


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10115 Read Count: 492
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2012 Updated: 13 Aug 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 07 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

I was so damn surprised to see that no one had reviewed your story!! THIS IS GREAT!  I followed form a FB post on Cheatwards Spot, page!

Check it out.  Its great!! :D

Summary:

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Welcome to part 3 of the storm series. Sixteen years after Weather the Storm. Follow the Skip, Bella, and their kids - now older, wiser, and enmeshed in the family business. How will Edward cope with trying to teach Damion and Sonny the ropes, keeping Kylie out of trouble, and Bella happy? Does he still have what it takes to juggle all his duties? Mobward. OOC. AU. Romance/Humor/crime.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, All Time Favorites, Storm Series, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 549405 Read Count: 806270
[Report This] Published: 24 Aug 2012 Updated: 22 May 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Finding Nemp

Maggie is pregnant..  Dame is still so hung up on her it's scary.  Just like Carlisle was on Bella.

Love this story.. so good!!

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Epilogue Two

GREAT, WONDERFUL, AMAZING, EXCITING, DRAMATIC... JUST FUCKING WONDERFUL!!

 

I loved all the storms.  So good. I want to go back and re-read Quiet Storm, which I know you have pulled. To publish.  Good for you!! Great story.

 

Love it and looking forward to more stories from you I hope!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Stay the Same

Dame is still so messed up.  I get he is close to his Sonny, and he is jealous of Sonny and Maggie's relationship.  And everything that goes with it.

Noah and ham, that was too funny.  Poor Sonny!!  LMAO!

Skip getting drowned, to freaking funny!  I lost it.  Poor Sonny!!

Jordan seemed to accept Dame's confessions.

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Nothing

I think Sonny's right about Ameila.  She could cause them a world of hurt.   Edward does need to let Damon face his shit.

Looking forward to more :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella met in High School. After graduation they lost contact and went on with their life. Years later they meet again. Both have a lot of secrets.

They’re both unhappy and when they bump in to each other, they start to realize that there is more than just friendship. A/H OC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75604 Read Count: 30198
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2016
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Support

Mercy, Paul is crazy!!

Phoebe's Wedding by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

A big secret comes to light the night before Phoebe's Wedding that changes everything...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44944 Read Count: 20852
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Sep 2012
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Truth Be Told

I just found this story and havent reveiwed yet, my bad!

 

Anyway how can he be so pissed off at her when he has done worse!  Lots worse than have sex with someone that she cares about and cares about her?

 

Anyhoo, loving this so much!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue: The Little Frog Part 2

That was really a great story.. :D  Loved it :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 May 2018 Title: Chapter 21: What is it with you and me...

I just did a reread.  I really enjoyed this.  Except for the part where I wanted to smack the crap out of Christain and his cheating butt!

But I love the story! Thank you for sharing it :D

Summary:

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“The best love is the kind that awakens the soul and makes us reach for more, that plants a fire in our hearts and brings peace to our minds" - Nicholas Sparks. A reclusive artist and a musician embark on a journey in NYC, but with their own twist. ExB Mature Daddykink.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 162463 Read Count: 135539
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2012 Updated: 15 Jun 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

When I went to read this the first thing I noticed was that there was 20 reviews.  I thought "that must be good".  TWCS stories never get as many reviews as FF.   Then I read it I love it!   It was so good.   I love the way you have painted Edward and Bella.  Her ordering a milkshake.  Loved it. Their banner back and forth.  Just a really story.  Looking forward to the next chapter..    Update soon!   :~)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He is the 'toast of Hollywood' and she is his queen, but their lives are not a fairytale. With children, real life and someone who is trying to break them apart, Edward and Bella will need to fight for their Happily Ever After.  From the red carpet, to the bedroom to the playroom, can their love survive? *HEA* OOC, AH, CANON COUPLES.

*WARNING: THIS STORY IS STRICTLY NC -17* FOR LANGUAGE AND EXPLICIT SCENES - BDSM.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 313471 Read Count: 113782
[Report This] Published: 31 Dec 2012 Updated: 26 Dec 2017
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Thank You for the update.  I was thinking about this chapter at work this week.  LOL.. Great minds I guess :)

 

Loved it and looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think that Edward is getting off to easy.  He all but left Bella to deal with the childern by herself.  He went and played big shot, and didn't give a shit about them.

If he had put forth ANY effort his childern wouldn't be so pissed at him.  Its not just Sam, I think all of their childern are seeing/feeling his neglect.  Not just Bella.  Although he had push her aside for a himself and his wants.  He is feeling bad now, but it's just because he got her picture that he returned.  He thought she was screwing around on him.  Before the picture he was didn't give a flying shit to a degree.

~~"I spoke to Jasper earlier on and he seems to think that Sam is really pissed with me because of the way that I've treated you and I'm beginning to realize just how this rift between us has affected our children."~~  Pretty telling sentence there I think."~~

Looking forward to more!! :)

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am glad that most of the childern understand that Edward was'nt the only one that walked away from the relationship between him and Bella.  But being left at home to see Bella's heartbreak, had to be much harder on them.   

Because in the end. They both hurt the childern.

 

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wonderful chapter Ginger!

 

Looking forward to more:)

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717244
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106

Poor nervous Edward!!  to funny! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

Its all out in the open and I think Edward will be excited about the baby. Once him and Bella talks.

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

CJ is going away.   

 

Edward is in... wonder about Jasper.  

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95

Mercy!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 101: Chapter 101

Wonder why they took Riley out??

I loved Edward threating Jasper if Bella was asleep :D

Too funny.

 

Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104

Woooo here comes the baby!!  :D

Summary:

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He was just doing his sister one last favor by letting one of the girls from her shelter stay with him. He didn't expect her to be so young, he didn't expect her to be so broken, he didn’t expect her to have a link to his past, and he sure as hell didn't expect to fall in love with her. 

Hurt/Comfort/Angst/Romance/Friendship/Drama

 

Banner made by: Astrid 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29165 Read Count: 13525
[Report This] Published: 02 Feb 2013 Updated: 02 Feb 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Why is Esme pushing so hard for Bella to stay at Edwards?

I get that Bella has been through hell and back again.  But what is Esme's deal?

Summary:

 

Dark desires and deep-seated fantasies. Edward watches the one he covets the most…with another man. Anger rages and plans are acted out. Will Bella survive the night he has in store for her? GRAPHIC SCENES DEPICTED

 

mdd 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Horror, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3479 Read Count: 7974
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2013 Updated: 04 Feb 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: My Darkest Desire - Black as Night

He is one f*cked up dude!!

Loved it!!!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by: Deebelle1

Summary: Teen mother Isabella finds herself in a precarious situation. The person, who has given her and her baby a home, has passed away. The landlord wants her out at all costs. Insert DSHS worker Edward Cullen. What happens when he steps over the line of his job? What happens when Isabella is more to him than he expected? A/H, M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42147 Read Count: 22695
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2013 Updated: 20 Jul 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I need a favorite.... PLEASE WRITE FAST!! I need more of Edward,Bella,River and Charlie!

I hope that Tanya gets rabies from her rat dog!

It is such a wonderful story.  My favorite of the TOTF series.

So good. 

Please update soon!! :)

 



Author's Response:

Wow to say that we are blown away by the response to this is a complete understatement of what we actually do feel—shock, awe, happiness, thrill ... just to name a few of our feelings. The fact that this one-shot only garnered an honorable mention in the contest does not go anywhere near the exhilaration we both feel over the heartfelt reviews and PM's we've received telling us how much you've loved this and how you voted for it. We have tossed a few ideas back and forth and have some of the story out-lined. Trust in us to finish this, but it will most likely be at least a couple of weeks before the next chapter posts, but it will be a substantial chapter and well worth the wait. A lot of you want Tanya, Renee, Phil, and James to get their just dues. Trust in us, we are usually great at doling out punishments. When all is done and said there should be no rock left unturned in the story. We're not sure how many chapters we will add, but you will get complete resolution by the end. Thanks again for taking the time to read, review and to those of you who voted for us, thanks for that too. Nikky & Kasi~

Summary:

Banner by Deebelle1


Summary: Professional race car driver Edward “Masen” Cullen finds something he never wanted—one day at the racetrack. Can this jaded speed demon, change the life of a girl he shouldn’t even associate with? What happens when Edward finds himself falling for a girl transitioning out of foster care and group home life? AH, rated M.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15558 Read Count: 3412
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2013 Updated: 24 Mar 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this!! It was a cute story and Emmett was a total asshat!

I am looking forward to more of your stories.  Would love for this one to be extended.

 

I did notice however that after your "r"s there is the number thirteen (13). It is weird to read. Here is a example

"Bella, I know that you don't want to spend Christmas with mer13;" I start.

 

 

 

Summary:

 

What if not all vampires were supernaturally perfect?  If a human is supposed to bring many of their human traits into their vampire existences, then could the magic that creates a vampire cause that vampire to stay true to themselves. This is the story of Bella Swan Cullen - a newborn vampire that is imperfectly perfect. 

AU; canon characters. Edward and Bella. Rated T.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10692 Read Count: 487
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2013 Updated: 05 Aug 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 30 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Awakening

Looking forward to more of this!!

 

I hope you have fun in the USA.  NYC and LA, wonderful cities.  Lots to see and do.

 

Looking forward to more Wreaked too!  :)

 

Hope you are feeling better soon!!:D



Author's Response:

Hi lazydaisy679

Thanks for your review to Imperfect Perfection - glad you enjoyed it.

I'm leaving for the USA in a few hours, so looking forward to exploring NYC and LA - its been 25 years and 15 years respectively since I last visited. Can't wait to visit Disneyland again and be a kid for a few days.

Regards, Jkazzie

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Blood, venom and water

Wow..

What is your posting scheldule going to be?

Right There by Chloe Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

*Sequel to Come Closer* Accepting your place in life–and letting go of all that kept you in the wrong–is a powerful thing. Edward Masen knows this. Knows it with his heart, his soul, his being. Forbidden doesn't exist anymore. 'Can't have' are no longer words in his mind's vocabulary. And were never in his claim's. Isabella is getting everything she's ever wanted. To be his.

 

Right There banner by Frozen Soldier


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45749 Read Count: 5376
[Report This] Published: 19 May 2013 Updated: 08 Jan 2014
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Show and Tell

So.... I have a few dozen questions.  This is not a flame, just freaking confused.

What is Jasper's deal with Bella??   She is engaged to a ex-manwhore. Does he think she is going to be a 107 year old virgin???  He is making out with Alice, and  doesn't think Bella will be doing that with Edward?   Come on...that is a whole lot of far fetched.

Why do ALL of them beat around and around and around and around and around the bush.  JUST SAY WHAT YOU MEAN! Its time to kill the ducking bush!! 

Bella wanted her first time to be in there new home.  WAS it that hard to say??  IF she can not say it, she should not be doing it! 

Edward want to have sex, but not??  

 

I love this story, but damn!!  I wish they would just say what they are going to say!   

 

Sorry, dont mean to be mean or to flame.  Not intended that way.

 

Looking forward to more.

If you could answer my questions that would be great!  :)

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

tsmm

Banner by DeeBell1

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30188 Read Count: 106938
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2013 Updated: 12 Jun 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL.. I think this is going to be cute!

 

Looking forward to more :)

Back to Us by wordrunner Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary:

"And even though I know somewhere in his twisted heart he loved me as much as I still love him—maybe more, in some ways—I know I couldn't stand to live with him anymore. He was killing me, slowly and painfully, and I had to go."


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 205120 Read Count: 65049
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2013 Updated: 25 Feb 2016
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Such a wonderful story!!

 

I really wanted to rip Christian dick off and beat him over the head with it!! LOL

Lucy and Elana!  What a pair!

 

I dont know if I could have taken him back the way Ana did.  But it worked out!

 

Love it!  Will there be a epi?

 

Hope to hear from you :)

 

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87100
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved the chapter and the update!! :D  Thank You!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Holy Crap on a cracker!!!!   WooHoo!!  Never saw that coming. He gave her the resturant.??!!!

 

Loving it!

La Cantante by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 625]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a freshman in college studying to be a music teacher. Edward is a pre-med student at the same school but secretly wants to be a musician. They both meet and sparks fly. However, Bella's past may make it difficult. ExB, AH EDITED and REPOSTED!

La Cantante

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 100 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 594750 Read Count: 327761
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Apr 2015
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67

Ut oh!!! What did he find?

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334473
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter: One

Renee and Charlie are worthless parents.  They have pushed this poor child aside her whole life.

I am glad that Edward found her.

 

Looking forward to more  :)



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone seems to be loving the story and we are so happy about that.  Not a lot of questions asked this go around, but there will probably be some more by the next chapter.  This story will be somewhere between twenty and thirty chapters when complete.  We mentioned this will post once a week on Mondays.  If for some reason Kasi can’t post Monday morning, it may post late Sunday night.  The Cullen’s are very accepting of Edward’s choices in life and his lifestyle, therefore yes the Cullen’s would be good to Bella if she were to be around them.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, we look forward to hearing more of your thoughts as the story goes.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Her folks are horrible.  I hope bad,bad things happen to them. 

How much more BS are you going to pile on Bella before enough is enough??

 

 



Author's Response:

Well that is pretty much verbatim the reaction we were expecting.  We did have a reviewer or two who feels that Bella has been abused to limits of overkill and that Edward shouldn’t want to be with a kid.  I want to address this a little before things get blown out of proportion on this train of thought.  Showing the things Bella lives with and has lived with, is how we are showing her ways of adapting.  Bella has been severely neglected all her life.  She knows no other way.  Speaking from some experience on the matter, when you grow up in a household without both parents and you pretty much raise yourself, and get pushed aside for your parents needs can either make you or break you.  When you solely depend on yourself, you tend to learn to not react the way people normally would.  Bella’s childhood in this story is a lot like mine, in the place where I had no contact with my father at all from age of 6 to 16, who I then saw twice at age 16 and never again until I was 21.  My mom started dating when I was young, but when I was 9 she met a man who she chose to place before me.  By the time I was 12 I lived alone, she gave me the money to pay the bills.  So yes this stuff does happen.  I am by far not a perfect parent myself and I may be a single parent, but I am always here for my children.  I turned out okay, and with the exception of not being able to be in a healthy relationship I am not screwed up.  Edward in this story sees the good in Bella, and sees that she is more than she’s been made to believe she is.  Bella was made to grow up fast as a child.  She parented her mother for years.  She pushed away by the same mother she raised to go live with a father who resents her for choosing her mother over him.  Now we had some questions about waiting until Thanksgiving, and it will be Thanksgiving soon in the story.  Just a few more things have to happen first.  Be patient, everything in this story will happen for a reason.  We have had a great number of followers and reviewers for this story, so we do write one major reply and send to all, but we do try to answer all questions asked ... of course we don’t want to give away too much.  I do hope that this helped you understand a bit more about how and why Bella just lets things roll and adapts to what goes on.  You can always join us on Facebook at the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  On behalf of Nikky and I, thank you for reading and reviewing.  It means a lot to us.  Kasi (&Nikky)

 

TEASER: I quickly snap a picture, before speaking to her.  “No, just a normal picture, but you can pose for me anytime you’d like.” I wiggle my eyebrows at her as I snap another picture of her.

I keep snapping pictures as we talk in my office.  I know I have a few that I can use, but I can’t seem to stop taking her picture.  

“I think that’s enough pictures of just me.  Come on, Edward. Why don’t you take one with the both of us?”

I take the camera away from my face, before grinning at her.  I walk over to the oversized comfy chair then sit.  Off to my left is the large stone fireplace, and the flames are casting their warmth on my feet.  Once I’m sitting, I pat my leg in motion for her to join me.  “Come on, Beautiful.”

Bella looks at me, then to my leg as she slowly stands and makes her way to me.  She glances at the arm of the chair and I shake my head at her.

“Please, Beautiful, just to take your picture. I swear I don’t bite.”

“Liar,” Bella chuckles, looking at me. 

I look at her and frown.

“Don’t give me that look Edward, I’ve seen your club and read the first two books you loaned me.  Plus, you look like the type of guy that likes to bite, at least a little.”

I chuckle nodding, because she’s right, I am a biter. “You’ve got me, dead to rights on that one, but I swear I won’t bite you ... today.”

Bella sits on my knee and I pull her back so she is flush with my front.  I raise my hand with the camera in front of us and snap away.  Slowly, I feel Bella relax in my arm and she drops her head to the side of my neck.  I take a few more, before kissing the side of her head.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

So, Jacob is the other shoe.. He is a scary.  Why doesnt Edward get Bella a tazer.  It might make them both feel better.  You know they could do the setting as "FRY HIS ASS!!"  or maybe.... "ROAST HIS NUTS", or  "DOES ANYONE ELSE SMELL PUBIC HAIR BURNING???"
Ok, I'll stop, but he deserves it.
 I bet Renee runs to Charlie, and why didn't Phil stand up to Renee? Destroyed $7000 worth of stuff??  He could not have stopped her?? HE PLAYS BASEBALL!  Surely he could stop her!
Ok, looking forward to the next tease!

Author's Response:

Well a lot of you still want Renee to die a slow and painful death, but many of you are just glad she is gone.  Renee will be heard from again in future chapters, however we don’t want to give away too much by telling you how, when or why.  We think the next chapter will be the second most popular chapter to date when it posts.  Christmas and preparations for it, is a very fun time for Edward and Bella and will hopefully be well received by our readers. 
On a side note, please check out the wonderful little story that Nikky, Jess2002 and I are writing for Savannavansmutsmut.  It is called If I Die Young and it is posting under the author name: WeeJessAndTAT. 
Nikky and I would love to thank whoever the people were that nominated us in so many catagories for the Twi-Fic Awards.  We are nominated on four different stories: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and Crabs And Cream.  We were also nominated in the veteran author section.  The link to vote can be found on our profile, and if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone.  There are some AMAZING writers, stories, banner makers and readers all nominated for awards. 
Be sure to check out our spook-tackular — Halloween 2013 One-Shot (This is our 3rd year in a row doing a one-shot for Halloween,) it is called: Crushes, Canines & Clowns. 
Can’t wait to see what you all think of the two stories listed above, and please go vote.   
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser: 

I lead her back to my car and we drive to another place where I can pick up the things that I need. I watch as Bella blushes and chuckles at the joke gifts the store has. I frown when I see that she has a bag, having bought something without showing me.

“What’s in the bag, Little Girl?” I ask trying to get the bag from her. But she’s quicker and hides it behind her back.

“It’s one of your Christmas gifts, Sir, and you can’t see it until Christmas morning.”

I chuckle shaking my head at her, knowing this will be fun for both of us in the long run.  “Oh, is that a fact, Little Girl? I could order you to show me, you know?”

Bella shakes her head at me. “Then your girl will tell tales to her Sir’s mom.”

My mouth drops open and I look at her, smiling internally, because she is willing to stroke the lion and play. “Is that so, Little Girl?”

Bella nods at me, but bites her lip.

“Well then, Little Girl, I may need to give you a spanking,” I say playfully to her.

“Your girl will take the spanking, Sir. Your girl really wants this present to be a surprise for her Sir.”

“Fair enough, let’s finish shopping.” I shake my head, watching her walk away from me. She looks over her shoulder and flicks her skirt a little showing her ass.  “Spanking it is then,” I say to myself before walking after her.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter: Two

So, please tell me Rose is going to kick Jessica's ass!  Tanya, wow.. no is no right? Once again Charlie and Renee are low life parents.  Nice!

 

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Well it seems like more and more of you are hating Bella’s parents.  That is quite understandable, but you haven’t even met them yet.  Yeah you get to meet them.  Form your opinions after you do.  The back story of what happened at Harvard will come out, soon.  You will also get to see more of the sweet side of our DomWard in upcoming chapters.

We had people worrying about throwing Bella right into scenes and such, we want to assure you that there is no way we could write that, because there is no way she could do that.  This story starts in September, and they will be friends first.  Edward has feelings for her, but he knows she is quite broken.  Have some trust in us, we are not perfect but we do try to provide a decent story worth reading.

We’ve had a lot of people asking about chapter count, and posting time frames.  At this point we are saying around 25 chapters.  There are 14 written and once we have it fully written we will post much more often.  We could easily post up to chapter 12 right now, but then you would be stuck waiting for 13 and on up.  We would rather put you on a week wait now, than have to say, sorry we got writers block no chapter this week.  We purposely started posting after we had 10 chapters written for a reason. 

We’re going to start giving teasers like we did for His Cimmerian View, and this is the first teaser and it is unannounced, so enjoy.

Nikky and Kasi~

 

I chuckle, before leaning in to whisper to her.  “These are exhibitionist submissive and Dominants that are in these. There are many showing different scenes—new things—teaching methods.  Some have sex in them, but unlike porn these, or most of them I should say, are collared pairings, who have been together for a long time and both agreed to do this.  There are some that are of a submissive that is into humiliation.  They’d meet with the Dom several times and build a trust between them, before these filmed scenes take place.  There’s always a contract between both parties, and both are screened for STDs beforehand.”

Bella looks at the DVDs and then back at me.  “Are you in any of them?” she asks, her voice is soft and low.

I look at her shaking my head.  “No, I’ve never done that.  Well, I never had someone taking pictures or a video of it anyway.  I have done a few scenes with my sub at the time.  When I’m not with a collared sub, like my current situation, I’ve done scenes with submissives’ whom I have a good relationship with from my club.  I’m due to do a teaching scene about rope bondage and spanking at the club three weeks from now.  No matter how many scenes I participate in, the one thing I don’t do is have sex during a public scene.”

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Mercy!!  Jessica is a real bitch!! Jacob is back to finish the job.   I hope that Edward can help Bella before something else happens.

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Many of you are questioning how Jessica knows so much about Bella.  Bella and Jessica are both from Forks.  Jessica is jealous of Bella, because Bella beat her out for valedictorian.  Jessica was always the smartest of her class, until Bella came along.  Several years younger and doesn’t even have to try in order to surpass her academically.  Bella got all the best scholarships and awards, all things Jessica wanted.  When the stuff happened at Harvard, of course Jessica heard about it, and being from Forks she certainly knows Jacob.  A lot of you want retribution in blood or however it can be gotten.  Rest assured that what comes around goes around, but as long as Bella is close enough for them to hurt, Edward will keep his cards close to his chest. 

Things are progressing well, and where this is a slow burn thing will heat quicker now that she lives there.  It’s still a slow burn, but no longer dragging feet pace.  For the record, Edward does want her to go to supper and meet his family, but he is tense about it because his family is very in your face caring and loving and Bella is not used to that type of family interaction.  Edward doesn’t know it yet, but he loves her.  Be patient and you will see this, I assure you.  Next chapter will post on Sunday, see you then. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  “Yes, my girl performed a special dance for me earlier. She said she would, with our approval, teach something similar to Sulpicia.” Aro gets a dreamy look on his face and grins even wider at me.

“Yes, there have been talks about that dance your girl performed since I arrived earlier. If you are in agreement with your girl doing this, then so am—” Aro gets cut off with the ringing of his cell phone. “Speaking of my pet,” Aro says before he answers, “Sulpicia,” he says answering the call. 

Before he says another word he looks to me as if he is concerned. “Yes, I’m with him right now,” he stops talking and has a look of anger coming across his face. “Keep her as calm as you can. Edward and I will be with you both soon.” I look to him as he talks and close his cell.

“Sulpicia is at Bella’s work. From what I can gather, there is some money and belongings that have gone missing.  Her boss checked out the staff lockers and found a laptop that another staff member claims was hers in Bella's locker.”

I nod at him, but I know my girl and she is no thief. It only takes us a short time to reach Bella’s work.  As I walk in my eyes fall on Lauren and Jessica, standing together.  As I look at Lauren, I see she has the laptop I bought Bella.

I smirk and move over to them. “That's my laptop and I don’t believe I gave you permission to touch it.” Both girls look my way and Lauren glares at me.

“No, this is mine. Look, it has my name on it.” I raise my eyebrow at her as she turns it and shows me the stupid sticker displaying her name.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Mercy... Bella did well with the whole Q/A part.

Wondering what is up with Tanya, and when Edward and Carlisle willl but a hit out on Paul and his NASTY little crew.

 

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  We were very glad to see that the major majority of you are no longer questioning Edward’s abilities to do the right thing.  The next chapter is the chapter that will really set things into motion.

 We have had some concerns brought to our attention regarding the fact that Bella talks to Edward about herself in third person.  We are not saying that EVERY submissive talks to their Dominant in third person, but the research we’ve done, more often than not it is the way it is.  Keep in mind that we’ve spoken to Dominants and submissives alike during our research.  In this story Bella has a photographic memory, she could have read any number of books which reference the usage of third party speaking as a natural way to show submission.  Neither of us is saying anyone else should do this, but in this story Bella is quite the natural at speaking as a submissive. 

Some have suggested that Edward try to just be a boyfriend and not a Dom to Bella.  Edward will discuss all of this with her soon, we assure you that no stones will be left unturned.  Chapter eight you will get to meet Charlie, but first we will have a turning point in seven that many of you have been asking for and suggesting since chapter two. 

There have been a lot of comments and references about the neglect Bella has withstood from her ‘family’.  When Nikky and I first talked about this story I wanted us to play up the neglect, because it is a huge amount of the way many children live.  I have shared with everyone, in the author’s notes and review replies, that I was a victim of neglect.  When I talked about my own experiences it was not for your sympathy it was to say that I know it happens.  I want to say thank you to all of you who have made mention of my past abuse, and send hugs to those who have shared some of their own stories with us.  Not everything Nikky and I write about Bella happened to me, and as an adult I had a moderately decent relationship with my parents.  I cannot say that Bella will, or that this story will end with her having contact with her biological parents. 

We hope this addresses the majority of your concerns and or questions.  We will see you next week with a pivotal chapter in the story! 

Much love, Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:
“Please, excuse me, I need to take this,” I inform Aro and move away while answering my cell. “Beautiful, how are you this evening?”

I don’t hear a reply, but I can hear music in the background.

“Ah, shit! That hurt,” Bella’s voice comes across the line, but it sounds off and slurred.

“Bella, are you okay?” I ask alarmingly, already moving toward the exit.

“Oh, this ... weird ... I was going to call you.  I feel ... real funny ... strange.  My head ... hurt and ... I feel ... um ... so dizzy ...”

I see Felix standing guard close to the door and I head to him. “Bella, I’m on my way.  Stay on your cell.”

I pull my cell away from my mouth before speaking to Felix. “I need to go. Find Aro tell him I had to leave, he will assist you in any details you need.  Let him know he is in charge.”

He gives me a nod, and I exit the door and run to my car.

“Okay, Beautiful, stay right where you are and stay on the phone with me. I’m on my way to you.” I try to take some deep breaths to calm myself. “Where are you, Beautiful?” I start my car as I switch my cell to hands-free.

“I ... hum, bathroom ... I think. Fuck ... it’s warm in here.”

I know right now it is best to keep her talking. “Have you been drinking?” I ask frowning, because I know even when I’m out with her, Bella does not drink much.

“Nope ... I am ... a goo ... girl ... I swear ... Sir, no ... drink-ies ... for me.”

“There you are! I was wondering where you got off to. Who are you talking to?” I hear a male’s voice ask, and I move my car a little faster.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I feel so bad for Bella to cast aside by her father.

Lauren and Jessica willl just come on stronger now they have seen who Bella was with.

 

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

Hey everyone thanks for reading and reviewing.  There have been several questions and some we can’t fully answer to not give away too much about the story and where we’re taking it.  But let’s start off with the easy stuff.  This will be about 25 chapters in total, give or take a few and we update every Monday or very late Sunday night.  There are many questions regarding the scene that Edward will be participating in.  It is a scheduled demo, teaching session.  We don’t want to give away any info on the scene as of yet, but trust us that there will be nothing remotely sexual about it for Edward at all.  The submissive which will be a part of the exhibition will not in any way shape or form, want or try to keep Edward as their own.  As for more info on Bella’s parents and why they are the way they are, you all really have to be a little patient, you haven’t even met them yet.  There are a LOT of seriously wicked guesses as to what is going on and why things are the way they are, but so far nothing is dead on correct.  You can join us on Facebook, search for the group called: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and you will find us.  Hope you enjoy the teaser... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  The rest of the night goes slowly and my mind often deviates back to Bella.  I end up texting her just to have some communication with her.

Beautiful. How was work tonight?  Did you get much work done for college?  I just finished eating some of the lovely apple pie that you made me. It was truly one of the best I’ve ever tasted. Thank you.  ~Edward

I try to focus on my work, but find myself unable to stop looking at my cell. I close the club and head home.  I’m sad and upset that she didn’t respond to my text. By the time I get home, I feel even more upset and even angry.  I wonder why she wouldn’t text me back.  Thinking over reasons, I make a mental list. 

Have I scared her off? No, I don’t think that’s it.  She wouldn’t have agreed to meet up with me if I had scared her.  From what I see and know of her, she doesn’t ignore people, so that can't be it. 

Maybe her phone is out of minutes.  Now this is more possible, because her cell is one of those cheap pay-as-you-go ones and she has little money.  If that’s the reason, then there is no way for her to call or text me back.  Do dorm rooms come with a phone in them? Not really sure about that, I’ll have to check.  I know she is the type of person that would try to keep money on her cell and would say if she was low.  She has often said she needed to switch her phone off because she was low on minutes. 

Maybe she fell asleep and is a deep sleeper.  It has been after midnight when I texted her.  She did say she was normally home before eight and in bed by ten most nights.  Yep, that must be it.  She’ll most likely text me once she’s awake.  I’m sure she’ll feel bad that she missed my text.  One thing is for sure, she doesn’t need me being on her ass like white on rice.

I feel myself calming down after thinking over the theories, and I decide to head to bed.  I wake up and look at my phone seeing it's a little after seven in the morning, but I still don’t have a text from Bella.  I frown and let out a sigh as I rub my face, knowing that I need to get moving.  I’m supposed to be meeting my dad at nine for breakfast, because he won’t be able to attend dinner tonight.

I get showered and dressed all while glaring at my cell.  I see that there is still no incoming text. I text my father to say that I’m on way, and ask if he could text me back to be sure he got my message.  I frown even more when he's answering my text minutes later.  Well, that takes away the newest theory that my cell is not receiving incoming text messages.

I arrive at the hospital and see dad is waiting for me.

“What was the texting all about?”

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I am so so sorry you had such a childhood as you have described. I can honestly say I can not imagine.

Looking forward to next Sunday and the new update.

 

Loving this so much!!!  :)



Author's Response:

Hello everyone!  Thanks for all your kind words.  We want to start off by addressing some of the frequent questions.  This quote (“I know they love me, really ... I know but, it’s strange, maybe it’s just me. You know that I see and hear things differently from the rest of the world, but thank you for doing this and answering my questions.”) from chapter five had someone ask, what Bella meant.   Bella is referring to how she perceives her family versus the way others do.  Jacob is not a card we are showing yet, you’ll have to be patient to see what he has up his sleeve.  Did Bella hear him in the shower?  We have yet to hear that answer from Bella ourselves, but in my thoughts she surely did.  Will there be any chapters in Bella’s POV?  She is talking a little here and there, but nothing’s set in stone as of yet.  Shouldn’t Edward as a good Dom cancel the scene?  The scene is not canceled, but it has been modified from the original way it was written.  This was for several reasons.  We have sixteen chapters written, yet we still continue to makes tweaks and changes here and there before posting.  When we started making him have hard feelings about the upcoming scene, or feel nervous about it, we started discussing it more.  We found a way to appease us, our readers and yet still show what we wanted to show.  So trust us—please.  I’m glad we haven’t fallen into the pleads for more chapters to post faster, because in the last week we haven’t gotten another one done.  Of course WeeKittyAndTAT, JessAndTAT and TeamAllTwilight all submitted pieces of work into the Fandom Fights LLS.  WeeKittyAndTAT did an Epilogue of sorts for Ropin’ A Sitter.  JessAndTAT did a future take on Bases Loaded.  I wrote a new fan fiction novella, it’s called, The Things That Make You Click.  All of these will post to our FFN and TWCS accounts, but not until after December first.  Watch for two one-shots to post soon to our account, the winners will be announced tomorrow in the More is MORE contest.  Think that brings you all up to speed.  Feel free to PM us and ask questions if you have them.  Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER:  “Felix, my father is coming in tonight. Please have him come straight to my office.  Keep everyone else out until I’m done. If there are any problems, I trust you to deal with them accordingly.”

Felix nods at me, but doesn’t say anything. I carry on, walking toward Jenks, when I’m stopped by Tanya.

“Sir, I have some news that I would like to share with you.”

I turn and face Tanya who looks like the cat who got the cream. “Tanya, I’m very busy, it’ll have to wait until tomorrow.” 

I move away from her, but she grabs my wrist pulling me back. “It’s very important, Sir.”

I yank my arm away from her, turning to face her once more. “Tanya, don’t you tell me when I will speak with you. I’m busy, so unless you’re going to die in the next five minutes and need me to call an EMT for you, I don’t want to know. And never touch me again without my consent!”

I walk away without waiting for her response. As I approach Jenks, he shakes his head, looking behind me at Tanya.

“Ah, still trying to get your attention then?”

I nod at him, opening up my office.

“I’d stay away from that one; she’s clearly after money, fame and quite frankly, has ‘whore’ written all over her.”

I chuckle a little at his quite accurate synopsis of Tanya. “Yes, I know. Those are the main reasons I have always refused her, that, and she makes me lose brain cells every time she opens her mouth. But enough about her, what did you find out.”

Jenks looks at me sadly and I can clearly see the worry on his face. “This is not going to be easy to read. Even harder for you I’d say, because you’ve become somewhat involved with the girl.”

I nod at him in understanding. “Just show me.”

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OH MY GOD!!!  I knew, I knew Charlie was a monster from everything you had led up to.  But Sweet Jesus almighty!  I never expected this.  

 

Since your A/N basically told us to chill the fu*k out.  I wont say anymore.

 

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

We knew the reactions to chapter eight would be intense and strong.  We were shocked that some of you actually attacked Bella for being weak, but at the same time it’s not surprising.  Sometimes people who are mentally abused and neglected for years strive only for some sort of love.  I can’t imagine any child not wanting their parent to love them.  We all see love in differing ways, and when you’re raised not feeling that unconditional parental love, it makes you strive to have it—at least it did for me.  Bella will come into her own strength soon, and with the help of Edward and his family she will get better.  We are stoked for you to see the interaction with Bella viewing Esme and the way that Esme treats her children, so a portion of that is your teaser.
Many of you asked why Edward did not just beat Charlie down, or how he could have not stopped the situation, or known Jake was in the kitchen.  Edward is one person, and he was trying to watch out for Leah, Jake, Charlie, Brady and didn’t know if he could trust any of the other five people there as well.  As for when Charlie smacked Bella, he had his attention focused on Leah and Jacob.  As for why he did not punch or beat down anyone, imagine this:  Edward defends Bella by striking someone or several someone’s.  He gets arrested his word against several, one of whom is the police chief.  Meanwhile Bella is unprotected and left with the wolves.  It was best for him to do as he did get her out and safe.  And trust that he will be dealing with this.  The ball has already been rolling on a few things, but this just upped the ante.
I’m sad to say that we have lost some readers, but again we cannot and will not apologize or rose color a story about an abused girl, when a good lot of the abuse she withstands is things that are personal to one of the writers and or other people the writers know.  Abuse happens and the largest form of abuse out there is mental abuse and neglect.  Awareness is a key to making things better.  Bullying is a problem, and awareness is a key.  We are however thankful that we have readers who trust in us to bring things full circle.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

 

Teaser:  “This is very nice, Esme,” Bella says after taking a bite.

Esme smiles broadly at Bella.  “Thank you, dear.  Edward tells me you're quite a wonderful cook yourself.”

Bella’s blush appears on her face.  “I’m nowhere near as good of a cook as this.”

I shake my head at her.  “Trust me, Bella’s cooking is to die for,” I say as Emmett passes me the wine. I pour some for Esme, Bella, and then lastly for myself.

“What are you going to college for?” Rose asks as she looks at Bella.

“I’m getting a law degree,” Bella answers, but I know the whole table can hear the sadness in her voice.

“And Edward tells us that you’re a dancer, a quite wonderful one at that.”  I look to Alice, smiling that she brought up something that makes my girl happy.

Bella nods at Alice.  “Yes, I love dancing, but I only do it for fun.”

“You’re in the Christmas dance program for the college though, right?” Esme asks as she looks at Bella.

“Yes,” she replies with another blush.

“Carlisle and I have tickets for three of the performances. I’m so looking forward to the show, and seeing you dance, of course.  The dance department director has been bragging to the board of directors about the dances that you have choreographed.” Again Bella blushes more at hearing about the commendations she’s being given.

“That’s got to be the cutest blush ever,” Emmett says in a childish voice, which is followed by a slap from Rose. 

“I love dancing, and the people I’ve been dancing with are all great.  I just hope that no one’s disappointed at the end of the night.”

Esme frowns a little. “I’m sure no one will be disappointed, dear.” My mom smiles at Bella in a way that I can see the mother in her trying to break out and pull Bella in.

The rest of the dinner seems to fly by with everyone talking about what’s been happening.  The more the night goes on, the more Esme became motherly to Bella, but I’ve also noticed Bella becoming uncomfortable with it.  At so many times, she’s looked like she isn’t sure how to react at something Esme has said or done.  She’s remained respectful, but I’ve seen her slowly distancing herself from Esme.

I walk Bella to the car and open the door for her. “I’ll just be a few seconds.” I give her a wink and walk back to house.

As soon as I do, I can hear Esme’s upset voice.  “We really need to do something.  I won’t accept that nothing can be done.”

I hear my father sigh.  “It takes time, dear.”

“No, first those little punks ... I’ll let you and Edward deal with them, but Charlie is mine!”

I chuckle, but feel a little nervous, because I can hear the anger in my mom’s voice. 

 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella had quite the week or so.  She father showed his true colors.  She met the parents, when shopping with Rose and Alice and ends up in the playroom.  Busy girl!!



Author's Response:

Well it seems the majority of you really liked this chapter.  There was some confusion regarding Edward’s family, they all really love Bella, but have been warned to not be too handsy or huggy with her, because it is nothing she is used too.  Please don’t fret, Edward’s family is there and will be there to support Bella.  Lots of you still want instant retribution for Bella against everyone who has hurt her, but please be patient Rome wasn’t built in a day.  As always our update schedule is every Sunday night/Monday morning, so far I have been able to post every Sunday.  There is a lot of stuff going on and things will be interesting here very soon.  A lot of people were surprised by Bella’s actions of kneeling naked in his playroom, but only Bella knows what she wants.  Edward wants her there is no doubt about that, but he wants her to want him for herself—not just because she thinks this is what he wants.  Edward has a fine line to walk, but he is not stupid and will handle this situation accordingly.  Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.  Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:
I glance down at my cell, when it rings seeing that it says Beauty.  I frown, because I know that she should be about to start her last class.

“Beautiful, is everything alright?” I ask worryingly.

“Renee called, I didn’t pick up.  I was unsure if you wanted me to call you first or if it was just Charlie. I’m sorry, I just thought ...”

I smile and sit back down.  “No, Renee wasn’t on the list, but I’m glad that you called.  Please wait until I’m with you before calling her back.  I will make a list of people of who you are not to answer to, it’ll make it easier for you—us.” I hear Bella clear her throat a few times. “Is there anything else, Beautiful?”

I hear a light chuckle. “You know me so well.  Two things, one I want to know what would happen if I skipped my next class, and second, they want me to see Mr. Whitlock, Jasper, sometime today.”  I can hear in her voice there’s something more and I know this may need a face to face talk. “I am on my way to make an appointment with Jasper right now.”

I smile a little and grab my car keys.  “I coming and getting you from Jasper’s office, stay there until I arrive.”

“I will, Sir ... it’s, oh, Jacob,” Bella says.

“Well, hello there, Isabella.”

I move faster towards my car.  “Don’t speak to him.  Go into Jasper’s office and hand Jasper your cell,” I say to her, while Jacob was talking.

“I’m sorry, but he’s blocking my path.”

I let out a sigh, and start my car. 

“Who are you talking to?  Not that old guy?  Is he still fucking you?  I’m surprised he’s been able to keep himself hard around your whore ass.”

I grit my teeth together. “Shout Jasper’s name now,” I say as Jacob rattles on.  When I hear nothing coming from Bella, I put on a firm voice.  “Now, Little Girl, scream for him and hand him your cell.”

“Jasper!” I hear Bella yell.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chapter



Author's Response:

Many of you have already figured out that Renee is not quite motherly material. We were laughing and shocked by some of the stuff said about Renee’s pink hair.  Gotta love it.  We think you’ll like the next chapter, we get to see Renee and how she treats Bella, but we will also see how Edward gives Bella the ability to stop letting Renee walk all over her.  We think you will love it, we know we did.  A lot of you are worried about Jake and Charlie as well as Tanya ... with that being said we don’t want to give away anything much, but trust by the end of the story all things will be resolved.  I think you all will enjoy Edward’s protective ways of Bella, now that he knows she is his both casually and contractually.  We hope that you love the teaser, we had to share something juicy with you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:

“I couldn’t tell you for how many years we’ve been married. I know it’s been a few, but it still feels like yesterday.”

I roll my eyes at Renee’s performance, because that’s what she’s doing—performing for them.

“Mr. Cullen, when were you going to tell the world about your marriage to this woman?” one of the paparazzi yells out.

I shake my head at them. “Mrs. Dwyer is not my wife; she’s the mother of my girlfriend. Mrs. Dwyer was talking about her husband, Phil Dwyer, he plays baseball.”

Renee turns and glares at me. “They know who he is. He’s the best baseball player that has ever lived.”

I glance at the paparazzi seeing they’re all trying to figure out which team he plays for. The bright one of the bunch of course starts questioning me again. “Where is the new girlfriend, Mr. Cullen? Do we get to know her name?” I smile and look beside me to see that Bella has moved to stand almost behind me.

“She’s a little camera shy, and her name is Isabella Swan. However, we have to go, her mom and step-father have had a long flight, and it’s been a few months since they’ve had a chance to visit.  As you can imagine, they want to spend some time together, so please excuse us and have a nice day.” 

I start to walk away, but see Renee has failed to move. “Push this for a second, Beautiful,” I say before walking back and grabbing Renee’s arm lightly.  “Time to go.”

She huffs at me and I give her the look which managed to only shut her up for a whole two seconds. She really is obtuse. “Look, I need to do stuff like that with the paparazzi. I know you’re just a newcomer, but I’m famous because of who I’ve married.”

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I love Edward!! I am hoping he kicks Renee's ass, before this is through!! Love it!!



Author's Response:

Well so far everyone is pretty much at the same conclusion, that Renee is a POS when it comes to being a mother.  With the way Bella has been raised and the way that she acts, this is not a big surprise.  Some of you have asked why Edward has not yet stepped in to protect her and that as her Dom he should.  Edward has been very clear all along that he wants her to grow and be confident on her own as well.  Now you will see that he is giving her the power to stand up for herself, and as her Dom he is telling her that he expects her to stand up for herself.  Bella is much stronger than most think, including Edward, but have no fear he will see her strengths.  I think that you all will be shocked to see how far Renee will go to maintain her own importance. 

A lot of you mention or talk about earlier authors notes and review replies where I have spoken candidly about my own upbringing.  Not every bad thing that happened or happens to Bella in this story happened to me growing up, but the neglect and the being pushing away and having parents who think only of them was a very prominent part of my childhood.  Both my parents are now gone, and I miss them.  I know that is not easy to understand for some, but even though they treated me like a second class citizen most of the time, they still were my parents.  This is why I maintain that you never know how you’d react in this situation, because unless you’re raised in it, you don’t know. 

As always we will see you next Sunday night — Monday morning with an update.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  (Nikky) & Kasi~

Teaser:
I smile and look to Renee who looks angry and pissed off, but thankfully, she has finally shut up.

“Edward, can I talk to you?” I turn and look at Phil, and I nod. I take one last look at my girl, before following him away from the kitchen area.

“What can I help you with, Phil?” I ask directing him into my office.

Phil sighs and looks at me. “I love Renee very much, and she’s not always like this.  Normally, at home she’s sweet, loving, and kind. I have only seen her this way a few times, but not too often. I think being here in Washington is bringing this more to the front. I think Charlie did a number on Bella, but he also hurt Renee, too. She has low self-esteem, and some issue with being around younger girls. The whole forgetful memory thing, I think it’s a medical problem.”

I chuckle shaking my head at him. “I’m not really sure I believe that, unless only forgetting a thing concerning your only child is a medical condition.”

“No, she forgets more than things about Bella. I swear it’s gotten to be a medical thing, she really just forgets things,” Phil says.

“He’s right, Edward,” I frown and look at my open office door and see my father standing there.

“What’s that then?” I ask harshly.

“Selfish bitch syndrome,” my father says with a straight face. I look to Phil who just frowns.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I hope that either Rose, Alice or Esme kicks the everloving horse shit out of Renee!!!



Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Wow!!

Looking forward to more :)



Author's Response:

The overwhelming response to the chapters so far have far exceeded what Nikky and I thought this story would generate.  We are both very proud of this story and humbled by your responses.  In lieu of the ‘boycott’ at FFN everyone will be getting Meeting Her Needs in their inbox later today.  We hope that you all will still take the time to leave us your thoughts, especially since this coming chapter is super wonderful, (Well we think so anyway!)  Thanks for trusting in us, and no worries things are really shaping up at the end we’re working on that will leave you all satisfied—we hope.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:
I put on my tuxedo trying hard not to turn and watch Bella get dressed or look in the mirror.

“Edward ...” comes Bella’s voice as I tie my laces and answer her.

“Yes, Beautiful?”

“Two things, is it wrong to go to these balls ... things without under garments on, and could you zip me up, please?” I run through what Bella has said again and turn to her.

“Wh ...” I try to talk, but I’m unable to complete what I’m saying as I look at Bella, whose sheer beauty takes my breath away. The dress only adds to her natural beauty and I feel stupefied as I stare at my beautiful girl.

I look Bella up and down, taking in every part of her body. I slowly look her up, starting at her feet. My eyes trail up how the dress sits on her body like a second skin. I look at how it makes her already large breasts look fuller. I look at her neck that still displays my mark. My eyes go to her lips and I see that they are moving.

I close my eyes and shake my head. “Sorry, I spaced out there, can you say that again, Beautiful?”

Bella chuckles shaking her head at me. “You look really hot, like my own secret agent man. I was asking, because this dress shows every line, so I should I take off my panties, right? I couldn’t squeeze my bra into the bust area; the girls can hardly breathe as it is.”

I look back down her body and see that she's right, she has a panty line. “Remove your panties, Beautiful, no one will know,” I say. I watch intently as Bella wiggles out of her panties and comes over to me and turns around. My eyes trail down her body again and I start to kiss her back. I feel Bella shake and laugh and I look to her.

“I need you to zip me up. I mean, you can carry on doing that, but I think we’ll be late if you do.” I smile giving her one last kiss, open mouthed, at the base of her lovely neck, before pulling the zipper up. With the zipper up it makes the tight dress even more molded to her curves. It fits her like a glove, and I make a mental note to thank my mom.

“Come on, Beautiful, let’s get this over and done with so I can bring you back here and kiss you some more,” I say holding my arm out for her to take.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 02 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow... Wonder how Bella is going to handle the news???

 

 



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reading and review Meeting Her Needs.  Nikky and I are very happy with the amount of pleasure most of you are finding in this story, so THANK YOU SO MUCH.  There haven’t been very many questions or things to touch base on this week, so I’ll try to do it all here.  Someone wanted to know why the lemon wasn’t longer and more detailed.  The lemon was written the way it was because we want this story to be more about the story and less about the lemons themselves.  We had questions and comments regarding the BDSM in this fic too.  The BDSM in this fic and the actions within this fic of the lifestyle in and of itself have come from many conversations with people from the lifestyle.  Not everything is intense tie you up, spank you, kneel and crawl.  It is a matter of respect, choices and trust.  Please don’t ever think that we would want to write a story just for the sole purpose of making someone another person’s punching bag or pet (in the term of treating someone as if they are not human.)  We will continue to post once a week until the story is completely written.  Nikky is currently working on chapter 20 and there are five more after that to write.  If you ever have additional questions, you can find us on FACEBOOK look for the group called TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction.  You can also email us at our screen name all lower case at gmail.  Thanks and see you Sunday with the update.

Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser:  “I–I need ... I can’t sit here. I just need time ...” Bella gets up quickly and almost runs out of the room. 

I sigh looking at Phil. “She’ll be fine—she has to be—we just need to be there for her when she needs us.”

I nod and get up to start looking around for her. I looked throughout the house first, which takes me almost a half hour to do. I was starting to panic that she actually left our home. I open the back patio door and I see her, and instantly I feel myself calm.

“Beautiful,” I say when I approach her, as she works in the dirt of the flower bed she started with my mother. She stops and turns to me and I give her time, knowing she is going to talk to me now.

“Dr. Banner thinks I have been suppressing and curtailing my anger. I’m starting to think that he’s right. I’m just so angry right now, but mainly I’m mad at myself.”

I frown and tilt my head in question at her.

“Edward, I let them—I let them treat me that way. I was always trying to please them. I never asked for anything other than their time. I would always say it was fine, when they forgot my birthday, or anything that was connected to me. I let Charlie push me out of his life. I would always sit back and pretend that didn’t kill me to see him call Leah his princess, or listen to him tell her he was proud of her and loved her. I would say it was me that was to blame for that. I was the broken one. That there must be something wrong with me, and I wasn’t worthy of their love. It’s kind of pathetic when you think about it, huh?”

I shake my head and move to her. “It’s not pathetic to want and desire to be loved.”

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I am so glad that Bella flipped out on Renee..

Tanya is working with Jacob Black! Damn what a bit*h!

Then Jacob finds her and confronts her at work.  Edward is gonna flip his shit when he get to them!  Mercy!!



Author's Response:

Well no big surprise that a lot of you were not happy with the cliffhanger, yeah, expected that.  Some of you are very perceptive on future things to come as well.  There will be some BIG shockers in the next chapter, and we are super stoked to hear your thoughts on those.  Few questions we got from a scan over the reviews were: posting schedule? We post on Sundays.  What are rose and the other Cullen’s up to?  Revenge served Cullen style.  Can parents really be that asinine?  Yeah, actually they can, sad but true.  Is Tanya really that stupid?  Well, yeah, clearly she can be.  Is someone messing with Bella’s medical records? No.  Why is Charlie such a asshole to his daughter?  The answer to that will be in chapter 19.  Who let Jacob and Paul into the club and how?  Tanya, and since she worked there she knew how to get in, without being out in the open.  Wasn’t Tanya kicked out of the club?  Tanya was on a warning, but because at the time Tanya was still under Sir Stephan, her entrance card would still work.  You’re only writing around 25 chapters, can’t you write like a 100 instead?  Um, well we have other stories killing our minds, so yeah without sounding harsh, we’d rather write something new then run this into the ground and make people hate it.  I think that covers most of the questions; there are a couple questions asked that will be answered in the next chapter.  We cannot wait to read your coming comments on chapter 18!  Nikky & Kasi~

Coming up with a teaser for this next chapter was not easy because there is a lot packed into it.  So we hope that you like this: 

“You asshole,” I hear Bella scream. I turn in time to see Bella flying at Paul.  Moving quickly, I try to pull her off him and she shakes me off and keeps hitting Paul as hard as she can. As she hits him, she continues to scream calling him names and chastising him. “I fucking hate you. I really fucking hate you. I hope you rot in hell, but even that’s too good for you!”

I pull her to me again.  “Enough,” I say into her ear, but I know by the look on her face she hasn’t heard me.

“What the fuck are you laughing at, Jacob? Eh, you’re a sad pathetic loser who’ll more than likely die from a sexually transmitted disease.” Turning her head between the two of them she continues on. “Neither of you are anything or will be anything. You’ll both always be nothings! Go fuck yourself, because I really don’t think anyone else will, not willingly anyway. I won’t back down this time. I will take both of you to court. I will tell the world what you’ve done.” Jacob runs toward her and I turn us so Jacob starts hitting my back. It takes all my strength to hold on to Bella as she’s still trying to get loose. Only a few seconds pass and Jacob is pulled off of me.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

You ladies are the queens of cliftys I swear!!!  :)

 

Looking forward to more!!



Author's Response:

Well Nikky and I both want to thank you for reading and reviewing.  All of the questions, compliments, anger (at the characters), love and kindness in the reviews is what keeps us going so strong.  SO, thank you, for reading, reviewing, sharing your stories and most of all for loving the characters—the characters who may not belong to us in name, but who we’ve taken and made into something completely different.  It is very cool to take a loved character, change them and make them different and still have people love them so much or fall in love with them all over again.   There were lots of reviews filled with questions about the newspapers and what Charlie told them.  First in regards to the newspapers, just like when Renee went all press goddess on them, the news already knows Edward.  Edward has made no secret of his lifestyle, how else would Charlie so easily have found out about Edward.  Therefore there was really nothing to put in the press, Charlie could try but it would not be front page news anyway.  Also if you remember right, Edward doesn’t really put a lot of stock into the media reports.  There are a lot of great things to come yet, so have patience and trust.  No stones will be left unturned.   Thanks again for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER: Phil and I walk into Jenks’ office. I decided that I no longer want any of this shit spoken about at the club. Bella loves the club and I didn’t want any additional bad feelings in it for her.

“Jenks, Benjamin,” I say taking a seat; Phil nods at them.

“We’ve found the last of the girls and even another case that was not dropped.” I look at them and they hand me a picture of a girl I have actually met and I’m in shock. 

“They have DNA from a brutal attack and rape of her,” Jenks says as I look over the paperwork behind the picture.

“You’ve got to be kidding me?” I say and they both shake their heads.

“Now you really need to look at this,” Jenks says handing me another stack of paperwork.

I read the papers and frown. “How the hell did he make Chief of Police?” I ask rhetorically, not really asking anyone.

“I’m really not sure on that one, but he will lose his job with all of this.”

I sigh rubbing my face. “Make it happen,” I say and stand up, walking out the door.

“Edward?” Phil yells after me.

“Phil, just let me calm myself. I’m really close to losing all of my control. The more I find out about Charlie Swan, the angrier I become with him.”

Phil nods in understanding. “There’s a boxing ring a few blocks from here, how about we get padded up and go for a few rounds?”

I sigh and look at him, but I stop myself from speaking. I can see he’s clearly as angry as I am. “Sounds good, just watch my face,” I say and I hear him chuckle.

“Yeah, Bella will kick my ass if I hurt your pretty face. Do you think she’s ready for Saturday?”

I shrug my shoulders. “We’ll work together to get her ready, and then we’ll all be there for her on the other side. No matter what, I know she needs to do this, even if I hate the idea of it.”

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow... I wish Edward had gotten to take a swipe at Charlie!!  Or Bella bitch slap Leah!  Glad that Seth is living with them.  

Jacob and Paul are not far I think!!



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Such a exciting chapter, so much going on!! :)



Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This is a great story:)



Author's Response:

Thank you all for reading and reviewing.  We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said.  Thank you again for everything.  Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation.  Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post.  Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January.  We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect.  We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic.  We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us.  We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page.  The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings.  Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment. 
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked.  I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office.  We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections.  “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.

“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots.  Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say.  I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.

Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”

“But he’s only two months and still small.”

I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.

“I know, believe me, I know.  Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”

Bella nods and lets out a sigh.

“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her. 

Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.

“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever.  They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.

I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.

“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted.  But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public.  Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”

My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.

“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up.  At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.

“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear.  First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing.  So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for.  If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”

My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words.  I start to get up to head over to her.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Loved this story!!! 

Sorry to see it end! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110632
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2015 Title: Shattered Reflections

I am really not liking this Edward.. He is bad!!!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2015 Title: Shattered Reflections

HE IS LYING BELLA!!

A Healing Touch by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Roughly six months after Bella and Edward meet at Cook County Hospital, their relationship is moving along and life couldn’t be better. However, one frightened child, two parents, one doctor and one nurse are presented with an illness that baffles them all. What will happen and will our favorite doctor and nurse be able to figure out the medical mystery before it’s too late?

Written for Fandom4LLS

Outtake for A Prescription for Love 

A Healing Touch


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9012 Read Count: 3443
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2013 Updated: 04 Aug 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah, I got cold chills reading this!

 

so good!  :)

Summary:

 

He walked down the shore and that was when he saw her. She glowed under the light of the setting sun, her dark hair tousled by the sea wind. He couldn’t help but notice how exquisitely beautiful she was. As he walked closer to her, he noticed her tears and heard her cry. Written for Fandom 4 Autism.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8350 Read Count: 1317
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 12 Oct 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really good. I enjoyed it.  I am glad the Emmett cheated on Rose. She deserved it!

 

 

Summary:

A tattooed loner moves to a small town to appease his deceased mentor. He stumbles across a modest Isabella at church. He wants her but balks at the age difference, and there’s nothing respectable about him. Is she as proper as he thinks, or does she just hide things well?

 

smy

BANNER BY: DEEBELLE1


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9085 Read Count: 7390
[Report This] Published: 18 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Show Me Yours, and I’ll Show You Mine

I like it.  I hope you do a future take of these two.

(loved the officer twat comments!!)

Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

WOW!  To say that we are blown away by the response this one-shot has gotten would be an understatement.  Over 130 reviews in a week between FFN and TWCS, is pretty amazing to us for a one-shot.  We do intend to add a bit more to this, however we are going to be wrapping up a few more lose ends first.  We have the Halloween story already posted, it is called Crushes, Canines & Clowns, it’s the third year we have written a Halloween story and we hope you like it.  Also Jess2002 has joined forces with us and we formed WeeJessAndTAT and our first story together is, If I Die Young.  We started the story in honor of our great fan-dom friend and pre-reader/beta, Savannavansmutsmut’s birthday and it started posting on her birthday Oct. 24th.  We also have a Christmas story coming out.  It will post either as a one-shot or two-shot, but I will say this, it is BIG.  Right now we are thinking it will be around 30K word count.  Ropin’ A Sitter, Epilogue will be posting on December 1st, as well as a Future take of, Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT and an all-new Novella by TeamAllTwilight, called, The Things That Make You Click.  We hope to see some of you checking out those titles and more to come in the future.  Lots of things to come, but have faith we will be adding to this.  I doubt it will be a full blown WIP, but it does have some more storyline within us that needs to come out.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky & Kasi~

PS.  Be sure to check out and vote in the Twi-Fic Awards, where WeeKittyAndTAT are nominated for several awards.  Here is our nominations: Fav - All Time Fic: His Cimmerian View is nominated.  Fav - Tiny Fic: Crabs And Cream is nominated.  Fav - LMAO Fic: Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave is nominated.  Fav - Drop Everything Fic: Meeting Her Needs is nominated.  Fav - Boomerang Fic: His Cimmerian View is nominated.  You can find the link to the website on our profile and voting ends November 3rd.  Thanks in advance, and even if you don’t vote for us, vote for someone there are some really amazing people nominated and we are proud to be pooled into categories with people who we ourselves look up to and read.  So thank you to whomever it was that nominated us in these different awards.

Only You Can Save Me by kyla713 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella's life is in shambles. Broken marriage and now a broken motorcycle as well. Until a sexy mechanic enters her life, as does his daughter. Can they be the resolutions to each other's troubled pasts?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 46142 Read Count: 12373
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2013 Updated: 13 Jul 2019
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2021 Title: Chapter 8: Futuretake ~ All The Things We've Never Done

What a wonderful story.  Thank you so much for sharing it .

Unexpected things by sjdavis84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The accident prone waitress runs in to a jerk. Little does she realize how her life will end up changing, hopefully for the better. The jerk she runs into isn’t so much of as a jerk as he is arrogant and dominant… But Bella doesn’t know that.

 

Thanks AstridGreenEyes for the Awesome banner!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49952 Read Count: 41537
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2015
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Thats too funny!!  I would love to see this!!



Author's Response:

Glad it made you laugh!! :D

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I was afraid that he had attacked Bella.  Or worse!!    Thank you for the update!  Looking forward to more!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chatper~~



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

DiorRobBanner

 

She was innocent, pure and temptation personified. How could he resist her? EPOV. All-Human. Olderward. DiorRob Contest Entry.

 

Public Vote

 

Judges Choice

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4619 Read Count: 5620
[Report This] Published: 27 Nov 2013 Updated: 27 Nov 2013
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Let It Burn

This is really good.  I liked it, expanding on it would be wonderful.  But I understand that you can't.

 

Loved it! :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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I was having a really bad day. Boys are persistent, and Edward Cullen is laughing at me. A little daydreaming never hurt anybody. AU BPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 192783 Read Count: 72371
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2018
Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 ~ As the Summer Ends…

Great chapter!  I enjoyed it!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed
Date: 27 May 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 ~ Step Into The Light

ahh... ♥a86;

 

I love this ♥♥♥a86;a86;a86;